Unit 9 I like music that I can dance to . 音乐与电影（单元写作精练）英语人教版九年级全一册

Unit 9 I like music that I can dance to . （音乐与电影） 单元写作精练 写作主题 识 写作主题：音乐与电影 本单元以“最喜爱的音乐及电影”为话题,谈论个人或他人的喜好。针对该话题，常见命题角度是介绍自己最喜爱的事物,如电影、音乐等。文体可以是说明文,也可夹叙夹议。时态以一般现在时为主,人称采用第一人称。写作中可就自己的喜好说明理由及感受。 素材积累 开头句 1.Music plays an important role in our lives.音乐在我们的生活中扮演着重要角色。 2.Let me introduce my favorite movie to you.让我向你介绍我最喜欢的电影。 3.I prefer movies that give me something to think about.我喜欢能让我思考的电影。 4. One kind of my favorite music is country music.我最喜欢的一种音乐是乡村音乐。 中间句 1.When I'm down or tired, I prefer movies that can cheer me up.当我情绪低落或疲惫时，我喜欢看能让我振作的电影。 2.When I watched the TV play, I felt like going back to the old days.当我观看电视剧时，感觉仿佛回到了过去的日子。 3.When I listened to the song for the first time, I felt very comfortable.当我第一次听这首歌时，我感到非常舒适。 4.I think it is not only funny but also meaningful.我认为这不仅有趣，而且有意义。 结尾句 1.In a word, music is part of our lives.简而言之，音乐是我们生活的一部分。 2.I'm sure that you will like this movie, too.我相信你也会喜欢这部电影。 3.I believe you will fall in love with this kind of music.我相信你会爱上这种音乐。 4.I think you can have a try to listen to the relaxing music.我认为你可以试着听一些放松的音乐。 真题示例： （2022·浙江温州·中考真题）假如你是陈华，你的英国朋友Tracy在她学校成立了中国音乐社，她在为社团成员安排下学期的活动，写邮件征求你的意见。请根据她设计的活动（见下表）回复邮件，提出你对这些活动的看法和理由，并为她补充至少一项活动。 Activities for the Chinese music club•Listen to traditional and modern Chinese music. •Share stories of Chinese singers. 注意：(1)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息； (2)词数：110词左右；开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Tracy, Glad to hear from you. It’s great to know you’ve got a Chinese music club in your school._______________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Hope you’ll enjoy Chinese music and have fun. Yours, Chen Hua 一、书面表达 1．假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Tom听说你喜欢音乐，他想进一步了解你喜欢的音乐类型以及你与音乐的故事。请根据以下提示，给他写一封邮件，告诉他相关信息。 要求： 1. 格式正确，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整、规范； 2. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息 (姓名、校名和地名等)； 3. 词数：不少于70。 Dear Tom, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 2．假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Tom来信询问你对音乐的看法。请根据以下提示，用英语写一封回信，向他分享你的观点。 1. 你喜欢的音乐类型及原因； 2. 音乐在学习生活中的作用； 3. 邀请他分享自己喜欢的音乐。 注意： 1. 词数80左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）； 2. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。 Dear Tom, Glad to hear from you! You asked me about my feelings towards music. Here’s my sharing. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to your reply! Best wishes, Li Hua 3．学校英文校刊主编发起主题为“What Does Music Bring to Me?”的征文，你和同学就此进行了讨论。请综合下图所示的笔记内容，并适当拓展，写一篇短文投稿。 要求： 1.文中需包含提示中至少3个要点，可适当进行拓展； 2.句子及篇章结构准确、连贯，书写工整规范； 3.词数80词左右。(标题已给出，不计入总词数) Music gives me hope and strength... helps me build a good relationship... Opens my eyes... What Does Music Bring to Me? Music is like a key, which opens a door to the world for me.______________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．假设你叫李明，你校英文校刊主编读了David Smith的故事后，深受触动，发起主题为“音乐对我的影响”的征文。请你根据以下思维导图的提示，用英文写一篇短文投稿。 注意： (1) 可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。 (2) 不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现真实校名、地名和考生的真实姓名。 (3) 语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。 The Influence of Music on Me By Li Ming Music is like a colorful rainbow in my life. ___________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．假如你是Kris，你校试行在课间播放音乐，你班的同学对此进行了讨论，看法不同，多数学生赞同，部分学生反对。请根据表格中所提供的信息，给校长写一封信，介绍大家的观点，并谈谈自己的看法。 Pros Cons Reason 1. make… feel happy 2. help… relax… 3. improve study efficiency 1. cannot get the expected results, as the break is short 2. in the next class some students are still lost in the music Your Opinion … 要求： 1. 内容完整，意思连贯，书写规范； 2. 必须用上表格中的提示信息，80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：study efficiency学习效果，expected预期的，effect影响，peace安静，results结果 Dear Headmaster,     We had a discussion about whether to play music during the break. All the students in our class gave the ideas. