Starter及Unit1(书面表达) 2025-2026学年外研版（2024）七年级英语上册

Starter及U1书面表达 单元写作指导 在 Starter 单元的学习中,向同学“介绍自己”是一个重要的书面表达话题。 1、 写作框架 确定人称和时态 (一)开头部分 以友好、热情的问候语开启,引出自我介绍的主题。例如:Hello, everyone! I am so glad to stand here and introduce myself to you.(大家好!我很高兴站在这里向你们介绍我自己。) 例如:Hello, everyone! I am so glad to stand here and introduce myself to you. (二)中间部分 分点详细阐述个人信息,每个要点用 1 - 2 句话说明。 介绍姓名: 介绍年龄:I am a twelve-year-old girl/boy. 或者I’m …years old. I was born in…./I am at 介绍来自哪里:I come from…, the capital city of China. It is a very beautiful and historical city.(我来自中国的首都北京。它是一个非常美丽且历史悠久的城市。) 来自哪个学校,在哪个年级:I come from... and I am in Class…Grade... now.(我来自……,现在我在……班…. 年级。) 介绍性格: friendly/kind:She is very friendly to everyone.(她对每个人都很友好。) active/outgoing:Tom is an active student in class.(汤姆在课堂上是一个活跃的学生。) quiet/shy:My sister is a quiet girl.(我的妹妹是一个安静的女孩。) funny/humorous:He always tells funny stories.(他总是讲有趣的故事。) honest:It's important to be honest.(诚实很重要。) helpful:She is always helpful to her classmates.(她总是对她的同学很有帮助。) =She is always ready to help her classmates. 介绍兴趣爱好:I have lots of hobbies, such as reading,running and swimming. I like playing basketball after school because it makes me strong and energetic. Also, I enjoy reading books in my free time. I can learn a lot from different kinds of books. 其它句型: I am fond of.../ I am interested in.../ … is my favourite… 介绍能力:I can…/ I am good at…/ I do well in… (三)结尾部分 用积极的话语表达对未来学习生活的期待,结束自我介绍。 I hope we can be good friends and have a good time in our school .(我希望我们能成为好朋友,在我们学校有一个美好的时光。) I am looking forward to studying with you.(我期待着和你们一起学习。) I believe we will have a great year together.(我相信我们会一起度过很棒的一年。) I want to make many new friends here.(我想在这里交很多新朋友。) 优化策略 增加细节描述:如喜欢某本书,可以描述一下书中最吸引自己的情节;喜欢某项运动,可以讲讲自己在运动中印象深刻的一次经历。比如介绍喜欢打篮球时,可以说 “I like playing basketball. Last week, I made a three - point shot in the basketball game, and my teammates cheered for me. It was an exciting moment.” 运用连接词:在介绍多个兴趣爱好时,可以用 “besides”“also”“in addition” 等连接词。如 “I like singing. Besides, I also enjoy painting. In addition, I am interested in playing the guitar.” 检查语法和拼写错误:完成写作后,仔细检查语法错误,如主谓一致、名词单复数、动词时态等;同时检查单词拼写,确保文章语言准确无误。这可以提升文章的整体质量,给读者留下良好印象。 【参考范文】 Hello, everyone! My name is Lucy. I am 12 years old and I am from a small but beautiful city, Yangling. Now, I am a Grade 7 student in Sunshine Middle School, Class 5. I have many hobbies. I like dancing very much. I take dancing lessons every Saturday. It makes me feel relaxed and happy. Besides, reading books is also my favorite. I often go to the school library after class. I can learn a lot from different books. I am an active and friendly girl. I always like to help others. I hope we can become good friends and learn from each other in the future. Thank you! 综合实战演练 1.假如你是李华,通过学校举办的“汉语桥”活动,你结识了一名外国朋友Mike,他说想进一步了解你。请以“This is me”为主题,用英语给Mike写一封信,从个人基本信息、家庭情况、兴趣爱好三个方面来介绍你自己。 要求:1.不少于80词; 2.不得出现真实姓名和学校名称; 3.包含所有提示信息,条理清晰,行文连贯,语句通顺,书写规范,可适当发挥。 Dear Mike, _ Yours, Li Hua 话题二:介绍学校 作文结构 开头:开篇点题,对学校进行整体描述,如介绍学校的名称、位置、整体印象等。 This is my new school. My new school is great and very beautiful. 中间:细节描述,可介绍学校的建筑布局,如教学楼、图书馆、操场等的位置;也可以描述学校的活动,如学生们在学校的日常学习、运动、娱乐等活动。 There is/are…in/on/near…(在…… 里 / 上 / 附近有……);Behind…is…(…… 的后面是……);It is between…and…(它位于…… 和…… 之间);…is across from…(…… 在…… 对面);We do exercises/spend most of the time/raise the national flag/enjoy delicious food…there.