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专题07 写作之应用文写作
主题01 人与自我——建议信&介绍信&邀请信&活动报道及通知——学校活动与旅游;学校活动与建议;竞技比赛与情感;学校活动与邀请;对食物的喜恶;健康饮食与建议;个人保健与建议;诗歌与学校活动
Passage 1
(24-25高二上·湖南衡阳祁东县第一中学·期中)最近,你们学校组织了一次School trip,目的地是一个湿地公园。请你给在新西兰的笔友Paul写一个Email,介绍这次活动。
内容包括:1. 活动内容;2. 感想。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80词左右;2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Paul,
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Yours,
Li Ming
Passage 2
(24-25高二上·湖南衡阳市衡阳县第四中学·期中)假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Chris询问你和你的家人喜欢的食物,请你给他写一封邮件详细说明。内容包括:
1. 你家人喜欢吃的食物;
2. 你喜欢吃的食物以及喜欢的原因。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Chris,
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Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 3
(24-25高二上·湖南常德汉寿县第一中学·期中)假如你是学生李华,在校广播台Campus English栏目成立10周年之际,请你给栏目编辑写一封信,内容包括:
1. 作为 Campus English 栏目的忠实听众,对其成立10周年表示祝贺;
2.赞赏该栏目的优点并提出你的建议。
周年:anniversary
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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Yours,
Li Ming
Passage 4
(24-25高二上·湖南邵阳第二中学等联考·期中)假定你是学生会主席李华,你校下周六将组织户外劳动(labor)教育活动。请你写一则通知发表在校英文报上,内容包括:
1. 活动介绍;
2. 注意事项;
3. 呼吁参加。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Notice
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The Student Union
Passage 5
(24-25高二上·湖南邵东创新高级中学·期中)你校最近举办了年度运动会,请你为校英文报写一篇报道。内容包括:
1. 时间和地点;2. 运动会的基本情况; 3. 比赛的意义。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Annual School Sports Meeting
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Passage 6
.(24-25高二上·湖南衡阳市衡阳县第一中学·期中)假定你是李华,请给你的外国交换生同学John发一封电子邮件邀请他参加你们学习小组名为“城市公园,让生活更美好”(Better City Park, Better Life)的研究性学习项目。
内容主要包括:1. 表明邮件意图;
2. 阐述研究意义;
3. 表达邀请期待。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear John,
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Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 7
(24-25高二上·湖南长沙第一中学·期中)假定你是李华,你在刚刚结束的校英文诗歌创作比赛中荣获一等奖。请给帮助你的外教George写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 告知比赛结果;
2. 回顾他在诗歌创作技巧方面对你的帮助;
3. 表达感谢。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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Passage 8
(24-25高二上·湖南益阳安化县第二中学·期中)假定你是校英文报的记者,你校于上周五举办了一场以“吟咏古风雅韵,传承诗意文道”为主题的中国古诗词吟诵比赛。请你用英语写一篇新闻报道。
内容包括:
1.活动内容;
2. 活动反响。
注释:吟咏古风雅韵,传承诗意文道:Recite ancient verses, pass on poetic artistry
注意:写作词数应为80左右。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Passage 9
(24-25高二上·湖南邵阳新邵县第三中学·期中)假定你是学生会主席李华,邀请交换生Peter参加你校在本月举行的文明校园(civilized campus)创建活动。请根据以下要点,给他写一封电子邮件。
1 活动目的;
2 活动内容(倡导语言美、行为美、环境美);
3 表示欢迎。
注意:1 词数100左右;
2 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。Dear Peter,
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Yours,
LiHua
Passage 10
(24-25高二上·湖南新邵县第四中学·期中)假定你是李华,最近有不少同学每天中午都用快餐作为午餐,你认为这不是个好习惯。请你给学校英文报编辑John写一封英语短信,就此事谈谈你的想法,要点包括:
1. 午餐吃快餐的坏处;
2. 你的想法和建议等。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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Passage 11
(24-25高二上·湖南邵阳邵东第七中学·期中)假定你是张明,你的好朋友Jim在面对即将到来的考试时感到焦虑不已,晚上睡眠不好,严重影响了生活和学习,为此他写了一封电子邮件向你求助。请根据以下要点,用英语给他回一封电子邮件。
1.表示理解;
2.制定复习计划,树立信心;
3.坚持锻炼身体;睡前喝点牛奶,保持好的睡眠;
4. ……
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Jim,
I am sorry to hear that you feel so nervous before the coming exam that you can’t sleep well at night.
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Yours,
Zhang Ming
主题01 人与社会——介绍信&推荐信&演讲稿&倡议书&介绍信——学校活动;学习与语言策略;中国文化与建议;个人保健与疾病;文化遗产与保护;个人经历;饮食习俗;娱乐活动与爱好
Passage 1
(24-25高二上·湖南长沙雅礼中学·期中)假定你是李华,最近在英语课堂上老师教你们如何欣赏英文诗歌。请把你所学和你的英国笔友Tom分享,并请他就诗歌欣赏提些建议。内容包括:
1.描述课堂所学内容。
2.征求建议。
注意:1.写作词数80-100左右:可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯:
2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Tom,
Recently we’ ve learned how to appreciate poems from English lessons.
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Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 2
(24-25高二上·湖南长沙湖南师范大学附属中学·期中)假定你是高中生李华,你校英语俱乐部将选举新一届主席,你有意参选。请按以下提示,写一篇竞选演讲稿。
内容要点:
1. 个人优势;
2. 当选后的打算。
注意:
1.可适当增加细节,以使内容充实,行文连贯;
2.写作词数应为80个左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Good afternoon, my dear friends,
My name is Li Hua. I feel honored to run for the president of the English Club.
