读后续写：Mr. Thompson不仅帮了Jack，还让他明白了帮助他人的意义，真正的榜样讲义-2025届山东淄博高三下学期3月模拟英语试题

阅读下面材料，标黑加粗斜体黄，可积累文本！黑色块 动词积累或动作串；蓝色（宾从）红色（定从）单斜体（状从）；其余非谓语形式都会标注；B-eli-eve in daily accumulation!(注释) 山东省淄博市2025届高三下学期3月模拟考试（淄博一模）英语试题 47. 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Jack leaned against his apartment’s kitchen counter, gazing at(现在分词短语做伴随动作) the growing mountain of bills(形象的描述). Despite the city’s promise of opportunities, he struggled with a low-paying job and high expenses(人物背景信息刻画). Every month felt like a battle to make ends meet. He missed the warmth of Mr. Thompson’s old house, where every tenant felt like family and Mr. Thompson treated each tenant with constant kindness. One cool autumn day, as Jack sorted through his mail, mostly consisting of(现在分词短语做伴随动作) bills and advertisements, a plain white envelope caught his eye(无灵主语句). The return address belonged to Mr. Thompson. Heart pounding with curiosity(独立主格，刻画心理), Jack tore it open. Inside, a check for $2,500 and a handwritten note fell into his hands. “Dear Jack, I hope this letter finds you well. I’ve recently sold the old house, and it felt only right to share a portion of the proceeds(n. 利润，营业额；一词多义) with those who made it a home. Over the years, watching young people like you grow and pursue their dreams(现在分词短语做主语) has been my greatest reward. Your presence brought joy and warmth to our community. I wish you all the best. Warm regards, Thompson” Jack’s eyes welled up with tears of gratitude(情绪描写：感动). This unexpected windfall was more than just money - it was a lifeline(递进), a ray of hope in his struggles(同位语补语). The gesture reminded him of all the times Mr. Thompson had shown similar kindness to his tenants, from helping with repairs to offering wise advice during difficult times. The check trembled in Jack’s hand(无灵主语句). It could fix everything, he thought - the unpaid rent, the empty fridge, and the endless fear(并列). But his chest tightened(情绪描写：紧张). Memories of his father’s lectures echoed: “Never depend on others. Stand on your own.” Jack had promised to prove himself in the city, yet here he was, drowning. Mr. Thompson’s words warmed him, but doubt crept in. Was it a charity case? He needed answers - not from the money, but from the man who sent it. Jack paced, the check glaring from the table(独立主格，刻画环境). He imagined Mr. Thompson’s kind eyes. This isn’t pity, Jack reasoned. It’s... thanks. 注意: (1)续写词数应为150 左右； (2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: Anyway, Jack was determined to express his gratitude in person. Paragraph 2: Inspired by Mr. Thompson’s words, Jack knew what to do next. 山东省淄博市2025届高三下学期3月模拟考试（淄博一模）英语试题 第二节(满分25分) 48. 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Jack leaned against his apartment’s kitchen counter, gazing at the growing mountain of bills. Despite the city’s promise of opportunities, he struggled with a low-paying job and high expenses. Every month felt like a battle to make ends meet. He missed the warmth of Mr. Thompson’s old house, where every tenant felt like family and Mr. Thompson treated each tenant with constant kindness. One cool autumn day, as Jack sorted through his mail, mostly consisting of bills and advertisements, a plain white envelope caught his eye. The return address belonged to Mr. Thompson. Heart pounding with curiosity, Jack tore it open. Inside, a check for $2,500 and a handwritten note fell into his hands. “Dear Jack, I hope this letter finds you well. I’ve recently sold the old house, and it felt only right to share a portion of the proceeds with those who made it a home. Over the years, watching young people like you grow and pursue their dreams has been my greatest reward. Your presence brought joy and warmth to our community. I wish you all the best. Warm regards, Thompson” Jack’s eyes welled