独立主格让你的描写跃然纸上 课件 2026届高考英语一轮复习

外研社2019版 高二英语 独立主格让你的描写跃然纸上 How to give a vivid account with the help of absolute construction ① Absolute construction What is absolute construction? How can it make the account more vividly? ① ② 2 Jenny reporter of the campus magazine 3 潘展乐 2024 Paris Olympics 4 08:00 王老师 邀请你语音通话 潘展乐 2024 Paris Olympics 08:00 王老师 连接中... 潘展乐 2024 Paris Olympics Pan Zhanle dived into the water and swam swiftly like an arrow off the bowstring. Soon he became first to reach the finishing line ... 王老师 Hi! Jenny, I have read your article. And I like it. Thank you, Mr. Wang. But I think it would be better with more details. More details? Mr. Wang, could you please give me an example? You can describe how Pan’s arms and legs move. What a good idea! Thx. First draft Second draft Pan Zhanle dived into the water and swam swiftly like an arrow off the bowstring. His arms pushed forward with great strength. His legs hit the water hard. 王老师 Wonderful! Jenny. It is more vivid. We are going to polish it further. Ok, Mr Wang. I believe the three sentences can be combined into one. Pan Zhanle dived into the water and swam swiftly like an arrow off the bowstring. His arms pushed forward with great strength. His legs hit the water hard. It would be more concise. I will try my best. Second draft Third draft Pan Zhanle dived into the water and swam swiftly like an arrow off the bowstring, when His arms pushed forward with great strength. and his legs hit the water hard. Third draft 王老师 Wow, Jenny, you really did it well. Thank you, Mr Wang. But I think it would be better to combine them with absolute construction (独立主格). Don’t worry. Let me show you. Excuse me? What is absolute construction (独立主格)? And how does it work? Pan Zhanle dived into the water and swam swiftly like an arrow off the bowstring, when His arms pushed forward with great strength. and his legs hit the water hard. Fourth draft （独立主格） Pan Zhanle dived into the water and swam swiftly like an arrow off the bowstring, when his arms pushed forward with great strength. and his legs hit the water hard. 14 Fourth draft （独立主格） Pan Zhanle dived into the water and swam swiftly like an arrow off the bowstring, when his arms pushed forward with great strength. and his legs hit the water hard. 15 Fourth draft （独立主格） Pan Zhanle dived into the water and swam swiftly like an arrow off the bowstring, when his arms pushed forward with great strength. and his legs hit the water hard. 谓语改成非谓语 16 Pan Zhanle dived into the water and swam swiftly like an arrow off the bowstring, when his arms pushing forward with great strength. and his legs hitting the water hard. Fourth draft （独立主格） 我懂了！删掉连词，用非谓语。 准确说，是独立主格 17 Pan Zhanle dived into the water and swam swiftly like an arrow off the bowstring, his arms pushing forward with great strength. his legs hitting the water hard. Pan Zhanle dived into the water and swam swiftly like an arrow off the bowstring, moving his arms and legs with great strength. absolute construction （独立主格） non-predicate （非谓语） 18 独立主格不是句子，做状语，表条件、原因、伴随、时间等状态。 If weather permits, we could go hiking. Because her work was finished, she sat down for a cup of tea. weather permitting, we could go hiking. Her work finished, she sat down for a cup of tea. 19 独立主格不是句子，做状语，表条件、原因、伴随、时间等状态。 Her eyes twinkled with joy, and she gave me a hug. We wandered in the park, when breeze was blowing, and birds were singing. Her eyes twinkling with joy, she gave me a hug. We wandered in the park, breeze blowing, birds singing. 20 Appreciation Gone with the Wind《飘》 Melanie, her eyes shining with joy, her head ducked with embarrassed pride, told Scarlett she was going to have a baby. 小船上的水手，把船上下各处撑去，钢钻头敲打着沿岸大石头，发出好听的声音。 —— 《鸭巢围的夜》 The crew punted （v.撑船） our little craft up and down, the steel tips of the punting poles clinking melodiously (悦耳地) on the rock. —— 戴乃迭 译 ① Absolute constructure What is absolute construction? How can it make the account more vividly? ① ② 24 Assignment Soon he became first to reach the finishing line. He popped out and waved to the audience. Excitement and pride were on his face. Cheers from the crowd echoed in the stadium. Could you help Jenny polish her writing using absolute construction? 25 Lavf58.76.100 null 4388.57 null 6478.3755 $