专题07 应用文写作（期中真题汇编，福建专用）高一英语上学期

专题07书信写作—应用文写作 主题01 建议信 Passage 1 （24-25学年高一上·福建福州第三中学·期中） 假定你是李华，你的朋友John写信告诉你他难以融入新的班级，内心感到 孤独，寻求你的建议。 请你给他回信，建议他： 1.多交朋友 2.参加活动 3.…… 注意：写作词数应为100左右；开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数。 Dear John, __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua Passage 2 （24-25学年高一上·福建三明市两校协作联考·期中） 假设你是李华，你的英国网友Linda 最近在中国学习。她写信向你诉说了她的困扰：不适应新的生活学习环境，想家，感到很焦虑。请你根据以下要点给她写一封回信。 要点如下： 1. 表示理解并给予安慰； 2. 提出建议并给出理由。 注意：词数80左右 提示词： homesick 想家的， environment 环境。 Dear Linda, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua Passage 3 （24-25学年高一上·福建三明市永安九中、金沙高级中学·期中） 假如你是李华，你的好友John刚刚进入高中生活。他在邮件中向你询问如何尽快融入新环境。请你根据以下信息回信。 1. 多跟同学交流沟通； 2. 积极参加学校活动； 注意：1. 词数80左右； 2. 可设当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 4 （24-25学年高一上·福建龙岩市侨育中学·期中） 你校英文报新开了一个专栏，主题为 Sports keep me fit。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括： 1.你的运动方式； 2.你的建议。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Sports keep me fit _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 主题02 介绍信 Passage 1 （24-25学年高一上·福建永春二中晋江内坑中学等五校·期中） 3．假如你是李华，新学期开始，你来到了新的学校，开启了崭新的高中生活。请你给远在新西兰的笔友 Steve写一封信，和他分享你的感受。要点如下： 1. 新学校环境； 2. 与新老师新同学的相处； 3. 你对高中生活的期待。 注意： 1. 词数80左右; 2. 不得出现真实学校名称和师生姓名； 3. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Steve, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes! Yours sincerely, Li Hua Passage 2 （24-25学年高一上·福建仙游第一中学·期中） 假定你是李华，你的英国笔友 Tom 对中国的传统节日春节很感兴趣，请你给他写一封电子邮件，介绍春节。内容包括：​ 1.春节的时间及意义；​ 2.春节的主要庆祝活动，如家庭团聚、吃年夜饭、放鞭炮等；​ 3.邀请他来中国体验春节。 注意： 1.词数 80 左右； 2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Tom, I know you are interested in the Spring Festival, so I'm writing to tell you something about it. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes Li Hua 主题01 建议信 Passage 1 （24-25学年高一上·福建漳州地区·期中） 假定你叫李华，你的英语笔友Steven来信说他和同学因为小事发生了争执，都不愿相互理睬，他想知道如何与同学和睦相处，请根据以下要点写一封回信。 1.表示安慰； 2.如何解决该矛盾； 3.如何与同学和睦相处。 注意： 1.词数 100 左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 2 （24-25学年高一上·福建福州市八校联考·期中） 假设你是李华，是一名高中生。最近，你的笔友艾米（Amy）给你寄来一封信，说她因发胖而感到非常苦恼。请你根据下列要点给她写一封建议信。内容包括： ①注意饮食合理，营养均衡； ②经常锻炼，保证睡眠充足； ③调整心态。 注意：1. 词数80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Amy, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua Passage 3 （24-25学年高一上·福建南平市邵武市第七中学·期中） 假如你是李华，是学校英文报“Advice”栏目的编辑。你收到一封署名为Jack的来信。信中该同学诉说了自己的困扰：进入高中后经常感到压力大，晚上睡不好，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。 内容包括： 1. 表示理解并给予安慰； 2提出建议并说明理由。（至少两条建议） 注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 4 （24-25学年高一上·福建龙岩市一级校联盟·期中） 假定你是李华，你的英国笔友 Mary给你写了一封电子邮件，诉说她对高中生活的不适应。请你给她回一封电子邮件，内容包括： 1.写信目的； 2.你的建议； 3.表达愿望。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Mary, __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua Passage 5 （24-25学年高一上·福建南平市高级中学·期中） 假如你是李华，是学校英文报“Advice”栏目的编辑。你收到一封署名为Jack的来信。信中该同学诉说了自己的困扰：进入高中后经常感到压力大，晚上睡不好，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。 内容包括： 1. 表示理解； 2. 提出建议。 注意： 1. 词数80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Jack, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua Passage 6 （24-25学年高一上·福建福州市晋安区·期中） 假定你是李华，你的朋友Tom最近沉迷于抖音(Tik Tok)，你很担心他，请你给他写一封邮件。内容包括： 1．简述危害； 2．提出建议； 3．表达信心。 注意： 1．写作词数应为100词左右； 2．可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯； 3．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Tom, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua Passage 7 （24-25学年高一上·福建泉州市泉州科技中学·期中） 假定你是李华，你的朋友Tom最近沉迷于抖音（Tik Tok），你很担心他，请你给他写一封邮件。内容包括： 1) 简述其危害：对健康有害，影响学习等； 2) 提出建议：严格控制玩手机时间，参加课外活动等； 3) 表达期望。 注意：1)词数80词左右；2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。 Dear Tom, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 主题02 介绍信 Passage 1 （24-25学年高一上·福建福州市八县（市）协作校·期中） 假设你是李华，你在美国夏令营时的住家 Smith夫妇写信告诉你他们下周将来福建游玩，请给他们制定一个旅行计划并写信告知他们，要点如下： 1. 表示欢迎； 2. 行程安排； 3. 希望告知航班信息以便接机。 注意：1. 字数100词左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Mr and Mrs Smith, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Lu Hua Passage 2 （24-25学年高一上·福建部分达标学校·期中） 假定你是李华，你的外国朋友Tom想了解你们学校最近举办的秋季运动会。请你给他写一封电子邮件，介绍运动会的情况，内容包括： 1．运动会的时间和地点； 2．运动会的活动和项目； 3．你的参与和感受。 注意： 1．写作词数应为80个左右； 2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Tom, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours, Li Hua Passage 3 （24-25学年高一上·福建莆田市第十五中学·期中） 假定你是李华，你同城的外籍朋友Tom得知你假期准备去西安旅游，发来电子邮件准备跟你同去。请你给他回一封电子邮件，告知他你的旅行计划。 注意：词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数)。 Dear Tom, I was so delighted to hear from you and know that you are going to Xi’an with me during the holidays. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 主题03 推荐信 Passage 1 （24-25学年高一上·福建厦门市外国语学校·期中） 假定你是李华，你的外国交换生朋友Paul发邮件向你倾诉进入高中以来学业紧张缺乏锻炼，请你给他回信。 内容包括： 1. 表达慰问 2. 推荐运动项目及理由 3. 注意事项 注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 可适当加入细节，使行文连贯。 Dear Paul, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua Passage 2 （24-25学年高一上·福建福州市福九联盟·期中） 假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Jack得知国庆期间福州成为了福建省内最受欢迎的旅游目的地之一，因此他计划来福州旅游，请根据以下调查中福州各景点的客流量统计数据(statistics)，推荐一个你认为旅游体验最佳的福州景点。内容包括：1、统计数据描述；2、你的推荐与理由。 注意：1．