基础（词句文）05 如何写好衔接过渡句（读后续写讲义）英语高一通用版

基础（词句文）05如何写好衔接句和过渡句（读后续写讲义） ( 读后续写微技能定位 ) 一、衔接句和过渡句基本概念 1.定位 从读后续写中常见解法“三衔接、两过渡、一靓尾”中可窥见衔接过渡句的重要性，解析具体如下图示意。好的衔接过渡句不仅可以使文章连贯流畅，能让故事的情节发展更加自然，比如“suddenly”“then”“after that”“at that critical moment”“finally”等词，可清晰展现事件发生的先后顺序，让读者能跟上故事的节奏，不会感到突兀。她还可以增强逻辑关系：像“however”“therefore”“moreover”等词，能明确句子或段落间的逻辑，如转折、因果、递进等关系，有助于读者理解故事的内在逻辑。而且恰当使用衔接过渡语，体现学生对英语语言的熟练运用，使文章更具可读性和专业性，从而提升整体语言质量和得分。 2.区分 衔接句（Cohesive Sentence） 过渡句（Transitional Sentence） 作用范围 句子层面（微观），连接相邻两句或短句群 段落 / 情节层面（宏观），连接不同段落或大情节模块 核心功能 填补语义间隙，保证局部表达连贯（如动作衔接、逻辑承接） 实现场景 / 时间 / 逻辑转换，引导情节转向新方向 依赖手段 多通过代词、同义替换、逻辑连词（and/but/so）实现 多通过时间状语、地点状语、情节提示词（suddenly/then）实现 3.技巧讲解： 衔接过渡技巧 解释 例句 情节与情感衔接 利用关键词前后呼应：提取前文关键词（如人物、地点、情感），在后文续写中自然复现，形成线索。例如，前文提到“黑夜”“害怕”，续写可围绕这些元素展开。人物的情感变化需与情节发展一致，如前文“害怕”，续写可描述因害怕而采取的行动。 “He tried to recall the way back, but the dense forest made it almost impossible. After hours of wandering, he finally saw a flicker of light in the distance.” 时间衔接 如“suddenly”“then”“after that”“at that critical moment”“finally”等词，可清晰展现事件发生的先后顺序，让读者能跟上故事的节奏；此外，闪回或倒叙处理：若需使用特殊叙事结构，用过渡句标明， “Looking back, she realized how foolish she had been to ignore his warnings.” 空间衔接 通过方位词或环境描写过渡场景，如 in the distance, nearby, on the other side.   The children played in the garden.  Far beyond the fence, a lone wolf watched them silently.  逻辑关系衔接 逻辑关系明确：每个动作、心理等情节的发生要有合理原因，结果可追溯到前文，同时具有转折和递进等逻辑关系显现，因此使文章具有逻辑性。 “Because of his hesitation, he missed the last bus.”“Realizing the danger, she decided to take a different path.” 二、晨读素材必背单词 1.Before they knew it 不知不觉中 2.After what seemed ages 在过了似乎几年的时间后 3.After seemingly a long time 在过了似乎很长一段时间后 4.All of a sudden突然 5.Hearing this听到这个 6.Almost without thinking几乎想都没想 7.Without hesitation 毫不犹豫地 8.Knowing what had happened 知道发生什么事情后 9.One day 有一天  10.Early in the morning 一大早       11.One Sunday afternoon    一个星期天的下午 12.the other day = a few days ago  几天前       13.The next/following day 第二天 14.Just then= Just at that moment  正在那时 15.After that =Later on 然后 16.After a while 一会儿以后    17.about half an hour later 大约半小时以后   18.In the end/ at last/ finally/ eventually   最后 19.from then on 从那以后   20.Surprisingly 令人惊讶的是 21.It was then that I noticed 就在那时我注意到 22.For one frozen moment 有一瞬间 23.After several attempts 经过几次尝试 24.On arriving home 一回到家 三、晨读素材佳句赏析 1.Finally I managed to put my whole head into it，like a cork forced into a bottle． 最后我把我的整个脑袋都塞进了里面，就像把软木塞塞进瓶子里一样。 2.Before long, she will graduate from college and start her new journey in the business world.  不久之后，她将大学毕业，开启在商业世界的新旅程。 3.It was not long before he realized that he had made a serious mistake in his project plan.  没过多久，他就意识到自己在项目计划中犯了一个严重的错误。 4.She was about to explain when Mr. Sharp interrupted her，＂I don’t want any of your excuses.”  她正要解释，突然Sharp先生打断了她：“我不想听你任何的借口。” 5.One day，as he was searching the forest floor for mushrooms， Bald Boy was sure that he could hear a young girl crying. 有一天，当秃头男孩正在森林的地上找寻蘑菇的时候，他确信他听到有一个年轻的姑娘在哭泣。 6.Right as I was about to give up， a Mexican family in a small truck pulled over, and the father bounded out. 