内容正文:
Happy
Holiday
Unit 1
Reading for writing
Section B (3a-3c)
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02
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理解文本结构(开篇→过程→感想),提取Gina苏格兰假期的时间、地点、活动、感受等关键信息。(学习理解)
运用“When? who? Where? What? How?”框架,描述个人假期经历,正确使用复合不定代词和过去时;通过同伴互评修改作文中的语法错误和内容细节(应用实践)
通过本课时学习,我们能够:
Learning objectives
对比不同假期体验(自然/城市/历史),思考旅行对认知的拓展,提升跨文化观察与表达能力。(迁移创新)
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Do you like travelling ?
food
scenery
culture
What do you travel for ?
relax
Lead-in
Free talk
Hi, Gina. Did you go somewhere interesting on your vacation?
Yes, I went to Scotland.
/ˈskɒtlənd/
Gina went to Scotland for a holiday.
What do you know about Scotland?
Q1: How many castles(城堡) does Scotland have?
Q2: Where is the oldest golf course(最古老的高尔夫球场) in the world?
Q3: What is the national drink (国酒) of Scotland?
Q4: What musical instrument(乐器) is very famous in Scotland?
Q5: Why might tourists visit the Elephant House?
Pre-reading
Watch and answer
Bagpipes (风笛)
Because J.K. Rowling wrote parts of the Harry Potter books there. / It's where Harry Potter was "born".
in Scotland. It's the Old Course at St Andrews.
Over 2,000 castles
Scotch whisky. (苏格兰威士忌)
Scotland is a beautiful country in the northern part of the united Kingdom. It’s famous for its green mountains, deep blue lakes, and ancient castles. The capital city is Edinburgh, where you can see a huge volcano-shaped hill (火山) called Arthur’s Seat(亚瑟王座).
Scotland
Pre-reading
Culture note
1.What can you know from the title?
2.What might she see or do during her holiday?
Pre-reading
Look at the title and picture and predict
She might meet a deer in the Scotland.
She went on holiday in Scotland
While-reading
Read quickly and match the main idea
1
2
3
How many paragraphs are there in the passage?
How Gina felt.
What Gina heard and saw.
When and where Gina went.
Three.
Read quickly and find out the structure
How Gina felt.
What Gina heard and saw.
When and where Gina went.
While-reading
General Introduction
(总体介绍)
Specific event
(详细事件)
True feelings(真实感受)
How many parts can you divide the passage into?
Things that Gina did
took ______________________
stayed _____________________
went to ____________________
saw _______________________
ran home and _______________
a train to Scotland
in a comfortable house
the forest to explore
a deer
told her parents
Scan the passage and fill in the blanks
3a
Read Gina’s holiday story and write down the things that she did.
While-reading
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Read carefully and find out the details
My Holiday in Scotland
Last autumn, my family took a train to Scotland for a holiday. We stayed in a comfortable house in the countryside with beautiful scenery. I live in a big city, so everything seemed
so different. For example, beside the house, there was a huge forest.
Gina’s Holiday in Scotland
When did Gina go on a holiday? Whom did Gina go with? How did they get there? Where did they stay in Scotland?
Last autumn
Gina’s family
in a comfortable house in the countryside with beautiful scenery
By train.
Tip 1:
When we write about the introduction, we can tell information like when, who, how, where ...
While-reading
General Introduction
(总体介绍)
Read carefully and find out the details
My Holiday in Scotland
Last autumn, my family took a train to Scotland for a holiday. We stayed in a comfortable house in the countryside with beautiful scenery. I live in a big city, so everything seemed
so different. For example, beside the house, there was a huge forest.
Tip 2:
give an example to show the difference
How does Gina show the house was different?
By giving an example.
While-reading
General Introduction
(总体介绍)
Why did everything seem different to Gina?
Because she lives in a big city while the place
in Scotland is a countryside with beautiful scenery.
