专题8 书面表达-【鹰击道道清】2025年天津中考英语冲关模拟分类

6 专题8 书面表达父 专题8 书面表达 0 第一部分 学习指导 构是否正确； (一)考查要点 6.工整誊写作文，卷面整洁，不可过多涂改。 书面表达旨在考查学生的语言综合运用能力， 0 第二部分教村寻根 ) 选材贴近学生的生活，除了2015年的广场舞 1.上周六，Tony和他的朋友们一起去了动物 是社会热点外，其他的都是关于学生日常生活 园。请同学们根据以下提示完成短文。 的内容。中考作文一般围绕一个主题提供一 (1)Tony看见熊猫特别兴奋。 定的素材，以文字、图片或图表的形式呈现给 (2)然而，想起熊猫和其他濒临灭绝的动物 学生，要求学生在限定的词数内(80~100词) 他很伤心。 完成作文。作文中对所提供信息的表述是否 (3)在回家的路上，Toy看见母子俩呼吁保 全面、语言是否正确、逻辑是否清晰、意义是否 护动物。很多人加入他们的队伍。 连贯、书写是否规范等会直接影响到写作得 (4)说说你对此事的看法。 分，因此在平时的学习中要注意学习策略和方 要求：词数80~100，语法正确，书写工整， 法，养成良好的写作习惯。 开头已给出，不计入总词数。 (二)失分原因 Last Saturday,Tony went to the zoo 1.审题不仔细，要点不齐全； with his friends. 2.句子结构混乱，或缺少句子成分，或中式英 语表达； 3.时态使用错误，现在时、过去时、完成时等各 种时态使用混乱： 4.上下文人称不一致，第一人称和第二人称 混用； 5.单词拼写错误，词汇量不足影响表达： 6.书写潦草，卷面不整洁，词数不够或太多。 (三)学法指导 1.认真审题，明确要求，确定文章的体裁、人称 和时态； 2.分析要点，列出提纲，以免行文杂乱无章、漏 掉要点； 3.依据提纲书写作文，确保内容完整，切忌随 意发挥； 4,查缺补漏，对照要点查看书写内容是否 全面； 5.检查主谓是否一致、时态是否统一、句子结 ·213· ) 少鹰击道道清中考冲关模拟分类英语 居 2.健康的生活方式对于青少年是非常重要的。 3.天津是一个历史悠久的美丽城市，你们学校 玲玲经常感冒，她想保持良好的身体状况。 正在参与关于“文明天津人”的讨论，请你根 请说出一些可行性建议。 据下表提示，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈如何 (1)多吃水果和蔬菜，少吃快餐。 做一个文明的中学生。 (2)必须每天至少走10000步，远离沙发。 地点 内容 (3)注意休息，不要熬夜。 在家里 对父母有礼貌，多做家务活 (4)不要焦虑，保持心情愉悦。 (5)谈谈你的看法。 尊敬老师，与同学友好相处， 在学校 要求：(1)词数80~100： 勤奋学习 遵守交通规则，排队等候，不 (2)语法正确，书写工整： 在公共场合 乱扔垃圾 (3)开头已给出，不计入总词数。 As we all know,it is necessary for 要求： teenagers to have the healthy way of life. (1)词数100左右（开头及结尾已给出，不计 入总词数)。 (2)所写内容必须包括表格中的所有信息， 并作适当的发挥。 (3)不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关 信息。 参考词汇：文明的civilised Tianjin is a beautiful city with a long history.Our city has become richer and people feel happier.Recently,all of us are talking about how to be civilised students in our school. Let's join together to be civilised students! ·214 6】 专题8书面表达父 岳串 4.假如你是晨光中学的学生李华，上周二你参5.假如你是英语校报编辑李华。校报收到 加了学校组织的劳动实践活动。请你根据 初一新生Ben的来信，他提出了自己面临的 以下提示给你的英国好友Tom写一封电子 两个问题。请你根据以下提示写一封回信， 邮件，与他分享这次体验并表达你的想法。 说明Ben的问题，提出你的建议并陈述理由。 (1)上周二你参加了学校组织的劳动实践 Ben's problems Your advice and reasons 活动。 参加学校社团(clubs),结识更 (2)你们来到了田地并看到了不同种类的 朋友少， 多朋友 水果。 感觉孤单 (3)农民伯伯热情地欢迎你们，教你们如何 (请你补充) 种植玉米。 多阅读英语故事、新闻，在运用 (4)你们一起采摘蔬菜，用这些蔬菜亲手烹 英语单词难记 中学单词 饪午饭。 (请你补充) (5)你对这次劳动活动的感受… 参考词汇：劳动实践活动labour activities 要求： 要求： (1)回信应包括所有要点； (1)词数：80~100 (2)词数80左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计 (2)开头和结尾已给出，不计人总词数。 入总词数)； (3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 (3)不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息。 Dear Tom, Dear Ben, How are you?I have a wonderful I am sorry to hear that you are having experience to share with you. trouble getting used to the life in middle Last Tuesday,I school.In your letter you said that Please tell me something about you I hope you will find these suggestions and your school life. useful. Yours, Yours, Li Hua Li Hua ·215· 之鹰击道道清 中考冲关模拟分类英语 中中居 第三部分 模拟演练 &c) 2.(2024滨海一模) 1.(2024和平一模) 上周五你们学校举办了“话说中国节 坚韧不拔、欣欣向荣的中国，每天都带给人 (Festivals in China)”的活动。假如你是学 们新的温暖和感动。2024年伊始，互联网 校校报英语专栏的小记者，请根据以下要点 写一篇英文报道，介绍此活动。 就记录下许许多多生动而真挚的故事。时 (1)活动于上周五晚上在英语俱乐部举办。 而激情澎湃，时而细水潺潺，就像微光汇聚 (2)学校邀请了在津学习的两名外国学生参 成冬日暖阳，照亮奋斗之路。假如你是李 加了这次活动。 明，请根据以下提示，讲述发生在身边的一 (3)历史老师介绍了许多中国节日，包括它 个平凡而温暖的故事。 们的起源、背景和习俗。 (1)上周五的英语课上，你的同学王红昏昏 (4)活动期间，一些学生们学剪纸、做灯笼； 欲睡； 还有一些学包饺子。 (2)张老师(Mr Zhang)了解原因后，得知王 (5)你觉得… 红感冒：在去给王红买药的路上出了车祸， 要求： 左腿骨折； (1)词数：80~100个。 (3)王红去医院看望张老师，感动又难过，老 (2)开头已给出，不计入总词数。 师告诉她不要担心； (3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 (4)全班同学给老师写了一封感谢信，祝老 参考词汇： 师早日康复； 起源origin背景background (5)我认为… 习俗custom 剪纸paper cutting 写作要求： Last Friday, (1)不得使用真实姓名和学校名。 (2)包含以上所有要点，可适当增加细节，使 内容充实，行文连贯。 (3)字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清楚。 (4)词数80左右（开头已给出，不计人总词 数)。 Last Friday, ·216· 6 专题8 书面表达父。 3.(2024河北一模) 4.(2024河西一模) 假如你是李华，请你给英国笔友Kevin写一 你的学校近期开辟英文专栏，征集发生在大 封电子邮件，讲述你班同学王亮的一个感人 家身边的感人故事。请你以“The story of 故事，并谈谈感受。 Xiaochen”为题，根据以下提示，为该专栏投 (1)上周六，王亮在街上拍着篮球，走过一个 稿，讲述发生在你班同学小晨身上的故事。 摆满花盆的架子。 (1)去年一个冬天的晚上，下起了大雪。小 (2)不巧，他手中的篮球飞向花架，打碎了一 晨在回家的路上，看见一位司机遇到了困 个花盆。 难，车子在大雪中无法移动。 (3)他站在原地，思考片刻」 (2)小晨立刻上前帮忙推车，但是车子太重， (4)随后他把钱和纸条放在打碎的花盆下。 一直无法移动。 (5)他在纸条上道歉并留下了电话号码。 (3)小晨没有放弃，最终和警察一起帮助司 (6)你很感动… 机摆脱了困境。 参考词汇： (4)司机非常感动，向小晨和警察道谢。小 拍（球）pat花盆a flower pot 晨也被授予了“河西好人”的称号。 纸条a slip of paper (5)我们为小晨感到骄傲，你的看法和体会 要求： 是… (1)词数：80~100个。 参考词汇：感动的be moved (2)电子邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入 摆脱困境get out of the trouble 总词数。 被授予be titled (3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 河西好人Good Person of Hexi Dear Kevin, 要求： How are you?I'd like to share a story (1)词数：80~100个。 