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Period 4 Writing
Unit 5 Working the Land同步练习
Period 4 Writing
第一部分 句子积累练
一、典型句子积累
1.(读后续写之哭泣描写)她握着我的手,呜咽着说:“谢谢!你所说的话对我非常重要。”(what引导的主语从句)
2.(读后续写之哭泣描写)他们所做的事情深深地感动了我们,我们的泪水止不住地往下流。(what引导的主语从句)
3.(读后续写之兴奋心理描写)约翰突然想到他可以做爆米花来帮助伯纳德,眼睛里闪烁着兴奋的光芒。(It occurred to sb that...)
4.(读后续写之恐惧心理描写)他不确定他是否能够成功地吓跑狼,他的心吓得狂跳。(It was uncertain whether...)
5.(读后续写之环境描写)更糟糕的是,不知不觉间树林里起雾了,这无疑增加了我们找到回家的路的困难。(what引导的主语从句)
6.(应用文之求助信)如何提高英语口语对我来说仍然是一个难题,因此我写信向你求助。(how引导的主语从句)
7.(读后续写之悲伤心理描写)当我们听说老爷爷去世的消息时,我们极度悲伤,泪水湿润了眼眶。
When we heard the news ____________________________________,we were overcome with extreme sadness,tears welling up in our eyes.
8.(读后续写之兴奋心理描写)妈妈建议我们在下一个村庄宿营,她的眼中闪烁着兴奋的光芒。
My mother made a suggestion ____________________________________,her eyes glittering with excitement.
9.他是否能够胜任这项工作还是个问题。
There is still a question ____________________________________.
10.(2023·天津6月,书面表达)毫无疑问,即将举办的汉语工作坊旨在促进中英文化交流。
____________________________________________________________promoting cultural exchange between China and the UK.
二、课文佳句仿写
(应用文写作之建议信)
1.现在你正全神贯注于一场中文诗歌朗诵比赛,这使你既焦虑又紧张。(现在分词短语作结果状语)
Now you are focusing on a Chinese poetry reciting competition,________________________________________.
2.结果你晚上很难入睡。(It turns out that...)
________________________________________at night.
3.你不知道你该如何改变这种窘境。(同位语从句)
You have no idea ________________________________________.
4.在我看来,你可以选择与朋友和老师分享你的感受。(have the alternative of)
In my opinion,you ________________________________________.
5.此外,何不在比赛前轮流上台练习相关诗歌?(take turns to do)
Besides,why not ________________________________________ before the competition?
第二部分 写作训练
三、写作思路训练
(一)假定你是李华,最近你班开展了主题为“Chemical Farming or Organic Farming”的征文活动。请根据以下内容用英语写一篇短文。要点如下:
1.你的观点。
2.作出该选择的理由。
注意:1.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2.开头语已给出,不计入总词数。
In my opinion, farming is preferable to farming because
第一步:要点翻译
1.我们应该尽自己所能来保护脆弱的环境。
We should the delicate environment.
2.被诊断患有癌症的人数在上升,我们应该要注意吃的东西。
The number of people diagnosed with cancer and we our food.
3.有机农业不含化肥。
Organic farming .
4.有机农业旨在使土壤肥沃。
Organic farming .
5.有机农业对自然环境无疑是友好的。
Organic farming undoubtedly .
6.有机食物富含矿物质和维生素,它能确保我们摄入必要的营养,并且减少了患潜在的严重疾病的可能性。
Organic food . It the likelihood of potential serious disease.
7.我们都知道化学农业生产出来的食物吃起来没有味道。
We all know that food tastes flavorless.
8.有机农业绝对能保全食物的自然风味,继而激发我们的食欲。
Organic farming ,thus stimulating our appetite.
第二步:词句升级
1.用so...that...升级要点1
The environment we should do everything in our power to protect it.
2.用with复合结构升级要点2
,we are supposed to attach more attention to our food.
3.用非谓语动词短语作状语和定语从句升级要点3、要点4和要点5
,organic farming, ,is undoubtedly friendly to the environment.
4.用形容词短语作状语和as well as升级要点6
,organic food the likelihood of potential serious disease.
5.用it作形式主语和并列句升级要点7和要点8
food produced from chemical farming tastes flavorless, of food,thus stimulating our appetite.