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Passage 3
(24-25高二上·湖南长沙长郡中学·期中)假定你是李华,你的英国交换生朋友Daniel想参加学校组织的中国古代诗歌知识竞赛,请求你的帮助。请你给他回一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 表示愿意提供帮助;
2. 你的建议;
3. 表达祝愿。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Daniel,
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Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 4
(24-25高二上·湖南省市县·期中)你校正在组织英语作文比赛,请以“中国中学生近视问题”为主题,写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1.近视问题现状;
2.分析主要原因;
3.提出有效策略。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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Passage 5
(24-25高二上·湖南浏阳·期中)为了弘扬传统文化,上周日你校邀请了武汉音乐学院 (Wuhan Conservatory of Music) 的张教授进行了有关古典音乐的主题讲座。请你为校英文报写一篇报道,内容包括:
1. 时间、地点;
2. 活动经过;
3. 活动反响。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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Passage 6
(24-25高二上·湖南湖湘教育三新探索协作体·期中)某英语学习论坛正在开展“Learning English poetry, yes or no?”的讨论活动。作为英文诗歌爱好者,请发表你的观点和想法。
内容包括:
1. 学习英文诗歌的重要性;
2. 自己学习的体会感受。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2、可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Learning English poetry, yes or no?
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Passage 7
(24-25高二上·湖南多校联考·期中)假定你是李华,交换生Steven在邮件中向你打听你最喜欢的蔬菜。请你用英语给他回一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 介绍你最喜欢的蔬菜;
2. 描述原因;
3. 向他推荐该蔬菜。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Steven,
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Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 8
(24-25高二上·湖南永州蓝山县·期中)世界历史文化名城博览会每两年在南京举办一次。该博览会针对自然遗产和文化遗产面临的各种危机,呼吁大家一起保护世界遗产。请你代表主办方,用英文写一封倡议书,内容包括:
1.世界遗产的重要性;
2.保护措施;
3.发出倡议。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:世界历史文化名城博览会the World Historical and Cultural City Expo
Respected all,
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Passage 9
(24-25高二上·湖南邵阳武冈·期中)假如你是李华,你所在的学校要举办以 The Power of Music为主题的演讲比赛。 请你写一篇演讲稿参赛,内容包括:
(1)与音乐有关的一次经历;
(2)音乐的力量或影响。
注意:
(1)词数80左右;
(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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Passage 10
(24-25高二上·湖南邵阳新邵县第二中学·期中)假定你是李华,你的英国朋友 Jonah 对中国美食很感兴趣,来信询问你家乡的特色美食。请根据以下要点给他回一封邮件,内容包括:
1.推荐一种美食;
2.简要介绍其特色;
3.邀请他来你的家乡品尝。
注意:1.词数:85 左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.注意书信格式。
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Passage 11
(24-25高二上·湖南长沙芙蓉高级中学·期中)假如你是李华,你的笔友Tom发来电子邮件询问你的音乐喜好、你何时听音乐和你在新年晚会上的表现。请你给他回一封电子邮件,回答他的所有问题。
注意:1.词数100左右
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.电子邮件的开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
As you know, I’m mad about music.
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By the way, do you like music as well?
Yours,
Li Hua
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专题07 写作之应用文写作
主题01 人与自我——建议信&介绍信&邀请信&活动报道及通知——学校活动与旅游;学校活动与建议;竞技比赛与情感;学校活动与邀请;对食物的喜恶;健康饮食与建议;个人保健与建议;诗歌与学校活动
Passage 1
(24-25高二上·湖南衡阳祁东县第一中学·期中)最近,你们学校组织了一次School trip,目的地是一个湿地公园。请你给在新西兰的笔友Paul写一个Email,介绍这次活动。
内容包括:1. 活动内容;2. 感想。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80词左右;2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Paul,
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Yours,
Li Ming
【答案】Dear Paul,
Our school organized a field trip to Xixi Wetland for students last weekend. Xixi Wetland is an ecosystem that blends urban life with natural wetlands, known as the “green lung” of Hangzhou. We enjoyed drifting along the river, walking along the trails, observing birds and flowers, and experiencing the traditional countryside life. We also held a wetland park photography competition. This activity not only relaxed our minds and bodies but also increased everyone’s awareness of urban development and environmental protection. You are welcome to visit Hangzhou and explore Xixi Wetland with us if you have the opportunity!
Yours,
Li Ming
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。学校组织了以湿地公园为目的地的School trip。要求考生给在新西兰的笔友Paul信介绍这次活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
组织:organize → conduct
传统的:traditional → conventional
比赛:competition → contest
去参观,拜访:visit → pay a visit to
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Our school organized a field trip to Xixi Wetland for students last weekend.
拓展句:Last weekend, our school organized a field trip to Xixi Wetland for students, which provided them with an opportunity to explore and learn about the natural environment.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Xixi Wetland is an ecosystem that blends urban life with natural wetlands, known as the “green lung” of Hangzhou. (运用了that引导限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] You are welcome to visit Hangzhou and explore Xixi Wetland with us if you have the opportunity! (运用了if引导条件状语从句)
Passage 2
(24-25高二上·湖南衡阳市衡阳县第四中学·期中)假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Chris询问你和你的家人喜欢的食物,请你给他写一封邮件详细说明。内容包括:
1. 你家人喜欢吃的食物;
2. 你喜欢吃的食物以及喜欢的原因。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Chris,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Chris,
Glad to receive your email. I will tell you about my family’s favourite food. My father likes to eat almost everything that can be eaten. He enjoys various kinds of meat in particular, but he is not fat. My mother likes to eat vegetables and fruit, but she seldom eats meat. I like to eat meat, fruit and vegetables.
