专题11 书面表达（期中真题汇编，陕西专用）九年级英语上学期

专题11 书面表达 主题01 人与自我——问题与建议 ·1· （24-25九年级上·陕西商洛·期中） 作为青少年，在与父母相处的过程中，难免会遇到各种各样的问题。你校英文广播电台“Say You, Say Me”栏目正在开展以“学会和父母相处”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请你根据以下提示问题，用英文写一篇短文投稿。 提示： 1. What was the problem between your parents and you? 2. How did you deal with it? 3. What have you learned from it? 参考词汇：spend too much time on..., do bad in, talk with each other, explain the reason, the importance of communication,... 要求： 1. 可使用参考词汇，亦可适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3. 文中不得出现任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等)； 4. 词数：不少于70词。(开头已给出，但不计入总词数) Problems are often around us. I love my parents and they love me as well, but we also have disagreements and sometimes we make each other unhappy. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ·2· （24-25九年级上·陕西西安·期中） 每个家庭都会用规则来约束孩子们。父母用自己的经历来帮助孩子们健康成长，少走弯路。但有时孩子们不理解父母的要求，就会引发矛盾，甚至争吵。假如你是李华，你对自己的家规也有一些不能理解之处。你打算写一封邮件给你的笔友 Tom，谈谈你家的家规，疏解一下你的心情，并询问他对他自己的家规有什么看法。 参考词汇： be allowed to, be strict with, care about, future, think of ,... 要求： 1.邮件应包含题目要求所给的关键信息，选择使用参考词汇，可适当发挥； 2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3.邮件中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等)； 4.词数：不少于70。(开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。) Dear Tom. How’s everything going? I want to share something about my family rules and hear your thoughts on your own family rules. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 主题02 人与社会——家乡与社会变迁 ·3· （24-25九年级上·陕西西安·期中） 由于父母的工作变动，Dave两年前随父母来到了中国北京，他想给祖父母写一封信，叙述他来到中国后的各种变化。请你根据下列表格内容提示，代替Dave 完成这封信。 In England (used to) In China (now) Free Time talk with you, happy parents are busy (忙碌的) Breakfast like bread and milk, delicious be used to noodles and eggs, make me stronger Sports not play ball games, boring be interested in, play basketball, fun 要求： 1. 参考提示内容，可适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）； 4. 词数：不少于70。（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。） Dear grandparents, How is it going? I hope you are both healthy. I haven’t seen you for two years, and I miss you so much. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all I want to tell you. Wish you happy and healthy. Yours, Dave 主题03 人与社会——团队活动 ·4· （24-25九年级上·陕西渭南·期中） 假如你是李华，你们班将组织同学们一起参观历史博物馆，你打算邀请交换生Peter参加。请根据以下提示问题，用英语给他写一封邀请信。 提示：1. When and where are you going to meet? 2. What are you going to see and do during the visit? 3. What rules should you follow in the museum? 参考词汇：local culture, traditional artworks, keep quiet, wait in line, no shouting, no photos,... 要求：1. 可使用参考词汇，亦可适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3. 文中不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）； 4. 词数：不少于70词。（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数） Dear Peter, How is it going? I am writing to invite you to visit the History Museum with my class. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua 主题03 人与自我——生活与学习 ·5· （24-25九年级上·陕西西安·期中） 亲爱的同学，你曾经收到过哪些让你感觉与众不同的礼物呢？假如你是李丹，请你根据下面的提示信息以“The Warmest Gift”为题写一篇英语小短文，向大家介绍你收到过的最让你感到温暖的一个礼物。 提示： 1. What is the gift? What does the gift look like? 2. Why do you think the gift is the warmest gift? 3. When and where did you get the gift? Who gave the gift to you? 4. Why did the person give you the gift? What do you want to say to the person? … 要求： 1．短文必须包含所给要点，可适当发挥； 2．语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3．文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）； 4．词数：不少于70。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数） The Warmest Gift Hello! I’m Li Dan. Let me tell you the warmest gift I ever got. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 主题01 人与自我——个人 ·6· （24-25九年级上·陕西西安·期中） 假如你是李斌，第一次月考你取得了很大的进步。你们学校校刊英语专栏正在开展以“How I’ve Changed”为主题的征稿活动，请你根据以下提示写一篇英语短文，讲述你生活中的重大改变。 In the past Now How to change was not good at speaking English speak English very well listen to the tape every day didn’t dare to speak in front of the class be confident take part in activities didn’t like sports like playing basketball my classmates help me ... ... ... 