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专题08 书面表达
体裁1 记叙文
Passage 01
(24-25七年级上·河北廊坊·期中)假如你是王林,刚来到一个新的班集体,英语课上老师要求同学们用英文作自我介绍。请你根据提示中的内容,用英语写一篇自我介绍。
提示:
About meAge: 12
Family: father, mother, brother, me
Pet: a duck
Favourite food: noodles
Hobby: play the piano
注意:(1)须包含所有提示内容,可适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名;
(3)词数60左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
My name is Wang Lin.____________________________________________________________________
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【答案】例文
My name is Wang Lin. I am 12 years old. There are four people in my family: my father, my mother, my brother, and me. We also have a pet duck. We all love it very much. My favorite food is noodles. I enjoy playing the piano during my free time. I am looking forward to getting to know all of you and making new friends in this class. Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:一般现在时;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生注意不要遗漏要点,并适当添加细节,突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍个人的基本信息;
第二步,表达交朋友的期望。
[亮点词汇]
①favorite food最爱的食物
②enjoy doing喜欢做
③looking forward to期望
[高分句型]
①There are four people in my family: my father, my mother, my brother, and me.(there be句型)
②I am looking forward to getting to know all of you and making new friends in this class.(并列结构)
Passage 02
(24-25七年级上·河北承德·期中)假如你是Mary,请你根据表格的内容简单介绍你的好朋友李梅。60词左右。
English name
Joan
Favorite food
Vegetables and fruit
country
China
Favorite sport
tennis
Age
14
Hobby
Play the guitar
Class
Class 6, Grade 7
…
要求:1. 语言流畅,条理清晰,字迹工整;
2. 短文必须包括表格中的全部内容,可适当发挥;
3. 不少于 60词。
Hello! My name is Mary. __________________________________________________________________
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【答案】例文
Hello, my name is Mary. Li Mei is my good friend. Now let me tell you something about her.
She is a cute girl from China. Her English name is Joan. She is a student and she is 14 years old now. She is in No. 1 Middle School. She is in Class 6, Grade 7. Her favourite colour is green. She likes eating fruit, carrots and tomatoes very much . She thinks they are healthy food. Her favourite sport is tennis. She often plays it with her classmates after school. She also likes playing the guitar in the school band because it is interesting and easy for her.
This is my friend Li Mei. Would you like to make friends with her?
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生注意不要遗漏要点,并注意适当添加细节,突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。要介绍好朋友李梅;
第二步,分别从好友的名字,国籍,学校,班级,年龄和爱好等方面去叙述。
[亮点词汇]
①favourite colour最爱的颜色
②healthy food健康的食物
[高分句型]
①She also likes playing the guitar in the school band because it is interesting and easy for her.(“because”引导原因状语从句)
Passage 03
(24-25七年级上·河北邢台·期中)请根据下面表格中的信息,写一段话介绍你的朋友李华的情况。
姓名
李华
年龄
十三
学校
第二中学
班级
七年级 2班
外貌
圆脸 (round face)、大眼睛……
性格
友善的
业余爱好
打篮球
……
……
注意事项:
(1)必须包含所给的提示信息,并适当发挥;
(2)意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
(3)请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。词数60左右。
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【答案】例文:
Li Hua is my good friend. Her/His first name is Hua and her/his last name is Li. She/He is 13 years old. She/He is in No.2 Middle School. She/He is in Class Two, Grade Seven. She/He is kind. She/He is good at all her/his subjects. She/He has a round face and big eyes. She/He has short hair. She/He likes to wear a green coat. She/He likes playing basketball. We help each other. I’m happy to be together with her/him.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏表格中信息提示的内容,适当增加细节,并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。直接说明要向介绍朋友李华;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。重点介绍了李华的年龄、学校、班级、外貌、性格、业余爱好等;
第三步,书写结语。谈谈你对李华的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①kind友善的
②be good at擅长
③be happy to do sth.很高兴做某事
[高分句型]
①Her/His first name is Hua and her/his last name is Li. (并列句)
②I’m happy to be together with her/him. (be adj. to do sth.“做某事怎么样”)
Passage 04
(24-25七年级上·河北唐山·期中)假如你叫李华,你刚刚入学到了一所新学校,请根据以下提示,简单介绍自己,可以适当发挥。
提示:
Name
LiHua
Age
13
Country
the UK
Telephone Number
13833310592
Family members
father (farmer), mother (teacher), sister (student),用1—2句话描述家人的喜好。
My room
nice and tidy,1—2句话描述物品位置。
要求:(1)短文必须包括提示信息,可适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;
(3)词数60个左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Hello! I am Li Hua._________________________________________________________________________
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【答案】例文
Hello! I am Li Hua. I am 13 years old and I come from the UK. My telephone number is 13833310592. There are four people in my family: my father, my mother, my sister, and me. My father is a farmer and he loves gardening. My mother is a teacher and she enjoys reading books. My sister is a student who likes playing the piano. I have a nice and tidy room. There is a bed near the window, and a desk with a computer on it.