正当我想要放弃的时候，一个墨西哥家庭把他们的小卡车停了下来，这家的爸爸从车里跳了下来。 7.On hearing the sound of hammering from a side street， Reuben suddenly had an idea that he could raise money by selling the used nail bags. 听到从小街传来的锤击声，Reuben突然想到，他可以通过出售用过的钉子袋来筹集资金。 8.Seeing that there was a flower stall at the front of the supermarket， he added，“Why shouldn't we buy the lady a flower? It will make her feel better.” 看到超市前面有一个花摊，他补充道：“为什么我们不给这位女士买一朵花呢？这会让她感觉好些。” 9.Unfortunately，the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above． 不幸的是，树木使人们无法从上面看到她。 10.Fortunately, a local shepherd spotted his distress signal and guided him safely back to the village before the storm hit. 幸运的是，一位当地牧羊人发现了他的求救信号，并在暴风雨来临前将他安全地带回了村庄。 11.David and I became nervous．To our great relief，Dad turned down the idea． David和我变得紧张起来。令我们大为欣慰的是，爸爸拒绝了这个想法。 12.What moved us most was that the old folks waved us goodbye in tears． 最让我们感动的是，老人们流着泪向我们告别。 13.Finally he made it to the finish line， but only to get the fourth． 最后他到达了终点线，但只得到了第四名。 14.With everything ready，Bernard started out on his new business.Anxious and full of expectation，he took the popcorn around to the houses and began to sell his popcorn. 一切准备就绪后，伯纳德开始着手他的新生意。既焦虑又满怀期待，他拿着爆米花挨家挨户地开始售卖。 15.A few weeks later，when I almost forgot the contest，there came the news.Much to my surprise/Surprisingly，I beat a lot of participants and won the first prize. 几个星期后，当我几乎忘记比赛的时候，传来了消息。令我吃惊的是，我打败了很多参赛者，获得了第一名。 ( 测试反馈：分级测试 步步为赢 ) 一、晚练高频语块汉译英 1. 不知不觉中 2. 在过了似乎几年的时间后 3. 在过了似乎很长一段时间后 4. 突然 5. 听到这个 6. 几乎想都没想 7. 毫不犹豫地 8. 知道发生什么事情后 9. 有一天  10. 一大早       11.    一个星期天的下午 12.  几天前       13. 第二天 14.  正在那时 15. 然后 16. 一会儿以后    17. 大约半小时以后   18.   最后 19. 从那以后,    20. 令人惊讶的是 21. 就在那时我注意到 22. 有一瞬间 23. 经过几次尝试 24. 一回到家 【参考答案】 1.Before they knew it 不知不觉中 2.After what seemed ages 在过了似乎几年的时间后 3.After seemingly a long time 在过了似乎很长一段时间后 4.All of a sudden突然 5.Hearing this听到这个 6.Almost without thinking几乎想都没想 7.Without hesitation 毫不犹豫地 8.Knowing what had happened 知道发生什么事情后 9.One day 有一天  10.Early in the morning 一大早       11.One Sunday afternoon    一个星期天的下午 12.the other day = a few days ago  几天前       13.The next/following day 第二天 14.Just then= Just at that moment  正在那时 15.After that =Later on 然后 16.After a while 一会儿以后    17.about half an hour later 大约半小时以后   18.In the end/ at last/ finally/ eventually   最后 19.from then on 从那以后   20.Surprisingly 令人惊讶的是 21.It was then that I noticed 就在那时我注意到 22.For one frozen moment 有一瞬间 23.After several attempts 经过几次尝试 24.On arriving home 一回到家 二、晚练佳句赏析汉译英 1.听到远处的呼救声，他瞬间想到可以用手机报警。（on hearing; occur） 2.看到站台有位老人颤巍巍站立，她快步挤过人群去搀扶。（seeing; push through） 3.正当我要关灯睡觉时，突然想起作业还没完成。（be about to; when） 4.所有道具就位后，导演挥手示意拍摄开始。（with; signal） 5.不幸的是，暴雨让露营的计划彻底泡汤了。（unfortunately; ruin） 6.没过多久，他们就察觉邻居的行为藏着蹊跷。（it was not long before; odd） 7.令大家感动的是，消防员冒死救出了被困的孩子。（much to; risk） 8.当露西在阁楼整理旧物时，发现了母亲的日记本。（as; sort） 9.幸运的是，登山者的哨声引来了救援直升机。（fortunately; whistle） 10.刚踏入博物馆大厅，他就被一幅古画吸引住了。