焦点 40 书面表达【讲练结合】-备考2026年中考英语新课标（核心素养）同步大师课堂之语法知识统统过（全国通用）

焦点40 书面表达 备考2026年中考英语新课标（核心素养）同步大师课堂之语法知识统统过 一、预测分析​ 1.题材多样化​ •趋势：涵盖社会热点（如环保、科技、传统文化）、青少年成长（如心理健康、课外活动）、校园生活（如垃圾分类、志愿服务）等。 •本土化内容：可能涉及地方特色（如河南豫剧、安徽黄山松、北京中轴线保护）的英文描述，需积累相关词汇。 2.题型创新​ •应用文：书信（建议信/感谢信）、通知（活动安排）、演讲稿等占比约40%。 •议论文：聚焦观点对比（如“线上学习 vs 线下学习”）或问题解决型（如“如何缓解学业压力”）。 •图表/图画作文：需描述数据趋势并分析（如“安徽中学生阅读习惯调查”）。 3.评分标准升级​ •语言维度：鼓励使用高阶词汇（如“revolutionary”替代“new”）和复杂句式（倒装句、虚拟语气）。 •内容维度：强调观点新颖性（如环保类作文需提出可操作建议）。 二、重难点解析​ 1.语言准确性​ •语法错误：主谓一致、时态混乱（如过去完成时误用）、冠词缺失（如“play piano”漏“the”）。 •中式英语：如“I very like it”（应改为“I like it very much”）。 2.逻辑与结构​ •段落衔接生硬：缺乏过渡词（如“however/therefore”），导致逻辑断裂。 •论据不足：议论文仅用“First...Second...”但缺乏具体案例支撑（如环保议题未结合数据）。 3.文化表达与思辨性​ •本土文化词汇误用：如“京剧—Peking Opera”拼写错误。 •辩证思维：议论文需呈现正反观点（如“AI的利弊”需兼顾利弊分析）。 三、解题技巧与备考策略​ 1.审题与框架构建​ •明确题型：区分应用文（书信/演讲稿）与议论文，确定人称（第一/第三人称）及时态（一般现在时为主）。 •三段式结构： •开头：背景引入（如“With the development of technology...”）。 •主体：分点论述（2-3个论点，每点配例证）。 •结尾：总结观点+呼吁/展望（如“Let’s take action to...”）。 2.语言优化与多样化​ •高级词汇替换：如“good→beneficial”“important→crucial”。 •复合句应用：定语从句（Students who...）、条件句（If AI is properly regulated...）。 3.逻辑衔接与过渡​ •使用过渡词：表因果（therefore）、对比（on the other hand）、举例（for instance）。 •段落主题句：确保每段首句明确中心思想。 4.检查与润色​ •语法复查：主谓一致、时态一致性、非谓语动词（to do/doing）。 •卷面规范：避免涂改，保持字迹工整。 5.备考建议​ •分类素材积累：按“文化”“科技”“环保”整理高频词汇与句型。 •限时模拟训练：每周完成2-3篇真题写作，严格控制在20分钟内。 •互评互改：小组内交换作文，标注语法错误与逻辑漏洞。 四、范文示例与解析​ ​题目：How to Protect Our Environment ​范文片段： Firstly, we can start by reducing waste. For instance, we should practice the three Rs: Reduce, Reuse, and Recycle. By bringing reusable bags when shopping, we can minimize plastic pollution. Secondly, conserving energy is crucial. Turning off lights and using energy-efficient appliances can significantly reduce our carbon footprint. ​解析： •结构：总分总，分点论述（Reduce/Reuse/Recycle, Energy Conservation）。 •语言：使用具体措施（reusable bags）和数据支撑（carbon footprint）。 五、总结​ 中考英语书面表达将更注重语言综合运用能力与思辨性，考生需通过以下策略提升： 1.积累高频主题词汇与模板句式； 2.强化逻辑衔接与语法准确性； 3.结合真题限时训练，关注社会热点与本土文化。 通过系统备考，考生可有效应对题型变化，提升写作得分率。 A 每个人都有各种各样的习惯，有些习惯能够助你成长，有些习惯会妨碍你进步。请结合个人实际情况，以“My Habits”为题，写一篇短文。 要点提示： 1.你有什么好习惯，请举例说明该习惯使你得到了哪些益处； 2.你有什么不良习惯，该习惯对你有什么影响,你应当如何改进。 写作要求： 1.词数80左右； 2.根据要点提示，适当发挥； 3.短文中不得出现真实的姓名及校名。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】 My Habits 　　Everybody has both good habits and bad ones. So do I. 　　I have many good habits. I always read English books after supper and often help my parents with housework. I also have bad habits. I usually eat junk food and I hardly exercise. To be in good health, I decide to change my bad habits. First, I try to eat more vegetables and fruit. Second, I will do sports more than three times a week. In a word, I should give up the bad habits and make my life better. 【难度】0.4 【知识点】自我管理 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：主要时态为一般现在时； ③提示：根据所给内容要点完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点明写作主题； 第二步，介绍好习惯和不良习惯； 第三步，介绍自己的做法。 [亮点词汇] ①both ...and... ……和…… ②hardly几乎不 ③In a word总之 [高分句型] ①So do I.（倒装句） ②To be in good health, I decide to change my bad habits.（动词不定式作目的状语） B 幸福可以是偶得礼物时的欣喜，可以是帮助他人时的愉悦……你觉得幸福是什么呢？