Unit 1 A new start 单元主题作文 导学案-2025-2026学年高中英语外研版必修第一册

Unit 1 A new start 单元主题作文 写日记 假定你是李华，你于本周五下午参加了你校学生会组织的去动物救助中心的志愿者活动。请你写一篇英文日记，以便在英语课上和同学们分享。内容包括： 1.参加活动的时间、地点和主要经过； 2.参加活动的感受。 注意：1. 词数80左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯。 参考词汇：动物救助中心（Animal Rescue Center）； 流浪的（stray） May10th,Friday Sunny 审题谋篇 STEP Ⅰ审题构思出框架 1 明确体裁话题→日记、叙述学校生活 2 确定时态人称→一般过去时；以第一人称为主 3 构思文章框架→三段式：首段：简述事件内容（一般即为所给题干）中段：活动具体过程（即活动的主要经过） 尾段：活动的感受 接下来细化主要内容→活动的主要经过（这个是本篇文章的重难点） 如何去活动地点？动物救助中心有哪些动物？为这些动物做了什么？如何做的？ 将这些问题简单表述即可组成文章中段主要部分。 STEP Ⅱ 完整句子表达 1. 我本周五下午参加了我校学生会组织的去动物救助中心的志愿者活动。 拆分句子 句子主干为： 我本周五下午参加了志愿者活动。 I joined a volunteer activity on Friday. 志愿者活动是我校学生会组织的去动物救助中心的志愿者活动。 The volunteer activity was organized by the Students’ Union of our school . 可以改编为定语从句，变为 I joined a volunteer activity on Friday which was organized by the Students’ Union of our school . 练习（仿写句子） 我于周六参加了一场由慈善活动。 I attended a charity event on Saturday . 慈善活动是由当地社区中心主办。 The charity event was hosted by the local community center. 可以改编为定语从句，变为 (答案见末尾) 句子基本遵循： “某人＋参加活动＋时间＋由某组织举办”的结构。 2. 我和我的同学们乘公交去的动物救助中心。 My classmates and I took the bus to the Animal Rescue Center. 3. 动物救助中心里有流浪猫和流浪狗。 The Animal Rescue Centre has stray cats and stray dogs. 第二句和第三句同时出现了“动物救助中心”，可用定语从句将两句话整合为一句。 My classmates and I took the bus to the Animal Rescue Center, where some stray cats and dogs are kept . 练习（仿写句子） 我们的团队驱车前往回收中心。 Our team drove to the recycling center. 回收中心对塑料和纸张废弃物进行分类和处理。 The recycling center sorts and processes plastic and paper waste. 这两句话同时出现了“回收中心”，可用定语从句将两句话整合为一句。 (答案见末尾) 句子基本遵循： “某人＋交通方式＋前往某地＋补充说明该地的作用或特点”的结构。 4. 我们帮助清洗动物们的笼子。 We help clean the animals' cages. 5. 我在活动中学习了很多。 I learn a lot from this activity. STEP Ⅲ 增加衔接句，成篇。 One possible version May10th,Friday Sunny I joined a volunteer activity on Friday which was organized by the Students’ Union of our school. My classmates and I took a bus and went to the Animal Rescue Centre in our city , where some stray cats and dogs are kept . As soon as we arrived , the workers told us how there animal were collected and what they did to help them . Then we were divided into several small groups and help them clean the cages . We were given some food to feed these animals. I learned a lot from this activity . Animals need our care and attention , so we should devote our time to taking care of them. 参考例句： I attended a charity event on Saturday which was hosted by the local community center. Our team drove to the recycling center, where plastic and paper waste are sorted and processed. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$