2026届高三英语专项复习读后续写---冷战与和解：一本日记的故事 导学案

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Lena was a 17-year-old girl who considered herself independent. For three years, her diary had been her only trusted friend. Every night, she would record everything in life—the math teacher’s blame, the broken relationship with desk mates, the crush (喜欢) on a boy, the stray dog, the leaking roof, even the way her mother talked to her. The cold war began after that night—when Mom opened her schoolbag without warning, stuff fell out onto the floor—a half-finished love poem, a present prepared for her desk mate, and her private drawing book. “What are you doing on earth?” screamed Lena. “I just want to check and keep you safe!” Mom’s voice cracked, her hands shaking. “Safe? You just want to control me!” Lena cried, kicking the bag away. That night, Lena locked herself in her room, scribbling angry words into her diary: “This is my Privacy! I hate her! I’ll never forgive her!” For a week Lena wouldn’t speak to her mother. One rainy afternoon, Lena returned home to find her diary missing from its usual spot under the pillow. Panic set in. Did Mom take it? She stormed into the kitchen, where her mother was washing vegetables, hands trembling slightly. “Give it back!” Lena demanded. Mom wiped her hands slowly, avoiding eye contact. “The roof leaked. I was cleaning up the mess in your room when I found your notebook lying on the wet floor. I was drying it.” She pointed to the balcony, where the diary lay open under a hairdryer, pages fluttering. Lena’s heart sank. Her deepest secrets—complaints about Mom, crushes on classmates—were now exposed. She grabbed the diary and ran back to her room, tears blurring her vision. Flipping through the pages, she noticed something strange: every angry entry was marked with a tiny red sticker (贴纸)。 注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Curious, Lena turned to the page where she wrote “I hate you!” and found unfamiliar handwriting. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That night, Lena tiptoed into her mother’s room, diary in hand. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 文本分析 1． 角色：_____________________________ 2．视角：第________人称 3．时空线： from introducing Lena and her diary---______________ ---Lena finding her diary dried by Mom 4. 请在文章中将可能的线索都找出来。 How did Lena view herself?： ______________________________________________ What did Lena record in her diary?： ______________________________________________ Why did the "cold war" between Lena and Mom start?： ______________________________________________ Why didn’t Lena speak to Mom for a week?： ______________________________________________ Why was Lena’s diary moved from its usual spot?： ______________________________________________ What did Lena find strange when flipping through her diary?： ______________________________________________ 5． 情节线：介绍 17 岁独立女孩 Lena 与日记的亲密关系 → ____________________→ 一周后 Lena 发现日记不见，误以为妈妈拿走 → 得知妈妈因屋顶漏水帮她烘干日记 → _________________→（续写）Lena 查看标注页发现妈妈的留言，当晚主动找妈妈和解。 6．情感线：Lena：依赖日记（at first）→___________（after Mom flipped her bag）→___________（when diary went missing）→___________（after knowing Mom dried it）→___________（续写） Mom：（worried about Lena）→（委屈无奈）→（默默关心）→（续写） 7. 综合以上信息，请用 3-4 句话概括文章大意。（中英各一个） 中文： _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________英文： ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8. 句式：(3---5个句子） _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9. 主题（本文属于人与他人）：_______________________ 情节构造 第一段提示句：Curious, Lena turned to the page where she wrote “I hate you!” and found unfamiliar handwriting. 衔接句 1——— 对 “unfamiliar handwriting” 提问 “Whose handwriting was it and what did it say?”：_______________________ 过渡句推演：衔接 1→______←衔接 2 衔接句 2——— 对 “Lena’s reaction” 提问 “How did Lena feel after reading the handwriting?”：_______________________ 第二段提示句：That night, Lena tiptoed into her mother’s room, diary in hand. 衔接句 3——— 对 “Lena’s action” 提问 “What did Lena do and say to Mom?”：_______________________ 过渡句推演：衔接 3→______←主题 主题：_______________________ 段落构思 第一段：Curious, Lena turned to the page where she wrote “I hate you!” and found unfamiliar handwriting. →①__________________→②__________________→③__________________； 英文： ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 第二段：That night, Lena tiptoed into her mother’s room, diary in hand. →④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥__________________。 英文： ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 文本分析 1．角色：Lena（17 岁女孩，认为自己独立，依赖日记记录生活）、Lena's Mom（关心 Lena，因沟通方式引发冲突，默默用行动表达爱意） 2．视角：第____三____人称 3．