读后续写 课件-2026届高三英语上学期一轮复习专项

该高中英语高考复习课件聚焦读后续写专题，严格对接高考评价体系，梳理情节结构、人物塑造、情感表达等核心考点，结合2025新高考I卷及Anil故事等真题案例，明确情节连贯（占比约50%）、心理描写（30%）的高频考点分布，构建两段式续写题型的完整备考体系。 课件亮点在于“真题精析+模型训练+素养融合”策略，如运用“故事山”模型解析Anil故事的高潮与结局，培养学生逻辑思维品质；通过月光环境描写、小偷还钞心理活动等实例，提升语言表达能力。针对情节脱节等易错点，提供“心理+原因”续写模板，助力学生掌握得分技巧，教师可据此精准教学，高效冲刺高考。

nullnullnull 读 后 续 Continuation Writing 所 有 人 都 曾 是 小 孩 Le Petit Prince 写 者 所 有 人 都 曾 是 写 作 Le Petit Prince 王 子 何谓续写 what 如何续写 why 如何突破 how 何谓续写 读后续写的痛点 缺少训练 读后续写的痛点 缺乏语料 学生在面对续写无所适从 何谓续写 如何成就续写？ 其实续写就是编故事 如何讲好一个故事？ 其根本在于自我认知 自我认知 故事技能 将生活转化为更具有力量、更清晰、更有意义的体验的创作能力 文学技能 将日常语言转化为更高层次、更具有语言表达力、更生动描述的创造能力 鼠标移动到故事技能 可以触发略缩图，单击自动跳转 8 自我认知 故事技能 将生活转化为更具有力量、更清晰、更有意义的体验的创作能力 文学技能 将日常语言转化为更高层次、更具有语言表达力、更生动描述的创造能力 9 故事的六要素 结构 structure 事件 event 场景 scene 幕 act 顺序sequence 节奏 rhythm 体现价值 ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ 情节设计方式 经典情节 ARCHPLOT 反情节 ANTIPLOT 小情节 MINIPLOT 因果逻辑 封闭结尾 线性时间 外部冲突 单一主角 现实视角 积极人物 开放结尾 内部冲突 多主角 消极人物 偶然巧合 非线性时间 非现实视角 ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ 自我认知 故事技能 将生活转化为更具有力量、更清晰、更有意义的体验的创作能力 文学技能 将日常语言转化为更高层次、更具有语言表达力、更生动描述的创造能力 考 场 作 文 如 铐 镣 戴 ， 虽有限制，但你要跳得精彩。 者 舞 的 [2025新高考I卷]My wife and I wanted to share our new home with family and friends by hosting a small gathering in the early summer. She had prepared lots of snacks, while my job was to have the backyard in order. There was plenty of space for the kids to run and play. There was just one thing I hadn’t counted on: My brother chose to bring his dog Toby, a 50-pound ball of fire. Though friendly, he could easily knock over my niece’s small boys and my six-month-old granddaughter. So, when my brother showed up, I asked him to watch Toby and keep him outside. My plan was working out just fine. Toby was using up his energy by running back and forth in the backyard and giving the kids plenty of room. Unexpectedly, after supper, the weather changed. It started to rain and everyone went indoors. It was an awkward moment. I didn’t want Toby to be running around in the house, and my brother wasn’t happy with driving home with a wet dog. Eventually, my brother decided to leave rather than force the issue. 起因 场景1 场景2 ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ A few days passed, and I hadn’t heard anything from my brother. I texted him and expressed wishes for him to come out again. His reply came as a surprise — a shock, actually: “Not a chance.” Clearly, he was unhappy over the way we had parted. After all, I had left him little choice. Well, he’ll get over it, I reasoned. Two months passed. My wife suggested I get in touch with my brother, but I resisted, thinking he should call first. However, my conscience (良心) kept bothering me. I tried to put myself in my brother’s shoes. He was facing health issues and his wife of thirty-five years had passed away a few months earlier. Toby was his constant companion, the one who kept him going. 注意: (1)续写词数应为150个左右； (2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 I realized it was me who was at fault. _____________________________________________________________________________________ With the biscuits my wife had made, I arrived at my brother’s door. ______________________________________________________________________________________ 场景3 ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ 下雨天，派对天，小狗是去是留？ Scene 1 庭院聚会 Scene 2 室内对峙 Scene 3 门口和解 ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ Scene 1 庭院聚会 哥哥 家庭观念重 重视孩子安全 不够体贴 有点武断 弟弟 配合哥哥要求 好说话 重视亲情 妻子 体贴周到 智慧明理 贤惠懂事 ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ Scene 2 室内对峙 哥哥 固执 要面子 不低头 弟弟 感到为难 懂得隐忍 固执倔强 妻子 体贴周到 智慧明理 贤惠懂事 家庭观念重 重视孩子安全 不够体贴 有点武断 配合哥哥要求 好说话 重视亲情 ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ Scene 3 门口和解 哥哥 强大的自省 认识错误 真诚 主动和解 弟弟 重情义 宽容深情 完全接纳 妻子 体贴周到 智慧明理 贤惠懂事 固执 要面子 不低头 感到为难 懂得隐忍 固执倔强 I realized it was me who was at fault. _____________________________________________________________________________________ ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ I realized it was me who was at fault. _____________________________________________________________________________________ 场景： 节奏： 顺序： 人物： 在家里 做了点小饼干 我认识到了自己的错误，那我错哪了？我的妻子又干了点啥？ 认识错误→给弟弟留言→妻子烤小饼干 我和妻子 With the biscuits my wife had made, I arrived at my brother’s door. ______________________________________________________________________________________ ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ With the biscuits my wife had made, I arrived at my brother’s door. ______________________________________________________________________________________ 场景： 节奏： 顺序： 人物： 弟弟家门口 狠狠道歉 我道歉 弟弟原谅我 皆大欢喜 我道歉→然后把小饼干给他→无所谓都是兄弟→圆满结局 我和弟弟 或许还有小狗 I realized it was me who was at fault. _____________________________________________________________________________________ ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ 羞愧 that power 慵懒 vanity 无知 greedy 咔咔读完原文 场景 顺序 节奏 人物 22 羞愧 that power 慵懒 vanity 无知 greedy 咔咔读完原文 故事发生在什么场景之下 顺序 节奏 人物 23 羞愧 that power 慵懒 vanity 无知 greedy 咔咔读完原文 故事发生在什么场景之下 都有哪些人物出场 顺序 节奏 24 羞愧 that power 慵懒 vanity 无知 greedy 咔咔读完原文 故事发生在什么场景之下 都有哪些人物出场 顺序 顺序 这些人带起了什么节奏 25 羞愧 that power 慵懒 vanity 无知 greedy 咔咔读完原文 故事发生在什么场景之下 都有哪些人物出场 这些人带起了什么节奏 按照什么顺序做出了一系列动作 情节设计 26 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一 篇完整的短文。 I was still a thief when I met Anil. And though only 15, I was an experienced and fairly successful hand. Anil was about 25—a tall, thin fellow—and he looked easy-going, kind and simple enough for my purpose. I might be able to get into his confidence. I gave him my most appealing smile. “I want to work for you.” I said. “But I can't pay you.” Perhaps I had misjudged the man. I asked, “Can you feed me?” “Can you cook?” “I can cook.” I lied. “If you can cook, then I can feed you.” The meal I cooked that night must have been terrible because Anil gave it to a stray dog and old me to be off. But I just hung around smiling in my most appealing way, and he couldn't help laughing. 人物： I and Anil ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ 27 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一 篇完整的短文。 I was still a thief when I met Anil. And though only 15, I was an experienced and fairly successful hand. Anil was about 25—a tall, thin fellow—and he looked easy-going, kind and simple enough for my purpose. I might be able to get into his confidence. I gave him my most appealing smile. “I want to work for you.” I said. “But I can't pay you.” Perhaps I had misjudged the man. I asked, “Can you feed me?” “Can you cook?” “I can cook.” I lied. “If you can cook, then I can feed you.” The meal I cooked that night must have been terrible because Anil gave it to a stray dog and old me to be off. But I just hung around smiling in my most appealing way, and he couldn't help laughing. ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ 28 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一 篇完整的短文。 I was still a thief when I met Anil. And though only 15, I was an experienced and fairly successful hand. Anil was about 25—a tall, thin fellow—and he looked easy-going, kind and simple enough for my purpose. I might be able to get into his confidence. I gave him my most appealing smile. “I want to work for you.” I said. “But I can't pay you.” Perhaps I had misjudged the man. I asked, “Can you feed me?” “Can you cook?” “I can cook.” I lied. “If you can cook, then I can feed you.” The meal I cooked that night must have been terrible because Anil gave it to a stray dog and old me to be off. But I just hung around smiling in my most appealing way, and he couldn't help laughing. ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ 29 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一 篇完整的短文。 I was still a thief when I met Anil. And though only 15, I was an experienced and fairly successful hand. Anil was about 25—a tall, thin fellow—and he looked easy-going, kind and simple enough for my purpose. I might be able to get into his confidence. I gave him my most appealing smile. “I want to work for you.” I said. “But I can't pay you.” Perhaps I had misjudged the man. I asked, “Can you feed me?” “Can you cook?” “I can cook.” I lied. “If you can cook, then I can feed you.” The meal I cooked that night must have been terrible because Anil gave it to a stray dog and old me to be off. But I just hung around smiling in my most appealing way, and he couldn't help laughing. ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ 30 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一 篇完整的短文。 I was still a thief when I met Anil. And though only 15, I was an experienced and fairly successful hand. Anil was about 25—a tall, thin fellow—and he looked easy-going, kind and simple enough for my purpose. I might be able to get into his confidence. I gave him my most appealing smile. “I want to work for you.” I said. “But I can't pay you.” Perhaps I had misjudged the man. I asked, “Can you feed me?” “Can you cook?” “I can cook.” I lied. “If you can cook, then I can feed you.” The meal I cooked that night must have been terrible because Anil gave it to a stray dog and old me to be off. But I just hung around smiling in my most appealing way, and he couldn't help laughing. ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ 31 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一 篇完整的短文。 I was still a thief when I met Anil. And though only 15, I was an experienced and fairly successful hand. Anil was about 25—a tall, thin fellow—and he looked easy-going, kind and simple enough for my purpose. I might be able to get into his confidence. I gave him my most appealing smile. “I want to work for you.” I said. “But I can't pay you.” Perhaps I had misjudged the man. I asked, “Can you feed me?” “Can you cook?” “I can cook.” I lied. “If you can cook, then I can feed you.” The meal I cooked that night must have been terrible because Anil gave it to a stray dog and old me to be off. But I just hung around smiling in my most appealing way, and he couldn't help laughing. ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ 32 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一 篇完整的短文。 I was still a thief when I met Anil. And though only 15, I was an experienced and fairly successful hand. Anil was about 25—a tall, thin fellow—and he looked easy-going, kind and simple enough for my purpose. I might be able to get into his confidence. I gave him my most appealing smile. “I want to work for you.” I said. “But I can't pay you.” Perhaps I had misjudged the man. I asked, “Can you feed me?” “Can you cook?” “I can cook.” I lied. “If you can cook, then I can feed you.” The meal I cooked that night must have been terrible because Anil gave it to a stray dog and old me to be off. But I just hung around smiling in my most appealing way, and he couldn't help laughing. ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ 33 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一 篇完整的短文。 I was still a thief when I met Anil. And though only 15, I was an experienced and fairly successful hand. Anil was about 25—a tall, thin fellow—and he looked easy-going, kind and simple enough for my purpose. I might be able to get into his confidence. I gave him my most appealing smile. “I want to work for you.” I said. “But I can't pay you.” Perhaps I had misjudged the man. I asked, “Can you feed me?” “Can you cook?” “I can cook.” I lied. “If you can cook, then I can feed you.” The meal I cooked that night must have been terrible because Anil gave it to a stray dog and old me to be off. But I just hung around smiling in my most appealing way, and he couldn't help laughing. ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ 34 Later he patted me on the head and said never mind, he'd teach me to cook. He also taught me to write my name and said he would soon teach me to write whole sentences and to add numbers. I was grateful. I knew that once I could write like an educated man there would be no limit to what I could achieve. One evening he came home with a small bundle of notes, saying he had just sold a book to a publisher. At night, I saw him put the money under the mattress (床垫). It's time I did some real work, I told myself. After all, he doesn't even pay me. Anil was asleep. I crept up to the bed. Anil was sleeping peacefully. My hand slid under the mattress, searching for the notes. When I found them, I drew them out without a sound. Anil sighed in his sleep and turned on his side, towards me. I was frightened and quickly crawled out of the room. ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ Later he patted me on the head and said never mind, he'd teach me to cook. He also taught me to write my name and said he would soon teach me to write whole sentences and to add numbers. I was grateful. I knew that once I could write like an educated man there would be no limit to what I could achieve. One evening he came home with a small bundle of notes, saying he had just sold a book to a publisher. At night, I saw him put the money under the mattress (床垫). It's time I did some real work, I told myself. After all, he doesn't even pay me. Anil was asleep. I crept up to the bed. Anil was sleeping peacefully. My hand slid under the mattress, searching for the notes. When I found them, I drew them out without a sound. Anil sighed in his sleep and turned on his side, towards me. I was frightened and quickly crawled out of the room. ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ Later he patted me on the head and said never mind, he'd teach me to cook. He also taught me to write my name and said he would soon teach me to write whole sentences and to add numbers. I was grateful. I knew that once I could write like an educated man there would be no limit to what I could achieve. One evening he came home with a small bundle of notes, saying he had just sold a book to a publisher. At night, I saw him put the money under the mattress (床垫). It's time I did some real work, I told myself. After all, he doesn't even pay me. Anil was asleep. I crept up to the bed. Anil was sleeping peacefully. My hand slid under the mattress, searching for the notes. When I found them, I drew them out without a sound. Anil sighed in his sleep and turned on his side, towards me. I was frightened and quickly crawled out of the room. 