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阅读下面材料，标黑加粗斜体黄，可积累文本！黑色块 动词积累或动作串；蓝色（宾从）红色（定从）单斜体（状从）；其余非谓语形式都会标注；B-eli-eve in daily accumulation!(注释) 河南五市（驻马店、漯河、南阳、信阳、三门峡）2025年高三第一次联考试卷 77. 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Sarah had always dreamed of becoming a wildlife photographer. Every weekend, she would walk into the nearby forest, hoping to capture precious moments of animals in their natural habitat. However, after months of trying, she still hadn't gotten that perfect shot she was looking for. Deer always ran away at the slightest sound. birds flew off before she could focus her lens, and her camera bag stayed full of empty memory cards. Frustration began to creep in , but Sarah refused to give up. She loved the forest, the fresh air,and the sense of peace it brought her, even if the animals didn’t always cooperate. One chilly autumn morning, Sarah noticed something unusual- a young fox standing still near the edge of the forest. Her heart raced with excitement.“This could be my chance!”she thought, quickly pulling out her camera. She adjusted the lens and began to move closer, careful not to make any sudden movements. The fox didn't run away; it just stood there, its gaze fixed on her. Sarah's fingers trembled as she framed the shot , imagining the stunning image she could capture the fox’s brilliant red coat against the golden autumn landscape. As she peered through the viewfinder, she noticed something strange. The fox’s front paw was raised slightly, and its body seemed tense. She zoomed in and gasped - the paw was injured, possibly caught in a trap. The fox's stillness wasn't an opportunity for a perfect shot; it was a sign of pain and fear. Sarah's excitement turned to concern in an instant. Her heart tightened as she looked into the animal's eyes, seeing the silent plea for help. Her photographer’s instinct urged her to take the shot-it would be powerful emotional, and perfect. But a stronger voice inside her whispered that some moments weren’t meant to be captured; they were meant to be acted upon. With trembling hands, she lowered her camera and reached for her phone instead to call the local wildlife rescue team.注意： （1）所续写短文的词数应为150左右； （2）续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。 Paragraph 1: Moments later, some rescue workers arrived with equipment and medicine. Paragraph 2: Being a volunteer for the rescue team, Sarah never forgot her dream. 河南五市（驻马店、漯河、南阳、信阳、三门峡）2025年高三第一次联考试卷 77. 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Sarah had always dreamed of becoming a wildlife photographer(人物塑造，重要支撑点). Every weekend, she would walk into the nearby forest, hoping to capture(现在分词短语做伴随动作) precious moments of animals in their natural habitat. However, after months of trying, she still hadn't gotten that perfect shot she was looking for. Deer always ran away at the slightest sound, birds flew off before she could focus her lens, and her camera bag stayed full of empty memory cards(并列形式的3个句子). Frustration began to creep in(情绪描写) , but Sarah refused to give up. She loved the forest, the fresh air,and the sense of peace(名词的并列，刻画人物) it brought her, even if the animals didn’t always cooperate. One chilly autumn morning, Sarah noticed something unusual- a young fox standing still near the edge of the forest(可以理解为独立主格 或 notice sb/sth doing). Her heart raced with excitement(情绪描写).“This could be my chance!”she thought, quickly pulling out her camera(现在分词做伴随动作). She adjusted the lens and began to move closer, careful not to make any sudden movements(adj短语做主语补语). The fox didn't run away; it just stood there, its gaze fixed on her(独立主格，刻画fox). Sarah's fingers trembled(细节动作) as she framed the shot , imagining the stunning image(现在分词做伴随动作) she could capture the fox’s brilliant red coat against the golden autumn landscape. As she peered through the viewfinder, she noticed something strange. The fox’s front paw was raised slightly, and its body seemed tense(细节刻画). She zoomed in and gasped - the paw was injured, possibly caught in a trap(过去分词短语做后置定语). The fox's stillness wasn't an opportunity for a perfect shot; it was a sign of pain and fear.(递进语气，冲突点) Sarah's excitement turned to concern in an instant(情绪变化). Her heart tightened(心理描写) as she looked into the animal's eyes, seeing the silent plea for help(现在分词短语做伴随动作). Her photographer’s instinct urged her to take the shot-it would be powerful emotional, and perfect. But a stronger voice inside her whispered that some moments weren’t meant to be captured; they were meant to be acted upon. With trembling hands, she lowered her camera and reached for her phone instead to call the local wildlife rescue team(目的状语).