（on stepping; attract） 【参考答案】 1.On hearing the cry for help in the distance, it occurred to him instantly that he could call the police with his phone. 2.Seeing an old man trembling at the platform, she quickly pushed through the crowd to offer support. 3.I was about to turn off the light and sleep when I suddenly remembered the homework was unfinished. 4.With all props in place, the director waved to signal the start of filming. 5.Unfortunately, the heavy rain ruined the camping plan completely. 6.It was not long before they noticed something odd about their neighbor’s behavior. 7.Much to everyone’s admiration, the firefighter risked his life to rescue the trapped child. 8.As Lucy was sorting old items in the attic, she discovered her mother’s diary. 9.Fortunately, the climber’s whistle attracted the rescue helicopter. 10.On stepping into the museum hall, he was attracted by an ancient painting. ( 仿写实战：模仿借鉴 学以致用 ) 一、读后续写情景运用—单句 1.写完告别信后，他犹豫着把信放进了邮筒。 ______ the farewell letter, he hesitated and put it into the mailbox. 2.他冲上楼梯，呼吸因奔跑变得急促。 He dashed up the stairs, ______ from running. 3.穿过那片浓雾，一座废弃的城堡赫然出现在眼前。 ______ the thick fog, an abandoned castle suddenly came into sight. 4.摸到口袋里的旧照片，她的眼神柔和了下来。 Touching the old photo in her pocket, ______. 5.正当杰克要点燃篝火时，一阵强风扑灭了火柴。 Just as Jack was about to light the campfire, ______ blew out the match. 【参考答案】 1.After writing （时间过渡，“after + 动名词” 连接 “写信” 与 “放邮筒” 的动作序列，体现句间顺承衔接。） 2.his breath coming fast （细节衔接，独立主格结构（breath + 现在分词），强化动作连贯性。） 3.Making their way through （空间场景过渡，现在分词短语表 “穿越浓雾” 的过程，自然衔接 “雾中” 到 “发现城堡” 的场景转换。） 4.her eyes softened （情绪情感衔接，独立主格逻辑（touching... 后接眼神变化），承接 “摸照片” 的动作，传递隐性情绪，属于句间情感衔接。） 5.a strong gust of wind （主题情节过渡，“just as” 引导时间从句，连接 “点火” 与 “风灭火柴” 的冲突，制造情节转折，推动叙事发展。） 二、读后续写情景运用—小情景小段落 阅读所给首句，在了解首句设定的情境后，用一句话续写 动作、神情或情节过渡（需体现句间衔接或场景转换逻辑）。 1. [校园社团・紧张揭晓] As the club leader announced the new member list, Emma held her breath, her fingers twisting the hem of her shirt. 2. [家庭意外・焦急应对] When Dad opened the door and saw the broken vase on the floor, his eyebrows furrowed. 3. [朋友互助・温暖行动] Spotting Tom struggling with the heavy backpack on the stairs, Lisa quickened her pace. 4. [冒险探索・意外发现] While hiking in the woods and looking for bird nests, Ben heard a strange rustling from the bushes. 5. [节日惊喜・雀跃反应] Unwrapping the birthday present and finding a handmade scrapbook, Amy’s mouth dropped open. 6. [自然邂逅・震撼瞬间] Standing on the beach at dawn and waiting for the sunrise, Mia suddenly gasped. 【参考答案】 1. [校园社团・紧张揭晓] Then her eyes lit up like stars as she caught her name, and she jumped up, clapping wildly. 2. [家庭意外・焦急应对] Before he could speak, his gaze fell on the guilty face of his little son, and he sighed, kneeling to pick up the pieces gently. 3. [朋友互助・温暖行动] She dashed over, took half of the backpack onto her shoulder without a word, and gave Tom a determined nod. 4. [冒险探索・意外发现] His heart pounding faster, he crept forward cautiously, only to find a fluffy rabbit trapped in a net. 5. [节日惊喜・雀跃反应] Tears of joy welling up in her eyes, she threw her arms around her mom, kissing the scrapbook’s cover repeatedly. 