钞票 ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ Later he patted me on the head and said never mind, he'd teach me to cook. He also taught me to write my name and said he would soon teach me to write whole sentences and to add numbers. I was grateful. I knew that once I could write like an educated man there would be no limit to what I could achieve. One evening he came home with a small bundle of notes, saying he had just sold a book to a publisher. At night, I saw him put the money under the mattress (床垫). It's time I did some real work, I told myself. After all, he doesn't even pay me. Anil was asleep. I crept up to the bed. Anil was sleeping peacefully. My hand slid under the mattress, searching for the notes. When I found them, I drew them out without a sound. Anil sighed in his sleep and turned on his side, towards me. I was frightened and quickly crawled out of the room. 钞票 估计那个Anil是个作家 ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ Later he patted me on the head and said never mind, he'd teach me to cook. He also taught me to write my name and said he would soon teach me to write whole sentences and to add numbers. I was grateful. I knew that once I could write like an educated man there would be no limit to what I could achieve. One evening he came home with a small bundle of notes, saying he had just sold a book to a publisher. At night, I saw him put the money under the mattress (床垫). It's time I did some real work, I told myself. After all, he doesn't even pay me. Anil was asleep. I crept up to the bed. Anil was sleeping peacefully. My hand slid under the mattress, searching for the notes. When I found them, I drew them out without a sound. Anil sighed in his sleep and turned on his side, towards me. I was frightened and quickly crawled out of the room. 钞票 估计那个Anil是个作家 ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ Later he patted me on the head and said never mind, he'd teach me to cook. He also taught me to write my name and said he would soon teach me to write whole sentences and to add numbers. I was grateful. I knew that once I could write like an educated man there would be no limit to what I could achieve. One evening he came home with a small bundle of notes, saying he had just sold a book to a publisher. At night, I saw him put the money under the mattress (床垫). It's time I did some real work, I told myself. After all, he doesn't even pay me. Anil was asleep. I crept up to the bed. Anil was sleeping peacefully. My hand slid under the mattress, searching for the notes. When I found them, I drew them out without a sound. Anil sighed in his sleep and turned on his side, towards me. I was frightened and quickly crawled out of the room. 钞票 估计那个Anil是个作家 ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ Later he patted me on the head and said never mind, he'd teach me to cook. He also taught me to write my name and said he would soon teach me to write whole sentences and to add numbers. I was grateful. I knew that once I could write like an educated man there would be no limit to what I could achieve. One evening he came home with a small bundle of notes, saying he had just sold a book to a publisher. At night, I saw him put the money under the mattress (床垫). It's time I did some real work, I told myself. After all, he doesn't even pay me. Anil was asleep. I crept up to the bed. Anil was sleeping peacefully. My hand slid under the mattress, searching for the notes. When I found them, I drew them out without a sound. Anil sighed in his sleep and turned on his side, towards me. I was frightened and quickly crawled out of the room. 钞票 估计那个Anil是个作家 ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ Later he patted me on the head and said never mind, he'd teach me to cook. He also taught me to write my name and said he would soon teach me to write whole sentences and to add numbers. I was grateful. I knew that once I could write like an educated man there would be no limit to what I could achieve. One evening he came home with a small bundle of notes, saying he had just sold a book to a publisher. At night, I saw him put the money under the mattress (床垫). It's time I did some real work, I told myself. After all, he doesn't even pay me. Anil was asleep. I crept up to the bed. Anil was sleeping peacefully. My hand slid under the mattress, searching for the notes. When I found them, I drew them out without a sound. Anil sighed in his sleep and turned on his side, towards me. I was frightened and quickly crawled out of the room. 钞票 估计那个Anil是个作家 ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ Later he patted me on the head and said never mind, he'd teach me to cook. He also taught me to write my name and said he would soon teach me to write whole sentences and to add numbers. I was grateful. I knew that once I could write like an educated man there would be no limit to what I could achieve. One evening he came home with a small bundle of notes, saying he had just sold a book to a publisher. At night, I saw him put the money under the mattress (床垫). It's time I did some real work, I told myself. After all, he doesn't even pay me. Anil was asleep. I crept up to the bed. Anil was sleeping peacefully. My hand slid under the mattress, searching for the notes. When I found them, I drew them out without a sound. Anil sighed in his sleep and turned on his side, towards me. I was frightened and quickly crawled out of the room. 