Unit 5 Music 演讲稿（单元同步写作讲义）英语人教版必修第二册

必修第二册 Unit 5 Music 建议信 Write a speech 单元写作早知道 写作任务 本单元的写作任务是写一篇以 “音乐” 为主题的演讲稿。演讲稿是一种实用性很强的文体，是演讲者为了在特定场合发表讲话而事先准备的文稿。它可以用来阐述观点、分享感受、号召行动等，针对 “音乐” 这一主题，可围绕音乐的意义、学习音乐的方法、音乐对生活的影响等内容展开。 演讲稿的正文一般可以分为三部分： 第一部分：简短介绍,引出主题； 第二部分：阐述观点或分享内容； 第三部分：概括总结或发出号召。 常用表达 1.It is a great honor for me, on behalf of代表 +n. , to deliver this speech about ... 2.Good morning/afternoon, everyone. It's a great honor to be here to talk about... 3.Today, I'd like to share with you my thoughts on... 4.Have you ever thought about...? 5.Let me start by telling you a story about... 6.There's no denying that... 7.In my opinion,... 8.What's more,... 9.Besides,... 10.Finally,... 11.Let's work together to... 12.I hope that... 13.Thank you for your listening.. 单元话题 真题展示 高考链接 演讲稿 2011•江西高考 演讲稿或倡议书是一种常见的应用文文体，作者就某一个具体问题发表自己的见解和主张，阐明事理或抒发情感。在组织演讲稿时，要注意演讲面向的对象，注意措辞及修辞性语言的合理使用，以获得应有的表达效果。 假设你是新华中学的李华，将参加主题为“Let's Ride Bicycles”的英语演讲比赛。请你就此主题写一篇演讲稿，内容包括： 1．汽车带来的空气污染和交通拥堵等问题； 2．骑自行车的益处，如节能环保、有利健康等。 2016•天津高考 假设你是晨光中学的学生会主席李津。一批来自英国的高中生与你校学生开展了为期两周的交流活动。现在，他们即将回国，你将在欢送会上致辞。请根据以下提示写一篇发言稿。 (1)回顾双方的交流活动(如学习、生活、体育、文艺等方面)； (2)谈谈收获或感想； (3)表达祝愿与期望。 本单元写作以音乐为话题写演讲稿，演讲稿的主题可以从几个方面来写， 1.音乐对生活的影响：音乐在缓解压力、丰富生活等方面的影响 2.音乐的意义：音乐在情感表达、文化传承等方面的作用 3.学习音乐的方法：选择乐器、坚持练习等方面的建议 段落 内容 句子设计 第一段 点明演讲话题 第二段 阐述观点或分享内容 第三段 总结其对自己的影响 第四段 总结演讲内容，提出希望 【必备句式】 第一部分：简短介绍,引出主题 1.It is a great honor for me to make a speech on... 2.I'm very happy to speak here and I'd like to talk about... 3.The topic of my speech today is the global water shortage and ways of handling it. 4.I am very glad to have the chance to run for president of the Students’ Union. 5.I am glad to give you a warm welcome on behalf of our school. 6.Thank you from the bottom of my heart for giving me this chance to deliver my speech. 7.I am going to talk about something that is vitally important to all of us. The topic of my speech today is ... 第二部分：阐述观点或分享内容 1.I will divide this topic into five main aspects. 2.We all ought to be aware of the following points. 3.During my talk, I’ll be looking at three areas. 4.During my talk, I’ll be looking at three areas. Firstly,... Secondly,... Thirdly,... 5.As we all know.../As is known to us all.../It is well¬known to us all that... 众所周知，…… 6.As far as...is concerned... 就……而言…… 7.From this point of view，...由此来看，…… 8.On account of this，we can... 由于这一点，我们可以…… 9.No one can deny the fact that.../There is no denying the fact that... 不可否认的事实是…… 10.As the proverb says，... 正如谚语所说，…… 11.What calls for special attention is that... 需要特别注意的是…… 12.Nothing is more important than the fact that... 最重要的是…… 13.The thing we should do is to.../What we should do is.../It is our duty to... 我们应当做的是…… 第三部分：概括总结或发出号召 1. Actions speak louder than words. Let's take action immediately.事实胜于雄辩。让我们立即采取行动。 2. I hope all of you will begin to treasure music and make it a part of your life.我希望你们所有人都能开始重视音乐，让它成为你们生活的一部分。 3. All things considered/In short/In a word... 总而言之…… 4. If everyone...，I believe... 如果每个人……，我相信…… 5. Last but not least，it's everyone's responsibility to... 最后但同样重要的是，……是每个人的责任。 6. If you...，you will... 如果你……，你将会…… 7. Thank you for your attention. I hope you will find what I said helpful/ useful/ practical. 感谢倾听。希望我所说的对您有帮助/有用/实用。 6. I sincerely wish you a pleasant time with us.我真诚希望您和我们共度美好时光。 7.To conclude/ In conclusion/ Now, to sum up,… 8.Thank you from the bottom of my heart for giving me this chance to speak to you today. 9.At last, on behalf of all the students in our school, I wish you a safe and happy journey and hope that we will have more programs like this in the future.Thank you! 