Unit 4 Looking good, feeling good 青少年身心健康（单元应用文写作精练）英语译林版2020必修第一册

Unit 4 Looking good, feeling good 青少年身心健康 ( 写作主题 识 )应用文写作精练(解析版) 主题：对整形手术看法的议论文 写作框架： 第一段 开头：开门见山，引出讨论的话题。 第二段 主体：表明自己的观点并给出论据来支撑自己的观点。 第三段 结尾：归纳总结自己的观点。 写作词汇短语： 1. plastic surgery 整形手术 2. negative effects 消极作用 3. care about 在乎 4. concentrate on/upon 集中精力于…… 5. in a word 总之 6. return to a normal life 恢复正常生活 7. self-confidence 自信 8. keep away from 远离 9. increasingly popular　　　 越来越流行 10. bear the risk of 承担……的风险 11. in my view 依我看 12. hold the idea that. . . 持有……观点 13. various senses of beauty 不同的美感 14. a lifelong pain 终生的疼痛 15. satisfy one’s appetite for 满足某人对……的欲望 16. boost one’s confidence 增强某人的信心 17. facial expression 面部表情 写作句型： 【开头句】 1. Recent research shows that... 最近的研究表明…… 2. In my opinion, it is very... 在我看来，这是非常…… 3. More and more people choose to take the plastic surgery to make themselves look more perfect. 越来越多的人选择接受整形手术, 让他们自己看起来更完美。 【中间句】 4. First, it is the easiest way to help... 首先，这是帮助……最简单的方式。 5. Secondly, it helps people with... 其次，它帮助人们…… 6. Lastly, it’s a good idea to do... 最后，做……是个好主意。 7. Every coin has two sides. 事物都有两面性。 8. After the surgery, there are always side effects, which haunt people all the time. 手术过后, 总会有副作用, 它们会一直困扰着人们。 【结尾句】 9. In a word, I strongly hold the view that... 总之，我强烈坚持的观点是…… 10. Outer beauty is only skin-deep, as the saying goes. 就像俗语所说的那样, 外在美不过是肤浅的。 11. The real beauty is from the soul. 真正的美丽是从心灵散发出来的。 写作模板： As is known to all, plastic surgery is becoming …Because it can…..But I strongly hold the view that…. Plastic surgery has many negative effects on teenagers. Firstly, ….Secondly, ….. In a word, …. 举一反三： 假如你是李华，你们学校就“青少年是否应该整容”的问题进行讨论，要求每个同学用书信的形式投稿，发表自己的意见。请根据下面的提示写一篇短文。 1. 你的观点：青少年不应该整容； 2. 你的理由：对身体有害；分散学习的注意力；中学生过分注重外表不合适…… 注意： 1. 词数80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 1 许多高中生熬夜学习。对此，不同人有不同意见，请你以“高中生应熬夜学习么”为题写一篇议论文。 要求：1. 从正反两个方面陈述人们不同意见； 2. 给出你的见解。 注意：词数100词左右；题目已经写出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：stay up 熬夜 Should Senior High Students Stay up for study? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 2 试以“Can money buy happiness?”为主题写一篇100词左右的议论文，必须包括以下内容： l. 有人认为金钱是幸福之本(source of happiness)； 2. 也有人认为金钱是万恶之源(root of all evil)； 3. 我的看法。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 3 假定你是李华，你校英语社发起了一项征文活动，探讨学生使用平板电脑能否提高学习效果。请你用英语写一篇议论文投稿，内容包括： (1)你的观点； (2)至少两个支持你观点的理由； (3)总结。 注意： (1)写作词数应为80-100个； (2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 The Impact of Tablet Use on Student Learning Nowadays, it’s quite common to see students learning with the help of tablets. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 4 试以“Can Money Buy Happiness?”(金钱能买来幸福吗？)为题写一篇议论文，必须包括以下内容： (1)有人认为金钱是幸福之本(source of happiness)； (2)也有人认为金钱是万恶之源(root of all evil)； (3)你的看法。 注意：(1) 词数80左右； (2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 5 请根据以下提示写一篇关于早起有益的议论文。 1. 早起锻炼可使身体健康、强壮。 2. 早起朗读，有助于记住学过的东西。 3. 可为一天的活动做好准备，有充足的时间洗漱、吃早餐。坚持早起对培养性格也很有用。 词汇：记住： memorize 培养性格：character-training 坚持：stick to    刷牙：brush our teeth (开头已经给出,不需逐字逐句翻译。) Getting up early is a good habit.______________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ( 4 / 4 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ Unit 4 Looking good, feeling good 青少年身心健康 ( 写作主题 识 )应用文写作精练(解析版) 主题：对整形手术看法的议论文 写作框架： 第一段 开头：开门见山，引出讨论的话题。 第二段 主体：表明自己的观点并给出论据来支撑自己的观点。 第三段 结尾：归纳总结自己的观点。 写作词汇短语： 1. plastic surgery 整形手术 2. negative effects 消极作用 3. care about 在乎 4. concentrate on/upon 集中精力于…… 5. in a word 总之 6. return to a normal life 恢复正常生活 7. self-confidence 自信 8. keep away from 远离 9. increasingly popular　　　 越来越流行 10. bear the risk of 承担……的风险 11. in my view 依我看 12. hold the idea that. . . 持有……观点 13. various senses of beauty 不同的美感 14. a lifelong pain 终生的疼痛 15. satisfy one’s appetite for 满足某人对……的欲望 16. boost one’s confidence 增强某人的信心 17. facial expression 面部表情 写作句型： 【开头句】 1. Recent research shows that... 最近的研究表明…… 2. In my opinion, it is very... 在我看来，这是非常…… 3. More and more people choose to take the plastic surgery to make themselves look more perfect. 越来越多的人选择接受整形手术, 让他们自己看起来更完美。 【中间句】 4. First, it is the easiest way to help... 首先，这是帮助……最简单的方式。 5. Secondly, it helps people with... 其次，它帮助人们…… 6. Lastly, it’s a good idea to do... 最后，做……是个好主意。 7. Every coin has two sides. 事物都有两面性。 