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Description of Emotions
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.Example:
However,when I stood on the stage,with so
many eyes fixed on me,..
I felt nervous.
Vivid detailed?
You can describe a character's emotions from three aspects.
Internal
sensations
What a character is feeling inside.
内心感觉
Description
Physical
of emotions
signals
What other people can see.
外在表现
Mental
responses
What a character is thinking.
心理活动
Example:
I was nervous
However,when I stood on the stage,with so many
eyes fixed on me,..
My heart was beating quickly (internal sensations)
with my legs trembling/my palms sweating (physical
signal).I wondered if the audience would like me
(mental responses).
B⊙DY PARTS
HEAD
EYEBROW
EYE
NOSE
Physical signals
外在表现
EAR
LIP
ARM
MOUTH
HAND
TONGUE
LEG
FOOT
关于兴奋/高兴的描写
happy;pleased;delighted;joyful;excited;thrilled;wild with joy
happiness;pleasure;delight;joy;excitement;thrill;
动词(短语)
抓住:seized;took hold of
Excitement
打败:got the better of
me
席卷:swept over
涌出:surged through
My heart
充满:was filled with;overflowed with
excitement
关于兴奋/高兴的描写
内心感觉
one's heart was like a singing bird
one's heart was overflowing with joy
one's heart was thumping with excitement
外在表现
wear a bright/broad smile
smile brightly;grin at sb;beam at sb;beam with pleasure
露齿而笑;咧着嘴笑;龇着牙笑
笑容满面;眉开眼笑
laugh;burst into laughter;burst out laughing;
one's(eyes/face)light up with delight喜形于色
one's eyes shine with excitement
be radiant with happiness容光焕发
clap one's hands
jump/dance with joy;
关于兴奋/高兴的描写
写作训练:当主持人宣布她获奖时,她兴奋极了。
When the host announced that she won the prize,she felt very excited.
When the host announced that she won the prize,she was seized with
excitement/a wide excitement took hold of her.
When the host announced that she won the prize,her eyes light up with
excitement.
vWhen the host announced that she won the prize,her heart was thumping
with excitement.
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How to write
Internal sensations:What a character is feeling inside.
Description
Physical signals:What other people can see.
of emotion
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Mental responses:What a character is thinking.
Active
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Vivid action description
words
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Vivid adv./adj.description
Main Character
十
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Simile/metaphor明喻/暗喻
Minor Character
Rhetorical
◆Personification拟人
device
◆Contrast对比
Exaggeration夸张
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