注意： （1）所续写短文的词数应为150左右； （2）续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。 Paragraph 1: Moments later, some rescue workers arrived with equipment and medicine. Paragraph 2: Being a volunteer for the rescue team, Sarah never forgot her dream. 1. 文章分类及续写思路分析 类型：情感道德抉择类（野生动物保护主题） 构思方向： 主题升华：从“追求梦想”转向“责任与善良”，体现人性光辉。 冲突解决：通过救助狐狸，展现人物成长。 情感线：紧张→担忧→责任感→满足感。 布局与框架： 段落 内容要点 衔接原文的关键点 第一段 救援人员处理狐狸伤势，Sarah协助；环境描写（紧张→缓和） 承接“called the rescue team”、狐狸的受伤状态 第二段 Sarah加入救援队，平衡摄影梦想与动物保护；结尾点题（如拍到狐狸康复的照片） 呼应“never forgot her dream”、首段“perfect shot” 注意事项： 承接原文：狐狸伤势、Sarah的心理转变（摄影师本能→救助本能）、森林环境。 巧妙设计：加入“狐狸回头看Sarah”等细节暗示信任；用环境变化（如阳光穿透云层）象征希望。 2. 故事山模式与原文分析 故事山模式： 开端：Sarah屡次拍摄失败，发现狐狸。 发展：兴奋准备拍摄，发现狐狸受伤。 高潮：道德抉择（拍摄or救助）。 回落：选择救助，救援队到来。 结局：Sarah找到新方向（续写部分）。 分析表格： 分析角度 内容 原文反应句/关键词 人物刻画 Sarah坚韧、善良 “refused to give up”, “a stronger voice inside her” 情感层次 兴奋→担忧→责任感 “heart raced” → “heart tightened” → “trembling hands” 关键情节点 发现狐狸受伤 “zoomed in and gasped – the paw was injured” 语言特色 动作与心理描写交织 “fingers trembled as she framed the shot” 隐含主题 人性＞艺术，责任＞个人成就 “some moments weren’t meant to be captured” 伏笔/冲突 狐狸的静止状态（原以为机会，实为伤痛） “its body seemed tense” 隐含线索 森林的“peace”暗示Sarah与自然的深层联系 “the sense of peace it brought her” 3. 续写语料库 推荐例句： 动作描写： The fox limped slightly, its fur matted with dirt. Sarah knelt down slowly, extending a hand to show she meant no harm. The rescue team worked swiftly, their hands moving with practiced precision. A faint whimper escaped the fox’s throat as the trap was removed. She held her breath, afraid any sound might startle the fragile creature. 心理描写： A wave of relief washed over her as the fox’s eyes met hers gratefully. Doubt gnawed at her—had she made the right choice? Her heart swelled with a newfound purpose beyond the lens. The weight of the moment settled heavily on her shoulders. She marveled at how quickly her priorities had shifted. 环境描写： The morning sun filtered through the trees, casting dappled light on the forest floor. A crisp breeze carried the scent of pine and damp earth. The forest seemed to hold its breath, waiting for the outcome. Golden leaves rustled softly, as if whispering encouragement. Shadows lengthened as the afternoon wore on, marking the passage of time. 高级替换词： 场景 基础词 高级替换 情绪 happy elated, jubilant 动作 run dart, sprint 环境 quiet serene, tranquil 疼痛 hurt agonized, throbbing 快速 quickly promptly, hastily 4. 语法与语料分析 高中语法现象： 现在分词作状语： “Her heart raced with excitement, imagining the stunning image...” 例句：The children laughed, chasing each other through the park. 虚拟语气： “some moments weren’t meant to be captured” (隐含should not be)。 地道搭配： creep in (vi. 逐渐产生)近义词：emerge, arise反义词：vanish 例句：Doubt began to creep in as the deadline approached. fix one’s gaze on (盯着)近义词：stare at反义词：glance away 例句：The cat fixed its gaze on the moving toy. zoom in (放大) 近义词：focus on反义词：zoom out 例句：He zoomed in to capture the butterfly’s intricate patterns. 生词短语： 单词/短语 词性/释义 例句 precious adj. 珍贵的 The necklace held precious memories. frustration n. 沮丧 His frustration grew with each failure. plea n. 恳求 Her eyes held a silent plea for help. 5. Possible Versions (3) Version 1： Paragraph 1: Moments later, some rescue workers arrived with equipment and medicine. As they knelt beside the trembling fox, Sarah held her breath(细节动作), her fingers still clutching the camera(独立主格) she had almost used to capture its suffering. The team worked swiftly, their movements precise yet gentle, murmuring reassurances to the frightened creature(现在分词做伴随动作). No sooner had they freed its paw than the fox let out a soft whimper(no sooner ... than ... 倒装句 一...就... ), its golden eyes locking onto Sarah’s with something akin to gratitude(独立主格 刻画fox的细节). The forest, once silent(对比描写), seemed to exhale—a breeze rustling the autumn leaves(独立主格刻画细节) as if in approval(省略句). At that moment, Sarah understood: some images were meant to be lived, not framed. Paragraph 2: Being a volunteer for the rescue team, Sarah never forgot her dream. Yet now, her lens sought more than beauty—it sought stories of resilience(递进语气). Weeks later, she returned to the same spot, her camera at the ready(独立主格). There, beneath the gnarled oak where she’d first seen the fox, stood the same creature, its paw fully healed(独立主格，交代信息), its coat gleaming in the sunlight(独立主格). This time, she clicked the shutter(语境词汇)—not out of ambition, but to preserve a moment of triumph(递进句式). Her shot, once filled with near-misses(对比描写), now bore witness to life’s quiet victories. And though she still chased the perfect shot(与原文衔接，刻画), she knew it wasn’t about the trophy—it was about the tale behind it. 