专题08 书面表达（应用文）（期中真题汇编，安徽专用）高一英语上学期

命学科网 www.zxxk.com 让致与学更高效 专题08书面表达应用文 基础 必练 主题01演讲犒 Passage 1 (23-24学年高一上淮南四中：期中) 外教Ros计划在下周五的英语课上开展英语学习交流会，请你写一篇发言稿。 内容包括： 1你的学习方法； 2.你的收获。 注意： 1写作词数应为80个左右： 2请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear classmates, Passage 2 (23-24高一上合肥一中期中) 你是某国际学校学生会主席。你校准各组织一次“让文物活起来”(Bring Cultural Relics to Life)的活动，请 你用英语写一篇开幕辞，欢迎参加活动的师生。内容包括： 1.表示欢迎： 2.活动目的： 3.活动内容。 注意： 1/10 备学科网 www.zxxk.com 让致与学更高效 1.写作词数应为80左右。 2.参考词汇：手工艺品artifact。 Passage 3 (23-24高一上安微毫州期中) 假设你是李华，下周我们学校将进行校运会，请你在开幕仪式上致辞。包括以下内容： 1.健康生活的重要性： 2.健康生活的建议： 3.呼吁和提出希望。 注意：1.词数：80左右： 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 主题02征文 Passage 1 (23-24高一上安庆七中期中) 假定你是李华，你校英文报将举办题为I Tasted a Sense of Success"的征文活动.请你写一篇文章投稿，要点 包括： 1你的经历， 2你的收获。 2/10 命学科网 www.zxxk.com 让致与学更高效 注意： 1.写作词数应为80左右： 2请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 主题03建议信 Passage 1 (2425高一上临泉一中期中) 假设你是李华，是一名高中生。最近，你的笔友艾米(Amy)给你寄来一封信，说她因发胖而感到非常苦 恼。请你根据下列要点给她写一封建议信。内容包括： ①注意饮食合理，营养均衡： ②经常锻炼，保证睡眠充足： ③调整心态。 注意：1.词数80左右： 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Amy. Yours, LiHua Passage 2 (23-24高一上池州期中)》 假如你是李华，你校的交换生B©b想加入中国传统文化学习小组，并想了解该学习小组的有关情况。请你 3/10 备学科网 www.zxxk.com 让致与学更高效 给他写一封电子邮件，包括以下内容： 1.学习时间和地点： 2.小组情况： 3.学习内容（京剧、皮影戏等）。 注意：1.词数80左右： 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：皮影戏Chinese shadow play Passage 3 (23-24高一上阜阳临泉期中) 假设你是红星中学高一学生李华。你的英国笔友m对中国传统节日春节很感兴趣，发来邮件询问相关信 息。请你给他回邮件，内容包括： 1春节的基本信息： 2.春节的庆祝活动及意义： 3邀请他有机会来中国过春节。 注意：1.词数100左右： 2开头和结尾己给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, Yours, LiHua 4/10 盈学科网 www.zxxk.com 让致与学更高效 Passage 4 (23-24高一上六安新安高中期中) 假定你是李华，你的外国笔友Frk想要提高中文写作水平，向你寻求建议。请给他回一封邮件，内容包括： 1,提出建议： 2.表达祝愿。 注意：1.词数100左右： 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯： 3.开头和结尾己给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Frank, Yours. LiHua Passage 5 (23-24高一上安敏宿州期中) 假如你是李华。你买了一张音乐会票，但是由于某种原因你不能去听音乐会，想把票转赠给你的外国朋友 Toy。请你给他写一封信，内容包括： 1音乐会的情况 2解释你不能参加音乐会的原因； 3.告知取票方式。 注意： 1词数80左右： 2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Tony, 5/10 盈学科网 www.zxxk.com 让致与学更高效 How is everything going? Yours, LiHua Passage 6 (23-24高一上合肥庐巢期中) 假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter今年刚刚升入高中，不知道自己是否该参加学校的篮球队，发邮件向你 求助。请你给他回一封邮件，内容包括： 1.给出建议；2.说明理由。 注意：写作词数应为80左右。 进阶 提升 主题01建议信 Passage 1 (2425高一上马鞍山二中期中) 假定你是某国际学校学生会主席李华，你校近期准备对部分教学设施进行重建。请你用英语给校长写一封 6/10 备学科网 www.zxxk.com 让致与学更高效 邮件，谈谈你的想法。内容包括： 1,存在的问题 2.提出建议： 3.表达愿望。 注意： 1.写作词数应为100左右 2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 Dear Principal, Yours sincerely, LiHua Passage 2 (2425高一上皖江名校联考期中) 假定你是李华，你获悉你的英国朋友A1ie在新学校因为与同学相处不融洽，心情低落。请你用英语给她写 一封电子邮件，要点包括： 1,表示关心： 2.提醒她与同学有矛盾很正常，真诚相处，关系会改善： 3.建议她必要时向老师、朋友以及家长寻求帮助。 注意：1.词数80左右： 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Alice, 7/10 备学科网 www.zxxk.com 让致与学更高效 Yours, LiHua Passage 3 (2425高一上合肥一中期中) 假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Jak在社交媒体上看到了你参加运动会的照片，写信向你了解相关情况。请 给他写一封回信，内容包括： 1.时间地点；2.你参加的项目：3.你的感受。 注意：1.词数100词左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 Passage 4 (2425高一上安徽芜湖期中) 假如你是某杂志社健康栏目的主持人M.Lson,人们经常写信询问健康之道，请你写一封回信，指出健 康的重要性，并针对“如何保持健康给出自己的建议。信的内容需包含以下信息： 1,健康的重要性： 2.给出保持健康的方法： 注意：1.词数80左右： 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear readers. Yours sincerely, Mr.Larson 8/10 命学科网 www.zxxk.com 让致与学更高效 主题02演讲稿 Passage 1 (23-24高一上安庆一中期中) 假定你是李华，最近你参加了你校篮球队与中华中学篮球队的友谊赛。请你写一篇短文向校英语报投稿。 内容包括： 1.比赛的时间和地点： 2.你的经历和感受。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80左右： 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Passage 2 (2324高一上马鞍山二中期中) 上周五，你班举办了“亲子关系”主题班会。请你就此为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括： 1活动的相关内容（时间、地点、参加者等）； 2活动过程 3活动反响。 主题03祝贺信 9/10 备学科网 www.zxxk.com 让致与学更高效 Passage 1 (24-25高一上合肥期中) 假如你是李华，你的笔友李雷在2024年的高考中获得了优异的成绩，被自己的理想大学录取。请你用英语 写一封信，向他表示祝贺。内容包括：1祝贺高考成绩优异：2肯定他的努力；3期待交流。 注意： 1写作词数应为80词左右： 2适当添加细节。 主题04邀请信 Passage 1 (2425高一上江南名校联盟期中) 假如你是李华，你校将举办外国学生中文演讲比赛(Chinese Speech Contest),主题为中国传统文化。请给 你的英国朋友Lu©y写封邮件邀请她参加，内容包括： 1比赛时间地点：2.演讲话题：3报名方式。 注意：1词数80左右： 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 10/10 专题08 书面表达 应用文 主题01 演讲稿 Passage 1 （23-24学年高一上·淮南四中·期中） 外教Rose计划在下周五的英语课上开展英语学习交流会，请你写一篇发言稿。 内容包括： 1.你的学习方法； 2.你的收获。