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[答案　P2] 本单元以“假期”为话题，写作内容通常要求围绕这一话题谈论自己过去的经历或讲述假期旅行的经历。在写作时，要学会运用一般过去时来叙述过去发生的事情。这类文章主要是记录和描述参观和浏览的经历、旅途见闻或走亲访友的过程或心得，体裁多以记叙文为主。 范畴： 人与自我 主题群： 生活与学习 子主题： 丰富、充实、积极向上的生活 [开头句] 1．这个夏天我和父母去北京度假了。(on vacation) I went to Beijing on vacation with my parents this summer. 2．我记得我去年的暑假。(remember) I remember my last summer vacation. 3．旅游可以帮助开阔我们的眼界。(open one's eyes) Travelling can help to open our eyes. [中间句] 1．在第一天，我们去了天安门广场观看了升旗仪式。(watch the flag­raising ceremony) On the first day, we went to the Tian'anmen Square and watched the flag­raising ceremony. 2．我们在旅行期间拍了许多精彩的照片。(take photos; during) We took lots of wonderful photos during the travel. 3．我们一路上开心地有说有笑。(along the way) We talked and laughed happily along the way. 4．我和父母乘坐公交车去了那里。(with sb) I went there by bus with my parents. 5．在北京有许多有趣的地方。(places of interest) There are many places of interest in Beijing. [结尾句] 1．我很累但是很开心，我希望再次参观长城。(tired but happy; again) I was very tired but quite happy. I hope to visit the Great Wall again. 2．我们在那里玩得很开心。(have a good time) We had a good time there. 3．它的确值得参观。(be worth doing) It's really worth visiting. [佳句积累] 1．Travelling broadens the horizons. 旅游开阔眼界。 2．It is better to travel ten thousand miles than to read ten thousand books. 读万卷书不如行万里路。 上周日，你们班组织了一次去幸福有机农场的社会实践活动。假如你是学校英语角的一员，请以“Our trip to the Happy Organic Farm”为题，准备一篇 80 词左右的发言稿，在本周五的英语角上向大家分享此次活动。 要点： 1．当天的天气如何； 2．你们使用了何种交通方式； 3．你们参加了哪些活动； 4．你们的活动感想是什么。 写作要求： 1．文中须包含所给的要点提示，可适当发挥； 2．文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 3．词数80左右。 Our trip to the Happy Organic Farm Good afternoon, everyone. Last Sunday, our class went to the Happy Organic Farm. It was sunny and warm that day.① We went there by school bus.② We talked and sang happily along the way. At about 9：00 a．m., we got there. The farm workers there gave us a warm welcome and they showed us around the farm. It was so big and clean. An hour later, we listened to a talk in a big hall. From the talk, we knew that eating organic fruit and vegetables is good for our health.③ After lunch, we picked some strawberries there. They tasted delicious. How time flew！④ At 3：00 p．m., we had to leave there. We felt a little tired but we enjoyed the trip.⑤ We wanted to visit it again. 名师点评 [主题评价]文章结构清晰，开篇点题，指出时间、地点和人物。主体用一般过去时描述去农场进行社会实践活动的全过程。结尾谈及同学们的感受。文章要点全面，时态运用正确，符合写作要求。 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 ①开篇点题，交代了活动发生的时间、地点、参与者和天气。 ②过渡句，自然而然地过渡到具体的活动中。 ③句中 that 引导的宾语从句的恰当运用体现了作者扎实的写作功底。 ④感叹句的正确运用生动地体现了作者愉快的活动经历。 ⑤并列句的恰当使用准确地表达了大家对本次活动的感受。 今年暑假，你跟你的爸爸一起去四川度假。假如在8月4日(星期一)这天，你们去了峨眉山，并参观了动物园，看到很多大熊猫。请根据以下问题提示，写一篇日记，描述当天的情况。 提示： 1．How was the weather? 2．Where did you go? 3．Who did you go with? 4．What did you do? 5．How did you feel about the trip? 写作要求： 1．文中须包含所给的要点提示，可适当发挥； 2．文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 3．词数80左右。 Monday, 4th August It was sunny and hot today. I went to Sichuan with my father. We went to Mount Emei. The scenery was really beautiful. Then we visited the zoo and saw pandas. They are my favourite animals because they're so cute. I think we should try our best to protect them. For lunch, we had hot pot. It was delicious. In the evening, we went shopping and I bought something for my friends. Everything was excellent. We were tired but happy. It was worth visiting. I hoped to go there again. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$