请你写一篇英语短文向学校英语报投稿，分享你的经历，谈谈你对幸福的理解。 参考词汇（仅供选择使用）：achieve，share，have fun，be thankful to 注意： 1）词数：80—100；短文首句已给出，不计入总词数； 2）文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息。 Happiness is everywhere around us.____________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Happiness is everywhere around us. When asked what happiness is, many people will give the answer like making a lot of money because money and fame bring people the great sense of satisfaction. But, in my eyes, staying with my families really makes me happy for the simple and sincere love among us can last forever throughout our life. In the sixth grade of primary school, I had a high fever and had to be hospitalized for two weeks. My father sent me delicious food made by my mother and talked with me every day. My little sister Lucy often called me and cared about my health. When I was awake at night, I found my father sleeping on the chair beside my bed, and I suddenly thought that staying with families was the biggest happiness and I was the happiest person in the world. 【难度】0.4 【知识点】哲理感悟、叙事忆旧 【详解】[总体分析]   ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；   ②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；   ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。 [写作步骤]   第一步，讲述对幸福的理解；   第二步，讲述一件让自己感觉幸福的经历。 [亮点词汇]   ①the sense of……的感觉 ②have to不得不 ③care about关心 [高分句型]   ①When asked what happiness is, many people will give the answer like making a lot of money because money and fame bring people the great sense of satisfaction.（when引导时间状语从句）   C 下图描述了李华今年春节得到压岁钱(lucky money)之后，他和父母对于如何花压岁钱产生的不同观点。请根据图片提示，用英语写一篇100词左右的短文。 要求： 1．完整叙述图片内容。 2．结合自己的实际陈述个人观点。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 This Spring Festival, LiHua got some lucky money from his relatives. He was very happy and he wanted to buy something delicious and something to have fun. But his parents have different opinions about this. His mother wants him to buy books while his father wants him to help the poor students in the village. In my opinion, I think both his mother and his father are right. It’s hard to make a choice between them. I have a good idea. Lihua can use some money to buy some books, then he will get more knowledge and improve himself. As for the rest of the lucky money, he can show his kindness and give them away to the students. Then he will feel happier from helping others. 【难度】0.4 【知识点】家人和亲人、青少年问题、意见/建议 【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示图片，详细描述图片内容，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。 2. 写作指导：写作时要紧扣主题结合图片给出的提示，本文应该用第一人称、第三人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般现在时，提出建议可以多用情态动词；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。 D 假定你是李辉。你的英国朋友Mike想阅读中国经典名著。请你写封邮件，向他推荐《西游记》。要点如下： 1.风趣幽默，深受喜爱； 2.团队合作，历险克难； 3.追逐梦想，永不言弃。 注意： 1.词数80～100； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：character（n.人物）；overcome（v.