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．英语课上，老师要求以“My favorite music”为话题开展三人一组的讨论。假设你是李华，将代表小组在全班发言，请根据以下信息写一篇英文发言稿。 内容包括： （1）介绍你们各自喜欢的音乐； （2）谈谈音乐对你们的影响。 Helen Teng Fei Li Hua My favorite kind of music is smooth music. I often listen to it after school. I like music that I can sing along. It makes me ... … 注意： （1）文中不能出现真实姓名； （2）写作词数为80左右，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 Hello, everyone. I’m Li Hua from Group Two. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thank you. 7．音乐是一杯清茶，沁人心脾；音乐是一缕阳光，暖人心魂。某英文论坛以“音乐和我”为主题向大家征帖，作为一个音乐迷的你看到了也跃跃欲试。请你根据以下要点提示，用英语写一篇短文，分享音乐给你带来了什么，并向大家推荐你最喜欢的歌曲。 要求： 1.内容须包含提示中的要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2. 语言表达要准确，语意要通顺； 3. 词数80词左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。 I have been a music fan since I was a little girl. Over the years, music has brought so many beautiful things into my life.__________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．假如你是李华，你们学校英文杂志社正在举办以“我最喜欢的音乐”为主题的征文活动，请根据提示介绍你最喜欢的音乐进行投稿。 内容包括： (1) 你最喜欢的音乐类型； (2) 你喜欢这种音乐的原因：如音乐带给你的感受，对你的帮助和影响等； (3) 你想要和谁分享这种音乐以及原因。 参考词汇：乡村音乐：country music；流行音乐：pop music；摇滚音乐：rock-and-roll；古典音乐：classical music；说唱音乐：hip-hop 注意： 1. 短文须包含上述要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3. 词数80左右。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．音乐将世间万事万物带进了美好的时空。每每听着音乐，就会忘记所有的烦恼和不快。音乐有着无穷魅力！音乐是世界上最美的语言！请你以“Music Makes Me ______”为题写一篇英语短文。 要求：1.请补全标题； 2.短文不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其他相关信息； 3.词数 80—100词。 Music Makes Me ______ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．音乐在我们的生活中起着十分重要的作用。请根据以下提示，以“The Role of Music”为题，用英语写一篇短文。 内容提示： 1. 音乐可以让我们放松身心，帮助我们缓解压力。 2. 音乐可以振奋并鼓舞人心。 3. 音乐可以抚慰我们的心灵，帮助我们走出困境。 4. 音乐可以…… 要求： 1. 中心突出，语义连贯，层次清晰，书写规范； 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名与校名。 3. 字数80-100。 The Role of Music ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 6 / 11 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ Unit 9 I like music that I can dance to . （音乐与电影） 单元写作精练 写作主题 识 写作主题：音乐与电影 本单元以“最喜爱的音乐及电影”为话题,谈论个人或他人的喜好。针对该话题，常见命题角度是介绍自己最喜爱的事物,如电影、音乐等。文体可以是说明文,也可夹叙夹议。时态以一般现在时为主,人称采用第一人称。写作中可就自己的喜好说明理由及感受。 素材积累 开头句 1.Music plays an important role in our lives.音乐在我们的生活中扮演着重要角色。 2.Let me introduce my favorite movie to you.让我向你介绍我最喜欢的电影。 3.I prefer movies that give me something to think about.我喜欢能让我思考的电影。 4. One kind of my favorite music is country music.我最喜欢的一种音乐是乡村音乐。 中间句 1.When I'm down or tired, I prefer movies that can cheer me up.当我情绪低落或疲惫时，我喜欢看能让我振作的电影。 2.When I watched the TV play, I felt like going back to the old days.当我观看电视剧时，感觉仿佛回到了过去的日子。 3.When I listened to the song for the first time, I felt very comfortable.当我第一次听这首歌时，我感到非常舒适。 4.I think it is not only funny but also meaningful.我认为这不仅有趣，而且有意义。 结尾句 1.In a word, music is part of our lives.简而言之，音乐是我们生活的一部分。 2.I'm sure that you will like this movie, too.我相信你也会喜欢这部电影。 3.I believe you will fall in love with this kind of music.我相信你会爱上这种音乐。 4.I think you can have a try to listen to the relaxing music.我认为你可以试着听一些放松的音乐。 真题示例： （2022·浙江温州·中考真题）假如你是陈华，你的英国朋友Tracy在她学校成立了中国音乐社，她在为社团成员安排下学期的活动，写邮件征求你的意见。请根据她设计的活动（见下表）回复邮件，提出你对这些活动的看法和理由，并为她补充至少一项活动。 Activities for the Chinese music club•Listen to traditional and modern Chinese music. •Share stories of Chinese singers. 注意：(1)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息； (2)词数：110词左右；开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Tracy, Glad to hear from you. It’s great to know you’ve got a Chinese music club in your school._______________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Hope you’ll enjoy Chinese music and have fun. Yours, Chen Hua 【答案】 Dear Tracy, Glad to hear from you. It’s great to know you’ve got a Chinese music club in your school. Listening to traditional and modern Chinese music is a good way for the club members to know more about Chinese music, because they can experience the beauty of Chinese music personally. Sharing stories of Chinese singers can help them better understand the background of the songs, so it’s surely a meaningful activity. Besides, you can introduce various Chinese instruments to the club members in different ways. There are many traditional musical instruments in China different from those in western countries. They can learn about Chinese culture through these instruments. Hope you’ll enjoy Chinese music and have fun. Yours, Chen Hua 【详解】 1.