8. After the surgery, there are always side effects, which haunt people all the time. 手术过后, 总会有副作用, 它们会一直困扰着人们。 【结尾句】 9. In a word, I strongly hold the view that... 总之，我强烈坚持的观点是…… 10. Outer beauty is only skin-deep, as the saying goes. 就像俗语所说的那样, 外在美不过是肤浅的。 11. The real beauty is from the soul. 真正的美丽是从心灵散发出来的。 写作模板： As is known to all, plastic surgery is becoming …Because it can…..But I strongly hold the view that…. Plastic surgery has many negative effects on teenagers. Firstly, ….Secondly, ….. In a word, …. 举一反三： 假如你是李华，你们学校就“青少年是否应该整容”的问题进行讨论，要求每个同学用书信的形式投稿，发表自己的意见。请根据下面的提示写一篇短文。 1. 你的观点：青少年不应该整容； 2. 你的理由：对身体有害；分散学习的注意力；中学生过分注重外表不合适…… 注意： 1. 词数80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【范文】 Dear Editor, I’m Li Hua. I’m writing to express my opinions about whether teenagers should have plastic surgery. I strongly hold the view that teenagers shouldn’t have plastic surgery. Firstly, a teenager should not care about his appearance too much, but concentrate on his lessons. In other words, a teenager should improve himself by working hard. Secondly, a teenager is still growing and such surgery is likely to harm his health. Some teenagers had plastic surgery, which stopped them from returning to a normal life. Therefore, they regret having the surgery. In a word, a teenager should keep away from plastic surgery, read more books and lead a meaningful life. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求考生就“青少年是否应该整容”的问题发表自己的意见，写一封书信投稿，需陈述自己的观点，详述支撑该观点的理由。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累 表达：express → convey 看法：opinion → view, thought 专注于：concentrate on → focus on 换句话说：in other words → that is to say 阻止某人做某事：stop sb. from doing sth.→ prevent sb. from doing sth. 总之：in a word → in short, in brief 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Secondly, a teenager is still growing and such surgery is likely to harm his health. 拓展句：Secondly, a teenager is still growing and it is likely that such surgery will harm his health. 【点睛】 [高分句型1]I’m writing to express my opinions about whether teenagers should have plastic surgery. (运用了whether引导宾语从句) [高分句型2]I strongly hold the view that teenagers shouldn’t have plastic surgery. (运用了that引导同位语从句) [高分句型3]Some teenagers had plastic surgery, which stopped them from returning to a normal life. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句) Passage 1 许多高中生熬夜学习。对此，不同人有不同意见，请你以“高中生应熬夜学习么”为题写一篇议论文。 要求：1. 从正反两个方面陈述人们不同意见； 2. 给出你的见解。 注意：词数100词左右；题目已经写出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：stay up 熬夜 Should Senior High Students Stay up for study? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【范文】                                                                 Should Senior High Students Stay up for study? With the learning task increasing in high school, more and more high school students are beginning to stay up late to study. Some students are in favor of staying up late to study, while others are against it. Some think that staying up all night studying often does harm to the development and health of students. Not enough sleep will have an impact on our health, leading to a decrease in learning efficiency. Others believe that they can make full use of the night time to make up for the missed time during the day, improving their grades. In my opinion, I object to staying up all night studying, because it is not beneficial to our health and study in the long run. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于议论文，许多高中生熬夜学习。对此，不同人有不同意见，请你以“高中生应熬夜学习么”为题写一篇议论文。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累 ①充分利用：make full use of → make the most of ②导致：result in → lead to ③影响： have an effect on → have an impact on ④支持：be for → be in favor of 2. 句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：Not enough sleep will have an impact on our health, leading to a decrease in learning efficiency. 拓展句：It is not enough sleep that will have an impact on our health, leading to a decrease in learning efficiency. 【点睛】 [高分句型1]Others believe that they can make full use of the night time to make up for the missed time during the day, improving their grades.(现在分词作状语) [高分句型2]In my opinion, I object to staying up all night studying, because it is not beneficial to our health and study in the long run.