【必背模板】 模板① Boys and girls/Ladies and gentlemen, It's a great honor for me to stand here and give my speech. My name is ________(自我介绍). The topic of my speech is_________(演讲主题) . To begin with, many people suggest that .. Secondly,….Thirdly … (引出列举话题或现象).What I want to stress is that_______ (重申主 题). For one thing,... For another, ... Besides, ... (给出原因或列举重要性).In aword, ___________(总结). Thank you for your listening./Thank you. 模板② Boys and girls/Ladies and gentlemen/ Honorable judges, It’s a great honor/privilege for me to stand here and give/deliver my speech. My name is _____________.The topic of my speech is ___________.） As we all know/ As is known to us all，_________. To begin with, many people suggest that _______. What I want to stress is that_______ For one thing,_________For another,________In addition/ moreover/furthermore/Besides/ __________. （原因/建议/措施） In a word, ___________.Thank you from the bottom of my heart for giving me this opportunity to express myself today. Thank you for your listening.（ 感谢 ） 【升级策略】 1. 建议信写作注意事项 演讲稿包括发言稿、致辞等。演讲稿在语言使用上一定要准确简明、通俗易懂、层次清楚、条理分明。 具体写作结构为： ；中间段陈述演讲的具体内容；尾段总结演讲。 2. 写作方法 ①首段简要介绍：欢迎听众 介绍主题/自我介绍 说明演讲结构 由于演讲有时间限制，所以必须开门见山，提出论题。提出论题的方法多种多样，但最生动、最能引起注意的举例法。 ② 主体： 分要点陈述主题 对提出的论题，不可主观地妄下结论，而要进行客观的论证。这是演讲中最需要下功夫的部分。关键是把道理讲清楚。常见的论证方法有举例法、因果法、对比法等。 ③ 尾段：概括总结（总结演讲 致谢听众） 结论要简明扼要，以给听众留下深刻印象。 3. 写作流程图 简短介绍,引出主题 阐述观点或分享内容 概括总结或发出号召 假设你是新华中学的李华，将参加主题为“Music changes our life”的英语演讲比赛。请你就此主题写一篇演讲稿，内容包括： 1．压力大，不开心等问题； 2．音乐的益处。 3. 音乐影响你或他人的例子 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 审题 1．文体：应用文（演讲稿）。 2.时态：以一般现在时为主，讲述过去事例用一般过去时。 3.人称：通以第一人称 “我（李华）” 为主，适当使用第二人称与听众互动。 谋篇 第一段：问候听众，自我介绍，点明演讲主题。​ 第二段：简述学生面临的压力及不开心的状况。​ 第三段：阐述音乐在缓解压力、改善情绪等方面的益处。​ 第四段：总结呼吁，强调音乐对生活的积极改变，致谢。 遣词造句 【核心词汇】​ 1.privilege 荣幸 2.deliver 发表 3.stressed 有压力的 4.piles of 大量的 5.frustrated 沮丧的 6.encouragement 鼓励 7.inspiring 鼓舞人心的 8.cheerful 愉快的 9.mental 精神的 10.relief 缓解 【连词成句】 1.It’s a great privilege for me to stand here and deliver my speech.​ 2.My name is Li Hua.​ 3.The topic of my speech is “Music changes our life”.​ 4.Everyone has hard times and feels stressed.​ 5.For us students, piles of homework and tough exams often leave us frustrated and unhappy.​ 6.Many people believe that music can help us feel better.​ 7.Music really changes our life.​ 8.Music can give us encouragement.​ 9.My friend Lily once felt lonely and sad.​ 10.Inspiring songs filled her with courage and made her cheerful again.​ 11.Music can help improve both physical and mental conditions.​ 12.When I’m stressed before exams, soft music calms me down.​ 13.Walter Haddon said, “music is the medicine of a troubled mind.”​ 14.Music gives us strength and brings people relief.​ 15.Music plays an important role in our life.​ 16.I hope all of you will begin to treasure music and make it a part of your life. 【句式升级】 1.用 “as we all know” 升级 4 句：As we all know, everyone has hard times and feels stressed. 2.用 “what I want to stress is that” 强调 7 句：What I want to stress is that music really changes our life. 3.用 “for one thing...for another” 连接 8 句和 11 句：For one thing, music can give us encouragement. For another, it can help improve both physical and mental conditions. 4.用现在分词作结果状语升级 12 句：When I’m stressed before exams, soft music calms me down, letting me focus better.组句成篇 用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇80词左右的英语短文。 【第一部分 基础题】 一、完成短语 1.唱歌__________ 2.听音乐会______________ 3.跳舞__________ 4.听轻音乐______________ 5.参加虚拟合唱团 _____________ 6.给人鼓励________________________ 7.疗愈身心_______________________________________ 8.使人感觉平静___________________________________ 9.帮人忘记烦恼___________________________________ 10.给人力量，减轻压力 ______________________________ ​二、判断修辞 1.Music is indeed a kind of good medicine. 