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02核心突破练
03真题溯源练
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课标达标练
>01(上海市七宝中学20242025学年高三下学期3月考英语试题)
Directions:Write an English composition in about 150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假如你是明启中学学生李明,你的学校打算开设有关AI的选修课程,学生会向学生收集建议,你很感兴趣,
所以给学生会写一封邮件,谈谈你月前使用AI觉得最有趣或最有效的实例,然后提出你感兴趣的AI选修
课程内容和学习方式的建议。
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>02(上海市控江中学2024-2025学年高三下学期3月学情调研英语试卷)
Directions:Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below.
假如你是明自中学的高三学生李华,近来你收到了朋友王磊的邮件(内容如下),请根据他的邮件内容写
封回信,邮件内容包括:
1,提出你的建议:
2.说明你的理由。
Dear Li Hua,
Hope you're doing great!
I've decided to choose Psychology as my major at university because I'm really
passionate about it.But the problem is,my parents are totally against it and insist that I study
Robotics instead.Do you have any advice on how to change their minds?
Best regards.
Wang Lei
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>1(2025届上海市华东师范大学第二附属中学高三下学期三模英语试题)
Directions:Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
城市公园不再是传统意义上的仅供老年人锻炼身体、社交聊天的场所。根据你最近的一次游园感受,
写一份建议信给公园领导,提出一些切实可行的改进意见,从而充分利用公园的各项设施,为游客创造最
佳的游园体验。
>02(2025届上海市复兴高级中学高三下学期三模英语试题)
Directions:Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假如你是明启中学的高三学生李华,最近你收到了朋友Jas©的一封来信,请给你的朋友写一封回信。内容
必须包括:
1.对使用AI完成翻译作业的看法;
2你的建议和理由。
Dear Li Hua,
How's going recently?I'm in low spirits these days.My teacher criticized me for using AI to finish English
translation homework last week.She said it's dishonest,but I just wanted better accuracy.Now I feel confused-
should we avoid AI completely?How do you handle such tasks?Need your advice.
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Jason
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真题潮源练
(2020上海高考真题)
Directions:Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
明启中学的高三学生李华邀请王磊参加下周五郊外的露天音乐会,但王磊由于路远,交通不便等原因犹豫
不决,写封邮件说服他一起去。信的内容包括:
(1)提出解决问题的方法:
(2)阐释音乐会的重要性。
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第06讲 英语作文之书信邮件类
目录
01 课标达标练
02 核心突破练
03 真题溯源练
· 01 (上海市七宝中学2024~2025学年高三下学期3月考英语试题)
Directions: Write an English composition in about 150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假如你是明启中学学生李明,你的学校打算开设有关 AI的选修课程,学生会向学生收集建议,你很感兴趣,所以给学生会写一封邮件,谈谈你目前使用AI觉得最有趣或最有效的实例,然后提出你感兴趣的AI选修课程内容和学习方式的建议。
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【答案】Dear Student Union,
I am Li Ming, a student from Class 1, Grade 3. I’m writing to give you some advice on optional courses about AI.
I am very interested in optional courses about AI. Nowadays, with the development of technology, we can use AI in many fields. I think it is necessary for us students to learn more about it. For example, I have been used to using my cell phone as a dictionary. It is convenient and efficient for me to look up new words with the help of AI. This is an interesting and useful example of using AI. As for optional courses about AI, I hope we can learn how to make our own apps by ourselves. It must be cool to show them to our friends! Besides, what I suggest is that we should learn it step by step with the help of teachers or engineers.
I would appreciate it if you could consider my suggestions. I’m looking forward to your early reply.
YYours sincerely
LLi Ming
【导语】本篇书面表达是一封建议信,作为学生给学生会提出关于学校开设AI选修课程的建议,包括目前使用AI的有趣或有效实例以及对选修课程内容和学习方式的建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
选修课程:optional courses → elective courses
方便的:convenient → handy
有效的:efficient → effective
考虑:consider → take into account
2.句式拓展
同义句改写
原句:I think it is necessary for us students to learn more about it.
拓展句:I firmly believe that it is of utmost importance for us students to delve deeper into understanding it.
