Unit4 Writing 学案-2025-2026学年沪教版英语八年级上册

沪教牛津新教材八上U4 Writing Name_________ Class_________ Now draw your own mind map. Main Features What it looks like Benefits Step 1: 题干细审 主题：人与社会——科学与技术 文体：说明文 人称： _____________ 人称 时态：以 _____________ 为主 Step 2: 谋篇布局 Paragraph 1：Beginning I'm excited to introduce my invention—a smart pet feeder. Paragraph 2：Body Look: The feeder is cylindrical (1) ___________ (在外形上) and has a clear food container. Features： It (2) ___________ (确保) pets get their meals at mealtimes with just enough food. With your phone app, you can care for your pet (3) ___________ (在远处). When the battery gets low, it (4) ___________ (发出) a loud sound to warn you. Benefits: It records your pet's daily diet and (5) ___________ weekly reports ___________ (为……提供……) you. It plays back your voice at mealtimes, making your pet feel you're (6) ___________ (在近旁). Paragraph 3：Ending I hope my invention makes pet care simple and (7) _______more fun _______(把……带给) every pet owner. Step 3: 句子提升 ★ 常用连词（词组）： 不仅……而且…… _________________ 如此……以至于…… _________________ 为了，以便 _________________ 此外 _________________ 更为重要的是 _________________ ★ 高分表达： 允许某人做某事 _________________ 留意…… _________________ 在……的帮助下 _________________ 同时 _________________ 了解 _________________ 感觉就像 _________________ 是做某事的时候了 _________________ 添加……到…… _________________ Step 4: 扩充成文 基础版范文 Hello everyone! I'm Li Hua, and I'm excited to introduce my invention—a smart pet feeder. The feeder is cylindrical and has a clear food container, so you can easily see the food inside. It can feed pets at the right time with just enough food. You can use a phone app to control it even when you're not at home. The app is simple enough for anyone to use. If the battery is low, it will make a loud sound to remind you. This smart feeder records how much and how often your pet eats and creates weekly reports. This helps you know if your pet is healthy. It catches your pet's funny eating moments too. You can see the photos when you want. Also, it can play your recorded voice to call your pet during mealtimes. This makes your pet feel you're always with it. I hope my pet feeder can make pet care easier and more fun for every pet owner. 进阶版范文 Hello everyone! I'm Li Hua, and I'm excited to introduce my invention—a smart pet feeder. The feeder is cylindrical in shape with a clear food container which allows you to easily keep an eye on the food inside. It can not only make pets get their meals right on time but also ensure the food is in just the right amount. With the help of your phone app, you can look after your pet even when you're not around. The app's design is so simple that it is easy for people of all ages to use. If the battery runs low, the feeder will make a loud sound and send a reminder to your phone at the same time. This smart feeder records how much and how often your pet eats, and makes simple weekly reports so that you can learn about your pet's eating habits better. Besides, it can take photos of your pet eating, so you can check on those cute moments anytime. What's more, it can play your recorded voice to call your pet when it's time to eat, so your pet feels like you're right there with it. I hope my pet feeder makes looking after pets a breeze and adds more fun to every pet owner's daily routine. 沪教牛津新教材八上 U4 Writing 答案 Step 1: 题干细审 人称：第一人称（I）时态：以一般现在时为主 Step 2: 谋篇布局（英文填空 / 短语翻译） 1. in shape（在外形上） 2. makes sure（确保） 3. in the distance / far away（在远处） 4. gives out / makes（发出） 5. provides; for（为…… 提供……） 6. by the side / nearby（在近旁） 7. brings; to（把…… 带给） Step 3: 句子提升（短语翻译） 常用连词（词组） · 不仅…… 而且……：not only...but also... · 如此…… 以至于……：so...that... · 为了，以便：so that / in order to · 此外：besides / what's more / in addition · 更为重要的是：most importantly / what's more important 高分表达 · 允许某人做某事：allow sb. to do sth. · 留意……：keep an eye on... / pay attention to... · 在…… 的帮助下：with the help of... · 同时：at the same time · 了解：learn about / know about · 感觉就像：feel like · 是做某事的时候了：it's time to do sth. · 添加…… 到……：add...to... 补充：思维导图参考（A smart pet feeder） 1. Basic info · Inventor: Li Hua · Appearance: cylindrical, clear food container 2. Main features · 定时定量自动投喂：feed pets on time with proper amount · 手机 app 远程控制：control by phone app far away · 低电量自动报警：warn when battery is low 3. Functions · 记录宠物进食数据：record pet's eating data · 生成每周饮食报告：make weekly diet reports · 播放主人录音：play the owner's recorded voice · 抓拍宠物进食瞬间：take photos of pet eating 4. Advantages · make pet care easy/convenient · help owners know pet's health status · make pets feel accompanied 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $