届读后续写：Max、Ava和Sam用实际行动证明环保不是口号，行动才是王道讲义- 湖北省武汉市2025届高中毕业生二月调研考试英语试卷

阅读下面材料，标黑加粗斜体黄，可积累文本！黑色块 动词积累或动作串；蓝色（宾从）红色（定从）单斜体（状从）；其余非谓语形式都会标注；B-eli-eve in daily accumulation!(注释) 武汉市2025届高中毕业生二月调研考试英语试卷 第二节（满分25分） 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 As the school year wrapped up and the first days of summer vacation stretched out before them, Max, Ava, and Sam had a perfect day planned at their usual community park. This tidy little park was their go - to spot for unwinding and just enjoying some precious leisure time. Max rushed ahead with a soccer ball under his arm, Ava and Sam trailing closely behind, full of energy. It was the kind of day that promised endless fun and carefree laughter. But as they stepped into the park, their heart sank. The once - beloved playground was now a chaotic mess of discarded trash (乱扔的垃圾) — candy wrappers stuck in the slide’s metal bars, plastic bottles rolling in the wind, and chip bags lying underfoot. “Look at this!” Ava shouted in disbelief as she pointed to the garbage near the swings. Max's face darkened with frustration. The three friends stood frozen, their eyes scanning the playground area. The once clean slides and swings were now buried under a layer of candy wrappers and plastic bottles. Ava cast a glance (瞥一眼) at the walking trails, where garbage seemed to have taken over, with discarded bags and cans lying everywhere. Sam looked out at the grassy fields — a disaster. The park was vast, but every corner seemed to have been touched by the carelessness of others. “Who would be so thoughtless?” Max whispered, shaking his head. Sam kicked a plastic bottle in anger, sending it flying across the grass. “It’s not just thoughtless — it’s disrespectful.” Ava sighed thoughtfully but suddenly her face lit up. “We can’t just leave it like this. Why don’t we do something about it? We can, say, form a Cleanup Squad (清洁小分队)…” she said, her voice soft but determined. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: Max and Sam exchanged an excited glance. Paragraph 2: Unexpectedly, other parkgoers joined in as they did the cleanup. 武汉市2025届高中毕业生二月调研考试英语试卷 第二节（满分25分） 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 As the school year wrapped up and the first days of summer vacation stretched out before them, Max, Ava, and Sam had a perfect day planned at their usual community park(have sth done，交代人物). This tidy little park was their go - to spot for unwinding and just enjoying some precious leisure time(交代背景信息). Max rushed ahead with a soccer ball under his arm(介短，状态描写), Ava and Sam trailing closely behind(独立主格，人物刻画), full of energy(adj短语做补语). It was the kind of day that promised endless fun and carefree laughter(强调句，无灵主语句). But as they stepped into the park(状从), their heart sank(刻画人物情感). The once - beloved playground was now a chaotic mess of discarded trash (乱扔的垃圾) (对比描写)— candy wrappers stuck in the slide’s metal bars(独立主格，补充解释), plastic bottles rolling in the wind(独立主格), and chip bags lying underfoot(独立主格，3个并列). “Look at this!” Ava shouted in disbelief as she pointed to the garbage near the swings. Max's face darkened with frustration(情绪刻画). The three friends stood frozen, their eyes scanning the playground area(独立主格刻画人物状态). The once clean slides and swings were now buried under a layer of candy wrappers and plastic bottles(具体环境描写). Ava cast a glance (瞥一眼) at the walking trails, where garbage seemed to have taken over, with discarded bags and cans lying everywhere(with复合结构). Sam looked out at the grassy fields — a disaster. The park was vast, but every corner seemed to have been touched by the carelessness of others(环境描写). “Who would be so thoughtless?” Max whispered, shaking his head(现在分词短语做伴随动作). Sam kicked a plastic bottle in anger(动作刻画描写情绪), sending it flying across the grass(现在分词短语做伴随动作). “It’s not just thoughtless — it’s disrespectful.(递进描写)” Ava sighed thoughtfully but suddenly her face lit up(情绪刻画). “We can’t just leave it like this. Why don’t we do something about it? We can, say, form a Cleanup Squad (清洁小分队)…” she said, her voice soft but determined.(独立主格刻画人物) 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: Max and Sam exchanged an excited glance. Paragraph 2: Unexpectedly, other parkgoers joined in as they did the cleanup. 