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必修第二册 Unit 3 The Internet 建议信
Write a Letter for Advice
单元写作早知道
写作任务
本单元的写作任务是写一封建议信。建议信是应用文的常用体裁。建议信是写信者就互联网相关事宜向收信人提出自己的建议或忠告。建议信的接收对象可以是个人,也可以是组织或机构,针对互联网使用中出现的问题给出看法或建议。
建议信的正文一般可以分为三部分:
第一部分:说明目的;
第二部分:提出建议;
第三部分:表达祝愿。
常用表达
1. You mentioned in your last letter that you have trouble with...on the Internet.
2. From your letter, I know that you are confused about...online.
3. You have asked for my advice regarding how to...on the Internet.
4. I am writing to offer some suggestions on...related to the Internet.
5. I would like to suggest that you...when using the Internet.
6. Maybe it's a good idea to...to deal with your Internet problems.
7. Why not...to make better use of the Internet?
8. Have you considered...to avoid being addicted to the Internet?
9. I hope these suggestions will be helpful for you.
单元话题
真题展示
高考链接
建议信
2023年全国新高考I卷
建议信是高考应用文的热点话题。可以是对某个人的问题的建议,也可以对学校,政府及特定团体和组织的建议。
Use what you have learnt to write a letter of advice to one of the teenagers below.
假定你是李华,外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组,让大家课后练习口语,你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 说明问题;
2. 提出建议。
2025年1月浙江首考
你将参加英语课上的“一分钟演讲”活动。请你针对部分同学在校园内用手机拍摄短视频的现象写一篇演讲稿,内容包括:(1) 陈述看法;(2) 提出建议。
本单元写作与网络安全话题相关,以网络安全相关主题写作时,要先介绍目前存在的问题及其不良影响,然后阐述个人观点并给出建议。
对于网络的话题有多个方面,需要根据不同的方面提出相应的建议,例如:
Mike,
I'm addicted to online games and can't control the playing time, which makes my grades drop a lot. Set a fixed time for playing games every day and ask parents to supervise.
Wang Wei,
I often encounter network fraud when shopping online and don't know how to deal with it. Learn network security knowledge and identify fraudulent information.
Kim,
I don't know how to make good use of the Internet to help my study, and I always waste time on it.
段落
内容
句子设计
第一段
明确对方在互联网方面的问题和写信目的
第二段
提出建议
第三段
祝愿和问候
【必备句式】
第一部分:说明写信的目的
(1)I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble with Internet addiction. Such problems are quite common among teenagers. Maybe the following suggestions will be helpful.
很遗憾听说你有网瘾问题。这样的问题在青少年中很常见。或许下面的建议会有所帮助。
(2)I have received your letter saying you often encounter network security problems when using the Internet. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful to you.
我收到了你的来信,信中说你在使用互联网时经常遇到网络安全问题。或许下面的建议对你有帮助。
(3)You have asked me for my advice on how to make full use of the Internet for study, and I will try to make some suggestions here.
你问我关于如何充分利用互联网学习的建议,我在这里试着给出一些建议。
(4)I'm very glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on dealing with online fraud. Here are a few suggestions.
很高兴收到你的来信,信中向我咨询处理网络诈骗的建议。以下是我的一些建议。
(5)I'm very glad to have received your e-mail. Now I'm writing to give you some advice on how to use the Internet properly in daily life.
很高兴收到你的电子邮件。现在,我写信给你一些关于在日常生活中正确使用互联网的建议。
第二部分:
介绍详情、说明原因
常用句式:
(1) 这个学习网站每天更新学习资料,你可以根据自己的需求下载。
This learning website updates learning materials every day, from which you can download according to your own needs.
(2) 网络诈骗通常以低价诱惑为手段,你需要提高警惕。
Online fraud usually uses low-price temptation as a means, so you need to be vigilant.
(3) 每天花太多时间上网会影响你的身体健康和学习。
Spending too much time online every day will affect your physical health and study.
