内容正文:
Happy
Holiday
Unit 1
Reading for writing
Section B (3a-4c)
学生能够读懂 Gina 的假期故事,梳理关键信息,掌握故事中一般过去时的运用,理解文本描述的假期场景与情感,知晓不同假期活动的英文表达逻辑 。(学习理解)
01
能提取文本关键事件,运用一般过去时,围绕自身假期经历,从时间、地点、活动、感受等维度进行问答交流,模仿文本结构讲述或转述假期故事 。(应用实践)
02
可结合多元文化背景或创意场景,自主构思独特假期故事,灵活运用所学语言知识,融入新情节、新感悟,实现对假期主题内容的拓展创作与深度表达 。(迁移创新)
03
通过本节课学习,学生能够:
学习目标
Let’s watch and talk.
Did you have any interesting holiday experiences?
Let’s review!
fight against
victory
remind
feel like doing sth.
palace
take out
budget
想要(做某事)
v. 提醒;使想起
n. 胜利;成功
与……作战;与……作斗争
n. 王宫;宫殿
n. 预算
v. 把……编入预算;精打细算
取出;拿出
Do you know which country this iconic (标志性)costume(服饰) is from?
Scotland
苏格兰裙:极具标志性的传统服饰,通常搭配花格呢图案,不同图案代表不同家族或地区。
Do you know more about Scotland?
风笛(Bagpipes):传统乐器,常出现在庆典、军事仪式中。
威士忌(Scotch Whisky):享誉全球的蒸馏酒,是苏格兰重要的产业和文化象征。
尼斯湖 Loch Ness,
因“尼斯湖水怪”传说闻名
Look at the pictures and guess: What’s the name of the country?
Lead-in
It’s The United Kingdom!
(The UK)
Do you know how many parts the UK is made up of?
Presentation
The United Kingdom (UK) is made up of Scotland, England, Wales and Northern Ireland.
Guess! Which part of the UK will we talk about?
Look and predict the main idea.
1.What might she see?
She might meet a deer .
2.Can you guess what the animal is doing?
Probably it is looking for something.
probably /ˈprɒbəbli/ adv. 很可能;大概
look for 寻找
deer /dɪə(r)/ n. (pl. deer)鹿
Let’s look and say!
Did you have an unforgettable holiday?
What did you learn from it?
Last autumn, my family took a train to Scotland for a holiday. We stayed in a comfortable house in the countryside with beautiful scenery. I live in a big city, so everything seemed so different. For example, beside the house, there was a huge forest.
On the last day, early in the morning, I went to the forest to explore. While there, something made a noise. I turned around and was surprised to see a deer.
I ran home and told my parents what I saw. My mum smiled and said, “The deer is probably looking for food and hoping to get some from you.” What a wonderful experience I had! I really hope I can go back again.
countryside /ˈkʌntrisaɪd/
n. 乡村;农村
turn around 转身;翻转
surprised /səˈpraɪzd/ adj. 惊奇的;惊讶的
Read Gina’s holiday story and write down the things that she did.
3a
3a
Read Gina’s holiday story and write down the things that she did.
假期经历
主题
记叙文
文体
第一人称
第三人称
人称
一般过去时
一般现在时
时态
Read Gina’s holiday story again and think about how to tell a story.
When: Last autumn
Where: Scotland
What:
took a train to Scotland
stayed in a comfortable house
went to the forest to explore
saw a deer
ran home and told her parents...
Why: I live in a big city, so...
How: What a wonderful experience...
Who: My family
3a
Read and answer.
My Holiday in Scotland
Last autumn, my family took a train to Scotland for a holiday. We stayed in a comfortable house in the countryside with beautiful scenery. I live in a big city, so everything seemed
so different. For example, beside the house, there was a huge forest.
On the last day, early in the morning, I went to the forest to explore. While there, something made a noise. I turned around and was surprised to see a deer.
I ran home and told my parents what I saw. My mum smiled and said, "The deer is probably looking for food and hoping to get some from you." What a wonderful experience I had!
I really hope I can go back again.
Q1:How did the writer’s family go to Scotland?
Q2:Where did they stay in Scotland?
They took a train.
In a comfortable house in the countryside.
My Holiday in Scotland
Last autumn, my family took a train to Scotland for a holiday. We stayed in a comfortable house in the countryside with beautiful scenery. I live in a big city, so everything seemed
so different. For example, beside the house, there was a huge forest.
On the last day, early in the morning, I went to the forest to explore. While there, something made a noise. I turned around and was surprised to see a deer.
I ran home and told my parents what I saw. My mum smiled and said, "The deer is probably looking for food and hoping to get some from you." What a wonderful experience I had!
I really hope I can go back again.