【点睛】【高分句型1】As for optional courses about AI, I hope we can learn how to make our own apps by ourselves.(使用省略that的宾语从句和疑问词+不定式作宾语)
【高分句型2】Besides, what I suggest is that we should learn it step by step with the help of teachers or engineers.(使用了主语从句、表语从句)
· 02 (上海市控江中学2024-2025学年高三下学期3月学情调研英语试卷)
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below.
假如你是明自中学的高三学生李华,近来你收到了朋友王磊的邮件(内容如下),请根据他的邮件内容写封回信,邮件内容包括:
1. 提出你的建议;
2. 说明你的理由。
Dear Li Hua,
Hope you’re doing great!
I’ve decided to choose Psychology as my major at university because I’m really passionate about it. But the problem is, my parents are totally against it and insist that I study Robotics instead. Do you have any advice on how to change their minds?
Best regards,
Wang Lei
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____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Dear Wang Lei,
I’m glad to hear that you’ve decided to pursue Psychology, a field you’re truly passionate about. However, I understand your dilemma with your parents. Here’s my advice: try having an open and honest conversation with them. Explain why Psychology matters to you and how it aligns with your interests and career goals. You could also highlight the growing importance of Psychology in today’s society, such as its role in mental health and human behavior. Additionally, assure them that you’re serious about your choice and have a clear plan for your future.
I believe your parents will support you if they see your determination and understanding of the field. Good luck!
Best regards,
Li Hua
【导语】这是一篇应用文。短文主要针对朋友王磊在选择大学专业时与父母产生分歧的问题,提出建议并说明了理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累:
决定:decide→determine
热情的:passionate→enthusiastic
建议:advice→suggestion
支持:support→back up
句式拓展:
同义句转换
原句:Explain why Psychology matters to you and how it aligns with your interests and career goals.
拓展句:By explaining the significance of Psychology to you and its alignment with your interests and career goals, you can make your parents understand your perspective.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m glad to hear that you’ve decided to pursue Psychology, a field you’re truly passionate about.(运用了that引导的宾语从句和省略引导词that的定语从句修饰先行词field)
【高分句型2】I believe your parents will support you if they see your determination and understanding of the field.(运用了省略连接词that的宾语从句作believe的宾语以及if 引导的条件状语从句)
· 01 (2025届上海市华东师范大学第二附属中学高三下学期三模英语试题)
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
城市公园不再是传统意义上的仅供老年人锻炼身体、社交聊天的场所。根据你最近的一次游园感受,写一份建议信给公园领导,提出一些切实可行的改进意见,从而充分利用公园的各项设施,为游客创造最佳的游园体验。
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【答案】
Dear Park Leaders,
I recently enjoyed a visit to our city park, which now bustles with visitors of all ages. To optimize its use and enhance everyone’s experience, I suggest a few improvements.
Firstly, introduce more engaging activities, such as nature walks with guides or weekend markets, to attract diverse groups. Secondly, enhance signage to help visitors navigate and discover hidden gems. Lastly, maintain facilities regularly, ensuring playgrounds are safe and picnic areas are clean.
These steps will make our park a vibrant destination for all. Thank you for considering my suggestions.
Yours faithfully,
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给公园领导写信,根据最近一次游园感受,提出一些切实可行的改进意见,以充分利用公园设施,为游客创造最佳的游园体验。
【详解】1.词汇积累
首先:firstly→to begin with
吸引:attract→draw in
发现:discover→find
确保:ensure→make sure
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:I recently enjoyed a visit to our city park, which now bustles with visitors of all ages.
同义句:Recently, I had a delightful visit to our city park, which is now crowded with visitors from all age groups.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I recently enjoyed a visit to our city park, which now bustles with visitors of all ages. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Lastly, maintain facilities regularly, ensuring playgrounds are safe and picnic areas are clean. (运用了省略引导词that的宾语从句)
· 02 (2025届上海市复兴高级中学高三下学期三模英语试题)
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假如你是明启中学的高三学生李华,最近你收到了朋友Jason的一封来信,请给你的朋友写一封回信。内容必须包括:
1. 对使用AI完成翻译作业的看法;
2. 你的建议和理由。
Dear Li Hua,
How’s going recently? I’m in low spirits these days. My teacher criticized me for using AI to finish English translation homework last week. She said it’s dishonest, but I just wanted better accuracy. Now I feel confused — should we avoid AI completely? How do you handle such tasks? Need your advice.