up with tears of gratitude. This unexpected windfall was more than just money - it was a lifeline, a ray of hope in his struggles. The gesture reminded him of all the times Mr. Thompson had shown similar kindness to his tenants, from helping with repairs to offering wise advice during difficult times. The check trembled in Jack’s hand. It could fix everything, he thought - the unpaid rent, the empty fridge, and the endless fear. But his chest tightened. Memories of his father’s lectures echoed: “Never depend on others. Stand on your own.” Jack had promised to prove himself in the city, yet here he was, drowning. Mr. Thompson’s words warmed him, but doubt crept in. Was it a charity case? He needed answers - not from the money, but from the man who sent it. Jack paced, the check glaring from the table. He imagined Mr. Thompson’s kind eyes. This isn’t pity, Jack reasoned. It’s... thanks. 注意: (1)续写词数应为150 左右； (2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: Anyway, Jack was determined to express his gratitude in person. Paragraph 2: Inspired by Mr. Thompson’s words, Jack knew what to do next. 1. 读后续写类型分析及构思布局 类型分析： 该文章属于情感类读后续写，主题围绕“感恩与自我成长”，通过主人公Jack收到Mr. Thompson的意外帮助，引发他对自我价值和人生选择的思考。 构思布局： 承接原文：续写需围绕Jack的心理变化展开，重点描写他如何从犹豫不决到坚定行动，体现感恩与成长的主题。 提炼框架： 第一段：Jack决定亲自表达感谢，描写他的心理活动和行动。 第二段：Jack受到Mr. Thompson的启发，做出具体行动（如合理使用资金、回馈社会等）。 实施要点： 保持情感连贯性，突出Jack的内心挣扎与成长。 语言风格与原文一致，注重细节描写。 注意事项： 承接原文的伏笔（如Jack对父亲的承诺、Mr. Thompson的善意）。 避免过度扩展情节，保持逻辑合理。 巧妙设计情感转折，突出主题。 2. 故事山模式及原文分析 分析角度 内容 原文反应句 人物刻画 Jack：挣扎于经济压力，内心矛盾；Mr. Thompson：善良、慷慨，关心他人。 “Mr. Thompson treated each tenant with constant kindness.” 情感层次 Jack从感激到自我怀疑，再到坚定行动。 “Jack’s eyes welled up with tears of gratitude.” / “But his chest tightened.” 关键情节点 收到Mr. Thompson的信和支票，Jack的心理变化。 “A plain white envelope caught his eye.” / “The check trembled in Jack’s hand.” 语言特色 语言朴实，情感真挚，注重心理描写。 “This unexpected windfall was more than just money - it was a lifeline.” 关键词分析 “gratitude”（感激）、“doubt”（怀疑）、“determined”（坚定）。 “Jack’s eyes welled up with tears of gratitude.” / “Doubt crept in.” 心理描写 Jack的内心挣扎：感激与自我怀疑交织。 “Was it a charity case? He needed answers - not from the money, but from the man who sent it.” 动作描写 Jack的动作反映其心理状态：颤抖的手、踱步。 “The check trembled in Jack’s hand.” / “Jack paced, the check glaring from the table.” 环境描写 通过信件和支票营造情感氛围。 “A plain white envelope caught his eye.” 隐含主题 感恩与自我成长：接受帮助并转化为行动。 “This unexpected windfall was more than just money - it was a lifeline.” 情感转折 从感激到自我怀疑，再到坚定行动。 “Jack’s eyes welled up with tears of gratitude.” / “But his chest tightened.” 空间转换 从厨房到内心世界，再到Mr. Thompson的家。 “Jack leaned against his apartment’s kitchen counter.” 时间过渡 从收到信件到决定行动的时间过渡。 “One cool autumn day…” / “Jack paced, the check glaring from the table.” 伏笔与冲突点： 伏笔：Jack对父亲的承诺（“Never depend on others. Stand on your own.”）。 冲突点：Jack是否接受Mr. Thompson的帮助，是否违背自我承诺。 隐含线索：Mr. Thompson的信中提到的“joy and warmth”暗示Jack应回馈社会。 解决方案：Jack决定亲自表达感谢，并合理使用资金，体现成长。 3. 推荐例句及高级替换词 动作描写例句： He clenched the check tightly, his knuckles turning white. Jack paced back and forth, his mind racing with conflicting thoughts. With a deep breath, he picked up the phone to dial Mr. Thompson’s number. He hesitated for a moment before finally opening the envelope. Jack’s hands trembled as he unfolded the handwritten note. He stared at the check, his eyes wide with disbelief. Jack quickly grabbed his coat and headed out the door. He sat down at the table, pen in hand, ready to write a heartfelt letter. 心理描写例句： A wave of gratitude washed over him, bringing tears to his eyes. Doubt gnawed at the edges of his mind, making him question his worth. He felt a surge of hope, as if a heavy burden had been lifted. Memories of his father’s stern voice echoed in his head, filling him with guilt. His heart swelled with warmth as he read Mr. Thompson’s kind words. A sense of determination replaced his earlier uncertainty. He wrestled with his pride, unsure whether to accept the generous gift. The weight of his struggles seemed to lighten as he made his decision. 