My favourite fruit is apples which are beneficial to health. I want to know about your favourite food.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件,详细说明你和你的家人喜欢的食物。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴:glad → delighted
各种各样:various → a variety of
很少:seldom → merely
肥胖:fat → obese
2.句式拓展
句型转换
原句:He enjoys various kinds of meat in particular, but he is not fat.
拓展句:Although he enjoys various kinds of meat in particular, he is not fat.
【点睛】[高分句型1] My father likes to eat almost everything that can be eaten. (运用了that引导定语从句)
[高分句型2] My favourite fruit is apples which are beneficial to health. (运用了which引导定语从句)
Passage 3
(24-25高二上·湖南常德汉寿县第一中学·期中)假如你是学生李华,在校广播台Campus English栏目成立10周年之际,请你给栏目编辑写一封信,内容包括:
1. 作为 Campus English 栏目的忠实听众,对其成立10周年表示祝贺;
2.赞赏该栏目的优点并提出你的建议。
周年:anniversary
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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Yours,
Li Ming
【答案】Dear editor,
I’m Li Hua, a student in senior 2. Congratulations on the 10th anniversary of Campus English! I have been its fan for two years.
I really find your program beneficial to me. First, the announcers speak in fluent and authentic English. I often imitate their pronunciation and intonation. Second, I like the English songs, which help me relax. However, I think it would be better to add something new, which covers English learning experience as well as excellent compositions from the students.
I would appreciate it if my suggestion could be adopted.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给校广播台Campus English栏目编辑写一封信,对其成立10周年表示祝贺,赞赏该栏目的优点并提出你的建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议:advice→suggestion
广播员:broadcaster→announcers
有益的:helpful→beneficial
作品:work→composition
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:First, the announcers speak in fluent and authentic English. I often imitate their pronunciation and intonation.
拓展句:First, I often imitate the pronunciation and intonation because the announcers speak in fluent and authentic English.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Second, I like the English songs, which help me relax. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] I would appreciate it if my suggestion could be adopted. (运用了it作形式宾语句型)
Passage 4
(24-25高二上·湖南邵阳第二中学等联考·期中)假定你是学生会主席李华,你校下周六将组织户外劳动(labor)教育活动。请你写一则通知发表在校英文报上,内容包括:
1. 活动介绍;
2. 注意事项;
3. 呼吁参加。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Notice
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The Student Union
【答案】 Notice
Dear students,
Next Saturday, our school will organize an outdoor labor education activity, which aims to enhance our understanding of the value of labor and foster teamwork spirit.
There are some things you should pay attention to. Firstly, dress comfortably and wear suitable shoes for outdoor activities. Moreover, bring enough water and sunscreen to stay hydrated and protected.
We strongly encourage all students to participate in this meaningful event. It’s a great opportunity to learn and grow together. Don’t miss out!
The Student Union
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一则通知发表在校英文报上,告知学生学校下周六将组织户外劳动(labor)教育活动一事。
【详解】1.词汇积累
提高:enhance→boost
培养:foster→cultivate
另外:moreover→what’s more
参加:participate in→take part in
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句: Firstly, dress comfortably and wear suitable shoes for outdoor activities.
拓展句:Firstly, dress comfortably and wear shoes that are suitable for outdoor activities.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Next Saturday, our school will organize an outdoor labor education activity, which aims to enhance our understanding of the value of labor and foster teamwork spirit. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] There are some things you should pay attention to. (运用了that/which引导的限制性定语从句,省略了that/which)
Passage 5
(24-25高二上·湖南邵东创新高级中学·期中)你校最近举办了年度运动会,请你为校英文报写一篇报道。内容包括:
1. 时间和地点;2. 运动会的基本情况; 3. 比赛的意义。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Annual School Sports Meeting
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【答案】 Annual School Sports Meeting
Last Tuesday witnessed our annual spring sports meet on the playground, whose aim is to raise our awareness of physical health and enrich our school life. Here are the details.
Starting from 8 in the morning, the sports meet lasted 9 hours, in order to make it possible for the teachers and students to be fully involved. During the sports meet, various sports were presented, ranging from running to high jump. What highlighted the activity was that a student from senior 2 finished his 100-meter race in 11 seconds, breaking the records set for almost 5 years.
Hot as it was, we enjoyed the happy hours in sports and were greatly inspired by the enthusiasm seen in every participant. Not only can the sports meet relieve our pressure from study, but it can also cultivate determination and persistence in pursuing our goals.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于报道,要求考生为校英文报写一篇报道,报道学校最近举办的年度运动会。
【详解】1.词汇积累
提高:raise→boost
各种各样的:various→a variety of
热情:enthusiasm→passion
坚持不懈:persistence→perseverance
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:During the sports meet, various sports were presented, ranging from running to high jump.
拓展句:During the sports meet, various sports, which ranged from running to high jump, were presented.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Last Tuesday witnessed our annual spring sports meet on the playground, whose aim is to raise our awareness of physical health and enrich our school life. (运用了whose引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] What highlighted the activity was that a student from senior 2 finished his 100-meter race in 11 seconds, breaking the records set for almost 5 years. (运用了what引导的主语从句,that引导的表语从句)
Passage 6
.(24-25高二上·湖南衡阳市衡阳县第一中学·期中)假定你是李华,请给你的外国交换生同学John发一封电子邮件邀请他参加你们学习小组名为“城市公园,让生活更美好”(Better City Park, Better Life)的研究性学习项目。
内容主要包括:1. 表明邮件意图;
2. 阐述研究意义;
3. 表达邀请期待。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear John,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear John,
I hope this email finds you well. I am writing to invite you to participate in our group research project titled “Better City Park, Better Life”.
