Unit 5 On the road单元作文学案-2025-2026学年高中英语外研版必修第二册

Unit 5 On the Road 单元主题作文 给建议 动物是人类的亲密朋友，但是大量野生动物包括珍惜动物遭到人类的滥捕滥杀。人类正在失去越来越多的朋友。没有了这些动物朋友，我们人类的生活又会怎么样？请你结合实际，对此类现象发表个人观点，并提出一些合理建议。注意：题目自拟。词数：120词左右。 审题谋篇 STEP Ⅰ审题构思出框架 1 明确体裁话题→写建议、对于保护动物给出一些建议。 2 确定时态人称→一般现在时为主；以第一人称为主 3 构思文章框架→三段式：首段：描述现状，引出问题中段：结合实际情况，表述动物被伤害的原因并给出具体建议 尾段：简单总结。 接下来细化主要内容→结合实际情况，表述动物被伤害的原因并给出具体建议 原因，比如：可以从没有买卖就没有伤害这个角度来分析。 建议如何做，可以从个人与政府角度来具体实施。 将这些表述清楚即可组成文章主要部分。 STEP Ⅱ 完整句子表达 1.动物是人类的亲密朋友。 Animals are close friends of human beings. 2.他们的存在使整个世界充满生机和色彩。 Their existence makes the whole world lively and colourful. 3.不幸的是，大量的野生动物正在受到伤害和杀害。 Unfortunately, a large number of wild animals are being hurt and killed. 4. 有些稀有动物处于危险之中。 Some rare animals are in danger. 5. 没有了我们的朋友，我们的未来会是什么样子呢？ Without our friends, what will our life be like in the future? 6.我认为，这种现象的原因之一是一些人缺乏对这些动物的理解和照顾。 I think, one of reasons for this phenomenon is that some people lack understanding about these animals and caring for them. 练习（仿写句子） 以下是类似结构的句子，均采用 “I think, one of the reasons for... is that...” 的句式，用于分析现象原因： 我认为，学生学习困难的原因之一是传统教学方法未能有效吸引他们。 I think, one of the reasons for is that . 我认为，注意力持续时间缩短的原因之一是电子设备不断分散我们的注意力。 I think, one of the reasons for is that . 我认为，儿童肥胖的原因之一是加工食品变得过于容易获得。 I think, one of the reasons for is that . 我认为，过度消费主义的原因之一是广告制造了虚假需求。 I think, one of the reasons for is that . 7.另一个原因与巨额利润有关。 And another reason is related to huge profits. 8.人们杀死动物只是为了得到有价值的皮毛来制作衣服或医疗用品。 People killing animals just want to get valuable furs to make clothes or body for medical usage. 此处补充“没有买卖，就没有伤害。” When the buying stops, the killing can too. 9.因此，应立即采取有效措施。 Therefore, effective measures should be taken immediately. 10.首先，我们要帮助公众更多地了解野生动物，特别是珍稀动物。 At first, we should help the public know more about the wild animals, especially the rare animals. 11.此外，我们还应该牢记，保护动物是每个人的责任。 Besides, we should keep it in mind that protecting animals is the duty of everyone. 12.同时，政府应当制定法律保护动物，并对杀害动物的人进行处罚。At the same time, government should make laws to protect animals and punish those who kill animals. 13.如果我们继续伤害动物，它们就会报复我们。 If we continue to injure the animals, they will take revenge on us. 14.善待动物就是善待我们自己。 Being kind to animals is being kind to us. STEP Ⅲ 增加衔接句，成篇。 One possible version Save Our Friends---Animals Animals are close friends of human beings. Their existence makes the whole world lively and colourful. Unfortunately, a large number of wild animals are being hurt and killed. Some rare animals are in danger. Without our friends, what will our life be like in the future? I think, one of reasons for this phenomenon is that some people lack understanding about these animals and caring for them. And another reason is related to huge profits. People killing animals just want to get valuable furs to make clothes or body for medical usage. For these reasons, animals are at the edge of extinction.Therefore, effective measures should be taken immediately. At first, we should help the public know more about the wild animals, especially the rare animals. Besides, we should keep it in mind that protecting animals is the duty of everyone. At the same time, government should make laws to protect animals and punish those who kill animals. If we continue to injure the animals, they will take revenge on us. Being kind to animals is being kind to us. 参考例句 I think, one of the reasons for students' learning difficulties is that traditional teaching methods fail to engage them effectively. I think, one of the reasons for decreased attention spans is that digital devices constantly distract us. I think, one of the reasons for childhood obesity is that processed foods have become too readily available. I think, one of the reasons for excessive consumerism is that advertising creates artificial needs. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$