Unit 3 Getting along with others 友谊（单元应用文写作精练）英语译林版2020必修第一册

Unit 3 Getting along with others 友谊 ( 写作主题 识 )应用文写作精练(解析版) 主题：日记(有关好朋友的品质) 写作框架： 第一段 开门见山，引出话题。 第二段 对好朋友品质的描述。 第三段 进行总结。 写作词汇短语： 1. helpful adj. 愿意帮忙的 2. active adj. 积极的 3. selfless adj. 无私的 4. supportive adj. 支持的 5. be ready to help 乐于助人 6. be willing to help 乐于助人 7. Lively adj. 可爱的 8. Warm-hearted 热心的 9. be honest/ open/ patient with sb. 对某人坦诚/坦率/有耐心的 10. spare no effort to do sth. 不遗余力去做某事 11. be absorbed in 专心致志于 12. have difficulty (in) doing sth. 做某事有困难 13.be proud of 以……而骄傲 14.the importance of ……的重要性 15.take part in 参加 16.make up one’s mind 下定决心 17. go in for 参加; 从事 18. play an important role 发挥重要的作用 写作句型： 【开头句】 1. It is well known that everybody needs friends. 众所周知人人都需要朋友。 2. I want to apologize to my friend for quarrelling with her. 我想向我的朋友道歉，因为我和她吵架了。 3. I don’t want to let go of our friendship. 我不想放弃我们的友谊。 【中间句】 4. In my opinion，my friend has many good qualities. 在我看来，我的朋友有很多良好的品质。 5. The qualities are very important between friends. 这些品质在朋友之间非常重要。 6. Kate is a girl who is easy to get along/on with and we all like her. 凯特是一个容易相处的女孩, 我们都喜欢她。 【结尾句】 7. In a word，I do hope my friend will forgive me. I believe our friendship will grow stronger. 总之，我希望我的朋友能原谅我。我相信我们的友谊会越来越牢固。 8. I do hope she can forgive me and make up with me. 我真的希望她能原谅我，和我和好。 9. As a result, from this experience I have learned it was important to work together with others. 结果, 从这次经历中我认识到与他人合作是很重要的。 写作模板： I want to __________________________because _____________________. In my opinion, ____________________. My friend is _____________________. In addition, ____________________________,. In a word, I do hope ________________________. 举一反三： 假如你是李华，你的同学Lucy发现被好朋友欺骗了，很是苦恼，不知道还该不该继续她们的友谊。于是她向你询问“什么是真正的朋友？”，请你根据下面的提示给她写一封电子邮件。 1. 真正朋友的特点是：…… 2. 学着去了解别人，找到真正的好朋友； 3. 表达祝愿。 注意： 1. 词数80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 1 A friend in need is a friend indeed.是一句谚语。请根据自己的理解和经验，参考所给汉语提示，以《交友之道》为题写篇短文。词数100左右。 要求提示： 1每个人都需要朋友，如何交友极为重要。 2.要交朋友，首先对别人要友好。微笑是吸引别人的吸铁石(magnet)。 3.要使陌生人不管在何处，都能感到你的亲切。要关心别人胜过关心自己，不要以貌取人。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 2 (2024-2025学年高一上·河北衡水·阶段练习)假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Peter是高一年级的学生，他进入高中后，因为平时学习很忙不花时间去结交朋友，请给他写一封信，要点如下： 1、不赞同他的做法 2、阐述友谊在生活中的意义 3、给他提出具体的建议 注意:1、词数90左右；2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Peter, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours Li Hua Passage 3 假定你是李华，是某国际高中的学生。国际友谊日快到了，你想在校英语电台点播一首歌曲，感谢你班英国交换生Bob。请你给电台主持人Allen写一封邮件，内容包括： 1. 写信目的； 2. 你在英国时Bob对你的关爱； 3. 期待答复。 注意：写作词数应为80左右。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 4 假如你是李华，你的好朋友Tom在交友方面存在着一些困难，请根据下面提示用英语给她写一封信，内容包括： 1. 要交朋友首先要对别人友好，和他们坦诚相处； 2. 其次，要和朋友同甘共苦，患难见真情； 3. 要设身处地地为朋友着想，友谊需要时间和投入。 要求： 1. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Tom, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua Passage 5 假定你将在班级英语课上做一次关于中学生友谊的Daily Report。主要内容包括： 1.友谊的重要性； 2.如何选择朋友； 3.如何维持友谊。 注意: 1.字数80字左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Hello, everyone! ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ( 5 / 5 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ Unit 3 Getting along with others 友谊 ( 写作主题 识 )应用文写作精练(解析版) 主题：日记(有关好朋友的品质) 写作框架： 第一段 开门见山，引出话题。 第二段 对好朋友品质的描述。 第三段 进行总结。 写作词汇短语： 1. helpful adj. 愿意帮忙的 2. active adj. 积极的 3. selfless adj. 无私的 4. supportive adj. 支持的 5. be ready to help 乐于助人 6. be willing to help 乐于助人 7. Lively adj. 可爱的 8. Warm-hearted 热心的 9. be honest/ open/ patient with sb. 对某人坦诚/坦率/有耐心的 10. spare no effort to do sth. 不遗余力去做某事 11. be absorbed in 专心致志于 12. have difficulty (in) doing sth. 做某事有困难 13.be proud of 以……而骄傲 14.the importance of ……的重要性 15.take part in 参加 16.make up one’s mind 下定决心 17. go in for 参加; 从事 18. play an important role 发挥重要的作用 写作句型： 【开头句】 1. It is well known that everybody needs friends. 