Unit 2 Let's talk teens 父母与子女关系（单元应用文写作精练）英语译林版2020必修第一册

Unit 2 let’s talk teens 应用文写作精练（解析版） ( 写作主题 识 ) 给青少年学习生活中的问题提建议 写作框架： 第一段 说明写信的目的。 第二段 提出具体的建议。 第三段 表达期望。 写作词汇短语： 1. advice/tip/suggestion n.建议 2. advise/suggest vt.建议 3. beneficial adj.有益的 4. benefit n.益处v.受益于;使受益 5. following adj.以下的 6. practical adj.实用的 7. as far as sb.be concerned依某人看 8. ask for sb's advice 征求某人的建议 9. give/offer sb. advice/tips/suggestions on sth.在某方面给某人提建议 10. have trouble/difficulty with sth.在某方面有困难 11. have trouble/ difficulty (in) doing sth.做某事有困难 12. have problems with sth.在某方面有问题 13. in one's view/opinion某人认为 14. make some suggestions/advice提出一些建议 15. accept/take/follow one's advice接受某人的建议 写作句型： 【开头句】 1. When it comes to/As for..., the following are my suggestions./My suggestions are as follows. 当涉及/关于……，我的建议如下。 2. I'm writing to give you some suggestions/give you a hand. 我写这封信的目的是给你一些建议/帮助。 3.I'm extremely delighted to receive your letter, in which you asked me how to fit in the new school life. 很高兴收到你的来信，信上询问我关于如何适应新的学校生活。 【中间句】 1.I recommend it mainly for the following two reasons. 我推荐它主要有以下两个原因。 2.As far as I'm concerned/Personally, it would be wise to take the following action. 在我看来，采取如下行动是明智的。 3.I think it would be of benefit/beneficial if you... 我认为如果……，将会受益。 4.Doing...is a good/great/better choice. 做……是一个好的/棒的/更好的选择。 5. As far as I am concerned/In my opinion/ In my view, there's no need for you to be shy and all of us are willing to be friends with you. 依我看/我认为，您没有必要害羞，我们都愿意成为您的朋友。 6. As to how to get along well with your classmates, you should remember that kindness is very important, 至于如何与同学和睦相处，记住，友善很重要。 【结尾句】 1. If you need further information, don't hesitate to contact me. 如果你需要更多信息，请联系我。 2. I'll be more than happy if you can take my recommendation/ideas into consideration. 如果你能考虑我的建议/想法，我会非常高兴。 3.I hope that my suggestions/advice will be beneficial/of benefit to you. 我希望我的建议对你有益。 4. I hope you will find these ideas useful/practical/helpful. 我希望您会发现这些办法有用/实用/有帮助。 写作模板： Dear _______, I'm delighted to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to ________(引出对方需要建议的主题). I'd like to make some suggestions./ I'm writing to.../Here are a few suggestions (引出作者的建议). To begin with, you'd better/it is a good idea to _______. Then, it also helps to ______. Besides, doing _________is also a good choice, as _________. I hope you will find these suggestions practical/useful/helpful. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 真题示例： （2025·全国一卷·高考真题）假定你是李华，你班的英语报要增设一个栏目。外教 Jenny 提出“Fun at my school”和“Guess who I am”两个选项供大家选择。请给Jenny写一封邮件，内容包括： (1)你的选择； (2)说明理由。 注意： (1)写作词数应为80个左右； (2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Jenny, I really like the idea of adding a new column to our English newspaper. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 举一反三： （2024-2025学年高一下·浙江杭州·期中）假定你是李华，你的笔友Chris来信说，他想使用AI生成的作文交作业。请你给他回信，表达你的看法。要点包括： 1. 表达态度； 2. 阐述理由； 3. 提出建议。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 Dear Chris, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Sincerely, Li Hu Passage 1 （2024-2025学年高一下·江西·期末）许多青少年由于学业压力和社会期望感到焦虑。你认为这些压力的原因是什么?应该如何解决? 写作要点：(1)分析青少年承受压力的原因。(2)提出解决这些压力的建议。 注意：(1)写作词数应为80左右；(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 2 （2024-2025学年高一下·浙江·阶段练习）你将参加英语课上的“一分钟演讲”活动。请你以“健康饮食”为主题写一篇演讲稿，内容包括： 1. 青少年饮食现状； 2. 你的看法； 3. 提出建议。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 My Views on Healthy Eating ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 3 （2024-2025学年高一下·黑龙江大庆·阶段练习）假定你是李华，你的好朋友Jim最近经常因周末时间安排等琐事和父母争吵。请你给他写一封信，就如何与父母更好地交流沟通提出你的建议。内容包括： 1. 表示理解； 2. 提出建议。 注意：1. 词数80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Jim, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua Passage 4 （2024-2025学年高一下·黑龙江大庆·开学考试）假定你是李华，最近你很苦恼，因为你经常和父母发生争执。请你给英国笔友Tom 写一封信，向他倾诉你成长中的烦恼。内容包括： 1. 向Tom倾诉你的困惑或烦恼； 2. 向Tom 寻求解决方案。 注意： 1. 词数80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。 Dear Tom, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua Passage 5 （2025-2026学年高一上·全国·课后作业）假定你是李华，你的朋友Tom最近因为参加足球队的事与父母意见不合，情绪低落。请你给他写封回信。包括： (1)给予理解； (2 )给出建议。 注意：(1)词数80左右； (2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ ( 6 / 6 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ Unit 2 let’s talk teens 应用文写作精练（解析版） ( 写作主题 识 ) 给青少年学习生活中的问题提建议 写作框架： 第一段 说明写信的目的。 第二段 提出具体的建议。 第三段 表达期望。 写作词汇短语： 1. advice/tip/suggestion n.建议 2. advise/suggest vt.建议 3. beneficial adj.有益的 4. benefit n.益处v.受益于;使受益 5. following adj.以下的 6. practical adj.