Read carefully and find out the details
My Holiday in Scotland
Last autumn, my family took a train to Scotland for a holiday. We stayed in a comfortable house in the countryside with beautiful scenery. I live in a big city, so everything seemed
so different. For example, beside the house, there was a huge forest.
On the last day, early in the morning, I went to the forest to explore. While there, something made a noise. I turned around and was surprised to see a deer.
I ran home and told my parents what I saw. My mum smiled and said, "The deer is probably looking for food and hoping to get some from you." What a wonderful experience I had! I really hope I can go back again.
What happened while Gina was in the forest?
She turned around and was____________ to see a deer.
surprised
Something made a noise.
While-reading
Specific event
(详细事件)
Tip 3:
Use sensory words(感官词汇)
build up tension(增加故事紧张感)
Read carefully and find out the details
My Holiday in Scotland
Last autumn, my family took a train to Scotland for a holiday. We stayed in a comfortable house in the countryside with beautiful scenery. I live in a big city, so everything seemed
so different. For example, beside the house, there was a huge forest.
On the last day, early in the morning, I went to the forest to explore. While there, something made a noise. I turned around and was surprised to see a deer.
I ran home and told my parents what I saw. My mum smiled and said, "The deer is probably looking for food and hoping to get some from you." What a wonderful experience I had! I really hope I can go back again.
Tip 4 :
use adjectives to make the writing vivid.
How does Gina like her travelling ?
It is a wonderful experience.
While-reading
True feelings(真实感受)
Read Gina’s holiday story again and think about how to tell a story.
When: Last autumn
Where: Scotland
What:
took a train to Scotland
stayed in a comfortable house
went to the forest to explore
saw a deer
ran home and told her parents...
Why: I live in a big city, so...
How: What a wonderful experience...
Who: My family
Retell the story
While-reading
Watch and imitate
While-reading
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Who
When
What
How
Where
Last autumn
Gina and her parents
Scoland
wonderful
Retell the story according to the mind-map
Post-reading
When
Who
What Gina did and saw
How Gina felt
Vivid adjectives
Connection words
Sensory details
Where
Post-reading
Analyze the content (分析内容)
How can we write our holiday experiences?
My travel
Beginning
Main body
Ending
time
place
weather
partner
activities
We did
We ate
We thought
We enjoyed
...
We saw/heard
summary
first,next,after that ,in the morning,at last 等时间顺序串联。
feeling
Post-reading
Conclude the framework (总结结构)
Last autumn, Gina’s family went to Scotland for a holiday by train . They stayed in a comfortable house in the countryside . Out of the window, they could see beautiful scenery . Gina likes it a lot because she lives in a big city , so everything seemed so differen t for her.
Beside the house, there was a huge forest . Gina felt so excited.
In the morning of the last day, she explored the forest .There she heard something make a noise . She turned around and saw a deer . It surprised her. So she ran home and told her parents what she saw. Her mum smiled and said, “The deer is probably lookin g for food and hoping to get some from you.” She thought the experience was so wonderful . She hopes to go back again someday.
Scotland
train
comfortable
countryside
beautiful scenery
a big city
different
huge forest
forest
make a noise
saw a deer
surprised
ran home
her parents
smiled
looking
for
hoping to
wonderful
go back
Close your book and fill in the blanks
Post-reading
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My Holiday in Scotland
Last autumn, my family took a train to Scotland for a holiday.
We stayed in a comfortable house in the countryside with
beautiful scenery. I live in a big city, so everything seemed
so different. For example, beside the house, there was a
huge forest.
On the last day, early in the morning, I went to the forest
to explore. While there, something made a noise.
I turned around and was surprised to see a deer.
I ran home and told my parents what I saw. My mum smiled and said, "The deer is probably looking for food and hoping to get some from you."
What a wonderful experience I had! I really hope I can go back again.
在乡下/农村
例如
在最后一天
go to the forest 去森林
make a noise 发出噪音
turn around 转身
be surprised to do sth. 对做某事感到惊讶
look for 寻找
hope to do sth. 希望做某事
What a/an+形容词+可数名词单数(+主语+谓语)!