2.Music seemed like our best friend and it offered us encouragement, which helped us go through the hardest time. 3.Walter Haddon said,“Music is the medicine of a troubled mind.” 4.It helped me relieve pain.It helped me feel relaxed . It also helped me have confidence in the future 三、句子仿写改写​​ ​​基础层​​：结构调整 原句：Music is important. It affects our emotions. → 合并为复合句：______ → 用强调句改写：______ 原句：We should learn to enjoy music. → 转为号召句：______ ​​​​提分层​​：高阶句型 原句：Music can make us happy and relaxed. → 用倒装句：______ 原句：Learning music helps us develop patience. → 强调重要性：______ 四、翻译句子​​ 要求：用演讲稿常用句式翻译，注意语气恰当。 音乐在我们的生活中扮演着重要的角色。 让我们一起感受音乐的魅力吧。 毫无疑问，学习音乐能提高我们的创造力。 【参考答案】 【第二部分 提升题】 假定你是李华，针对学生近视人数不断攀升的状况，你校决定举办以“Let's Protect Our Eyes”为主题的英语演讲比赛，你有意报名参加。请根据下面的提示，写一篇80词左右的演讲稿，并发表自己的看法。内容包括： 1．学生近视的现状； 2．造成近视的原因； 3．呼吁大家保护眼睛。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 假定你是李华，最近你在英语写作方面遇到些困难。请你就此写封邮件给你的美国朋友Andy，向他寻求帮助。主要内容如下： 1．描述你遇到的困难； 2．表达想改变的愿望； 3．征求他的建议。 注意： 1．词数80左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Andy， How are you getting on？___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ Yours， Li Hua 假定你是校英语话剧俱乐部(School English Drama Club)的负责人李华，现负责英语话剧《百万英镑》(The Million Pound Bank Note)面向全校的演员选拔工作。请你根据以下提示信息拟一则英文通知： 1．选拔时间和地点：2025年12月20日，学校演讲厅； 2．选拔要求：热爱戏剧表演，具有较好的英语口语表达能力等； 3．通知时间：2025年12月13日。 注意：1.词数80左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：演讲厅lecture hall要求requirement ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 【链接高考—经典诵读】 （2011•江西高考）假设你是新华中学的李华，将参加主题为“Let's Ride Bicycles”的英语演讲比赛。请你就此主题写一篇演讲稿，内容包括： 1．汽车带来的空气污染和交通拥堵等问题； 2．骑自行车的益处，如节能环保、有利健康等。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （2016•天津高考）假设你是晨光中学的学生会主席李津。一批来自英国的高中生与你校学生开展了为期两周的交流活动。现在，他们即将回国，你将在欢送会上致辞。请根据以下提示写一篇发言稿。 (1)回顾双方的交流活动(如学习、生活、体育、文艺等方面)； (2)谈谈收获或感想； (3)表达祝愿与期望。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 12 / 17 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 必修第二册 Unit 5 Music 建议信 Write a speech 单元写作早知道 写作任务 本单元的写作任务是写一篇以 “音乐” 为主题的演讲稿。演讲稿是一种实用性很强的文体，是演讲者为了在特定场合发表讲话而事先准备的文稿。它可以用来阐述观点、分享感受、号召行动等，针对 “音乐” 这一主题，可围绕音乐的意义、学习音乐的方法、音乐对生活的影响等内容展开。 演讲稿的正文一般可以分为三部分： 第一部分：简短介绍,引出主题； 第二部分：阐述观点或分享内容； 第三部分：概括总结或发出号召。 常用表达 1.It is a great honor for me, on behalf of代表 +n. , to deliver this speech about ... 2.Good morning/afternoon, everyone. It's a great honor to be here to talk about... 3.Today, I'd like to share with you my thoughts on... 4.Have you ever thought about...? 5.Let me start by telling you a story about... 6.There's no denying that... 7.In my opinion,... 8.What's more,... 9.Besides,... 10.Finally,... 11.Let's work together to... 12.I hope that... 13.Thank you for your listening.. 单元话题 真题展示 高考链接 演讲稿 2011•江西高考 演讲稿或倡议书是一种常见的应用文文体，作者就某一个具体问题发表自己的见解和主张，阐明事理或抒发情感。在组织演讲稿时，要注意演讲面向的对象，注意措辞及修辞性语言的合理使用，以获得应有的表达效果。 假设你是新华中学的李华，将参加主题为“Let's Ride Bicycles”的英语演讲比赛。请你就此主题写一篇演讲稿，内容包括： 1．汽车带来的空气污染和交通拥堵等问题； 2．骑自行车的益处，如节能环保、有利健康等。 2016•天津高考 假设你是晨光中学的学生会主席李津。一批来自英国的高中生与你校学生开展了为期两周的交流活动。现在，他们即将回国，你将在欢送会上致辞。请根据以下提示写一篇发言稿。 (1)回顾双方的交流活动(如学习、生活、体育、文艺等方面)； (2)谈谈收获或感想； (3)表达祝愿与期望。 本单元写作以音乐为话题写演讲稿，演讲稿的主题可以从几个方面来写， 1.音乐对生活的影响：音乐在缓解压力、丰富生活等方面的影响 2.音乐的意义：音乐在情感表达、文化传承等方面的作用 3.学习音乐的方法：选择乐器、坚持练习等方面的建议 段落 内容 句子设计 第一段 点明演讲话题 ①Good morning, everybody! My name is Li Hua. It is my honour to deliver my speech about how music has had an impact on my life. 大家早上好！ 我是李华。很荣幸能发表关于音乐是如何影响了我的人生的演讲。 ②Today, I'd like to talk about how to express love to our parents. 今天，我想谈谈如何向我们的父母表达爱。 ③I want to share with you how the Internet has had an impact/influence on our life. 我想和你们分享互联网是如何影响我们的生活的。 第二段 阐述观点或分享内容 ①Someone said, “We are reading the first verse of the first chapter of a book whose pages are infinite ...” 