We are focusing on the role of parks in enhancing urban environments, and we believe your insights and perspectives would greatly enrich our discussions and findings. Our project, which aims to explore how parks are closely related to reducing stress levels and improving mental health for citizens, is sure to deepen our understanding of the impacts and benefits of city parks.
Your participation is highly anticipated and I sincerely hope you can join us!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外国交换生同学John发一封电子邮件,邀请他参加学习小组名为“城市公园,让生活更美好”的研究性学习项目。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参与:participate in → take part in
专注于:focus on → concentrate on
增强:enhance → strengthen
减少:reduce → decrease
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I am writing to invite you to participate in our group research project titled “Better City Park, Better Life”.
拓展句:I am writing to invite you to participate in our group research project, whose title is “Better City Park, Better Life”.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Our project, which aims to explore how parks are closely related to reducing stress levels and improving mental health for citizens, is sure to deepen our understanding of the impacts and benefits of city parks (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句,how引导宾语从句)
【高分句型2】Your participation is highly anticipated and I sincerely hope you can join us! (运用了一般现在时的被动语态、省略引导词that的宾语从句)
Passage 7
(24-25高二上·湖南长沙第一中学·期中)假定你是李华,你在刚刚结束的校英文诗歌创作比赛中荣获一等奖。请给帮助你的外教George写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 告知比赛结果;
2. 回顾他在诗歌创作技巧方面对你的帮助;
3. 表达感谢。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Dear George,
I am more than excited to keep you informed that I have won the first prize in the English poetry competition.
I still remember the days when you corrected my grammatical mistakes and instructed me how to create sound and sense with great patience. It is your professional knowledge and rigorous teaching attitude that benefit me a lot. Without your help, I would not have made such great progress.
Words fail to express my gratitude for your help and support. Your generous assistance has not only improved my writing skills, but-also stimulated my enthusiasm and confidence in English learning.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于感谢信。要求考生以李华的身份,给在英文诗歌创作比赛中给予帮助的外教George写一封邮件,内容需包含告知比赛结果、回顾帮助以及表达感谢。
【详解】1.词汇积累
比赛:competition → contest
记得:remember → recollect/recall
指导:instruct → guide
感激:gratitude → appreciation/thanks
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Without your help, I would not have made such great progress.
拓展句:If you hadn’t helped me, I would not have made such great progress.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I still remember the days when you corrected my grammatical mistakes and instructed me how to create sound and sense with great patience. (运用了关系副词when引导限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] It is your professional knowledge and rigorous teaching attitude that benefit me a lot. (运用了强调句型)
Passage 8
(24-25高二上·湖南益阳安化县第二中学·期中)假定你是校英文报的记者,你校于上周五举办了一场以“吟咏古风雅韵,传承诗意文道”为主题的中国古诗词吟诵比赛。请你用英语写一篇新闻报道。
内容包括:
1.活动内容;
2. 活动反响。
注释:吟咏古风雅韵,传承诗意文道:Recite ancient verses, pass on poetic artistry
注意:写作词数应为80左右。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】参考范文:
Recite ancient verses, pass on poetic artistry
Last Friday, our school witnessed a Chinese Poetry Recitation Competition which aimed to create a rich literary atmosphere on our campus.
During the event, students gathered to recite classical Chinese poems from various dynasties. They demonstrated great public speaking skills and offered unique understanding of their poems, while expressing their deep appreciation for the timeless charm of Chinese classical poetry.
A student interviewed said that he was deeply impressed by the participants’ skillful performance. This competition successfully encouraged students to explore the everlasting beauty and cultural richness of our poetic heritage.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。学校于上周五举办了一场以“吟咏古风雅韵,传承诗意文道”为主题的中国古诗词吟诵比赛。要求考生用英语写一篇新闻报道。
【详解】1.词汇积累
见证,经历:witness → see
聚集:gather → get together/assemble
各种各样的:various → a variety of
提供:offer → provide
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:During the event, students gathered to recite classical Chinese poems from various dynasties.
拓展句:During the event, students gathered to recite classical Chinese poems which were chosen from various dynasties.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Last Friday, our school witnessed a Chinese Poetry Recitation Competition which aimed to create a rich literary atmosphere on our campus. (运用了关系代词which引导限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] A student interviewed said that he was deeply impressed by the participants’ skillful performance. (运用了连词that引导宾语从句)
Passage 9
(24-25高二上·湖南邵阳新邵县第三中学·期中)假定你是学生会主席李华,邀请交换生Peter参加你校在本月举行的文明校园(civilized campus)创建活动。请根据以下要点,给他写一封电子邮件。
1 活动目的;
2 活动内容(倡导语言美、行为美、环境美);
3 表示欢迎。
注意:1 词数100左右;
2 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。Dear Peter,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
LiHua
【答案】Dear Peter,
It is great honor for me to invite you to take part in the activity"Build a Civilized Campus"this month.(高分句型一)
We aim at going hand in hand to set up our civilized campus where beauty and harmony meet.(高分句型二)To achieve the goal,we'll call on the school to communicate with each other in polite words.Meanwhile,we should behave ourselves and obey school rules.As a nice environment is good for us,we'll space no effort to create a pleasant school environment.(高分句型三)All the above is to contribute to the good conduct of teachers and students in our school.