I love my new school and hope to make many friends here.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:一般现在时;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生注意不要遗漏要点,并适当添加细节,突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍个人基本信息;
第二步,介绍家庭成员和房间。
[亮点词汇]
①come from来自
②enjoys reading books喜欢读书
③make many friends交许多朋友
[高分句型]
①My sister is a student who likes playing the piano.(定语从句)
②There is a bed near the window, and a desk with a computer on it. (there be句型)
Passage 05
(24-25七年级上·河北廊坊·期中)新学期开始了,相信同学们都交到了新朋友。请根据下面表格中的信息,以 “My New Friend” 为题写一篇英语短文向大家介绍你的新朋友。可以适当拓展,词数80个左右。
要求:文中不得出现真实的人名,班级,校名等相关信息。
Name
Peter Brown
Age
13
Country
the UK
Family
big family
Pet
a dog
Favourite food
hot pot
Hobby
like music
My New Friend
Hi, everyone! I have a new friend.___________________________________________________________
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【答案】例文
My New Friend
Hi, everyone! I have a new friend. His name is Peter Brown and he is 13 years old. He comes from the UK.
Peter has a big family. There are six people in his family, including his grandparents, parents, his younger sister and him. They love and support each other. He also has a cute dog as a pet. His favourite food is hot pot. It tastes delicious. Besides, he likes music very much. He often listens to different kinds of music in his free time.
We have a great time together and I’m glad to have such a good friend.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已经给出,考生注意不要遗漏要点;注意适当发挥,完善表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍Peter Brown的基本信息;
第二步,介绍家庭情况及喜好;
第三步,总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①come from 来自
②different kinds of 不同种类的
③have a great time 玩得高兴
[高分句型]
We have a great time together and I’m glad to have such a good friend.(and连接的并列句)
体裁2 说明文
Passage 06
(24-25七年级上·河北石家庄·期中)请根据下面图示和提示问题写一篇英语短文介绍你的新学校。
提示:
(1) Where are the places?
(2) What’s your favourite place? Why?
要求:
(1)短文须包括两个提示要点,可适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名:
(3)词数70个左右(开头已给出。不计入总词数)。
This is my new school.
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【答案】例文
This is my new school. Let me tell you something about it.
First, after entering the school through the gate, you will see the teachers’ building. All the teachers work in this building. On the right, there is a dining hall. Students have lunch there, and the food is delicious. Also, there is a special dining hall for the teachers and other staff. On the left, there is a classroom building. Students have their lessons in it. All the classrooms are very modern, with smart boards, smart screens, and sound-controlled doors and windows. After going through the teachers’ building, you can see the library. It is the biggest and the most modern one in our city, and it is my favorite place because I learn a lot of knowledge there. After school, many students go there to read. Leaving the library, you will come to our science building. It is full of scientific and magical Chinese elements. Beside the science building is our sports field, where plenty of students go to play games and all kinds of ball games.