有人说过：“我们正在读一本书的第一章第一行，这本书的页数是无限的……” ②As we know, music is through our life. 正如我们所知，音乐贯穿我们的生活。 ③Last year, our beloved pet dog died, which made our whole family very sad. It was music that helped us out. 去年，我们心爱的宠物狗去世了，这让我们的整个家庭非常难过。正是音乐帮我们走出了困境。 ④Whenever you listen to music, it's a pleasure. Music makes everything around you look so beautiful. 无论什么时候听音乐都是一种享受。音乐让周围的一切看起来都那么美好。 第三段 总结其对自己的影响 ①Music is a kind of medicine, which can cure our depression or unhappiness. 音乐是一种药，它可以治愈我们的沮丧或不快。 ②Without music, our life will be colourless and tasteless. 没有音乐，我们的生活将会失去色彩，索然无味。 ③Music is playing an important role in our life, which is an essential part of our life. 音乐在我们的生活中扮演着重要的角色，它是我们生活中不可或缺的一部分。 ④Music is to us what sunshine is to the earth, which brings colour to our life. 音乐之于我们就像阳光之于地球，给我们的生活带来色彩。 ⑤Whether we are sad or depressed, there is music to keep us company. 无论我们悲伤或沮丧，都会有音乐陪伴着我们。 ⑥It is music that gives us encouragement in the face of difficulty. 是音乐给了我们面对困难的勇气。 第四段 总结演讲内容，提出希望 ①Altogether, we can come to/draw a conclusion that we can't be separated from music. 总之，我们可以得出一个结论：我们离不开音乐。 ②Based on the above statements, we can conclude that music makes life better. 基于以上陈述，我们可以得出结论：音乐让生活更美好。 ③Let's continue taking music as our companion and enjoying the strength and enjoyment brought by music. 让我们继续以音乐为伴，享受音乐带来的力量和快乐。 ④Music is such a good thing that let's make friends with it. 音乐如此美好，让我们和它交朋友吧。 ⑤I hope all of you will begin to treasure music and make it a part of your life. 我希望你们所有人都能开始重视音乐，让它成为你们生活的一部分。 【小试牛刀】 参考范文1: 音乐的影响 Hello, everyone. It's an honour to be here and to share with you the story of how music has had an impact on my life. Are you nervous with the exam approaching? I could not fall asleep as usual. As a result, I felt discouraged. Then, my teacher suggested me listening to music. To my surprise, my anxiety died out. Music gives me strength and brings me relief.In addition, listening to music gives me a sense of satisfaction. Since music can change our life, why not have a try? Thank you！ 参考范文2: 音乐的意义 Good morning, everyone. Today, I'm here to talk about the significance of music. Music is not just a form of entertainment; it's a powerful force in our lives. First, music can convey emotions that words sometimes fail to express. When we're sad, a soft melody can comfort us; when we're happy, an upbeat song can amplify our joy. What's more, music connects people from different backgrounds. A piece of music can be understood and appreciated by people all over the world, regardless of language barriers. Let's cherish music and let it enrich our souls. Thank you for listening. 参考范文3: 学习音乐的心得 Good afternoon, classmates. I'd like to share my experience of learning music with you today. Learning a musical instrument is not easy, but it's definitely worthwhile. First, choose an instrument that you're interested in. If you love the sound of the piano, go for it; if you're attracted by the guitar, give it a try. Interest is the best teacher. Then, practice consistently. Even 30 minutes a day is better than practicing for hours once a week. Don't be afraid of making mistakes; they're part of the learning process. I hope more of you can find happiness in learning music. Thank you! 【必备句式】 第一部分：简短介绍,引出主题 1.It is a great honor for me to make a speech on... 2.I'm very happy to speak here and I'd like to talk about... 3.The topic of my speech today is the global water shortage and ways of handling it. 4.I am very glad to have the chance to run for president of the Students’ Union. 5.I am glad to give you a warm welcome on behalf of our school. 