It would be nice if you could join us.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】 本文是写一篇给定主题的书面表达,写作话题是邀请交换生参加校园文明活动。在写作时应注意要符合主题,通篇以一般将来时为主;要点要齐全,并且使用适当的连接词,使上下文行文流畅;行文思路要有逻辑性,条例清晰。因为所有的考生的大致内容都是一样的,所以难点就是写出让人眼前一亮的作文。学生可以采用简单句与复杂句结合的方法,并且同时尽量避免多次使用相同的单词与词组,使内容更加的充实。
【范文亮点】文章开篇点题,采用“It is great honor for me to do something”意思是我很荣幸做某事,take part in 意思是参加,高级句式和短语,吸引阅卷老师,
同时文中还是用“ set up 意思是建立,communicate with each other 意思是相互交流,”等高分短语,还是用“Meanwhile”同时做连词,使文章更紧密。
Passage 10
(24-25高二上·湖南新邵县第四中学·期中)假定你是李华,最近有不少同学每天中午都用快餐作为午餐,你认为这不是个好习惯。请你给学校英文报编辑John写一封英语短信,就此事谈谈你的想法,要点包括:
1. 午餐吃快餐的坏处;
2. 你的想法和建议等。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】One possible version:
Dear John,
I’m writing to share my views about eating fast food for lunch in our school.
Recently, I find that some students always eat fast food for lunch. I don’t think it’s a wise choice. Though fast food is convenient and delicious in taste, it can’t provide us with enough nutrition. To keep healthy and get enough energy from lunch, we’d better take some home cooking for lunch or buy some fresh food from the school canteen. I don’t mean fast food should be refused in our life. But just choose it when we are really in a hurry, or it will surely have some side effects on our health.
I hope my advice can be taken.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求考生给校报编辑John写信,就不少同学将快餐作为午餐的现象发表自己的看法,需说明吃快餐的坏处,并表达自己的想法和建议等。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
观点:view→opinion, idea
发现:find→discover, notice
明智的:wise→sensible
拒绝:refuse→turn down, decline
选择:choose→pick, opt for
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:To keep healthy and get enough energy from lunch, we’d better take some home cooking for lunch or buy some fresh food from the school canteen.
拓展句:In order that we can keep healthy and get enough energy from lunch, we’d better take some home cooking for lunch or buy some fresh food from the school canteen.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Recently, I find that some students always eat fast food for lunch. (运用了that引导名词性从句作find的宾语)
[高分句型2] Though fast food is convenient and delicious in taste, it can’t provide us with enough nutrition. (运用了though引导让步状语从句)
[高分句型3] But just choose it when we are really in a hurry, or it will surely have some side effects on our health. (运用了when引导时间状语从句)
Passage 11
(24-25高二上·湖南邵阳邵东第七中学·期中)假定你是张明,你的好朋友Jim在面对即将到来的考试时感到焦虑不已,晚上睡眠不好,严重影响了生活和学习,为此他写了一封电子邮件向你求助。请根据以下要点,用英语给他回一封电子邮件。
1.表示理解;
2.制定复习计划,树立信心;
3.坚持锻炼身体;睡前喝点牛奶,保持好的睡眠;
4. ……
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Jim,
I am sorry to hear that you feel so nervous before the coming exam that you can’t sleep well at night.
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Yours,
Zhang Ming
【答案】
Dear Jim,I am sorry to hear that you feel so nervous before the coming exam that you can’t sleep well at night. Don’t worry and I’m writing to give you some suggestions.
First, it’s necessary to make careful plans before exams to master what you have learnt completely. It will help you build up your confidence. Second, you’d better do proper exercise regularly, which will help you keep healthy and energetic. Last, don’t stay up late studying. Drinking a glass of milk before you go to bed can improve your sleep. It is very important to have a good sleep at night if you want to be energetic during the day.
I hope my suggestions can help you reduce the pressure of exams and perform well in them.
Yours,
Zhang Ming
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。你的好朋友Jim在面对即将到来的考试时感到焦虑不已,晚上睡眠不好,严重影响了生活和学习,为此他写了一封电子邮件向你求助。请你用英语给他回一封电子邮件。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议:suggestions→ advice
重要的:important → vital
压力:pressure→ stress
精力充沛的:energetic→ vigorous
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Don’t worry and I’m writing to give you some suggestions.
拓展句:Don’t worry and I’m writing to give you some suggestions, which can help you solve the problem.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Second, you’d better do proper exercise regularly, which will help you keep healthy and energetic.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】It is very important to have a good sleep at night if you want to be energetic during the day.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
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Passage 1
(24-25高二上·湖南长沙雅礼中学·期中)假定你是李华,最近在英语课堂上老师教你们如何欣赏英文诗歌。请把你所学和你的英国笔友Tom分享,并请他就诗歌欣赏提些建议。内容包括:
1.描述课堂所学内容。
2.征求建议。
注意:1.写作词数80-100左右:可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯:
2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Tom,
Recently we’ ve learned how to appreciate poems from English lessons.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Tom,
Recently we’ve learned how to appreciate poems from English lessons. Our teacher introduced us to various techniques, such as analyzing the themes, understanding the use of metaphors and similes, and paying attention to the rhythm and rhyme. We also practiced reading poems aloud to feel the emotions conveyed by the poet. I found that it was fascinating and I would love to hear your thoughts on this. Could you share some tips on how to better appreciate English poetry? Your advice would be greatly appreciated.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生英国笔友Tom写一份信分享课堂上欣赏英文诗歌的经历,并请他就诗歌欣赏提些建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
各种各样的:various→ different
主题:themes→ topic
情绪:emotions→ feelings
迷人的:fascinating→ attractive
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:We also practiced reading poems aloud to feel the emotions conveyed by the poet.