(4) 记得在使用公共 WiFi 时,不要登录个人账户和输入密码。
Remember not to log in to personal accounts or enter passwords when using public WiFi.
(5) 顺便说一下,你可以安装一些网络安全软件,它能帮助你拦截恶意网站。
By the way, you can install some network security software, which can help you block malicious websites.
(6) 既然你想利用互联网学习,这些优质的学习平台会是不错的选择。
Since you want to use the Internet for study, these high-quality learning platforms will be good choices.
(7) 我保证如果你合理使用互联网,它会对你的学习有很大帮助。
I'm sure that if you use the Internet properly, it will be of great help to your study.
第三部分:提出建议
常用句式:
我建议……
I'd like to suggest that…
May I suggest that…?
In my opinion…
I would like to make a recommendation that…
I am writing to advise…
If I were you, I would…
第四部分:希望采纳建议,并表示谢意,盼望回复
(1)I hope these suggestions will be of use to you. Remember: the Internet is a tool, and it depends on how you use it.
我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住:互联网是工具,关键在于你如何使用它。
(2)I hope these suggestions will be helpful to you. Remember: being rational when using the Internet is the key to avoiding problems.
我希望这些建议会对你有帮助。记住:使用互联网时保持理性是避免问题的关键。
(3)Best wishes!
(给你)最美好的祝愿!
(4)I hope that my suggestions are helpful for you anyway. I would be more than happy to see you make progress in using the Internet properly.
无论如何,我希望这些建议对你有所帮助。看到你在合理使用互联网方面取得进步,我会非常高兴。
(5)I believe that you will take my suggestions into serious account. Whatever you decide to do, good luck with your study and life!
我相信你会认真考虑我的建议。无论你决定做什么,祝你学习生活顺利!
(6)I sincerely hope my advice will be some help for you. If there is more I can do to help, please let me know.
我真诚地希望我的建议对你有一些帮助。如果有更多我能帮忙的,请告诉我。
【必背模板】
模板①
Dear________,
You have asked me for my advice with regard to________________on the Internet, and I will try to make some conducive suggestions here.
In my opinion, you would be wise to take the following actions: ________________(建议的内容).
I hope you will find these proposals useful, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details.
Good luck with your________________(祝愿).
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
模板②
Dear_______,
I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to _________________(引出对方在互联网方面需要建议的主题).
Here are a few suggestions (引出作者的建议). First, It is important to ______________. Then, it also helps to ___________. Besides, it should be a good idea to __________. You can also ___________.
(可以根据要求用不同的句式提出建议,如下)
As to __________, I suggest _____________(需要具体到某一方面). In addition, _________(其他的建议). I'm sure ______________(预测可能的结果,给对方以行为的信心和决心).
I hope ____________(表达愿望)。
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
【升级策略】
1. 建议信写作注意事项
建议信的目的是提出关于互联网使用的建议或忠告,并非抱怨信。观点要贴合互联网实际情况,合理可行,同时注意礼貌表达。
2. 写作方法
① 首段:
a. 简介自己,不要罗嗦;
b. 说明写信目的,语气要友好委婉。。
② 主体:
A.针对互联网相关问题提出具体建议;
b. 可先认可互联网的积极作用,再指出问题并提出改进建议,避免让信件变成批判互联网的文章;
c. 结合互联网特点,建议要具有可操作性,同时关注对方感受。
③ 尾段:总结建议,礼貌收尾,让对方更容易接受。
3. 写作流程图
介绍互联网相关问题的详情、说明原因
提出建议
提出希望采纳建议,并表示谢意,盼望回复
假定你是李华,你的英国笔友 Jack 来信说,他最近在网上结交了一些朋友,但不确定这些朋友是否可靠,为此他感到很困扰。请你给他回一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1.表达关切;
2.给出建议;
3.你的祝愿。
注意:1. 词数 80 字左右;
开头已给出,不计入总词数;
可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Jack,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua.
