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第一部分 浓妆淡抹 分层突破
专项提能 写作篇
层级一 词汇地道高级,摆脱陈词滥调
根据高考写作的评分标准,应用词汇的丰富性和准确性是写作能否取得高分的一条重要的标准。所以,在词汇亮化上应遵循以下四个原则:
原则 1 求新求变
写作时应尽量避免重复使用相同的词语,要用贴切多样的词语来展示自己的词汇水平。用词不同、表达方式迥异,也是词汇高级用法的体现。
1.(2024·新课标Ⅰ卷)It not only gave me a chance to connect my art with nature, but also improved my thought to get good in the future.
→It not only provided me with an opportunity to connect my artistic creation with nature, but also enhanced (提高) my willingness to take inspiration from (从……中汲取灵感) nature in the future.
2.(2023·全国甲卷)Many influential historical figures have appeared in China’s long history, each of whom made great contributions to the progress of society in their own way.
→ Numerous influential historical figures have emerged in China’s long history, each of whom made tremendous contributions to the progress of society in their own way.
原则2 求准求精
写作时不一定每一句都要用复杂句式,有时准确使用一个单词就会让整个句子增色。
1.(2024·新课标Ⅰ卷)I’m writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday. It was a truly inspiring event.
→I’m writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday. It turned out to be a truly inspiring event.
2.(2023·新课标Ⅰ卷)Besides,only two students in groups can’t communicate well.
→Besides,only two students in groups can’t communicate effectively.
原则3 晚词优先
为了彰显自己的语言功底,吸引阅卷老师的眼球,考生在写作时应尽量用高年级阶段学到的词汇代替低年级阶段学到的词汇。
1.I am very glad to know you are interested in Tang poems.
→I am extremely/more than delighted to know you are interested in Tang poems.
2.I should be free any time after school next week.
→I should be available any time after school next week.
原则4 短语优先
恰当使用短语代替单词,不但可以增加词数,还有助于绕开不会表达的单词,使得行文更加流畅。
一、形容词变短语的方法:of+同根名词
形容词 对应短语
very important of great importance
very useful of great use
very valuable of great value
very beneficial of great benefit
very helpful of great help
二、动词变短语的方法:替换升级
动词 对应短语
think hold the view
know/realize be aware/conscious of
use make use of/take advantage of
consider take...into account/consideration
三、副词变短语的方法:同义短语替换
副词 对应短语
very more than
properly in place
immediately without delay
desperately like crazy
1.I like playing football in my spare time.
→I’m fond of playing football in my spare time.
→I’m interested in playing football in my spare time.
→I’m crazy about playing football in my spare time.
→I’m addicted to playing football in my spare time.
2.(2023·新课标Ⅰ卷)I would really appreciate it if you could consider my suggestions.
→I would really appreciate it if you could take my suggestions into consideration/account.
三类写作词汇升级对比
A “单词→单词”型
1.艰难的difficult→challenging
2.选择choice→alternative
3.后果result→consequence
4.丰富的rich→abundant
5.幸运的lucky→fortunate
6.提高develop/improve→promote
7.感谢thank→appreciate
8.决定decide→determine
9.重要的important→vital/significant
10.吸引人的attractive→appealing/inviting/fascinating
B “单词→短语”型
1.喜欢like→be keen on/be fond of/be crazy about
2.拜访visit→pay a visit to/call on
3.表扬praise→speak highly of
4.支持support→be in favor of
5.面对face→be faced with
6.容忍bear→put up with
7.理解understand→make sense of/figure out
8.道歉apologize→make an apology
9.从不never→in no case/by no means/under no
circumstances
10.记住remember→bear/keep in mind
C “短语→短语”型
1.擅长be good at→have (a) good command of/be experienced in
2.尽力try one’s best→spare no effort/make every effort
3.参加join in→participate in
4.忙于做be busy (in) doing→be occupied in/be buried in/be engaged in doing
5.因为because of→due to/owing to/as a consequence of
6.例如for example→for instance/take...as an example
7.实际上in fact→as a matter of fact/in truth/in reality
8.成功做某事succeed in doing→make it
9.在……看来in one’s opinion→as far as sb. be concerned/from one’s own perspective
10.我想/认为I think/believe that...→I am (firmly) convinced that...
Ⅰ.用高级词汇替换加黑词汇
1.(2024·新课标Ⅰ卷)It was a cool experience, not only leaving me loving the natural beauty but also providing lots of inspiration that I could directly put into my canvas.