题干解读：题目要求根据Tracy为中国音乐社所设计的活动来回复邮件，要提出你对这些活动的看法及理由，并补充一项适合该社团的活动。 2.写作指导：写作时要以第三人称为主，时态采用一般现在时。邮件正文可采用四段式：第一段用已给出开头引出话题；第二段给出自己对Tracy设计的活动的看法及理由；第三段补充合适的社团活动；第四段用已给出的结尾收尾。要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。 一、书面表达 1．假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Tom听说你喜欢音乐，他想进一步了解你喜欢的音乐类型以及你与音乐的故事。请根据以下提示，给他写一封邮件，告诉他相关信息。 要求： 1. 格式正确，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整、规范； 2. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息 (姓名、校名和地名等)； 3. 词数：不少于70。 Dear Tom, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Tom, I’m happy to share my story about music with you. Music plays an important part in my life. Among all kinds of music, I like pop music best. When I was in Grade Eight, I fell in love with pop music. I remembered I heard a famous singer’s songs on the radio for the first time. The sweet lyrics caught my attention at once. Since then, I’ve been a big fan of pop music. In my free time, pop music is always by my side. Whenever I feel stressed out or sad, I listen to my favorite pop songs because they always encourage me and cheer me up right away. Thanks to pop music, I’ve made great progress in my studies. Now I love it more and more. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是邮件； ②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述，适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步：介绍了喜欢的音乐类型； 第二步：与音乐之间的故事； 第三步：音乐带给你的改变及对音乐的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①fall in love with爱上 ②cheer...up为……欢呼 ③Thanks to多亏了 [高分句型] ①When I was in Grade Eight, I fell in love with pop music. (When引导的时间状语从句） ②I remembered I heard a famous singer’s songs on the radio for the first time. (省略that的宾语从句) 2．假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Tom来信询问你对音乐的看法。请根据以下提示，用英语写一封回信，向他分享你的观点。 1. 你喜欢的音乐类型及原因； 2. 音乐在学习生活中的作用； 3. 邀请他分享自己喜欢的音乐。 注意： 1. 词数80左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）； 2. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。 Dear Tom, Glad to hear from you! You asked me about my feelings towards music. Here’s my sharing. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to your reply! Best wishes, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Tom, Glad to hear from you! You asked me about my feelings towards music. Here’s my sharing. I’m crazy about pop music, especially songs by Taylor Swift. Her lyrics are so touching that they always cheer me up when I’m down. Besides, music helps me relax after long study hours. Whenever I feel stressed, listening to a song can clear my mind and boost my energy. It’s like a magical key to a peaceful world! Could you tell me what kind of music you love? I’m really curious to discover new songs. Looking forward to your reply! Best wishes, Li Hua 【详解】—[总体分析]    ①题材：本文是一封书信；    ②时态：主要时态为一般现在时；    ③提示：需涵盖音乐类型、作用、邀请三个要点，注意衔接词使用和句式多样性。     [写作步骤]    第一步：回应来信并引入主题；    第二步：说明喜欢的音乐类型及原因；    第三步：阐述音乐在学习生活中的作用；    第四步：邀请对方分享。     [亮点词汇]   ①be crazy about 痴迷于    ②cheer sb up使某人振作    ③boost energy提升精力     [高分句型]    ①Her lyrics are so touching that they always cheer me up when I’m down.（so...that结果状语从句）    ②Whenever I feel stressed, listening to a song can clear my mind and boost my energy. （whenever引导时间状语从句+动名词作主语）     3．学校英文校刊主编发起主题为“What Does Music Bring to Me?”的征文，你和同学就此进行了讨论。请综合下图所示的笔记内容，并适当拓展，写一篇短文投稿。 要求： 1.文中需包含提示中至少3个要点，可适当进行拓展； 2.句子及篇章结构准确、连贯，书写工整规范； 3.词数80词左右。(标题已给出，不计入总词数) Music gives me hope and strength... helps me build a good relationship... Opens my eyes... What Does Music Bring to Me? Music is like a key, which opens a door to the world for me.