6.Thank you from the bottom of my heart for giving me this chance to deliver my speech. 7.I am going to talk about something that is vitally important to all of us. The topic of my speech today is ... 第二部分：阐述观点或分享内容 1.I will divide this topic into five main aspects. 2.We all ought to be aware of the following points. 3.During my talk, I’ll be looking at three areas. 4.During my talk, I’ll be looking at three areas. Firstly,... Secondly,... Thirdly,... 5.As we all know.../As is known to us all.../It is well¬known to us all that... 众所周知，…… 6.As far as...is concerned... 就……而言…… 7.From this point of view，...由此来看，…… 8.On account of this，we can... 由于这一点，我们可以…… 9.No one can deny the fact that.../There is no denying the fact that... 不可否认的事实是…… 10.As the proverb says，... 正如谚语所说，…… 11.What calls for special attention is that... 需要特别注意的是…… 12.Nothing is more important than the fact that... 最重要的是…… 13.The thing we should do is to.../What we should do is.../It is our duty to... 我们应当做的是…… 第三部分：概括总结或发出号召 1. Actions speak louder than words. Let's take action immediately.事实胜于雄辩。让我们立即采取行动。 2. I hope all of you will begin to treasure music and make it a part of your life.我希望你们所有人都能开始重视音乐，让它成为你们生活的一部分。 3. All things considered/In short/In a word... 总而言之…… 4. If everyone...，I believe... 如果每个人……，我相信…… 5. Last but not least，it's everyone's responsibility to... 最后但同样重要的是，……是每个人的责任。 6. If you...，you will... 如果你……，你将会…… 7. Thank you for your attention. I hope you will find what I said helpful/ useful/ practical. 感谢倾听。希望我所说的对您有帮助/有用/实用。 6. I sincerely wish you a pleasant time with us.我真诚希望您和我们共度美好时光。 7.To conclude/ In conclusion/ Now, to sum up,… 8.Thank you from the bottom of my heart for giving me this chance to speak to you today. 9.At last, on behalf of all the students in our school, I wish you a safe and happy journey and hope that we will have more programs like this in the future.Thank you! 【必背模板】 模板① Boys and girls/Ladies and gentlemen, It's a great honor for me to stand here and give my speech. My name is ________(自我介绍). The topic of my speech is_________(演讲主题) . To begin with, many people suggest that .. Secondly,….Thirdly … (引出列举话题或现象).What I want to stress is that_______ (重申主 题). For one thing,... For another, ... Besides, ... (给出原因或列举重要性).In aword, ___________(总结). Thank you for your listening./Thank you. 模板② Boys and girls/Ladies and gentlemen/ Honorable judges, It’s a great honor/privilege for me to stand here and give/deliver my speech. My name is _____________.The topic of my speech is ___________.） As we all know/ As is known to us all，_________. To begin with, many people suggest that _______. What I want to stress is that_______ For one thing,_________For another,________In addition/ moreover/furthermore/Besides/ __________. （原因/建议/措施） In a word, ___________.Thank you from the bottom of my heart for giving me this opportunity to express myself today. Thank you for your listening.（ 感谢 ） 【升级策略】 1. 建议信写作注意事项 演讲稿包括发言稿、致辞等。演讲稿在语言使用上一定要准确简明、通俗易懂、层次清楚、条理分明。 具体写作结构为： ；中间段陈述演讲的具体内容；尾段总结演讲。 2. 写作方法 ①首段简要介绍：欢迎听众 介绍主题/自我介绍 说明演讲结构 由于演讲有时间限制，所以必须开门见山，提出论题。提出论题的方法多种多样，但最生动、最能引起注意的举例法。 ② 主体： 分要点陈述主题 对提出的论题，不可主观地妄下结论，而要进行客观的论证。这是演讲中最需要下功夫的部分。关键是把道理讲清楚。常见的论证方法有举例法、因果法、对比法等。 ③ 尾段：概括总结（总结演讲 致谢听众） 结论要简明扼要，以给听众留下深刻印象。 3. 写作流程图 简短介绍,引出主题 阐述观点或分享内容 概括总结或发出号召 假设你是新华中学的李华，将参加主题为“Music changes our life”的英语演讲比赛。请你就此主题写一篇演讲稿，内容包括： 1．压力大，不开心等问题； 2．音乐的益处。 3. 音乐影响你或他人的例子 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 审题 1．文体：应用文（演讲稿）。 2.时态：以一般现在时为主，讲述过去事例用一般过去时。 3.人称：通以第一人称 “我（李华）” 为主，适当使用第二人称与听众互动。 谋篇 第一段：问候听众，自我介绍，点明演讲主题。​ 第二段：简述学生面临的压力及不开心的状况。​ 第三段：阐述音乐在缓解压力、改善情绪等方面的益处。​ 第四段：总结呼吁，强调音乐对生活的积极改变，致谢。 