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear classmates, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear classmates, It is my great honor to stand here today to share my ways to learn English. Reading, listening and speaking, and writing are the basic requirements of mastering English well. As far as I am concerned, I spend half an hour reading every morning, through which I not only build up my language sense but also expand my vocabulary. What’s more, I actively join the school English club, where my listening and speaking skills improve. In the evening, I always write down the English sentence patterns and key words I met this day. Gradually, my writing level goes up. I hope my English-learning ways are helpful to you. Thank you for your attention! 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇有关英语学习的发言稿，讲述自己的学习方法。 【详解】1.词汇积累 扩大：expand→enlarge 此外：what’s more → in addition 写下：write down→take down/put down 就个人而言：as far as I am concerned→from my point of view/for my part 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Gradually, my writing level goes up. 拓展句：As the time goes by, my writing level goes up. 【点睛】【高分句型1】As far as I am concerned, I spend half an hour reading every morning, through which I not only build up my language sense but also expand my vocabulary. (运用了“介词+which”引导的非限制性定语从句) 【高分句型2】What’s more, I actively join the school English club, where my listening and speaking skills improve. (运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句) Passage 2 （23-24高一上·合肥一中·期中） 你是某国际学校学生会主席。你校准备组织一次“让文物活起来”（Bring Cultural Relics to Life）的活动，请你用英语写一篇开幕辞，欢迎参加活动的师生。内容包括： 1. 表示欢迎； 2. 活动目的； 3. 活动内容。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右。 2. 参考词汇：手工艺品artifact。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】one possible version Dear teachers and fellow students, Welcome to take part in the activity called Bring Cultural Relics to Life. In order to enrich students’ school life and make us know more about our cultural relics, our school holds the activity. The activity consists of two parts. At the beginning, the headmaster will deliver a speech at the opening ceremony, making a short introduction to cultural relics. After that, some cultural relics such as artifacts, paintings and so on will be displayed, from which we can have a better understanding of our history. Hopefully, you can enjoy yourselves! Another version Dear teachers and fellow students, Welcome to our "Bringing Cultural Relics to Life" event. As president of the Student Union, I'm honored to have the opportunity to open this wonderful occasion. The purpose of this event is to encourage everyone to explore the history and culture behind the artifacts and appreciate their beauty. There will be an exhibition featuring various cultural artifacts brought by students which have been passed down through their families. Also, we will be holding a work shop where students are encouraged to create their own cultural artifacts that look like cultural relics in ancient times. Thank you for your attendance, and I wish you all a meaningful and enjoyable experience 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生就你校准备组织的“让文物活起来”（Bring Cultural Relics to Life）的活动，用英语写一篇开幕辞，欢迎参加活动的师生。内容包括：表示欢迎；活动目的；活动内容。 【详解】1.词汇积累 参加：take part in→participate in 首先：At the beginning→To begin with 发表演讲：deliver a speech→give a speech 展示：display→show 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Welcome to take part in the activity called Bring Cultural Relics to Life. 拓展句：Welcome to take part in the activity which is called Bring Cultural Relics to Life. 【点睛】[高分句型1] At the beginning, the headmaster will deliver a speech at the opening ceremony, making a short introduction to cultural relics. (运用了非谓语作状语) [高分句型2] After that, some cultural relics such as artifacts, paintings and so on will be displayed, from which we can have a better understanding of our history. (运用了介词+关系代词引导的非限制性定语从句) Passage 3 （23-24高一上·安徽亳州·期中） 假设你是李华，下周我们学校将进行校运会，请你在开幕仪式上致辞。包括以下内容： 1. 健康生活的重要性； 2. 健康生活的建议； 3. 呼吁和提出希望。 注意：1. 词数：80 左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Hello everyone, I’m Li Hua. Our school sports meeting will be held, and I feel extremely honored to deliver a speech at the opening ceremony. As is known to all, healthy living habits can keep us fit, protect us from getting ill and help us start a new day with full energy. For the purpose, our school holds the sports meeting every year. In order to build up physical and even mental strength, it’s necessary for us to take effective action. Firstly, we’d better have a balanced diet, such as taking more fresh fruits, meat and vegetables. Furthermore, what matters a lot is setting aside enough time for daily exercise, which is beneficial to our health. Last but not least, having enough sleep will surely keep us energetic for a whole day. If you follow these suggestions and start a healthy lifestyle, I firmly believe that you will lead a happy life. Let’s exercise and actively take part in the school sports meeting. That’s all. Thank you! 