层级三 段落有效整合,增强逻辑衔接-【优化探究】2026高考英语一轮复习高考总复习配套课件（北师大版）

第一部分　浓妆淡抹　分层突破 专项提能 写作篇 层级三　段落有效整合，增强逻辑衔接 段落是一个相对独立的单元,同时也是构成一篇文章的基本单元,但它并不是几个句子的简单堆砌,而是通过连续的句子来表达一个中心意思。合理地组织段落会使文章大放异彩。 一、组段应遵循的原则 原则1　统一性 段落的统一性是段落写作的最基本的要求。一个段落只能有一个主题,其他所有的事实、例子、证据都应服务于同一个主题。统一性有助于考生清楚有效地表达自己的观点。通过有机地将与主题密切相关的扩展句编排在一起,可使文章主题更明确,中心更突出。例如： Mrs.Meredith was a most kind and thoughtful woman.She spent a great deal of time visiting the poor.She knew they had problems, and they needed all kinds of help.When she had time, she would bring food and medicine to them. 本段内容都是围绕段落首句“Mrs.Meredith was a most kind and thoughtful woman.”展开的。首句交代了段落主旨,其余内容则根据主旨进行了具体的阐述。 原则2　连贯性 段落的连贯性指句与句、段与段过渡自然(和谐、流畅、层次分明、符合逻辑)。保持段落的连贯性就应恰如其分地运用过渡语,使内容承前启后,如first、at first、second、and then、finally、what’s more、but、however、thus、as a result、in fact、therefore、in a word、in short等。例如： Located in the east of Asia,our homeland has a long history and rich culture.In addition,there are a lot of world-­famous tourist sites in China,such as the Great Wall and Jiuzhaigou,which attract a good many visitors from all over the world every year.Much to our pride,great changes have taken place in our country in the past 30 years.Not only has the economy developed fast,but most people are also living a happy life.Thus,I am convinced that you will be impressed with all the changes when you arrive here. 本段内容通过合理地使用in addition、such as、not only...but also...、thus等过渡性词语,增强了段落的连续性和逻辑性,使整个段落一气呵成、浑然一体。 原则3　简洁性 一个段落的长度没有具体的限制,主要取决于段落主题表达的需求。有的只需简短的几句,有的则需要更多的细节支持。但无论哪种情况,一个段落的写作必须遵循简洁的原则,避免与主题无关的语言成分。 二、常见的段落排列 　衔接与过渡性词语的使用是语言连贯性得以实现的最常用手段。在句与句之间、段与段之间恰当地使用一些承上启下的衔接(过渡)性词语是非常必要的。高中阶段应该掌握的衔接(过渡)性词语归纳如下： 1.表示起始关系的过渡性词语 above all, to begin/start with, today, now, nowadays, at present, currently, recently, generally speaking, according to, with the development of等 To begin with,I would like to express my gratitude for the opportunity to speak here today. It’s a great honor and I’m looking forward to sharing my thoughts with you all. 首先,我要对今天有机会在这里发言表示感谢。这是一个巨大的荣誉,我期待着与你们所有人分享我的想法。 2.表示时间顺序的过渡性词语 first,first of all,to begin with,then,later,in the end,finally,at last,after that,afterwards,since then,immediately,suddenly,meanwhile等 Meanwhile,as we waited for the bus, I took out my book and started reading, trying to make the most of the spare time. 与此同时,在我们等公共汽车的时候,我拿出我的书开始阅读,努力充分利用业余时间。 3.表示并列关系的过渡性词语 and,or,also,as well as, neither...nor...,not only...but also...,either... or...,not...but...等 Success is not about avoiding failure, but about learning from it and using the experience to grow and improve. 成功不在于避免失败,而在于从失败中学习,并利用这一经历来成长和提高。 4.表示转折关系的过渡性词语 but,yet,however,while,otherwise,on the contrary,though,although,even if/though,despite,in spite of,regardless of等 Regardless of the heavy rain, the runners persevered and completed the marathon, showcasing their determination and endurance. 尽管下着大雨,选手们还是坚持跑完了马拉松,展示了他们的决心和耐力。 5.表示因果关系的过渡性词语 because,as,since,for,thanks to,due to,as a result of,so,therefore,as a result/consequence等 Climate change is a pressing global challenge that threatens the very existence of our planet. Therefore, it is essential that we take action immediately to address this issue and work towards sustainable practices to protect our planet for future generations. 气候变化是一个紧迫的全球性挑战,威胁着我们星球的生存。因此,我们必须立即采取行动解决这一问题,并努力采取可持续做法,为子孙后代保护我们的地球。 6.表示递进关系的过渡性词语 what’s more,furthermore,moreover,besides,what’s worse,still less,to make matters worse,worse still,on the one hand...on the other hand...,for one thing...for another (thing)...等 For one thing,exercising regularly improves our physical health and reduces the risk of various diseases. For another, it also boosts our mental well­-being by reducing stress and improving our mood. 一方面,定期锻炼可以改善我们的身体健康,减少患各种疾病的风险。另一方面,它还可以通过减轻压力和改善情绪来提高我们的心理健康。 7.表示列举事实的过渡性词语 such as,for example/instance,take...for example,that is to say,as follows,in other words等 A suitable gift such as a bunch of flowers is necessary for your visit. 你去做客时,带一份合适的礼物,比如一束花,是有必要的。 8.表示观点的过渡性词语 in my opinion,in my view,from my point of view,as far as I’m concerned,as for me,personally等 In my opinion,reading is one of the most valuable habits one can cultivate. It broadens our horizons, enriches our vocabulary, and stimulates our imagination. 在我看来,阅读是一个人可以培养的最有价值的习惯之一。它开阔我们的眼界,丰富我们的词汇量,激发我们的想象力。 9.表示总结的过渡性词语  in short,in brief,in conclusion,in a/one word,to sum up,all in all,on the whole,in general等 In conclusion, perseverance and hard work are the cornerstones of success. Without them, it is difficult for us to achieve our goals and reach our full potential. 总之,坚持不懈和努力工作是成功的基石。没有它们,我们就很难实现我们的目标并充分发挥我们的潜力。 阅读下面短文,选择适当的过渡性词语填空 above all,besides,meanwhile,for one thing,for another thing,personally,in a word Recently,it has been a great public concern that the students lack self-­protection awareness. 美句输出 There is a lack of social experience among us students and therefore learning how to protect ourselves is of great significance to us all.1._______________,security comes first. Without security,we can achieve nothing and cannot live up to parents’ expectations；2.________________,protecting ourselves contributes to our healthy development,which is associated with the happiness of every family.3.____________, it also helps to build a more harmonious society. For one thing for another thing Meanwhile 4.__________,in order to protect us students,5.__________,we should strengthen our security awareness.6.__________,when accidents occur,we should calm down and turn to teachers or parents for help. The government also plays a leading role in protecting students.7.___________,only by the combined efforts of every side involved can we live and study in harmony. Personally above all Besides In a word $$