6. [自然邂逅・震撼瞬间] A streak of golden light burst from the horizon, painting the sky red, and she stood there, awestruck, her hands trembling slightly. 三、读后续写情景运用—语篇 1.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 I met Gunter on a cold, wet and unforgettable evening in September. I had planned to fly to Vienna and take a bus to Prague for a conference. Due to a big storm, my flight had been delayed by an hour and a half. I touched down in Vienna just 30 minutes before the departure of the last bus to Prague. The moment I got off the plane, I ran like crazy through the airport building and jumped into the first taxi on the rank without a second thought. That was when I met Gunter. I told him where I was going, but he said he hadn’t heard of the bus station. I thought my pronunciation was the problem, so I explained again more slowly, but he still looked confused. When I was about to give up, Gunter fished out his little phone and rang up a friend. After a heated discussion that lasted for what seemed like a century, Gunter put his phone down and started the car. Finally, with just two minutes to spare we rolled into the bus station. Thankfully, there was a long queue still waiting to board the bus. Gunter parked the taxi behind the bus, turned around, and looked at me with a big smile on his face. "We made it," he said. Just then I realised that I had in my wallet. I flashed him an apologetic smile as I pulled out my Portuguese bank card. He tried it several times, but the card machine just did not play along. A feeling of helplessness washed over me as I saw the bus queue thinning out. At this moment, Gunter pointed towards the waiting hall of the bus station. There at the entrance, was a cash machine. I jumped out of the car, made a mad run for the machine, and popped my card in, only to read the message: "Out of order. Sorry." 1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1： I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news. ________________________________________ Paragraph 2： Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised. ___________________ 【词汇积累】 ①　delay 延误 ②　touch down （飞机）降落 ③　without a second thought 毫不犹豫 ④　fish out 掏出 ⑤　ring up 打电话 ⑥　heated discussion 激烈的讨论 ⑦　with...to spare 富余…… 时间 ⑧　roll into 驶入 ⑨　helplessness 无助感 ⑩　out of order （设备）故障 【点睛】高分句型 [高分句型 1] The moment I got off the plane, I ran like crazy through the airport building and jumped into the first taxi on the rank without a second thought.（the moment 引导时间状语从句，并列谓语体现动作连贯性，without a second thought 强化决策果断性 ） [高分句型 2] After a heated discussion that lasted for what seemed like a century, Gunter put his phone down and started the car.（after 引导时间状语，嵌套 that 定语从句（修饰 discussion）和 what 宾语从句（作 lasted for 宾语），多层从句提升句式复杂度 ） [高分句型 3] I jumped out of the car, made a mad run for the machine, and popped my card in, only to read the message: "Out of order. Sorry."