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Unit 5 Into the Wild 单元主题作文
倡议书
近年来,环境污染问题日益严重,全球气候变暖导致极端天气频现。假定你是李华,请代表学生会向全校学生写一份倡议书,呼吁大家从身边小事做起,共同保护环境。
要点包括:
1. 倡议的背景;
2. 倡议的具体内容:
3. 发出呼吁。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear fellow students,
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The Students’ Union
审题谋篇
STEP Ⅰ审题构思出框架
1 明确体裁话题→倡议书、保护环境。
2 确定时态人称→一般现在时为主;以第一人称复数为主
3 构思文章框架→三段式:首段:倡议背景(即题干内容) 中段:倡议具体内容 尾段:发出呼吁。
接下来细化主要内容→倡议具体内容(这个是本篇文章的重难点)
比如节约资源(水、电、纸张)、减少污染(垃圾分类、少用一次性用品)、绿色出行等方面,并适当说明每项措施的意义。
将这些表述清楚即可组成文章中段主要部分。
STEP Ⅱ 完整句子表达
1. 近年来,环境污染问题日益严重,全球气候变暖导致极端天气频现。
In recent years, environmental pollution has reached alarming levels, and global warming has triggered frequent extreme weather events.
2. 冰川正在融化,森林正在萎缩,我们的星球正在呼救。
Glaciers are melting, forests are shrinking, and our planet is crying out for help.
练习(仿写句子)
运用排比结构:三个短句递进,前两句陈述事实(进行时态),第三句拟人化升华。 →[现象1], [现象2], and [拟人化总结].
海平面正在上升,沙漠正在扩大,地球在喘息求生。
珊瑚礁正在白化,野火正在肆虐,大自然在敲响警钟。
物种正在消失,栖息地正在消亡,生命之网正在瓦解。
3. 作为学生,我们有能力做出改变。
As students, we have the power to make a difference.
4. 首先,从简单的习惯开始,比如离开房间时关灯,使用纸的两边来节约资源。
First, start with simple habits like turning off lights when leaving a room and using both sides of paper to save resources.
5. 第二,接受垃圾分类和减少使用一次性物品以减少浪费。
Second, embrace garbage classification and reduce the use of disposable items to minimize waste.
6. 此外,选择步行、骑自行车或乘坐公共交通工具,而不是私家车,以减少碳排放。
Moreover, choose to walk, bike, or take public transportation instead of private cars to cut down on carbon emissions.
句子积累(补充保护环境的做法)
通过进行垃圾分类,我们不仅可以减少垃圾填埋量,还能回收宝贵的资源,赋予它们新的生命。
拒绝使用塑料袋、吸管等一次性用品是一个简单的选择,却能大幅减少塑料污染。
在我们周围植树造林、培育绿植,不仅可以美化校园,还能吸收二氧化碳、释放氧气。
7. 记住,每一个小动作都很重要。
Remember, every small action matters.
8. 让我们携手,成为环保卫士。
Let’s join hands and take on the role of environmental protectors.
9. 让我们携手共建一个更绿色、更可持续的世界!
Together, we can build a greener and more sustainable world!
句子积累(补充倡议、呼吁的表达)
环保的生活方式不是一种牺牲,而是一种造福我们自己和子孙后代的明智选择。
让我们携手成为环保卫士,为了地球的福祉和人类的繁荣。
让我们今天就做出承诺,创造一个人与自然和谐共处的可持续未来。
STEP Ⅲ 增加衔接句,成篇。
One possible version
Dear fellow students,
In recent years, environmental pollution has reached alarming levels, and global warming has triggered frequent extreme weather events. Glaciers are melting, forests are shrinking, and our planet is crying out for help. As students, we have the power to make a difference.
First, start with simple habits like turning off lights when leaving a room and using both sides of paper to save resources. Second, embrace garbage classification and reduce the use of disposable items to minimize waste. Moreover, choose to walk, bike, or take public transportation instead of private cars to cut down on carbon emissions.
Remember, every small action matters. Let’s join hands and take on the role of environmental protectors. Together, we can build a greener and more sustainable world!
The Students’ Union
参考例句
Oceans are rising, deserts are expanding, and Earth is gasping for breath.
Coral reefs are bleaching, wildfires are raging, and nature is sounding the alarm.
Species are vanishing, habitats are disappearing, and the web of life is unraveling.
By practicing garbage classification, we can not only reduce landfill waste but also recycle valuable resources, giving them a new lease of life.
Saying no to disposable products like plastic bags and straws is a simple choice that can significantly cut down on plastic pollution.
Planting trees and nurturing greenery around us can not only beautify our campus but also absorb carbon dioxide and release oxygen.
An eco - friendly lifestyle is not a sacrifice but a conscious choice that benefits both ourselves and future generations.
Let's join hands and become environmental guardians, for the well - being of our planet and the prosperity of humanity.
Let's make a commitment today to create a sustainable future where humans and nature coexist harmoniously.
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