写作词数应为100左右；2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Jack, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 主题04 询问信 Passage 1 （24-25学年高一上·福建福州三状元高级中学·期中） 假定你是李华，你计划期末考试结束后去英国旅行。请给你的英国网友Harry写一封信，告诉他你的计划并就相关问题向他询问。内容包括： 1.考试结束后和父母一起去英国旅行； 2.计划在伦敦停留5天； 3.旅行计划： （1）第一天参观伦敦塔桥（Tower Bridge）和海德公园（Hyde Park）； （2）第二天参观大本钟（Big Ben）和白金汉宫（Buckingham Palace）； （3）第三天参观大英博物馆（British Museum）； （4）去购物。 4.向他询问英国的风俗习惯。 注意：1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ / 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 专题07书信写作—应用文写作 主题01 建议信 Passage 1 （24-25学年高一上·福建福州第三中学·期中） 假定你是李华，你的朋友John写信告诉你他难以融入新的班级，内心感到 孤独，寻求你的建议。 请你给他回信，建议他： 1.多交朋友 2.参加活动 3.…… 注意：写作词数应为100左右；开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数。 Dear John, __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear John, I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble adapting to your new school life in America, but this situation can be easily changed if you take my advice. First and foremost, you should work hard at English, which can give you more opportunities to communicate with others. Secondly, why not make some friends？They can help you to forget your loneliness. Thirdly, it would be a good idea if you take an active part in a variety of activities，which will help to make life more interesting. By doing so, you will be happier with your new life soon． I do hope you will find these ideas useful． 【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写封建议信，给难以融入新的班级的朋友John提建议。 【详解】1.词汇积累 适应：fit→adapt to 首先：firstly→first and foremost 交流：talk→communicate 各种各样的：all kinds of→a variety of 2.句式拓展 合并简单句 原句：Secondly, why not make some friends？They can help you to forget your loneliness. 拓展句：Secondly, why not make some friends, who can help you to forget your loneliness? 【点睛】[高分句型1]First and foremost, you should work hard at English, which can give you more opportunities to communicate with others.(which引导的非限制性定语从句) [高分句型2]Thirdly, it would be a good idea if you take an active part in all kinds of activities, which will help to make life more interesting.(which引导的非限制性定语从句) Passage 2 （24-25学年高一上·福建三明市两校协作联考·期中） 假设你是李华，你的英国网友Linda 最近在中国学习。她写信向你诉说了她的困扰：不适应新的生活学习环境，想家，感到很焦虑。请你根据以下要点给她写一封回信。 要点如下： 1. 表示理解并给予安慰； 2. 提出建议并给出理由。 注意：词数80左右 提示词： homesick 想家的， environment 环境。 Dear Linda, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Linda, I’m sorry to learn that you are having such a bad time. Actually, most people will feel homesick and anxious when they leave home and come to a new place, especially a foreign country. So don’t worry too much. Here are some tips for you. To begin with, you’d better try to change some of your habits so that you can get used to the new environment as soon as possible. What’s more, make more new friends, who can share their hobbies and ideas with you. You will feel less homesick with many friends around you. Last but not least, you should take part in some social activities. It will help you learn more about the local customs and cultures. I hope my advice will be useful. Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国网友Linda写一封回信，就她在中国学习所遇到的困难给与安慰并提出建议。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 实际上：in fact→actually 忧虑的：worried→anxious 建议：advice→tip 参加：join in→take part in 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Here are some tips for you. 拓展句：Here are some tips for you that I think will be helpful. 【点睛】【高分句型1】To begin with, you’d better try to change some of your habits so that you can get used to the new environment as soon as possible. (运用了so that引导目的状语从句) 【高分句型2】What’s more, make more new friends, who can share their hobbies and ideas with you. (运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句) Passage 3 （24-25学年高一上·福建三明市永安九中、金沙高级中学·期中） 假如你是李华，你的好友John刚刚进入高中生活。他在邮件中向你询问如何尽快融入新环境。请你根据以下信息回信。 1. 多跟同学交流沟通； 2. 积极参加学校活动； 注意：1. 词数80左右； 2. 可设当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Dear John, I’m glad to hear from you. Starting at a new school can be challenging, but don’t worry too much. Here are some suggestions. Firstly, try to communicate with your classmates as much as possible. This will help you make friends and understand them better. Secondly, take an active part in school activities. They provide a great opportunity to meet new people and develop friendships. I hope these tips will help you adapt quickly. If you need any more advice, feel free to ask. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。好友John刚刚进入高中生活。他在邮件中向考生询问如何尽快融入新环境，要求考生按照要求写回信。 【详解】1.词汇积累 高兴的：glad → delighted 建议：suggestion → proposal 机会：opportunity → chance 迅速地：quickly → rapidly 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：Starting at a new school can be challenging, but don’t worry too much.   拓展句：It can be challenging to start at a new school, but don’t worry too much.   【点睛】【高分句型1】Starting at a new school can be challenging, but don’t worry too much.（运用了动名词Starting作主语） 【高分句型2】I hope these tips will help you adapt quickly. （运用了省略引导词that的宾语从句） Passage 4 （24-25学年高一上·福建龙岩市侨育中学·期中） 你校英文报新开了一个专栏，主题为 Sports keep me fit。