（并列谓语构建 “跳车→狂奔→插卡” 动作链，only to do 表意外结果，制造情节冲突 ） 【续写线索】 故事情节线（情感线）：参加会议→暴风雨航班延误→下飞机后打出租车去公共汽车站（like crazy）→出租车上沟通不畅（confused，seemed like a century）→公共汽车还有两分钟才开（thankfully, a long queue， a big smile）→发现没带现金（zero cash，apologetic smile）→银行卡支付不了（queue thinning out, helplessness）→去提款机取钱（jumped out the car, made a made run，bad news）→…… 【续写构思】 （一）续写第一段构思: 根据续写段第一段首句“I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news.”和续写段第二段首句提到的“Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised.”，运用逆向思维可以推断：我把坏消息告诉了Gunter后，也对Gunter做出了承诺了。同时，利用主位推进法和GN策略，可以试问： ①“我”是具体如何表达这个坏消息的？ 【衔接句1】 ② Gunter听到这个消息后，会有什么样的表情和心理反应？他又说了什么？ 【过渡句1】 ③“我”对Gunter承诺了什么？是不是关于打的费怎么还的建议？ 【衔接句2】 ④后来“我”有没有顺利坐上末班公共汽车？ （二）续写第二段构思: 根据续写段第二段段首句“Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised.”，运用主位推进法和GN策略，可以试问： ①“我”打电话和说Gunter了什么，Gunter又回了什么？ 【衔接句3】 ②“我”和Gunter见面的情景是怎样的？“我”把打的的钱给Gunter了的？他收了吗？ 【过渡句2】 ③文章结尾升华，整件事情反映了什么？ 【靓尾句】 【参考答案】 I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news. His eyes widened for a moment, but then he simply nodded, understanding the situation. “Don’t worry,” he said, “I trust you. Go catch your bus, and we can settle the fare later.” I was taken aback by his kindness. I promised to call him as soon as I returned to Vienna to arrange payment. With a grateful heart, I dashed towards the bus, which, fortunately, was still boarding. Thanks to Gunter, I made it just in time. Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised. His voice was warm over the phone, and he remembered me immediately. “Ah, the conference traveler!” he exclaimed. We met at a small café near the bus station. I handed him the fare, adding a little extra for his trouble. He tried to refuse the extra money, but I insisted. “It’s the least I can do,” I said. As we parted ways, I realized that this encounter wasn’t just about settling a debt; it was a reminder of the unexpected kindness that can be found in strangers. 8 / 10 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 基础（词句文）05如何写好衔接句和过渡句（读后续写讲义） ( 读后续写微技能定位 ) 一、衔接句和过渡句基本概念 1.定位 从读后续写中常见解法“三衔接、两过渡、一靓尾”中可窥见衔接过渡句的重要性，解析具体如下图示意。好的衔接过渡句不仅可以使文章连贯流畅，能让故事的情节发展更加自然，比如“suddenly”“then”“after that”“at that critical moment”“finally”等词，可清晰展现事件发生的先后顺序，让读者能跟上故事的节奏，不会感到突兀。她还可以增强逻辑关系：像“however”“therefore”“moreover”等词，能明确句子或段落间的逻辑，如转折、因果、递进等关系，有助于读者理解故事的内在逻辑。而且恰当使用衔接过渡语，体现学生对英语语言的熟练运用，使文章更具可读性和专业性，从而提升整体语言质量和得分。 2.区分 衔接句（Cohesive Sentence） 过渡句（Transitional Sentence） 作用范围 句子层面（微观），连接相邻两句或短句群 段落 / 情节层面（宏观），连接不同段落或大情节模块 核心功能 填补语义间隙，保证局部表达连贯（如动作衔接、逻辑承接） 实现场景 / 时间 / 逻辑转换，引导情节转向新方向 依赖手段 多通过代词、同义替换、逻辑连词（and/but/so）实现 多通过时间状语、地点状语、情节提示词（suddenly/then）实现 3.技巧讲解： 衔接过渡技巧 解释 例句 情节与情感衔接 利用关键词前后呼应：提取前文关键词（如人物、地点、情感），在后文续写中自然复现，形成线索。例如，前文提到“黑夜”“害怕”，续写可围绕这些元素展开。人物的情感变化需与情节发展一致，如前文“害怕”，续写可描述因害怕而采取的行动。 “He tried to recall the way back, but the dense forest made it almost impossible. After hours of wandering, he finally saw a flicker of light in the distance.” 时间衔接 如“suddenly”“then”“after that”“at that critical moment”“finally”等词，可清晰展现事件发生的先后顺序，让读者能跟上故事的节奏；此外，闪回或倒叙处理：若需使用特殊叙事结构，用过渡句标明， “Looking back, she realized how foolish she had been to ignore his warnings.” 