内容正文:
高三读后续写
句子扩写微技能训练
年 级:高中 学 科:英语(2019版外研社)
Learning Objectives
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After this lesson, you will be able to……
summarize four techniques of sentence expasion by observing examples.
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use the techniques to expand sentences and
ultimately form a passage.
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Summary
and
Assignment
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Text Polishing
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Sentence Expansion
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Skills of
Expansion
CONTENTS
A Simple “Story”
I faced a challenge. I was nervous.
How to make them more vivid?
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These sentences lack detailed descriptions and are rather plain.
I faced a challenge. I was nervous.
An expansion adventure
Expansion adventure
With my heart pounding rapidly, I was extremely nervous, my hands trembling slightly..
Good!
Sentence expansion
Analysis
Sentence expansion
I faced a challenge. I was nervous.
With my heart pounding rapidly, I was extremely nervous, my hands trembling slightly.
analyze
Sentence expansion
With my heart pounding rapidly, I was extremely
nervous, my hands trembling slightly.
precise words
psychological state
rich details about actions
Decompose actions
Techniques
Prepositional phrases or adverbs.
Replace general verbs
Apply fixed sentence patterns or subordinate clauses.
Expansion skills
"I stepped forward slowly, my feet making soft thuds on the ground as I moved tentatively."
"I walked"
Expansion skills
vividly describe
Decompose actions
Decompose actions.
Techniques
Prepositional phrases or adverbs.
Replace general verbs.
Apply fixed sentence patterns or subordinate clauses.
Expansion skills
"She smiled brightly,her eyes twinkling with joy."
Expansion skills
Prepositional phrases or adverbs.
Decompose actions.
Techniques
Prepositional phrases or adverbs.
Replace general verbs.
Apply fixed sentence patterns or subordinate clauses.
Expansion skills
Replace general verbs with highly precise ones.
Expansion skills
“He looked”
"He gazed intently"
"He peered curiously"
Decompose actions.
Techniques
Prepositional phrases or adverbs.
Replace general verbs.
Apply fixed sentence patterns or subordinate clauses.
Expansion skills
Apply fixed sentence patterns or subordinate clauses.
"When I saw her, I was filled with joy."
Expansion skills
Text polishing
entire story framework
"I faced a challenge. I was nervous. I tried my best. I succeeded."
Text polishing
"I faced a challenge. I was nervous. I tried my best. I succeeded."
Discuss fervently and utilize the expansion methods to bring this passage to life.
Text polishing
Group 3
Facing a tough challenge, I was overwhelmingly nervous, with my mind racing and my palms sweating. However, I summoned up my courage and made a determined effort. With perseverance and dedication, I finally succeeded, a sense of pride swelling in my heart.
Summary and assignment
four remarkable methods of sentence expansion
employing various techniques
using precise language
adding details
Summary and assignment
Select a story beginning on the theme of people and society.
Homework
Apply the methods we've learned to expand the sentences and polish the passage.
Thanks for listening
年 级:高中 学 科:英语(2019版外研社)
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