钞票 估计那个Anil是个作家 ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ I began to run, holding the notes by the string of my pajamas (睡衣). But I slowed down and sat down in the shelter of the clock tower. I should go back to Anil, I told myself, if only to learn to read and write. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150词左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 I hurried back to the room feeling very nervous. I awoke late next morning to find that Anil had already made the tea. “故事山”模型 ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ I began to run, holding the notes by the string of my pajamas (睡衣). But I slowed down and sat down in the shelter of the clock tower. I should go back to Anil, I told myself, if only to learn to read and write. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150词左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 I hurried back to the room feeling very nervous. I awoke late next morning to find that Anil had already made the tea. “故事山”模型 ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ “故事山”模型 I began to run, holding the notes by the string of my pajamas (睡衣). But I slowed down and sat down in the shelter of the clock tower. I should go back to Anil, I told myself, if only to learn to read and write. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150词左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 I hurried back to the room feeling very nervous. I awoke late next morning to find that Anil had already made the tea. Opening Build-up Climax Resolution Ending ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ “故事山”模型 I began to run, holding the notes by the string of my pajamas (睡衣). But I slowed down and sat down in the shelter of the clock tower. I should go back to Anil, I told myself, if only to learn to read and write. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150词左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 I hurried back to the room feeling very nervous. I awoke late next morning to find that Anil had already made the tea. Opening Build-up Climax Resolution Ending 开端：文章的开始部分，用于介绍文章的背景信息。 15岁的我是一个经验老到的小偷，然后我锁定了一个目标Anil ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ “故事山”模型 I began to run, holding the notes by the string of my pajamas (睡衣). But I slowed down and sat down in the shelter of the clock tower. I should go back to Anil, I told myself, if only to learn to read and write. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150词左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 I hurried back to the room feeling very nervous. I awoke late next morning to find that Anil had already made the tea. Opening Build-up Climax Resolution Ending 我撒谎来换取食宿，但我根本不会做饭，他还是愿意教我读书写字。 发展：故事进入主线，在这个阶段故事的冲突和复杂性增加。 ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ “故事山”模型 I began to run, holding the notes by the string of my pajamas (睡衣). But I slowed down and sat down in the shelter of the clock tower. I should go back to Anil, I told myself, if only to learn to read and write. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150词左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 I hurried back to the room feeling very nervous. I awoke late next morning to find that Anil had already made the tea. Opening Build-up Climax Resolution Ending 我看着他放在床垫下的钱起了贪念，于是我偷走了，不过到了钟楼之后我幡然醒悟。 高潮：故事中最大的问题/冲突，其结果通常决定故事的最终走向。 ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ “故事山”模型 I began to run, holding the notes by the string of my pajamas (睡衣). But I slowed down and sat down in the shelter of the clock tower. I should go back to Anil, I told myself, if only to learn to read and write. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150词左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 I hurried back to the room feeling very nervous. I awoke late next morning to find that Anil had already made the tea. Opening Build-up Climax Resolution Ending 解决过程：故事中的冲突是怎样被解决的 ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ “故事山”模型 I began to run, holding the notes by the string of my pajamas (睡衣). But I slowed down and sat down in the shelter of the clock tower. I should go back to Anil, I told myself, if only to learn to read and write. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150词左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 I hurried back to the room feeling very nervous. I awoke late next morning to find that Anil had already made the tea. Opening Build-up Climax Resolution Ending 结尾：通常值得是故事的结局，在续写的结尾有时课适当升华。 