实用的 7. as far as sb.be concerned依某人看 8. ask for sb's advice 征求某人的建议 9. give/offer sb. advice/tips/suggestions on sth.在某方面给某人提建议 10. have trouble/difficulty with sth.在某方面有困难 11. have trouble/ difficulty (in) doing sth.做某事有困难 12. have problems with sth.在某方面有问题 13. in one's view/opinion某人认为 14. make some suggestions/advice提出一些建议 15. accept/take/follow one's advice接受某人的建议 写作句型： 【开头句】 1. When it comes to/As for..., the following are my suggestions./My suggestions are as follows. 当涉及/关于……，我的建议如下。 2. I'm writing to give you some suggestions/give you a hand. 我写这封信的目的是给你一些建议/帮助。 3.I'm extremely delighted to receive your letter, in which you asked me how to fit in the new school life. 很高兴收到你的来信，信上询问我关于如何适应新的学校生活。 【中间句】 1.I recommend it mainly for the following two reasons. 我推荐它主要有以下两个原因。 2.As far as I'm concerned/Personally, it would be wise to take the following action. 在我看来，采取如下行动是明智的。 3.I think it would be of benefit/beneficial if you... 我认为如果……，将会受益。 4.Doing...is a good/great/better choice. 做……是一个好的/棒的/更好的选择。 5. As far as I am concerned/In my opinion/ In my view, there's no need for you to be shy and all of us are willing to be friends with you. 依我看/我认为，您没有必要害羞，我们都愿意成为您的朋友。 6. As to how to get along well with your classmates, you should remember that kindness is very important, 至于如何与同学和睦相处，记住，友善很重要。 【结尾句】 1. If you need further information, don't hesitate to contact me. 如果你需要更多信息，请联系我。 2. I'll be more than happy if you can take my recommendation/ideas into consideration. 如果你能考虑我的建议/想法，我会非常高兴。 3.I hope that my suggestions/advice will be beneficial/of benefit to you. 我希望我的建议对你有益。 4. I hope you will find these ideas useful/practical/helpful. 我希望您会发现这些办法有用/实用/有帮助。 写作模板： Dear _______, I'm delighted to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to ________(引出对方需要建议的主题). I'd like to make some suggestions./ I'm writing to.../Here are a few suggestions (引出作者的建议). To begin with, you'd better/it is a good idea to _______. Then, it also helps to ______. Besides, doing _________is also a good choice, as _________. I hope you will find these suggestions practical/useful/helpful. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 真题示例： （2025·全国一卷·高考真题）假定你是李华，你班的英语报要增设一个栏目。外教 Jenny 提出“Fun at my school”和“Guess who I am”两个选项供大家选择。请给Jenny写一封邮件，内容包括： (1)你的选择； (2)说明理由。 注意： (1)写作词数应为80个左右； (2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Jenny, I really like the idea of adding a new column to our English newspaper. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【范文】 Dear Jenny, I really like the idea of adding a new column to our English newspaper. I’m writing to express that my predilection goes to “Guess who I am”, which capitalizes on an object clause to signal its potential contents. The column will serve as a catalyst for closer bonds between students. Redoubling efforts to boost academic performance, we pay little heed to other classmates’ personalities, hobbies, strengths, and even aspirations. Such an inviting column, adopting a “description and guess” approach, must expose everyone to others’ characteristics, thus strengthening mutual understanding. More importantly, more friendships will be forged, since the column enables us to befriend someone on the same wavelength. This eye-catching column, I’m firmly convinced, won’t fail to grant the whole class a harmonious atmosphere. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就外教Jenny提出的校英文报增设一个栏目，在“Fun at my school”和“Guess who I am”两个选项中给出自己的推荐，并说明理由。 【详解】1.词汇积累 表达：express → convey 利用：capitalize on → use 担当：serve as → act as 注意：pay heed to → take notice of 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Such an inviting column, adopting a “description and guess” approach, must expose everyone to others’ characteristics, thus strengthening mutual understanding. 拓展句：Such an inviting column, which adopts a “description and guess” approach, must expose everyone to others’ characteristics, thus strengthening mutual understanding. 【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m writing to express that my predilection goes to “Guess who I am”, which capitalizes on an object clause to signal its potential contents.（运用了that引导的宾语从句，which引导的定语从句） 【高分句型2】More importantly, more friendships will be forged, since the column enables us to befriend someone on the same wavelength.（运用了since引导的状语从句） 举一反三： （2024-2025学年高一下·浙江杭州·期中）假定你是李华，你的笔友Chris来信说，他想使用AI生成的作文交作业。请你给他回信，表达你的看法。要点包括： 1. 表达态度； 2. 阐述理由； 3. 提出建议。