Unit 4 Section 5 Writing（写作优质课）-2025-2026学年八年级英语上册同步优质课件（沪教版2024）

By Yushen PPT TEMPLATE OF LITERATURE NOVEL READING SHARING MEETING，PPT TEMPLATE OF LITERATURE NOVEL READING SHARING MEETING 八年级英语备课组 2025.09 Inventions 8A Unit 4 Writing 沪教版英语八年级上 By Yushen By Yushen By Yushen YOUR LOGO A UNIVERSITY 01 新知导入 Lead in 02 以读促写 Pre Reading 03 读中积累 While Reading 04 读后任务 Post Reading By Yushen By Yushen Learning objectives： 04 02 03 01 After learning this unit, I can: Describe inventions clearly with key details. Develop creative and logical thinking. Use simple language to explain functions. Master basic essay structure. By Yushen By Yushen PPT TEMPLATE OF LITERATURE NOVEL READING SHARING MEETING，PPT TEMPLATE OF LITERATURE NOVEL READING SHARING MEETING Lead in for Writing 新 知 导 入 PART 01 By Yushen By Yushen In pairs, talk about one of the everyday inventions below or a choice of your own. Use the following questions to help you. Follow the example. What is the most useful invention to you and your family? What do you use it for? How often do you use it? Can you do without it? … be useful to sb. use sth. for sth. use sth to do sth. Suppose you are a crazy inventor… By Yushen PPT TEMPLATE OF LITERATURE NOVEL READING SHARING MEETING，PPT TEMPLATE OF LITERATURE NOVEL READING SHARING MEETING 以 读 促 写 PART 02 Read for Writing By Yushen By Yushen Here are some practical inventions! Do you have any ideas about something special or practical? Try to show us! What is the style of this passage? a report a story an exposition A flying car An exposition is a kind of article that introduces(介绍) or explains (解释) a thing. Wang Yao drew a mind map before she wrote about her idea for a new invention—a flying car. Look at the mind map and read her article to find out how she organized her ideas. A flying car My invention is a flying car. It is fast, convenient and green. The flying car has four wheels and two wings. It can run on land and fly in the air. It has a top speed of 300 km/h. You can travel farther distances in less time. The car can be controlled by voice. If you shout \"Fly!\", the car will turn into a plane in 30 seconds. Then you can fly in the air. You will be as free as a bird. Instead of petrol, the car uses solar power, so it will not pollute the air. As there are more cars on the road, there are more traffic jams. My invention will help people avoid traffic jams. It will make driving a more exciting experience too. People can fly anywhere they like and enjoy the view at the same time. My invention (A flying car) What does it look like? four wheels two wings How does it Work? use solar power instead of petrol use my voice to control it What is special about it? run on land fly in the air turn into a plane in 30 seconds Use a spider gram (蛛网图) to help us. 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. 6. 7. The body is the most important part in an exposition. What does it look like? What is special about it? How does it work? An invention must include the three aspects 1.它快速、方便、环保。____________________________________________________________ 2.它的最高时速为300千米每小时。______________________________________________________ 3.你可以在较短的时间内去到更远的地方。________________________________________________ Useful expressions: It is fast, convenient and green! It has a top speed of 300 km/h. You can go to farther places in a shorter time. Useful expressions: 4.它可以在陆地跑，也可以在空中飞。____________________________________________________ 5.我的发明将会帮助人们在将来过上更好的生活。___________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________ It can run on land and fly in the air. My invention will help people live a better life in the future. By Yushen PPT TEMPLATE OF LITERATURE NOVEL READING SHARING MEETING，PPT TEMPLATE OF LITERATURE NOVEL READING SHARING MEETING 读 中 积 累 PART 03 Read for Writing By Yushen By Yushen 引出发明主题 With the development of science and technology, more and more inventions appear, and I also have my own invention.（随着科技的发展，越来越多的发明涌现，我也有了自己的发明。） I have always dreamed of inventing something useful, and finally I made it.（我一直梦想着发明一些有用的东西，最终我做到了。） Today I'd like to introduce my invention to you, which I believe will be very helpful to people.（今天我想要向你们介绍我的发明，我相信它会对人们非常有帮助。） 描述发明外观 It looks like a small box, about the size of a book. 它看起来像一个小盒子，大概一本书那么大。 My invention has a colorful appearance, and it's easy to attract people's attention. 我的发明有着色彩鲜艳的外观，很容易吸引人的注意力。 It is designed to be round in shape, with a handle on the top for people to hold it easily.（它被设计成圆形，顶部有一个把手，方便人们握住它。） 说明发明用途与优势 It can help us save a lot of time when we are doing housework. 它能在我们做家务时帮我们节省很多时间。 My invention uses solar power, so it's environmentally friendly and can save energy. 我的发明使用太阳能，所以它很环保，还能节约能源）. One of its biggest advantages is that it can be used in different situations, whether at home or outside. 它最大的优点之一是能在不同场景下使用，无论是在家还是外出。 This invention can make our lives more convenient and comfortable.（这项发明能让我们的生活更加方便、舒适。 表达对发明的期待 I really hope my invention can be widely used in the future. 我真心希望我的发明未来能被广泛使用。 I believe my invention will bring great changes to people's lives someday. 我相信我的发明有朝一日会给人们的生活带来巨大变化。 Although it still has some imperfections, I'll try to improve it to make it better. 尽管它还有一些不足，我会努力改进让它变得更好. 1. What is your invention? 2. What does it look like? 3. What is special about it? 4. How does it work? 5. What will your invention help people do? Discussion Talk about your invention 参考句型： 1. It is a/an ... 2. It looks like... 3. It can.../It is able to... 4. How does it work? (When it...) 5. It can help people ... 2 Now describe your own invention. Step 1 Plan Draw a mind map for your own invention. Step 2 Write Write about your invention. You can also draw a picture of it. How many paragraphs? ( ) What are they about? Write down some key words or sentences. Para.1 . Para.2 . Para.3 . Para.4 . Structure of your own passage. By Yushen PPT TEMPLATE OF LITERATURE NOVEL READING SHARING MEETING，PPT TEMPLATE OF LITERATURE NOVEL READING SHARING MEETING 读 后 写 作 PART 04 Read for Writing By Yushen By Yushen My invention: A pair of special shoes 假设你们学校要开展一个名为“小小发明家”的活动。你发明了一双特别的鞋，所以想参加这次活动。根据以下提示给大家介绍你的发明。要求：80词左右，可适当发挥。 1．看起来像普通的鞋，但是鞋的材料很特别，鞋底里有电池； 2.冷的时候，可以使人们感觉到温暖，热的时候，可以使人们感觉到凉爽； 3．你对该项发明的看法。 【写作步骤】 ◆审题 （一）人称：用第三人称来介绍自己的发明； （二）时态：介绍发明，以一般现在时为主； （三）书写正文：根据提示写作，可适当补充内容，注意文章的自然衔接； （四）检查全文：时态、人称、要点。 ◆联想：写作本篇作文可能用到的词汇、短语： normal, material, battery,sole(鞋底), My invention My invention is a pair of shoes. They are very good.（Introduction） They look like the normal shoes, but the materials of the shoes are quite special. There are batteries in the soles of the shoes. When the weather is cold, they make people feel warm. When it is hot, they make people feel cool. When we put on this pair of shoes, we can feel comfortable.（Body） My invention will /can help people live a more comfortable life in the future.（Closing） By Yushen Homework 1. 完成课上作文 2.背诵积累的句子 3.听说作业 4.完成创意作业（提升） By Yushen By Yushen By Yushen 谢 谢 By Yushen By Yushen 2021 Blues 39816.0 $$