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇发言稿，在学校将进行的校运会开幕仪式上致辞。 【详解】1.词汇积累 发表演讲：deliver a speech→make a speech 此外：furthermore→what’s more 对……有益：be beneficial to→be good for 参加：take part in→join in 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：In order to build up physical and even mental strength, it’s necessary for us to take effective action. 拓展句：It’s necessary for us to take effective action so that we can build up physical and even mental strength. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Furthermore, what matters a lot is setting aside enough time for daily exercise, which is beneficial to our health.（运用了what引导的主语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句） 【高分句型2】If you follow these suggestions and start a healthy lifestyle, I firmly believe that you will lead a happy life.（运用了if引导的条件状语从句和that引导的宾语从句） 主题02 征文 Passage 1 （23-24高一上·安庆七中·期中） 假定你是李华，你校英文报将举办题为“I Tasted a Sense of Success”的征文活动.请你 写一篇文章投稿，要点包括： 1.你的经历， 2 .你的收获。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】I Tasted a sense of success Last month, my English teacher told us about an English speech competition. Encouraged by my teacher and classmates, I signed up for it. I made full use of my spare time to write and practice the speech until I was confident enough to take the stage. In the competition, I spoke fluently and confidently before a large audience and five judges, and I won first place. This experience gave me a chance to taste a sense of success and built up my confidence in public speaking. 【分析】本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，要求考生以“I Tasted a Sense of Success”为题给校英文报写一篇文章投稿。 【详解】第一步：审题 体裁：记叙文 时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般过去时。 结构：总分法 总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。 要求： 1.你的经历； 2 .你的收获。 第二步：列提纲 （重点词组） an English speech competition,sign up for,make full use of, spare time,fluently and confidently,build up my confidence;give sb a chance to do 第三步：连词成句 1. Last month, my English teacher told us about an English speech competition. 2. Encouraged by my teacher and classmates, I signed up for it. 3. I made full use of my spare time to write and practice the speech until I was confident enough to take the stage. 4. In the competition, I spoke fluently and confidently before a large audience and five judges, and I won first place. 5. This experience gave me a chance to taste a sense of success and built up my confidence in public speaking. 根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）（供参考） 1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last 2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including, 3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that… 4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。 【点睛】[高分句型1] Encouraged by my teacher and classmates I signed up for it. （运用了过去分词作状语） [高分句型2] This experience gave me a chance to taste a sense of success and built up my confidence in public speaking.（运用了不定式作后置定语） 主题03 建议信 Passage 1 （24-25高一上·临泉一中·期中） 假设你是李华，是一名高中生。最近，你的笔友艾米（Amy）给你寄来一封信，说她因发胖而感到非常苦恼。请你根据下列要点给她写一封建议信。内容包括： ①注意饮食合理，营养均衡； ②经常锻炼，保证睡眠充足； ③调整心态。 注意：1. 词数80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Amy, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Amy， I’m sorry to hear that you are upset because you have put on weight. The following are some tips on how to keep fit. First of all, to keep healthy, you need to have a balanced diet. Don’t eat the foods containing too much sugar and fat, which will make you put on weight easily. Besides, it is important to take regular exercise. Sports like riding and walking are of great benefit to your health, which can help keep you in shape. Enough sleep makes your body relaxed. As a result, for the benefit of your health, it is necessary that you should have enough sleep and rest. Last but not least, there is no need to worry about weight gain and weight loss. As far as I’m concerned, nothing is more important than health. I do hope my tips will be helpful to you. Best wishes. Yours, Li Hua 【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给Amy写一封建议信帮助她解决发胖带来的烦恼。 【详解】1.