审题
1.文体:应用文。
2.时态:一般现在时和一般将来时为主。
3.人称:第一人称(表达你的建议),第二人称(陈述确认对方的问题)。
谋篇
第一段:明确对方在网上交友的问题和写信目的。
第二段:提出关于网上交友的建议。
第三段:祝愿和问候。
遣词造句
【核心词汇】
1.confused 困惑的
2.make friends online 网上交友
3.reliable 可靠的
4.express 表达
5.concern 关切
6.share my advice 分享我的建议
7.cautious 谨慎的
8.personal information 个人信息
9.meet offline 线下见面
10.beneficial 有益的
【连词成句】
1.I am writing to express my concern and share my advice on making friends online.
2.In my opinion, you should be cautious when chatting with online friends.
3.You shouldn't tell them your personal information easily.
4.It's better not to meet them offline alone.
5.You can ask your parents or friends for advice if you are not sure.
6.This will help you avoid risks.
【句式升级】
1.将 2、3 句合成一个句子(含被动语态):
In my opinion, caution should be exercised when chatting with online friends, and your personal information shouldn't be told to them easily.
(原句:In my opinion, you should be cautious when chatting with online friends and shouldn't tell them your personal information easily.)
2.将 4、5、6 句合成一个句子(含被动语态):
Offline meetings with them alone had better be avoided, and advice from your parents or friends can be asked for when you are not sure, which will help risks be avoided.
(原句:It's better not to meet them offline alone, and you can ask your parents or friends for advice if you are not sure, which will help you avoid risks.)
组句成篇
用适当的过渡词语,把以上词汇和句式,再加上联想内容,组成一篇80词左右的英语短文。
【第一部分 基础题】
一、词性转换训练
(一)将下列动词转换为名词或形容词,用于建议句式:
use → (n.) ______ → (adj.) ______
protect → (n.) ______ → (adj.) ______
secure → (n.) ______ → (adv.) ______
(二)用括号内单词的正确形式填空:
It is ______ (suggest) that we ______ (spend) less time on the Internet.
______ (make) good use of the Internet is ______ (benefit) to our study.
二、句子仿写改写
基础层:结构调整
1.原句:You should install security software. It can protect your computer.
→ 合并为复合句(含被动语态):______
→ 用非谓语动词改写(含被动语态):______
2.原句:I think you can practice more.
→ 转为委婉建议:______
提分层:高阶句型
1.原句:You must be careful when sharing information online.
→ 简单句(用 it 作形式主语):______
→ 倒装句(含被动语态):______
2.原句:Using the Internet properly is important.
→ 复合句(用 so...that):______
三、翻译句子
要求:用建议信常用句式翻译,注意语气礼貌。
1.我建议你每天控制上网时间。
2.为什么不学习一些网络安全知识呢?
3.重要的是在网上保护好自己的隐私。
【第二部分 提升题】
假如你是李华,最近收到了你的澳大利亚朋友 Lisa 的来信。她在信中说,自己很难抵制网络购物的诱惑,经常买一些不需要的东西,造成了浪费。请根据以下内容给她回信:
表示理解和慰问;
提出以下建议:
(1) 购物前列清单,只买清单上的东西;
(2) 关闭购物软件的推送通知;
(3) 把更多时间放在学习和 hobbies 上。
你的美国好友 John 即将进入大学,他想通过互联网获取学习资源,但不知道如何辨别资源的好坏。请你给他写一封邮件,对他提出建议。
注意:
字数 80 字左右;
可以增加细节,使行文流畅。
假如你是李华,你的朋友刘强在使用互联网时,经常收到垃圾邮件和骚扰信息,让他很烦恼,请你帮忙给她建议。请你根据你的理解对他提出建议。
注意:
字数 80 字左右。
可以增加细节,使行文流畅。
【链接高考—经典诵读】
(2023高考全国新高考I卷)假定你是李华,外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组,让大家课后练习口语,你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件,内容包括;
1. 说明问题;
2. 提出建议。
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
(2025年1月浙江首考)你将参加英语课上的“一分钟演讲”活动。请你针对部分同学在校园内用手机拍摄短视频的现象写一篇演讲稿,内容包括:
(1) 陈述看法;
(2) 提出建议。
注意:
(1) 写作词数应为80左右;
(2) 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
My Views on Filming Short Videos on Campus
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
12 / 17
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必修第二册 Unit 3 The Internet 建议信
Write a Letter for Advice
单元写作早知道
写作任务
本单元的写作任务是写一封建议信。建议信是应用文的常用体裁。建议信是写信者就互联网相关事宜向收信人提出自己的建议或忠告。建议信的接收对象可以是个人,也可以是组织或机构,针对互联网使用中出现的问题给出看法或建议。
建议信的正文一般可以分为三部分:
第一部分:说明目的;
第二部分:提出建议;
