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八年级 英语 RJ
上册3 NJ
Unit 5 What a Delicious Meal!
Section B What does cooking give us?
第6课时 写作专题
I want to make a special dish for our party on Sunday.
Do you like fruit salad? Let me tell you how to make it now.
Here is a way to make vegetable salad.
We need to prepare some ingredients to make this dish.
Wash the vegetables clean, and then cut them into small pieces.
First, peel the apples and bananas, and cut them up.
Next, put them in a big bowl.
Then, pour the honey and yogurt into the bowl.
Finally, mix them all up.
Now you can enjoy the delicious traditional Chinese food.
Now the dish “stirfried eggs and tomatoes” is done.
Please come and taste it.
Here is a recipe for it.
本单元以“食物制作”为话题。写作内容是描述制作某种食物的过程,要包括所需的食材,制作的步骤、方法和注意事项等。写作时要使用祈使句及表示先后顺序的连接词first、next、then、finally等介绍制作过程。写此类文章时,要以一般现在时为主。
范畴: 人与自我
主题群: 做人与做事
子主题: ①劳动实践 ②勤于动手,乐于实践
[开头句]
1.在周日我要为我们的聚会制作一道特别的菜肴。(make…for…)
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2.你们喜欢水果沙拉吗?现在让我告诉你如何制作它吧。(how to do…)
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3.这里有一种制作蔬菜沙拉的方法。(a way to do…)
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[中间句]
1.我们需要准备一些制作这道菜的食材。(prepare…to do…)
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2.把蔬菜洗干净,然后切成小块。(cut…into…)
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3.首先把苹果和香蕉去皮,并把它们切碎。(cut…up)
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4.接下来把它们放进一个大碗里。(put…in…)
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5.然后,往碗里倒蜂蜜和酸奶。(pour…into…)
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6.最后,把它们都搅拌起来。(mix…up)
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[结尾句]
1.现在你可以享受这道传统中国美食了。(enjoy)
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2.现在“西红柿炒鸡蛋”这道菜就做好了。(be done)
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3.请过来尝一下吧。(please do…)
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[佳句积累]
1.Cooking brings us happiness and love.
烹饪带给我们幸福和爱。
2.A recipe has no soul. You as the cook must bring soul to the recipe.
食谱没有灵魂。作为厨师,你必须为食谱注入灵魂。
3.Real cooking is more about following your heart than following recipes.
真正的烹饪更多的是跟随你的内心而不是遵循食谱。
假设你刚刚学习了制作奶酪三明治的方法,请你写一篇短文向同学们介绍其做法。
食材:黄油、两片面包、奶酪、一个西红柿、一个洋葱、一些生菜。
过程:
1.准备好食材并把西红柿和洋葱切成小块;
2.放一勺黄油在一片面包上面;
3.将切碎的西红柿和洋葱放在黄油上面;
4.放一些奶酪在上面,再放生菜在上面;
5.最后再放一片面包在顶部。
写作要求:
1.文中须包含所给的要点提示,可适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称;
3.词数80左右。
eq \a\vs4\al(提取要点,介绍制作奶酪三明治的方法,)
eq \b\lc\{(\a\vs4\al\co1(时态: 一般现在时,人称: 第一人称或第二人称,要点: 需要的食材和制作过程。))
How to Make a Cheese Sandwich
Cheese sandwiches are delicious. Can you make a cheese sandwich? Let me tell you how to make cheese sandwiches.①
To make② a cheese sandwich, we need some butter, two slices of bread, some cheese, a tomato, an onion and some lettuce. Wash the vegetables clean, and then cut the tomato and onion into small pieces.
Now we can start. First③ put one spoon of butter on a slice of bread. Next③ put cutup tomato and the onion on the butter. Then③ put some cheese on them. After that③ put some lettuce on the cheese. Finally③ put another slice of bread on the top. The cheese sandwich is ready. It's time to enjoy it.④
名师点评
[主题评价]文章结构清晰,开篇点题,交代了任务内容。主体用一般现在时描述制作奶酪三明治的全过程。文章要点全面,时态运用正确,符合写作要求。
①开篇点题,疑问句开头,吸引读者兴趣。
②动词不定式(To make…)开头做目的状语,引出为了制作佳肴所需要的食材,极为恰当。
③句中连接词(First…; Next…; Then…; After that…; Finally…)的运用展现了制作的过程。
④结尾句邀请大家享用(It's time to enjoy it),表明自信满满的态度。
假如你叫李华,你的外国笔友Peter对中国美食很感兴趣,请你给他写一封邮件介绍如何制作一道简单的中国菜——西红柿炒鸡蛋(stirfried eggs and tomatoes)。
提示:
1.食材: two tomatoes、 three eggs、 cooking oil、 sugar、 salt
2.过程: 西红柿切成小块, 打(break)鸡蛋到一个碗里混合, 加热(heat)油, 翻炒(stirfry)鸡蛋至半熟(medium); 把炒到半熟的鸡蛋取出放在另一个碗里; 加入西红柿炒至变软,加入糖和盐; 加入鸡蛋翻炒至全熟(well done)。
写作要求:
1.文中须包含所给的要点提示,可适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称;
3.词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Peter,
I'm glad to hear that you are interested in Chinese food. Today I want to share a simple and popular dish with you—stirfried eggs and tomatoes. ____________________
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You should prepare two tomatoes, three eggs, cooking oil, salt and sugar. Then you can start cooking. First, cut the tomatoes into small pieces. Next, break three eggs and put the eggs into a bowl and mix them. Then heat the pan and pour some oil into the pan. Heat the oil, and add the eggs mixture to it. Stirfry until medium. Then take the eggs out of the pan into another bowl. Next, cook the tomatoes pieces until they're soft. Then, add some salt and sugar. Finally, add the eggs, and stirfry until well done.
I hope you can enjoy making it and trying Chinese food. Let me know if you have any questions!
Yours,
Li Hua
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