加分点与替换词 "Held her breath" (动作描写)替换：froze in place / stood motionless 例句：She froze in place, afraid even a whisper might scare the fox away. "Locking onto Sarah’s" (情感描写)替换：fixing on / piercing into 例句：The fox’s gaze pierced into her, as if reading her thoughts. "The forest seemed to exhale" (环境拟人化) 替换：The woods sighed in relief / The air stilled in reverence 例句：The woods sighed in relief as the fox was freed. "Stories of resilience" (主题升华) 替换：narratives of survival / chronicles of endurance 例句：Her photos became narratives of survival, not just snapshots. "Quiet victories" (高级词汇) 替换：unspoken triumphs / silent conquests 例句：Life’s unspoken triumphs were now her focus. Version 2 Paragraph 1: Moments later, some rescue workers arrived with equipment and medicine. Sarah stepped back, her camera hanging forgotten around her neck(独立主格，刻画人物), as the professionals took over. One rescuer, a woman with gentle hands, carefully pried open the trap while another soothed the fox with low, steady words. The animal’s whines softened into quiet trust—a transformation Sarah captured not with her lens, but with her heart.(递进句式) As the team bandaged the wound, she noticed how the morning light, once harsh(对比描写), now cast the scene in a golden haze(环境描写). It wasn’t the shot she’d pictured, but it was the one she needed(并列递进句). Paragraph 2: Being a volunteer for the rescue team, Sarah never forgot her dream. Instead of stalking wildlife for trophies, she now documented their recovery—each photo a testament to second chances(独立主格补充信息). Months later, her exhibit, Wild and Free, featured the very fox she’d helped save, its scarred paw a badge of survival(独立主格，补充信息). Critics praised her work not for its technical perfection, but for its raw honesty(递进句式). And when a young visitor asked, "How do you get so close to them?" Sarah smiled. "You don’t chase them," she said. "You earn their trust." 加分点与替换词 "Hanging forgotten" (动作细节)替换：dangling unused / swaying idly 例句：Her camera swayed idly as she watched, mesmerized. "Pried open the trap" (精准动词) 替换：wrenched apart / released the jaws of 例句：The rescuer wrenched apart the metal teeth of the trap. "Draped the scene in a golden haze" (环境描写) 替换：bathed the clearing in amber / cast a luminous glow 例句：Sunlight bathed the clearing in amber, softening the moment. "A testament to second chances" (主题升华) 替换：a tribute to redemption / proof of renewal 例句：Her work became a tribute to redemption in the wild. "Raw honesty" (情感评价) 替换：unfiltered truth / visceral authenticity 例句：The photos resonated because of their visceral authenticity. Version 3 Paragraph 1: Moments later, some rescue workers arrived with equipment and medicine. Sarah hovered nearby, her earlier excitement replaced by a gnawing guilt(独立主格刻画人物心理)—had she really been about to photograph pain? The team’s leader, a man with kind eyes, nodded to her. "You did the right thing," he said, as if reading her mind(状从省略). By the time the fox was freed, its limp replaced by tentative steps(独立主格，细节动作刻画), Sarah’s hands were steady—not from holding a camera, but from certainty(递进句式). She pocketed her phone, already dialing the rescue center’s volunteer line(现在分词做伴随动作). Paragraph 2: Being a volunteer for the rescue team, Sarah never forgot her dream. Years later, her award-winning series, The Rescue Frame, featured animals mid-recovery—their wounds healing, their spirits unbroken(独立主格). The opening photo? A close-up of a fox’s paw, scarred but strong(adj补语), rested on a human hand. Viewers often asked why she’d shifted from wildlife to rescue photography. Her answer was simple: "The best stories aren’t taken—they’re given." And in the quiet of the forest, where her journey had changed course, the wind carried echoes of a fox’s grateful cry. 加分点与替换词 "Gnawing guilt" (心理描写)替换：clawing remorse / biting regret 例句：Clawing remorse made her question her initial impulse. "Tentative steps" (动作细节)替换：wobbly strides / cautious movements 例句：The fox took wobbly strides toward the underbrush. "Scarred but strong" (对比修辞) 替换：battered yet unyielding / marked but resilient 例句：Its fur was battered yet unyielding, a survivor’s coat. "The best stories aren’t taken—they’re given" (金句) 替换：True moments are shared, not stolen / Real connections are earned, not captured 例句："Real connections," she’d say, "are earned, not captured." "Echoes of a fox’s grateful cry" (伏笔回收) 替换：whispers of that fateful day / remnants of a silent plea 例句：The forest held whispers of that fateful autumn morning. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $