读后续写情绪描写之喜悦开心 课件 2025届高考英语专题复习

高三英语一轮复习之 读后续写（一） ——How to express the feelings—— Delight & Joy & Happiness 祁阳市第二中学 王韵章 1 Step1: Lead in Guessing: How do they feel? happy/ cheerful/ delighted/ merry… upset/ disappointed/ heart-broken/ low-spirited… angry/ annoyed/ mad/ irritated… 2 Guessing: How do they feel? scared/ frightened/ terrified/ horrified… surprised/ shocked/ amazed/ astonished… concerned/ anxious/ restless/ nervous… 3 高考真题链接 _______ _____________ ___________ _____________ ______ ____________________ (新高考1.读后续写) To my joy, David slowly rose to his feet./ Seeing his confident smiles, I sighed in relief. (新高考1.读后续写) The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother’s Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. (新高考1.读后续写) Smiling, she said, “You may send it to him every Saturday morning, if you are willing to make popcorn for him yourselves. John, will you agree to be responsible for the work?” “Absolutely!” replied John, excitement shining in his eyes. 4 How can we express happiness in continuation writing? 01 02 03 Direct description Facial expression &Body language Surroundings Step2: Material accumulation 5 Part 1 : Direct description(直抒胸臆) Please brainstorm some words to describe happiness？ Nouns Adjectives Verbs delight joy happiness amusement delighted cheerful merry amused smile laugh giggle chuckle grin smirk hum beam 6 Useful phrases brightened one’s heart 使某人心情愉快 be on top of the world 心满意足 shed tears of joy 喜极而泣 be in high spirit 情绪高涨 be floating on air 开心至极 be so pleased that one’s heart sang 心花怒放 be/go wild with joy欣喜若狂 When I got the first place in the exam, my face was shining with joy. When I got the first place in the exam, I was in a good mood, just like the white clouds in the blue sky. When I got the first place in the exam, I flashed a bright smile. Exercise one 当我考试得了第一名，我开心极了。 请分别用上述所学词汇或短语进行描述。 1. ________________________________________________________ 2. ________________________________________________________ 3. ________________________________________________________ 8 Which one do you like? Why? (15分作文) He was very happy to hear this news. (22分作文) Hearing this news, he jumped up and ran happily around the yard. (15分作文) When she opened the university offer, she felt so excited. 请你来写：When she opened the university offer, she ____________ _______________________________________________. Compare the sentences ________________________ (24分作文) Her hands were trembling with excitement as she opened the university offer. 眉目传情 Body language Facial expressions Part2：Feelings shown through: 10 Smiling expressions： Words： grin 咧嘴笑 beam眉开眼笑 giggle咯咯地笑 chuckle轻轻地笑 Phrases： a bright smile 灿烂的笑容 with a smile shining like a diamond 笑容灿烂如钻石 be all smiles 笑容满面 grin from ear to ear 咧着嘴笑 roar with laughter疯狂大笑 burst with laughter开怀大笑 Facial expressions laugh beam giggle a bright smile with a smile shining like a diamond roar with laughter grin from ear to ear burst with laughter 疯狂大笑 咯咯地笑 大笑 眉开眼笑 笑容灿烂如钻石 灿烂的笑容 开怀大笑 咧着嘴笑 Match Other expressions： one’s eyes shone/twinkled/sparked with excitement 某人眼里闪烁着兴奋的光芒 one’s eyes were filled with warm excited tears 热泪盈眶 tears of joy 喜极而泣 one’s face brightened 某人的脸上焕发出了光彩 with a big /bright smile appearing on/ spreading across one’s face 某人脸上绽放出大大的笑容 Facial expressions Useful expressions 1 one’s hands trembled with excitement 手激动得发抖 danced for/with joy 手舞足蹈 gave a jump in the air 高兴地蹦跶 gave a thumbs-up to sb 朝某人竖起大拇指 jumped for/with joy 高兴地跳起来 hummed and skipped like a bird in the forest. （明喻） 像小鸟在森林里一样哼唱跳跃 Body language 在横线中续写相应的情感描写，可适当添加内容，使文章前后连贯。 (新高考.读后续写改编) I am a mother of the twins who are only five years old. Today is Mother’s Day, and they prepared breakfast for me this morning. At the sight of the meal, I _______________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________. This was the best gift I have ever received. felt happy felt delighted was over the moon was wild with joy / delight / happiness was so pleased that my heart sang Exercise two (新高考1.读后续写)看着他自信的微笑，我的心中也涌起了喜悦。 (2020新高考1.读后续写) David 眼中闪烁着兴奋的光芒。 