Unit 4 Period 5 Using Language (Ⅱ) 写作培优课（教用Word）-【金榜题名】2025-2026学年高二英语选择性必修第二册高中同步学案（人教版）

Period 5　Using Language (Ⅱ) 　写作培优课 Learning Aims(学习目标) 1．Learn how to write an email about a journey. 2．Practice writing one. (重点难点) 目标一　写作要领　技法指导 本单元的写作目标是写一篇关于旅行的邮件，也就是对一次出行、游览、参观等的记录。这类文章一般分为三部分：第一部分介绍自己游笕或参观的地点。第二部分写自己的游览经历，也是文章的重点。第三部分往往以向朋友发出邀请来结束全文。在介绍游览经历时，一般按游览的先后顺序写，由先而后依次记述游览过程中所见到的景物。另外要选取自己印象最深刻的或最有特色的景物，作较为详细的描写。最后可以加上自己的感受，做到既有所见所闻，又有所思所感，深化写作主题。 常用表达 1．I'd like to share one of the most fascinating experiences with you. 2．I'm glad to share a truly unforgettable travel experience that I had during my last summer holiday with you. 3．Last week/month/year，I paid a visit to...，which is famous for... 4．It lies/is located/situated in... 5．The scenery is so beautiful that it takes the tourists' breath away. 6．Wherever you go, there are plenty of activities to choose from. 7．It has become one of the most popular tourist attractions in the world. 8．We were all exhausted, but our trip to... was really unforgettable. 目标二　写作实践　分步演练 假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Tom写信询问你的一次难忘的旅游经历。请你用英语给他回一封邮件，要点包括： 1．旅游过程； 2．你的感受。 注意： 1．词数80左右； 2．开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。 参考词汇：大佛the Giant Stone Buddha 第一步　审题谋篇 [审题] 写作时应注意以下几点： 1．确定文体：这是一篇电子邮件，向朋友介绍一次难忘的旅游经历。 2．主体时态：以一般过去时为主。景物描写用一般现在时。 3．主体人称：人称虚该以第一人称和第三人称为主。 [谋篇] 第一段：开门见山，介绍本次旅行的时间、地点、人员及交通方式等。 第二段：自己的游览经历，注意详略得当。 第三段：总结全文，发出邀请。 第二步　遣词造句 [核心词汇] 1．十分惊讶　astonish 2．字面上；真正地 literally 3．巨大的；非常严重的 massive 4．顶峰；山峰 peak 5．令人惊叹的；可怕的；很好的 awesome 6．景色 scenery 7．让人惊叹 take sb.'s breath away 8．在黄昏 at dusk 9．令人愉快的；友好的 pleasant 10．一定会 be bound to [连词成句] 1．七月七日，我和父母乘车去了四川乐山，一个以大佛闻名的地方。 On July 7，my parents and I took a bus to Leshan, Sichuan Province. Leshan is famous for the Giant Stone Buddha. 2．我们吃惊地发现大佛真的很大。 We were astonished to find that the Buddha is literally massive. 3．当我抬头看到巨大的佛头，低头看到巨大的佛脚时，我感到自己是多么渺小。 When I looked up at the large head and down at the large feet，I felt I was so small. 4．第二天，我们登上了峨眉山山顶，山上的美景让我们惊叹。 The next day，we climbed to the peak of Mount Emei. The awesome and spectacular scenery on the mountain took our breath away. 5．在黄昏时刻，我们返程。 At dusk，we made our way back. 6．我们都非常累，但是我们去乐山的旅程真的既难忘又使人愉快。 We were all tired, but our trip to Leshan was really unforgettable and pleasant. 7．如果再给我一次机会，我一定会再来游览乐山。 If I am given another chance，I am bound to pay a visit to Leshan again. 第三步　句式升级 1．用非限制性定语从句改写句1 On July 7, my parents and I took a bus to Leshan, Sichuan Province，which is famous for the Giant Stone Buddha. 2．用现在分词短语作状语改写句3 Looking up at the large head and down at the large feet，I felt I was so small. 3．把句4改成以关系副词引导的定语从句 The next day, we climbed to the peak of Mount Emei, where the awesome and spectacular scenery took our breath away. 4．用done作状语改写句7 Given another chance，I am bound to pay a visit to Leshan again. 第四步　组句成篇 用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇80词左右的英语短文。 Dear Tom， I'm glad to share a truly fascinating travel experience that I had during my last summer holiday with you. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I'm looking forward to going to Leshan with you next time. Yours， Li Hua 【参考范文】 Dear Tom， I'm glad to share a truly fascinating travel experience that I had during my last summer holiday with you. On July 7，my parents and I took a bus to Leshan, Sichuan Province，which is famous for the Giant Stone Buddha. We were astonished to find the Buddha is literally massive. Looking up at the large head and down at the large feet，I felt I was so small. The next day，we climbed to the peak of Mount Ernei, where the awesome and spectacular scenery took our breath away. At dusk, we made our way back. We were all tired, but our trip to Leshan was really unforgettable and pleasant. Given another chance，I am bound to pay a visit to Leshan again. I'm looking forward to going to Leshan with you next time. Yours， Li Hua 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$