众所周知人人都需要朋友。 2. I want to apologize to my friend for quarrelling with her. 我想向我的朋友道歉，因为我和她吵架了。 3. I don’t want to let go of our friendship. 我不想放弃我们的友谊。 【中间句】 4. In my opinion，my friend has many good qualities. 在我看来，我的朋友有很多良好的品质。 5. The qualities are very important between friends. 这些品质在朋友之间非常重要。 6. Kate is a girl who is easy to get along/on with and we all like her. 凯特是一个容易相处的女孩, 我们都喜欢她。 【结尾句】 7. In a word，I do hope my friend will forgive me. I believe our friendship will grow stronger. 总之，我希望我的朋友能原谅我。我相信我们的友谊会越来越牢固。 8. I do hope she can forgive me and make up with me. 我真的希望她能原谅我，和我和好。 9. As a result, from this experience I have learned it was important to work together with others. 结果, 从这次经历中我认识到与他人合作是很重要的。 写作模板： I want to __________________________because _____________________. In my opinion, ____________________. My friend is _____________________. In addition, ____________________________,. In a word, I do hope ________________________. 举一反三： 假如你是李华，你的同学Lucy发现被好朋友欺骗了，很是苦恼，不知道还该不该继续她们的友谊。于是她向你询问“什么是真正的朋友？”，请你根据下面的提示给她写一封电子邮件。 1. 真正朋友的特点是：…… 2. 学着去了解别人，找到真正的好朋友； 3. 表达祝愿。 注意： 1. 词数80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Dear Lucy, I’m sorry to hear that your best friend has tricked you. I’d like to offer you some advice. Before making a decision, you’d better think the whole thing through. If your friend really tricked you on purpose, it’s time for you to let go of your friendship. First of all, a good friend is a person you can trust. Secondly, when you get into trouble, your friend will try to help you out. That is, a good friend should be helpful. Thirdly, a good friend should be understanding. Whenever you feel sad or lonely, he/she is willing to spare some time to keep you company. I hope that you will find a truly good friend, who will also value you very much. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生给同学Lucy写一封邮件，就她提出的疑问“什么是真正的朋友？”给出答复。 【详解】 1.词汇积累 提供某人某物：offer sb. sth. → provide sb. with sth. 首先：first of all → to begin with 应该：should → be supposed to 珍视：value → treasure 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Before making a decision, you’d better think the whole thing through. 拓展句：Before you make a decision, you’d better think the whole thing through. 【点睛】 [高分句型1]If your friend really tricked you on purpose, it’s time for you to let go of your friendship.(运用了if引导条件状语从句) [高分句型2]I hope that you will find a truly good friend, who will also value you very much.(运用了that引导宾语从句，who引导非限制性定语从句) Passage 1 A friend in need is a friend indeed.是一句谚语。请根据自己的理解和经验，参考所给汉语提示，以《交友之道》为题写篇短文。词数100左右。 要求提示： 1每个人都需要朋友，如何交友极为重要。 2.要交朋友，首先对别人要友好。微笑是吸引别人的吸铁石(magnet)。 3.要使陌生人不管在何处，都能感到你的亲切。要关心别人胜过关心自己，不要以貌取人。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Ways of making Friends Everyone needs friends, so how to make true friends is very important to anybody. To make friends, you must be friendly to others. A smile is like a magnet that draws people. Smile at others and you are always sure to get a smile in return. You should try your best to make a stranger feel at home, no matter where he happens to be. Think as you are in his position. Try to remember other’s names, which will make them feel that they have made an impression on you. If you don’t agree with others on certain matter, don’t argue but discuss with them. You should think more of others than of yourselves. Finally, don’t believe those who leave their friends when they are in trouble because “A friend in need is a friend indeed.” 【导语】本篇书面表达属于议论文，要求考生根据自己的理解和经验，参考所给汉语提示，以《交友之道》为题写篇短文。 【详解】词汇积累 重要的：be important → be of importance 对某人友好：be friendly to sb. → be kind to sb. 努力做某事：try one’s best to do sth. → make efforts to do sth. 有困难：in trouble → in difficulties 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：To make friends, you must be friendly to others. 