克服） Dear Mike, Since you want to read Chinese classic works, I’d like to recommend Journey to the West to you. ___________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hui 【答案】 Dear Mike, Since you want to read Chinese classic works, I’d like to recommend Journey to the West to you. The book Journey to the West was written by Wu Cheng’en during the Ming dynasty. It tells a story about the Tang monk Xuanzang and his three disciples. The book is humorous and well received. In the book, the four main characters show teamwork as they overcame numerous difficulties. Finally, they attained the true Buddhist scriptures. This story tells us to chase our dreams and never give up. You are bound to enjoy yourself while reading the novel and you can share with me your opinions whenever you like. Yours, Li Hui 【难度】0.4 【知识点】阅读、文学名著 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇邮件作文。要求根据提示内容，向Mike介绍《西游记》这本书。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。 2.写作指导：写作时要以第三人称来介绍，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段详细介绍这本书的内容以及想表达的哲理；第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。 A （2025·黑龙江·中考真题） 话题作文：春节、清明节、端午节、中秋节……中华民族上下五千年形成了内涵丰富、形式多样的节日文化。学校英语社团决定开展“多彩的传统节日”主题宣传活动，请用英语介绍一个你最喜欢的中国传统节日。 1. 话题作文。 2. 词数：80—100之间。 3. 字迹工整，语法正确，意思连贯，合乎逻辑，可适当发挥。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 My favourite traditional festival is the Spring Festival. Let me introduce it to you. It is on the first day of the first lunar month. Family members usually get together to eat a big dinner. We can see red things everywhere, because they mean happiness and good fortune. Children will get lucky money from their parents. People always have a long holiday to relax. It’s a new beginning of the year. It not only means family reunion, but also shows Chinese traditional culture. I like the Spring Festival very much. 【难度】0.65 【知识点】传统节日 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，为话题作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意介绍节日的时间、庆祝方式、象征意义等，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开门见山，点明最喜欢的传统节日； 第二步，具体介绍节日的时间、庆祝方式、象征意义等； 第三步，总结并表达对这个节日的喜爱之情。 [亮点词汇] ① get together 团聚 ② good fortune 好运 ③ lucky money 压岁钱 ④ family reunion 家庭团聚 ⑤ traditional culture 传统文化 [高分句型] ① Family members usually get together to eat a big dinner.（动词不定式作目的状语） ② We can see red things everywhere, because they mean happiness and good fortune.（because引导的原因状语从句） B （2025·江苏徐州·中考真题） 2025年是丹麦作家安徒生诞辰220周年。为了纪念这位用童话点亮世界的文学大师，阳光中学英文社团拟组织纪念活动，现面向全校学生征集活动方案。假设你是该校九年级学生李华，请你根据以下提示写一篇短文，提出你的方案。 IDEAS NEEDED!The year 2025 marks the Danish writer Andersen’s 220th birthday! Sunshine English Club will organize activities in memory of him. Your IDEAS are needed! Please let us know: ● Time: Weekday or weekend? Why? ● Place: School hall or city park? Why? ● Activities: Story-telling, role-play And ... (at least ONE) ● Your hope: … We need your creative ideas! 注意： 1.短文需包括所给要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2.词数90左右。短文已给出的部分 (见答题卡) 不计入总词数； 3.短文不得透露个人信息。