(运用了because引导的原因状语从句) Passage 2 试以“Can money buy happiness?”为主题写一篇100词左右的议论文，必须包括以下内容： l. 有人认为金钱是幸福之本(source of happiness)； 2. 也有人认为金钱是万恶之源(root of all evil)； 3. 我的看法。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【范文】    Can money buy happiness? People have various answers to the question. Some people may say, “Yes.” In their eyes, only a rich man can live a happy life. For example, a man with plenty of money can buy delicious food, beautiful dresses, luxurious houses, expensive cars-anything required for him to live comfortably and enjoyably. For this reason, they believe that money is the source of happiness. On the other hand, there are still a lot of others who take a negative attitude towards money. They think that money is the root of all evil. As a proverb goes, “Money makes the mare go.” Money can drive people into stealing, robbing and even murdering. Many people become criminals just because they were in search of much more money. In my view, money, when justly obtained and properly used, can bring us happiness and blessings.  However, if we try every possible means, good or evil, to get money for nothing, money means nothing but a source of evil. Therefore, I believe that money is a good servant but a bad master. 【导语】本篇是应用文写作。要求考生以“Can money buy happiness?”为主题写一篇100词左右的议论文。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 各种各样的：various → all kinds of 幸福的：happy → blessed 相信：believe → trust 观点：view → opinion 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句： For example, a man with plenty of money can buy delicious food, beautiful dresses, luxurious houses, expensive cars-anything required for him to live comfortably and enjoyably. 拓展句： For example, a man with plenty of money can buy delicious food, beautiful dresses, luxurious houses, expensive cars-anything that is required for him to live comfortably and enjoyably. 【点睛】 [高分句型1]On the other hand, there are still a lot of others who take a negative attitude towards money.(who引导的定语从句) [高分句型2]In my view, money, when justly obtained and properly used, can bring us happiness and blessings.(when引导的时间状语从句) Passage 3 假定你是李华，你校英语社发起了一项征文活动，探讨学生使用平板电脑能否提高学习效果。请你用英语写一篇议论文投稿，内容包括： (1)你的观点； (2)至少两个支持你观点的理由； (3)总结。 注意： (1)写作词数应为80-100个； (2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 The Impact of Tablet Use on Student Learning Nowadays, it’s quite common to see students learning with the help of tablets. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【范文】                                The Impact of Tablet Use on Student Learning Nowadays, it’s quite common to see students learning with the help of tablets. In my opinion, I firmly believe that this trend positively impacts their learning outcomes.  Firstly, tablets offer a wealth of educational resources accessible at students’ fingertips. Students can access multimedia content, such as videos and animations, which often make complex concepts easier to understand. Secondly, tablets facilitate personalized learning. Unlike traditional classrooms where the pace and content are often standardized, tablets allow students to work at their own pace and focus on areas where they need improvement.  In conclusion, the use of tablets in student learning has a profound positive impact. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生用英语写一篇议论文投稿，参加学校英语社发起的一项征文活动，探讨学生使用平板电脑能否提高学习效果。 【详解】 1.词汇积累 在我看来：in my opinion → from my point of view 影响：impact → influence 集中精力于：focus on → concentrate on 总之：in conclusion → to sum up 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Firstly, tablets offer a wealth of educational resources accessible at students’ fingertips. 拓展句：Firstly, tablets offer a wealth of educational resources that are accessible at students’ fingertips. 【点睛】 [高分句型1]In my opinion, I firmly believe that this trend positively impacts their learning outcomes. (运用了that引导宾语从句) [高分句型2]Students can access multimedia content, such as videos and animations, which often make complex concepts easier to understand. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句) Passage 4 试以“Can Money Buy Happiness?”(金钱能买来幸福吗？)为题写一篇议论文，必须包括以下内容： (1)有人认为金钱是幸福之本(source of happiness)； (2)也有人认为金钱是万恶之源(root of all evil)； (3)你的看法。 