第三部分:表达祝愿。
常用表达
1. You mentioned in your last letter that you have trouble with...on the Internet.
2. From your letter, I know that you are confused about...online.
3. You have asked for my advice regarding how to...on the Internet.
4. I am writing to offer some suggestions on...related to the Internet.
5. I would like to suggest that you...when using the Internet.
6. Maybe it's a good idea to...to deal with your Internet problems.
7. Why not...to make better use of the Internet?
8. Have you considered...to avoid being addicted to the Internet?
9. I hope these suggestions will be helpful for you.
单元话题
真题展示
高考链接
建议信
2023年全国新高考I卷
建议信是高考应用文的热点话题。可以是对某个人的问题的建议,也可以对学校,政府及特定团体和组织的建议。
Use what you have learnt to write a letter of advice to one of the teenagers below.
假定你是李华,外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组,让大家课后练习口语,你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 说明问题;
2. 提出建议。
2025年1月浙江首考
你将参加英语课上的“一分钟演讲”活动。请你针对部分同学在校园内用手机拍摄短视频的现象写一篇演讲稿,内容包括:(1) 陈述看法;(2) 提出建议。
本单元写作与网络安全话题相关,以网络安全相关主题写作时,要先介绍目前存在的问题及其不良影响,然后阐述个人观点并给出建议。
对于网络的话题有多个方面,需要根据不同的方面提出相应的建议,例如:
Mike,
I'm addicted to online games and can't control the playing time, which makes my grades drop a lot. Set a fixed time for playing games every day and ask parents to supervise.
Wang Wei,
I often encounter network fraud when shopping online and don't know how to deal with it. Learn network security knowledge and identify fraudulent information.
Kim,
I don't know how to make good use of the Internet to help my study, and I always waste time on it.
段落
内容
句子设计
第一段
明确对方在互联网方面的问题和写信目的
You wrote in your letter that you have trouble with...on the Internet.
I understand your situation.
I'm writing to give you some suggestions.
第二段
提出建议
I think you can try...when using the Internet.
This will help you...
You can also...because...
It's a good idea to...
第三段
祝愿和问候
I hope my suggestions of help to you.
【小试牛刀】
参考范文1:
Dear Mike,
From your letter, I know you like online games too much and can't stop playing. That's why your grades are getting worse. I'm sorry to hear that, but I think you can change this.
You can set a fixed time for playing games every day. Ask your parents to check on you. This way, you'll get into a good habit and won't be so crazy about games. Also, try to do more things with friends, like playing ball games. When you're busy with these, you won't think about games as much. And you'll make your friendships stronger.
I hope you'll try these ideas. Things will get better, I'm sure.
Best wishes,
Yours,
Li Hua
参考范文2:
Dear Wang Wei,
You said in your letter that you often meet bad people when shopping online, and you don't know what to do. I get how you feel. Let me give you some ideas.
It's not strange to have this problem when shopping online. First, you can learn some basic online safety tips. This will help you tell if something is a trick. Then, shop on big, famous websites. They are safer. Also, don't tell others your personal info easily. This can keep you away from trouble.
I hope these ideas can help you.
Best wishes,
Yours,
Li Hua
参考范文3:
15 October, 2024
Dear Kim,
I'm sorry to hear you don't know how to use the Internet to help with your studies. Instead, you just waste time on it. Here are some suggestions.