(我们在那里做操 / 度过大多数时间 / 升国旗 / 享用美味的食物……) 结尾:总结全文,表达对学校的喜爱之情或对学校的整体感受。 What a nice school! I love my new school. 常用词汇: 描述性词汇: great,beautiful,small/large,modern,clean,special,nice。 方位介词(短语): in front of,next to,behind,at the back of,in the middle of,between…and…,across from(。 学校建筑: classroom building,library,science building,dining hall,sports field,art building,teachers’building。 playground, computer lab, gym 范文 Dear Peter, Thank you for your email. Your school sounds nice! I'd like to tell you about my new school. My school is not big but very beautiful. There is a sports field in the middle of the school. We go there and raise the national flags every Monday. It’s great! The classroom building is between the sports field and the teachers’ building. It looks very new. We spend most of the time in our classroom. And the library is next to the school hall. In the library, there are many kinds of books. It's my favorite place because it's quiet and I like reading books there. The dining hall is in front of the library and we have meals there. What a nice school! I love my new school. Bye for now, Li Hua 1.假如你是Eric Brown,你上周收到了你的英国朋友Alice的来信。在信中,她介绍了她的学校,请你根据表格信息写一封回信向Alice介绍一下你的学校。 Name Guangming Middle School beautiful and modern teachers’ building in the middle of the school teachers’ offices classroom building next to teachers’ building tidy and bright library behind the classroom building many different kinds of books sports field between the library and the teachers’ building raise the flag, do morning exercises 提示:1. 短文应包括上表中的全部内容(可适当发挥),条理清楚,行文连贯; 2. 词数不少于60词。 _ 升级版:学校生活 一、作文结构 1. 开头 (Introduction) 简单介绍学校的基本信息(名称、类型等) 表达对学校的整体感受 My school is called...(我的学校叫...) My school is big/small and beautiful.(我的学校很大/小且漂亮。) 2. 主体 (Body) 段落1:学校的设施(教室、图书馆、操场等) Our classroom is equipped with new desks and chairs. Students often play basketball on the playground after class. The library has a large collection of books. We do science experiments in the laboratory. The teaching building has five floors. 段落2:学校的课程和活动(科目、社团、体育等) We study many subjects, such as...(我们学习许多科目,比如...) I like.../My favorite subject is… because it is interesting/fun/easy/ I can do funny experiments/learn about the stories about the famous ancient people in the class. 喜欢每个学科的原因: I enjoy learning English songs. Math problems sometimes make me think hard. We read many classic stories in Chinese class. Science helps us understand the world better. I like drawing pictures in art class. Listening to music in music class is relaxing. After class, we can join different clubs like paper-cutting and rock music. 段落3:老师和同学(友好、乐于助人等) My teachers are kind and patient.(我的老师很友善且有耐心。) My classmates are friendly and helpful/warm-hearted.(我的同学很友好且乐于助人,热心的。) 个人感受 excited(兴奋的):I am excited about the new school activities.(我对新的学校活动感到兴奋。) happy(开心的):I feel happy when I get good grades.(当我取得好成绩时我很开心。) nervous(紧张的):I was nervous on the first day of school.(开学第一天我很紧张。) interested(感兴趣的):I am interested in the school club.(我对学校社团很感兴趣。) proud(自豪的):I am proud to be a student of this school.(我为是这所学校的学生而自豪。) worried(担忧的):I am a little worried about the difficult subjects.(我有点担心难的科目。) 积极感受:I am so excited to make new friends here. Everyone is friendly and helpful. 面临挑战:However, math is a bit difficult for me. I am trying my best to understand it. 3. 