→It was a experience, not only leaving me the natural beauty but also providing inspiration that I could directly my canvas.
雕词啄句
refreshing
in awe of
a wealth of
translate into
2.(2023·新课标Ⅰ卷)Firstly,randomly pairing up students may cause embarrassment among students who are various in different levels of language abilities.
→ ,randomly pairing up students may _______________embarrassment among students who are various in different levels of language abilities.
To begin with/First and foremost
result in/lead to
3.(2023·新课标Ⅰ卷)Learning that we’ll be randomly paired to do the oral practice,I want to express my different voice.
→Learning that we’ll be randomly paired to do the oral practice,I ____________express my different voice.
4.(2023·全国甲卷)He proposed the establishment of a national school system,which had a good influence on the Chinese educational system.
→He proposed the establishment of a national school system,which had a influence on the Chinese educational system.
feel an urge to
far - reaching
5.(2023·全国甲卷)Deeply encouraged,our young generation firmly believe that we should carry forward the essence of Confucianism and contribute to building a shared future for all human beings.
→Deeply________,our young generation _________________that we should carry forward the essence of Confucianism and contribute to building a shared future for all human beings.
inspired
hold the firm belief
6.(2022·全国甲卷)First, try our best to fight against global warming,which has become a great threat to sea creatures.
→ First,_______________________________fight against global warming,which has become a great threat to sea creatures.
7.(2022·全国甲卷)Not only does the ocean offer us enough food,but it also keeps the balance of nature.Thus,it is very important to protect the ocean.
→Not only does the ocean offer us ________food,but it also ________ the balance of nature.Thus,it is to protect the ocean.
try every means to/spare no effort to
sufficient
maintains
vital
8.The race was helpful to the participants physically and mentally. So, we all think highly of it, and expect more activities like this in the future.
→ The race was to the participants physically and mentally.__________,we all think highly of it, and expect more activities like this in the future.
of great benefit
As a result
Ⅱ.根据提示用高级词汇改写句子
1.(2022·全国乙卷)However, in my opinion,what benefits students most is reading English books,for it can help students understand English better.(view,understanding)
→However,_____________________,what benefits students most is reading English books,_____________________________________
___________________________.
from my point of view
for it can help students gain/have a better understanding of English
2.I believe that our country will become stronger and stronger.(convince)
→_________________our country will become stronger and stronger.
3.As soon as he arrived,he began his research.(介词短语作状语)
→_______________,he began his research.
4.Developing a good habit is also important.(of+n.)
→Developing a good habit is also_______________________.
I am convinced that
On his arrival
of importance/significance
5.More and more Americans are curious about Chinese culture.(number)
→_______________________________________are curious about Chinese culture
6.I would like to congratulate you on your winning first prize in the Chinese Speech Competition.
→I would like to __________________________________you on your winning first prize in the Chinese Speech Competition.
A growing/An increasing number of Americans
express/convey my congratulations to
Ⅲ.用高级词汇升级短文
假定你是李华,上周末你和同学们参加了一次义务植树活动。请你为校报的英文栏目写一篇短文介绍这次活动。内容包括:
1.活动目的; 2.植树过程; 3.个人体会。
注意:写作词数应为80个左右。
My Weekend
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
[升级前]
My Weekend
To raise the students’ awareness of environmental protection,the Student Union of our school organized a meaningful activity—Tree Planting last weekend.
Early in the morning,my classmates and I went to a hill nearby with tools and seedlings. As soon as we arrived,we began to work together as planned.Some dug the holes and put seedlings in,some filled them with earth,and others watered them.Through our joint work the hillside was lined with rows of seedlings,bathed in the sunshine.
Tired as we were,we tasted the joy of labor.
[升级后]
My Weekend
To 1._____ the students’ awareness of environmental protection,the Student Union of our school organized a 2._________
activity—Tree Planting last weekend.
Early in the morning, my classmates and I 3.__________a hill nearby with tools and seedlings.4.____________,we 5.__________________
_____________together as 6.____________.Some dug the 7.____ and put seedlings in, some filled them with earth, and others watered them. Through our joint 8.______ the hillside was lined with rows of seedlings, bathed in the sunshine.
9.____________ as we were, we tasted the joy of labor.
arouse
rewarding
headed for
On our arrival
set out to work
got down to working/
scheduled
pits
efforts
Exhausted
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