This is our new school. What about yours?
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示,并适当添加细节,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接短文开头;
第二步,介绍学校的设施;
第三步,介绍你最喜欢的地方及原因。
[亮点词汇]
①let sb. do sth.让某人做某事
②a lot of许多
③be full of充满……
④plenty of很多
[高分句型]
①Also, there is a special dining hall for the teachers and other staff.(there be句型)
②It is the biggest and the most modern one in our city, and it is my favorite place because I learn a lot of knowledge there(because引导的原因状语从句)
Passage 07
(24-25七年级上·河北廊坊·期中)学校是我们学习的天地,也是我们成长的乐园。我们每天在校园里学习和生活。请你以“My school”为题,并根据下面的表格内容用英语写一篇短文介绍一下自己的学校。
学校
大、漂亮、干净
学 校 的 建 筑 物 及 位置
两座教学楼,一个图书馆,一个运动场,一个体育馆,一个学校大厅,一个音乐厅,一座科学楼,一座艺术大楼,一个食堂……
图书馆在体育馆的后面,食堂在科学楼的前面,艺术大楼在运动场的旁边……
老师和同学
善良友好、互相帮助
注意:
(1) 短文须包含表格中的所有信息,可适当发挥;
(2) 文中不得出现真实的校名和人名;
(3) 词数60个左右。
My school
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【答案】例文
My school
My school is very big, beautiful and clean. There are many buildings in my school, such as two classroom buildings, a library, a sports field, a gym, a school hall, a music hall, a science building, an art building and a dining hall. The library is behind the gym. The dining hall is in front of the science building. The art building is next to the sports field.
My school life is very interesting. At school, I can do many interesting activities. My teachers and classmates are very kind and friendly. We love and help each other. I am very happy here every day.
I like my school very much.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,简要交代学校的干净和漂亮;
第二步,详细介绍学校的建筑及位置;
第三步,介绍学校的老师和同学。
[亮点词汇]
①friendly友好的
②in front of在……前面
③such as例如
[高分句型]
There are many buildings in my school, such as two classroom buildings, a library, a sports field, a gym, a school hall, a music hall, a science building, an art building and a dining hall.(there be句型)
体裁3 应用文
Passage 08
(24-25七年级上·河北石家庄·期中)假如你是李明,你的英国笔友Peter给你写信介绍了他的新学校,并询问你的初中生活情况,请你根据以下提示给他写一封回信。
提示:
(1)What’s your new school like? What places are there in your school?
(2)What’s your favourite place? And why do you like it?
(3)What’s your favourite subject? And why?
要求:
(1)短文必须包括所有提示要点,可适当发挥;
(2)短文中不得涉及真实的人名、校名和地名;
(3)60词左右。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
Thanks for your last letter. Your new school sounds nice. I’m happy to tell you my new school life.
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Yours,
Li Ming
【答案】范文
Dear Peter,
Thanks for your last letter. Your new school sounds nice. I’m happy to tell you my new school life.
My new school is big and beautiful.There is a big playground, a library, a dining hall and some teaching buildings in it. My favorite place is the library because I can read many kinds of books there. I like playing basketball with my friends on the playground. My favorite subject is English because it’s interesting. I have a good time at my new school.
Yours,
Li Ming
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为一般现在时;
③提示:根据所给提示完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己的新学校以及学校里有什么地方;
第二步,介绍自己最喜欢的地方及原因;
第三步,介绍自己最喜欢的科目及原因。
[亮点词汇]
①kinds of各种各样的
②like doing sth.喜欢做某事
③have a good time玩得开心
[高分句型]
①There is a big playground, a library, a dining hall and some teaching buildings in it. (There be句型)
②My favorite place is the library because I can read many kinds of books there. (原因状语从句)
Passage 09
(24-25七年级上·河北唐山·期中)假设你是李华,请写一封电子邮件给你的美国朋友 Lisa,介绍自己的情况。请根据下面提示和要求回复邮件。
提示:
1. Your age, your class, your school.
2. Your hobby and your favourite food and drinks.
3. Your family members.
要求:
1. 必须包含提示中的所有信息,可适当补充,以使行文连贯;
2. 70词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 不得出现真实姓名、校名。
Dear Lisa,
I’m glad to receive your email. I want to say something about myself._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
How about you?