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 To mark the Danish writer Andersen’s 220th birthday, here’s my plan for the activity. For the time, I suggest choosing a weekend. Most students are free then, so more can take part in it. As for the place, the school hall is better. It’s comfortable and convenient, protecting us from bad weather. Activities will be diverse. Besides story-telling and role-play, we can have a “Fairy Tale Creation” session. Students can write their own tales inspired by Andersen. I hope this activity will not only help us better understand Andersen’s works but also spark our love for fairy tales and creativity. 【难度】0.65 【知识点】计划、文体活动 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：这是一篇材料作文； ②时态：主要采用“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”； ③提示：根据写作要点展开，不要遗漏要点，需适当补充；注意条理清晰和语法正确。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作目的； 第二步，介绍活动的时间、地点和具体活动方案。 第三步，表达期待。 [亮点词汇] ①as for至于 ②protect sb from sth保护某人免于 ③comfortable and convenient舒适又方便 [高分句型] I hope this activity will not only help us better understand Andersen’s works but also spark our love for fairy tales and creativity. (not only...but also结构) C （2025·黑龙江·中考真题） 图示作文：仔细观察图片，展开合理想象，然后用英语写一篇短文。 要求： 1. 图示作文。 2. 词数：80-100之间。 3. 字迹工整，语法正确，意思连贯，合乎逻辑，可适当发挥。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 It was Lily’s mom’s birthday. Lily went back home happily because she wanted to give a surprise to her mom. She prepared to make long noodles for mom. It is a symbol of long life. She wished her mom to live happily and healthily. Meanwhile, she added eggs to the noodles. She thought eggs mean life and good luck. As soon as Lily finished the delicious noodles, her mom came back. Lily said, “Happy birthday, mom!” Her mom was so moved that she almost cried. What a good girl Lily is! 【难度】0.65 【知识点】家人和亲人、烹饪、叙事忆旧 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇看图作文； ②时态：以“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：根据图示和要求书写内容，注意不要遗漏图片上的信息，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，根据最后一张图片上的文字提示，交代事件起因； 第二步，根据图片内容展示，合理想象，描述做饭的过程和妈妈的感受； 第三步，总结对图片中女孩的评价。 [亮点词汇] ①prepare to do sth.准备做某事 ②wish sb. to do sth.希望某人做某事 ③meanwhile同时 [高分句型] ①Lily went back home happily because she wanted to give a surprise to her mom. (because引导的原因状语从句) ②Her mom was so moved that she almost cried. (so…that引导的结果状语从句) ③What a good girl Lily is! (感叹句) D （2025·四川泸州·中考真题） 暑期将至，一批来自姊妹学校的外国学生将到你校参观交流，他们想了解中国的传统节日。为此，你校英语社团面向全校征集志愿者。假如你是李华，请根据下图内容，用英语给社团负责人王老师写一封自荐信。 表明意愿 要求： 1．语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范； 2．必须包含所给提示，并做适当发挥； 3．文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名； 4．词数100左右。 Dear Mr Wang, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours truly, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Mr Wang, I’m Li Hua. I’m really willing to be a volunteer to assist the foreign students from our sister school and introduce Chinese traditional festivals to them. I have several advantages. Firstly, I’m good at communicating and my English is fluent, which helps me explain festival stories and customs clearly. Moreover, I have a deep understanding of festivals like the Spring Festival and Mid-Autumn Festival. I can share interesting