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括： 1.你的运动方式； 2.你的建议。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Sports keep me fit _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Sports keep me fit As a sports enthusiast, I consider it crucial to engage in physical activities to maintain a healthy lifestyle. Personally, I enjoy a variety of sports to keep myself fit and active. My favorite way to work out is through regular jogging. Not only does it help me improve my endurance but also it allows me to enjoy the beauty of nature. Besides, I also participate in team sports, through which I can enhance team work skills. My advice to those who want to stay fit is to find an activity that they genuinely enjoy. Then, set achievable goals and make it a habit to exercise regularly. Last, remember to warm up before any workout and cool down afterwards. Let’s lace up our sneakers and embrace the world of sports for a fit and fulfilling school life together! 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以主题“Sports keep me fit”写一篇短文，向校报投稿。 【详解】1.词汇积累 关键的：crucial→ key/critical 维持：maintain → keep 各种各样的：a variety of →varieties of/various 提高：improve → enhance 此外：besides→ in addition 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Personally, I enjoy a variety of sports to keep myself fit and active. 拓展句：Personally, I enjoy a variety of sports so that I can keep myself fit and active. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Besides, I also participate in team sports, through which I can enhance team work skills.（运用了“介词+which”引导的定语从句） 【高分句型2】My advice to those who want to stay fit is to find an activity that they genuinely enjoy.（运用了who引导的定语从句和that引导的定语从句） 主题02 介绍信 Passage 1 （24-25学年高一上·福建永春二中晋江内坑中学等五校·期中） 3．假如你是李华，新学期开始，你来到了新的学校，开启了崭新的高中生活。请你给远在新西兰的笔友 Steve写一封信，和他分享你的感受。要点如下： 1. 新学校环境； 2. 与新老师新同学的相处； 3. 你对高中生活的期待。 注意： 1. 词数80左右; 2. 不得出现真实学校名称和师生姓名； 3. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Steve, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes! Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Steve, How is everything recently? I’m writing to tell you my lifestyle in the new school. Our school is very beautiful with a big playground. There are green trees and all kinds of sweet flowers all the year round. The teachers are very strict with us in study, but after class, they are friendly and care about us very much. My new classmates are all very excellent and always work very hard. They help me a lot with my lessons as well as many things in my daily life and we get along quite well with each other. Though the school life is stressful, I am full of confidence. I think with the help of the teachers, I will make great progress. Best wishes! Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生按照要求给远在新西兰的笔友 Steve写一封信，和他分享新学校的高中生活的感受。 【详解】1.词汇积累 最近：recently → lately 亲切的：friendly → kindly 关心：care about → care for 压力大的：stressful → high-pressure 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Our school is very beautiful with a big playground. 拓展句：Our school is very beautiful, which has a big playground. 【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m writing to tell you my lifestyle in the new school.（运用了不定式to tell作状语） 【高分句型2】Though the school life is stressful, I am full of confidence.（运用了Though引导的让步状语从句） Passage 2 （24-25学年高一上·福建仙游第一中学·期中） 假定你是李华，你的英国笔友 Tom 对中国的传统节日春节很感兴趣，请你给他写一封电子邮件，介绍春节。内容包括：​ 1.春节的时间及意义；​ 2.春节的主要庆祝活动，如家庭团聚、吃年夜饭、放鞭炮等；​ 3.邀请他来中国体验春节。 注意： 1.词数 80 左右； 2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Tom, I know you are interested in the Spring Festival, so I'm writing to tell you something about it. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes Li Hua 【答案】参考范文 Dear Tom, I know you are interested in the Spring Festival, so I’m writing to tell you something about it. The Spring Festival falls on the first day of the lunar new year, symbolizing new beginnings and family reunion. On this day, families gather for a big dinner, with dishes like dumplings and fish. People also set off firecrackers to drive away bad luck. I sincerely invite you to China next year to experience the joy of the Spring Festival with my family. Best wishes, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于介绍信。要求考生给英国笔友Tom写封邮件，介绍中国的春节，内容包括春节的时间和意义，以及主要的庆祝活动，并邀请他来中国体验春节。 【详解】1. 词汇积累： 象征、代表：symbolize→stand for 放鞭炮：set off firecrackers→light firecrackers 运气：luck→fortune 快乐：joy→delight 2. 句式拓展： 同义句转换： 原句：The Spring Festival falls on the first day of the lunar new year, symbolizing new beginnings and family reunion. 拓展句：The Spring Festival falls on the first day of the lunar new year, which symbolizes new beginnings and family reunion. 【点睛】【高分句型1】I know you are interested in the Spring Festival, so I’m writing to tell you something about it.（运用了省略连接词that的宾语从句和） 【高分句型2】I sincerely invite you to China next year to experience the joy of the Spring Festival with my family.