with you. (2)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Last Saturday,my classmate Wang The story of Xiaochen Liang Do you have a story to tell?Hope to hear from you. Yours, Li Hua ·217· 沙鹰击道道清中考冲关模拟分类英语 居 5.(2024红桥一模) 6.(2024南开一模) 假如你是李华，请根据以下提示，给你的英 为了进一步增强中学生的安全意识，提高中 国好友Peter写一封邮件，讲述你在新闻报 学生的自我保护能力，学校即将开展以“安 道中看到的关于三位少年感人的故事，并谈 全”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请根据以下要 谈感受。 点提示写一篇演讲稿。 (1)一个早上，他们在马路对面看到一辆黑 要点： 色轿车突然发生侧翻。 (1)遇到危险时，拨打报警电话求助。 (2)汽车开始冒烟，他们直奔过去。 (2)慎重交友，不随便与陌生人交谈。 (3)他们合力打开车门，救出司机。 (3)上网时，不要轻易告诉别人个人信息。 (4)人们过来帮忙，他们就离开了。 (4)如独自一人在家，要与家长保持联系。 (5)你认为… (5)…(补充一点) 参考词汇：侧翻overturn冒烟smoke 参考词汇：casually随便地 要求： 要求： (1)词数：80~100个。 (1)词数：80~100个。 (2)邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总 (2)开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数。 词数。 (3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 (3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Dear friends, Dear Peter, As students,we should always keep How are you?I have a moving story safety in mind.But how can we keep safe? to tell you. Do you have a story to tell?Hope to hear from you. Yours, Li Hua That's all.Thank you. ·218· 6 专题8书面表达父。 岳名 7.(2024部分区一模) (1)学会控制日常饮食，吃低脂的食物，像鱼 你是一名中学生，有时候厌烦父母的管教。 肉、水果和蔬菜； 但是父母出差后你独自生活的经历使你改 (2)多喝水，每天至少八杯水，这样不容易感 变了观点。请根据以下提示信息写一篇 到饥饿； 作文。 (3)选择适合自己的锻炼方式，比如跑步、游 要点如下： 泳和做瑜伽； (1)第一天放学后，吃零食、打游戏。 (4)合理计划时间，养成良好的生活习惯； (2)第二天上学迟到，没吃早饭。 (5)要有坚强的意志； (3)没能交上作业，没力气玩耍。 (6)你的观点… (4)晚上烧糊了饭，切伤了手指。 参考词汇：diet日常饮食low-fat低脂的 (5)你明白了… yoga瑜伽 要求： 写作要求： (1)词数：80~100个。 (1)不得使用真实姓名和学校名。 (2)结构合理，层次清楚。 (2)包含以上所有要点，可适当增加细节，使 (3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 内容充实，行文连贯。 (4)开头已给出，不计入总词数 (3)字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理 Last week,my parents went away on 清楚。 business. (4)词数80左右（开头已给出，不计入总 词数)。 With the success of a movie,the topic of losing weight in a healthy way becomes hot again.During the interview,the main role,gives us some advice. 8.(2024和平二模改编)》 随着某春节档电影的爆火，我们看到了主演 瘦身的励志故事。科学减重、健康生活的话 题再次引起人们热议。在接受采访时，主演 结合自身经历，给我们提出了几条建议。假 如你是学校的小记者，请你将主要内容进行 梳理。 ·219· 沙鹰击道道清中考冲关模拟分类英语 居 9.(2024滨海二模) 10.(2024河北二模) 假如你是李华，上个月你在“中国航天日”参 假如你是晨光中学的学生李华，请你根据 加了科技馆举行的航天俱乐部活动，请根据 以下要点，写一篇英文短文向你校英文校 以下要点写一篇短文，并表达你的想法。 刊投稿，讲述你班同学张鹏夜遇火灾并冷 (1)听了航天员的故事，学习到了科学精神。 静报警的事件经过，并表达自己的想法 (2)做了物理实验，增长了科学知识。 (1)上周二晚上同学张鹏发现他家附近的 (3)参观了展览，对太空旅行更感兴趣了。 工厂出现了火情。 (4)你认为… (2)他立刻拨打报警电话，报告准确的地址。 要求： (3)之后，他大声呼叫附近居民快速离开。 (1)词数：80~100个。 (4)几分钟后消防员赶到，成功扑灭了大火。 (2)开头已给出，不计入总词数。 (5)第二天，消防员来到学校，表扬了张鹏 (3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 并送给他礼物。 参考词汇：科学精神scientific spirit (6)你认为 中国航天日Space Day of China 参考词汇：消防员firefighter(s) 科技馆Science and Technology Museum 扑灭put out表扬praise Last month, 要求： (1)词数：80~100个。 (2)短文的题目和开头已给出，不计入总 词数。 (3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 A touching story Last Tuesday night,my classmate Zhang Peng ·220· 6 专题8 书面表达父 11.(2024河东二模) 12.(2024红桥二模) 假如你是光华中学初三(2)班的学生李华， 请你根据以下提示，以“The Story of 你经常用英语给你的笔友Tony写信，请 Wang Ping”为题，为学校广播站英语专栏 根据以下要点，给Tony写一封信介绍上 写一篇短文，介绍发生在一位年轻的公交 周班里发生的一些情况，并表达自己的 车司机王平身上的一件事。 看法。 (1)昨天上午九点王平驾驶公交车，看到有 (1)上周一，班里来了一名叫王明的新同 位老人躺在路边，旁边的女士在呼救 学，个子很高，戴着眼镜。 (2)王平把车停住并下了车，他了解到老人 (2)课上回答老师问题时，他的口音让一些 有心脏病。 同学哄堂大笑：他很紧张，没能回答出问 (3)王平告知乘客他必须将老人送到医院， 题，感到害羞；老师鼓励了他。 所有乘客都同意。 (3)下课后很多同学对他微笑，并主动提供 (4)医生及时挽救了老人的生命。 帮助，与他交朋友。 (5)你认为… (4)你认为… 参考词汇：呼救shout for help 参考词汇：口音accent 心脏病a heart problem 要求： 要求：(1)词数：80~100个。 (1)词数：80~100个： (2)题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。 (2)信的格式和开头已给出，不计入总词数； (3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 (3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 The Story of Wang Ping Dear Tony, At 9:00 am yesterday,Wang Ping How are you?I am writing to tell was driving the bus along the road when you something in my class. he Last Monday, I am looking forward to your letter. Yours, Li Hua ·221 沙鹰击道道清中考冲关模拟分类英语 中中居 13.(2024南开二模) 14.(2024部分区二模) 假如你是李华，请根据以下提示，给你的笔 假如你是李华，请根据以下提示，给你的笔 友Tony用英文写一封邮件，向他讲述一 友David用英文写一封邮件，向他讲述你 个发生在海河岸边的感人故事。 所看到的一个感人故事。 (1)上周日晚上，你在海河边散步，当时游 (1)一个下雪天，李华去超市购物。 客很多。 (2)看见一位老人在超市旁卖菜。 (2)你发现一个小女孩在哭，得知她与父母 (3)超市老板出来，想要赶走老人。 走散了。 (4)一位叔叔过来买下了所有蔬菜。 (3)你一边安慰她，一边打电话报警。 (5)你认为… (4)警察最终找到了她的父母 参考词汇：老板boss (5)她的父母非常感谢你，你认为 要求： 参考词汇：安慰comfort (1)词数：80~100个。 要求： (2)开头和结尾已给出，不计人总词数。 (1)词数：80~100个。 (3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 (2)邮件的开头和结尾部分已给出，不计人 Dear David, 总词数。 