______________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 What Does Music Bring to Me? Music is like a key, which opens a door to the wonderful world for me. Firstly, music gives me hope and strength. When I feel tired from studying, singing my favorite songs always lifts my spirits. Secondly, music helps me build good relationships. Through joining the school choir, I’ve made friends who share the same love for music. Finally, music opens my eyes to different cultures. Listening to African drumming or French chansons teaches me about traditions across the world. Music is not just sounds—it’s a colorful journey that makes my life richer and more meaningful. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以一般现在时态为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，无语法和拼写错误。 [写作步骤] 第一步：以比喻句引入主题：音乐开启多彩世界； 第二步：具体阐述音乐价值，精神力量、 社交联结、文化视野； 第三步：书写结语，将音乐定义为丰富人生的多彩旅程。 [亮点词汇] ①be like好像 ②make friends交朋友 ③listen to听 ④across the world世界各地 [高分句型] ①When I feel tired from studying, singing my favorite songs always lifts my spirits.（when引导的时间状语从句） ②Through joining the school choir, I’ve made friends who share the same love for music.（who引导的限制性定语从句） 4．假设你叫李明，你校英文校刊主编读了David Smith的故事后，深受触动，发起主题为“音乐对我的影响”的征文。请你根据以下思维导图的提示，用英文写一篇短文投稿。 注意： (1) 可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。 (2) 不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现真实校名、地名和考生的真实姓名。 (3) 语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。 The Influence of Music on Me By Li Ming Music is like a colorful rainbow in my life. ___________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 The Influence of Music on Me By Li Ming Music is like a colorful rainbow in my life. It means more than just pleasure. Last year, I was under great pressure before an important exam. Suddenly, I remembered my favourite song and played it over and over. Its smoothing melody and inspiring lyrics calmed me down. In the end, I did well on the exam. From this experience, I realized music is a wonderful gift that brings light to dark times. Let’s cherish music and let it brighten our lives! Now, I believe music will guide me through any challenge. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明音乐在作者心中的重要性； 第二步，介绍音乐对自己帮助的经历； 第三步，总结音乐的意义。 [亮点词汇] ①over and over反复 ②calm sb down使某人冷静下来 ③in the end最后 [高分句型] ①From this experience, I realized music is a wonderful gift that brings light to dark times. (that引导的定语从句) ②Now, I believe music will guide me through any challenge. (省略that的宾语从句) 5．假如你是Kris，你校试行在课间播放音乐，你班的同学对此进行了讨论，看法不同，多数学生赞同，部分学生反对。请根据表格中所提供的信息，给校长写一封信，介绍大家的观点，并谈谈自己的看法。 Pros Cons Reason 1. make… feel happy 2. help… relax… 3. improve study efficiency 1. cannot get the expected results, as the break is short 2. in the next class some students are still lost in the music Your Opinion … 要求： 1. 内容完整，意思连贯，书写规范； 2. 必须用上表格中的提示信息，80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：study efficiency学习效果，expected预期的，effect影响，peace安静，results结果 Dear Headmaster,     We had a discussion about whether to play music during the break. All the students in our class gave the ideas. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Dear Headmaster,      We had a discussion about whether to play music during the break. All the students in our class gave their ideas. Most students agree with the idea because they believe music can make them feel happy, help them relax, and even improve study efficiency. However, some students disagree. They think the break is too short to get the expected results, and in the next class, some students might still be lost in the music, which could affect their focus.      In my opinion, playing music during the break could be beneficial if the volume is kept low and the music is calming. This way, it can provide a peaceful environment without distracting students in the next class. Yours sincerely, Kris 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封信； ②时态：时态是一般现在时和一般过去时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，写作意图开头已给出，写作时可直接介绍大家的观点。 