（运用了动词不定式作目的状语） 主题01 建议信 Passage 1 （24-25学年高一上·福建漳州地区·期中） 假定你叫李华，你的英语笔友Steven来信说他和同学因为小事发生了争执，都不愿相互理睬，他想知道如何与同学和睦相处，请根据以下要点写一封回信。 1.表示安慰； 2.如何解决该矛盾； 3.如何与同学和睦相处。 注意： 1.词数 100 左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Steven, I’m really glad to hear from you. I hope you don't feel very sad and angry after having a conflict with your classmate. People often have different views on things, which can normally cause conflict. First, I think you should calm down and communicate with your classmate to clear up the misunderstanding between you. To get along well with your classmates, you should be kind and friendly to them. What's more, you'd better learn to control your emotion. In my opinion, if you put yourself in others' position, you would understand them better. I hope the advice above will be helpful to you and wish you a happier time at school. Yours， Li Hua 【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封信给和同学因为小事发生了争执，不愿理睬对方的英语笔友Steven，安慰一下他，并给予他解决矛盾和如何与同学和睦相处的建议。 【详解】第一步：审题 体裁：应用文 时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时 结构：总分法      总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。 要求：1. 表示安慰； 2. 如何解决该矛盾； 3. 如何与同学和睦相处。 第二步:列提纲 （重点词组） hear from sb.；have a conflict with sb.；calm down；communicate with sb.；clear up sth.；get along well with sb.；put sb. in others' position 第三步：连词成句 1. I’m really glad to hear from you. 2. I hope you don't feel very sad and angry after having a conflict with your classmate. 3. I think you should calm down and communicate with your classmate to clear up the misunderstanding between you. 4. To get along well with your classmates, you should be kind and friendly to them. 5. if you put yourself in others' position, you would understand them better. (根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。） 第四步：连句成篇（衔接词） 1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last, Last but not least 2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only…but (also), including, also 3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although + clause (从句), In spite of + n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that… 4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result 5表换一种方式表达：In other words, that is to say, 6.表进行举例说明：For example; For instance; such as + n/doing 7.表陈述事实：In fact, frankly speaking 8.表选择：either…or…，or 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。 第五步：润色修改 【点睛】范文内容完整，结构严谨，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了主从复合句，如I think (that) you should calm down and communicate with your classmate to clear up the misunderstanding between you这句话中用了省略that引导的宾语从句，如which can normally cause conflict这句话中用了which引导的非限制性定语从句；使用了非常好的短语，如have a conflict with sb.，communicate with sb.，get along well with sb.，put sb. in others' position等，为文章增色不少；并注意了句子的衔接，如 First，What's more。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。 Passage 2 （24-25学年高一上·福建福州市八校联考·期中） 假设你是李华，是一名高中生。最近，你的笔友艾米（Amy）给你寄来一封信，说她因发胖而感到非常苦恼。请你根据下列要点给她写一封建议信。内容包括： ①注意饮食合理，营养均衡； ②经常锻炼，保证睡眠充足； ③调整心态。 注意：1. 词数80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Amy, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Amy， I’m sorry to hear that you are upset because you have put on weight. The following are some tips on how to keep fit. First of all, to keep healthy, you need to have a balanced diet. Don’t eat the foods containing too much sugar and fat, which will make you put on weight easily. Besides, it is important to take regular exercise. Sports like riding and walking are of great benefit to your health, which can help keep you in shape. Enough sleep makes your body relaxed. As a result, for the benefit of your health, it is necessary that you should have enough sleep and rest. Last but not least, there is no need to worry about weight gain and weight loss. As far as I’m concerned, nothing is more important than health. I do hope my tips will be helpful to you. Best wishes. Yours, Li Hua 【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给Amy写一封建议信帮助她解决发胖带来的烦恼。 【详解】1.词汇积累 关于：on→concerning/regarding 首先：first of all→first and foremost 重要的：important→vital/significant 因此：as a result→as a concequence/concequently 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Besides, it is important to take regular exercise. Sports like riding and walking are of great benefit to your health, which can help keep you in shape. 拓展句：Besides, it is important to take regular exercise, because sports like riding and walking are of great benefit to your health, which can help keep you in shape. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Don’t eat the foods containing too much sugar and fat, which will make you put on weight easily.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句） 【高分句型2】As a result, for the benefit of your health, it is necessary that you should have enough sleep and rest. （运用了it作形式主语，that引导主语从句） Passage 3 （24-25学年高一上·福建南平市邵武市第七中学·期中） 假如你是李华，是学校英文报“Advice”栏目的编辑。你收到一封署名为Jack的来信。信中该同学诉说了自己的困扰：进入高中后经常感到压力大，晚上睡不好，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。 内容包括： 1. 表示理解并给予安慰； 2提出建议并说明理由。