1. 文章分类与续写思路分析 文章类型：社会问题类读后续写 续写思路构思： 布局：续写应围绕“清洁小分队”的行动展开，描述他们的努力和成果，以及如何影响周围的人。 提炼框架：从发现问题、决定行动、实施行动、影响他人四个方面进行。 实施：通过动作、心、环境描写，展现人物的情感变化和行动过程。 承接原文：注意承接原文的情感基调（失望、愤怒、决心）和情节发展（发现垃圾、决定清理）。 巧妙设计：可以通过其他公园游客的加入，展现集体行动的力量和积极影响。 2. 故事山模式与原文衔接分析 分析角度 内容 原文反应句 人物刻画 Max、Ava、Sam三人对公园垃圾的反应不同，展现了各自的性格特点。 Max's face darkened with frustration. Ava sighed thoughtfully. 情感层次 从失望、愤怒到决心行动的情感变化。 “Who would be so thoughtless?” Max whispered, shaking his head. 关键情节点 发现垃圾、决定清理、行动开始。 “We can’t just leave it like this. Why don’t we do something about it?” 语言特色 使用直接引语和描述性语言，增强情感表达。 Ava shouted in disbelief as she pointed to the garbage near the swings. 关键词分析 “thoughtless”、“disrespectful”、“Cleanup Squad”等关键词。 “It’s not just thoughtless — it’s disrespectful.” 心理描写 通过面部表情和动作描写展现心理变化。 Max's face darkened with frustration. 动作描写 通过动作描写展现情感和决心。 Sam kicked a plastic bottle in anger, sending it flying across the grass. 环境描写 描述公园的脏乱状态，增强情感冲击。 The once clean slides and swings were now buried under a layer of garbage. 隐含主题 通过集体行动解决社会问题，展现积极影响。 “We can’t just leave it like this. Why don’t we do something about it?” 情感转折 从失望到决心行动的转折。 Ava sighed thoughtfully but suddenly her face lit up. 空间转换 从公园入口到各个区域的垃圾分布。 Ava cast a glance at the walking trails, where garbage seemed to have taken over. 时间过渡 从发现垃圾到决定清理的时间过渡。 As they stepped into the park, their heart sank. 伏笔处和冲突点： 伏笔：Ava提出“Cleanup Squad”的想法，为后续行动埋下伏笔。 冲突点：公园的脏乱状态与三人的期望形成冲突，激发行动。 隐含线索： 线索：Ava的“Cleanup Squad”想法，暗示后续的集体行动。 解决方案：通过集体行动清理公园，展现积极影响。 3. 续写例句与高级替换词 动作描写例句： Max picked up a candy wrapper and tossed it into the trash bag. Ava carefully removed a plastic bottle from the slide’s metal bars. Sam bent down to collect the chip bags scattered underfoot. They worked tirelessly, their hands moving swiftly to clear the mess. Max wiped the sweat from his brow as he continued to clean. Ava reached out to grab a rolling plastic bottle before it could escape. Sam used a stick to fish out a wrapper stuck in the bushes. They coordinated their efforts, each taking a different section of the park. 心理描写例句： Max felt a surge of determination as he looked at the mess. Ava’s heart swelled with hope as she saw their progress. Sam’s frustration turned into pride as they worked together. They all felt a sense of accomplishment with each piece of trash they collected. Max’s initial anger melted away as he focused on the task at hand. Ava’s thoughtful sigh turned into a smile as she saw the park transform. Sam’s anger was replaced by a sense of purpose as they cleaned. They all felt a renewed sense of community as they worked side by side. 环境描写例句： The park, once a chaotic mess, began to regain its former beauty. The slides and swings, now free of garbage, gleamed in the sunlight. The walking trails, once littered with trash, were now clean and inviting. The grassy fields, once a disaster, were now pristine and green. The air, once heavy with the smell of garbage, was now fresh and clean. The parkgoers, once indifferent, now watched with admiration. The playground, once buried under trash, was now a place of joy again. The park, once a symbol of neglect, was now a testament to their hard work. 高级替换词： 垃圾：litter → debris, refuse, waste, rubbish, detritus 清理：clean → tidy, sanitize, purge, cleanse, decontaminate 决心：determination → resolve, perseverance, tenacity, steadfastness, willpower 愤怒：anger → fury, wrath, indignation, outrage, resentment 希望：hope → optimism, aspiration, expectation, anticipation, confidence 4. 语法现象与语料积累 高中语法现象： 独立主格：Ava and Sam trailing closely behind, full of energy. 直接引语： “Look at this!” Ava shouted in disbelief. 形容词作定语：The once clean slides and swings were now buried under a layer of garbage. 动词不定式作目的状语：Why don’t we do something about it? 常见搭配： wrap up：结束 词意：to bring to an end 词性：动词短语 近义词：conclude, finish 反义词：begin, start 例句： The meeting wrapped up at 5 PM. Let’s wrap up the project by Friday. stretch out：延伸 词意：to extend over a period of time 词性：动词短语 近义词：extend, prolong 反义词：shorten, contract 例句： The road stretches out before us. The vacation stretched out for two weeks. cast a glance：瞥一眼 词意：to look quickly 词性：动词短语 近义词：glance, peek 反义词：stare, gaze 例句： She cast a glance at the clock. He cast a glance over his shoulder. take over：占据 词意：to assume control 词性：动词短语 近义词：dominate, occupy 反义词：relinquish, surrender 例句： The new manager took over the department. The weeds have taken over the garden. 