Unit 2 Section Ⅴ Writing（Word教参）-【精讲精练】2025-2026学年高中英语必修第一册（人教版）

Section Ⅴ　Writing [对应学生用书P59] 旅行计划 旅行计划类的书信要求我们针对旅行的地点、时间和出行方式等进行准确的描述，学生应该注意描述的重点和顺序。在写作过程中力争做到：紧扣主题； 句子结构完整； 信息内容准确； 篇章结构连贯。 [文章架构] [亮点词汇] 1．介绍旅游景点/线路 (1)places of interest 名胜古迹 (2)a tourist attraction 旅游景点 (3)an amazing landscape 令人惊叹的风景 (4)a seven-day trip 七日游 (5)package tour 包价旅游 2．有关“旅游”的动作 (1)take a tour 游览 (2)set out/off 出发 (3)go sightseeing 观光 (4)leave for 动身去 (5)enjoy the scenery 欣赏风景 3．交通方式 (1)by public transport 乘公共交通 (2)by flight/boat 乘飞机/坐船 (3)on foot 步行 [高级句式] 1．开头句式 (1)I'm writing to share my travel plan with you. 我写信与你分享我的旅行计划。 (2)Over the holiday，my parents and I are planning to go to England. 假期期间，我和爸妈计划去英国。 (3)You have asked me for some information about my travel to Germany. 你询问我关于去德国旅行的一些信息。 (4)The schedule and details are as follows. 时间表和细节如下。 2．正文句式 (1)I'm planning to travel to Suzhou，a city called Eastern Venice. 我计划到苏州旅游，它被称为东方威尼斯。 (2)The May Day is coming/approaching/around the corner，and I am going to travel to Shanghai to admire its beautiful scenery. 五一就要到了，我要去上海欣赏它美丽的风景。 (3)You will be amazed at the beautiful scenery there.你将会惊讶于那里美丽的景色。 (4)We are going to the destination by high-speed train.我们将乘坐高铁去目的地。 3．结尾句式 (1)The Forbidden City is really worth your visiting.Looking forward to your coming. 紫禁城确实值得你参观，期待着你的到来。 (2)I hope you will have a trip with me. 我希望你和我一起旅行。 (3)I believe we'll have a good day. 我相信我们将会度过美好的一天。 假定你是李华，寒假即将来临，你打算和家人下周去北京游览长城。请你给你的英国好友Peter写一封电子邮件，分享你的旅行计划，内容包括： 1．对长城的认识； 2．其他旅游目的地(故宫和颐和园)及交通方式； 3．表达期望。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：故宫the Imperial Palace；颐和园the Summer Palace [写作步骤] 第一步　审题谋篇 第二步　遣词造句 1．我和我的父母计划去游览长城。(现在进行时表将来) My parents and I are planning to pay a visit to the Great Wall. 2．长城有着悠久的历史。 The Great Wall has a long history. 3．它是古代中国人民创造的一个伟大奇迹。 It is a great wonder created by the ancient Chinese people. 4．长城已经成为中国最著名的旅游景点之一。 The Great Wall has become one of the most famous tourist attractions in China. 5．我们迫不及待地想去参观它。 We can't wait to visit it. 6．我们还计划参观北京的其他地方，如故宫、颐和园。 We're also planning to visit other places in Beijing，such as the Imperial Palace and the Summer Palace. 7．我们将乘火车去那儿。 We're going there by train. 8．希望早日收到你的来信。(hope) Hope to hear from you soon. 第三步　词句升级 9．用并列连词连接句2和句3 The Great Wall has a long history and it is a great wonder created by the ancient Chinese people. 10．用表示因果关系的并列连词连接句4和句5 The Great Wall has become one of the most famous tourist attractions in China，so we can't wait to visit it. 第四步　妙笔成篇 Dear Peter， I'm glad to tell you my parents and I are planning to pay a visit to the Great Wall next week.The Great Wall has a long history and it is a great wonder created by the ancient Chinese people.Now the Great Wall has become one of the most famous tourist attractions in China，so we can't wait to visit it. Besides，we're also planning to visit other places in Beijing，such as the Imperial Palace and the Summer Palace.We're going there by train. Do you have any plans for the coming holiday? Hope to hear from you soon. Yours， Li Hua 假定你是李华，你的外国笔友Peter想要了解你的寒假旅行计划。请你给他发送一封电子邮件，内容如下： 1．旅行目的； 2．旅行计划及交通工具； 3．表达期待。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 【参考范文】 Dear Peter， I'm absolutely delighted to share with you my winter holiday plans.We are going to go skiing in Lake Songhua Resort. We are planning a two-day tour and going there by car.On arriving there，going skiing right away will be my first choice.I can't wait to take a bird's eye view of the whole city by catching a cable car.On the second day，taking a bath in a hot spring and finding some delicious traditional food will surely drive our tiredness away. What's your holiday plan? I am looking forward to your reply. Yours， Li Hua 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$