词汇积累 关于：on→concerning/regarding 首先：first of all→first and foremost 重要的：important→vital/significant 因此：as a result→as a concequence/concequently 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Besides, it is important to take regular exercise. Sports like riding and walking are of great benefit to your health, which can help keep you in shape. 拓展句：Besides, it is important to take regular exercise, because sports like riding and walking are of great benefit to your health, which can help keep you in shape. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Don’t eat the foods containing too much sugar and fat, which will make you put on weight easily.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句） 【高分句型2】As a result, for the benefit of your health, it is necessary that you should have enough sleep and rest. （运用了it作形式主语，that引导主语从句） Passage 2 （23-24高一上·池州·期中） 假如你是李华，你校的交换生Bob想加入中国传统文化学习小组，并想了解该学习小组的有关情况。请你给他写一封电子邮件，包括以下内容： 1. 学习时间和地点； 2. 小组情况； 3. 学习内容(京剧、皮影戏等)。 注意：1. 词数80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：皮影戏Chinese shadow play ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Bob， I’m glad that you’re interested in traditional Chinese culture. I’m writing to tell you something about the study group for traditional Chinese culture. As scheduled，the group members have lessons in the school hall every afternoon from Monday to Thursday.Forty students have joined us，ten of whom are foreign exchange students.We learn traditional Chinese art such as Beijing Opera and Chinese shadow play under the guidance of professional teachers.The group provides opportunities to learn traditional Chinese culture，especially for exchange students.I believe you’ll like it! Looking forward to your early reply. Yours， Li Hua 【分析】本文属于书面表达之信件书写。要求你给你校的交换生Bob写一封电子邮件，向他介绍中国传统文化学习小组的有关情况。 【详解】结合题干可知，本文是写一封电子邮件，要求你给你校的交换生Bob写一封电子邮件，向他介绍中国传统文化学习小组的有关情况。信件内容包括：1. 学习时间和地点；2. 小组情况；3. 学习内容(京剧、皮影戏等)。写作中全文的时态以一般现在时为主，人称用第一人称和第三人称。同时，要尽可能多的使用短语来表达，比如：be interested in traditional Chinese culture,from ... to ..., under the guidance of ...。 【点睛】本文书写内容完整，结构清晰，语言精练，句式紧凑，文中用到的复杂句式，充分说明作者的语言驾驭能力。具体高分句型如下：使用宾语从句：I’m glad that you’re interested in traditional Chinese culture.使用了定语从句：Forty students have joined us，ten of whom are foreign exchange students. Passage 3 （23-24高一上·阜阳临泉·期中） 假设你是红星中学高一学生李华。你的英国笔友Jim对中国传统节日春节很感兴趣，发来邮件询问相关信息。请你给他回邮件，内容包括： 1.春节的基本信息； 2.春节的庆祝活动及意义； 3.邀请他有机会来中国过春节。 注意：1.词数100左右； 2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Jim,    Learning that you are interested in the Spring Festival, it’s my honour to tell you something about it.    The Spring Festival falls on the first day of the Lunar New Year. It’s traditionally regarded as an occasion for family reunion. People gather together to enjoy a big dinner with joy on its eve. What’s more, you can see many decorations such as lanterns and paper cuttings during this festival, which symbolize good wishes for the coming year. As a matter of fact, I really want to invite you to spend the next Spring Festival with me.    Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本文是一篇应用文写作。要求考生向你的英国笔友Jim介绍中国传统节日春节的相关信息。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 感兴趣：be interested in→show interest in 快乐：joy→happiness 实际上：as a matter of fact→in fact 此外：what's more→besides 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：The Spring Festival falls on the first day of the Lunar New Year. It’s traditionally regarded as an occasion for family reunion. 拓展句：The Spring Festival falls on the first day of the Lunar New Year, which is traditionally regarded as an occasion for family reunion. 【点睛】[高分句型1]Learning that you are interested in the Spring Festival, it’s my honour to tell you something about it.(that引导的宾语从句) [高分句型2]What’s more, you can see many decorations such as lanterns and paper cuttings during this festival, which symbolize good wishes for the coming year.(which引导的非限制性定语从句) Passage 4 （23-24高一上·六安新安高中·期中） 假定你是李华，你的外国笔友Frank想要提高中文写作水平，向你寻求建议。请给他回一封邮件，内容包括： 1. 提出建议； 2. 表达祝愿。 注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Frank, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Frank, I’m sorry to hear that you’re having trouble improving your Chinese writing. I’m more than glad to offer you some suggestions. To begin with, a good way to improve wiring is to read other people’s articles. If you read plenty of good Chinese articles, you will learn how skillful writers use Chinese to express themselves and present information in an excellent way. Thus, you can improve your ability to use the language. Additionally, you should improve your writing by practicing. Keeping a diary is a wise choice. It is natural that the beginners make mistakes while writing. But don’t worry. Finding out why you made the mistakes will help you avoid the same mistakes and enable you to write better. Hopefully, the advice would be helpful to you. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，你的外国笔友Frank想要提高中文写作水平，向你寻求建议。请给他回一封邮件。 【详解】1.词汇积累 首先：to begin with→in the first place 此外：additionally→what’s more 弄清楚：find out→figure out 建议：suggestion→advice 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Hopefully, the advice would be helpful to you. 拓展句：I hope that the advice would be helpful to you. 【点睛】【高分句型1】If you read plenty of good Chinese articles, you will learn how skillful writers use Chinese to express themselves and present information in an excellent way. （运用了if引导的条件状语从句） 【高分句型2】Finding out why you made the mistakes will help you avoid the same mistakes and enable you to write better. （运用了动名词作主语以及why引导的宾语从句） Passage 5 （23-24高一上·安徽宿州·期中） 假如你是李华。你买了一张音乐会票，但是由于某种原因你不能去听音乐会，想把票转赠给你的外国朋友Tony。请你给他写一封信，内容包括： 1.音乐会的情况 2.解释你不能参加音乐会的原因； 3.告知取票方式。 注意： 1.词数80左右： 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Tony, How is everything going? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Tony, How is everything going? I am writing to ask if you are interested in attending a concert next weekend. I have a ticket for you. I know that you are a real folk music lover and I believe that you would like to attend this concert. I believe this concert can make you feel refreshed! I waited for many hours to buy the ticket, but unfortunately, I will have to attend a very important speech arranged by my school . Please come to pick up the ticket or I can post it to you. Yours LiHua 【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生给外国朋友Tony写一封信告知转赠音乐会门票的相关情况。其内容包括：音乐会的情况、解释你不能参加音乐会的原因和告知取票方式。 【详解】1.词汇积累 对...感兴趣：be interested in →show interest in 能够：can→ be able to 很多：many→plenty of 不幸运地：unfortunately→unluckily 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：I have a ticket for you. 拓展句：I am glad to tell you that I have a ticket for you. 【点睛】【高分句型1】I am writing to ask if you are interested in attending a concert next weekend. （运用了if引导的宾语从句） 【高分句型2】 I waited for many hours to buy the ticket, but unfortunately, I will have to attend a very important speech arranged by my school .（运用了过去分词作定语） Passage 6 （23-24高一上·合肥庐巢·期中） 假定你是李华，你的英国笔友 Peter今年刚刚升入高中，不知道自己是否该参加学校的篮球队，发邮件向你求助。请你给他回一封邮件，内容包括： 1. 给出建议；2. 说明理由。 注意：写作词数应为 80 左右。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Peter, Thanks for your email. I’m happy to give you my suggestions for joining your school basketball team. I think you should join the team as you are good at playing basketball. Joining a team can help you make new friends, let you exercise without feeling like you’re exercising, and give you a lot more pride in your school. What’s more, it’s nice to have a break from studying after a long school day. I really hope you will enjoy your high school life. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国笔友Peter写封信，对他是否该参加新升入的高中的篮球队给出建议并说明理由。 【详解】1.词汇积累 高兴的：happy→pleased 擅长：be good at→be adept at 因为：as→since 而且：what’s more→further more 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：I’m happy to give you my suggestions for joining your school basketball team. 拓展句：I’m happy to give you my suggestions on whether you should join your school basketball team. 【点睛】[高分句型1] I think you should join the team as you are good at playing basketball. (运用了as引导的原因状语从句) [高分句型2] Joining a team can help you make new friends, let you exercise without feeling like you’re exercising, and give you a lot more pride in your school. (运用了动名词作主语) 主题01 建议信 Passage 1 （24-25高一上·马鞍山二中·期中） 假定你是某国际学校学生会主席李华，你校近期准备对部分教学设施进行重建。请你用英语给校长写一封邮件，谈谈你的想法。内容包括： 1．存在的问题; 2．提出建议; 3．表达愿望。 注意： 1．写作词数应为100左右; 2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 Dear Principal, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】     I am Li Hua, chairman of the student union. I am writing to express my concern about the reconstruction of some teaching facilities in our school.      Currently, some of our classrooms are in urgent need of renovation. The desks and chairs are worn out, and the blackboards are no longer black. The lighting is also insufficient, which affects our learning efficiency. I suggest that we replace the old desks and chairs with new ones, repaint the blackboards, and install more lights. I also suggest that we add some green plants in the classrooms to improve the learning environment. I would appreciate it if you could take my suggestions into consideration.      