How is everything going?I'd like to (3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 tell you a moving story I saw a few days Dear Tony, ago. How are you?I'd like to tell you a On a snowy day, story that happened by the Haihe River. Last Sunday evening, Do you have a story to share?Hope Do you have a story to share? to hear from you. Looking forward to your reply! Yours, Yours, Li Hua Li Hua ·222·84.Finally【解析】句意：最后，微笑和大笑对身体 很好。根据“First..Second..Third.”及首字母 F可知此处用Finally表示“最后”。故填 Finally. 85.stay【解析】句意：你会发现长时间保持悲伤是 很困难的！根据“for very long”可知此处指长时 间保持悲伤，stay“保持，停留”。故填stay。 ()76.protect 77.easy 78.search 79.anything 80.until 81.cover 82.grew 83.animals 84.farmers 85.larger 第五部分新题练兵 (-)76.dropped 77.down 78.cold 79.kept 80.came 81.experiences 82.study 83.information 84.impossible 85.flying ()76.cheap 77.provide 78.over 79.need 80.photo/picture 81.card 82.information 83.bought 84.full 85.abroad ()76.fell 77.pretty 78.or 79.picked 80.die 81.shines 82.again 83.unusual 84.turns 85.spread ()76.danger 77.among 78.elephants 79.greatly 80.situation 81.themselves 82.study 83.outside 84.provide 85.peace (五)【主题及语篇类型】本文主题为人与自然，语篇 类型为记叙文。文章主要介绍了主人公Robert Colangelo和其他科学家是如何建立和完善室内农 场的。 76.heavy【解析】句意：一场猛烈的暴风雪席卷了 美国。heavy可放在雨、雪前表示“猛烈的”。故 填heavy。 77.beside/by【解析】句意：然而Robert Colangelo 镇定地站在他的“农场”旁边。beside/by“在… 旁边”。故填beside/by。 78.weather【解析】句意：他一点也不担心糟糕的 天气。根据“A heavy snowstorm hit the United States..”可知天气糟糕。故填weather。 T9.spent【解析】句意：Robert Colangelo花费 五年的时间把农场建起来·sb.spend time doing sth.“某人花费时间做某事”。根据首字母 s和setting可知此处填“花费”。整篇文章时态 ·3 为一般过去时。故填spent。. 80.traditional【解析】句意：不像那些长在传统农 场上的蔬莱，这里的蔬莱位于八米高的架子上。 根据句意可知，是新型农场和传统农场作比较。 故填traditional。. 81.rainy【解析】句意：无论是否下雨、下雪，我们都 可以在这里种植很多蔬莱！根据“He was not worried about the terrible weather at all.”可知 Robert Colangelo不担心雨或雪等糟糕天气。故 填rainy。 82.difficult【解析】句意：那将很难养活每个人。 根据“It's十adj.十to do sth.”结构可知此空应填 形容词。根据上文所提的人口数增多以及干旱 与洪水发生得更频繁可知，粮食产量减少，所以 养活每个人是“困难的”。故填difficult。 83.solve【解析】句意：所以我们可以在室内种植食 物来解决这个问题。solve the problem“解决问 题”。故填solve。 84.changed【解析】句意：在新泽西，一位农业教授 把一个旧工厂变成了一个大农场。change. into..“把…变成…”。故填changed. 85.improve【解析】句意：在Green Sense,他仍然 在务力地改进他的农场。improve“改进；改善”。 根据首字母ⅰ及后文和中国实验室研究超级种子 可知，Robert Colangelo仍然在努力改进他的农 场。故填improve。 专题8书面表达 第二部分教材寻根 1.范文 Last Saturday,Tony went to the zoo with his friends.Tony was very excited to see the pandas.They were so cute that he couldn't helping taking lots of photos.However,he is sad to think of pandas and other animals in danger. On his way home,he saw a boy telling people the importance of protecting animals with his mother.At last lots of people joined in.They wanted to save the animals in danger. In my opinion,animals are our friends.We should get on well with them.We are supposed to give them enough food and a safe place to live. Stop killing!They are also the owner of nature. 2.范文 As we all know,it is necessary for teenagers to have the healthy way of life. Lingling is my classmate.She often catches a cold.She would like to be in excellent condition. Here are some suggestions. First,have enough food.Remember to eat enough fruit and vegetables.But eat less fast food.Second,walk at least 10,000 steps every day.You'd better get off the sofa!Third,get eight hours'sleep at night.Don't stay up late! Finally,don't worry.If you are sad,please talk to your parents and friends.They can help you. In a word,a healthy life can make you strong and clever.Please make an effort to do exercise. You will be in good health day by day. 3.范文 Tianjin is a beautiful city with a long history.Our city has become richer and people feel happier.Recently,all of us are talking about how to be civilised students in our school. We should be polite to our parents and help them do more housework at home.At school,we should respect our teachers,get on well with our classmates and study hard.We should also obey traffic rules.When the traffic lights are red,we should stop.When we wait for a bus,we should wait in line.Don't throw litter or spit in public. And we'd better not talk or laugh loudly in public places.We should never say dirty words.Be friendly to others and always ready to help the people in need.In my opinion,if everyone behaves well,our city will be more beautiful and more attractive. Let's join together to be civilised students! ·37 4.