生词短语： discarded trash：丢弃的垃圾 词意：waste material that has been thrown away 词性：名词短语 近义词：litter, refuse 反义词：treasure, valuables 例句： The park was filled with discarded trash. He picked up the discarded trash and put it in the bin. chaotic mess：混乱的场面 词意：a state of complete disorder 词性：名词短语 近义词：disarray, confusion 反义词：order, organization 例句： The room was a chaotic mess after the party. The kitchen was a chaotic mess of dirty dishes. thoughtless：欠考虑的 词意：showing a lack of consideration 词性：形容词 近义词：careless, inconsiderate 反义词：thoughtful, considerate 例句： His thoughtless remark hurt her feelings. It was thoughtless of him to leave without saying goodbye. disrespectful：不尊重的 词意：showing a lack of respect 词性：形容词 近义词：rude, impolite 反义词：respectful, polite 例句： His disrespectful behavior was unacceptable. It’s disrespectful to talk back to your elders. Cleanup Squad：清洁小分队 词意：a group of people organized to clean up a place 词性：名词短语 近义词：cleaning crew, sanitation team 反义词：litterers, polluters 例句： The Cleanup Squad worked hard to restore the park. They formed a Cleanup Squad to tackle the neighborhood’s trash problem. 5. Possible Versions (3) Version 1 Paragraph 1: Max and Sam exchanged an excited glance. "That's a brilliant idea, Ava!" Max exclaimed, his voice filled with enthusiasm(独立主格刻画人物). Sam nodded vigorously, his eyes gleaming with resolve(独立主格刻画人物情绪). Without wasting a moment, they sprang into action. Max dashed off to fetch trash bags from his house nearby, while Ava and Sam began gathering the larger pieces of garbage(状从描述动作), such as the chip bags and plastic bottles. As they worked, Ava hummed a cheerful tune(动作刻画反应人物心情), and soon the others joined in, their voices blending harmoniously(独立主格刻画人物). Their laughter and songs echoed through the park(环境描写反应人物心理), transforming the cleanup into a joyful activity rather than a chore(现在分词短语做结果状语). Paragraph 2: Unexpectedly, other parkgoers joined in as they did the cleanup. A young family, who had been picnicking nearby, noticed their efforts and decided to contribute. Even a jogger paused to pick up a few pieces of litter before continuing his run. With more hands on deck, the cleanup progressed swiftly. Before they knew it, the playground was restored to its former glory. The slides and swings gleamed under the sunlight, and the grassy fields were pristine once more(环境描写，衔接原文做对比). Max, Ava, and Sam exchanged satisfied smiles(人物刻画), their hearts swelling with pride(独立主格刻画人物). They realized that their small initiative had sparked a collective effort, proving(现在分词短语做结果状语) that together, they could make a significant impact. 加分点： 独立主格：a cheerful tune, their voices blending harmoniously. 动词不定式作目的状语：to fetch trash bags, to contribute. 情绪描写： enthusiasm：Max exclaimed, his voice filled with enthusiasm. resolve：Sam nodded vigorously, his eyes gleaming with resolve. satisfaction：Max, Ava, and Sam exchanged satisfied smiles. 动作描写： dashed off：Max dashed off to fetch trash bags. gathering：Ava and Sam began gathering the larger pieces of garbage. echoed：Their laughter and songs echoed through the park. 亮点词汇短语： brilliant idea：a brilliant idea gleaming with resolve：his eyes gleaming with resolve transforming into：transforming the cleanup into a joyful activity 升级替换选项： brilliant：excellent, outstanding, superb, remarkable gleaming：shining, sparkling, glowing, radiant transforming：converting, changing, altering, modifying 例句： His eyes were gleaming with resolve as he tackled the difficult task. The brilliant idea sparked a wave of enthusiasm among the team. The cleanup was transforming into a community event. Version 2 Paragraph 1: Max and Sam exchanged an excited glance. "That's a fantastic idea, Ava!" Max declared, his face lighting up with excitement(独立主格刻画人物表情). Sam grinned broadly, his determination evident in his stance(独立主格刻画人物). They wasted no time and immediately got to work. Max hurried to his house to grab some trash bags(目的状语), while Ava and Sam started picking up the