遣词造句 【核心词汇】​ 1.privilege 荣幸 2.deliver 发表 3.stressed 有压力的 4.piles of 大量的 5.frustrated 沮丧的 6.encouragement 鼓励 7.inspiring 鼓舞人心的 8.cheerful 愉快的 9.mental 精神的 10.relief 缓解 【连词成句】 1.It’s a great privilege for me to stand here and deliver my speech.​ 2.My name is Li Hua.​ 3.The topic of my speech is “Music changes our life”.​ 4.Everyone has hard times and feels stressed.​ 5.For us students, piles of homework and tough exams often leave us frustrated and unhappy.​ 6.Many people believe that music can help us feel better.​ 7.Music really changes our life.​ 8.Music can give us encouragement.​ 9.My friend Lily once felt lonely and sad.​ 10.Inspiring songs filled her with courage and made her cheerful again.​ 11.Music can help improve both physical and mental conditions.​ 12.When I’m stressed before exams, soft music calms me down.​ 13.Walter Haddon said, “music is the medicine of a troubled mind.”​ 14.Music gives us strength and brings people relief.​ 15.Music plays an important role in our life.​ 16.I hope all of you will begin to treasure music and make it a part of your life. 【句式升级】 1.用 “as we all know” 升级 4 句：As we all know, everyone has hard times and feels stressed. 2.用 “what I want to stress is that” 强调 7 句：What I want to stress is that music really changes our life. 3.用 “for one thing...for another” 连接 8 句和 11 句：For one thing, music can give us encouragement. For another, it can help improve both physical and mental conditions. 4.用现在分词作结果状语升级 12 句：When I’m stressed before exams, soft music calms me down, letting me focus better.组句成篇 用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇80词左右的英语短文。 Ladies and gentlemen/Boys and girls,​ It’s a great privilege for me to stand here and deliver my speech. My name is Li Hua. The topic of my speech is “Music changes our life”.​ As we all know, everyone has hard times and feels stressed. For us students, piles of homework and tough exams often leave us frustrated and unhappy.​ To begin with, many people believe that music can help us feel better. What I want to stress is that music really changes our life. For one thing, music can give us encouragement. My friend Lily once felt lonely and sad, but inspiring songs filled her with courage and made her cheerful again. For another, it can help improve both physical and mental conditions. When I’m stressed before exams, soft music calms me down, letting me focus better. In addition, Walter Haddon said, “music is the medicine of a troubled mind.” It gives us strength and brings people relief.​ In a word, music plays an important role in our life. I hope all of you will begin to treasure music and make it a part of your life.​ That’s all! Thank you for your listening.​ 【第一部分 基础题】 一、完成短语 1.唱歌__________ 2.听音乐会______________ 3.跳舞__________ 4.听轻音乐______________ 5.参加虚拟合唱团 _____________ 6.给人鼓励________________________ 7.疗愈身心_______________________________________ 8.使人感觉平静___________________________________ 9.帮人忘记烦恼___________________________________ 10.给人力量，减轻压力 ______________________________ ​二、判断修辞 1.Music is indeed a kind of good medicine. 2.Music seemed like our best friend and it offered us encouragement, which helped us go through the hardest time. 3.Walter Haddon said,“Music is the medicine of a troubled mind.” 4.It helped me relieve pain.It helped me feel relaxed . It also helped me have confidence in the future 【参考答案】 1.singing 2.going to a concert 3.dancing 4.listening to soft music 5.taking part in virtual choir... 6.give encouragement 7.help heal both physical and mental conditions 8.make people feel good, relaxed, calm, etc. 9.help people forget problems 10.Music gave me strength and brought me relief. 