来吧一起捅咕一下子！ I hurried back to the room feeling very nervous. ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ I hurried back to the room feeling very nervous. 情节设计 Anil醒了，坐床上跟我说赶紧把钱还我！ Anil没醒，我悄摸把钱又放回去了。 当我们的情节出现分歧选择时，重点关注故事性塑造。 有些话不需要说的太明白，我们中国话讲究一个留白。 挑选简单的内容来塑造情节。 ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ Anil没醒，我悄摸把钱又放回去了。 I hurried back to the room feeling very nervous. ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ Anil没醒，我悄摸把钱又放回去了。 I hurried back to the room feeling very nervous. 紧张的 心理活动 心理活动续写准则：凡是心里活动后面都要跟原因。 In my thief career, it was the first time I returned something I had stolen. 在我的职业生涯中，这还是我第一次把偷到的东西还回去。 I crept up to the bed and slid my hand under the mattress again. Then I bit my lip and put the notes back. 前文出现，我们巧妙借鉴，加个again ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ 那么在这里我们就要思考，我们在什么情况下会紧张？是不是第一次做某事？对吧 所以我们在这里就要思考他是第一次做什么？还钱对吧。 54 With the moonlight through the window, I could see Anil was still sleeping. I crept up to the bed and slid my hand under the mattress again. The room was deadly silent as if I could hear his breath. Then I bit my lip and put the notes back, feeling his gentle eyes were staring at me all the time, but he didn’t. ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ With the moonlight through the window, I could see Anil was still sleeping. I crept up to the bed and slid my hand under the mattress again. The room was deadly silent as if I could hear his breath. Then I bit my lip and put the notes back, feeling his gentle eyes were staring at me all the time, but he didn’t. 动作 动作 ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ With the moonlight through the window, I could see Anil was still sleeping. I crept up to the bed and slid my hand under the mattress again. The room was deadly silent as if I could hear his breath. Then I bit my lip and put the notes back, feeling his gentle eyes were staring at me all the time, but he didn’t. 动作 动作 环境描写 烘托气氛 ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ With the moonlight through the window, I could see Anil was still sleeping. I crept up to the bed and slid my hand under the mattress again. The room was deadly silent as if I could hear his breath. Then I bit my lip and put the notes back, feeling his gentle eyes were staring at me all the time, but he didn’t. 动作 动作 环境描写 烘托气氛 环境描写 ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ With the moonlight through the window, I could see Anil was still sleeping. I crept up to the bed and slid my hand under the mattress again. The room was deadly silent as if I could hear his breath. Then I bit my lip and put the notes back, feeling his gentle eyes were staring at me all the time, but he didn’t. 动作 动作 环境描写 烘托气氛 环境描写 情感描写 连续动作续写准则：连续动作可不连续写，可以在动作中间插入环境描写/情感。 写动作用短句，写插入部分用长句。 ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ I awoke late next morning to find that Anil had already made the tea. He asked me to sit across the table and handed me a white envelope. To my surprise, there was a 20 note in it. "This is your weekly wage,“ his voice echoed in my head." Now you are a decent man with a formal job." I raised my head and met his easy-going. kind and simple look in the eyes. At that moment, something buried deeply in my heart awoke. I tried to say some words, but I failed." 他一下 我一下 上段：一个人的独角戏 本段：两个人的对手戏 做到视角来回切换 你一下我一下 ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ 我们在这一段要做到视角来回切换，但注意要语言的优美性，不要写成流水账 60 I awoke late next morning to find that Anil had already made the tea. He asked me to sit across the table and handed me a white envelope. To my surprise, there was a 20 note in it. "This is your weekly wage,“ his voice echoed in my head." Now you are a decent man with a formal job." I raised my head and met his easy-going. kind and simple look in the eyes. At that moment, something buried deeply in my heart awoke. I tried to say some words, but I failed." 他一下 我一下 上段：一个人的独角戏 本段：两个人的对手戏 做到视角来回切换 你一下我一下 ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ 标黄的部分和原文呼应， 61 He asked me to sit across the table and handed me a white envelope. To my surprise, there was a 20 note in it. "This is your weekly wage,“ his voice echoed in my head." Now you are a decent man with a formal job." I raised my head and met his easy-going. kind and simple look in the eyes. At that moment, something buried deeply in my heart awoke. I tried to say some words, but I failed." “Finish your breakfast and we will begin today's class.“ he said. ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ 我们在这一段要做到视角来回切换，但注意要语言的优美性，不要写成流水账 62 如 果 你 豢 养 了 我 续写 题型综述 自我认知 故事六要素 情节设计 单人solo 连续动作穿插环境/情感 心理活动一定要加原因 多人群像 注意你一下我一下 读后续写是个啥 初步掌握了 你已经 喜 恭 $$nullnull