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 Dear Chris, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Sincerely, Li Hu 【范文】 Dear Chris, I really don’t think using AI-generated essays for homework is a good idea. Homework is designed to help you practice writing skills and form your own thoughts. Relying on AI means you’ll miss the chance to think deeply, and it’s not honest to your teacher. Over time, it might even make you lose confidence in your own abilities. Why not try writing a draft first? If you’re stuck, I can give you suggestions. True progress comes from your own efforts — AI can’t replace that. Sincerely, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给笔友Chris回信，说明对于他想使用AI生成的作文交作业的态度、 阐述理由以及提出建议。 【详解】1.词汇积累 使用：use→utilize 依靠：rely on→count on 机会：chance→opportunity 代替：replace→take the place of 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Homework is designed to help you practice writing skills and form your own thoughts. 拓展句：The reason why homework is designed is that it can help you practice writing skills and form your own thoughts. 【点睛】【高分句型1】I really don’t think using AI-generated essays for homework is a good idea.（运用了省略that的宾语从句） 【高分句型2】If you’re stuck, I can give you suggestions.（运用了if引导条件状语从句） Passage 1 （2024-2025学年高一下·江西·期末）许多青少年由于学业压力和社会期望感到焦虑。你认为这些压力的原因是什么?应该如何解决? 写作要点：(1)分析青少年承受压力的原因。(2)提出解决这些压力的建议。 注意：(1)写作词数应为80左右；(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【范文】 Nowadays, many teenagers suffer from anxiety due to academic pressure and social expectations. There are several reasons for this. First, students have to spend long hours studying to get good grades, which leaves them little time for rest or hobbies. Second, parents and teachers often expect them to succeed, making them feel guilty if they don’t perform well. Third, teenagers may also pressure themselves to be perfect, fearing failure. To solve these problems, schools should reduce homework and offer more mental health support. Parents should encourage their children instead of pushing them too hard. Society should also create a more relaxed environment for young people. In short, reducing pressure and providing support can help teenagers grow up happily and healthily. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇文章分析青少年承受压力的原因并提出解决这些压力的建议。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 由于：due to→owing to 强迫：pressure→compel 解决：solve →deal with 总之：in short→in conclusion 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Third, teenagers may also pressure themselves to be perfect, fearing failure. 拓展句：Third, teenagers, who fear failure, may also pressure themselves to be perfect. 【点睛】【高分句型1】First, students have to spend long hours studying to get good grades, which leaves them little time for rest or hobbies.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句） 【高分句型2】Second, parents and teachers often expect them to succeed, making them feel guilty if they don’t perform well.（运用了if引导的条件状语从句） Passage 2 （2024-2025学年高一下·浙江·阶段练习）你将参加英语课上的“一分钟演讲”活动。请你以“健康饮食”为主题写一篇演讲稿，内容包括： 1. 青少年饮食现状； 2. 你的看法； 3. 提出建议。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 My Views on Healthy Eating ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【范文】 My Views on Healthy Eating Hello, everyone! The topic of my speech today is “healthy eating”. Nowadays, many teenagers are into fast food, snacks and sugary drinks, while vegetables, fruits and whole grains are often neglected. This unbalanced diet can lead to problems like obesity and malnutrition. Healthy eating matters a lot for our growth. It gives us energy and keeps us fit. Thus, we should reduce junk food intake and eat more nutritious food. Also, remember that we are supposed to eat regularly and avoid overeating. Let’s start eating healthily from now on! Thank you! 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“健康饮食”为主题撰写一分钟演讲稿，需分析青少年饮食现状、表达看法并提出建议。 【详解】1.词汇积累 忽视：neglected→ ignored 导致：lead to→ cause 健康的：fit→ healthy 减少：reduce→ decrease 2.句式拓展 合并句子 原句：Healthy eating matters a lot for our growth. It gives us energy and keeps us fit. 合并句：Healthy eating matters a lot for our growth, which gives us energy and keeps us fit. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Nowadays, many teenagers are into fast food, snacks and sugary drinks, while vegetables, fruits and whole grains are often neglected.（运用了连词while连接的并列句） 【高分句型2】Also, remember that we are supposed to eat regularly and avoid overeating.