范文 Dear Tom, How are you?I have a wonderful experience to share with you. Last Tuesday,I took part in the labour activities which were very meaningful to us. First of all,we came to the field and saw many different kinds of fruits.They were so lovely that we couldn't wait to taste them.After that,the farmers gave a warm welcome to all of us.What's more,they taught us how to grow corn.It's a necessary skill that we need to learn. And then,we picked some vegetables together in the field.With them,we cooked delicious lunch by ourselves. As a student,it's important to understand the value of labour,I think these labour activities not only develop our skills but also bring us pleasure.In my opinion,we should depend on ourselves to create a better life for everyone around us. Please tell me something about you and your school life. Yours, Li Hua 5.范文 Dear Ben, I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble getting used to the life in middle school. In your letter you said that you always felt lonely because of having few friends.I think it is a good choice to join some clubs in your school.In this way you can make more friends who share the same interest with you.Besides,you'd better be friendly to others.Smile at others and you are sure to get a smile in return.On the other hand, you found it difficult to remember English words.Reading more English stories and news can help you learn English words in a practical way.In addition,if you can develop a habit of keeping an English diary every day,it will be easier for you to remember more words. I hope you will find these suggestions useful. Yours, Li Hua 第三部分模拟演练 1.范文 Last Friday,my classmate Wang Hong felt quite sleepy while we were having an English lesson.After talking with her,Mr Zhang knew that she had a bad cold.Unluckily,Mr Zhang had an accident when he was on his way to buy the medicine for Wang Hong.Even worse,he broke his left leg and had to be in hospital.Wang Hong went to see him,feeling moved and sad. However,Mr Zhang told her not to worry.And the whole class wrote a thank-you letter to wish our teacher to get well soon. I am really moved by what Mr Zhang did.In my opinion,he is such a loving teacher who not only teaches us knowledge but also cares about us.Furthermore,he helps us to know that everyone can make the world a little warmer if we want to. 2.范文 Last Friday,a kind of activity called Festivals in China was held in our school English Club.Quite a lot of students took an active part in it.Besides,we also invited two foreign students who are studying in Tianjin to take part in this activity because they have great interest in Chinese culture.Our history teacher introduced a few different festivals to us,including their origins, backgrounds and customs.Most importantly,we can experience traditional Chinese culture on our own. For example,some of the students learned to make paper cuttings as well as lanterns,others learned to make dumplings and so on. I believe this activity is so meaningful that ·38 everyone can have a better understanding of China through this activity.As students,we will study hard at all subjects in order to spread more Chinese culture to the world in the future. 范文 Dear Kevin, How are you?I'd like to share a story with you. Last Saturday,my classmate Wang Liang was patting the basketball on the street while he was walking past a shelf with lots of flower pots. Unfortunately,the basketball flew towards a pot so hard that the pot was broken into pieces.He stood there and thought about what to do for a moment.Then he put some money and a slip of paper under the pot which he broke just now.He apologised to the owner and left his mobile phone number. I'm deeply touched by what he has done.I think he was honest and brave enough to pay for his action.He sets such a good example that we should learn from him.If everyone takes a simple step,our society will be better and better. Do you have a story to tell?Hope to hear from you. Yours, Li Hua 范文 The story of Xiaochen On one evening last winter,it snowed heavily.After school,Xiaochen rode bike home. On his way home,he noticed a driver was in trouble.The driver's car couldn't move.When Xiaochen saw this,he went up to help the driver push the car at once.However,the car was so heavy that it still couldn't move.Xiaochen didn't give up.At last,they succeeded in moving the car with the help of the police. The driver was so moved that he thanked Xiaochen and the police.Xiaochen was titled "Good Person of Hexi"because of his kindness. We are so proud of him.What a moving picture! It's kind of him to help people in need.In my opinion,we should learn from him to help others when they are in trouble. 5.