I believe that with the reconstruction, our school will become a better place for us to study and grow.                                                                                                                                                            Yoursincerely,                                                                                                                                                               Li hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生用英语给校长写一封邮件，谈谈你关于你校近期准备对部分教学设施进行重建的想法。 【详解】1.词汇积累 重建：reconstruction→reestablishment 设备：facility→equipment 翻新：renovation→refurbishment 影响：affect→influence 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：I am writing to express my concern about the reconstruction of some teaching facilities in our school. 拓展句：I am writing to express my concern which is about the reconstruction of some teaching facilities in our school. 【点睛】【高分句型1】The lighting is also insufficient, which affects our learning efficiency.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) 【高分句型2】 I suggest that we replace the old desks and chairs with new ones, repaint the blackboards, and install more lights.(运用了虚拟语气) Passage 2 （24-25高一上·皖江名校联考·期中） 假定你是李华，你获悉你的英国朋友Alice在新学校因为与同学相处不融洽，心情低落。请你用英语给她写一封电子邮件，要点包括： 1. 表示关心； 2. 提醒她与同学有矛盾很正常，真诚相处，关系会改善； 3. 建议她必要时向老师、朋友以及家长寻求帮助。 注意：1. 词数80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Alice, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】One possible version: Dear Alice, I’m shocked at the news that you don’t get on well with your classmates in your new school. It’s understandable that you sink into sadness. Actually you are not alone to have conflicts with others. All the students are from different places and different backgrounds, so it’s easy to misunderstand each other. However, if you take your classmates honestly and warmly, it won’t take a long time before the misunderstanding disappears. When necessary, you can also turn to your friends, teachers and parents for help. Hopefully, you will get out of sadness. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求学生以李华的身份，给英国朋友Alice写一封电子邮件，需首先对她表示关心，然后给予她安慰，说明当前的问题是正常的，有方法可以改善，最后告诉她必要时可以寻求帮助。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 与……相处融洽：get on well with→get along well with, be on good terms with 合情理的：understandable→reasonable 真诚地：honestly→sincerely, genuinely 消失：disappear→vanish, go away 2. 句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：All the students are from different places and different backgrounds, so it’s easy to misunderstand each other. 拓展句：As all the students are from different places and different backgrounds, it’s easy to misunderstand each other. 【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m shocked at the news that you don’t get on well with your classmates in your new school. (运用了that引导同位语从句) [高分句型2] It’s understandable that you sink into sadness. (运用了that引导主语从句) [高分句型3] However, if you take your classmates honestly and warmly, it won’t take a long time before the misunderstanding disappears. (运用了if引导条件状语从句、before引导时间状语从句) Passage 3 （24-25高一上·合肥一中·期中） 假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Jack在社交媒体上看到了你参加运动会的照片，写信向你了解相关情况。请给他写一封回信，内容包括： 1. 时间地点；    2. 你参加的项目；    3. 你的感受。 注意：1. 词数100词左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Jack, How is everything going? Delighted to learn you are interested in the sports meeting held in my school, I’m writing to share with you some details. Usually held in October annually on the school playground, it’s a splendid platform for us to take an active part in sports and bring out the best in ourselves. This year I joined in the 1500-metre race, which was a great challenge for me. But with my adequate preparations and my classmates’ encouragement, I won third prize finally, which made me convinced that nothing is impossible for a willing heart. Would you please share your school life with me? Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就学校运动会的情况给英国笔友Jack写一封回信。 【详解】1.词汇积累 高兴的：delighted→glad 壮丽的：splendid→magnificent 鼓励：encouragement→inspiration 最终：finally→ultimately 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：Delighted to learn you are interested in the sports meeting held in my school, I’m writing to share with you some details. 