（至少两条建议） 注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Jack, I understand how challenging it can be to adjust to the increased pressures of high school life. It's normal to feel overwhelmed at times, but remember that you're not alone. Many students experience similar struggles when transitioning into a new academic environment. To help manage your stress and improve your sleep, I recommend incorporating some relaxation techniques into your daily routine. Deep breathing exercises or meditation before bed can work wonders for calming the mind. Additionally, establishing a consistent sleep schedule by going to bed and waking up at the same time every day can greatly benefit your overall well-being. Don't hesitate to reach out to teachers, friends, or family members if you need someone to talk to. You've got this! Best regards, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达是一封建议信，要求作为学校英文报 “Advice” 栏目的编辑给署名 Jack 的同学回信，针对他进入高中后压力大、睡不好的困扰给予理解、安慰并提出建议。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 压力：pressure → stress 感到不知所措：feel overwhelmed → feel out of one's depth 调整：adjust to → adapt to 改善睡眠：improve your sleep → enhance your sleep quality 2. 句式拓展 同义句改写 原句：I understand how challenging it can be to adjust to the increased pressures of high school life. 拓展句：I am fully aware of the challenges that come with adapting to the heightened stress of high school, which many students find difficult. 【点睛】【高分句型 1】It's normal to feel overwhelmed at times, but remember that you're not alone.（使用了it作形式主语以及连接代词that连接的宾语从句） 【高分句型 2】Deep breathing exercises or meditation before bed can work wonders for calming the mind.（使用了动名词短语作主语） Passage 4 （24-25学年高一上·福建龙岩市一级校联盟·期中） 假定你是李华，你的英国笔友 Mary给你写了一封电子邮件，诉说她对高中生活的不适应。请你给她回一封电子邮件，内容包括： 1.写信目的； 2.你的建议； 3.表达愿望。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Mary, __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Mary, I’m sorry to learn from your email that you have trouble in getting used to your senior high school life. I’m writing to to share my advice. Firstly, I think you can make friends with your classmates and share your feelings with someone you trust, which is a good way to help you out and seek for support. Besides, a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in cheering you up. It is also a good idea to go outdoors and play team games with your friends because physical exercise is an effective way to stay in a good mood. Hopefully, my advice will be of benefit to you. I hope you can get used to your new school life soon. Best wishes. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇是应用文写作。你的英国笔友 Mary给你写了一封电子邮件，诉说她对高中生活的不适应，要求考生给她回一封电子邮件给他。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 建议：advice→suggestion 首先：firstly→to begin with 寻找：seek for→look for 另外：besides→in addition 2. 句式拓展 同义句改写 原句：It is also a good idea to go outdoors and play team games with your friends because physical exercise is an effective way to stay in a good mood. 拓展句：It is not only a good idea to maintain a positive attitude, but also to go outdoors and play team games with your friends, because physical exercise is an effective way to stay in a good mood. 【点睛】[高分句型1]I’m sorry to learn from your email that you have trouble in getting used to your senior high school life. I’m writing to to share my advice.(that引导的宾语从句) [高分句型2]Firstly, I think you can make friends with your classmates and share your feelings with someone you trust, which is a good way to help you out and seek for support.(which引导的非限制性定语从句) Passage 5 （24-25学年高一上·福建南平市高级中学·期中） 假如你是李华，是学校英文报“Advice”栏目的编辑。你收到一封署名为Jack的来信。信中该同学诉说了自己的困扰：进入高中后经常感到压力大，晚上睡不好，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。 内容包括： 1. 表示理解； 2. 提出建议。 注意： 1. 词数80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Jack, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Jack, I understand how challenging it can be to adjust to the increased pressures of high school life. It’s normal to feel overwhelmed at times, but remember that you’re not alone. Many students experience similar struggles when transitioning into a new academic environment. To help manage your stress and improve your sleep, I recommend incorporating some relaxation techniques into your daily routine. Deep breathing exercises or meditation before bed can work wonders for calming the mind. Additionally, establishing a consistent sleep schedule by going to bed and waking up at the same time every day can greatly benefit your overall well-being. Don’t hesitate to reach out to teachers, friends, or family members if you need someone to talk to. You’ve got this! Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达是一封建议信，要求作为学校英文报“Advice”栏目的编辑给署名Jack的同学回信，针对他进入高中后压力大、睡不好的困扰表示理解并提出建议。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 调整：adjust to → adapt to 感到不知所措：feel overwhelmed → feel at a loss 经历：experience → go through 改善睡眠：improve your sleep → enhance your sleep quality 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：To help manage your stress and improve your sleep, I recommend incorporating some relaxation techniques into your daily routine. 