（运用了that引导的宾语从句以及动名词作宾语） Passage 3 （2024-2025学年高一下·黑龙江大庆·阶段练习）假定你是李华，你的好朋友Jim最近经常因周末时间安排等琐事和父母争吵。请你给他写一封信，就如何与父母更好地交流沟通提出你的建议。内容包括： 1. 表示理解； 2. 提出建议。 注意：1. 词数80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Jim, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【范文】 Dear Jim, I understand quite well what you’re going through. It’s not unusual for us teenagers to have difficulty getting along well with parents. Take it easy! But remember it’s significant to learn to control your anger. After all, those who easily get irritated are less likely to become a good listener and communicator. Thus, when your parents criticize your weekend arrangements, don’t explode but explain tenderly and patiently. Besides, don’t forget to tell them how much you love them. Hope you’ll find these suggestions helpful. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给朋友Jim就最近经常因周末时间安排和父母争吵这一问题写一封建议信，表示理解他，并在“如何与父母更好地交流”方面提出自己的建议。 【详解】1.词汇积累 经历：go through→undergo 控制你的愤怒：control your anger→control your temper 做某事有困难：have difficulty doing→struggle with 此外：besides→what’s more 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：But remember it’s significant to learn to control your anger. 拓展句：But remember that learning to control your anger is of great significance. 【点睛】【高分句型1】I understand quite well what you’re going through.（运用了what引导的宾语从句） 【高分句型2】Thus, when your parents criticize your weekend arrangements, don’t explode but explain tenderly and patiently.（运用了when引导时间状语从句） Passage 4 （2024-2025学年高一下·黑龙江大庆·开学考试）假定你是李华，最近你很苦恼，因为你经常和父母发生争执。请你给英国笔友Tom 写一封信，向他倾诉你成长中的烦恼。内容包括： 1. 向Tom倾诉你的困惑或烦恼； 2. 向Tom 寻求解决方案。 注意： 1. 词数80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。 Dear Tom, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【范文】 Dear Tom, These days, I feel upset. At school I am good at maths and English, while I find physics difficult to learn. But my parents think I should always do my best in every subject. Whenever I come back home late, they will get very angry with me. You know I like playing basketball, but when weekends come, they don’t allow me to do anything except focusing on my lessons. Now I am no longer interested in my study. Can you give me some advice on how to get along with my parents? Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于最近经常和父母发生争执这一情况，给英国笔友Tom 写一封信，向他倾诉你成长中的烦恼。 【详解】1.词汇积累 心烦意乱的：upset→ distracted 专注于：focuse on → concentrate on 对……感兴趣：be interested in→ be keen on 建议：advice→ suggestions 2.句式拓展 扩写句子 原句：Now I am no longer interested in my study. 拓展句：Now I am no longer interested in my study, which makes me confused. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Whenever I come back home late, they will get very angry with me.（运用了连词Whenever引导的时间状语从句。） 【高分句型2】But my parents think I should always do my best in every subject.（运用了省略从属连词that引导的宾语从句。） Passage 5 （2025-2026学年高一上·全国·课后作业）假定你是李华，你的朋友Tom最近因为参加足球队的事与父母意见不合，情绪低落。请你给他写封回信。包括： (1)给予理解； (2 )给出建议。 注意：(1)词数80左右； (2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【范文】 Dear Tom, I’m sorry to hear you’re down due to the argument with your parents about joining the football team. I totally get it — It must be upsetting when they don’t understand your passion. Why not calm down first, then talk to them? Listen to their worries — maybe they fear it’ll affect your studies. Then explain how football relaxes you and promise to balance it with schoolwork, like finishing homework before practice. Parents just care about you. I believe they’ll understand if you show responsibility. Cheer up! Everything will work out. Hope my advice helps. Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份给情绪低落的朋友Tom写回信，给予理解并就其与父母意见不合一事给出建议。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 由于：due to → owing to 完全地：totally → completely 热情：passion → enthusiasm 相信：believe → be convinced 2. 句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：I’m sorry to hear you’re down due to the argument with your parents about joining the football team. 拓展句：I’m sorry to hear that you’re down because you have an argument with your parents about joining the football team. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Then explain how football relaxes you and promise to balance it with schoolwork, like finishing homework before practice.(运用了how引导的宾语从句和动名词作宾语) 【高分句型2】I believe they’ll understand if you show responsibility.(运用了省略了连接词that的宾语从句和if引导的条件状语从句) 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ ( 6 / 13 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$