Translate the sentences David’s eyes shone /twinkled /sparked with excitement. At the sight of his confident smile, a sense of joy swept over/ flooded over me. Part3：Surroundings Some sentence patterns to describe happiness： V-ing, sb felt a surge/sense of + n + creeping over/welling up in one’s heart and surging through sb. With a flush of +n + overwhelming sb. adj + adj, the main clause. So+adj+be+主语+that. What+情绪动词+sb+was+that. 17 Exercise3: Rewrite the sentences 1.Jane looked up and saw a helicopter, and she felt a great sense of joy welling up in her heart and surging through her. 2. A flush of exhilaration(兴奋)overwhelming me, I, enraptured, howled with joy. 3.Eric was excited and joyful, he was determined to join the sports team. 4.The students and teachers so were excited that they called out my name in a deafening(震耳欲聋的)voice. 5. It is delighted for me that I can always be there for you in the process of pursuing your dreams. 18 Example: 1.Jane looked up and saw a helicopter, and she felt a great sense of joy welling up in her heart and surging through her. V-ing, sb felt a surge/sense of +n+ creeping over/welling up in one’s heart and surging through sb. Looking up and seeing a helicopter, Jane felt a great sense of joy welling up in her heart and surging through her. 19 1.Jane looked up and saw a helicopter, and she felt a great sense of joy welling up in her heart and surging through her. 1. Looking up and seeing a helicopter, Jane felt a great sense of joy welling up in her heart and surging through her. 非谓语 2. A flush of exhilaration(兴奋)overwhelming me, I, enraptured, howled with joy. 2. With a flush of exhilaration overwhelming me, I, enraptured, howled with joy. with 的复合结构 3.Eric was excited and joyful, he was determined to join the sports team. 3. Excited and joyful, Eric was determined to join the sports team. 形容词作状语 4.The students and teachers so were excited that they called out my name in a deafening(震耳欲聋的)voice. 4. So excited were the students and teachers that they called out my name in a deafening voice. so的倒装 5. It is delighted for me that I can always be there for you in the process of pursuing your dreams. 5. What delights me is that I can always be there for you in the process of pursuing your dreams. 感叹句 20 （2024届黑龙江哈师大附中期末，25分）Jim slumped on the couch. Mother’s Day was coming up, and he didn’t have a present. “How can I buy a present without any money?” he thought. Jim picked up the newspaper that was lying on the couch. He noticed a large advertisement on the front page. The local department store was sponsoring a contest. “Tell us why your mom is special and win a shopping spree(疯狂购物) for her,” said the ad. “This is perfect!” thought Jim. He ran to his room with the newspaper. Taking a pencil and a blank piece of paper from his desk, he started to write. “My mom is the best mother in the world. She always makes a lunch for me to take to school, and she never forgets my dessert. She reads as many books to me before bed as I want. Step3: Writing 21 She always remembers to check under the bed for monsters. And she gives the best hugs, but never in front of my friends, who would laugh at me for hugging my mom.” Jim liked what he had written. He copied it neatly and got an envelope and a stamp from his dad. He ran to the mailbox with his entry(参赛作品). “Mom will love having a shopping spree,” he thought. Jim checked the mailbox every day for his prize. Days passed by, and then weeks. Soon it was the day before Mother’s Day. Jim still hadn’t heard anything about the contest. “What am I going to do now?” he wondered. He didn’t have a present, and he still didn’t have any money. He had to think of something. Jim closed his eyes and curled his toes and thought so hard that his ears hurt. 22 注意：续写词数应为150左右。 Suddenly, he had an idea. The next morning Jim handed his present to his mom. 23 优秀学生范文 24 总结高分短语及句型 1. curve into… 弯曲成 2. sweep sb. into one’s arms 把某人拥入怀中 3. lean against one’s shoulder 靠在某人的肩头 4. With a sincere heart, Jim finished the letter and sealed it in an envelope, his lips curving into a smile.(with 结构作伴随状语，表现出了Jim在给母亲准备礼物的真挚) 5. Finishing reading the letter, his mom swept him into her arms with her eyes wet as if she wanted to squeeze the breath out of him.(as if 引导的方式状语从句，生动地描绘出母亲拥抱Jim的情景，表现了母亲收到信的感动) 25 Since ancient times, the Chinese people have realized that in the world there is no such thing as sitting idle and enjoying all the benefits. Happiness comes out of arduous work. ———President Xi Jinping 中国人民自古就明白，世界上没有坐享其成的好事，要幸福就要奋斗。 ——— 习近平 Step4:Summary & Emotional Inspiration Homework 1.Remember some phrases and sentence patterns to describe happiness. 2.Polish your continuation writing after class. 27 Thank you for your listening! 28 $$