Q3:What surprised the writer in the forest?
Q4:What did her mum think of the deer?
A deer.
The deer was probably looking for food and hoping to get some from the writer.
3a
Read and answer.
Thinking
From which aspects can we write a holiday story?
1.Who was the character?
2. When and where happened?
3. What did you do?
4. How did you feel?
5. What did you learn?
Five aspects
1. When did it happen? ______________________________________________
2. Where were you? ______________________________________________
3. What did you do? ______________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________
4. How did you feel? ______________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________
5. What did you learn? ______________________________________________
________________________________________________________________
Lucas' Ski Trip
During the winter break last year
At a ski resort in the Canadian Rockies
took ski lessons, raced down the slopes with friends, built a
Thrilled by the speed of skiing, a bit scared at first, but also
Practice makes perfect. I got better at skiing each day. Also, I
snowman, and had snowball fights. After skiing, we enjoyed hot chocolate by the fireplace in
the lodge.
extremely happy and relaxed.
learned the importance of wearing proper safety gear.
Think of an unforgettable holiday experience and answer the questions.
3b
After-reading
Exercise-语法填空
My Holiday in Scotland
Last autumn, my family _____(take) a train to Scotland for a holiday. We stayed in a comfortable house in the countryside _____ beautiful scenery.I live in a big city, _____ everything seemed so different.For example, beside the house, there ____(be) a huge forest.
______ the last day, early in the morning, I went to the forest _________ (explore). While there, something made a _______(noisy).I turned around and was surprised _______(see) a deer.
I ran home and told my parents what I saw. My mum smiled and ______(say), "The deer is __________(probable) looking for food and _________(hope) to get some from you" _______ a wonderful experience I had! I really hope I can go back again.
took
with
so
was
to explore
noise
to see
said
probably
hoping
What
On
故事六要素:时间、地点、人物、经过、原因和结果等。
How to write a story?
(1) When and where did the story happen? (时间和地点)
(2) Who is the main character? (人物)
(3) What happened in the story? (经过)
(4) Why did that happen? (原因)
(5) What is the end of the story? (结果--感受+收获)
Use your ideas above to write a holiday story.
3c
Writing
Topic: _________________________
Type: _________________________
Tense: _________________________
Person: ________________________
Order:_________________________
Narration (记叙文)
The simple past (一般过去时)
The first person (第一人称)
Holiday experience (假期经历)
Time order (时间顺序)
Think and say
My travel
Beginning
Main body
Ending
time
place
weather
partner
activities
We did
We ate
We thought
We enjoyed
...
We saw/heard
summary
first,next,after that ,in the morning,at last 等时间顺序串联。
feeling
Post-reading
Conclude the framework (总结结构)
Use your ideas above to write a holiday story.
Useful Expressions
Last summer/winter holiday...
During the holiday...
On the first day of the trip...
I visited/went to/stayed in...
The place was...
I explored/tried/tasted/heard...
I was excited/surprised/amazed/...
It took my breath away...
I couldn’t believe my eyes...
I learned about..../I’ll never forget...
I hope to visit/go back to...again
...
3c
如何写好假期经历的文章
开头
Last summer, I had an unforgettable trip to …
Last autumn, my family took a train to …for a holiday.
Last summer vacation, I went to…with…
Last summer vacation, I had an unforgettable experience. I went to …
介绍旅行的时间、地点、同行者及整体感受。
谋篇布局
正文
具体介绍旅游经历1-2点:
(景点、活动、趣事)
What did you do/see?
How did you feel?
First of all, we went to see ... as soon as we arrived there.
On the second day, we went to... a famous place of
interest in...
As I... the beautiful scenery took my breath away.
The food was delicious, especially…
During the trip, I also made some local friends…
表达(高分词句储备)。
佳句仿写
1.【教材原句】Did you go anywhere interesting?(不定代词+形容词)
→仿写:我们总是期待去一个特别的地方。
We always look forward to __________ ___________ __________.
2.【教材原句】Everyone was ready to find somewhere to go. (ready to do sth.)
→仿写:琳琳总是愿意在假期探索新的地方。
Linlin ______ always ________ ______ ________ new places during the holidays.
going somewhere special
is ready to explore
Exercises
表达(高分词句储备)。
佳句仿写
3.【教材原句】I was so bored that I decided to find something to read. (so...that...)
→仿写:夏令营活动如此有趣,以至于我们都不想离开了。
The summer camp activities _______ _______ _________ ________ we didn't want to leave.
4.【教材原句】But, during dinner, I didn't feel like eating because I felt sick. (feel like doing sth.)