环境描写例句： The cool autumn breeze rustled the leaves outside his window. The dim light of the kitchen cast long shadows on the walls. The city’s distant hum provided a backdrop to his thoughts. The plain white envelope stood out among the pile of bills and ads. The silence of the apartment was broken only by the ticking of the clock. The warm glow of the streetlights filtered through the curtains. The scent of freshly brewed coffee filled the small kitchen. The golden hues of the setting sun painted the sky outside. 高级替换词： Gratitude → Appreciation, Thankfulness, Gratefulness, Acknowledgment, Recognition Doubt → Uncertainty, Hesitation, Skepticism, Misgiving, Distrust Struggle → Hardship, Adversity, Challenge, Difficulty, Trial Kindness → Generosity, Compassion, Benevolence, Goodwill, Altruism Hope → Optimism, Expectation, Aspiration, Promise, Faith 4. 语法现象及语料积累 语法现象： 现在分词作状语： “Jack leaned against his apartment’s kitchen counter, gazing at the growing mountain of bills.” 过去完成时： “I’ve recently sold the old house, and it felt only right to share a portion of the proceeds.” 定语从句： “The return address belonged to Mr. Thompson, who had always been kind to his tenants.” 虚拟语气： “He needed answers - not from the money, but from the man who sent it.” 地道搭配： Make ends meet：维持生计 例句：Despite working two jobs, he still struggled to make ends meet. Catch one’s eye：引起注意 例句：The bright red dress caught her eye immediately. Well up with tears：泪水涌出 例句：Her eyes welled up with tears as she listened to the touching story. Echo in one’s mind：在脑海中回响 例句：His father’s words echoed in his mind, guiding his decisions. 生词短语： Windfall (n.)：意外之财 近义词：Boon, Bonanza 反义词：Loss, Misfortune 例句：The lottery win was a windfall that changed his life. Proceeds (n.)：收益 近义词：Earnings, Revenue 反义词：Expenses, Costs 例句：The proceeds from the charity event will go to the local hospital. Lifeline (n.)：生命线 近义词：Support, Salvation 反义词：Burden, Obstacle 例句：The scholarship was a lifeline for the struggling student. Pity (n.)：怜悯 近义词：Compassion, Sympathy 反义词：Indifference, Cruelty 例句：She looked at him with pity, knowing how hard he had tried. 5. Possible Answers(3)： Version 1 Paragraph 1: Anyway, Jack was determined to express his gratitude in person. With the check safely tucked(过去分词做后置定语) in his pocket(with复合短语), he boarded the bus to Mr. Thompson’s new home. The journey felt endless(无灵主语，主动表被动), his mind racing with thoughts of what to say(独立主格，刻画人物心理). When he finally arrived, he found Mr. Thompson sitting on the porch, sipping tea(现在分词短语做伴随动作). “Mr. Thompson,” Jack began, his voice trembling slightly(独立主格刻画情绪), “I came to thank you. Your generosity means more than I can express.” The old man smiled warmly, his eyes crinkling at the corners(独立主格，刻画人物). “Jack, this isn’t about money. It’s about believing in you. You’ve always had the strength to overcome anything.” Paragraph 2: Inspired(过去分词短语做原因状语) by Mr. Thompson’s words, Jack knew what to do next. He decided to use the money to enroll in a coding bootcamp, something he had always dreamed of but never thought possible. Balancing work and studies(现在分词短语做主语) was exhausting, but Jack persevered, fueled by Mr. Thompson’s faith in him(过去分词短语做原因状语). Years later, as a software engineer, he returned to Mr. Thompson’s home, this time with a check of his own(独立主格或with复合结构). “This is for you,” Jack said, handing it over(现在分词短语做伴随动作). But Mr. Thompson gently pushed it back. “Keep it,” he said. “Your success is my reward. Now, go and help others as I helped you.” Version 2 Paragraph 1: Anyway, Jack was determined to express his gratitude in person. He spent the