二：Metaphor、Personification、Quote、Repetition: 三、句子仿写改写​​ ​​基础层​​：结构调整 原句：Music is important. It affects our emotions. → 合并为复合句：______ → 用强调句改写：______ 原句：We should learn to enjoy music. → 转为号召句：______ ​​【参考答案】 Music, which affects our emotions, is important. It is music that affects our emotions and is important. Let's learn to enjoy music! ​​提分层​​：高阶句型 原句：Music can make us happy and relaxed. → 用倒装句：______ 原句：Learning music helps us develop patience. → 强调重要性：______ 【参考答案】 Not only can music make us happy, but it also enriches our life. There is no denying that learning music plays a vital role in developing our patience.​​ 四、翻译句子​​ 要求：用演讲稿常用句式翻译，注意语气恰当。 音乐在我们的生活中扮演着重要的角色。 让我们一起感受音乐的魅力吧。 毫无疑问，学习音乐能提高我们的创造力。 【参考答案】 Music plays an important role in our life. Let's experience the charm of music together. There's no denying that learning music can improve our creativity. 【第二部分 提升题】 假定你是李华，针对学生近视人数不断攀升的状况，你校决定举办以“Let's Protect Our Eyes”为主题的英语演讲比赛，你有意报名参加。请根据下面的提示，写一篇80词左右的演讲稿，并发表自己的看法。内容包括： 1．学生近视的现状； 2．造成近视的原因； 3．呼吁大家保护眼睛。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 【佳作欣赏】 Let's Protect Our Eyes Good morning everybody! I am Li Hua. The number of students in our school who are short­sighted has been on the increase in the last few years. Here I am appealing to everyone to protect our eyes. There are some reasons why more and more students are short­sighted. First of all, we spend most of our time on our lessons. So our eyes are too tired every day. Besides, we seldom stop to do something to relax our eyes. It is time for us to take effective measures to protect our eyes. It is a good idea to look up from our books every forty minutes to have a rest. And it is wise not to read in the dim light. More importantly, we should do eye exercises regularly. Let's take action now! Thank you! 假定你是李华，最近你在英语写作方面遇到些困难。请你就此写封邮件给你的美国朋友Andy，向他寻求帮助。主要内容如下： 1．描述你遇到的困难； 2．表达想改变的愿望； 3．征求他的建议。 注意： 1．词数80左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Andy， How are you getting on？___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ Yours， Li Hua Dear Andy， How are you getting on? Recently, I have been making little progress in English writing. I'm writing to ask you for some suggestions about how to improve it. The first problem I find is that it's difficult to use the right grammar in my composition. Being unable to use proper words and phrases to express my views is the other problem. The problems bother me so much that I can't wait to take action to make changes. As an American, you must be good at writing in English, so I hope you can give me some advice. I will appreciate it if you can help me get rid of the problems. Best wishes! Yours， Li Hua 假定你是校英语话剧俱乐部(School English Drama Club)的负责人李华，现负责英语话剧《百万英镑》(The Million Pound Bank Note)面向全校的演员选拔工作。请你根据以下提示信息拟一则英文通知： 1．选拔时间和地点：2025年12月20日，学校演讲厅； 2．选拔要求：热爱戏剧表演，具有较好的英语口语表达能力等； 3．通知时间：2025年12月13日。 注意：1.词数80左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：演讲厅lecture hall要求requirement ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 【佳作欣赏】 Notice School English Drama Club is selecting actors and actresses for the drama The Million Pound Bank Note. ①The selection will take place at the school lecture hall on December 20th, 2025. Any student who meets the following requirements will be offered a chance to become an actor or actress. Firstly, he or she should love dramatic performances. Secondly, he or she ought to have good English speaking skills. ②Besides, he or she should have read the story and be familiar with the whole story. School English Drama Club December 13th, 2025 【链接高考—经典诵读】 （2011•江西高考）假设你是新华中学的李华，将参加主题为“Let's Ride Bicycles”的英语演讲比赛。请你就此主题写一篇演讲稿，内容包括： 1．汽车带来的空气污染和交通拥堵等问题； 2．