空间衔接 通过方位词或环境描写过渡场景，如 in the distance, nearby, on the other side.   The children played in the garden.  Far beyond the fence, a lone wolf watched them silently.  逻辑关系衔接 逻辑关系明确：每个动作、心理等情节的发生要有合理原因，结果可追溯到前文，同时具有转折和递进等逻辑关系显现，因此使文章具有逻辑性。 “Because of his hesitation, he missed the last bus.”“Realizing the danger, she decided to take a different path.” 二、晨读素材必背单词 1.Before they knew it 不知不觉中 2.After what seemed ages 在过了似乎几年的时间后 3.After seemingly a long time 在过了似乎很长一段时间后 4.All of a sudden突然 5.Hearing this听到这个 6.Almost without thinking几乎想都没想 7.Without hesitation 毫不犹豫地 8.Knowing what had happened 知道发生什么事情后 9.One day 有一天  10.Early in the morning 一大早       11.One Sunday afternoon    一个星期天的下午 12.the other day = a few days ago  几天前       13.The next/following day 第二天 14.Just then= Just at that moment  正在那时 15.After that =Later on 然后 16.After a while 一会儿以后    17.about half an hour later 大约半小时以后   18.In the end/ at last/ finally/ eventually   最后 19.from then on 从那以后   20.Surprisingly 令人惊讶的是 21.It was then that I noticed 就在那时我注意到 22.For one frozen moment 有一瞬间 23.After several attempts 经过几次尝试 24.On arriving home 一回到家 三、晨读素材佳句赏析 1.Finally I managed to put my whole head into it，like a cork forced into a bottle． 最后我把我的整个脑袋都塞进了里面，就像把软木塞塞进瓶子里一样。 2.Before long, she will graduate from college and start her new journey in the business world.  不久之后，她将大学毕业，开启在商业世界的新旅程。 3.It was not long before he realized that he had made a serious mistake in his project plan.  没过多久，他就意识到自己在项目计划中犯了一个严重的错误。 4.She was about to explain when Mr. Sharp interrupted her，＂I don’t want any of your excuses.”  她正要解释，突然Sharp先生打断了她：“我不想听你任何的借口。” 5.One day，as he was searching the forest floor for mushrooms， Bald Boy was sure that he could hear a young girl crying. 有一天，当秃头男孩正在森林的地上找寻蘑菇的时候，他确信他听到有一个年轻的姑娘在哭泣。 6.Right as I was about to give up， a Mexican family in a small truck pulled over, and the father bounded out. 正当我想要放弃的时候，一个墨西哥家庭把他们的小卡车停了下来，这家的爸爸从车里跳了下来。 7.On hearing the sound of hammering from a side street， Reuben suddenly had an idea that he could raise money by selling the used nail bags. 听到从小街传来的锤击声，Reuben突然想到，他可以通过出售用过的钉子袋来筹集资金。 8.Seeing that there was a flower stall at the front of the supermarket， he added，“Why shouldn't we buy the lady a flower? It will make her feel better.” 看到超市前面有一个花摊，他补充道：“为什么我们不给这位女士买一朵花呢？这会让她感觉好些。” 9.Unfortunately，the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above． 不幸的是，树木使人们无法从上面看到她。 10.Fortunately, a local shepherd spotted his distress signal and guided him safely back to the village before the storm hit. 幸运的是，一位当地牧羊人发现了他的求救信号，并在暴风雨来临前将他安全地带回了村庄。 11.David and I became nervous．To our great relief，Dad turned down the idea． David和我变得紧张起来。令我们大为欣慰的是，爸爸拒绝了这个想法。 12.What moved us most was that the old folks waved us goodbye in tears． 最让我们感动的是，老人们流着泪向我们告别。 13.Finally he made it to the finish line， but only to get the fourth． 最后他到达了终点线，但只得到了第四名。 