/'prɒbəbli/ adv.很可能
Language points
Post-reading
seem+adj
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1.When did it happen?
___________________________________
2. Where were you?
___________________________________
3. What did you do?
___________________________________
4. How did you feel?
___________________________________
5. What did you learn? ___________________________________
Post-reading
Think and share
3b
Think of an unforgettable holiday experience and answer the questions.
What did you do there?
Whom did you go with?
时间
地点
交通
活动
人物
天气
How was the weather ?
感受
How did you feel ?
When did you go on a trip?
Where did you go?
How did you go there?
Travel
experience
Post-reading
Think and share
请你回想一下令你难忘的一次快乐旅行,并以“A Happy Holiday Trip”为题, 写一篇英语短文, 说说你去了哪儿、你的旅行经历,以及你的旅行感触,在英语课上与同学们分享。
要求:1. 内容完整,语句通顺,逻辑清晰;
2. 80 词左右。
时态:一般过去时
人称:第一人称
体裁:记叙文
要点:1.旅游地点
2. 介绍旅游经历
3. 描述旅游感受
Pre-writing
To learn to write your travel experience
travel experience 人称
时态
内容安排
常用一般过去时。
常用第一人称。
记叙文一般按照时间顺序或事情的经过来写。
Pre-writing
开篇点题
旅行过程
表达感想
介绍旅行的时间、地点、同行者及整体感受。
正文:具体介绍旅游经历1-2点。
(景点、活动、趣事)
谋篇布局
结尾:总结感受或旅行的意义/收获。
Pay attention to the date, person, tense, order
Pre-writing
on vacation 度假 the next day 第二天
take photos 照相 quite a few 相当多
learn about 了解 go to the beach 去海滩
at first 首先 feel like 给……的感觉;感受到
have fun/enjoy oneself 玩得高兴
have a three-day trip 进行三天的旅行
go hiking/camping/swimming 去远足/野营/游泳
积句成篇
短语储备
Pre-writing
句型荟萃
开头句:
Last summer, I had an unforgettable trip to …
Last autumn, my family took a train to …for a holiday.
Last summer vacation, I went to…with…
Last summer vacation, I had an unforgettable experience. I went to …
中间句:
First of all, we went to see ... as soon as we arrived there.
On the second day, we went to... a famous place of
interest in...
As I... the beautiful scenery took my breath away.
The food was delicious, especially…
During the trip, I also made some local friends…
Pre-writing
结尾句:
All in all, it was such a …trip that…
What a wonderful/pleasant/ special experience I have!
Although we were really tired, we did have great fun that day.
This trip was not just a holiday but a cultural experience. It reminded me…
I learned that… I realized that…
经典名句:
Read ten thousand books and travel ten thousand miles.
He who travels far knows much.
句型荟萃
Pre-writing
Topic sentence
Body
Activities
Meaning
Last summer, I had an unforgettable trip to …
Last autumn, my family took a train to …for a holiday.
Last summer vacation, I went to…with…
First of all, we went to see ... as soon as we arrived there.
On the second day, we went to... a famous place of interest in...
As I... the beautiful scenery took my breath away.
The food was delicious, especially…
During the trip, I also made some local friends…
All in all, it was such a …trip that…
What a wonderful/pleasant/ special experience I have!
This trip was not just a holiday but a cultural experience. It reminded me…
Beginning
Body
Ending
介绍旅行的时间、地点、同行者及整体感受。
具体介绍旅游经历1-2点: (景点、活动、趣事)What did you do/see? How did you feel?
总结感受或旅行的意义:How did you feel?
What did you learn?
Tips for your writing
适当运用名言或俗语
句式多样化
巧用衔接词
语句通顺,语法正确
Tips
请你回想一下令你难忘的一次快乐旅行,并以“A Happy Holiday Trip”为题, 写一篇英语短文, 说说你去了哪儿、你的旅行经历,以及你的旅行感触,在英语课上与同学们分享。
要求:1. 内容完整,语句通顺,逻辑清晰;
2. 80 词左右。
While-writing
Exchange your work with your classmate.
