2024年新高考英语全国一卷下水作文（应用文+读后续写）课件

该高中英语高考复习课件聚焦应用文写作与读后续写两大核心题型，依据高考评价体系明确“内容要点完整”“语言表达准确”“情节逻辑连贯”三大考查要求，通过2024年I卷真题解析，梳理出“句式结构（倒装、定语从句）”占45%、“情感表达词汇”占30%的高频考点分布，构建了“审题-表达-润色”的应用文答题链和“情节发展-语言生动”的续写思维框架。 课件亮点在于“真题精讲+语言点突破+思维建模”的备考策略，如应用文部分以下水作文为范例，拆解“themed on”“倒装句”等表达，培养学生的语言能力；续写部分以范文中“No sooner had...than...”句式和“环境烘托情感升华”技巧，提升思维品质。特设“关键词库”“句式模板”和“易错警示”，助力学生掌握得分技巧，教师可据此精准定位学情，实现高效复习。

2024（I卷）假定你是李华，上周五你们班在公园上了一堂美术课。请你给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件分享这次经历，内容包括： （1）你完成的作品； （2）你的感想。 注意： （1）写作词数应为80个左右； （2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 Dear Chris, I’m writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday. ———————————————————————————————————————————————————— Yours, Li Hua Dear Chris, I am writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday. During the class, I painted a vibrant scene themed on “harmony”. In the center of my picture was a small clear lake where four fishes are freely swimming across. Also, reflected in the glittering water surface was the blue sky dotted with pieces of white clouds. Beside the lake, a group of kids are merrily chasing, occasionally bursting into cheers and laughters. Not far away, several seniors are immersively doing Tai Chi ,whose graceful movements attract a flock of birds to fly over and admire. Distinct from conventional classes, taking an art class in the park not only presents us students relief and relaxation from heavy academic pressure, but offers us a platform where we appreciate the harmony between nature and mankind. 下水作文 Language points Key Words: vibrant adj. 有活力的   glitter vi. 发光   dot  vt. 点缀   occasionally adv. 时不时，偶尔 immersive adj. 沉浸式的  graceful adj. 优雅的  distinct adj. 有区别的 conventional adj. 传统的、守旧的   academic pressure 学业压力 Expressions: 1. themed on “harmony” 过去分词作后置定语，意为“以和谐为主题”。 2. In the center of my picture was a small clear lake where four fishes are freely swimming across. 本句为以表地点的介词短语位于句首的全部倒装，lake后是where 引导的定语从句。 3. Also reflected in the glittering water surface was the blue sky dotted with pieces of white clouds. 本句为以过去分词短语位于句首的全部倒装，reflect 意为“倒映”，dotted with pieces of white clouds是过去分词短语作后置定语。 Expressions: 4. occasionally bursting into cheers and laughters 是现在分词短语作伴随状语。 5. whose graceful movements attract a flock of birds to fly over and admire 是whose引导的非限制性定语从句。 6. distinct from conventional classes 形容词短语作状语 7. taking an art class in the park 动名词短语作状语 8. where we  appreciate the harmony between nature and mankind 是where引导的定语从句 2024（I卷） I met Gunter on a cold, wet and unforgettable evening in September. I had planned to fly to Vienna and take a bus to Prague for a conference. Due to a big storm, my flight had been delayed by an hour and a half. I touched down in Vienna just 30 minutes before the departure of the last bus to Prague. The moment I got off the plane, I ran like crazy through the airport building and jumped into the first taxi on the rank without a second thought. That was when I met Gunter. I told him where I was going, but he said he hadn’t heard of the bus station. I thought my pronunciation was the problem, so I explained again more slowly, but he still looked confused. When I was about to give up, Gunter fished out his little phone and rang up a friend. After a heated discussion that lasted for what seemed like a century, Gunter put his phone down and started the car. Finally, with just two minutes to spare we rolled into the bus station. Thankfully, there was a long queue (队列) still waiting to board the bus. Gunter parked the taxi behind the bus, turned around, and looked at me with a big smile on his face. “We made it,” he said. Just then I realised that I had zero cash in my wallet. I flashed him an apologetic smile as I pulled out my Portuguese bankcard. He tried it several times, but the card machine just did not play along. A feeling of helplessness washed over me as I saw the bus queue thinning out. At this moment, Gunter pointed towards the waiting hall of the bus station. There, at the entrance, was a cash machine. I jumped out of the car, made a mad run for the machine, and popped my card in, only to read the message: “Out of order. Sorry.” 注意： （1）续写词数应为150个左右； （2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news. Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised. I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news. Worried about the taxi fare, Gunter kept composure and still squeezed a smile. I explained to him how significant the conference was to me, adding that I couldn't miss the bus. Having sensed my dilemma and anxiety, Gunter positively proposed that I pay him when I returned to Vienna after the conference. His words were just like gentle spring breeze,which instantly relieved and calmed me.Eyes sparkling with tears of gratitude, I nodded and then promised to call and pay him. After exchanging phone numbers, I hurriedly boarded the bus and waved goodbye, delighted that I ultimately caught the bus. Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised.On the phone, we both agreed to meet at the bus station where we parted. No sooner had we met each other than we tightly hugged just like long lost friends (as if we hadn't met for what seemed like a century). After greeting, I paid the fare, constantly saying “thank you”.with a big smile, Gunter accepted the money and offered to drive me to the airport. On the way, the sun shone brightly, reminding me of kindness and trust among strangers. ( ,reminding me that there exist kindness and trust among strangers.) Key words： keep composure 保持镇静    squeeze a smile 挤出一丝笑容   dilemma n.两难境地 breeze n. 微风 sparkle vt. 闪烁、（眼睛发光） ultimately adv. 最终 constantly  adv. 持续不断地 part vi 分别 Expressions: 1. how significant the conference was to me  宾语从句 2. adding that I couldn't miss the bus 现在分词短语作伴随状语 3. having sensed my dilemma and anxiety 现在分词完成式作状语 4. which instantly relieved and calmed me  which引导的非限制性定语从句 5. Eyes sparkling with tears of gratitude 独立主格结构 6. delighted that I ultimately caught the bus 形容词短语作状语 7. where we parted   where引导的定语从句 Expressions: 8. No sooner had we met each other than we tightly hugged just like long lost friends   No sooner had...than...  固定句式 意为：一......就......” 9. constantly saying “thank you”  现在分词短语作状语 10. On the way, the sun shone brightly, reminding me of kindness and trust among strangers. 环境烘托情感升华 reminding me of kindness and trust among strangers  现在分词短语作状语 $