14.With everything ready，Bernard started out on his new business.Anxious and full of expectation，he took the popcorn around to the houses and began to sell his popcorn. 一切准备就绪后，伯纳德开始着手他的新生意。既焦虑又满怀期待，他拿着爆米花挨家挨户地开始售卖。 15.A few weeks later，when I almost forgot the contest，there came the news.Much to my surprise/Surprisingly，I beat a lot of participants and won the first prize. 几个星期后，当我几乎忘记比赛的时候，传来了消息。令我吃惊的是，我打败了很多参赛者，获得了第一名。 ( 测试反馈：分级测试 步步为赢 ) 一、晚练高频语块汉译英 1. 不知不觉中 2. 在过了似乎几年的时间后 3. 在过了似乎很长一段时间后 4. 突然 5. 听到这个 6. 几乎想都没想 7. 毫不犹豫地 8. 知道发生什么事情后 9. 有一天  10. 一大早       11.    一个星期天的下午 12.  几天前       13. 第二天 14.  正在那时 15. 然后 16. 一会儿以后    17. 大约半小时以后   18.   最后 19. 从那以后,    20. 令人惊讶的是 21. 就在那时我注意到 22. 有一瞬间 23. 经过几次尝试 24. 一回到家 二、晚练佳句赏析汉译英 1.听到远处的呼救声，他瞬间想到可以用手机报警。（on hearing; occur） 2.看到站台有位老人颤巍巍站立，她快步挤过人群去搀扶。（seeing; push through） 3.正当我要关灯睡觉时，突然想起作业还没完成。（be about to; when） 4.所有道具就位后，导演挥手示意拍摄开始。（with; signal） 5.不幸的是，暴雨让露营的计划彻底泡汤了。（unfortunately; ruin） 6.没过多久，他们就察觉邻居的行为藏着蹊跷。（it was not long before; odd） 7.令大家感动的是，消防员冒死救出了被困的孩子。（much to; risk） 8.当露西在阁楼整理旧物时，发现了母亲的日记本。（as; sort） 9.幸运的是，登山者的哨声引来了救援直升机。（fortunately; whistle） 10.刚踏入博物馆大厅，他就被一幅古画吸引住了。（on stepping; attract） ( 仿写实战：模仿借鉴 学以致用 ) 一、读后续写情景运用—单句 1.写完告别信后，他犹豫着把信放进了邮筒。 ______ the farewell letter, he hesitated and put it into the mailbox. 2.他冲上楼梯，呼吸因奔跑变得急促。 He dashed up the stairs, ______ from running. 3.穿过那片浓雾，一座废弃的城堡赫然出现在眼前。 ______ the thick fog, an abandoned castle suddenly came into sight. 4.摸到口袋里的旧照片，她的眼神柔和了下来。 Touching the old photo in her pocket, ______. 5.正当杰克要点燃篝火时，一阵强风扑灭了火柴。 Just as Jack was about to light the campfire, ______ blew out the match. 二、读后续写情景运用—小情景小段落 阅读所给首句，在了解首句设定的情境后，用一句话续写 动作、神情或情节过渡（需体现句间衔接或场景转换逻辑）。 1. [校园社团・紧张揭晓] As the club leader announced the new member list, Emma held her breath, her fingers twisting the hem of her shirt. 2. [家庭意外・焦急应对] When Dad opened the door and saw the broken vase on the floor, his eyebrows furrowed. 3. [朋友互助・温暖行动] Spotting Tom struggling with the heavy backpack on the stairs, Lisa quickened her pace. 4. [冒险探索・意外发现] While hiking in the woods and looking for bird nests, Ben heard a strange rustling from the bushes. 5. [节日惊喜・雀跃反应] Unwrapping the birthday present and finding a handmade scrapbook, Amy’s mouth dropped open. 6. [自然邂逅・震撼瞬间] Standing on the beach at dawn and waiting for the sunrise, Mia suddenly gasped. 三、读后续写情景运用—语篇 1.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 I met Gunter on a cold, wet and unforgettable evening in September. I had planned to fly to Vienna and take a bus to Prague for a conference. Due to a big storm, my flight had been delayed by an hour and a half. I touched down in Vienna just 30 minutes before the departure of the last bus to Prague. The moment I got off the plane, I ran like crazy through the airport building and jumped into the first taxi on the rank without a second thought. That was when I met Gunter. I told him where I was going, but he said he hadn’t heard of the bus station. I thought my pronunciation was the problem, so I explained again more slowly, but he still looked