Unit 2 课时7 Integration D+Further study（课件）英语译林版2024八年级上册

d. To read my suggestion letter to the head teacher of sunshine middle school. Dear mr. Yang, I am writing to make some suggestions on how to improve some parts of our school life. First, I would like to suggest that our school should provide more pinging tables so more students can play pingpong during breaks. Second, I think we should have more books in the library, because the library is a great place for us to enjoy reading and open our minds. Moreover, we need more computers in the library so that IT is easier for us to such online. I hope my suggestions help improve our school life. You sensei ly once you. Unit 2 School life 主讲人：XXX 课型：写作课 Integration D+ Further study 阅读例文，获取和梳理关于学校生活的关键信息和文章结构;（学习理解） 01 运用相关表达谈论自己对于提升校园生活的建议;（应用实践） 02 在写作活动中综合运用本单元词汇知识与表达和语篇结构知识与表达，以建议书的形式从多个方面对改善校园生活提出合理的建议，表达自己的独特思考，提升对校园生活重要性的理解。（迁移创新） 03 学习目标 Lead in 01 02 03 04 Summary 05 Language points 06 Exercises 07 Homework 08 While-writing Post-writing Pre-writing Contents Lead in 01 Lead in When writing about how to improve life for students, what key points will you mention? Brainstorm School life suggestions Time Uniforms Books … Food Trips Pre-writing 02 Pre-writing Pre-writing Listen and finish Millie’s survey More ping-pang tables More books and computers Pre-writing Why does Millie write the letter? (2) How many suggestions does Millie write in the letter? (3) What does Millie suggest frst? Why? (4)What does Millie think of the library? (5)Why does Millie think they need more computers? Read and answer She wants to make some suggestions on how to improve some parts of her school life. Three. She suggests that her school should provide more ping-pong tables, so morestudents can play ping-pong during breaks. She thinks the library is a great place for students to enjoy reading and open their minds. Because with more computers, it is easier for students to search online. Pre-writing Introduction: say why you are writing Main body: Politely make your suggestions and give reasons Conclusion: Add a sentence to conclude the letter Pre-writing structure Opening Dear ... Introduction Purpose of writing the letter Main body Make suggestions and give reasons Conclusion Express hope Closing Yours sincerely/truly, … Pre-writing I am writing to make some suggestions on ... I am writing this letter because I want to ... Pre-writing First, I would like to suggest ... I have a suggestion for ... Second, I think we should ... It will be a good/great idea to ... because ... is a great place to ... Moreover/Finally, we need ... so that it is easier for us to ... Pre-writing I hope my suggestions ... I hope you find my suggestions useful/helpful/... Pre-writing Pay attention to the tone and language. 03 While-writing While-writing While-writing 04 Post-writing Post-writing Dear Miss Li, I am writing to offer some suggestions on how to improve some parts of our school life. First, I would like to suggest that we should have a longer lunch break. Some students eat slowly and don't get enough time to have a rest before the next class. A longer break will give us more time to relax. This will help us stay healthy. Second, I think we should go on more school trips to make our learning more interesting. For example, we could visit science museums to see interesting shows. These trips would help us learn new things. Finally, I hope we can add more adventure books to the library. They are popular among students and can help us develop creativity and a love for reading. I hope you think my suggestions are helpful and improve the school in some of these ways. I am looking forward to the changes. Yours sincerely, Li Hua Post-writing Aspects Assessment criteria Scores Structure Does the passage have a clear structure with three parts? (2 points) Content Does the passage give suggestions about school life? (2 points) Does the passage give reasons to support your idea? (2 points) Language Are there any grammar mistakes? (2 points) Is the handwriting neat and tidy? (2 point) Post-writing Share your articles in class, evaluate your classmates’ article and learn from each other. Exchange articles with your partners for review and give each other marks. share Post-writing What I can do Me Partner 1 I can describe different schools around the world. 2 I can compare the amount of things, use as… as, and use the suffixes –ish, -ian, -ese and –n correctly. 3 I can talk and write about how to improve school life with the new words in this unit. 4 I now understand more about the fun of school life and the importance of education. * Assess your learning of new words and grammar by doing the exercises on page 125. Result: □ Weak □ Good □ Wonderful I am good at _________________________________________________ I need to spend more time on ____________________________________ My action plan: _______________________________________________ Post-writing There are lots of books about school and school life. “Diary of a Wimpy Kid” is a really popular book series about an American middle school student's daily life. The book series tells the story of Greg, a 12-year-old boy, and how he deals with challenges at his new school. He often gets into trouble, but he always manages to find a way to get out of it. Do you know this book series? Do you know any other books about school and school life? If you do, choose one and share it with your classmates. Summary 05 Summary What do we learn today? structure expressions Language points 06 Language points 1. First, I would like to suggest that our school should provide more ping-pong tables so more students can play ping-pong during breaks. 首先,我想要建议我们学校提供更多乒乓球桌,这样更多学生能在课间打乒乓球。 句中的 suggest 意思是“建议,提议”,常见的用法有 suggest doing sth、“suggest+ that从句”等。 suggestion 是 suggest 的名词形式,后面常接介词 for、on 或 about。 我建议乘飞机去那里。 I suggest going there by plane. Language points 2. I hope my suggestions help improve our school life. 我希望我的建议有助于改善我们的校园生活。 她希望通过下个月的驾驶考试。 She hopes she passes her driving test next month. 本句中的I hope 后接宾语从句,从句中常用一般现在时表示将来。 Exercises 07 Exercises 1. Our school has decided ____________ (improve) the library services to meet students’ needs better. 2. Could you please give me some ____________ (suggest) on how to learn English well? 3. The school ____________ (provide) students with free breakfast every morning. 4. All students must wear ____________ (uniform) when they go to school. 5. The new sports center has excellent ____________ (facility), including a swimming pool and a gym. to improve suggestions provides uniforms facilities Homework 08 Homework Have to do Polish your own article. Preview Unit 3 Welcome to the unit. Finish the exercises. Choose to do Read a book about school and school life. 感 谢 观 看 2024 Blues 63096.0 $$