拓展句：I recommend incorporating some relaxation techniques into your daily routine, whose aim is to help manage your stress and improve your sleep. 【点睛】【高分句型 1】It’s normal to feel overwhelmed at times, but remember that you’re not alone. (使用了it作形式主语，不定式作真正主语以及连接代词that连接的宾语从句) 【高分句型 2】Don’t hesitate to reach out to teachers, friends, or family members if you need someone to talk to. (使用了if引导的条件状语从句) Passage 6 （24-25学年高一上·福建福州市晋安区·期中） 假定你是李华，你的朋友Tom最近沉迷于抖音(Tik Tok)，你很担心他，请你给他写一封邮件。内容包括： 1．简述危害； 2．提出建议； 3．表达信心。 注意： 1．写作词数应为100词左右； 2．可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯； 3．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Tom, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Tom, I’m sorry to hear that you’re so addicted to Tik Tok that you feel painful. I really understand how you feel. Addiction to Tik Tok is bad to your health and affects your study. Therefore, I’d like to offer you some advice that I think may be helpful to you. First of all, I recommend that you (should) learn to control yourself and make good use of your time to work hard. Secondly, it’s better for you to take part in some extracurricular activities, which can not only keep you healthy but also enrich your life. Last but not least, you have to develop other hobbies that can help you forget Tik Tok. I hope these suggestions can help you get rid of your addiction as soon as possible. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封邮件给沉迷抖音的朋友Tom，阐述沉迷抖音的危害，提出建议并表达信心。 【详解】1.词汇积累 沉迷：addicted to → hooked on 影响：affect → influence 参加：take part in → participate in 建议：suggestion → recommendation 2.句式拓展 句型转换 原句：Addiction to Tik Tok is bad to your health and affects your study. 拓展句：It is addiction to Tik Tok that is bad to your health and affects your study. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Secondly, it’s better for you to take part in some extracurricular activities, which can not only keep you healthy but also enrich your life.（使用了关系代词which引导的非限制性定语从句） 【高分句型2】Last but not least, you have to develop other hobbies that can help you forget Tik Tok.（使用了关系代词that引导的限制性定语从句） Passage 7 （24-25学年高一上·福建泉州市泉州科技中学·期中） 假定你是李华，你的朋友Tom最近沉迷于抖音（Tik Tok），你很担心他，请你给他写一封邮件。内容包括： 1) 简述其危害：对健康有害，影响学习等； 2) 提出建议：严格控制玩手机时间，参加课外活动等； 3) 表达期望。 注意：1)词数80词左右；2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。 Dear Tom, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Tom, I’m sorry to hear that you’re so addicted to Tik Tok that you feel painful. I really understand how you feel. Addiction to Tik Tok is bad to your health and affects your study. Therefore, I’d like to offer you some advice that I think may be helpful to you. First of all, I recommend that you (should) learn to control yourself and make good use of your time to work hard. Secondly, it’s better for you to take part in some extracurricular activities, which can not only keep you healthy but also enrich your life. Last but not least, you have to develop other hobbies that can help you forget Tik Tok. I hope these suggestions can help you get rid of your addiction as soon as possible. Best wishes! Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【导语】这篇写作是一篇建议信，要求考生就朋友沉迷抖音的事情提出建议，考生应该囊括题目要求的三个要点，并且补充合理细节。 【详解】1. 词汇积累： ①控制：control→regulate, manage ②利用：make use of→utilize, employ ③课外的：extracurricular→out-of-class, additional ④丰富：enrich→enlarge, enhance 2. 句式拓展： 简单句变复合句 原句：Addiction to Tik Tok is bad to your health and affects your study. 拓展句：Addiction to Tik Tok is bad to your health, which will affect your study. 【点睛】【高级句型1】Therefore, I’d like to offer you some advice that I think may be helpful to you. (that引导的定语从句) 【高级句型2】First of all, I recommend that you (should) learn to control yourself and make good use of your time to work hard. (宾语从句中的虚拟语气) 主题02 介绍信 Passage 1 （24-25学年高一上·福建福州市八县（市）协作校·期中） 假设你是李华，你在美国夏令营时的住家 Smith夫妇写信告诉你他们下周将来福建游玩，请给他们制定一个旅行计划并写信告知他们，要点如下： 1. 表示欢迎； 2. 行程安排； 3. 希望告知航班信息以便接机。 注意：1. 字数100词左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Mr and Mrs Smith, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Lu Hua 【答案】Dear Mr and Mrs Smith, Knowing that you are coming to Fujian next week, I’m writing to express my heartfelt welcome and inform you of some arrangements. As scheduled, we will reach Fuzhou by high-speed train. Our first destination will be Three Lanes and Seven Alleys, the cultural card of Fuzhou, which I believe can both satisfy your eyes and appetite. The second day will be spent at Fujian Provincial Museum, where you can appreciate a huge collection of cultural relics and learn about the development of Fujian’s economy, politics, and culture over thousands of years. I bet it will be an enjoyable week. Would you please tell me your flight number so that I can pick you up at the airport? Looking forward to seeing you again. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给Smith夫妇制定一个福建游玩计划并写信告知他们。内容包括：表示欢迎、行程安排和希望告知航班信息以便接机。 【详解】1.