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文:
Dear Lisa,
I’m glad to receive your email. I want to say something about myself. I am 12 years old. I am in Class 8, Grade 7 at Sunshine Middle School. My school is very big and beautiful. I like it so much.
I like playing basketball. I often play basketball with friends on the playground after school. My favorite food is dumplings because they are delicious. I don’t like drinking any drinks. I like drinking tea.
I have a happy family. My parents and my sister both love me very much. My dad is a doctor. He works very hard. My mom is a teacher in my school. Her students all like her very much. My sister is in college.
How about you? Please tell me something about you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一封电子邮件;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己的个人信息以及爱好等;
第二步,介绍自己的家庭信息;
第三步,最后问对方的情况并结束文章。
[亮点词汇]
① play basketball打篮球
② after school放学后
③ work hard努力工作
[高分句型]
① My favorite food is dumplings because they are delicious.(because引导的原因状语从句)
② Please tell me something about you.(祈使句肯定形式)
Passage 10
(24-25七年级上·河北石家庄·期中)以“An e-mail to ________”为题给你的外国笔友写一封电子邮件,写一篇不少于60个词的短文。内容必须包含:
1. What’s your pen friend / pen pal’s name?
2. Tell him/her about your nationality (国籍), age and family.
3. Tell him/her about your school life and hobbies.
4. Ask him/her to write back to you.
注意:文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
An e-mail to ________
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【答案】例文:
An e-mail to Emily
Hi Emily,
My name is Li Hua. It’s so nice to meet you! I’m from China, and I’m 15 years old. I live with my parents and my little brother. We all get along very well.
I’m a student at a middle school. My favorite subjects are English and history. I like reading, playing basketball and listening to music. I’m also learning to play the piano.
I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon. Please tell me about yourself, your school and your hobbies.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容,适当增加细节,并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。直接说明要向笔友介绍自己;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。重点介绍自己的情况,包括个人信息和学校生活及爱好;
第三步,书写结语。表达希望能收到笔友的回信。
[亮点词汇]
①get along相处
②look forward to期待
[高分句型]
①I’m from China, and I’m 15 years old. (并列句)
②Please tell me about yourself, your school and your hobbies. (祈使句)
体裁1 记叙文
Passage 11
(24-25七年级上·河北石家庄·期中)假如你叫李华,你的家庭将要接待一名来自英国的留学生,请根据以下提示,简单介绍一下自己家庭的情况,可以适当发挥。
提示:
Name
Li Hua
Age
13
Telephone Number
13833310592
Family members
Father (doctor), mother (teacher), sister (student),并简单描述自己和家人的外貌性格和喜好。
My room
nice and tidy,并简单描述房间内物品位置。(in front of /across from/behind/between/next to...可做参考)
要求:(1)短文必须包括提示信息,可适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;
(3)词数70词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Hello! I am Li Hua._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】范文
Hello! I am Li Hua. I am 13 years old. My telephone number is 13833310592. There are four people in my family: my father, my mother, my sister, and me. My father is a doctor. My mother is a teacher and she enjoys reading books. My sister is a student who likes playing the piano. I have a nice and tidy room. There is a bed near the window, and a desk with a computer on it. I love my family and hope you can have a good time here.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:一般现在时;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生注意不要遗漏要点,并适当添加细节,突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍个人基本信息;
第二步,介绍家庭成员和房间。
[亮点词汇]
①come from来自
②enjoys reading books喜欢读书
[高分句型]
①My sister is a student who likes playing the piano.(定语从句)
②There is a bed near the window, and a desk with a computer on it.(there be句型)
Passage 12
(24-25七年级上·河北唐山·期中)假设你是李欣,请结合全家福介绍家人,提示词须都用上,可适当发挥,开头已给出,不计入总词数。60词左右。
Hi, I’m LiXin.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Hi, I’m LiXin. This is my family photo. Here’s my dad. He’s handsome and funny. He likes playing tennis and basketball. He plays it every week. Next to him is my mum. She’s beautiful and she always happy. She likes reading. The tall girl is me. I’m clever and I like playing the guitar. The old man is my grandpa. He is tall and he likes Chinese chess. The old woman is my grandma. She is kind. She has a pet cat. She likes flowers and plants.