→仿写:长假第一天,我想为家人做一顿大餐来庆祝假期。
On the first day of the long holiday, I ________ ________ ________
a big meal for my family to celebrate the vacation.
were so interesting that
felt like cooking
Exercises
段落布局
This trip was not just a holiday but a cultural experience. It reminded me…
I learned that… I realized that…
结尾
总结感受或旅行的意义:
How did you feel?
What did you learn?
All in all, it was such a …trip that…
What a wonderful/pleasant/ special experience I have!
Although we were really tired, we did have great fun that day.
使用all in all,感叹句,或者让步状语从句来进行总结
结尾句:
All in all, it was such a …trip that…
What a wonderful/pleasant/ special experience I have!
Although we were really tired, we did have great fun that day.
This trip was not just a holiday but a cultural experience. It reminded me…
I learned that… I realized that…
经典名句:
Read ten thousand books and travel ten thousand miles.
He who travels far knows much.
句型荟萃
Pre-writing
范文欣赏
Last winter break, I, Lucas, went to a ski resort in the Canadian Rockies. It was an amazing place with snow-covered mountains everywhere.
I took ski lessons first. At first, I was a bit scared, but with practice, I got better. I raced down the slopes with friends, which was so thrilling! We also built a snowman and had a snowball fight. It was really fun. After skiing, we enjoyed hot chocolate by the fireplace in the lodge. I felt extremely happy and relaxed.
From this trip, I learned that practice makes perfect. Also, safety gear is really important. It was truly an unforgettable holiday!
Exchange your work with your classmate.
Evaluate according to the checklist.
Checklist
Assessment(评价) Total score Your score
内容要点全面,表达准确 10分
文章结构完整 1分
人称、时态使用得当 2分
词汇丰富、句子衔接流畅 1分
卷面书写 1分
合计(总分15分) 15分
Post-writing
按要求写出正确的单词、词组或句子。
1. 乡村 (名词) __________ 2. 转身 (短语) ___________
3.惊讶的(形容词) __________ 4. 可能地(副词) __________
5. 寻找(短语) __________
6. 去森林探险(短语) __________
7. 惊讶地做某事(形容词)__________
8. 多么完美的经验!________
9. 我真希望我能再回去。 ___________________________
10. 一切似乎都不同。
_______________________
countryside
turn around
surprised
probably
look for
go to the forest to explore
be surprised to do sth.
What a wonderful experience!
I really hope I can go back again.
Everything there seemed so different.
Summary
Key words
countryside; surprised; probably;deer
Expression
turn around; look for;be surprised to do
Reading &
Writing
How to write a holiday story
(1) When and where
(2) Who
(3) What
(4) Why
(5) What
Work in groups. Make a list of the activities you did during your holidays.
4a
swam
in the sea
Built elaborate sandcastles
Joined in beach volleyball game
Had a beach barbecue
Summer Beach
Work in groups. Make a list of the activities you did during your holidays.
went to the mountains
took music lessons
visited my grandparents
stayed at home to read
visited Yulong Mountains
visited Red Square in Moscow
saw a double rainbow in a town
met a deer in a countryside of Scotland
Step1:Brainstorm Think about activities
4a
Choose five meaningful activities you think everyone should try. Then give
your reasons.
4b
Holiday activity Place Reason
1 visiting Mount Taishan Tai’an city to enjoy the beautiful
scenery and ...
2
3
4
5
visiting the West Lake
Hangzhou
to appreciate the landscape and experience culture...
going to the Forbidden City
Beijing
to learn about Chinese history...
taking a beach vacation
Sanya
to relax on the beach, swim in the sea...
visiting Mogao Caves
Dunhuang
to explore the amazing murals and sculptures...
Share your five activities with your class. Then find out the top three activities that everyone likes to do.
4c
Evaluation Points
能正确表达自己的观点并给出理由
能够正确使用所学词汇和句型
发音准确,能通过眼神、肢体动作
等与同学进行互动
Show time!
Helpful & Active List
✓ ★ Volunteer at an animal shelter (At 2:00 pm on Monday)
✓ Help with cleaning (At 9:30 every night)
✓ Cook dinner for family (At 4:00 pm on Friday)
✓ Plant flowers (On Saturday morning)
✓ ★ Organize old toys to donate (On Sunday morning)
Show time!
Presentation
New words
Project
countryside; surprised; probably
Make a holiday to-do list
Write a holiday story
(1) When and where did the story happen? (时间和地点)
(2) Who is the main character? (人物)
(3) What happened in the story? (经过)
(4) Why did that happen? (原因)
(5) What is the end of the story? (结果——感受+收获)
Reading &
Writing
Expressions
turn around; look for
课堂总结
1. Read and master the key words and phrases
in this lesson.
2. Write an article about an unforgettable
holiday experience.
Homework
Basic homework
Practical homework
Thanks for your listening
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