第二步，具体阐述写作内容，主要围绕“同意的原因”、以及“不同意的原因”展开，适当补充，丰富细节。 第三步，谈谈自己的看法。 [亮点词汇] ①have a discussion谈论 ②agree with同意 ③make sb feel adj让某人感觉…… ④help sb do sth帮助某人做某事 ⑤study efficiency学习效果 ⑥too…to…太……以致不能…… ⑦In my opinion就我而言 [高分句型] ①Most students agree with the idea because they believe music can make them feel happy, help them relax, and even improve study efficiency. (because引导的原因状语从句) ②They think the break is too short to get the expected results, and in the next class, some students might still be lost in the music, which could affect their focus. (which引导的定语从句) ③In my opinion, playing music during the break could be beneficial if the volume is kept low and the music is calming. (if引导的条件状语从句) 6．英语课上，老师要求以“My favorite music”为话题开展三人一组的讨论。假设你是李华，将代表小组在全班发言，请根据以下信息写一篇英文发言稿。 内容包括： （1）介绍你们各自喜欢的音乐； （2）谈谈音乐对你们的影响。 Helen Teng Fei Li Hua My favorite kind of music is smooth music. I often listen to it after school. I like music that I can sing along. It makes me ... … 注意： （1）文中不能出现真实姓名； （2）写作词数为80左右，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 Hello, everyone. I’m Li Hua from Group Two. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thank you. 【答案】 Hello, everyone. I’m Li Hua from Group Two. In our group, everyone has different music interests. Helen’s favorite kind of music is smooth music. She often listens to it after dinner. She thinks smooth music helps her relax after a day’s study. Teng Fei likes music that he can sings along. Singing the music makes him feel free and happy. As for me, I love Chinese folk music. It touches my hearts and makes me feel the beauty in it. The piece I like best is Abing’s Erquan Yingyue. That’s all. Thank you. 【详解】［总体分析］ ①题材：本文是一篇口头报告，是一篇讲稿。 ②时态：主要为“一般现在时”。 ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏题目要求中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点 ［写作步骤］ 第一步，表明写作意图。开头通过自我介绍，说明来自哪个小组，直接引出要介绍小组内成员音乐兴趣的话题。 第二步，具体阐述。按照成员顺序，分别介绍组员和自己的喜好，详细阐述喜欢的具体作品及感受。 第三步，书写结语。以“Thank you.”结束报告，简洁明了。 ［亮点词汇］ ①different music interests 不同的音乐兴趣 ②smooth music 舒缓音乐 ③after dinner 晚饭后 ④help sb. relax 帮助某人放松 ⑤sing along 跟着唱 ⑥feel free and happy 感到自由快乐 ⑦Chinese folk music 中国民间音乐 ⑧touch one’s heart 触动某人的心 ［高分句型］ ①Teng Fei likes music that he can sings along.（定语从句） ②She thinks smooth music helps her relax after a day’s study.（宾语从句） 7．音乐是一杯清茶，沁人心脾；音乐是一缕阳光，暖人心魂。某英文论坛以“音乐和我”为主题向大家征帖，作为一个音乐迷的你看到了也跃跃欲试。请你根据以下要点提示，用英语写一篇短文，分享音乐给你带来了什么，并向大家推荐你最喜欢的歌曲。 要求： 1.内容须包含提示中的要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2. 语言表达要准确，语意要通顺； 3. 词数80词左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。 I have been a music fan since I was a little girl. Over the years, music has brought so many beautiful things into my life.__________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 I have been a music fan since I was a little girl. Over the years, music has brought so many beautiful things into my life. Music gives me energy. When I’m tired or stressed, a piece of lively music can make me refreshed and full of power. My favorite song is “You Raise Me Up” by Westlife. I like it because its lyrics are touching and the melody is beautiful. The singer’s voice is also very charming. It always makes me feel warm and encouraged whenever I listen to it. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，作者讲述了自己对音乐的热爱。 ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”。 ③主题：作者分享了音乐在其生活中的重要性以及最喜欢的歌曲。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇表明自己是音乐迷以及音乐给自己带来美好。 第二步，阐述音乐能给自己带来能量。 第三步，介绍最喜欢的歌曲及喜欢的原因。 [亮点词汇] ①refresh使恢复精力 ②touching动人的 ③charming迷人的 ④encouraged受到鼓舞的 [高分句型] ①I have been a music fan since I was a little girl.（since引导的时间状语从句） ②When I’m tired or stressed, a piece of lively music can make me refreshed and full of power.（when引导的时间状语从句） ③I like it because its lyrics are touching and the melody is beautiful.（because引导的原因状语从句） 8．