You can use study websites or apps. They have lots of useful things to help you learn better and faster. It's also a good idea to make a study plan online and follow it strictly. This way, you can use your time well and won't waste it.
I hope my advice works for you.
Best wishes,
Yours,
Li Hua
【必备句式】
第一部分:说明写信的目的
(1)I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble with Internet addiction. Such problems are quite common among teenagers. Maybe the following suggestions will be helpful.
很遗憾听说你有网瘾问题。这样的问题在青少年中很常见。或许下面的建议会有所帮助。
(2)I have received your letter saying you often encounter network security problems when using the Internet. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful to you.
我收到了你的来信,信中说你在使用互联网时经常遇到网络安全问题。或许下面的建议对你有帮助。
(3)You have asked me for my advice on how to make full use of the Internet for study, and I will try to make some suggestions here.
你问我关于如何充分利用互联网学习的建议,我在这里试着给出一些建议。
(4)I'm very glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on dealing with online fraud. Here are a few suggestions.
很高兴收到你的来信,信中向我咨询处理网络诈骗的建议。以下是我的一些建议。
(5)I'm very glad to have received your e-mail. Now I'm writing to give you some advice on how to use the Internet properly in daily life.
很高兴收到你的电子邮件。现在,我写信给你一些关于在日常生活中正确使用互联网的建议。
第二部分:
介绍详情、说明原因
常用句式:
(1) 这个学习网站每天更新学习资料,你可以根据自己的需求下载。
This learning website updates learning materials every day, from which you can download according to your own needs.
(2) 网络诈骗通常以低价诱惑为手段,你需要提高警惕。
Online fraud usually uses low-price temptation as a means, so you need to be vigilant.
(3) 每天花太多时间上网会影响你的身体健康和学习。
Spending too much time online every day will affect your physical health and study.
(4) 记得在使用公共 WiFi 时,不要登录个人账户和输入密码。
Remember not to log in to personal accounts or enter passwords when using public WiFi.
(5) 顺便说一下,你可以安装一些网络安全软件,它能帮助你拦截恶意网站。
By the way, you can install some network security software, which can help you block malicious websites.
(6) 既然你想利用互联网学习,这些优质的学习平台会是不错的选择。
Since you want to use the Internet for study, these high-quality learning platforms will be good choices.
(7) 我保证如果你合理使用互联网,它会对你的学习有很大帮助。
I'm sure that if you use the Internet properly, it will be of great help to your study.
第三部分:提出建议
常用句式:
我建议……
I'd like to suggest that…
May I suggest that…?
In my opinion…
I would like to make a recommendation that…
I am writing to advise…
If I were you, I would…
第四部分:希望采纳建议,并表示谢意,盼望回复
(1)I hope these suggestions will be of use to you. Remember: the Internet is a tool, and it depends on how you use it.
我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住:互联网是工具,关键在于你如何使用它。
(2)I hope these suggestions will be helpful to you. Remember: being rational when using the Internet is the key to avoiding problems.
我希望这些建议会对你有帮助。记住:使用互联网时保持理性是避免问题的关键。
(3)Best wishes!
(给你)最美好的祝愿!
(4)I hope that my suggestions are helpful for you anyway. I would be more than happy to see you make progress in using the Internet properly.
无论如何,我希望这些建议对你有所帮助。看到你在合理使用互联网方面取得进步,我会非常高兴。
(5)I believe that you will take my suggestions into serious account. Whatever you decide to do, good luck with your study and life!
我相信你会认真考虑我的建议。无论你决定做什么,祝你学习生活顺利!
(6)I sincerely hope my advice will be some help for you. If there is more I can do to help, please let me know.
我真诚地希望我的建议对你有一些帮助。如果有更多我能帮忙的,请告诉我。
【必背模板】
模板①
Dear________,
You have asked me for my advice with regard to________________on the Internet, and I will try to make some conducive suggestions here.
In my opinion, you would be wise to take the following actions: ________________(建议的内容).
I hope you will find these proposals useful, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details.
Good luck with your________________(祝愿).