范文 Dear Peter, How are you?I have a moving story to tell you. One morning,three boys went to school on foot as usual.Suddenly,they saw a black car overturn on the other side of the road when crossing the road.Soon the black car began smoking.Thinking it was very dangerous for the driver,they ran to the black car as fast as they could.However,the driver couldn't come out of the car.The three boys tried their best to open the door of the car.As a result,the driver was saved.Luckily,he was safe.At the same time, some people came to help as well.The three boys left silently. From my point of view,we are supposed to learn from the three boys.As a teenager,I hope I can join them.It's our duty to help others when they need. Do you have a story to tell?Hope to hear from you. Yours, Li Hua 6.范文 Dear friends, As students,we should always keep safety in mind.But how can we keep safe? First,we must call the police when we are in danger.Second,we should make friends carefully.We'd better not talk with strangers casually.Also,if we go online,we shouldn't tell others about our personal information easily. Besides,we should keep in touch with parents when we are at home alone.What's more,to ·39 avoid an accident,we should pay attention to keeping safe at school as well.Last but not least, we may learn about what to do during an earthquake. That's all.Thank you. .范文 Last week,my parents went away on business.I thought I could have some perfect days because there was nobody to control me. On the first day,I began to play games as soon as I got home.I had some snacks instead of having dinner.I played so happily that I forgot the time.I didn't go to bed until it was too late. The next day,I hurried to school without having breakfast,but I was still late.When the teacher asked for my homework,I couldn't hand it in.What's more,I couldn't play with my classmates because of hunger. In the evening,I decided to cook some food. Unfortunately,I not only burnt the rice,but also cut my finger.How stupid I was!I began to miss my parents. Now I understand that taking care of children isn't easy for parents.We should thank them and obey their orders. ,范文 With the success of a movie,the topic of losing weight in a healthy way becomes hot again.During the interview,the main role,gives us some advice. First of all,we should learn to control our diet and it's a good idea to eat some low-fat food, like fish,fruit and vegetables.Besides,we had better drink more water.She advises us to drink at least eight cups of water so that we won't feel hungry easily.And remember the ways of exercise we choose must be fit for us,such as running,swimming and doing yoga.Also,don't forget to plan our time properly,so we can get into good living habits.Above all,it's necessary that we have a strong will to keep doing it. As far as I'm concerned,we can achieve success as long as we stick to the end.Losing weight is certainly good for our health,but remember to do it in a scientific way and be fit or healthy is better than being slim. 9.范文 Last month,I took part in the space club activities held by the Science and Technology Museum on Space Day of China.In the Science and Technology Museum,first of all,I heard some stories about astronauts and learned the scientific spirit.Next,I did some physics experiments and increased my knowledge of science.Finally,it made me more interested in space travel by visiting the exhibition. I think we should take part in more of these activities.These activities can keep our thirst for space knowledge alive and improve our science as well. 10.范文 A touching story Last Tuesday night,my classmate Zhang Peng noticed that the factory near his house was on fire.Immediately,he called the police for help and reported the exact address of the factory. After that,he shouted so loudly that the people who lived near the factory could leave as quickly as possible.A few minutes later,the firefighters arrived and they put out the fire successfully.The next day,the firefighters came to our school in order to praise Zhang Peng. They also gave him some presents because of his brave actions. From my point of view,I am deeply touched by what Zhang Peng has done.He is such a brave and wise boy that we should learn from him.If everyone cares about others,our whole society will be better and better. ·40 1.