We love and help each other.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示,并适当添加细节,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接短文开头,开篇点题;
第二步,详细介绍家庭成员的爱好和外貌;
第三步,表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①like doing sth.喜欢做某事
②Chinese chess中国象棋
③pet cat宠物猫
④each other彼此
[高分句型]
She’s beautiful and she always happy.(and连接的并列句)
体裁2 应用文
Passage 13
(24-25七年级上·河北唐山·期中)假如你是李华。下面是你的英国朋友Tony 给你发来电子邮件的部分内容,请你根据邮件内容,以李华的名义回复。
Dear Li Hua
How are you these days? I know you are studying in a new school. What is your school like? Do you have some new friends?
注意:
(1)回复邮件须回答所给邮件内容中的两个问题,可适当发挥。
(2)回复邮件中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
(3)词数50个左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Tony,
Thanks for your last e-mail. I’m fine. How about you?
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Welcome to my new school!
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Tony,
Thanks for your last e-mail. I’m fine. How about you?
My school is big and beautiful. I love it very much. There I have two new friends. There are Dick and Peter. They are friendly to me. Dick likes playing basketball and Peter is fond of playing soccer. I enjoy playing table tennis after school. We usually have a lot of fun when we’re together.
Welcome to my new school!
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据邮件内容,介绍自己的新学校和交友情况;注意适当发挥,完善表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表达问候;
第二步,介绍新学校怎样,以及自己的交友情况;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be friendly to 对……友好
②be fond of 喜欢
③have a lot of fun 玩得愉快
[高分句型]
Dick likes playing basketball and Peter is fond of playing soccer.(and连接的并列句)
Passage 14
(24-25七年级上·河北邢台·期中)假如你是李明,来自美国的Jack将作为“国际交换生”来你校学习,并且你家是他的寄宿家庭,请根据下面表格中的提示,给Jack写一封电子邮件介绍你自己和你的家庭情况,欢迎他的到来。
Name
Li Ming
Age
13
Class
Class 1, Grade 7
Hobby
play ping-pong
Family members
father, mother, sister
Father
doctor, tall, like Chinese chess
mother
English teacher, long black hair, friendly and kind
sister
6 years old, like music
要求:
(1)内容必须包含所有提示信息,可适当拓展;
(2)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名或联系方式等信息;
(3)词数不少于60词(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)
Dear Jack,
I’m happy to know that you’ll come to my school and my home soon. Now let me tell you about myself and my family first.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’m looking forward to your coming. See you soon!
Yours,
Li Ming
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Jack,
I’m happy to know that you’ll come to my school and my home soon. Now let me tell you about myself and my family first.
I’m Li Ming. I am 13 years old. I am in Class 1, Grade 7. I like sports and my favorite sport is ping-pong. I often play it with my classmates after class. There are four people in my family, my father, my mother, my sister and I. My father is a doctor. He is tall. He likes playing Chinese chess. My mother is an English teacher. She has long black hair and she is really friendly and kind. My sister is 6 years old. She is a lovely girl. She likes music a lot.
I’m looking forward to your coming. See you soon!