traditions, such as making dumplings during the Spring Festival and admiring the moon at Mid-Autumn Festival. I sincerely hope to become one of the volunteers. It would be a precious opportunity for me to spread Chinese culture and make foreign friends better understand our traditions. Looking forward to your reply. Yours truly, Li  Hua 【难度】0.65 【知识点】志愿服务、传统节日 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文； ②时态：时态为 “一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇表明自己的意愿； 第二步，介绍自己的优势； 第三步，书写结语，表达期望。 [亮点词汇] ①be willing to do sth. 愿意做某事 ②introduce sth. to sb. 向某人介绍某物 ③have a deep understanding of sth. 对某事有很深入的了解 ④such as例如 [高分句型] ①Firstly, I’m good at communicating and my English is fluent, which helps me explain festival stories and customs clearly.  （which引导的定语从句） A （2025·广东深圳·三模） 习近平总书记在2025年新年贺词中说道：“梦虽遥，追则能达；愿虽艰，持则可圆。”校英文报现正征稿，请你结合自身实际谈谈你的梦想，该梦想的原因及如何实现，以“Fighting for dreams”为题写一篇短文投稿。写作要求： 1. 80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数内； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称； 3. 可适当增加细节，以使语句通顺、条理清楚、意义连贯； 4. 书写规范，卷面整洁。 Fighting for Dreams Everyone has a dream. My dream is ____________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Fighting for Dreams Everyone has a dream. My dream is to become a teacher. Last year, my math teacher patiently helped me solve problems, and I was deeply inspired by her kindness. This experience touched me profoundly, making me realize that teachers have the power to transform students’ lives. To turn my dream into reality, I should study academic subjects diligently and explore educational books in my free time. Additionally, I’ve volunteered to help classmates with their homework, which has improved my communication skills and deepened my understanding of teaching. I firmly believe that as long as I persist, I will stand on the teaching platform one day. As the old saying goes, “Dreams, though distant, can be reached if pursued; wishes, though difficult, can be fulfilled if persevered in.” 【难度】0.4 【知识点】工作与职业、愿望、个人经历 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：文章应该包括所有提示要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。 [写作步骤] 第一步，通过个人经历引出梦想，强调教师职业的意义； 第二步，从理论学习和实践积累两方面，展现追梦的实际行动； 第三步，用坚定信念+名言引用强化主题，首尾呼应。 [亮点词汇] ①as long as 只要 ②turn one’s dream into reality 将某人的梦想变为现实 [高分句型] ①I firmly believe that as long as I persist, I will stand on the teaching platform one day. (宾语从句、条件状语从句) ②Additionally, I’ve volunteered to help classmates with their homework, which has improved my communication skills and deepened my understanding of teaching. (which引导的非限制性定语从句) B （2025·贵州铜仁·三模） 智能手机已成为我们生活中不可或缺的一部分，它们为给我们的生活带来了极大的便捷，同时也带来了一些挑战。如果不使用手机，我们的生活将会有哪些变化？请以“Smartphones in Our Life”为题，根据下图提示，写一篇不少于80词的英语短文，谈谈你的看法。 写作要求： 1. 短文中应包含所有提示信息，并适当拓展，使短文连贯通顺； 2. 文中不能出现真实的人名和校名。