词汇积累 真诚的：heartfelt→earnest 按计划：as scheduled→as planned 欣赏：appreciate→ admire 愉快的：enjoyable→pleasant 2.句式拓展 句型转换 原句：I bet it will be an enjoyable week. （宾语从句） 拓展句：There is no doubt that it will be an enjoyable week. （同位语从句） 【点睛】【高分句型1】 Knowing that you are coming to Fujian next week, I’m writing to express my heartfelt welcome and inform you of some arrangements.（运用了现在分词作状语和that引导的宾语从句） 【高分句型2】 Our first destination will be Three Lanes and Seven Alleys, the cultural card of Fuzhou, which I believe can both satisfy your eyes and appetite. （运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句） Passage 2 （24-25学年高一上·福建部分达标学校·期中） 假定你是李华，你的外国朋友Tom想了解你们学校最近举办的秋季运动会。请你给他写一封电子邮件，介绍运动会的情况，内容包括： 1．运动会的时间和地点； 2．运动会的活动和项目； 3．你的参与和感受。 注意： 1．写作词数应为80个左右； 2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Tom, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Tom, I’m excited to tell you about our school’s recent Autumn Sports Meet. The sports meet took place last week, from Friday to Sunday, on our school’s main athletic field. There were a variety of activities and events, including traditional track and field events like the 100-meter dash, long jump and relay races. We also had some fun and engaging games, such as tug-of-war and skipping rope, which added to the excitement. I personally participated in the 400-meter race and was a member of our class relay team. Competing is a beneficial experience for both physical and mental health. I felt a strong sense of achievement and connection with my teammates. Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外国朋友Tom写一封电子邮件，介绍学校最近举办的秋季运动会的情况。 【详解】1.词汇积累 秋季运动会：Autumn Sports Meet → Fall Sports Meeting 各种各样的：a variety of → various/all kinds of 传统的：traditional → conventional 参与：participate in → take part in 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：The sports meet took place last week, from Friday to Sunday, on our school’s main athletic field. 拓展句：The sports meet, which was held from Friday to Sunday last week, took place on our school’s main athletic field. 【点睛】[高分句型1] We also had some fun and engaging games, such as tug-of-war and skipping rope, which added to the excitement.(运用了关系代词which引导非限制性定语从句) [高分句型2] Competing is a beneficial experience for both physical and mental health. (运用了动名词作主语) Passage 3 （24-25学年高一上·福建莆田市第十五中学·期中） 假定你是李华，你同城的外籍朋友Tom得知你假期准备去西安旅游，发来电子邮件准备跟你同去。请你给他回一封电子邮件，告知他你的旅行计划。 注意：词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数)。 Dear Tom, I was so delighted to hear from you and know that you are going to Xi’an with me during the holidays. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】(一) Dear Tom, I was so delighted to hear from you and know that you are going to Xi’ an with me during the holidays. I’m writing to tell you about the travel plans. We can visit the Terracotta Army on the first day and go there directly by bus. We may spend the next day at the Shaanxi History Museum, where you’ll learn about the rich history and vibrant culture of Shaanxi Province. On the last day we can go to Xi’an City Wall, after which we can enjoy some famous local snacks, such as Roujiamo, Bingbiang noodles. In addition, to make our trip more convenient, I will book rooms online in advance. I’m sure we’ll have a very good time together. I’m looking forward to meeting you soon. Yours, Li Hua(二) Dear Tom, I was so delighted to hear from you and know that you are going to Xi’an with me during the holidays. I’m writing to share the travel plans with you. On the first day we will visit the Terracotta Army and a tourist bus will take us there directly. Since you are interested in Chinese culture we can spend the next day at the Shaanxi History Museum so that you can learn about the rich history and vibrant culture of Shaanxi Province, one of the cradles of Chinese civilization. Besides, Xi’an City Wall is a place we must go to on the last day and if time allows, we can taste some well-known local snacks, such as Roujiamo, Bingbiang noodles. Considering it’s the peak tourist season, I will book rooms online in advance. I’m sure we’ll enjoy each other’s company. I can’t wait for the holidays to come and meet you. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给Tom回一封电子邮件，告知他你的旅行计划。 【详解】（范文1） 1.词汇积累 提前：in advance→ahead of time 玩得高兴：have a very good time→enjoy oneself 著名的：famous→noted 此外：in addition→furthermore 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：In addition, to make our trip more convenient, I will book rooms online in advance. 拓展句：In addition, I will book rooms online in advance, which will make our trip can be more convenient. 【点睛】[高分句型1] We may spend the next day at the Shaanxi History Museum, where you’ll learn about the rich history and vibrant culture of Shaanxi Province. (运用了where引导非限制性定语从句) [高分句型2] I’m sure we’ll have a very good time together. (运用了省略that的宾语从句) 主题03 推荐信 Passage 1 （24-25学年高一上·福建厦门市外国语学校·期中） 假定你是李华，你的外国交换生朋友Paul发邮件向你倾诉进入高中以来学业紧张缺乏锻炼，请你给他回信。 内容包括： 1. 表达慰问 2. 推荐运动项目及理由 3. 注意事项 注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 可适当加入细节，使行文连贯。 