读后续写-十句五定法 课件-2026届高三英语上学期一轮复习专项

读后续写专题6 高尚品行 Continuation writing 01 02 04 03 Procedure Read and analyse the passage Organise your writing Finish the last two paragraphs Check the writing 01 Read and analyse Honesty Won’t Let You Down Asad was a 13-year-old boy who was very honest and hardworking. Recently, he had entered a new school, so he had no friends yet. One Monday morning, he was nearly late for school. The night before, his family attended his cousin’s wedding and reached home late, which was why he couldn’t get up on time as usual. At school, Asad could not pay attention to anything and wanted the bell to ring so that he could buy something to eat. After a few hours, when the bell rang, Asad quickly opened his schoolbag to find his money, but just then he remembered that he had left for school in a hurry in the morning and forgotten to take money. He looked under his books, hoping to find some money but there was nothing. Not knowing what to do, he walked out of the classroom and sat on a bench in front of the canteen. He saw a few of his classmates there, among whom was Fahad. He was one of the richest kids in his class, but he was a very arrogant boy who thought everyone else was a loser. But as Asad was new, he didn’t know much about Fahad. When he went towards Fahad and asked if he could borrow some money for his lunch, Fahad laughed and said, “I didn’t know you were a loser, maybe a beggar?” Fahad laughed out so loud that other kids also heard it and made fun of the situation. Asad didn’t answer Fahad, and slowly walked back towards an empty bench. When he reached the bench, he noticed something lying near it. It was a wallet. He picked it up and recognized it was Fahad’s, as he remembered Fahad showing it to his friends and telling them that his uncle had bought it for him from the UK. There was quite a lot of money inside for a kid. Para.1: At first, Asad wanted to keep it a secret and punish Fahad. Para.2: Then Fahad said, “Why are you giving it back?” Who are the main characters and what are they like? How is the passage organised? What’s the theme of the passage? Analysis Main Characters Fahad: one of the richest kids in his class; a very arrogant boy who thought everyone else was a loser (傲慢自大) Asad: very honest and hardworking; entered a new school; had no friends yet; hungry Beginning Ending Asad forgot to take money for lunch. Asad found Fahad’s wallet. At first, Asad wanted to keep it a secret and punish Fahad. Asad tried to borrow some money from Fahad but Fahad laughed out loud and other kids made fun of the situation. Then Fahad said, “Why are you giving it back?” Plot Asad’s Emotions helpless Asad looked under his books, hoping to find some money but there was nothing. hopeful Asad went towards Fahad and asked if he could borrow some money. hesitant Asad found Fahad’s wallet and wanted to keep it a secret and punish Fahad. embarrassed Fahad laughed out loud and other kids made fun of the situation. ? Asad gave the wallet back to Fahad. Theme: Honesty won’t let you down. 02 Organise your writing Step 1 定主线——构思两段主要情节 Para. 1: At first, Asad wanted to keep it a secret and punish Fahad. Para. 2: Then Fahad said, “Why are you giving it back?” → ? → ? → Asad hesitated for a while and decided to give the wallet back to Fahad. → Fahad got his wallet and became Asad’s first friend in the school. Step 2 确定两段首尾衔接句、结局句以及升华句 Paragraph 1 Paragraph 2 1 衔接para1 首句 6 衔接para2 首句 2 7 3 8 4 9 结局（正能量） 5 衔接para2 首句 10 升华主题 Step 3 剩余内容3大补充原则： 1）动作-反应-其他角色反应 2）人物对话及对话后的反应 3）人物心理活动及做出反应 适当用上衔接词：immediately, without hesitation, then, after a while, on arrival, with all the work done, however, instead, on/ upon doing….. paragraph 1 第一句 情感描写，使用情感万能句：Sb. felt a sense of+情绪名词+welling up in sb’s heart and surging through sb. 第二句 细节描写，使用非谓语结构： Doing/Having done/Done A, 主语+谓语 B, doing C 第三句 细节描写，使用with复合结构 第四句 细节描写，使用倒装句： No sooner had sb done than sb did 第五句 过渡衔接句，使用从句或形容词作状语 1-4句式顺序可根据需要进行调整 paragraph 1 第一句 However, thinking of this behaviour, he felt a sense of guilt welling up in his heart and surging through him. 第二句 Glancing first at Fahad, who was still chatting happily, Asad then made up his mind, walking to Fahad. 第三句 No sooner had Asad said a word than Fahad said “Hey loser! Still want the money?” 第四句 With his face expressionless, Asad returned the wallet to Fahad directly and replied “No. I picked it up on a bench and now give it back to you.” 第五句 Astonished and shocked, Fahad stood still, feeling embarrassed. paragraph 2 第一句 情感描写: 情绪名词A was replaced first by 情绪名词B, and then by 情绪名词C 第二句 细节描写 第三句 所感、所悟 第四句 结局（正能量） 第五句 主题升华句，使用强调句/倒装句 paragraph 2 第一句 Hearing this, Asad’s expression was first replaced by a smile, and then by a proud look. 第二句 “Because I was always told by my family that honesty is the most important quality of a person and it won’t let you down.”, explained Asad. 第三句 It suddenly struck Fahad that it was not the wealth but the quality that made a man successful. 第四句 Then, Fahad invited Asad to have lunch together, and he became Asad’s first friend in the new school. 第五句 From then on, Asad and Fahad understood the true value of honesty. 03 Write and check. paragraph 1 At first, Asad wanted to keep it a secret and punish Fahad. However, thinking of this behaviour, he felt a sense of guilt welling up in his heart and surging through him. Glancing first at Fahad, who was still chatting happily, Asad then made up his mind, walking to Fahad. No sooner had Asad said a word than Fahad said “Hey loser! Still want the money?” With his face expressionless, Asad returned the wallet to Fahad directly and replied, “No. I picked it up on a bench and now give it back to you.” Astonished and shocked, Fahad stood still, feeling embarrassed. paragraph 2 Then Fahad said, “Why are you giving it back?” Hearing this, Asad’s expression was first replaced by a smile, and then by a proud look. “Because I was always told by my family that honesty is the most important quality of a person and it won’t let you down.”, explained Asad. It suddenly struck Fahad that it was not the wealth but the quality that made a man successful. Then, Fahad invited Asad to have lunch together, and he became Asad’s first friend in the new school. From then on, Asad and Fahad understood the true value of honesty. 谢 谢 聆 听 Thanks for your listening $