拓展句：To make friends, you must be friendly to others, and it’s essential to leave a good impression to others at the first sight. 【点睛】 [高分句型1]You should do your best to make a stranger feel at home, no matter where he happens to be. (运用了no matter where引导的让步状语从句) [高分句型2]Try to remember other’s names, which will make them feel that they have made an impression on you. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) Passage 2 (2024-2025学年高一上·河北衡水·阶段练习)假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Peter是高一年级的学生，他进入高中后，因为平时学习很忙不花时间去结交朋友，请给他写一封信，要点如下： 1、不赞同他的做法 2、阐述友谊在生活中的意义 3、给他提出具体的建议 注意:1、词数90左右；2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Peter, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Peter, You mentioned in your letter that you were too busy to make friends. However, I see things in a different way. In my view, friendship is a necessary part in our life. Friendship is of great significance to everyone. First of all, friendship means not being lonely, as friends can understand you and share your sadness and happiness. Besides, friends are always the people you can rely on. Whenever you are in need of help, it is your friends who are ready to reach out a hand. I suggest that you join in extracurricular activities or join clubs that interest you. It’s a great way to meet pople and develop lasting friendships.             So why not make more friends around you? It will surely add more color and fun to your school life. Yours Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给美国朋友Peter写封信，对他因为太忙不去结交朋友表示不赞同，阐述友谊在生活中的意义，给他提出具体的建议。 【详解】 1.词汇积累 然而：however → nevertheless 必要的：necessary → essential 另外：besides → moreover 在我看来：in my view → in my perspective 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：In my view, friendship is a necessary part in our life. 拓展句：I hold the view that friendship is a necessary part in our life. 【点睛】 [高分句型1]You mentioned in your letter that you were too busy to make friends. (运用了that引导的宾语从句) [高分句型2]Besides, friends are always the people you can rely on. (运用了who/that引导的限制性定语从句，省略了who/that) Passage 3 假定你是李华，是某国际高中的学生。国际友谊日快到了，你想在校英语电台点播一首歌曲，感谢你班英国交换生Bob。请你给电台主持人Allen写一封邮件，内容包括： 1. 写信目的； 2. 你在英国时Bob对你的关爱； 3. 期待答复。 注意：写作词数应为80左右。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Dear Allen, I’m Li Hua, a student from Class 1. I’m writing to ask you nicely to play a song called Seasons in the Sun for my friend Bob on International Friendship Day. When I was studying abroad in his country last summer holiday, it was he and his family who helped and cared for me. We have become very close friends since then, and we always share everything with each other. Could you please help me to express my thanks to him? Looking forward to your reply. Thank you very much! Yours faithfully, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给电台主持人Allen写一封邮件，想在校英语电台点播一首歌曲，感谢英国交换生Bob的关照。 【详解】 1.词汇积累 命名：call →name 照顾：care for →take care of 表达：express →convey 答复：reply →answer 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：I’m writing to ask you nicely to play a song called Seasons in the Sun for my friend Bob on International Friendship Day. 拓展句：I’m writing to ask you nicely to play a song which is called Seasons in the Sun for my friend Bob on International Friendship Day. 【点睛】 【高分句型1】I’m writing to ask you nicely to play a song called Seasons in the Sun for my friend Bob on International Friendship Day.(运用了过去分词短语作定语) 【高分句型2】When I was studying abroad in his country last summer holiday, it was he and his family who helped and cared for me.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句和强调句型) Passage 4 假如你是李华，你的好朋友Tom在交友方面存在着一些困难，请根据下面提示用英语给她写一封信，内容包括： 1. 要交朋友首先要对别人友好，和他们坦诚相处； 2. 其次，要和朋友同甘共苦，患难见真情； 3. 要设身处地地为朋友着想，友谊需要时间和投入。 要求： 1. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Tom, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Tom, How is it going recently? I’m sorry to know that you’re having trouble in making friends. Here are some tips for you. To begin with, be friendly to others and get on with them frankly if you want to make friends. In addition, you should share happiness and sorrow with them. A saying goes that a friend in need is a friend indeed. When misunderstanding occurs, you should apologise to your friend as long as it is your fault. Lastly, wouldn’t it be a good idea if you put yourself in others’ shoes? As is known to all, friendship calls for time and effort. I hope you will find these ideas useful. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【导语】本文是一篇应用文，给好朋友Tom一些交友的建议。 【详解】 1.词汇积累 建议：tips → suggestions 发生：occur → take place 想要：want → urge 此外：in addition → furthermore 2.句式拓展 句式升级 原句：As is known to all, friendship calls for time and effort. 拓展句：What is known to all is that friendship calls for time and effort. 【点睛】 [高分句型1]To begin with, be friendly to others and get on with them frankly if you want to make friends. (运用了if引导的条件状语从句) [高分句型2]When misunderstanding occurs, you should apologise to your friend as long as it is your fault. (运用了状语从句的省略) Passage 5 假定你将在班级英语课上做一次关于中学生友谊的Daily Report。主要内容包括： 1.友谊的重要性； 2.如何选择朋友； 3.如何维持友谊。 注意: 1.字数80字左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Hello, everyone! ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Hello, everyone! As the saying goes “Friendship is like sunshine, it keeps us warm and helps us grow.” I think it is important for us to make good friends so that we can always hang out together and have fun. I like to choose people who are kind, honest and helpful as my friends. I like to share my thoughts and fears with them whenever I get into trouble. Now I have some good friends who trust me. I always go out with my friends, chatting and playing. I try to offer some advice to my friends when necessary. In this way I am able to maintain friendships. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇关于中学生友谊的Daily Report。 【详解】 第一步：审题 体裁：应用文 时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。要求： 1. 友谊的重要性； 2. 如何选择朋友； 3. 如何维持友谊。 第二步：列提纲 (重点词组) as the saying goes; make good friends; so that; hang out; have fun; share...with; get into trouble; offer...to; in this way 第三步：连词成句 1. As the saying goes “Friendship is like sunshine, it keeps us warm and helps us grow.” 2. I think it is important for us to make good friends so that we can always hang out together and have fun. 3. I like to choose people who are kind, honest and helpful as my friends. 4. I like to share my thoughts and fears with them whenever I get into trouble. 5. Now I have some good friends who trust me. 6. I always go out with my friends, chatting and playing. 7. I try to offer some advice to my friends when necessary. 8. In this way I am able to maintain friendships. 根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步：连句成篇(衔接词) 1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second, Finally (供参考) 2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore (供参考) 3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but (供参考) 4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result (供参考) 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。 【点睛】 [高分句型1]I think it is important for us to make good friends so that we can always hang out together and have fun. 此句中think后出现省略that引导的宾语从句；从句用到了it充当形式主语，动词不定式作真正的主语句式；此句还出现so that引导目的状语，整句表达复杂且高级。 [高分句型2]I like to choose people who are kind, honest and helpful as my friends. 此句中用到who引导的定语从句，表达高级。 [高分句型3]I try to offer some advice to my friends when necessary. 此句when necessary用到了状语从句的省略，用法高级。 ( 10 / 10 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$