Best regards,
Jason
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【答案】Dear Jason,
I’m sorry to hear about your dilemma. Using AI for translation homework is a tricky issue, but I don’t think it’s about avoiding AI entirely. While AI can offer accurate results, relying on it without understanding the process defeats the purpose of learning. Your teacher might have criticized you not because AI is “dishonest,” but because homework aims to help you practice and improve your own skills.
Here’s my advice: use AI as a tool, not a substitute. First, try translating the text independently, then compare your work with AI results to identify mistakes or better expressions. This way, you learn from the tool rather than skipping the learning process. Additionally, communicate with your teacher. Explain that you used AI to check your work, not to copy it, and ask for guidance on improving your translation skills. AI can be a valuable aid, but true mastery comes from hands-on practice and understanding the nuances of language.
Hope this helps! Let me know how it goes.
Best regards,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给Jason朋友写一封回信,说明对使用AI完成翻译作业的看法以及你的建议和理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议:advice→suggestion
提供:offer→provide
依靠:rely on→depend on
此外:additionally→besides
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:AI can be a valuable aid, but true mastery comes from hands-on practice and understanding the nuances of language.
拓展句:Though AI can be a valuable aid, true mastery comes from hands-on practice and understanding the nuances of language.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Explain that you used AI to check your work, not to copy it, and ask for guidance on improving your translation skills.(运用了that引导宾语从句)
【高分句型2】While AI can offer accurate results, relying on it without understanding the process defeats the purpose of learning.(运用了while引导让步状语从句)
(2020·上海·高考真题)
Directions: Write an English composition in 120—150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
明启中学的高三学生李华邀请王磊参加下周五郊外的露天音乐会,但王磊由于路远,交通不便等原因犹豫不决,写封邮件说服他一起去。信的内容包括:
(1) 提出解决问题的方法;
(2) 阐释音乐会的重要性。
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【答案】One possible version:
Dear Wang Lei,
It's been a while since I heard from you. Last time, I invited you to attend the concert which will be held next Friday in the century park. Though you did not reply to me, the hesitation wearing on your face offered me a glimpse of what was going on in your mind. Maybe it is the recent ghastly weather or the terrible traffic that hinder you from making up your mind. However, as far as I’m concerned, it's still worth our efforts.
This concert is not a pop music concert but a classic music one where several prestigious symphony orchestras will perform many well-known compositions. It must be a feast for all the audience. Moreover, chances are that we may have an album with performers autographs on it. You should never miss such a fabulous concert !
In terms of difficulties you are worried about, I have already found some solutions. My father will be available on that day so that he can drive us to the scene. I have managed to persuade him to make his promise. In addition, in case of a rainy day, I have prepared two raincoats. I am confident that we will indulge ourselves into the elegant flow of notes.
I am looking forward to hearing your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作。要求考生写封邮件说服王磊参加下周五郊外的露天音乐会, 告知王磊如何解决路远,交通不便等问题,并阐释音乐会的重要性。
【详解】1.词汇积累
阻碍某人做某事:hinder sb. from doing sth → keep/prevent sb. from doing sth
就我而言,在我看来:as far as I’m concerned → in my opinion/from my point of view
成功做……:manage to do →succeed in doing sth.
此外:in addition→ what’s more /besides
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:In addition, in case of a rainy day, I have prepared two raincoats.
拓展句:In addition, in case it rains, I have prepared two raincoats.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Last time, I invited you to attend the concert which will be held next Friday in the century park.(运用了which引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】Though you did not reply to me, the hesitation wearing on your face offered me a glimpse of what was going on in your mind.(运用了though引导的让步状语从句和what引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型3】This concert is not a pop music concert but a classic music one where several prestigious symphony orchestras will perform many well-known compositions.(运用了where引导的定语从句)
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