拓展句：I’m glad to know you’re interested in the sports meet at my school, so I’m writing to share with you some details. 【点睛】【高分句型1】This year I joined in the 1500-metre race, which was a great challenge for me. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) 【高分句型2】But with my adequate preparations and my classmates’ encouragement, I won third prize finally, which made me convinced that nothing is impossible for a willing heart. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句以及that引导的宾语从句) Passage 4 （24-25高一上·安徽芜湖·期中） 假如你是某杂志社健康栏目的主持人 Mr. Larson，人们经常写信询问健康之道，请你写一封回信，指出健康的重要性，并针对“如何保持健康”给出自己的建议。信的内容需包含以下信息： 1. 健康的重要性； 2. 给出保持健康的方法； 注意：1. 词数80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear readers, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Mr. Larson 【答案】Dear readers, Health is far more important than anything else. Good health enables us to enjoy our life and achieve what we hope for in our career. How can we keep healthy? Here are some suggestions for you. To begin with, we should develop good habits. We should avoid food with lots of sugar and fat. What’s more, we have to get rid of those habits that damage our health, such as drinking and smoking. Last but not least, we’d better exercise every day to make our bodies strong. Proper diet and enough exercise do good to our health, too. If we follow the advice given above, we will lead a healthy life. Yours sincerely, Mr. Larson 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给读者写一封回信，指出健康的重要性，并针对“如何保持健康”给出自己的建议。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 实现：achieve→accomplish 而且：what’s more→moreover 伤害：damage→harm 锻炼：exercise→work out 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：To begin with, we should develop good habits. We should avoid food with lots of sugar and fat. 拓展句：To begin with, we should develop good habits, among which the most important one is that we should avoid food with lots of sugar and fat. 【点睛】[高分句型1]Good health enables us to enjoy our life and achieve what we hope for in our career.(运用了what引导的宾语从句) [高分句型2]What’s more, we have to get rid of those habits that damage our health, such as drinking and smoking.(运用了that引导的定语从句) 主题02 演讲稿 Passage 1 （23-24高一上·安庆一中·期中） 假定你是李华，最近你参加了你校篮球队与中华中学篮球队的友谊赛。请你写一篇短文向校英语报投稿。内容包括： 1. 比赛的时间和地点； 2. 你的经历和感受。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Last Sunday afternoon, a basketball match was held in our school stadium, which was between our school basketball team and the one from Zhonghua Middle School. When the match started, I was very nervous. I moved quickly as the ball flied, but I forgot my task covering our team leader. Fortunately, one of our team members reminded me to change my move. I recognized my mistake and covered the team leader successfully. Our team won the game at last. The match not only relaxed me from the intense study, but also taught me the importance of teamwork. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于最近参加了你校篮球队与中华中学篮球队的友谊赛这一事情，写一篇短文向校英语报投稿。 【详解】1.词汇积累 比赛：match→ competition 意识到：recognized→ was aware of 紧张的：intense→ strained 错误：mistake→ fault 2.句式拓展 合并简单句 原句：I recognized my mistake and covered the team leader successfully. Our team won the game at last. 拓展句：I recognized my mistake and covered the team leader successfully, which made our team won the game at last. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Last Sunday afternoon, a basketball match was held in our school stadium, which was between our school basketball team and the one from Zhonghua Middle School.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句） 【高分句型2】The match not only relaxed me from the intense study, but also taught me the importance of teamwork.（运用了not only…but also…的固定句型） Passage 2 （23-24高一上·马鞍山二中·期中） 上周五，你班举办了“亲子关系”主题班会。请你就此为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括： 1.活动的相关内容（时间、地点、参加者等）； 2.活动过程； 3.活动反响。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Last Friday, Class 2, Grade 1 hosted a wonderful class meeting aimed at improving parent-child relationships. All the students together with their parents attended the meeting, which was hosted by Mr. Green, the headteacher of Class 2. In the beginning, some students shared stories about their growth including joy and sorrow, after which a short video was shown to offer tips on dealing with parent-child relationships. Finally, students and their parents exchanged letters to learn more about each other. Mr. Green made concluding remarks. The meeting enjoyed huge success and everyone present benefited a lot. Not only did they come to realize “one cannot grow up without pain”, but they also knew how to get along with each other. 