骑自行车的益处，如节能环保、有利健康等。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【佳作欣赏1】 Good morning, everyone! Nowadays, the surge in car usage has triggered severe issues. Toxic emissions from vehicles contaminate the atmosphere, exacerbating air pollution and posing threats to public health. Meanwhile, traffic congestion has become a daily ordeal, squandering countless hours and fuel. In contrast, cycling emerges as an optimal alternative. It is eco-friendly, producing zero carbon footprint. Moreover, regular cycling enhances cardiovascular health and boosts stamina. Let’s embrace this green lifestyle and pedal towards a cleaner, healthier future. Thank you! 【佳作欣赏2】 Dear friends, The proliferation of automobiles has brought about detrimental consequences. Their fumes degrade air quality, contributing to smog and respiratory diseases. Additionally, gridlocked streets disrupt daily routines, causing frustration and inefficiency. Riding bicycles, however, offers multiple merits. It is a sustainable mode of transport, conserving energy and curbing pollution. Physically, it strengthens muscles and improves metabolism. Let’s swap car keys for bike helmets and make our cities more livable. Thank you for listening! 【佳作欣赏3】 Ladies and gentlemen, Cars, while convenient, have spawned pressing problems. Their exhaust emissions pollute the air, impairing ecological balance. Traffic jams, a by-product of excessive car use, waste time and hinder urban mobility. Cycling, by contrast, is a wise choice. It is environmentally benign, reducing our carbon footprint. Furthermore, it serves as a wholesome exercise, enhancing physical fitness and mental well-being. Let’s advocate cycling to build a greener, more vibrant society. Thank you! （2016•天津高考）假设你是晨光中学的学生会主席李津。一批来自英国的高中生与你校学生开展了为期两周的交流活动。现在，他们即将回国，你将在欢送会上致辞。请根据以下提示写一篇发言稿。 (1)回顾双方的交流活动(如学习、生活、体育、文艺等方面)； (2)谈谈收获或感想； (3)表达祝愿与期望。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【佳作欣赏1】 Dear British friends, The past two weeks have been a whirlwind of memorable exchanges. Academically, our joint seminars sparked thought-provoking debates; in homestays, you mastered chopstick skills while we learned to bake scones. On the sports field, friendly soccer matches fostered camaraderie, and the gala saw your pop tunes blend beautifully with our traditional dances. These interactions have transcended borders, letting us grasp cultural subtleties and forge sincere bonds. As you depart, may our friendship thrive. Farewell, and we eagerly anticipate your return! 【佳作欣赏2】 Dear guests, Time flies—two weeks of shared experiences have left indelible marks. We collaborated on biology projects, exchanging ideas that broadened our horizons; during weekend trips, we explored ancient temples while you shared stories of British castles. Volleyball games taught us teamwork, and cooking workshops merged your shepherd’s pie with our dumplings. We’ve learned that diversity enriches life, and kindness bridges differences. Wish you a safe journey home. May our ties grow stronger, and hope to meet again soon! 【佳作欣赏3】 Dear friends, The fortnight’s exchanges were nothing short of wonderful. In classes, your unique perspectives illuminated our discussions; at the talent show, your guitar solos harmonized perfectly with our erhu melodies. We laughed over failed attempts at each other’s cuisines and cheered loudly during basketball matches. These moments deepened our understanding: cultures vary, but joy and curiosity unite us. As you leave, carry our warm wishes. Farewell, and may our friendship endure until we meet again! 12 / 17 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$