Evaluate according to the checklist.
Checklist
Assessment(评价) Total score Your score
内容要点全面,表达准确 10分
文章结构完整 1分
人称、时态使用得当 2分
词汇丰富、句子衔接流畅 1分
卷面书写 1分
合计(总分15分) 15分
Post-writing
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Post-writing
Last winter vacation, my family took a train to Harbin for a holiday. We stayed in a warm hotel near the frozen Songhua River. I live in a southern city, so everything here was so different! For example, outside our hotel, there was a huge ice square with shining lights.
On the first day, in the evening, I went to the ice square to explore. There, I was surprised to see colorful ice works of art. They looked like giant castles and animals! I ran back to tell my parents what I saw. My mom smiled and said, “These ice works are made by artists around the world. They want people to enjoy Harbin’s winter magic!”
What an unforgettable experience I had! From the experience, I learned that Harbin’s beauty can bring people at home and abroad together. I really hope I can go back again.
One possible version
Beginning
Body
Ending
I went to Xi’an on vacation with my family. When I got there, it was sunny and hot. I was so excited because it was the first time for me to see one of the oldest cities in China.
We drove to the Terracotta Army first. I learned something important about Chinese culture and history. The next day, we decided to climb Hua Mountains and we walked up to the top. Everything was small from above. We were so excited to dance and took photos. After walking for four hours, I was tired and hungry. Then, we tried something special in Xi’an. Mutton and bread tasted delicious. Before leaving, I bought something special for my grandparents and friends.
No one felt bored. It was a wonderful trip. I am so proud of our country. I decide to study hard and learn more about Chinese history.
Post-writing
One possible version
Beginning
Body
Ending
Why Travelling is Important ?
01
03
02
04
It’s better to _____________________ experience rather than on material things.
__________from your everyday life and look at it a different point of view.
Push your limits.
__________your bubble.
(把钱花在体验上比花在物质上更好。)
(走出舒适区。)
(突破自己的极限。)
(远离日常生活,从不同的角度看待它的好机会。)
spend your money on
Get away
Get out of
05
07
06
08
09
________ yourself better.
_____________________is through experience.
People you _______ along the way.
___________ is greater when shared.
Choose your own kind of travel.
(更好的了解自己。 )
(最好的学习方法是 通过经验。 )
(沿途遇到的人。 )
(与人分享,幸福更大。)
(选择自己的旅行方式。 )
The best way to learn
Know
meet
Happiness
Enjoy traveling
Enjoy sharing
Homework
Must do:
1.Polish your article according to your group members’ advice
Choose to do:
Design a postcard for a holiday place you love.
On the back: Write at least 3 sentences to show the scenery
My Holiday in Scotland
Last autumn, my family took a train to Scotland for a holiday. We stayed in a comfortable house in the countryside with beautiful scenery. I live in a big city, so everything seemed
so different. For example, beside the house, there was a huge forest.
On the last day, early in the morning, I went to the forest to explore. While there, something made a noise. I turned around and was surprised to see a deer.
I ran home and told my parents what I saw. My mum smiled and said, "The deer is probably looking for food and hoping to get some from you." What a wonderful experience I had!
I really hope I can go back again.
我们住在乡间一栋舒适的房子里,那里风景优美。
1. countryside n.乡村;农村【不可数名词】
in the countryside 在农村
e.g. He painted both the countryside and people.
他既画乡村,也画人物。(2024天津中考)
练习:在农村,人们养狗看门。(2024陕西中考)
_______ ______ ____________, people keep dogs to watch doors of their houses.
In the countryside
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My Holiday in Scotland
Last autumn, my family took a train to Scotland for a holiday. We stayed in a comfortable house in the countryside with beautiful scenery. I live in a big city, so everything seemed
so different. For example, beside the house, there was a huge forest.