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
模板②
Dear_______,
I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to _________________(引出对方在互联网方面需要建议的主题).
Here are a few suggestions (引出作者的建议). First, It is important to ______________. Then, it also helps to ___________. Besides, it should be a good idea to __________. You can also ___________.
(可以根据要求用不同的句式提出建议,如下)
As to __________, I suggest _____________(需要具体到某一方面). In addition, _________(其他的建议). I'm sure ______________(预测可能的结果,给对方以行为的信心和决心).
I hope ____________(表达愿望)。
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
【升级策略】
1. 建议信写作注意事项
建议信的目的是提出关于互联网使用的建议或忠告,并非抱怨信。观点要贴合互联网实际情况,合理可行,同时注意礼貌表达。
2. 写作方法
① 首段:
a. 简介自己,不要罗嗦;
b. 说明写信目的,语气要友好委婉。。
② 主体:
A.针对互联网相关问题提出具体建议;
b. 可先认可互联网的积极作用,再指出问题并提出改进建议,避免让信件变成批判互联网的文章;
c. 结合互联网特点,建议要具有可操作性,同时关注对方感受。
③ 尾段:总结建议,礼貌收尾,让对方更容易接受。
3. 写作流程图
介绍互联网相关问题的详情、说明原因
提出建议
提出希望采纳建议,并表示谢意,盼望回复
假定你是李华,你的英国笔友 Jack 来信说,他最近在网上结交了一些朋友,但不确定这些朋友是否可靠,为此他感到很困扰。请你给他回一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1.表达关切;
2.给出建议;
3.你的祝愿。
注意:1. 词数 80 字左右;
开头已给出,不计入总词数;
可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Jack,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua.
审题
1.文体:应用文。
2.时态:一般现在时和一般将来时为主。
3.人称:第一人称(表达你的建议),第二人称(陈述确认对方的问题)。
谋篇
第一段:明确对方在网上交友的问题和写信目的。
第二段:提出关于网上交友的建议。
第三段:祝愿和问候。
遣词造句
【核心词汇】
1.confused 困惑的
2.make friends online 网上交友
3.reliable 可靠的
4.express 表达
5.concern 关切
6.share my advice 分享我的建议
7.cautious 谨慎的
8.personal information 个人信息
9.meet offline 线下见面
10.beneficial 有益的
【连词成句】
1.I am writing to express my concern and share my advice on making friends online.
2.In my opinion, you should be cautious when chatting with online friends.
3.You shouldn't tell them your personal information easily.
4.It's better not to meet them offline alone.
5.You can ask your parents or friends for advice if you are not sure.
6.This will help you avoid risks.
【句式升级】
1.将 2、3 句合成一个句子(含被动语态):
In my opinion, caution should be exercised when chatting with online friends, and your personal information shouldn't be told to them easily.
(原句:In my opinion, you should be cautious when chatting with online friends and shouldn't tell them your personal information easily.)
2.将 4、5、6 句合成一个句子(含被动语态):
Offline meetings with them alone had better be avoided, and advice from your parents or friends can be asked for when you are not sure, which will help risks be avoided.
(原句:It's better not to meet them offline alone, and you can ask your parents or friends for advice if you are not sure, which will help you avoid risks.)
组句成篇
用适当的过渡词语,把以上词汇和句式,再加上联想内容,组成一篇80词左右的英语短文。
Dear Jack,
I'm sorry to know that you're confused about whether your online friends are reliable. I am writing to express my concern and share my advice.
In my opinion, you should be cautious when chatting with online friends and shouldn't tell them your personal information easily. It's better not to meet them offline alone, and you can ask your parents or friends for advice if you are not sure, which will help you avoid risks.
I hope my advice is beneficial. Wish you well!
Yours,
Li Hua.
【第一部分 基础题】
一、词性转换训练
(一)将下列动词转换为名词或形容词,用于建议句式:
use → (n.) ______ → (adj.) ______
protect → (n.) ______ → (adj.) ______
secure → (n.) ______ → (adv.) ______
(二)用括号内单词的正确形式填空:
It is ______ (suggest) that we ______ (spend) less time on the Internet.