Dear Paul, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Paul, I’m very sorry to hear that you are suffering from tension due to heavy workload. I would like to recommend a sport to you. From my perspective, skiing is a really good sport, which makes you feel relaxed. This sport can make you stay healthy and strong. It can help you to exercise almost every part of your body every time you go skiing. Before going skiing, you should pay attention to three points. The first is to make your body in a better state. The second is that you should not eat too much. And thirdly, you’d better go skiing with your friends. These can help you stay safe and enjoy yourself. I sincerely hope that your life will carry on as normal. Looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外国交换生朋友Paul回信，就对方提出的进入高中以来学业紧张缺乏锻炼的情况，表达慰问并推荐运动项目及理由，且说明注意事项。 【详解】1.词汇积累 紧张：tension→nervousness 观点：perspective→point of view 安全的：safe→secure 真诚地：sincerely→genuinely 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：I’m very sorry to hear that you are suffering from tension due to heavy workload. I would like to recommend a sport to you. 拓展句：Hearing that you are suffering from tension due to heavy workload, I would like to recommend a sport to you. 【点睛】【高分句型1】From my perspective, skiing is a really good sport, which makes you feel relaxed.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) 【高分句型2】It can help you to exercise almost every part of your body every time you go skiing.(运用了every time引导的时间状语从句) Passage 2 （24-25学年高一上·福建福州市福九联盟·期中） 假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Jack得知国庆期间福州成为了福建省内最受欢迎的旅游目的地之一，因此他计划来福州旅游，请根据以下调查中福州各景点的客流量统计数据(statistics)，推荐一个你认为旅游体验最佳的福州景点。内容包括：1、统计数据描述；2、你的推荐与理由。 注意：1．写作词数应为100左右；2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Jack, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Jack,      I’m glad to hear that you plan to travel to Fuzhou. Here are the statistics of the tourist flow in some Fuzhou’s attractions during the National Day. 48% of the tourists visited Three Lanes and Seven Alleys. Gushan Mountain accounted for around 24%, while Fujian Museum took up 10%. The rest made up 18%.     I highly recommend Three Lanes and Seven Alleys to you. It’s a place filled with rich historical and cultural heritages. There are numerous well-preserved ancient houses that tell stories of the past. Besides, you can taste various delicious local snacks along the alleys. It can offer you a wonderful and immersive cultural experience.     Looking forward to your trip here. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国笔友Jack介绍福州景点的情况并且推荐旅游体验最佳的景点。 【详解】1.词汇积累 高兴的：glad → delighted 此外：besides → what’s more 充满：filled with→ full of 期盼：look forward to→ expect 2.句式拓展 合并简单句 原句：I highly recommend Three Lanes and Seven Alleys to you. It’s a place filled with rich historical and cultural heritages. 拓展句：I highly recommend Three Lanes and Seven Alleys to you, which is a place filled with rich historical and cultural heritages. 【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m glad to hear that you plan to travel to Fuzhou.（运用了that引导的宾语从句） 【高分句型2】There are numerous well-preserved ancient houses that tell stories of the past.（运用了that引导的限制性定语从句） 主题04 询问信 Passage 1 （24-25学年高一上·福建福州三状元高级中学·期中） 假定你是李华，你计划期末考试结束后去英国旅行。请给你的英国网友Harry写一封信，告诉他你的计划并就相关问题向他询问。内容包括： 1.考试结束后和父母一起去英国旅行； 2.计划在伦敦停留5天； 3.旅行计划： （1）第一天参观伦敦塔桥（Tower Bridge）和海德公园（Hyde Park）； （2）第二天参观大本钟（Big Ben）和白金汉宫（Buckingham Palace）； （3）第三天参观大英博物馆（British Museum）； （4）去购物。 4.向他询问英国的风俗习惯。 注意：1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Harry, How is everything? I am going to travel to England with my parents after finishing the final exam. We plan to stay in London for about five days. During the trip, we will visit Tower Bridge and Hyde Park on the first day. On the second day, we will see Big Ben and Buckingham Palace, which are the places I am crazy about. On the third day, we will enjoy ourselves at British Museum. And then we will go shopping. Because of going there for the first time, I hope you can provide me with some information about the customs of England. I’m looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国网友Harry写一封信，告诉他自己去英国旅行的计划并就相关问题向他询问。 【详解】1.词汇积累 完成：finish→complete 计划：plan →intend 参观：visit → pay a visit to 期待：look forward to → expect 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：Because of going there for the first time, I hope you can provide me with some information about the customs of England. 拓展句：Because we will go there for the first time, I hope you can provide me with some information about the customs of England. 【点睛】[高分句型1] On the second day, we will see Big Ben and Buckingham Palace, which are the places I am crazy about.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) [高分句型2] Because of going there for the first time, I hope you can provide me with some information about the customs of England. (运用了省略引导词that的宾语从句) / 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$