同义句:We also practiced reading poems aloud so that we could feel the emotions conveyed by the poet.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Our teacher introduced us to various techniques, such as analyzing the themes, understanding the use of metaphors and similes, and paying attention to the rhythm and rhyme. (运用了现在分词作状语)
【高分句型2】I found that it was fascinating and I would love to hear your thoughts on this. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
Passage 2
(24-25高二上·湖南长沙湖南师范大学附属中学·期中)假定你是高中生李华,你校英语俱乐部将选举新一届主席,你有意参选。请按以下提示,写一篇竞选演讲稿。
内容要点:
1. 个人优势;
2. 当选后的打算。
注意:
1.可适当增加细节,以使内容充实,行文连贯;
2.写作词数应为80个左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Good afternoon, my dear friends,
My name is Li Hua. I feel honored to run for the president of the English Club.
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【答案】Good afternoon, my dear friends,
My name is Li Hua. I feel honored to run for the president of the English Club. I am qualified to take the job. Firstly, I have gained a lot of experience and have won wide praise for my job as a monitor. Besides, I am warm-hearted and good at organizing activities. If I luckily succeed, I will try my best to serve my fellow students. Not only will I invite professors to give lectures, but also various activities will be held, such as debate contests and speech contests, for the students to voice opinions and enhance communication.
In the end, I sincerely hope you will give me a chance, and I promise you that I will be a good president.
Thank you.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一篇竞选演讲稿,陈述个人优势以及当选后的打算。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
许多:a lot of→plenty of
称赞:praise→compliment
擅长:be good at→do well in
演讲:lecture→speech
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:If I luckily succeed, I will try my best to serve my fellow students.
拓展句:If luckily succeeding, I will try my best to serve my fellow students.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Not only will I invite professors to give lectures, but also various activities will be held, such as debate contests and speech contests, for the students to voice opinions and enhance communication. (使用了Not only…but also…结构且前一分句使用了倒装句)
【高分句型2】In the end, I sincerely hope you will give me a chance, and I promise you that I will be a good president. (使用了省略that的宾语从句)
Passage 3
(24-25高二上·湖南长沙长郡中学·期中)假定你是李华,你的英国交换生朋友Daniel想参加学校组织的中国古代诗歌知识竞赛,请求你的帮助。请你给他回一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 表示愿意提供帮助;
2. 你的建议;
3. 表达祝愿。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Daniel,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Daniel,
How is everything going with you? I am more than willing to provide you with assistance for the upcoming contest organized by our school. It’s great to see your interest in Chinese culture!
To prepare for the contest, here are a few suggestions. Firstly, you can start by familiarizing yourself with some famous ancient Chinese poets like Li Bai, Du Fu, and Wang Wei. To enhance your understanding of their styles and themes, you can use online resources to learn about the dynasties when they lived and their life experiences. Secondly, it is necessary to study different poetic forms such as quatrains, couplets, and regulated verses. It will help if you pay attention to the rules and structures that govern each form. What’s more, memorize a few popular poems and practice reciting them. This will help you appreciate the beauty of the language and improve your pronunciation.
Remember, practice makes perfect! Wish you all the best in the contest!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给因为想参加中国古代诗歌知识竞赛而求助的交换生朋友Daniel回一封邮件,表示愿意提供帮助、给予个人建议并表达美好祝愿。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
建议:suggestion → recommendation
著名的:famous → well-known
提高:enhance → improve
此外:what’s more → in addition
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句: I am more than willing to provide you with assistance for the upcoming contest organized by our school.
拓展句:I am more than willing to provide you with assistance for the upcoming contest, which is organized by our school.
【点睛】【高分句型1】To enhance your understanding of their styles and themes, you can use online resources to learn about the dynasties when they lived and their life experiences. (运用了不定式短语To enhance作目的状语、关系副词when引导限制性定语从句修饰先行词dynasties)
【高分句型2】It will help if you pay attention to the rules and structures that govern each form. (运用了if引导条件状语从句和关系代词that引导限制性定语从句修饰先行词rules and structures)
Passage 4
(24-25高二上·湖南省市县·期中)你校正在组织英语作文比赛,请以“中国中学生近视问题”为主题,写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1.近视问题现状;
2.分析主要原因;
3.提出有效策略。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【答案】范文
The Issue of Myopia Among Chinese Middle School Students
Currently, the issue of myopia, or nearsightedness, among Chinese middle school students is alarming. A significant portion of students now wear glasses, reflecting a rising trend in vision problems.
This prevalent issue can be attributed mainly to excessive screen time and inadequate outdoor activities. Additionally, the lack of exposure to natural light, which is beneficial to eye health, exacerbates the problem.
To address this concern, schools and parents should encourage more outdoor activities and limit screen time. Regular eye exercises and proper lighting conditions during study hours can also be effective measures.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“中国中学生近视问题”为主题,写一篇短文投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
解决:address→solve
主要:mainly→mostly
使恶化:exacerbate→aggravate/deteriorate
缺乏、不足的:inadequate→deficient
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:A significant portion of students now wear glasses, reflecting a rising trend in vision problems.
拓展句:A significant portion of students now wear glasses, which reflects a rising trend in vision problems.
【点睛】[高分句型1] A significant portion of students now wear glasses, reflecting a rising trend in vision problems. (运用了现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2] Additionally, the lack of exposure to natural light, which is beneficial to eye health, exacerbates the problem.(运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
Passage 5
(24-25高二上·湖南浏阳·期中)为了弘扬传统文化,上周日你校邀请了武汉音乐学院 (Wuhan Conservatory of Music) 的张教授进行了有关古典音乐的主题讲座。请你为校英文报写一篇报道,内容包括:
1. 时间、地点;
2. 活动经过;
3. 活动反响。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】
Aimed at promoting traditional Chinese culture, our school held a lecture concerning Chinese classical music.