Yours,
Li Ming
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,写一封电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。简介自己的姓名,年龄等基本信息,引出重点介绍的内容;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容,自己的爱好和家庭信息等。
第三步,书写总结。表达情感,结尾。
[亮点词汇]
①After class下课后
②play Chinese chess下象棋
③long black hair 长黑发
[高分句型]
①I like sports and my favorite sport is ping-pong. (and连接的并列句)
②There are four people in my family, my father, my mother, my sister and I. (there be句型)
Passage 15
(24-25七年级上·河北石家庄·期中)假设你叫李娜,这是你的一张全家福。你收到了一封你的美国笔友Eric的电子邮件。请你结合所给图片,根据写作要求,用英语给他回封电子邮件,向他介绍一下你的家庭。
要求:
1. 文中须包含图中所有人物,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和地名;
3. 词数70左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Eric,
Here is a photo of my family. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Na
【答案】例文
Dear Eric,
Here is a photo of my family.
There are six people in my family. My grandparents are both sixty-eight years old. My father is a policeman. He is always busy. My mother is beautiful and has long hair. She is a nurse. The boy is my brother. He is only five years old. And the girl is me. I’m behind my mother.
I have a big family and I love my family.
Yours,
LiNa
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据所给提示完成写作,不能遗漏信息,以第三人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开头文章已给出,介绍自己的家庭照片;
第二步,介绍了图片中的所有家庭成员,并且描述了他们的关系和一些简单的性格特点;
第三步,最后表达对家人的喜欢。
[亮点词汇]
①both两者都
②beautiful漂亮的
③behind在……后面
[高分句型]
①There are six people in my family.(there be句型)
②I have a big family and I love my family.(and并列句)
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Passage 01
(2425七年级上·河北廊坊期中)假如你是王林,刚来到一个新的班集体,英语课上老师要求同学
们用英文作自我介绍。请你根据提示中的内容,用英语写一篇自我介绍。
提示:
About meAge:12
Family:father,mother,brother,me
Pet:a duck
Favourite food:noodles
Hobby:play the piano
注意:(1)须包含所有提示内容,可适当发挥:
(2)文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名:
(3)词数60左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
My name is Wang Lin.
Passage 02
(24-25七年级上河北承德期中)假如你是May,请你根据表格的内容简单介绍你的好朋友李梅。
60词左右。
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English name
Joan
Favorite food
Vegetables and fruit
country
China
Favorite sport
tennis
Age
14
Hobby
Play the guitar
Class
Class 6,Grade 7
要求:1,语言流畅,条理清晰,字迹工整
2短文必须包括表格中的全部内容,可适当发挥:
3.不少于60词。
Hello!My name is Mary
Passage 03
(2425七年级上河北邢台期中)请根据下面表格中的信息,写一段话介绍你的朋友李华的情况。
姓名
李华
年龄
十三
学校
第二中学
班级
七年级2班
外貌
圆脸(round face)以、大眼睛…
性格
友善的
业余爱
打篮球
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注意事项:
(1)必须包含所给的提示信息,并适当发挥;
(2)意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范:
(3)请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。词数60左右。
Passage 04
(2425七年级上·河北唐山期中)假如你叫李华,你刚刚入学到了一所新学校,请根据以下提示,
简单介绍自己,可以适当发挥。
提示:
Name
LiHua
Age
13
Country
the UK
Telephone Number
13833310592
Family members
father(farmer),mother(teacher),sister(student),用I一2句话描述家人的喜好。
My room
nice and tidy,1一2句话描述物品位置。
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要求:(①)短文必须包括提示信息,可适当发挥:
(2)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名:
(3)词数60个左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Hello!I am Li Hua.
Passage 05
(2425七年级上河北廊坊期中)新学期开始了,相信同学们都交到了新朋友。请根据下而表格中
的信息,以“My New Friend”为题写一篇英语短文向大家介绍你的新朋友。可以适当拓展,词数8O个左右。
要求:文中不得出现真实的人名,班级,校名等相关信息。
Name
Peter Brown
Age
13
Country
the UK
Family
big family
Pet
a dog
Favourite food
hot pot
Hobby
like music
My New Friend
Hi,everyone!I have a new friend.