要求： 1. 所写内容应包含表格具体信息，亦可适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息 (姓名、校名和地名等)； 4. 词数不少于70，开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。 How I’ve Changed _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ·7· (24-25九年级上·陕西西安·阶段练习） 假如你是李涛，你们学校英语社团正在开展以“ Some Changes in My Life”为主题的征文活动，请你认真阅读以下通知，并按要求写一篇短文，参加此次活动。 NoticeDear Students, You have been middle school students for more than two years. What changes do you have? Please write a passage about your changes in the past two years. Here are some questions to help you. ●What changes about appearance (外貌) do you have? ●What changes about personality (性格) do you have? ●What changes about your study do you have? ●… We are looking forward to your passage. School English Club 参考词汇 short, tall, shy, outgoing, have no interest in, study hard… 要求： 1. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整，可适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等)； 3. 词数不少于70词。(开头已给出，不计入总词数) Some Changes in My Life How time flies! It has been two years since I entered the middle school. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 主题02 人与自我——生活与学习 ·8· （24-25九年级上·陕西西安·期中） 你的生活中发生过什么奇怪的事情吗？请你根据以下提示写一篇英语短文，给同学们讲述这件事。 要点：1.昨天你按时上交了你的数学作业，但是数学老师问你为什么上交空白的作业本； 2.分析可能的原因，如有朋友在恶作剧； 3.后来发现物理作业本上写着那天的数学作业。 要求：1.参考提示内容，可适当发挥； 2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整，文中不得出现你的任何真实信息； 3.词数：80~100词 (开头已给出，但不计入总词数)。 Yesterday, something strange happened in my life. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ·9· （24-25九年级上·陕西西安·期中） 法国作家雨果曾说“进步，才是人应该有的现象。”回首三年的初中时光， 你在学习和生活中一定取得了很大的进步和成长，比如在学科知识、生活技能、人际交往等方面。请你结合自身的经历谈一谈你的进步与感受。 参考词汇： used to, handwriting, housework, be afraid of 要求： 1.选取至少两个方面； 2.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等） ； 3.词数：不少于70词 （开头已给出，但不计入总数） In the past three years, I have made great progress and grown a lot. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ·10· （24-25九年级上·陕西咸阳·阶段练习） 在成长过程中，我们在很多方面都会经历困难和挑战，比如：学习方面，运动方面，才艺提升方面，人际交往方面等。请以“Challenge Myself”为题，写一篇英语短文，分享一个你的成长故事。 要求： 1.参考提示内容，可适当发挥； 2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3.文中不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）； 4.词数：不少于70词。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数） Challenge Myself Life is full of challenges. Some are small and easy to overcome, while others are big and difficult. But these challenges make us grow and learn. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 主题03 人与自我——问题与建议 ·11· （24-25九年级上·陕西西安·期中）手机的发明极大地改变了人们的生活， 然而它也为我们带来了一定的负面影响。本周，你们班召开了以“学生是否应该拥有手机”为主题的班会，同学们各抒己见；你的看法如何？请根据下面表格中的信息， 以“Should students be allowed to have their own mobile-phones?”为题写一篇英语短文，介绍你们各自的观点。 原因 赞成 与他人沟通；快速查找信息；拍照；购物支付…… 反对 影响学习；对视力不好；可能被坏人窃取个人信息 你的观点 …… 参考词汇： search for information, pay for things, influence our study, be bad for eyes, steal our private information 要求： 1. 参考所给提示，可适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3. 词数：不少于70。                                                         Should students be allowed to have their own mobile phones? _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 1 / 2 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 专题11 书面表达 主题01 人与自我——问题与建议 ·1· （24-25九年级上·陕西商洛·期中） 作为青少年，在与父母相处的过程中，难免会遇到各种各样的问题。你校英文广播电台“Say You, Say Me”栏目正在开展以“学会和父母相处”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请你根据以下提示问题，用英文写一篇短文投稿。 提示： 1. What was the problem between your parents and you? 2. How did you deal with it? 3. What have you learned from it? 参考词汇：spend too much time on..., do bad in, talk with each other, explain the reason, the importance of communication,... 要求： 1. 可使用参考词汇，亦可适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3. 文中不得出现任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等)； 4. 词数：不少于70词。(开头已给出，但不计入总词数) Problems are often around us. I love my parents and they love me as well, but we also have disagreements and sometimes we make each other unhappy. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Problems are often around us. I love my parents and they love me as well, but we also have disagreements and sometimes we make each other unhappy. For example, I used to spend too much time on my mobile phone and did badly in my studies. My parents were very worried and asked me to limit my phone usage. At first, I was very resistant and didn’t want to listen to them. But later, I realized that they were just worried about my future. So I talked with them and explained the reasons why I used my phone so much. We reached an agreement that I would only use my phone for a certain amount of time each day. From this experience, I learned the importance of communication. We should always communicate with our parents and understand each other’s feelings and needs. 【知识点】家庭关系 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：根据提示内容进行写作，可适当发挥，注意行文连贯，表述清晰，无单词拼写及语法错误。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍与父母的问题是什么； 第二步，介绍自己是如何处理自己与父母之间的问题的； 第三步，介绍自己从中学到了什么。 [亮点词汇] ①be worried about担心 ②reach an agreement达成协议 ③do badly in在……方面表现不佳 ④communicate with sb和某人沟通 [高分句型] But later, I realized that they were just worried about my future. (that引导宾语从句) ②So I talked with them and explained the reasons why I used my phone so much. (why引导定语从句) ·2· （24-25九年级上·陕西西安·期中） 每个家庭都会用规则来约束孩子们。父母用自己的经历来帮助孩子们健康成长，少走弯路。但有时孩子们不理解父母的要求，就会引发矛盾，甚至争吵。假如你是李华，你对自己的家规也有一些不能理解之处。你打算写一封邮件给你的笔友 Tom，谈谈你家的家规，疏解一下你的心情，并询问他对他自己的家规有什么看法。 参考词汇： be allowed to, be strict with, care about, future, think of ,... 要求： 1.邮件应包含题目要求所给的关键信息，选择使用参考词汇，可适当发挥； 2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3.邮件中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等)； 4.词数：不少于70。(开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。) Dear Tom. How’s everything going? I want to share something about my family rules and hear your thoughts on your own family rules. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文： Dear Tom, How’s everything going? I want to share something about my family rules and hear your thoughts on your own family rules. At home, I am not allowed to go out with friends on weekdays. My parents are very strict with my studies. They believe that studying hard will promise me a bright future. Also, I have to finish my homework before I can watch TV. Sometimes, I feel these rules are too strict and don’t care about my personal time. However, I know they care about me and want the best for my future. What do you think of your family rules? Are there any rules you don’t understand? Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 【知识点】家庭生活、守则 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：一般现在时； ③提示：根据题干中的提示，向Tom介绍你的家规，并询问他对他自己的家规有什么看法，注意不要遗漏要点信息，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作目的（已给出）； 第二步，介绍自己的家规并询问对方对家规的看法； 第三步，书写结语（已给出）。 [亮点词汇] ①go out with friends和朋友外出 ②on weekdays在工作日 ③be strict with对……要求严格 ④promise sb sth承诺某人某事 ⑤care about关心 [高分句型] ①At home, I am not allowed to go out with friends on weekdays. (被动语态) ②They believe that studying hard will promise me a bright future.(宾语从句) Also, I have to finish my homework before I can watch TV. (时间状语从句) 主题02 人与社会——家乡与社会变迁 ·3· （24-25九年级上·陕西西安·期中） 由于父母的工作变动，Dave两年前随父母来到了中国北京，他想给祖父母写一封信，叙述他来到中国后的各种变化。请你根据下列表格内容提示，代替Dave 完成这封信。 In England (used to) In China (now) Free Time talk with you, happy parents are busy (忙碌的) Breakfast like bread and milk, delicious be used to noodles and eggs, make me stronger Sports not play ball games, boring be interested in, play basketball, fun 要求： 1. 参考提示内容，可适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）； 4. 词数：不少于70。（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。） Dear grandparents, How is it going? I hope you are both healthy. I haven’t seen you for two years, and I miss you so much. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all I want to tell you. Wish you happy and healthy. Yours, Dave 【答案】例文 Dear grandparents, How is it going? I hope you are both healthy. I haven’t seen you for two years, and I miss you so much. I remember I used to talk with you when I was free. I felt very happy. But now I have nobody to talk with at home because my parents are very busy every day. And my eating habits have changed, too. I used to like to have bread and milk for breakfast in England. I thought they were delicious. But now I am used to eating noodles and eggs. They make me stronger than before. As for sports, I didn’t use to play ball games, because I thought it was very boring. But now I am interested in playing basketball. It’s fun to play with friends after school. That’s all I want to tell you. Wish you happy and healthy. Yours, Dave 【知识点】家人和亲人、爱好、个人经历 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封书信； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”，描述现在的状态，同时穿插使用“一般过去时”，回忆在英国时的生活； ③提示：写作要点已明确给出，包括在英国与在中国的对比（空闲时间、早餐、体育活动）的变化，考生需围绕这些要点展开叙述，并适当添加个人感受，使内容更加丰富和生动。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。开头部分通过“How is it going? I hope you are both healthy.”表达了对祖父母的问候与关心，随后通过“I haven’t seen you for two years, and I miss you so much.”引出信件的主要内容——分享自己来到中国后的变化； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。详细描写在英国与在中国的对比，包括在空闲时间、早餐、体育活动等方面的变化； 第三步，书写结语。结尾部分通过“That’s all I want to tell you.”总结信件内容，并通过“Wish you happy and healthy.”表达对祖父母的祝福，希望他们健康快乐。 [亮点词汇] ①used to过去常常 ②be busy with忙于 ③have changed改变 ④be interested in对……感兴趣 [高分句型] ①I remember I used to talk with you when I was free.（省略that的宾语从句） ②As for sports, I didn’t use to play ball games, because I thought it was very boring.（because引导的原因状语从句） 主题03 人与社会——团队活动 ·4· （24-25九年级上·陕西渭南·期中） 假如你是李华，你们班将组织同学们一起参观历史博物馆，你打算邀请交换生Peter参加。请根据以下提示问题，用英语给他写一封邀请信。 提示：1. When and where are you going to meet? 2. What are you going to see and do during the visit? 3. What rules should you follow in the museum? 参考词汇：local culture, traditional artworks, keep quiet, wait in line, no shouting, no photos,... 要求：1. 可使用参考词汇，亦可适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3. 文中不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）； 4. 词数：不少于70词。（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数） Dear Peter, How is it going? I am writing to invite you to visit the History Museum with my class. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Peter, How is it going? I am writing to invite you to visit the History Museum with my class. My school will visit the History Museum on Friday. We are going to meet at the school gate at 8 o’clock in the morning. There will be a great exhibition, and a lot of traditional artworks will be on show. We can learn a lot about local culture there. I’m sure you will like it. If you come with us, there are some rules you should follow. We can’t take photos. While visiting, we should wait in lines. When we are in the museum, we need to keep quiet and can’t shout. I really hope you can come with us. I’m looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua 【知识点】游览活动 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏“要点”中需要告知对方在博物馆应该遵守的规则，注意不要遗漏要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点题，介绍将去历史博物馆，并告知对方集合时间和地点； 第二步，介绍历史博物馆的活动以及大家能够做什么； 第三步，介绍在博物馆应该遵守的规则。 [亮点词汇] ①a lot of许多，大量 ②on show展示 ③take photos照相 [高分句型] ①There will be a great exhibition, and a lot of traditional artworks will be on show.（There be句型） ②If you come with us, there are some rules you should follow.（if引导条件状语从句） I really hope you can come with us.（省略that的宾语从句） 主题03 人与自我——生活与学习 ·5· （24-25九年级上·陕西西安·期中） 亲爱的同学，你曾经收到过哪些让你感觉与众不同的礼物呢？假如你是李丹，请你根据下面的提示信息以“The Warmest Gift”为题写一篇英语小短文，向大家介绍你收到过的最让你感到温暖的一个礼物。 提示： 1. What is the gift? What does the gift look like? 2. Why do you think the gift is the warmest gift? 3. When and where did you get the gift? Who gave the gift to you? 4. Why did the person give you the gift? What do you want to say to the person? … 要求： 1．短文必须包含所给要点，可适当发挥； 2．语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3．文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）； 4．