As scheduled, the lecture was held from 2:00 pm to 4:00 pm last Sunday in our school hall. It covered a wide range of activities. To begin with, a professor from the music department gave us an instructive class regarding classic music. Then musical instrument performances were given by senior students. Last but not least, the lecture ended up with a competitive knowledge contest. By participating in the activity, not only did we mastered some basic and practical skills, but we also cultivated our comprehensive quality.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于新闻报道。为了弘扬传统文化,上周日学校邀请了武汉音乐学院(Wuhan Conservatory of Music)的张教授进行了有关古典音乐的主题讲座。要求考生就此内容为校英文报写一篇报道。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
促进:promote→boost
有教育的:instructive→educational
参加:participate in→join in
培养:cultivate→ foster
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:As scheduled, the lecture was held from 2:00 pm to 4:00 pm last Sunday in our school hall.
拓展句:It was from 2:00 pm to 4:00 pm last Sunday that the lecture was scheduled to take place in our school hall.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Aimed at promoting traditional Chinese culture, our school held a lecture concerning Chinese classical music. (运用了非谓语动词过去分词作状语的结构)
【高分句型2】By participating in the activity, not only did we mastered some basic and practical skills, but we also cultivated our comprehensive quality. (运用了部分倒装结构)
Passage 6
(24-25高二上·湖南湖湘教育三新探索协作体·期中)某英语学习论坛正在开展“Learning English poetry, yes or no?”的讨论活动。作为英文诗歌爱好者,请发表你的观点和想法。
内容包括:
1. 学习英文诗歌的重要性;
2. 自己学习的体会感受。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2、可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Learning English poetry, yes or no?
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【答案】
Learning English poetry, yes or no? In my opinion, learning English poetry is a resounding yes! It’s crucial as it enriches vocabulary, hones language skills, and offers insights into Western culture. The rhythm and rhyme also enhance our sense of language.
Personally, I’ve had an amazing experience. Reading English poems is like stepping into a world of beauty and emotion. The vivid imagery and profound meanings touch my heart. It’s not just learning but a journey of feeling the power and charm of the English language.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生就“Learning English poetry, yes or no?”的讨论活动,发表自己的观点和想法。
【详解】1.词汇积累
观点:opinion→view
重要的:crucial→vital
生动的:vivid→ lifelike
意义深远的:profound →far-reaching
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句: The rhythm and rhyme also enhance our sense of language.
拓展句:It is obvious that the rhythm and rhyme can also enhance our sense of language.
【点睛】【高分句型1】 It’s crucial as it enriches vocabulary, hones language skills, and offers insights into Western culture. (运用了as引导的原因状语从句)
【高分句型2】 Reading English poems is like stepping into a world of beauty and emotion. (运用了动名词作主语)
Passage 7
(24-25高二上·湖南多校联考·期中)假定你是李华,交换生Steven在邮件中向你打听你最喜欢的蔬菜。请你用英语给他回一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 介绍你最喜欢的蔬菜;
2. 描述原因;
3. 向他推荐该蔬菜。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Steven,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Steven,
I’m delighted to hear from you. My favorite vegetable is broccoli. It’s a versatile green vegetable that I absolutely love.
The reason I adore broccoli is its unique flavor and texture. It’s slightly sweet with a crisp bite, making it perfect for various dishes. Moreover, broccoli is packed with nutrients like vitamins and fiber, which are essential for maintaining good health.
I highly recommend giving broccoli a try. You can steam it, roast it, or even add it to stir-fries. I’m sure you’ll find it as delicious and healthy as I do!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给Steven回复邮件,介绍自己喜爱的蔬菜。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴:delighted→glad
喜爱:love→be fond of
美味:delicious→tasty
此外:moreover→besides
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:I highly recommend giving broccoli a try. You can steam it, roast it, or even add it to stir-fries.
拓展句:I highly recommend giving broccoli a try, which you can steam, roast, or even add to stir-fries.
【点睛】[高分句型1] It’s a versatile green vegetable that I absolutely love. (运用了that引导定语从句)
[高分句型2] Moreover, broccoli is packed with nutrients like vitamins and fiber, which are essential for maintaining good health. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
Passage 8
(24-25高二上·湖南永州蓝山县·期中)世界历史文化名城博览会每两年在南京举办一次。该博览会针对自然遗产和文化遗产面临的各种危机,呼吁大家一起保护世界遗产。请你代表主办方,用英文写一封倡议书,内容包括:
1.世界遗产的重要性;
2.保护措施;
3.发出倡议。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:世界历史文化名城博览会the World Historical and Cultural City Expo
Respected all,
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【答案】Respected All,
In response to the call of the World Historical and Cultural City Expo, I appeal to all of you to preserve our world heritage sites.
These sites are invaluable and irreplaceable treasures shared by all humanity, bearing testament to our history, culture, and nature. Thus, we bear a responsibility to take action and protect these precious legacies. We can safeguard them through several aspects. First, it is advisable for local officials to enact stricter laws and regulations to ensure the safety and integrity of world heritage sites. Moreover, public awareness and conservation spirits towards world heritage are supposed to be heightened through education and publicity.
Let us all make concerted efforts and contribute our part to protecting world heritage!
【导语】这是一篇应用文。世界历史文化名城博览会每两年在南京举办一次。该博览会针对自然遗产和文化遗产面临的各种危机,呼吁大家一起保护世界遗产。请你代表主办方,用英文写一封倡议书。
【详解】1.词汇积累
保护:preserve→protect
无价的:invaluable→priceless
承担:bear→burden
安全:safety→security
2.句式拓展
变强调句型
原句:Moreover, public awareness and conservation spirits towards world heritage are supposed to be heightened through education and publicity.