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Smartphones in Our Lives Smartphones are now an important part of our lives. They bring great convenience but also some challenges. As for me, a smartphone is helpful in many ways. I often use it to communicate with others, search information and listen to music. With my smartphone, I can easily find useful study materials online. This helps me do better in my schoolwork. To make smartphones better serve us, we should be mindful of our screen time to protect our eyes. Also, we need to make sure that our personal information is safe. All in all, using a smartphone wisely is the key to a joyful life. 【难度】0.4 【知识点】通讯工具 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。 [写作步骤] 第一步、开篇点题，介绍手机的重要性； 第二步、介绍自己使用手机的用途； 第三步、介绍我们应该如何使用手机。 [亮点词汇] ①as for至于 ②be mindful of注意 ③all in all总而言之 [高分句型] ①Also, we need to make sure that our personal information is safe. (that引导宾语从句) C （2025·黑龙江·三模） 根据下列五幅图片所示内容，写一篇英语短文。 要求： 1)话题作文或图示作文任选其一。 2)词数在80~100之间。 3)字迹工整，语法正确，意思连贯，合乎逻辑，可适当发挥。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】 I have a wonderful friend named Tom. He is really good-looking and always wears a pair of glasses. Tom loves studying. He is good at all subjects and always tries out new ideas. Whenever his classmates have trouble with their studies, he is happy to help them. Tom is also extremely helpful in daily life. He’s always ready to help others when they are in trouble. One rainy day, he saw a little boy on the road. The boy’s bike was broken and he looked worried and helpless. Seeing this, he went over and helped fix it. At home, Tom often helps his parents with the housework. He loves sports, especially basketball. All in all, Tom sets a good example for us, and I am truly lucky to have him as my friend. 【难度】0.4 【知识点】个人信息、朋友 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇看图作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点题，介绍人物的外貌； 第二步，根据图示，介绍人物的品质以及事迹等； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①a pair of一副 ②be good at擅长 ③in trouble处于困境 ④all in all总而言之 [高分句型] He’s always ready to help others when they are in trouble. (when引导时间状语从句) D （2025·广东广州·三模） 国产动画电影《哪吒之魔童降世》口碑爆棚，导演饺子正全力投入《哪吒 3》的筹备工作。目前，片方正面向大众征集全新角色。假设你是李华，请依据以下思维导图，构思一个卡通角色，并以英语书信的形式向饺子导演阐述你的创意。 注意: 1. 可在内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息； 2. 词数 80 词左右（短文开头已给出，不计入词数）； 3. 不得透露学校、姓名等个人信息，否则不予评分。 Dear director, I’m a big fan of Ne Zha, and I’m excited to hear that you’re working on Ne Zha 3 and looking for a new character.________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear director, I’m a big fan of Ne Zha, and I’m excited to hear that you’re working on Ne Zha 3 and looking for a new character. I’d like to introduce my design named “Yuan” to you. Yuan has long, flowing hair and wears a robe decorated with star patterns. He is kind-hearted and always ready to help. His special ability is to control the power of stars. When Ne Zha faces difficulties, Yuan can use starlight to create shields and attack enemies. Together, they are able to explore the mysteries of the universe and fight against evil forces. I hope this character can bring new surprises to Ne Zha 3. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【难度】0.4 【知识点】意见/建议、动漫与动画 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文 ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，先表达对电影的喜爱和对新作的期待； 第二步，描述新角色的设计，包括角色的名字、外貌、性格、能力和他与哪吒之间的联系等； 第三步，书写结束语，礼貌提议采用该角色。 [亮点词汇] ①introduce...to... 向某人介绍…… ②kind-hearted 心地善良的 ③be ready to help 随时准备提供帮助 ④face difficulties 面对困难 ⑤the mysteries of ……的奥秘 ⑥fight against 对抗 [高分句型] When Ne Zha faces difficulties, Yuan can use starlight to create shields and attack enemies. (when引导的时间状语从句) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 焦点40 书面表达 备考2026年中考英语新课标（核心素养）同步大师课堂之语法知识统统过 一、预测分析​ 1.题材多样化​ •趋势：涵盖社会热点（如环保、科技、传统文化）、青少年成长（如心理健康、课外活动）、校园生活（如垃圾分类、志愿服务）等。 •本土化内容：可能涉及地方特色（如河南豫剧、安徽黄山松、北京中轴线保护）的英文描述，需积累相关词汇。 2.题型创新​ •应用文：书信（建议信/感谢信）、通知（活动安排）、演讲稿等占比约40%。 •议论文：聚焦观点对比（如“线上学习 vs 线下学习”）或问题解决型（如“如何缓解学业压力”）。 •图表/图画作文：需描述数据趋势并分析（如“安徽中学生阅读习惯调查”）。 3.评分标准升级​ •语言维度：鼓励使用高阶词汇（如“revolutionary”替代“new”）和复杂句式（倒装句、虚拟语气）。 •内容维度：强调观点新颖性（如环保类作文需提出可操作建议）。 二、重难点解析​ 1.语言准确性​ •语法错误：主谓一致、时态混乱（如过去完成时误用）、冠词缺失（如“play piano”漏“the”）。 •中式英语：如“I very like it”（应改为“I like it very much”）。 2.逻辑与结构​ •段落衔接生硬：缺乏过渡词（如“however/therefore”），导致逻辑断裂。 •论据不足：议论文仅用“First...Second...”但缺乏具体案例支撑（如环保议题未结合数据）。 3.文化表达与思辨性​ •本土文化词汇误用：如“京剧—Peking Opera”拼写错误。 •辩证思维：议论文需呈现正反观点（如“AI的利弊”需兼顾利弊分析）。 三、解题技巧与备考策略​ 1.审题与框架构建​ •明确题型：区分应用文（书信/演讲稿）与议论文，确定人称（第一/第三人称）及时态（一般现在时为主）。 •三段式结构： •开头：背景引入（如“With the development of technology...”）。 •主体：分点论述（2-3个论点，每点配例证）。 •结尾：总结观点+呼吁/展望（如“Let’s take action to...”）。 2.语言优化与多样化​ •高级词汇替换：如“good→beneficial”“important→crucial”。 •复合句应用：定语从句（Students who...）、条件句（If AI is properly regulated...）。 3.逻辑衔接与过渡​ •使用过渡词：表因果（therefore）、对比（on the other hand）、举例（for instance）。 •段落主题句：确保每段首句明确中心思想。 4.检查与润色​ •语法复查：主谓一致、时态一致性、非谓语动词（to do/doing）。 •卷面规范：避免涂改，保持字迹工整。 5.备考建议​ •分类素材积累：按“文化”“科技”“环保”整理高频词汇与句型。 •限时模拟训练：每周完成2-3篇真题写作，严格控制在20分钟内。 •互评互改：小组内交换作文，标注语法错误与逻辑漏洞。 四、范文示例与解析​ ​题目：How to Protect Our Environment ​范文片段： Firstly, we can start by reducing waste. For instance, we should practice the three Rs: Reduce, Reuse, and Recycle. By bringing reusable bags when shopping, we can minimize plastic pollution. Secondly, conserving energy is crucial. Turning off lights and using energy-efficient appliances can significantly reduce our carbon footprint. ​解析： •结构：总分总，分点论述（Reduce/Reuse/Recycle, Energy Conservation）。 •语言：使用具体措施（reusable bags）和数据支撑（carbon footprint）。 五、总结​ 中考英语书面表达将更注重语言综合运用能力与思辨性，考生需通过以下策略提升： 1.积累高频主题词汇与模板句式； 2.强化逻辑衔接与语法准确性； 3.结合真题限时训练，关注社会热点与本土文化。 通过系统备考，考生可有效应对题型变化，提升写作得分率。 A 每个人都有各种各样的习惯，有些习惯能够助你成长，有些习惯会妨碍你进步。请结合个人实际情况，以“My Habits”为题，写一篇短文。 要点提示： 1.你有什么好习惯，请举例说明该习惯使你得到了哪些益处； 2.你有什么不良习惯，该习惯对你有什么影响,你应当如何改进。 写作要求： 1.词数80左右； 2.根据要点提示，适当发挥； 3.短文中不得出现真实的姓名及校名。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ B 幸福可以是偶得礼物时的欣喜，可以是帮助他人时的愉悦……你觉得幸福是什么呢？请你写一篇英语短文向学校英语报投稿，分享你的经历，谈谈你对幸福的理解。 参考词汇（仅供选择使用）：achieve，share，have fun，be thankful to 注意： 1）词数：80—100；短文首句已给出，不计入总词数； 2）文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息。 Happiness is everywhere around us.____________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ C 下图描述了李华今年春节得到压岁钱(lucky money)之后，他和父母对于如何花压岁钱产生的不同观点。请根据图片提示，用英语写一篇100词左右的短文。 要求： 1．完整叙述图片内容。 2．结合自己的实际陈述个人观点。