【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生为校英文报写一篇报道，介绍班级举办的“亲子关系”主题班会的相关情况。 【详解】1.词汇积累 快乐：joy→delight 建议：tip→suggestion 处理：deal with→handle with 意识到：realize→be aware of 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Last Friday, Class 2, Grade 1 hosted a wonderful class meeting aimed at improving parent-child relationships. 拓展句：Last Friday, Class 2, Grade 1 hosted a wonderful class meeting, which aimed at improving parent-child relationships. 【点睛】[高分句型1] All the students together with their parents attended the meeting, which was hosted by Mr. Green, the headteacher of Class 2.（运用了which引导非限制性定语从句） [高分句型2] Not only did they come to realize “one cannot grow up without pain”, but they also knew how to get along with each other.（运用了部分倒装） 主题03 祝贺信 Passage 1 （24-25高一上·合肥·期中） 假如你是李华，你的笔友李雷在2024年的高考中获得了优异的成绩，被自己的理想大学录取。请你用英语写一封信，向他表示祝贺。内容包括：1.祝贺高考成绩优异；2.肯定他的努力；3.期待交流。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80词左右； 2.适当添加细节。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Dear Li Lei, Learning that you have been admitted to your dream university due to your excellent academic performance in Gao Kao, I am writing to convey my sincere congratulations to you. It came as no surprise that you stood out in the big exam. Not only have you devoted most of your time to your studies, but you have dived into various activities to build up all kinds of skills. Additionally, your selfless help wins you recognition and trust from both your teachers and classmates. You set me a good example. I am wondering if you could offer me some advice on time management in school. Congratulations again! Wait for you to share your experience. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。你的笔友李雷在2024年的高考中获得了优异的成绩，被自己的理想大学录取。要求考生用英语写一封信，向他表示祝贺。 【详解】1.词汇积累 出色的：excellent→outstanding 表达：convey→extend 因为：due to→because of 此外：additionally→besides 2.句式拓展 合并句子 原句：You set me a good example. I am wondering if you could offer me some advice on time management in school. 拓展句：Since you set me a good example, could you offer me some advice on time management in school? 【点睛】[高分句型1] Learning that you have been admitted to your dream university due to your excellent academic performance in Gao Kao, I am writing to convey my sincere congratulations to you. (运用了that引导宾语从句和现在分词作状语) [高分句型2] Not only have you devoted most of your time to your studies, but you have dived into various activities to build up all kinds of skills. (运用了倒装句) 主题04 邀请信 Passage 1 （24-25高一上·江南名校联盟·期中） 假如你是李华，你校将举办外国学生中文演讲比赛（Chinese Speech Contest），主题为中国传统文化。请给你的英国朋友Lucy写封邮件邀请她参加，内容包括： 1.比赛时间地点：  2.演讲话题：  3.报名方式。 注意：1.词数80左右； 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Lucy, I’m writing to invite you to join us in the “Chinese speech contest for foreigners” to be held in our school. The activity is scheduled at 8:00 a.m. on January 20th in the lecture hall. The theme of the speech contest is “differences between eastern and western customs”, through which the foreign students are bound to gain a better understanding of Chinese splendid traditional culture and meanwhile strengthen their love of China. Immensely fascinated by its mysterious culture and age-old history, you can undoubtedly give us a wonderful and impressive performance. You’re expected to sign up for the contest at www.Chinesespeechcontestforforeigners.com. I’d appreciate it if you could accept our invitation. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Lucy写封邮件邀请她参加外国学生中文演讲比赛，主题为中国传统文化。 【详解】1.词汇积累 获得：gain→obtain 加强：strengthen→enhance 同时：meanwhile→at the same time 给某人某物：give sb sth→offer sb sth 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：I’m writing to invite you to join us in the “Chinese speech contest for foreigners” to be held in our school. 拓展句：I’m writing to invite you to join us in the “Chinese speech contest for foreigners”, which will be held in our school. 【点睛】[高分句型1]The theme of the speech contest is “differences between eastern and western customs”, through which the foreign students are bound to gain a better understanding of Chinese splendid traditional culture and meanwhile strengthen their love of China.(运用了“介词+关系代词”引导定语从句) [高分句型2]I’m writing to invite you to join us in the “Chinese speech contest for foreigners” to be held in our school.(运用了动词不定式的被动语态作后置定语) 1 / 2 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$