假如你是李华，你们学校英文杂志社正在举办以“我最喜欢的音乐”为主题的征文活动，请根据提示介绍你最喜欢的音乐进行投稿。 内容包括： (1) 你最喜欢的音乐类型； (2) 你喜欢这种音乐的原因：如音乐带给你的感受，对你的帮助和影响等； (3) 你想要和谁分享这种音乐以及原因。 参考词汇：乡村音乐：country music；流行音乐：pop music；摇滚音乐：rock-and-roll；古典音乐：classical music；说唱音乐：hip-hop 注意： 1. 短文须包含上述要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3. 词数80左右。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Hello! I’m Li Hua, and I’m excited to share my thoughts on my favorite kind of music. I really love pop music. It’s the type I listen to most often. I like pop music because it always makes me feel happy and energetic. The upbeat rhythms and catchy melodies can instantly lift my mood. When I’m feeling down, it always helps me to feel more cheerful and relaxed. Pop music also helps me concentrate when I’m studying. I often put on my headphones and listen while doing homework. I especially want to share this music with my friends. We often sing along to the songs and even try to learn the dances. It’s fun to have something we all enjoy and that brings us together. I believe sharing music creates great memories. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。直接说明要向介绍自己最喜欢的音乐类型； 第二步，阐述喜欢这种音乐的原因； 第三步，谈谈自己想要和谁分享这种音乐以及原因。 [亮点词汇] ①thoughts 想法 ②energetic 精力充沛的 ③concentrate 集中 [高分句型] ①I like pop music because it always makes me feel happy and energetic. (原因状语从句) ②I believe sharing music creates great memories. (宾语从句；动名词作主语) 9．音乐将世间万事万物带进了美好的时空。每每听着音乐，就会忘记所有的烦恼和不快。音乐有着无穷魅力！音乐是世界上最美的语言！请你以“Music Makes Me ______”为题写一篇英语短文。 要求：1.请补全标题； 2.短文不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其他相关信息； 3.词数 80—100词。 Music Makes Me ______ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Music Makes Me Happy I like music very much. It gives me energy when I’m tired and it makes me happy when I’m sad. Every time I listen to music, I forget all my worries and unhappiness. It has endless charm and is the most beautiful language in the world. When I feel sad or stressed, music always helps me feel better. It makes me happy and brings joy to my life. I love music because it has the power to change my mood and make everything seem brighter. Music is the most beautiful language. Enjoy the music you like, and enjoy yourself! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：本文主要是介绍自己对音乐的感受，适当增加细节，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，详细介绍音乐如何使自己开心； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①listen to music听音乐 ②help sb. do sth.帮助某人做某事 [高分句型] ①It gives me energy when I’m tired and it makes me happy when I’m sad. (时间状语从句) ②I love music because it has the power to change my mood and make everything seem brighter. (原因状语从句) 10．音乐在我们的生活中起着十分重要的作用。请根据以下提示，以“The Role of Music”为题，用英语写一篇短文。 内容提示： 1. 音乐可以让我们放松身心，帮助我们缓解压力。 2. 音乐可以振奋并鼓舞人心。 3. 音乐可以抚慰我们的心灵，帮助我们走出困境。 4. 音乐可以…… 要求： 1. 中心突出，语义连贯，层次清晰，书写规范； 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名与校名。 3. 字数80-100。 The Role of Music ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 The Role of Music Music plays an important role in our lives. First, it can make us feel completely relaxed and help reduce our pressure at work or in our lives. Second, music can cheer us up whenever we are in trouble or feel sad. What’s more, music has a comforting effect when we are worried and helps us step out of difficulty. In addition, music can be of great help in learning different cultures. In a word, music is part of our lives. We can live a happier life with music. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“内容提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。借用“音乐在我们生活中起着重要作用”来引出重点介绍的内容； 第二步，具体阐述音乐的作用。 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①play an important role in在某方面起重要作用 ②make sb. do sth.使某人做某事 ③cheer sb. up使某人振作 [高分句型] What’s more, music has a comforting effect when we are worried and helps us step out of difficulty. (when引导时间状语从句) 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 6 / 11 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$