______ (make) good use of the Internet is ______ (benefit) to our study.
【参考答案】
(一)1. usage (n.), useful (adj.); 2. protection (n.), protective (adj.); 3. security (n.), securely (adv.)
(二)1. suggested, (should) spend; 2. Making, beneficial
二、句子仿写改写
基础层:结构调整
1.原句:You should install security software. It can protect your computer.
→ 合并为复合句(含被动语态):______
→ 用非谓语动词改写(含被动语态):______
2.原句:I think you can practice more.
→ 转为委婉建议:______
【参考答案】
1.Security software should be installed, which can protect your computer.
2.Installed security software can help your computer be protected.
3.I suggest that you practice more. / Why not practice more?
提分层:高阶句型
1.原句:You must be careful when sharing information online.
→ 简单句(用 it 作形式主语):______
→ 倒装句(含被动语态):______
2.原句:Using the Internet properly is important.
→ 复合句(用 so...that):______
【参考答案】
1.It's necessary to be careful when sharing information online.
Not only must care be taken when sharing information online, but also the recipient should be checked.
2.Using the Internet properly is so important that we should learn it.
三、翻译句子
要求:用建议信常用句式翻译,注意语气礼貌。
1.我建议你每天控制上网时间。
2.为什么不学习一些网络安全知识呢?
3.重要的是在网上保护好自己的隐私。
【参考答案】
1.I suggest that you control your online time every day.
2.Why not learn some network security knowledge?
3.It is important to protect your privacy online.
【第二部分 提升题】
假如你是李华,最近收到了你的澳大利亚朋友 Lisa 的来信。她在信中说,自己很难抵制网络购物的诱惑,经常买一些不需要的东西,造成了浪费。请根据以下内容给她回信:
表示理解和慰问;
提出以下建议:
(1) 购物前列清单,只买清单上的东西;
(2) 关闭购物软件的推送通知;
(3) 把更多时间放在学习和 hobbies 上。
【佳作欣赏】
Dear Lisa,
I'm really sorry to hear that you can't resist the temptation of online shopping and often buy unnecessary things, which causes waste. I can understand how you feel and I'd like to offer some advice.
In fact, there are ways to improve this situation. First, you can make a list before shopping and only buy what's on the list. This can help you avoid impulsive consumption. Then, it's a good idea to turn off the push notifications of shopping apps, so that you won't be easily attracted by promotions. Besides, you can spend more time on your study and hobbies, which can distract your attention from online shopping.
I believe you will get rid of this problem and use the Internet more rationally.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
你的美国好友 John 即将进入大学,他想通过互联网获取学习资源,但不知道如何辨别资源的好坏。请你给他写一封邮件,对他提出建议。
注意:
字数 80 字左右;
可以增加细节,使行文流畅。
【佳作欣赏】
Dear John,
Knowing that you want to get learning resources online but don't know how to tell good from bad, I'm happy to offer some advice.
You can first choose resources from famous universities or educational websites, as they are more reliable. Then, check the comments and ratings of the resources. Besides, ask your teachers or seniors for recommendations.
I hope these suggestions help. Good luck with your study!
Yours,
Li Hua
假如你是李华,你的朋友刘强在使用互联网时,经常收到垃圾邮件和骚扰信息,让他很烦恼,请你帮忙给她建议。请你根据你的理解对他提出建议。
注意:
字数 80 字左右。
可以增加细节,使行文流畅。
【佳作欣赏】
Dear Liu Qiang,
Knowing that you're annoyed by spam and harassment messages online, I'm writing to give you some advice.
You can set up filters in your email to block spam. For messaging apps, you can enable the do-not-disturb mode or block the senders. Also, avoid sharing your contact info on untrusted sites.