词数：不少于70。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数） The Warmest Gift Hello! I’m Li Dan. Let me tell you the warmest gift I ever got. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 The Warmest Gift     Hello! I’m Li Dan. Let me tell you the warmest gift I ever got. It is a pair of gloves. The gloves are made of wool and they are red in color. The reason why I think the gloves are the warmest gift is that they were given to me by my grandmother. I got the gloves on my tenth birthday. My grandmother made them by hand just for me. She gave me the gloves because she wanted to keep my hands warm in winter. I want to say thank you to my grandmother for her love and care. 【知识点】哲理感悟、叙事忆旧 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：本文以“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，可适当增加细节，突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍一下李丹收到的最温暖的礼物，描述其外观材质等; 第二步，介绍这个礼物的由来； 第三步，说明这个礼物温暖的原因。 [亮点词汇] ①a pair of gloves一副手套   ②are made of由……制成 ③by hand手工 [高分句型] ①The reason why I think the gloves are the warmest gift is that they were given to me by my grandmother. (why引导的定语从句；that引导的表语从句) ②She gave me the gloves because she wanted to keep my hands warm in winter. (because引导的原因状语从句) 主题01 人与自我——个人 ·6· （24-25九年级上·陕西西安·期中） 假如你是李斌，第一次月考你取得了很大的进步。你们学校校刊英语专栏正在开展以“How I’ve Changed”为主题的征稿活动，请你根据以下提示写一篇英语短文，讲述你生活中的重大改变。 In the past Now How to change was not good at speaking English speak English very well listen to the tape every day didn’t dare to speak in front of the class be confident take part in activities didn’t like sports like playing basketball my classmates help me ... ... ... 要求： 1. 所写内容应包含表格具体信息，亦可适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息 (姓名、校名和地名等)； 4. 词数不少于70，开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。 How I’ve Changed _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 How I’ve Changed! I have changed a lot in the last few years. Firstly, I didn’t use to be good at speaking English but I speak English very well. Because I listen to the tape every day. Then, the most important change I have ever made is that I am confident. When I was a child, I didn’t dare to speak in front of the class. I become confident by taking part in activities. What’s more, I didn’t like sports before, but now I like playing basketball. It is because my classmates help me a lot. All in all, I have changed a lot. Just as the saying goes, “Believing in yourself is the first step on the road to success.” 【知识点】自我管理 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意标点符合及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误，注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语义连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出正文，表述“我改变了很多”； 第二步，介绍具体改变的地方； 第三步，总结全文，升华主题。 [亮点词汇] ① be good at擅长 ② dare to do敢做某事 ③ take part in参加 [高分句型] ① Then, the most important change I have ever made is that I am confident.（省略that的定语从句；that引导的表语从句） ② When I was a child, I didn’t dare to speak in front of the class.（when引导的时间状语从句） ③ It is because my classmates help me a lot.（because引导的表语从句） ·7· (24-25九年级上·陕西西安·阶段练习） 假如你是李涛，你们学校英语社团正在开展以“ Some Changes in My Life”为主题的征文活动，请你认真阅读以下通知，并按要求写一篇短文，参加此次活动。 NoticeDear Students, You have been middle school students for more than two years. What changes do you have? Please write a passage about your changes in the past two years. Here are some questions to help you. ●What changes about appearance (外貌) do you have? ●What changes about personality (性格) do you have? ●What changes about your study do you have? ●… We are looking forward to your passage. School English Club 参考词汇 short, tall, shy, outgoing, have no interest in, study hard… 要求： 1. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整，可适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等)； 3. 词数不少于70词。(开头已给出，不计入总词数) Some Changes in My Life How time flies! It has been two years since I entered the middle school. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Some Changes in My Life How time flies! It has been two years since I entered the middle school. I have changed a lot in this period. Firstly, I used to be short and a bit overweight, but now I am taller and have lost some weight through regular exercise. Secondly, I used to be shy and reserved, but now I am more outgoing and enjoy making new friends. Lastly, I was not interested in studying before, but now I study hard, especially in English and math. In a word, I am delighted with these changes as they make me feel more confident and happier. 【知识点】个人信息、外貌与性格 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”、“一般过去时”和“现在完成时”； ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开头文章已给出； 第二步，具体阐述自己在外貌、性格和学习态度上的变化； 第三步，最后总结全文，阐述这些变化给自己带来的改变。 [亮点词汇] ①used to be过去是 ②enjoy doing sth喜欢做某事 ③be interested in对……感兴趣 [高分句型] ①It has been two years since I entered the middle school.（since引导时间状语从句） ②In a word, I am delighted with these changes as they make me feel more confident and happier.（as引导原因状语从句） 主题02 人与自我——生活与学习 ·8· （24-25九年级上·陕西西安·期中） 你的生活中发生过什么奇怪的事情吗？请你根据以下提示写一篇英语短文，给同学们讲述这件事。 要点：1.昨天你按时上交了你的数学作业，但是数学老师问你为什么上交空白的作业本； 2.分析可能的原因，如有朋友在恶作剧； 3.后来发现物理作业本上写着那天的数学作业。 要求：1.参考提示内容，可适当发挥； 2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整，文中不得出现你的任何真实信息； 3.词数：80~100词 (开头已给出，但不计入总词数)。 Yesterday, something strange happened in my life. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Yesterday, something strange happened in my life. I handed in my math homework on time as usual. But to my surprise, my math teacher asked why I handed in an empty notebook. Feeling sorry and worried, I thought it might be a joke played by one of my classmates. Luckily, the mystery was finally solved after checking. I discovered that my math homework was wrongly written in my physics notebook that day. It turned out that it was a mix-up of notebooks because of my carelessness. 【知识点】个人经历 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意围绕“信息提示”讲述自己生活中发生过的奇怪的事情。 [写作步骤] 第一步，导入正文； 第二步，讲述事情的经过； 第三步，讲述事情的结果。 [亮点词汇] ① hand in交上 ② to one’s surprise令人惊讶的是 ③ turn out结果是 [高分句型] ① Feeling sorry and worried, I thought it might be a joke played by one of my classmates.（使用非谓语动词） ② I discovered that my math homework was wrongly written in my physics notebook that day.（使用宾语从句） ·9· （24-25九年级上·陕西西安·期中） 法国作家雨果曾说“进步，才是人应该有的现象。”回首三年的初中时光， 你在学习和生活中一定取得了很大的进步和成长，比如在学科知识、生活技能、人际交往等方面。请你结合自身的经历谈一谈你的进步与感受。 参考词汇： used to, handwriting, housework, be afraid of 要求： 1.选取至少两个方面； 2.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等） ； 3.词数：不少于70词 （开头已给出，但不计入总数） In the past three years, I have made great progress and grown a lot. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文     In the past three years, I have made great progress and grown a lot. I used to be lazy and wasn’t interested in English. I was not good at communicating with others, either. Last year, my new English teacher, Mrs Liu, had a long conversation with me. She gave me great help and encouraged me not to give up. She taught me some good ways of learning English. So I made a decision to study hard at English. For example, I took notes in class. I watched English movies as often as possible. I spent much time learning English every day. Besides, she encouraged me to make more friends and be friendly to others. With her help, I became much more outgoing and had great friends. Now I’m glad that I have made some progress and caught up with others in my class. 【知识点】个人经历 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般过去时”和“现在完成时”为主； ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，引出话题； 第二步，介绍过去的情况以及现在所取得的进步和成长； 第三步，介绍自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①be good at擅长 ②encourage sb. not to do sth.鼓励某人不要做某事 ③give up放弃 ④as often as possible尽可能经常 ⑤catch up with赶上 [高分句型] Now I’m glad that I have made some progress and caught up with others in my class. (that引导宾语从句) ·10· （24-25九年级上·陕西咸阳·阶段练习） 在成长过程中，我们在很多方面都会经历困难和挑战，比如：学习方面，运动方面，才艺提升方面，人际交往方面等。