范文 Dear Tony, How are you?I am writing to tell you something in my class. Last Monday,a new student named Wang Ming came to my class,who was tall and wore a pair of glasses.In class,when he answered questions,his accent made some students laugh. As a result,he felt so shy that he couldn't answer the questions well.The teacher wasn't angry.Instead,he encouraged him not to be nervous.After class,some students smiled at him and offered to help him.Soon,we became good friends. In my opinion,it isn't right to laugh at the students who are in trouble.On the contrary,we should not only respect other students all the time but also encourage each other to make progress together.What's more,we should get on well with each other in order to make our class better. I am looking forward to your letter. Yours, Li Hua 2.范文 The Story of Wang Ping At 9:00 am yesterday,Wang Ping was driving the bus along the road when he found an old man lying on the side of the road.A woman next to him was shouting for help.Wang Ping stopped the bus without thinking twice and got out.He knew that the old man had a heart problem.He told the passengers that he must take the old man to the hospital immediately.To his surprise,all the passengers agreed with him. Thanks to Wang Ping and other good people, the old man was saved by the doctors in time. As far as I'm concerned,Wang Ping,a young driver,has set a good example for us.We are supposed to learn from them and help others if necessary. 13.范文 Dear Tony, How are you?I'd like to tell you a story that happened by the Haihe River. Last Sunday evening,I took a walk with our parents by the sea.There were many tourists there.At that time,I found a little girl crying loudly because she was separated from her parents.So I comforted her and called the police.The police finally found her parents.Her parents thanked me very much.From my point of view,I am very happy to help the little girl. We should do what we can to help those people in need.We should pass love.As the old saying goes,give someone a rose and leave a lingering fragrance in your hand. Do you have a story to share?Hope to hear from you. Yours, Li Hua 【解析】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封邮件； ②时态：以一般过去时为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏， 适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，写作意图开头已给出，写作时可直接描 写发生在海河岸边的感人故事。 第二步，具体阐述写作内容，主要围绕“时间”“地 点”以及“具体的故事”展开，适当补充，丰富 细节。 第三步，书写结语，表达感受和期望。 [亮点词江] ①take a walk with sb.和某人一起散步 ②by the sea在海边 ③at that time在那时 ④be separated from与…分离 ⑤from my point of view在我看来 ⑥as the old saying goes正如谚语所说 41 [高分句型] DAt that time,I found a little girl crying loudly because she was separated from her parents. (because引导的原因状语从句) 2We should do what we can to help those people in need..(what引导的宾语从句) 3As the old saying goes,give someone a rose and leave a lingering fragrance in your hand. 使句) 14.范文 Dear David, How is everything going?I'd like t tell you a moving story I saw a few days ago. On a snowy day,Li Hua went shopping in the supermarket.He saw an old man selling vegetables by the supermarket.At that time,the supermarket boss came out and wanted to drive away the old man.At this time,an uncle came and bought all the vegetables.I think this uncle is warm-hearted and helpful.He is a great man. We should learn from him. Do you have a story to share?Looking forward to your reply! Yours, Li Hua 15.范文 Dear Tony, Knowing that you're interested in traditional Chinese culture,I'd like to introduce an interesting festival to you. The Dragon Boat Festival is celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth lunar month.It's one of the most important festivals in China and there are many traditions.For example,we always eat zongzi which is a kind of sticky rice dumplings in order to remember the great poet Qu Yuan. People in the north of China like sweet zongzi while people in the south like salty ones.As for me,the most interesting event is the dragon boat race.It's an exciting match that stands for teamwork and thousands of people stand on both sides of the Haihe River,cheering loudly. In a word,the Dragon Boat Festival is meaningful because it contains rich history and culture.Therefore,it's necessary that we protect and pass on our traditional culture. Hope you'll join in next time you come to Tianjin. Love, Li Hua 第四部分中考试水 1.范文 Li Hua,a student of our school,went to Gansu to take part in the cultural exchange activities.I'm glad to share his experiences with all of you. First of all,he introduced the history and places of interest of Tianjin to the local students. Secondly,he shared his ways of learning with them.Moreover,he played the piano.In this way, he made friends with many students there and kept in touch with them in his spare time. In my opinion,I think it's an unusual experience.It's necessary for us to take part in all kinds of activities.We can not only gain some useful cultural knowledge but also make friends with others.Taking part in activities is a good way to open our mind and improve our skills. 