Hope these help. Let me know if you need more help.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【链接高考—经典诵读】
(2023高考全国新高考I卷)假定你是李华,外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组,让大家课后练习口语,你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件,内容包括;
1. 说明问题;
2. 提出建议。
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【佳作欣赏1】
Dear Ryan,
I'm Li Hua from Class 3. I have been told that you will randomly pair up students for the spoken English training after class, but I have different opinions about it. The reasons are as follows.
To begin with, randomly pairing up students may lead to unbalanced language abilities within the groups. This can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation, leaving little room for the other student to improve. Besides, students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone who they don't get along with or have difficulty communicating with.
My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners. This way, everyone can feel more comfortable practicing and improving their spoken English together.
Thank you for considering my suggestion.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【佳作欣赏2】
Dear Ryan,
I hope this email finds you well. I am writing to share a concern I have regarding the recent decision to randomly pair students for the post-class oral practice sessions.
While I appreciate the intention to encourage speaking practice, I believe random grouping might have certain issues. Firstly, some students might feel uncomfortable or anxious speaking with someone they aren't familiar with, affecting their confidence. Additionally, varying proficiency levels could lead to imbalanced interactions, hindering effective language practice.
To address this, I suggest considering grouping based on students' proficiency levels. This would ensure more balanced conversations and a supportive environment for everyone to engage actively. Moreover, alternating partner assignments periodically could expose students to diverse speaking styles and enhance their adaptability.
Thank you for considering my perspective. I believe such adjustments could lead to more productive language practice sessions.
Best regards,
Li Hua
【佳作欣赏3】
Hello Ryan,
I trust you're doing well. As for your recent decision to randomly pair students for the post-class oral practice sessions, I want to share my own thoughts. While I understand the goal of promoting speaking skills, I see a potential issue with the random grouping.
Random pairings might inadvertently lead to uneven skill distribution within each group. Some students might struggle to engage in meaningful conversations, while others might not be sufficiently challenged. This could hinder the overall effectiveness of the practice sessions.
Considering this, I suggest a mixed proficiency grouping approach. Pairing students of different language levels can foster a mutually beneficial learning environment, where stronger speakers can mentor others, and learners can support each other's growth.
I appreciate your efforts to enhance our language learning experience and hope you'll find this suggestion beneficial.
Best regards,
Li Hua
(2025年1月浙江首考)你将参加英语课上的“一分钟演讲”活动。请你针对部分同学在校园内用手机拍摄短视频的现象写一篇演讲稿,内容包括:
(1) 陈述看法;
(2) 提出建议。
注意:
(1) 写作词数应为80左右;
(2) 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
My Views on Filming Short Videos on Campus
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【佳作欣赏1】
My Views on Filming Short Videos on Campus
Dear classmates,
Nowadays, more of us film short videos on campus. It's really nice to capture the blooming cherry blossoms in spring or lively sports meets, sharing these joys with others. But problems arise when some film during classes or in quiet libraries, disturbing teachers and peers.
To balance fun and order, I suggest picking times like weekends or after-school hours. Stay away from classrooms during lessons and always ask before including others in your shots. Let's make these videos sweet memories, not a source of annoyance.
Thank you!
【佳作欣赏2】
My Views on Filming Short Videos on Campus
Dear friends,
Filming short videos on campus has become a popular trend. It's great to showcase our energetic club activities, colorful festivals, and the warmth of campus life to the world. However, playing loud music while shooting or blocking walkways can ruin the peaceful atmosphere and even cause inconvenience.
My advice is to plan your shooting in advance. Check the schedule to avoid busy periods like lunch breaks. Also, keep voices down and respect others' space. Let's enjoy this creative activity without breaking the campus harmony.
Thanks!
【佳作欣赏3】
My Views on Filming Short Videos on Campus
Dear everyone,
Shooting short videos on campus is a fun way to express ourselves, letting us share our unique experiences—like interesting classroom discussions or funny moments with friends. But it's wrong to chase likes by rushing into lecture halls or interrupting events just for a “viral clip.”
I think we should focus on positive, genuine content. Film during free time, and never put filming above classes or group activities. By doing so, we can spread the real beauty of our campus and make these videos meaningful.
Thank you!
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