专题08 书面表达（期中真题汇编，河北专用）九年级英语上学期

专题08 书面表达 主题1 人与自我----聚焦个人学习生活、成长反思及人际互动中的建议分享 Passage 01 （24-25九年级上·河北衡水·期中）“读书之法无他，惟是笃志虚心，反复详玩，为有功耳。”在每个人的成长过程中，阅读都起着举足轻重的作用。请以“I love reading”为题，并根据要点和要求，用英语写一篇短文。 要点：(1)喜欢读书的原因； (2)可以读的内容； (3)你的阅读习惯。 要求：(1)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； (2)词数80左右。 I love reading ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: I love reading Reading is very important in our life. I love reading because I can get knowledge. It can not only open my mind but also open my eyes to other cultures. Besides, reading is also one of the most important ways to learn a foreign language like English. Textbooks, newspapers and magazines can help me know more about the outside world and grow into an excellent person. Every month I read at least two books. And I especially love reading every night before I go to bed. It can make me feel relaxed and peaceful. I love reading books about history, travelling, painting and so on. I have got a lot through reading. It makes me become better and better. I love reading forever. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍喜欢读书的原因以及可以读的内容； 第二步，介绍你的阅读习惯。 [亮点词汇] ①not only…but also不仅……而且 ②at least至少 ③peaceful平和的 [高分句型] I love reading because I can get knowledge.（原因状语从句） Passage 02 （24-25九年级上·河北石家庄·期中）假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Tony来中国旅游，回国前向你发来一封电子邮件。请你根据邮件内容及写作要求给予回复。 Dear Li Hua, I need your help. I’m going back to America this Sunday. Before leaving, I want to buy a gift that can stand for Chinese culture for my mom. Do you have any advice? Tony 写作要求： (1) 回复邮件须回答所给邮件内容中的问题、可适当发挥。 (2) 回复邮件中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。 (3) 词数80左右 (开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。 Hi Tony, Glad to hear from you. ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope my advice is helpful. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Hi Tony,     Glad to hear from you. It’s easy to choose a gift which stands for Chinese culture.      I’d love to give you my suggestion about Chinese gifts. From my point of view, paper-cut is a good choice to be special Chinese gifts for your family.     Paper-cuts are usually used to decorate the house. They are put on windows, doors and walls to celebrate the Spring Festival. Paper-cuts are a traditional Chinese culture, from which you can have a better understanding of China. People like them very much because they are seen as symbols for good luck and a happy new year.     I hope my advice is helpful. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。 [写作步骤] 第一步、承接已给的开头，介绍推荐的礼物是什么； 第二步、介绍这件礼物以及推荐的原因； 第三步、书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①stand for代表 ②point of view观点 ③have a better understanding of更好地理解 [高分句型] ①Paper-cuts are a traditional Chinese culture, from which you can have a better understanding of China. (which引导非限制性定语从句) Passage 03 （24-25九年级上·河北石家庄·期中）假定英语课上你们正在就“自我成长”开展同伴互评活动，下面是你的同伴周政的自我成长表现记录 (Growth Record)， 请你根据记录内容写一篇短文，总结他五个方面的自我成长表现并进行简单评价，然后就他需要改进的两个方面提出建议。 Growth Record Questions Yes No Did you exercise every day? √ Did you finish your homework on time? √ Did you get on well with your classmates? √ Did you help your parents at home? √ Did you behave politely in public? √ 注意：(1)短文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。 (2)词数80个左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 (3)参考词汇： behave 表现 Well done, Zhou Zheng! You exercised every day and ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Well done, Zhou Zheng! You exercised every day and finished your homework on time. This shows your good time management and self-discipline. You got on well with your classmates and helped your parents at home, which indicates your sociable nature and sense of responsibility. Moreover, you behaved politely in public, showing good manners. However, you might consider adding more diverse types of exercise to your routine for better physical growth. Also, try to engage in more extracurricular activities to further develop your interests. Keep up the good work! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：一般现在时和一般过去时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，总结并评价周政五个方面的自我成长表现； 第二步，就他需要改进的两个方面提出建议。 [亮点词汇] ①time management 时间管理 ②got on well with和……相处融洽 ③sociable nature 合群的性格 ④sense of responsibility 责任感 ⑤good manners 良好的举止 [高分句型] You got on well with your classmates and helped your parents at home, which indicates your sociable nature and sense of responsibility. (非限制性定语从句) Passage 04 （24-25九年级上·河北石家庄·期中）假如你是腾飞，请阅读下面的邮件并按要求回复。 To TengFei@mail.com Subject Exchange visit Hi, Teng Fei, My name is Luke and I’m going to be at your school for the exchange visit next month. I am really excited about it. But I am a little worried about my Chinese and my life in China. Well, why am I writing to you right now? For one thing, I want to lean Chinese first, could you share some ways to learn Chinese? Also, I am interested in Chinese culture. So could you tell me something about Chinese culture? And what do you suggest I do after school? Take care and hope to hear from you soon. From: Luke 注意：1. 可适当增加细节，以使行文流畅。2. 词数80-100。 首尾句已给出，可供选择使用。 To luke@mail.som Subject Chinese learning & Chinese culture Dear Luke, I am glad to hear from you. And I am also excited to know that you will come to China. Here is something I’d like to share. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Hope to have a great time in China! Yours, Teng Fei 【答案】例文： To luke@mail.som Subject Chinese learning & Chinese culture Dear Luke, I am glad to hear from you. And I am also excited to know that you will come to China. Here is something I’d like to share. I know you are worried about your Chinese and your life in China. Don’t worry. I will help you. First, you can learn Chinese by watching Chinese movies and TV shows. It’s a fun way to learn new words and phrases. Second, you can practice speaking Chinese with native speakers. This will help you improve your pronunciation and listening skills. As for Chinese culture, there are many things you can learn. You can learn about Chinese history, art, and food. You can also learn about Chinese festivals and traditions. You can also visit some places of interest in China. I hope these suggestions will help you. Hope to have a great time in China! Yours, Teng Fei 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写邮件的目的； 第二步，针对对方在邮件中提到的几个问题给出具体的建议和做法； 第三步，最后表明自己的祝愿。 [亮点词汇] ① hear from收到某人的来信 ② learn about了解 ③ places of interest名胜古迹 [高分句型] ① there are many things you can learn. (there be句型) ② I hope these suggestions will help you. (省略that的宾语从句) Passage 05 （24-25九年级上·河北邢台·期中）假如你是李华，你的笔友Peter想知道你在学校里有哪些需要遵守的校规，请你给Peter回一封电子邮件，介绍你学校的校规以及你对校规的看法。 内容包括： 1. What should you do at school? 2. What shouldn’t you do at school? 3. What do you think of your school rules? 注意： 1. 词数80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 内容可适当发挥； 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校等信息。 Dear Peter, How’s it going? In your last e-mail, you want to know something about my school rules. ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Peter, How’s it going? In your last letter, you want to know something about my school rulers. Here are some rules we must obey at school. First, we must respect our teachers and get along well with our classmates at school. Second, we should wear school uniforms in school, and we should make our school uniforms clean every day. Third, we must listen to the teachers carefully in class and don’t do things that have nothing to do with our studies. Fourth, boys are not allowed to have long hairs and girls aren’t allowed to wear earrings. What’s more, we aren’t allowed to bring anything dangerous to school. I think these school rules are strict, but they are really helpful for us. We must follow them carefully to make ourselves be better. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开门见山，引出话题。 第二步，具体阐述写作内容，主要围绕“你学校的校规”展开，适当补充，丰富细节。 第三步，书写结语，表达对校规的看法。 [亮点词汇] ①want to do sth想要做某事 ②get along well with…和……相处得好 ③make sb do sth让某人做某事 ④listen to听 ⑤have nothing to do with…与……无关 ⑥are not allowed to do sth不被允许做某事 ⑦are helpful for对……有帮助 [高分句型] ①Here are some rules we must obey at school. (倒装句) ②I think these school rules are strict, but they are really helpful for us. (省略that的宾语从句) 主题2 人与社会----聚焦中国文化传承、社会生活变化及科技发明展示 Passage 06 （24-25九年级上·河北邯郸·期中）越来越多的中国元素走向世界舞台，彰显了中国力量，中国元素包罗万象，从有形的物质符号到无形的精神内容，如风筝、剪纸、陶瓷、茶艺等民俗艺术，春节、中秋节、端午节等节日文化……你心中的中国元素是什么呢？请以“The Chinese element in my heart”为题，根据下面的提示和要求，写一篇英语小短文。 提示：1. What is the Chinese element in your heart? 2. Please introduce this Chinese element. 3. What’s the meaning of the Chinese element? 要求：1、包含提示内容，可适当发挥。 2、句子及篇章结构准确、连贯，书写规范； 3、词数：80个左右。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 The Chinese element in my heart Talking of the Chinese element in my heart, the Festival comes to my mind first. The Spring Festival is the most important festival in China. During the festival, people will get together with other family members. On Spring Festival Eve, they set off fireworks, eat a big dinner and watch the Spring Festival Gala. The next morning, children will put on new clothes, send best wishes to their parents and grandparents and then get some lucky money. As the most valuable Chinese element in my heart, Spring Festival is a festival of joy and happiness, which reminds me to value people around me. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”与“一般将来时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，应注意不要遗漏题干中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍心目中的中国元素； 第二步，详细介绍这种中国元素以及其意义； 第三步，给出评价，并收尾。 [亮点词汇] ①set off引发 ②put on穿上 [高分句型] ①As the most valuable Chinese element in my heart, Spring Festival is a festival of joy and happiness, which reminds me to value people around me.（非限制性定语从句） Passage 07 （24-25九年级上·河北石家庄·期中）传承，似乎是中国人过节的最大意义。独有的中国特色节日，不一样的活动背后却是中国人一致的传承之心。为了让世界也看见中国这一份传统节日的美好，我校举办了主题为“Festive China”的“话说中国节”主题活动，请你根据提示，完成一篇不少于80词的演讲稿。 Hello, everyone, There are many great festivals in our country. ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Hello, everyone, There are many great festivals in our country. Today I want to talk about the Mid-Autumn Festival, a traditional Chinese festival. It is celebrated on the 15th day of the 8th lunar month. People celebrate it by admiring the full moon and sharing stories. Families come together, and children enjoy lighting lanterns. We eat special mooncakes, which are round and symbolize reunion. I think this festival is important because it brings families closer and allows us to honor tradition. It shows the beauty of Chinese culture and the value of togetherness. Thank you. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍这个传统节日是什么； 第二步，具体描述人们是如何庆祝的以及吃什么食物； 第三步，最后表达你的看法。 [亮点词汇] ① admire the full moon赏月 ② allow sb to do sth允许某人做某事 ③ the value of……的价值 [高分句型] ①We eat special mooncakes, which are round and symbolize reunion.（定语从句） ②I think this festival is important because it brings families closer and allows us to honor tradition.（原因状语从句） Passage 08 （24-25九年级上·河北沧州·期中）改革开放45年来，中国从开启新时期到跨入新世纪，从站上新起点到进入新时代，人民生活发生了翻天覆地的变化。根据下面图片提示，用英语写一篇发言稿，谈谈新时代人们的生活变化。 注意： (1) 短文须包括提示中的三个要点，并适当发挥； (2) 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名； (3) 词数80个左右 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 Changes in People’s Life Hello, everybody! Today I’d like to say something about people’s life in the new time. ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Changes in People’s Life Hello, everybody! Today I’d like to say something about people’s life in the new time. People’s everyday life could show the development of society. In the new time, the food on our table becomes richer and more delicious. What’s more, we can spend more time and money on sports, education and entertainment. People like going to the cinema or exercising to relax. Or they can choose some activities to improve themselves. People’s life becomes more colorful. People’s opinions on reading and traveling have also changed. Reading is another good habit for many people now. It can help us open our eyes. Besides reading, traveling has become a common way to learn about the world. They become necessary for a good life. We can enjoy our life in many ways these days. Thanks to the government, our life is becoming better and better. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇讲稿； ②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”和“现在完成时”为主； ③提示：写作要点应注意题干给出的“谈谈新时代人们的生活变化”并适当补充，使文章内容充实。 [写作步骤] 第一步，借用文章已给开头，介绍演讲的主题； 第二步，根据题干中思维导图的要点，详细描述中国人民生活的改变； 第三步，表达对政府的感谢，并收尾。 [亮点词汇] ①what’s more更重要的是 ②thanks to幸亏 [高分句型] ①Reading is another good habit for many people now.（动名词作主语） Passage 09 （24-25九年级上·河北石家庄·期中）假如你是李华，你喜欢发明创造。在学校科技节上，你的最新发明“My smart schoolbag”获一等奖。请以“My smart schoolbag”为题，根据下面表格中的内容，写一篇发言稿，介绍你的新发明。 外观 看起来和普通书包一样，有一个显示屏 材料 布 (cloth)，塑料 (plastic) 优点 查单词，与父母联系，讲笑话哄主人开心…… 缺点 重量大…… 历时 2个月 评价 …… 注意： （1）短文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。 （2）词数80个左右。（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. I’d like to introduce my new invention to you. It is_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文1 Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. I’d like to introduce my new invention to you. It is my smart schoolbag. It looks like an ordinary schoolbag, but it has a special screen. It is made of cloth and plastic. There are many advantages of my smart schoolbag. It can help me look up new words easily. I can also use it to communicate with my parents. Sometimes, it can tell jokes to make me happy. However, it is a little heavy. I spent two months inventing it. I believe it will be better in the future. 例文2 Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. I’d like to introduce my new invention to you. It is my bag which looks like a normal one but has a special screen. It’s made of cloth and plastic, which are friendly to our planet. The screen helps me talk to my parents and find new words easily. There’s also a “joke” button that makes me laugh when I’m feeling down. My schoolbag is a bit heavy, but it’s good for carrying some books. I worked hard for two months to make this bag, and I think it’s really cool. Thanks for listening! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇讲稿。 ②时态：一般现在时和一般过去时。 ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的要点内容，可适当发挥。注意写作时要按第一人称写。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，介绍自己的最新发明“My smart schoolbag”。 第二步，具体阐述写作内容，智能书包的外观、材料、优点、缺点、评价等。 第三步，书写结语，相信智能书包未来会更好。 [亮点词汇] ①look up new words查新单词 ②spent two months inventing it花了两个月时间发明它 [高分句型] It’s made of cloth and plastic, which are friendly to our planet. （非限制性定语从句） Passage 10 （24-25九年级上·河北唐山·期中）假设你叫李华，你的笔友Tony要来中国旅游，回国前他想给家人买一件代表中国文化的礼物。他通过邮件询问你的意见，请你用英文给他回复邮件。 要点提示： 1. What do you advise him to buy?   2. Tell something about it.   3. Why do you advise him to buy it? 要求： 1.邮件须包括提示中的要点，可适当发挥。 2.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（人名、地名和校名等）； 3.词数：80词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 Dear Tony, Glad to hear from you. It’s easy to choose a gift which stands for Chinese culture.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Tony , Glad to hear from you. It’s easy to choose a gift which stands for Chinese culture. I’d love to give you my suggestion about Chinese gift. From my point of view, paper cuttings are a good choice to be special Chinese gifts for your family. Paper cuttings are usually used to decorate the house. They are put on windows, doors and walls to celebrate the Spring Festival. Paper cuttings are a traditional Chinese culture, from which you can have a better understanding of China. People like them very much because they are seen as symbols of wishes for good luck and a happy new year. I hope my advice is helpful. Best wishes ! Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据题干中的提示信息介绍一件代表中国文化的礼物，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作方法] 第一步，介绍推荐的礼物是什么； 第二步，介绍这个礼物； 第三步，说明推荐理由。 [亮点词汇] ①from my point of view依我看来 ②be used to do被用来做某事 ③be seen as被看成 [高分句型 ] ①Paper cuttings are a traditional Chinese culture, from which you can have a better understanding of China.（定语从句） ②People like them very much because they are seen as symbols of wishes for good luck and a happy new year.（because引导原因状语从句） 主题1 人与自我----聚焦个人成长变化、规则认知及他人情况总结 Passage 11 （24-25九年级上·河北石家庄·期中）转眼间，初中生活已经过去两年多，相信你在各方面都有了很大变化。请以“ How I’ve Changed” 为题写一篇短文描述自己的变化，和你对这些变化的感受以及对初三接下来学习生活的展望。 要求： （1）文章内容要包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥； （2）文中不得出现真实的人名与校名； （3）80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 How I’ve Changed Time passed quickly. I’ve changed a lot with the time going. ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 How I’ve Changed Time passed quickly. I’ve changed a lot with the time going. I used to be thin and short, but now I am tall and strong. I used to be shy and quiet, my face often turned red when I spoke with strangers. Now, I am so brave and outgoing that I am not afraid of speaking out in public anymore. In the past, I like playing computer games, now, I like doing sports in my free time. I used to being afraid of speaking English, now I like making speeches in public. In the following year, I will work hard to study and strive to be admitted to a provincial key high school. I hope my dream can come true. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文。 ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”穿插。 ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意时态的转换以及动词的变化。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。点明“变化”引出下文。 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“自己的变化、自己的感受”两个方面具体的描述。 第三步，书写结语。表达“对初三接下来学习生活的展望”，进行思想高度升华。 [亮点词汇] ①with the time going 随着时间流逝 ②be afraid of 害怕 ③come true 实现 [高分句型] ①Now, I am so brave and outgoing that I am not afraid of speaking out in public anymore.（so…that…如此……以至于……） Passage 12 （24-25九年级上·河北秦皇岛·期中）假如你是李华，收到了好友Peter的邮件。请阅读并回复。 Subject: change & festival Hi there, Li Hua! How are you? I hope you’re fine and not too busy! Well, it has been a while since I got your message last time. I really want to know if you have changed a lot as a new 9th grader. So could you tell me one of your biggest changes? The biggest change for me is that I fall in love with Chinese festivals. Can you tell me how you spent your Mid-Autumn Festival this year? Write to me soon. Yours, Peter 注意：(1)词数80个左右(给出的开头和结尾不计入总词数)； (2)不得出现真实的人名、校名等。 Dear Peter, You asked about my biggest change, ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】One possible version: Dear Peter, You asked about my biggest change, I used to like playing computer games, but now I like sports. Sports are not only good for my health but also good for my study. The Mid-Autumn Festival is one of the most important traditional festivals in China. It falls on August 15th of the lunar calendar. People like enjoying a large meal with their family. This year, my parents and I spent it at my grandparents’ home in the countryside. We bought them Suzhou-style mooncakes. In the evening we ate mooncakes and admired the moon. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。 [写作步骤] 第一步、承接已给的开头，介绍自己最大的变化； 第二步、介绍中秋节的意义及时间等； 第三步、介绍自己今年如何庆祝中秋节。 [亮点词汇] ①used to do过去常常做 ②not only…but also不仅……而且 ③be good for有益于 ④like doing sth.喜欢做某事 ⑤admire欣赏 [高分句型] ①The Mid-Autumn Festival is one of the most important traditional festivals in China.(“one of+the+形容词最高级+名词复数”结构) Passage 13 （24-25九年级上·河北唐山·期中）一次同学聚会上，你见到以前的朋友Mike，他的变化很大。请根据表格内容写一篇短文描述Mike的变化。 In the past Now Appearance short; straight hair tall; curly hair Personality shy outgoing Hobby soccer singing … 要求： (1) 短文须包括表格中所有要点和补充要点，可适当发挥； (2) 短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名； (3) 词数80个左右(开头已给出, 不计入总词数。 Last week, I saw Mike at the party. ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Last week, I saw Mike at the party. He has changed a lot. Mike used to be short. He used to have straight hair. Now he is a tall boy and has curly hair. He used to be shy and quiet. He had few friends. Now he is more outgoing than before. He has made many friends in his school. He used to like playing soccer, but now he enjoys singing and reading books. He used to be late for school. He didn’t like English. Luckily, his English teacher is very patient. With the teacher’s help, he is better at English now. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时和一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”的内容中过去和现在的对比内容，再适当添加细节，并突出重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步：表明写作意图。借用“上周，我在聚会上见到了迈克。”来引出重点介绍的内容。 第二步：具体阐述写作内容。从“外貌、个性、爱好等”几个方面重点介绍迈克的变化。 第三步：书写结语。补充一点或二点“迈克的变化”。 [亮点词汇] ① used to do sth.过去常常干某事 ② enjoy doing sth. 喜欢干某事 ③ with the teacher’s help 在老师的帮助下 [高分句型] ① He has changed a lot.（现在完成时的运用） ② He is more outgoing than before.（形容词比较级的运用） Passage 14 （24-25九年级上·河北衡水·期中）辩证思维对于个人的成长和发展具有重要意义。在我们遇到问题时，要学会理性辩证地看待问题。日常生活中，“规则”虽束缚我们，但也帮助我们养成良好习惯。请以“The Rule that Helps Me Most”为题，写一篇英文短文，介绍一下对你帮助最大的“规则”。 要点： 1. Who made the rule? 2. What’s the rule about? 3. How does the rule help you? 要求： 1. 短文须包含所有要点提示，可适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 3. 词数80左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 The Rule that Helps Me Most As students, the word “rule” is quite common in our daily life. ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 The Rule that Helps Me Most As students, the word “rule” is quite common in our daily life. The rule that helps me most is: Always be strict with yourself and be kind to others. It’s made by my mother. First, I must be strict with myself both in study and in life. So I always try my best to reach my goals. Second, this simple rule also reminds me to treat others with respect and care. Whether at school or at home, being kind helps create a good environment. When I help a friend or show understanding, I feel happier and more connected to those around me. This rule has taught me that kindness can make a big difference, not only in others’ lives but in mine as well. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍谁制定了规则； 第二步，具体描述规则的内容； 第三步，最后表达规则是如何帮助自己。 [亮点词汇] ① be strict with对……严格 ② remind sb to do sth提醒某人做某事 ③ make a big difference产生很大的影响 [高分句型] ①When I help a friend or show understanding, I feel happier and more connected to those around me.（时间状语从句） ②This rule has taught me that kindness can make a big difference, not only in others’ lives but in mine as well.（宾语从句） Passage 15 （24-25九年级上·河北廊坊·期中）王梅的外国朋友Tom发来邮件向王梅寻求帮助，下面是Tom给王梅发来的电子邮件的部分内容。请你根据所给内容，以王梅的名义回复。 My Chinese is very poor. Learning Chinese is too difficult for me. Can you tell me how to memorize words? How can I improve my pronunciation and writing? Please give me some advice. 注意： 1. 回复邮件须回答所给邮件内容中的两个问题,可适当发挥。 2. 回复邮件中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。 3. 词数80个左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 Dear Tom, I'm sorry to hear that you have problems in learning Chinese. ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope these can help you. Yours, Wang Mei 【答案】例文 Dear Tom, I’m sorry to hear that you have problems in learning Chinese. First of all, for Chinese words, you should memorize 4-10 words a day. This will improve your vocabulary gradually. You should also review the words regularly. You can review them by reading Chinese texts. Second, for Chinese pronunciation, you can listen to some Chinese songs and Chinese news, which is good for your pronunciation improvement. Finally, for Chinese writing, you should accumulate more phrases and sentences in your daily life. Then use them in your essay as you write. In this way, your writing will gradually improve. Where there is a will, there is a way. If you study Chinese hard, you can study it well. I hope these can help you. Yours, Wang Mei 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：时态主要为一般现在时态； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，突出写作重点，注意行文连贯，无拼写和语法错误。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接所给开头，点明主题（学习汉语过程中遇到的问题）； 第二步，展开阐述学习汉语的步骤和方法，包括如何学习汉语字词、发音、写作等； 第三步，书写结语，鼓励朋友努力学好汉语，希望自己的建议有所帮助。 [亮点词汇] ①sorry to hear...听到……很难过 ②by doing sth.通过…… ③be good for对……有好处 ④In this way用这种方式 [高分句型] ①I’m sorry to hear that you have problems in learning Chinese.（宾语从句从句) ②you can listen to some Chinese songs and Chinese news, which is good for your pronunciation improvement.（定语从句) ③If you study Chinese hard, you can study it well.（条件状语从句) Passage 16 （24-25九年级上·河北廊坊·期中）假定英语课上，你们班正在就“家庭规定”开展调查活动，下面是你的同伴张军填写的调查表。请你根据表格内容用英语写一篇短文，总结他家的五条家规情况，并发表你的看法。 Family Rules Name: Zhang Jun Questions Yes No Are you allowed to go out with your friends at night? √ Are you allowed to choose your own clothes? √ Are you allowed to play computer games or mobile phones? √ Are you allowed to hang out on weekends? √ Do you have to do housework at home? √ 注意：(1) 短文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名； (2) 词数80个左右 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 Well done, Zhang Jun! ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Well done, Zhang Jun! I think your parents are right. You can choose your own clothes and hang out on weekends. I think these rules are helpful to you. After all, you are not a child. You need to have your own free space. And you often do housework at home. I think you are great. But you are not allowed to go out with your friends at night and play computer games or mobile phones. I think you should understand your parents. They really care about you and they want you to have a bright future. I think these rules are good for you. To keep a good relationship with your parents, you also need to obey the rules. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，肯定张军父母制定的家规很好。 第二步，介绍五条家规情况，发表看法。 第三步，总结全文。 [亮点词汇] ①hang out挂出 ②care about关心 ③be good for对……有益处 [高分句型] ①But you are not allowed to go out with your friends at night and play computer games or mobile phones. (被动语态） ②I think these rules are good for you. (宾语从句） / 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 专题08 书面表达 主题1 人与自我----聚焦个人学习生活、成长反思及人际互动中的建议分享 Passage 01 （24-25九年级上·河北衡水·期中）“读书之法无他，惟是笃志虚心，反复详玩，为有功耳。”在每个人的成长过程中，阅读都起着举足轻重的作用。请以“I love reading”为题，并根据要点和要求，用英语写一篇短文。 要点：(1)喜欢读书的原因； (2)可以读的内容； (3)你的阅读习惯。 要求：(1)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； (2)词数80左右。 I love reading ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 02 （24-25九年级上·河北石家庄·期中）假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Tony来中国旅游，回国前向你发来一封电子邮件。请你根据邮件内容及写作要求给予回复。 Dear Li Hua, I need your help. I’m going back to America this Sunday. Before leaving, I want to buy a gift that can stand for Chinese culture for my mom. Do you have any advice? Tony 写作要求： (1) 回复邮件须回答所给邮件内容中的问题、可适当发挥。 (2) 回复邮件中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。 (3) 词数80左右 (开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。 Hi Tony, Glad to hear from you.__________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope my advice is helpful. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua Passage 03 （24-25九年级上·河北石家庄·期中）假定英语课上你们正在就“自我成长”开展同伴互评活动，下面是你的同伴周政的自我成长表现记录 (Growth Record)， 请你根据记录内容写一篇短文，总结他五个方面的自我成长表现并进行简单评价，然后就他需要改进的两个方面提出建议。 Growth Record Questions Yes No Did you exercise every day? √ Did you finish your homework on time? √ Did you get on well with your classmates? √ Did you help your parents at home? √ Did you behave politely in public? √ 注意：(1)短文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。 (2)词数80个左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 (3)参考词汇： behave 表现 Well done, Zhou Zheng! You exercised every day and_________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 04 （24-25九年级上·河北石家庄·期中）假如你是腾飞，请阅读下面的邮件并按要求回复。 To TengFei@mail.com Subject Exchange visit Hi, Teng Fei, My name is Luke and I’m going to be at your school for the exchange visit next month. I am really excited about it. But I am a little worried about my Chinese and my life in China. Well, why am I writing to you right now? For one thing, I want to lean Chinese first, could you share some ways to learn Chinese? Also, I am interested in Chinese culture. So could you tell me something about Chinese culture? And what do you suggest I do after school? Take care and hope to hear from you soon. From: Luke 注意：1. 可适当增加细节，以使行文流畅。2. 词数80-100。 首尾句已给出，可供选择使用。 To luke@mail.som Subject Chinese learning & Chinese culture Dear Luke, I am glad to hear from you. And I am also excited to know that you will come to China. Here is something I’d like to share._____________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Hope to have a great time in China! Yours, Teng Fei Passage 05 （24-25九年级上·河北邢台·期中）假如你是李华，你的笔友Peter想知道你在学校里有哪些需要遵守的校规，请你给Peter回一封电子邮件，介绍你学校的校规以及你对校规的看法。 内容包括： 1. What should you do at school? 2. What shouldn’t you do at school? 3. What do you think of your school rules? 注意： 1. 词数80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 内容可适当发挥； 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校等信息。 Dear Peter, How’s it going? In your last e-mail, you want to know something about my school rules. ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 主题2 人与社会----聚焦中国文化传承、社会生活变化及科技发明展示 Passage 06 （24-25九年级上·河北邯郸·期中）越来越多的中国元素走向世界舞台，彰显了中国力量，中国元素包罗万象，从有形的物质符号到无形的精神内容，如风筝、剪纸、陶瓷、茶艺等民俗艺术，春节、中秋节、端午节等节日文化……你心中的中国元素是什么呢？请以“The Chinese element in my heart”为题，根据下面的提示和要求，写一篇英语小短文。 提示：1. What is the Chinese element in your heart? 2. Please introduce this Chinese element. 3. What’s the meaning of the Chinese element? 要求：1、包含提示内容，可适当发挥。 2、句子及篇章结构准确、连贯，书写规范； 3、词数：80个左右。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 07 （24-25九年级上·河北石家庄·期中）传承，似乎是中国人过节的最大意义。独有的中国特色节日，不一样的活动背后却是中国人一致的传承之心。为了让世界也看见中国这一份传统节日的美好，我校举办了主题为“Festive China”的“话说中国节”主题活动，请你根据提示，完成一篇不少于80词的演讲稿。 Hello, everyone, There are many great festivals in our country._______________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 08 （24-25九年级上·河北沧州·期中）改革开放45年来，中国从开启新时期到跨入新世纪，从站上新起点到进入新时代，人民生活发生了翻天覆地的变化。根据下面图片提示，用英语写一篇发言稿，谈谈新时代人们的生活变化。 注意： (1) 短文须包括提示中的三个要点，并适当发挥； (2) 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名； (3) 词数80个左右 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 Changes in People’s Life Hello, everybody! Today I’d like to say something about people’s life in the new time. ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 09 （24-25九年级上·河北石家庄·期中）假如你是李华，你喜欢发明创造。在学校科技节上，你的最新发明“My smart schoolbag”获一等奖。请以“My smart schoolbag”为题，根据下面表格中的内容，写一篇发言稿，介绍你的新发明。 外观 看起来和普通书包一样，有一个显示屏 材料 布 (cloth)，塑料 (plastic) 优点 查单词，与父母联系，讲笑话哄主人开心…… 缺点 重量大…… 历时 2个月 评价 …… 注意： （1）短文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。 （2）词数80个左右。（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. I’d like to introduce my new invention to you. It is_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 10 （24-25九年级上·河北唐山·期中）假设你叫李华，你的笔友Tony要来中国旅游，回国前他想给家人买一件代表中国文化的礼物。他通过邮件询问你的意见，请你用英文给他回复邮件。 要点提示： 1. What do you advise him to buy?   2. Tell something about it.   3. Why do you advise him to buy it? 要求： 1.邮件须包括提示中的要点，可适当发挥。 2.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（人名、地名和校名等）； 3.词数：80词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 Dear Tony, Glad to hear from you. It’s easy to choose a gift which stands for Chinese culture.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 主题1 人与自我----聚焦个人成长变化、规则认知及他人情况总结 Passage 11 （24-25九年级上·河北石家庄·期中）转眼间，初中生活已经过去两年多，相信你在各方面都有了很大变化。请以“ How I’ve Changed” 为题写一篇短文描述自己的变化，和你对这些变化的感受以及对初三接下来学习生活的展望。 要求： （1）文章内容要包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥； （2）文中不得出现真实的人名与校名； （3）80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 How I’ve Changed Time passed quickly. I’ve changed a lot with the time going.___________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 12 （24-25九年级上·河北秦皇岛·期中）假如你是李华，收到了好友Peter的邮件。请阅读并回复。 Subject: change & festival Hi there, Li Hua! How are you? I hope you’re fine and not too busy! Well, it has been a while since I got your message last time. I really want to know if you have changed a lot as a new 9th grader. So could you tell me one of your biggest changes? The biggest change for me is that I fall in love with Chinese festivals. Can you tell me how you spent your Mid-Autumn Festival this year? Write to me soon. Yours, Peter 注意：(1)词数80个左右(给出的开头和结尾不计入总词数)； (2)不得出现真实的人名、校名等。 Dear Peter, You asked about my biggest change,______________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua Passage 13 （24-25九年级上·河北唐山·期中）一次同学聚会上，你见到以前的朋友Mike，他的变化很大。请根据表格内容写一篇短文描述Mike的变化。 In the past Now Appearance short; straight hair tall; curly hair Personality shy outgoing Hobby soccer singing … 要求： (1) 短文须包括表格中所有要点和补充要点，可适当发挥； (2) 短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名； (3) 词数80个左右(开头已给出, 不计入总词数。 Last week, I saw Mike at the party._______________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 14 （24-25九年级上·河北衡水·期中）辩证思维对于个人的成长和发展具有重要意义。在我们遇到问题时，要学会理性辩证地看待问题。日常生活中，“规则”虽束缚我们，但也帮助我们养成良好习惯。请以“The Rule that Helps Me Most”为题，写一篇英文短文，介绍一下对你帮助最大的“规则”。 要点： 1. Who made the rule? 2. What’s the rule about? 3. How does the rule help you? 要求： 1. 短文须包含所有要点提示，可适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 3. 词数80左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 The Rule that Helps Me Most As students, the word “rule” is quite common in our daily life.____________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 15 （24-25九年级上·河北廊坊·期中）王梅的外国朋友Tom发来邮件向王梅寻求帮助，下面是Tom给王梅发来的电子邮件的部分内容。请你根据所给内容，以王梅的名义回复。 My Chinese is very poor. Learning Chinese is too difficult for me. Can you tell me how to memorize words? How can I improve my pronunciation and writing? Please give me some advice. 注意： 1. 回复邮件须回答所给邮件内容中的两个问题,可适当发挥。 2. 回复邮件中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。 3. 词数80个左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 Dear Tom, I'm sorry to hear that you have problems in learning Chinese.______________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope these can help you. Yours, Wang Mei Passage 16 （24-25九年级上·河北廊坊·期中）假定英语课上，你们班正在就“家庭规定”开展调查活动，下面是你的同伴张军填写的调查表。请你根据表格内容用英语写一篇短文，总结他家的五条家规情况，并发表你的看法。 Family Rules Name: Zhang Jun Questions Yes No Are you allowed to go out with your friends at night? √ Are you allowed to choose your own clothes? √ Are you allowed to play computer games or mobile phones? √ Are you allowed to hang out on weekends? √ Do you have to do housework at home? √ 注意：(1) 短文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名； (2) 词数80个左右 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 Well done, Zhang Jun! ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ / 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$