请以“Challenge Myself”为题，写一篇英语短文，分享一个你的成长故事。 要求： 1.参考提示内容，可适当发挥； 2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3.文中不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）； 4.词数：不少于70词。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数） Challenge Myself Life is full of challenges. Some are small and easy to overcome, while others are big and difficult. But these challenges make us grow and learn. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】参考范文： Challenge Myself Life is full of challenges. Some are small and easy to overcome, while others are big and difficult. But these challenges make us grow and learn. Last September, I was asked to give a speech at the opening ceremony. It was my first time giving a speech in front of the whole school. At first, I was nervous about it. But I regarded it as a chance to improve myself, and I started to practice speaking in front of my classmates. In addition, I also asked my teachers and some experienced students for help. At last, the speech was a great success. From this experience, I realized the importance of facing challenges bravely. As long as we focus on doing something, we will achieve our goals in the end. 【知识点】哲理感悟、个人经历 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材： 本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态： 时态以一般过去时为主； ③提示：以“Challenge Myself” 为题，写一篇英语短文，分享一个你的成长故事。短文必须包含图示中所有要点，可适当发挥，但行文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。 [写作步骤] 第一步， 引出话题，介绍生活中的挑战以及它们对个人成长和学习的重要性； 第二步， 描述自己面临的是什么挑战，如何克服挑战； 第三步，总结从这次挑战中学到了什么。 [亮点词汇] ①in front of 在……前面 ②regard... as... 把……当做 ③ask sb. for help 向某人求助 ④as long as 只要 [高分句型] ①As long as we focus on doing something, we will achieve our goals in the end.(as long as引导的条件状语从句) 主题03 人与自我——问题与建议 ·11· （24-25九年级上·陕西西安·期中）手机的发明极大地改变了人们的生活， 然而它也为我们带来了一定的负面影响。本周，你们班召开了以“学生是否应该拥有手机”为主题的班会，同学们各抒己见；你的看法如何？请根据下面表格中的信息， 以“Should students be allowed to have their own mobile-phones?”为题写一篇英语短文，介绍你们各自的观点。 原因 赞成 与他人沟通；快速查找信息；拍照；购物支付…… 反对 影响学习；对视力不好；可能被坏人窃取个人信息 你的观点 …… 参考词汇： search for information, pay for things, influence our study, be bad for eyes, steal our private information 要求： 1. 参考所给提示，可适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3. 词数：不少于70。                                                         Should students be allowed to have their own mobile phones? _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Should students be allowed to have their own mobile phones? Our class held a debate on whether students should be allowed to have their own mobile phones. Students ideas are divided on this topic. Here are their opinions. Some students support the idea, saying mobile phones help them keep in touch with others and allow them to quickly search for information and take photos. Besides, they can use mobile phones to pay for things and shop online. However, others oppose the idea, they think mobile phones can be a distraction from studying and are bad for our eyesight. They also worry that personal information might be stolen by bad people. Personally, I think mobile phones are a great tool for communication and information search, but we need to use them responsibly and not let them interfere with our studies. In a word, using it in a right way is of great importance. 【知识点】青少年问题、通讯工具 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇议论文； ②时态：本文主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中“你的观点”省略处需要补充相关内容，注意行为逻辑要通顺，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。描述话题产生的背景，并引出话题。 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从信息提示中赞成方和反对方以及你的观点几个重点方面来阐述观点和原因，注意行为逻辑要通顺，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 第三步，书写结语。表达“正确使用手机的重要性”。 [亮点词汇] ①keep in touch with others与别人保持联系 ②distraction分散注意力 ③interfere with干扰 [高分句型] ①They also worry that personal information might be stolen by bad people.（宾语从句） ②Some students support the idea, saying mobile phones help them keep in touch with others（现在分词作伴随状语） 1 / 2 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $