Unit 3 Period 5 Using Language (Ⅱ) 写作培优课（教用Word）-【金榜题名】2025-2026学年高二英语选择性必修第二册高中同步学案（人教版）

Period 5　Using Language (Ⅱ)　写作培优课 Learning Aims(学习目标) 1．Learn how to describe one's diet. 2．Practice writing one. (重点难点) 目标一　写作要领　技法指导 本单元的写作目标是写一篇描述性文章。描述性文章就是把人物、事件、景观或环境等用生动的语言描绘出来。这类文章的开头应对所描述的人物、事件、地点、环境等有一个简明的介绍，语言需精炼，浅尝辄止，不能过度发挥。主体部分是文章最重要的一部分，主要是分析问题，或是对如何解决该问题进行描述，有时题目已给出，按要求适当拓展即可。如没有，则需认真思考，并注意所提出方案的可行性、逻辑性。可按时间或事件的主次进行描述。最后对文章进行总结，如对未来进行展望应该积极向上。无论是描述人物、事件还是地点、环境，都要详略得当，重点突出。 常用表达 1．In recent days/Recently/Nowadays, we have to face the problem that...，which is becoming more and more serious. 2．Overall，I think I have healthy eating habits. 3．As for the things that I am doing... 4．Many reasons/factors will contribute to the phenomenon. First/Firstly，...；Second/Secondly，... 5．The reason of the phenomenon lies in several aspects. 6．When talking about how to solve this problem，different people have different ideas. As far as I am concerned, we should... 7．Still，I should improve my eating habits by... 8．All in all/In short/In conclusion/In a word/As is said/As is stated above，I firmly believe... 目标二　写作实践　分步演练 假如你是李华，你的朋友王力目前正因体重暴增而苦恼不已，来信向你咨询关于健康饮食的问题。请你给他写一封回信，介绍一下你的饮食习惯。内容包括： 1．很少吃甜食和垃圾食品； 2．饮食中蔬菜、水果居多，有少量肉、蛋和奶制品； 3．一日三餐有规律。 注意： 1．词数80左右； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 第一步　审题谋篇 [审题] 写作要求是写一篇描述性文章。写作时应注意下面三点： 1．确定文体：这是一篇应用文，向朋友描述自己的饮食习惯。 2．主体时态：以一般现在时为主。 3．主体人称：人称应该以第一人称为主。 [谋篇] 第一段：应开门见山，引入话题。 第二段：阐述理由，给出建议。 第三段：总结全文，发出希望。 第二步　遣词造句 [核心词汇] 1．消息传来说　word came that... 2．在我看来 from my point of view 3．与……有联系 be associated with 4．在于 consist in 5．消费；吃；喝 consume 6．由……组成 consist of 7．大量的 quantities of 8．促成；导致 contribute to 9．不管；不顾 regardless of 10．换句话说 in other words [连词成句] 1．消息传来说你最近一直在增重。 Word came that you have been gaining weight recently. 2．这使你沮丧。 This makes you depressed. 3．在我看来，你的不健康饮食与你的问题有密切联系。 From my point of view，your unhealthy diet is closely associated with your problem. 4．对于我来说，我的健康在于均衡饮食。 As for me，my health consists in a balanced diet. 5．我的饮食由大量的水果和绿色蔬菜组成。 My diet consists of quantities of fruit and green vegetables. 6．最根本的是，我的确有一贯的饮食习惯，不管是假期还是周末。 Most fundamentally, I do have consistent eating habits, regardless of holidays or weekends. 7．以上是我健康饮食的诀窍。 The above are the tricks of my healthy diet. 8．换句话说，有健康饮食，你可以解决你的体重问题。 In other words, you can solve your weight problem by having a balanced diet. 第三步　句式升级 1．将句1和句2合并为非限制性定语从句 Word came that you have been gaining weight recently, which makes you depressed. 2．将句10改成强调句型 In other words，it is only by having a balanced diet that you can solve your weight problem. 第四步　组句成篇 用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇80词左右的英语短文。 Dear Wang Li， ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours， Li Hua 【参考范文】 Dear Wang Li， Word came that you have been gaining weight recently，which makes you depressed. From my point of view, your unhealthy diet is closely associated with your problem. As for me，my health consists in a balanced diet. Firstly，l rarely consume desserts and junk food. Furthermore, my diet consists of quantities of fruit and green vegetables. A modest quantity of dairy products also contribute to my health. Most fundamentally，I do have consistent eating habits，regardless of holidays or weekends. The above are the tricks of my healthy diet. In other words，it is only by having a balanced diet that you can solve your weight problem. Yours， Li Hua 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$