On the last day, early in the morning, I went to the forest to explore. While there, something made a noise. I turned around and was surprised to see a deer.
I ran home and told my parents what I saw. My mum smiled and said, "The deer is probably looking for food and hoping to get some from you." What a wonderful experience I had!
I really hope I can go back again.
我转过身,惊讶地发现是一只鹿。
2. 1) turn around 转身; 翻转 也可写作 turn round
e.g. The little girl heard her mother's voice and quickly turned around.
小女孩听到妈妈的声音, 迅速转过身来。
拓展:含turn的其他常见短语:
turn back原路返回,往回走 turn into 变成
turn down 关小;拒绝 turn up 开大,调高
turn on 打开 turn off 关闭 turn to 向···求助
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我转过身,惊讶地发现是一只鹿。
2. 2) surprised adj.惊奇的;惊讶的
辨析:surprised, surprising与surprise
surprised【形容词】惊奇的;感觉意外的 表示人的主观感受。
be surprised at 对···感到吃惊 be surprised to do sth. 做某事很惊讶
surprising【形容词】令人惊讶的 修饰物,说明事物本身的性质/特征。
surprise 【动词】使惊讶;使感到意外
【名词】惊讶,意外;令人惊奇的事
to one's surprise 令某人惊讶的是 in surprise 惊讶地
练习:用括号中所给单词的适当形式填空。
(包头中考) We weren't __________ (surprise) that she won the talent
competition. She sings very well.
surprised
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My Holiday in Scotland
Last autumn, my family took a train to Scotland for a holiday. We stayed in a comfortable house in the countryside with beautiful scenery. I live in a big city, so everything seemed
so different. For example, beside the house, there was a huge forest.
On the last day, early in the morning, I went to the forest to explore. While there, something made a noise. I turned around and was surprised to see a deer.
I ran home and told my parents what I saw. My mum smiled and said, "The deer is probably looking for food and hoping to get some from you." What a wonderful experience I had! I really hope I can go back again.
小鹿可能是在寻找食物,希望从你这里得到一些。
3. 1) deer (pl. deer 单复数同形) n. 鹿
2) possibly adv.很可能;大概
近义词为:possibly / likely / maybe
表示推测。常用于肯定句中,位于助动词、情态动词或系动词be
之后,实义动词之前。其形容词形式为probable“很可能的”。
e.g. It will probably rain tomorrow. 明天很可能会下雨。
练习:I think it is ___________ true. 我认为它很可能是真的。
It is __________ that we will win. 我们很可能会赢。
probably
probable
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按要求写出正确的单词、词组或句子。
1. 在阳光下 (短语) __________ 2. 塔楼 (名词) ___________
3.可能(情态动词) __________ 4. 健忘的(形容词) __________
5. 有规律的(形容词) __________
6. 超出预算(短语) __________
7. 远方的(形容词)_________ 8. 一些……另一些(短语)__________
9. 你可能容易地超预算。__________________________
10. 请提醒我带护照。
_______________________
11. 我最近有点健忘。___________________
in the sun
tower
might
forgetful
regular
go over the budget
faraway
some...others...
You might easily gover budget.
Please remind me to take my passport.
I’m getting a little forgetful these days.
回顾复习(Section B Vocabulary in Use)
按要求写出正确的单词、词组或句子。
1. 乡村 (名词) __________ 2. 转身 (短语) ___________
3.惊讶的(形容词) __________ 4. 可能地(副词) __________
5. 寻找(短语) __________
6. 去森林探险(短语) __________
7. 惊讶地做某事(形容词)__________
8. 多么完美的经验!________
9. 我真希望我能再回去。 ___________________________
10. 一切似乎都不同。
_______________________
countryside
turn around
surprised
probably
look for
go to the forest to explore
be surprised to do sth.
What a wonderful experience!
I really hope I can go back again.
Everything there seemed so different.
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