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ D 假定你是李辉。你的英国朋友Mike想阅读中国经典名著。请你写封邮件，向他推荐《西游记》。要点如下： 1.风趣幽默，深受喜爱； 2.团队合作，历险克难； 3.追逐梦想，永不言弃。 注意： 1.词数80～100； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：character（n.人物）；overcome（v.克服） Dear Mike, Since you want to read Chinese classic works, I’d like to recommend Journey to the West to you. ___________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hui A （2025·黑龙江·中考真题） 话题作文：春节、清明节、端午节、中秋节……中华民族上下五千年形成了内涵丰富、形式多样的节日文化。学校英语社团决定开展“多彩的传统节日”主题宣传活动，请用英语介绍一个你最喜欢的中国传统节日。 1. 话题作文。 2. 词数：80—100之间。 3. 字迹工整，语法正确，意思连贯，合乎逻辑，可适当发挥。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ B （2025·江苏徐州·中考真题） 2025年是丹麦作家安徒生诞辰220周年。为了纪念这位用童话点亮世界的文学大师，阳光中学英文社团拟组织纪念活动，现面向全校学生征集活动方案。假设你是该校九年级学生李华，请你根据以下提示写一篇短文，提出你的方案。 IDEAS NEEDED!The year 2025 marks the Danish writer Andersen’s 220th birthday! Sunshine English Club will organize activities in memory of him. Your IDEAS are needed! Please let us know: ● Time: Weekday or weekend? Why? ● Place: School hall or city park? Why? ● Activities: Story-telling, role-play And ... (at least ONE) ● Your hope: … We need your creative ideas! 注意： 1.短文需包括所给要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2.词数90左右。短文已给出的部分 (见答题卡) 不计入总词数； 3.短文不得透露个人信息。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ C （2025·黑龙江·中考真题） 图示作文：仔细观察图片，展开合理想象，然后用英语写一篇短文。 要求： 1. 图示作文。 2. 词数：80-100之间。 3. 字迹工整，语法正确，意思连贯，合乎逻辑，可适当发挥。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ D （2025·四川泸州·中考真题） 暑期将至，一批来自姊妹学校的外国学生将到你校参观交流，他们想了解中国的传统节日。为此，你校英语社团面向全校征集志愿者。假如你是李华，请根据下图内容，用英语给社团负责人王老师写一封自荐信。 表明意愿 要求： 1．语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范； 2．必须包含所给提示，并做适当发挥； 3．文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名； 4．词数100左右。 Dear Mr Wang, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours truly, Li Hua A （2025·广东深圳·三模） 习近平总书记在2025年新年贺词中说道：“梦虽遥，追则能达；愿虽艰，持则可圆。”校英文报现正征稿，请你结合自身实际谈谈你的梦想，该梦想的原因及如何实现，以“Fighting for dreams”为题写一篇短文投稿。写作要求： 1. 80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数内； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称； 3. 可适当增加细节，以使语句通顺、条理清楚、意义连贯； 4. 书写规范，卷面整洁。 Fighting for Dreams Everyone has a dream. My dream is ____________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ B （2025·贵州铜仁·三模） 智能手机已成为我们生活中不可或缺的一部分，它们为给我们的生活带来了极大的便捷，同时也带来了一些挑战。如果不使用手机，我们的生活将会有哪些变化？请以“Smartphones in Our Life”为题，根据下图提示，写一篇不少于80词的英语短文，谈谈你的看法。 写作要求： 1. 短文中应包含所有提示信息，并适当拓展，使短文连贯通顺； 2. 文中不能出现真实的人名和校名。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ C （2025·黑龙江·三模） 根据下列五幅图片所示内容，写一篇英语短文。 要求： 1)话题作文或图示作文任选其一。 2)词数在80~100之间。 3)字迹工整，语法正确，意思连贯，合乎逻辑，可适当发挥。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ D （2025·广东广州·三模） 国产动画电影《哪吒之魔童降世》口碑爆棚，导演饺子正全力投入《哪吒 3》的筹备工作。目前，片方正面向大众征集全新角色。假设你是李华，请依据以下思维导图，构思一个卡通角色，并以英语书信的形式向饺子导演阐述你的创意。 注意: 1. 可在内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息； 2. 词数 80 词左右（短文开头已给出，不计入词数）； 3. 不得透露学校、姓名等个人信息，否则不予评分。 Dear director, I’m a big fan of Ne Zha, and I’m excited to hear that you’re working on Ne Zha 3 and looking for a new character.________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$