【解析】汇总体分析] ①体裁：本文是一篇记叙文； ②时态和人称：时态为一般过去时；人称为第三 人称： ③提示：在写作时应紧接文章开头继续写作，根据 内容提示讲述李华假期的经历并发表自己的看法。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题，总领全文； 第二步，具体讲述李华的交流学习经历； 第三步，发表自己的感想。 [亮点河汇] ①take part in参加 ·42 ②places of interest名胜古迹 ③make friends with sb.和某人交朋友 ④keep in touch with sb..和某人保持联系 [高分句型] DIt's necessary for us to take part in all kinds of activities.(it作形式主语的句式) 2 We can not only gain some useful cultural knowledge but also make friends with others. (not only..but also.,句式，意为“不仅…而 且…”) 2.范文 Dear Tom, How are you?I have a moving story to tell you. Wang Hong is my classmate.She hurt her left leg in an accident two weeks ago.It was difficult for her to go up and down the stairs,but she still wanted to go to school.The headmaster decided to move our classroom from the fourth floor to the first floor after he had known it. Wang Hong is very grateful to the headmaster. As her classmates,we should also help her.Some helped her buy lunch,and others helped her to clean up.She is moved happy.I think students should help each other and make progress together. Please tell me something interesting about you and your classmates. Yours, Li Hua 【解析】汇总体分析] ①体裁：本文是一篇记录学校生活的信件； ②时态和人称：时态为一般过去时；人称为第三 人称： ③提示：在写作时应紧接文章开头继续写作，根 据内容提示讲述王红的经历并发表自己的 看法。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题，介绍王红受伤的事件； 第二步，具体讲述学校和同学们对王红的帮助并 发表自己的感想： 第三步，期待收到对方的回复。 [亮点词汇] ①decide to do sth.决定做某事 ②be grateful to sb.感激某人 ③help sb.(to)do sth.帮助某人做某事 ④make progress取得进步 [高分句型] DIt was difficult for her to go up and down the stairs,but she still wanted to go to school.(it 形式主语的句式，句中有表转折的连词but) 2I think students should help each other and make progress together.(and表示顺接，使句子更 加流畅) 3.范文 Dear David, How are you?I'd like to share a story with you. Last Friday,my classmate Wang Hong did a good deed on her way home.It impressed me a lot. The weather was very bad that day.It was blowing hard.Suddenly,a tree was blown down and blocked the way.Many cars were stopped by the tree.When Wang Hong saw what had happened,she picked up the branches quickly. After that,she tried to move the trunk. However,it was so heavy that she couldn't move it.With the help of others,she moved it away successfully. In my opinion,Wang Hong set a good example for us.We should learn from her and always ready to help others. Do you have a story to tell?Hope to hear from you. Yours, Li Hua 【解析[总体分析] ①体裁：本文是一篇记录好人好事的记叙文； ②时态和人称：时态为一般过去时；人称为第三 ·43 人称： ③提示：在写作时应紧接文章开头继续写作，根 据内容提示讲述王红的经历并发表自己的 看法。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题，介绍天气情况和王红的见闻； 第二步，具体讲述针对道路被封堵的事件，王红和 大家采取的措施； 第三步，发表自己的看法。 [亮点词汇] ①pick up捡起 ②try to do sth.尽力做某事 ③with the help of sb.在某人的帮助下 ④set a good example树立好榜样 [高分句型] DHowever,it was so heavy that she couldn't move it,(however用于句首表示语意的转折； so…that…句式，意为“如此…以至于…”) 2 We should learn from her and always ready to help others.(and表示颅接，使句子更加流畅) 4.范文 Dear Peter, How is everything going?I'd like to tell you a story about my classmate,Wang Liang. On a rainy day,Wang Liang saw a group of people gathering on the road.He went over and saw an old lady lying on the ground.He then learnt that the old lady fell down suddenly when she was crossing the road.He crouched down to hold an umbrella for the old lady.When the ambulance arrived,he left quietly. I think Wang Liang is a good student who helps others.We should learn from him. Do you have a story to share?Looking forward to your reply! Yours, Li Hua 【解析】工总体分析] ①体栽：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：时态为一般过去时；人称为第三人称： ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏给 出的五个要，点提示，写邮件向笔友Peter讲述同学 王亮的感人故事。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题，介绍同学王亮的故事； 第二步，具体讲述这个感人故事； 第三步，发表自己的感想； 第四步，期望收到对方回复。 [亮点词汇] ①tell sb..sth.告诉某人某事 ②go over走过去 ③see sb.doing sth.看到某人正在做某事 ④learn from sb.向某人学习 [高分句型] DWhen the ambulance arrived,he left quietly. (when引导时间状语从句) 2I think Wang Liang is a good student who helps others..(think后面接的是省略that的宾语 从句：who引导定语从句) 5.范文 Dear Peter, It is two weeks since you wrote to me.I'm writing to tell you a story about my classmate Wang Hong. Last Thursday,Wang Hong saw an elderly blind man wandering around the street corner on her way home.Wang Hong offered to help him cross the road after communicating with the old man.When they crossed the road,the drivers on the road stopped their cars and waited patiently.Wang Hong took the old man across the road and said goodbye to him. I think Wang Hong is really a very warm-hearted and kind girl.I should learn from her and try my best to help others. What do you think of the story?Waiting for your reply! Yours, Li Hua 【解析[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：以一般过去时为主； 4 ③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行 写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图； 第二步，具体介绍王红所做的好事： 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①on one's way home在某人回家的路上 ②offer to do sth.主动提出做某事 ③communicate with沟通 ④learn from sb.向某人学习 [高分句型] When they crossed the road,the drivers on the road stopped their cars and waited patiently. (when引导时间状语从句) 2I think Wang Hong is really a very warm- hearted and kind girl.(省略that的宾语从句) 第五部分新题练兵 1.范文 Two weeks ago,Li Ming,one of my classmates,hurt his legs while he was playing football.His legs hurt too badly to walk,so he had to be in hospital.What's worse,Li Ming's family was so poor that they couldn't afford the cost.After hearing this,our monitor Li Hua decided to call on our classmates to raise money to help Li Ming.Each of us took an active part in giving money.Soon Li Hua raised enough money. When he gave the money to Li Ming's parents, they were moved a lot. I believe that the world is what you think it is.If we are always ready to help others,our world will surely become more beautiful! 2.范文 Dear Peter, How is everything going?I have a heartwarming story to share with you about one of my classmates,Wang Hong. Last Saturday morning,Wang Hong was jogging along the river when she noticed a stray cat.Feeling sorry for it,Wang Hong decided to buy some cat food to feed it.So she went into the nearby pet hospital.After the doctor knew exactly what she wanted,he kindly gave Wang Hong a bag of cat food for free.Wang Hong bowed to thank the doctor and left. As far as I'm concerned,both Wang Hong and the doctor are warm-hearted.What they did brings warmth.It's heartwarming to see such kindness in our everyday life. Do you have a story to share?Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours, Li Hua 3.范文 Hello,everyone!I'm a student in Class 2, Grade 9.I am 15 years old.I like doing sports. But I used to hate doing sports.It was my mother who changed me. Once I spent too much time watching TV and playing computer games.So my grades were worse and worse.My mother noticed my changes.She had a long conversation with me. She said that spending too much time on them was bad for my eyes.She advised me to relax by listening to music and doing sports.She asked me to run for an hour in the morning every day.A few days later,I found running could make me healthy and happy.I could do everything better. In my opinion,when you meet some difficulties,you can share them with your parents or teachers.They will give you some useful advice. 【解析】汇总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文： ②时态：以一般现在时和一般过去时为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏， 造适当增加细节以完整表述内容。 [写作步聚] 第一步，介绍自己的个人信息； 45 第二步，分享自己曾经遇到的问题，以及解决的 方法： 第三步，提出自己的建议。 [亮点词汇] ①used to do sth.过去常常做某事 ②spend time doing sth.花费时间做某事 ③be bad for对…有坏处 [高分句型] DShe said that spending too much time on them was bad for my eyes.(that引导宾语从句，动名词 作主语) She asked me to run for an hour in the morning every day,(动词不定式作宾补) 4.范文 Dear Mike, How are you doing recently? Last month,our school had a charity sale.Two days before the sale,we handed out notices to make our sale known by others.Then we made different things like food and toys.It was so much fun!When everything was ready,we started to sell the things. To our surprise,all the things were sold out in a short time!At last,we gave away the money we made to Children's Home. I think it was a meaningful experience. Making things helps develop our life skills. Meanwhile,we can learn how to communicate with others well.Last but not least,helping people makes us happy. What about you school life?Would you like to visit Tianjin in July?I'm looking forward to spending summer holiday with you together. Yours, Li Hua 5.范文 How to be a better teenager Hello,everyone!Today I'd like to share my ideas about how to be a better teenager. First of all,we should develop healthy living habits.We can run for half an hour every day to