拓展句:Moreover, it is public awareness and conservation spirits towards world heritage that are supposed to be heightened through education and publicity.
【点睛】【高分句型1】These sites are invaluable and irreplaceable treasures shared by all humanity, bearing testament to our history, culture, and nature.(运用了现在分词作状语,过去分词作定语)
【高分句型2】First, it is advisable for local officials to enact stricter laws and regulations to ensure the safety and integrity of world heritage sites.(运用了it作形式主语,不定式作主语和状语)
Passage 9
(24-25高二上·湖南邵阳武冈·期中)假如你是李华,你所在的学校要举办以 The Power of Music为主题的演讲比赛。 请你写一篇演讲稿参赛,内容包括:
(1)与音乐有关的一次经历;
(2)音乐的力量或影响。
注意:
(1)词数80左右;
(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】One possible version:
Good morning, everyone,
My name is Li Hua. It’s an honor to be here to share with you the speech themed The power of music.
When it comes to music,we have our own stories. As for me, music actually offered me enough power to overcome difficulties. When failing in the mid-term examination, I felt so upset that I refused to communicate with my friends, even my parents. When I heard some inspiring songs, which gave me confidence, I gradually ignored the failure and spared no effort to study. Finally, I made great progress in the final examination.From my experience, I hope that you can obtain the power which music offers to achieve your own dreams.
Thanks for your listening.
【导语】这是一篇应用文。要求考生写一篇演讲稿参赛,参加学校举办的以 The Power of Music为主题的演讲比赛。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
荣幸:honor→ privilege
以……为主题/标题:themed → titled
沮丧的:upset → frustrated
忽视:ignore → overlook
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句: It’s an honor to be here to share with you the speech themed The power of music.
拓展句: It’s an honor to be here to share with you the speech, whose theme is The power of music.
【点睛】【高分句型1】
When failing in the mid-term examination, I felt so upset that I refused to communicate with my friends, even my parents. (运用了省略句)
【高分句型2】
When I heard some inspiring songs, which gave me confidence, I gradually ignored the failure and spared no effort to study.(运用了时间状语从句和非限制性定语从句)
Passage 10
(24-25高二上·湖南邵阳新邵县第二中学·期中)假定你是李华,你的英国朋友 Jonah 对中国美食很感兴趣,来信询问你家乡的特色美食。请根据以下要点给他回一封邮件,内容包括:
1.推荐一种美食;
2.简要介绍其特色;
3.邀请他来你的家乡品尝。
注意:1.词数:85 左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.注意书信格式。
【答案】
Hearing you are interested in Chinese food, I'd like to recommend a well-known dish-kong Pao Chicken to you. As one of the most popular dishes in my hometown, Gong Bao Chicken is made of chicken breast, roasted peanuts, small pieces of tofu, dried chilies and onions. Cooked with sugar, salt and vinegar, it has a combination of sweet and sour taste, which is loved by both the young and the old.
I would like to extend my sincere welcome to you to pay a visit to China. We'll try this delicious dish and other famous local cuisines.
【难度】0.65
【来源】湖南省邵阳市新邵县第二中学2024-2025学年高二上学期期中考试英语试题
【知识点】饮食习俗
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给英国朋友推荐一些家乡的当地美食,邀请他来你的家乡品尝。
【详解】1.词汇积累
对…感兴趣:be interested in →show interest in
出名的:well-known→ famous
真诚的:sincere →heartfelt
愿意做某事:would like to do sth.→ be willing to do
2.句式拓展
简单句变复杂句
原句:We'll try this delicious dish and other famous local cuisines.
拓展句:We'll try this delicious dish and other famous local dishes, which will make you feel worthwhile.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Hearing you are interested in Chinese food, I'd like to recommend a well-known dish-kong Pao Chicken to you. (运用了现在分词做状语)
【高分句型2】Cooked with sugar, salt and vinegar, it has a combination of sweet and sour taste, which is loved by both the young and the old.(运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句)
Passage 11
(24-25高二上·湖南长沙芙蓉高级中学·期中)假如你是李华,你的笔友Tom发来电子邮件询问你的音乐喜好、你何时听音乐和你在新年晚会上的表现。请你给他回一封电子邮件,回答他的所有问题。
注意:1.词数100左右
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.电子邮件的开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
As you know, I’m mad about music.
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By the way, do you like music as well?
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Tom,
As you know, I’m mad about music. Music is the universal of mankind. Of all kinds of music, pop is my favorite. I think its lyrics are really catchy and meaningful and I can learn to sing easily. Pop makes my life delightful and alive. However, I can’t stand rock music. It’s too loud and noisy. Although I don’t have much spare time to enjoy music, I often listen to it on the MP3 player on my way to school. At home if I don’t study, the music will be on all the time.
At the New Year Party, I played the violin in the school orchestra. I think we played pretty well. The audience gave us a big round of applause.
By the way, do you like music as well?
Yours,
La Hua
【分析】本文是一封电子邮件。
【详解】本篇书面表达要求回一封电子邮件。同学们在写作时要注意:回答电子邮件中的问题,要使用正确的时态,不要出现标点和拼写错误,并尽量保持书写整洁、美观以及注意行文的连贯性。
【点睛】文中形容词 catchy, meaningful, delightful, alive用得恰如其分,充分体现了作者对音乐的热爱;此外文中的短语a big round of applause以及 Although引导的让步状语从句等的使用,体现了作者扎实的写作功底。
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