时空线：from introducing Lena and her diary---Mom flipping Lena's bag causing a cold war---Lena finding her diary dried by Mom 4. 请在文章中将可能的线索都找出来。 How did Lena view herself?：She considered herself independent. What did Lena record in her diary?：Everything in her life, including the math teacher’s blame, broken relationship with desk mates, crush on a boy, stray dog, leaking roof, her mother’s way of talking, and her anger towards Mom. Why did the "cold war" between Lena and Mom start?：Because Mom opened Lena’s schoolbag without warning, making her private items fall out. Why didn’t Lena speak to Mom for a week?：She was angry that Mom invaded her privacy and thought Mom wanted to control her. Why was Lena’s diary moved from its usual spot?：The roof leaked, so Mom moved it to dry it when she was cleaning up the mess in Lena’s room. What did Lena find strange when flipping through her diary?：Every angry entry was marked with a tiny red sticker. 5．情节线：介绍 17 岁独立女孩 Lena 与日记的亲密关系 → 妈妈未经允许翻书包引发冲突，母女进入冷战 → 一周后 Lena 发现日记不见，误以为妈妈拿走 → 得知妈妈因屋顶漏水帮她烘干日记 → Lena 发现日记中愤怒内容被贴小红贴纸 →（续写）Lena 查看标注页发现妈妈的留言，当晚主动找妈妈和解。 6．情感线：Lena：依赖日记（at first）→____愤怒不满____（after Mom flipped her bag）→____恐慌怀疑____（when diary went missing）→____愧疚动容____（after knowing Mom dried it and seeing the stickers）→____后悔道歉____（续写） Mom：（担忧关心）→（委屈无奈）→（默默关心）→（欣慰感动）（续写） 7. 综合以上信息，请用 3-4 句话概括文章大意。（中英各一个） 中文：17 岁的 Lena 视日记为挚友，记录生活点滴。妈妈未经允许翻她书包引发冷战，一周后 Lena 发现日记不见，得知是妈妈因屋顶漏水帮她烘干后，又发现日记中自己的愤怒条目都被贴了小红贴纸，内心深受触动。 英文：17-year-old Lena regarded her diary as a close friend and recorded everything in her life. A cold war broke out between her and her mom after Mom flipped her schoolbag without permission. A week later, Lena found her diary missing; she later learned Mom had dried it because of the leaking roof, and noticed her angry diary entries were marked with tiny red stickers, which touched her deeply. 8. 句式： 定语从句（Lena was a 17-year-old girl who considered herself independent）； 时间状语从句（when Mom opened her schoolbag without warning, while her mother was washing vegetables）； 现在分词作状语（avoiding eye contact, tears blurring her vision） 9. 主题（本文属于人与他人）：母女间的理解与和解，沟通的重要性及含蓄的母爱 情节构造 第一段提示句：Curious, Lena turned to the page where she wrote “I hate you!” and found unfamiliar handwriting. 衔接句 1——— 对 “unfamiliar handwriting” 提问 “Whose handwriting was it and what did it say?”：It was Mom’s handwriting; Mom wrote she was sorry for invading Lena’s privacy and understood her anger. 过渡句推演：衔接 1→____Lena's emotional change____←衔接 2 衔接句 2——— 对 “Lena’s reaction” 提问 “How did Lena feel after reading the handwriting?”：She felt guilty for saying “I hate you” and realized Mom’s care behind the misunderstanding. 第二段提示句：That night, Lena tiptoed into her mother’s room, diary in hand. 衔接句 3——— 对 “Lena’s action” 提问 “What did Lena do and say to Mom?”：She apologized to Mom for her rudeness and thanked her for drying the diary and caring about her. 过渡句推演：衔接 3→____mother-daughter reconciliation____←主题 主题：Misunderstandings between family can be resolved through understanding and sincere communication. 段落构思 第一段：Curious, Lena turned to the page where she wrote “I hate you!” and found unfamiliar handwriting. →①It was her mom’s—neat and gentle, saying she was sorry for flipping the bag without asking and that she never meant to control Lena.→②Mom also wrote she knew Lena felt wronged and hoped she could share her worries instead of keeping them in the diary.→③Tears rolled down Lena’s cheeks as she realized how much her mom cared despite the misunderstanding.； 英文：Curious, Lena turned to the page where she wrote “I hate you!” and found unfamiliar handwriting. It was her mom’s—neat and gentle, saying she was sorry for flipping the bag without asking and that she never meant to control Lena. Mom also wrote she knew Lena felt wronged and hoped she could share her worries instead of keeping them in the diary. Tears rolled down Lena’s cheeks as she realized how much her mom cared despite the misunderstanding. 第二段：That night, Lena tiptoed into her mother’s room, diary in hand. →④She hugged Mom tightly and apologized for her harsh words like “I hate you”.→⑤Lena said she would try to talk to her more instead of only writing feelings in the diary.→⑥Mom stroked her hair, eyes filled with tears of relief, and promised to respect her privacy from then on.； 英文：That night, Lena tiptoed into her mother’s room, diary in hand. She hugged Mom tightly and apologized for her harsh words like “I hate you”. Lena said she would try to talk to her more instead of only writing feelings in the diary. 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