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体裁2
说明文
Passage 06
(2425七年级上河北石家庄期中)请根据下面图示和提示问题写一篇英语短文介绍你的新学校。
Classroom Building
Sports Field
School Gate
Teachers'
Library
Science
Building
Building
Dining Hall
提示:
(1)Where are the places?
(2)What's your favourite place?Why?
要求:
(1)短文须包括两个提示要点,可适当发挥:
(2)文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名:
(3)词数70个左右(开头已给出。不计入总词数)。
This is my new school.
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Passage 07
(24-25七年级上河北廊坊期中)学校是我们学习的天地,也是我们成长的乐园。我们每天在校园
里学习和生活。请你以“My school'"为题,并根据下面的表格内容用英语写一篇短文介绍一下自己的学校。
学校
大、漂亮、干净
两座教学楼,一个图书馆,一个运动场,一个体有馆,一个学校大厅,一个音乐厅,
学校的建
座科学楼,一座艺术大楼,一个食堂
筑物及位置
图书馆在体有馆的后面,食堂在科学楼的前面,艺术大楼在运动场的旁边
老师和同学
善良友好、互相帮助
注意:
(1)短文须包含表格中的所有信息,可适当发挥:
(2)文中不得出现真实的校名和人名;
(3)词数60个左右。
My school
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Passage 08
(2425七年级上河北石家庄期中)假如你是李明,你的英国笔友Pter给你写信介绍了他的新学校,
并询问你的初中生活情况,请你根据以下提示给他写一封回信。
提示:
(1)What's your new school like?What places are there in your school?
(2)What's your favourite place?And why do you like it?
(3)What's your favourite subject?And why?
要求:
(1)短文必须包括所有提示要点,可适当发挥:
(2)短文中不得涉及真实的人名、校名和地名:
(3)60词左右。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Peter.
Thanks for your last letter.Your new school sounds nice.I'm happy to tell you my new school life.
Yours,
Li Ming
Passage 09
(2425七年级上河北唐山·期中)假设你是李华,请写一封电子邮件给你的美国朋友Lsa,介绍自
己的情况。请根据下面提示和要求回复邮件。
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提示:
1.Your age.your class,your school.
2.Your hobby and your favourite food and drinks.
3.Your family members.
要求:
1.必须包含提示中的所有信息,可适当补充,以使行文连贯:
2.70词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数:
3.不得出现真实姓名、校名。
Dear Lisa,
I'm glad to receive your email.I want to say something about myself.
How about you?
Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 10
(2425七年级上河北石家庄期中)以“Ane-mail to
”为题给你的外国笔友写一封电子邮件,
写一篇不少于60个词的短文。内容必须包含:
1.What's your pen friend/pen pal's name?
2.Tell him/her about your nationality(国籍),age and family.
3.Tell him/her about your school life and hobbies.
4.Ask him/her to write back to you.
注意:文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
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An e-mail to
进阶
提升
体裁1记叙文
Passage 11
(2425七年级上河北石家庄期中)假如你叫李华,你的家庭将要接待一名米自英国的留学生,请
根据以下提示,简单介绍一下自己家庭的情况,可以适当发挥。
提示:
Name
Li Hua
Age
13
Telephone Number
13833310592
Father(doctor),
mother(teacher),sister(student),并简单描
Family members
述自己和家人的外貌性格和喜好。
nice and tidy,并简单描述房间内物品位置。(in front of/across
My room
fom/behind/.between/next to.可做参考)
要求:(1)短文必须包括提示信息,可适当发挥:
(2)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名:
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(3)词数70词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Hello!I am Li Hua.
Passage 12
(2425七年级上河北唐山期中)假设你是李欣,请结合全家福介绍家人,提示词须都用上,可适
当发挥,开头已给出,不计入总词数。60词左右。
师
3霸
LiXin's dad,handsome,
8
LiXin's mum,beautiful.
tennis,basketball
always happy,books
LiXin's grandma,
kind,pet cat
LiXin's grandpa,tall.
flowers and plants
Chinese chess
Lixin,clever,
guitar,
Hi,I'm LiXin