注意：(1) 词数80左右； (2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【范文】 Can Money Buy Happiness? Different people have different opinions. Some think yes, while others hold the opposite. It is true that with enough money one can buy all the things one wants, and live a life of comfort and security. However, it is equally true that a lack of money causes great distress. It is a common view that money is the root of all evil. The pursuit of money drives many people to cheat and steal. In some places there is nothing that cannot be bought with money, resulting in corrupt societies where everybody is miserable. So, money does not necessarily mean happiness. It all depends on how it is used. If we make honest and sensible use of money, it can be a stepping-stone to happiness. Although money cannot buy happiness, it can make happiness possible if it is employed sensibly. 【解析】本文属于命题议论文。要求考生以“Can Money Buy Happiness?”(金钱能买来幸福吗？)为题写一篇议论文。 【详解】 第一步：审题 体裁：议论文 时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。 要求： 1. 有人认为金钱是幸福之本(source of happiness)； 2. 也有人认为金钱是万恶之源(root of all evil)； 3. 你的看法。第二步：列提纲 (重点词组) hold the opposite; It is true that...; live a...life; a lack of ; pursuit; drive; result in; not necessarily; depend on; make honest and sensible use of; stepping-stone; sensibly 第三步：连词成句(包含关键句，至少3句) 1. Different people have different opinions. 2. Some think yes, while others hold the opposite. 3. It is true that with enough money one can buy all the things one wants, and live a life of comfort and security. 4. However, it is equally true that a lack of money causes great distress. 5. It is a common view that money is the root of all evil. 6. The pursuit of money drives many people to cheat and steal. 7. In some places there is nothing that cannot be bought with money, resulting in corrupt societies where everybody is miserable. 8. So, money does not necessarily mean happiness. 9. It all depends on how it is used. 10. If we make honest and sensible use of money, it can be a stepping-stone to happiness. 11. Although money cannot buy happiness, it can make happiness possible if it is employed sensibly. 根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步：连句成篇(衔接词) 1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second (供参考) 2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover (供参考) 3.表转折对比关系：However, Although+clause(从句), Some…,while others… 4.表因果关系： So 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。 【点睛】[高分句型1]It is true that with enough money one can buy all the things one wants, and live a life of comfort and security. (it是形式主语，that引导主语从句是真正的主语) [高分句型2]In some places there is nothing that cannot be bought with money, resulting in corrupt societies where everybody is miserable. (there be句型；that引导定语从句；现在分词短语resulting in作状语；where引导定语从句) [高分句型3]Although money cannot buy happiness, it can make happiness possible if it is employed sensibly. (Although引导让步状语从句和if引导条件状语从句) Passage 5 请根据以下提示写一篇关于早起有益的议论文。 1. 早起锻炼可使身体健康、强壮。 2. 早起朗读，有助于记住学过的东西。 3. 可为一天的活动做好准备，有充足的时间洗漱、吃早餐。坚持早起对培养性格也很有用。 词汇：记住： memorize 培养性格：character-training 坚持：stick to    刷牙：brush our teeth (开头已经给出,不需逐字逐句翻译。) Getting up early is a good habit.______________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【范文】 Getting up early is a good habit. It is of great importance to our health, our study and our life. First, getting up early helps to keep us fit and strong. We can improve our health by doing morning exercises in the open air. Second, getting up early to read aloud helps us memorize what we have learned in class. Third, getting up early helps to prepare our work of the day. We can have enough time to wash our faces, brush our teeth and do other preparations. Before we go to school we can have our breakfast in no hurry. If we stick to getting up early every day, we will find it very useful for our character-training. 【详解】这是一篇议论文，首先要认真阅读题目。请根据以下提示写一篇关于早起有益的议论文。1. 早起锻炼可使身体健康、强壮。2. 早起朗读，有助于记住学过的东西。 3. 可为一天的活动做好准备，有充足的时间洗漱、吃早餐。坚持早起对培养性格也很有用。 应该用用一般现在时来写。需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。 【点睛】本文内容整，结构合理，语言通顺。文章使用了一些高分句型：1. Second, getting up early to read aloud helps us memorize what we have learned in class. 本句是what引导的宾语从句。2. If we stick to getting up early every day, we will find it very useful for our character-training. 本句为if引导的条件状语从句(主将从现)。 ( 3 / 9 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$