Unit 6 At one with Nature 单元主题作文 导学案-2025-2026学年高中英语外研版必修第一册

Unit 6 At one with Nature 单元主题作文 建议信 假定你是李华，你校打算在校内开设动物角。校英文报为此征求同学们意见，请你写一篇短文投稿。 内容包括： 1. 陈述看法； 2. 提出建议。 My Views on Animal Care Centre on Campus 审题谋篇 STEP Ⅰ审题构思出框架 1 明确体裁话题→议论文、开设动物角。 2 确定时态人称→一般现在时为主；以第一人称为主 3 构思文章框架→三段式：首段：陈述观点 中段：具体建议 尾段：总结。 接下来细化主要内容→论点论据（这个是本篇文章的重难点） 比如可以养哪些小动物，如何照顾小动物等等。 将这些表述清楚即可组成文章中段主要部分。 STEP Ⅱ 完整句子表达 1. 我大力支持在我们学校设立动物角。 I strongly support creating an animal corner in our school. 用“in favor of”来表达 I’m completely in favor of setting up an animal corner on campus. Most students are in favor of having pets on campus . 2.它将教会学生责任和同情心，同时使我们的校园更加活跃。 It would teach students about responsibility and compassion while making our campus more lively. 练习(仿写句子) 它培养责任感，发展同情心，活跃我们的校园气氛。 展望未来，这个项目将塑造更多负责任和有爱心的人，同时将我们的学校变成一个更有活力的空间。 3.从兔子或乌龟等低维护的动物开始。 Starting with low-maintenance animals like rabbits or turtles. 对于基础较好的学生可以积累以下表达 介绍需要最少专门护理的耐寒而有趣的物种，如兔子或陆龟。 Introducing hardy yet engaging species such as rabbits or tortoises that require minimal specialized care. 4.组织志愿者团队来照顾他们. Organizing volunteer teams to care for them. 对于基础较好的学生可以积累以下表达 组建轮值学生看护团队，促进共同责任。 Forming rotating student caretaker teams to promote shared responsibility . 5.增加有关动物保护的教育标识。 Adding educational signs about animal protection. 对于基础较好的学生可以积累以下表达 安装互动信息展示，突出动物福利和生物多样性。 Installing interactive informational displays highlighting animal welfare and biodiversity . 6. 这个项目如果管理得当，既可以成为教育工具，又能带来乐趣。 This project could become both educational and enjoyable if properly managed. 练习（仿写句子） 遵循“主语 + could become both [优点1] and [优点2] if [条件]”的句式，表达某事物在特定条件下可能实现的双重价值： 如果根据学生兴趣调整，这个阅读计划既能娱乐又能启发思考。 如果学生参与维护，这个校园花园既能教学又能疗愈心灵。 如果有不同背景的志愿者加入，这个社区厨房既能提供营养又能团结邻里。 STEP Ⅲ 增加衔接句，成篇。 One possible version My Suggestions for the School Animal Corner Dear Editor, I strongly support creating an animal corner in our school. It would teach students about responsibility and compassion while making our campus more lively. To ensure its success, I suggest: 1. Starting with low-maintenance animals like rabbits or turtles; 2. Organizing volunteer teams to care for them; 3. Adding educational signs about animal protection. This project could become both educational and enjoyable if properly managed. Let's make it happen! Yours, Li Hua My Suggestions for the School Animal Corner Dear Editor, I strongly support creating an animal corner in our school. It would teach students about responsibility and compassion while making our campus more lively. To ensure its success, I suggest: 1. Introducing hardy yet engaging species such as rabbits or tortoises that require minimal specialized care 2. Forming rotating student caretaker teams to promote shared responsibility 3. Installing interactive informational displays highlighting animal welfare and biodiversity This project could become both educational and enjoyable if properly managed. Let's make it happen! Yours, Li Hua 参考例句 It cultivates responsibility, develops compassion, and enlivens our campus atmosphere . Moving forward, this program promises to shape more responsible and caring individuals while transforming our school into a more dynamic space. The reading program could become both entertaining and enlightening if tailored to students' interests. The school garden could become both educational and therapeutic if students participate in its maintenance. The community kitchen could become both nourishing and unifying if volunteers from diverse backgrounds join. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$