larger pieces of garbage(状从), like the chip bags and plastic bottles. As they worked, Ava began singing a lively song, and the others quickly joined in. Their cheerful voices and laughter filled the park, turning the cleanup into a delightful experience(现在分词短语做结果状语). Paragraph 2: Unexpectedly, other parkgoers joined in as they did the cleanup. A group of teenagers, who had been lounging on the grass, saw their efforts and decided to help out. Even a dog walker paused to pick up some litter along the path. With more people joining in, the cleanup moved along rapidly. Soon, the playground was spotless once again(环境描写). The slides and swings shone brightly in the sun, and the grassy fields were free of trash(环境变化描写，对比衔接原文). Max, Ava, and Sam looked around, their faces beaming with pride(独立主格刻画人物). They understood that their small action had inspired others, showing(现在分词短语做结果状语) that collective effort could bring about positive change. 情绪描写： excitement：Max declared, his face lighting up with excitement. determination：Sam grinned broadly, his determination evident in his stance. pride：Max, Ava, and Sam looked around, their faces beaming with pride. 动作描写： hurried：Max hurried to his house to grab some trash bags. picking up：Ava and Sam started picking up the larger pieces of garbage. shone brightly：The slides and swings shone brightly in the sun. 亮点词汇短语： fantastic idea：a fantastic idea grinned broadly：Sam grinned broadly turning into：turning the cleanup into a delightful experience 升级替换选项： fantastic：wonderful, amazing, incredible, marvelous grinned：smiled, beamed, chuckled, laughed turning：changing, converting, altering, modifying 例句： His face lit up with excitement as he heard the fantastic idea. She grinned broadly when she saw the results of their hard work. The event was turning into a memorable experience for everyone. Version 3 Paragraph 1: Max and Sam exchanged an excited glance. "That's an fantastic idea, Ava!" Max shouted, his voice brimming with enthusiasm(独立主格，刻画人物形象). Sam clapped his hands together, his eyes sparkling with determination(独立主格刻画人物). They didn't hesitate and immediately sprang into action. Max raced home to get some trash bags, while Ava and Sam began collecting the larger pieces of garbage, such as the chip bags and plastic bottles. As they worked, Ava started whistling a merry tune(动作刻画心理), and the others soon joined in. Their joyful whistling and laughter filled the park(环境描写), making the cleanup feel like a fun adventure(结果状语从句). Paragraph 2: Unexpectedly, other parkgoers joined in as they did the cleanup. A mother with her toddler, who had been playing nearby, saw their efforts and decided to help. Even a cyclist stopped to pick up some litter along the path. With more people joining in, the cleanup progressed quickly. Before long, the playground was clean and tidy once more. The slides and swings sparkled in the sunlight, and the grassy fields were free of trash(对比描写，与原文衔接). Max, Ava, and Sam looked at each other, their faces glowing with pride(独立主格刻画人物). They realized that their small action had inspired others, demonstrating(现在分词短语做结果状语) that together, they could make a real difference. 加分点： 动词不定式作目的状语：to get some trash bags, to help. 情绪描写：enthusiasm：Max shouted, his voice brimming with enthusiasm. determination：Sam clapped his hands together, his eyes sparkling with determination. pride：Max, Ava, and Sam looked at each other, their faces glowing with pride. 动作描写： raced：Max raced home to get some trash bags. collecting：Ava and Sam began collecting the larger pieces of garbage. sparkled：The slides and swings sparkled in the sunlight. 亮点词汇短语： amazing idea：an amazing idea clapped his hands：Sam clapped his hands together making feel like：making the cleanup feel like a fun adventure 升级替换选项： amazing：astonishing, astounding, stunning, remarkable clapped：applauded, cheered, celebrated, praised making：creating, forming, producing, generating 例句： His voice was brimming with enthusiasm as he shared the amazing idea. She clapped her hands together in excitement when she saw the results. The activity was making everyone feel like they were part of something special. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$