confused. When I was about to give up, Gunter fished out his little phone and rang up a friend. After a heated discussion that lasted for what seemed like a century, Gunter put his phone down and started the car. Finally, with just two minutes to spare we rolled into the bus station. Thankfully, there was a long queue still waiting to board the bus. Gunter parked the taxi behind the bus, turned around, and looked at me with a big smile on his face. "We made it," he said. Just then I realised that I had in my wallet. I flashed him an apologetic smile as I pulled out my Portuguese bank card. He tried it several times, but the card machine just did not play along. A feeling of helplessness washed over me as I saw the bus queue thinning out. At this moment, Gunter pointed towards the waiting hall of the bus station. There at the entrance, was a cash machine. I jumped out of the car, made a mad run for the machine, and popped my card in, only to read the message: "Out of order. Sorry." 1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1： I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news. ________________________________________ Paragraph 2： Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised. ___________________ 【词汇积累】 ①　delay 延误 ②　touch down （飞机）降落 ③　without a second thought 毫不犹豫 ④　fish out 掏出 ⑤　ring up 打电话 ⑥　heated discussion 激烈的讨论 ⑦　with...to spare 富余…… 时间 ⑧　roll into 驶入 ⑨　helplessness 无助感 ⑩　out of order （设备）故障 【点睛】高分句型 [高分句型 1] The moment I got off the plane, I ran like crazy through the airport building and jumped into the first taxi on the rank without a second thought.（the moment 引导时间状语从句，并列谓语体现动作连贯性，without a second thought 强化决策果断性 ） [高分句型 2] After a heated discussion that lasted for what seemed like a century, Gunter put his phone down and started the car.（after 引导时间状语，嵌套 that 定语从句（修饰 discussion）和 what 宾语从句（作 lasted for 宾语），多层从句提升句式复杂度 ） [高分句型 3] I jumped out of the car, made a mad run for the machine, and popped my card in, only to read the message: "Out of order. Sorry."（并列谓语构建 “跳车→狂奔→插卡” 动作链，only to do 表意外结果，制造情节冲突 ） 【续写线索】 故事情节线（情感线）：参加会议→暴风雨航班延误→下飞机后打出租车去公共汽车站（like crazy）→出租车上沟通不畅（confused，seemed like a century）→公共汽车还有两分钟才开（thankfully, a long queue， a big smile）→发现没带现金（zero cash，apologetic smile）→银行卡支付不了（queue thinning out, helplessness）→去提款机取钱（jumped out the car, made a made run，bad news）→…… 【续写构思】 （一）续写第一段构思: 根据续写段第一段首句“I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news.”和续写段第二段首句提到的“Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised.”，运用逆向思维可以推断：我把坏消息告诉了Gunter后，也对Gunter做出了承诺了。同时，利用主位推进法和GN策略，可以试问： ①“我”是具体如何表达这个坏消息的？ 【衔接句1】 ② Gunter听到这个消息后，会有什么样的表情和心理反应？他又说了什么？ 【过渡句1】 ③“我”对Gunter承诺了什么？是不是关于打的费怎么还的建议？ 【衔接句2】 ④后来“我”有没有顺利坐上末班公共汽车？ （二）续写第二段构思: 根据续写段第二段段首句“Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised.”，运用主位推进法和GN策略，可以试问： ①“我”打电话和说Gunter了什么，Gunter又回了什么？ 【衔接句3】 ②“我”和Gunter见面的情景是怎样的？“我”把打的的钱给Gunter了的？他收了吗？ 【过渡句2】 ③文章结尾升华，整件事情反映了什么？ 【靓尾句】 8 / 10 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$