entire night drafting a heartfelt letter, but words seemed inadequate(无灵主语句). The next morning, he took the train to Mr. Thompson’s countryside home. When he arrived, Mr. Thompson was reading a book by the fireplace. “Jack!” he exclaimed, setting the book aside(现在分词做伴随动作). “What brings you here?” Jack handed him the letter, his hands shaking(现在分词短语做伴随动作). “I wanted to thank you, but I also need to know—why me? Why did you choose to help me?” Mr. Thompson smiled gently. “Because I saw potential in you, Jack. Potential that you couldn’t see in yourself.” Paragraph 2: Inspired by Mr. Thompson’s words(过去分词短语做原因状语), Jack knew what to do next. He used the money to start a small online business, selling handmade crafts(现在分词短语做). It was a rocky start, but Jack’s determination never wavered. Within a year, his business flourished, and he began mentoring others who were struggling financially. One day, he received a letter from Mr. Thompson: “Your success is my greatest joy. Remember, kindness is a circle—what you give(主从) will always come back to you.” Jack framed the letter, a constant reminder of the power of generosity and self-belief(同位语). Version 3 Paragraph 1: Anyway, Jack was determined to express his gratitude in person. He packed a small bag and set off early in the morning, the crisp autumn air filling his lungs(独立主格，环境描写). When he arrived at Mr. Thompson’s cottage, he found the old man pruning roses in the garden. “Mr. Thompson,” Jack called out, his voice steady but filled with emotion(独立主格，刻画人物). The old man turned, his face breaking into a wide smile(独立主格刻画人物). “Jack, my boy! What a pleasant surprise(感叹句)!” Jack handed him the check. “I can’t accept this. I need to earn my way.” Mr. Thompson shook his head. “This isn’t charity, Jack. It’s an investment in your future.” Paragraph 2: Inspired by Mr. Thompson’s words(过去分词短语做伴随动作), Jack knew what to do next. He used the money to take a course in graphic design, a field he had always been passionate about. The late nights and early mornings were grueling, but Jack’s determination never faltered(情绪描写). Years later, he became a renowned designer, and he never forgot Mr. Thompson’s kindness. He started a scholarship fund for struggling students, writing in the mission statement(现在分词短语做伴随动作): “This is not charity. It’s an investment in the future(递进句，与原文衔接), just as someone once invested in me.” 加分点及亮点词汇 语法加分点： With复合结构状语： “With the check safely tucked in his pocket, he boarded the bus.” “Balancing work and studies was exhausting, but Jack persevered.” 定语从句： “He found Mr. Thompson sitting on the porch, sipping tea.” “He started a scholarship fund for struggling students, writing in the mission statement.” 情绪描写亮点词汇： Trembling (颤抖的) → Shaking, Quivering 例句：His voice trembled as he spoke. Crinkling (皱起的) → Wrinkling, Furrowing 例句：His eyes crinkled with laughter. Exclaimed (惊呼) → Cried out, Shouted 例句：She exclaimed in delight when she saw the surprise. Steady but filled with emotion (平稳但充满情感) → Calm yet heartfelt 例句：His voice was steady but filled with emotion as he delivered the speech. 动作描写亮点词汇： Tucked (塞进) → Stashed, Placed 例句：She tucked the letter into her bag. Pruning (修剪) → Trimming, Cutting 例句：He spent the afternoon pruning the rose bushes. Handed over (递过去) → Passed, Delivered 例句：He handed over the documents with a smile. Set aside (放下) → Put down, Placed aside 例句：She set aside her book to answer the phone. 升级替换词： Generosity → Benevolence, Magnanimity 例句：His generosity knew no bounds. Persevered → Persisted, Endured 例句：Despite the challenges, she persevered and succeeded. Flourished → Thrived, Prospered 例句：The business flourished under her leadership. Investment → Contribution, Support 例句：Education is the best investment in the future. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$