结尾 (Conclusion) 总结对学校的喜爱或期待 可以表达未来的愿望 I really love my school. I have a rich and colorful school life. I hope to learn a lot and make more friends here. 二、常用词汇 1. 课程和活动: subjects(科目), math(数学), English(英语), PE(体育), art(美术), music(音乐) clubs(社团), sports day(运动会), school trip(学校旅行) 2. 人物: teachers(老师), classmates(同学), friendly(友好的), helpful(乐于助人的) 三、范文 My School My school is Sunshine Middle School. My school is big and beautiful. There are many facilities in my school. We have a big library with lots of books. There is also a playground where we can play basketball and football. The classrooms are clean and bright. We study many subjects, such as Chinese, math, English, and PE. My favorite subject is English because my English teacher is humorous and it makes her class lively and interesting. I can learn a lot of foreign culture in the class. After class, we can join different clubs, like the art club or the music club. My teachers are kind and always help us. My classmates are friendly and warm-hearted too. We often play together and help each other. I love my school very much. I hope to learn more and make more friends here. 五、写作小贴士 1. 使用简单句,避免复杂句型。 2. 适当用连接词:and, but, because, so 等。 3. 检查拼写和语法错误。 1.假设你是李辉,你在美国的朋友Sam下个月将要作为交换生到你的学校学习,他想了解你和其他学生的学校生活,请根据以下要点提示向他介绍学校生活。 要点提示: 1. 简述学校日常生活如: (课程、午餐等); 2. 你最喜欢的学科及原因; 3. 学校的俱乐部及对学校生活的看法。 要求: 1. 语意连贯,语法正确,要点齐全; 2. 书写工整,卷面整洁,不少于60词,可适当增添内容; 3. 文章开头和格式已给出,不计入总词数。 参考词汇:食堂 the dining hall Dear Sam, I’m really happy to know that you will come to our school to study next month and I’m writing to tell you something about our school life. _ Li Hui 2.假如你是李辉,请根据下面提示写一封信,向你的美国朋友 Wendy 介绍你的学校和你自己。 提示: 1. 介绍学校:学校很大,有很多教室,教室干净明亮。学校有一个图书馆和两间阅览室。操场在教学楼前面,操场也很大。我们经常在那里做运动。 2. 介绍你的性格特征,爱好和喜爱的科目。 3. 介绍学校的老师和同学,对学校生活的看法。 要求: 不少于60词,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 Dear Wendy, Thanks for your letter. Now let me tell you something about my school and myself. _ Yours, 3. 假如你是Li Hua,你新结交了一个英国的笔友Tony。为了让他更好地了解你,请你根据以下内容要点提示,用英语给Tony写一封信,介绍你自己以及你在学校的日常生活。 内容要点: 1. 介绍自己的基本情况(生日、爱好、喜爱的科目……); 2. 介绍学校日常生活; 3. 对学校生活的看法。 注意: 1. 文中必须包含所给的内容要点,可适当发挥; 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校信息等; 3. 词数:不少于70词。开头已给出,不计入词数。 参考词汇: subject, begin, join the club, interesting Dear Tony, I’m very happy to know you. Let me tell you something about me. _ Yours, Li Hua 4.假如你是Peter,你在合肥一所初中学习,你的学校正举办文化交流活动,外国留学生们初到学校,想要了解你的校园生活。请你根据以下提示,向留学生们介绍自己的学校生活。 Class time 8:00 a.m.—6:10 p.m. Subjects Chinese, math, English... After-class activities Play sports Join Robot club, Paper-cutting club… Your feelings about your school life fun, colorful ... 参考词汇: have fun doing sth.做某事很开心 注意事项: 1)必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥; 2)意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范; 3)请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名; 4)词数60左右。 I’m Peter and _ _ 5.阳光中学的“英语周”开始了,其中有一个“Show My School Life”英文视频制作大赛。假如你是Daniel,准备参加这个比赛。请根据下面的导图提示,完成一段视频文字稿。 注意: 1. 必须回答导图中的所有问题,other部分请自由发挥一点; 2. 词数80左右,开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数; 3. 表达中请勿提及真实校名和姓名。 My School Life Hello, everyone! I’m Daniel. Welcome to Sunshine Middle School. I’d like to tell you about my school life. _ I think my school life is wonderful. ( 一 / 1 )学科网(北京)股份有限公司 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 $$