第三步:连句成篇
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(二).假如你是李华,你班就化学农业和有机农业进行了讨论,请写一篇文章阐述一下你的观点。内容包括:
1.有机农产品更健康,更让人放心;
2.有机农耕不会对环境造成破坏;
3.有机农耕让农民增加收入。
参考词汇:pesticide residues农药残留
第一步 审题谋篇
[审题]
写作要求是写一篇议论性文章。写作时应注意下面三点:
1.确定文体:这是一篇议论性文章,注意议论文的写作特点。
2.主体时态:文章应以一般现在时为主。
3.主体人称:由于是发表自己的观点,所以人称应该以第一人称和第三人称为主。
[谋篇]
本文可以分为三个部分:
第一部分:引入话题。
第二部分:提出观点并阐述理由。
第三部分:总结全文。重申自己的观点,提出希望。
第二步 遣词造句
[核心词汇] (含本单元词汇)
1.有机农耕____________________
2.有做某事的选择____________________
3.深信____________________
4.致力于做某事____________________
5.认为……是____________________
6.有营养的____________________
7.对……非常必要 ____________________
8.结果是……;原来是…… ____________________
连词成句] (含本单元句型)
1.我认为有机农业优于化学农业。(assume)
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2.鉴于化学杀虫剂对作物有害,农民被禁止在有机农业中喷洒它们。(given that)
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3.作物上没有农药残留。
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4.农民使用天然的动物粪便。
________________________________________________________________________
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5.它不仅有利于改善土壤状况而且能够使作物更有营养。
It will not only be good for improving the condition of the soil __________________________.
6.随着越来越多的人关注自己的健康,人们在商店购物时选择购买有机水果和蔬菜,尽管这些产品价格高。
As more and more people care about their health,________________________________when they are shopping in stores,though ________________________________________.
7.我深信越来越多的农民将会致力于有机农业。(convince;devote)
________________________________________________________________ in the future.
第三步 句式升级
1.将句5改成倒装句。
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2.用with复合结构,despite代替though引导的让步状语从句改写句6。
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第四步 组句成篇
用适当的过渡词语,把以上词汇和句式,再加上联想内容,组成一篇80词左右的英语短文。
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四、读后续写
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
After an accident in January, 8-year-old Thomas was badly injured. His dream of winning this year’s inter-school football championship was destroyed overnight.
“It would be at least a year and a half before your son walks again unless there is a miracle,” doctors told Thomas’ single mother, Beth. After knowing this fact one night, Thomas cried sadly on the hospital bed. Beth tried to encourage him. During it, she fished inside her pocket and pulled out the inhaler (吸入器) when suddenly feeling dizzy — Beth had asthma (哮喘), and the inhaler could help her breathe more easily.
In September, after staying in hospital for months, Thomas returned home and had to completely rely on a wheelchair to move around, feeling hopeless. Beth tried to cheer him up.
One afternoon, the mother was near the door reading for Thomas, while the boy was relaxing on the sofa in the living room, listening. Suddenly, Thomas heard a strange loud sound coming from the porch (走廊).
“It’s just... my book fell!” Beth said. But Thomas could tell she was struggling to breathe. It seemed that something was stuck in her throat.
Normally, Thomas’ wheelchair would be right by the sofa, and he could easily roll towards his mother. But earlier that afternoon, while Thomas was asleep, Beth pushed the wheelchair into the yard to let it get some sunshine.
Beth tried to get up for her inhaler put on a shelf inside the room, but she lost her balance and fell onto the floor. When Beth wasn’t able to respond to Thomas’ calling out her name, Thomas realized this was an emergency.
He hurried to take out the phone from his pocket and quickly informed the police of what was happening. Although help was on the way, Thomas knew he couldn’t just sit and wait.
He looked at his mother’s inhaler. It could help save her life, but it was on that shelf seven meters away from him. “I must go there to get it,” he said to himself. Despite knowing his legs probably wouldn’t listen to him, he was determined.
注意:1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: He held the couch’s seat as tightly as he could, using his weak hands. _____
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Paragraph 2: After amazingly standing up, Thomas began struggling to walk to that inhaler.
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参考答案
一、典型句子积累
1.She held my hand,whimpering,“Thanks!What you said has made a great difference to me.”
2.What they had done deeply moved us,our tears rolling down without control.
3.It occurred to John that he could make popcorn to help Bernard,with eyes glittering with excitement.
4.It was uncertain whether he could successfully frighten away the wolf,his heart beating wildly with extreme fright.
5.What was worse was that fog crept in the forest without being noticed,which undoubtedly added to our difficulty finding our way home.
6.How I will improve my spoken English is still a puzzle to me,so I am writing to ask for your advice.
7.that the old grandfather passed away
8..that we (should) camp in the next village
9.whether he can be qualified for the job
10.There is no doubt that the upcoming Chinese workshop is aimed at
二、课文佳句仿写
1.making you anxious and nervous
2.It turns out that you have great difficulty (in) falling asleep
3.how you should change the dilemma
4.have the alternative of sharing your feelings with your friends and teachers
5.take turns to practice the relevant poems on the stage
三、写作思路训练
(一)要点翻译
1.do everything in our power to protect
2.is increasing are supposed to attach more attention to
3.is free of chemical fertilizers
4.is intended to keep the soil rich
5.is friendly to the environment
6.is rich in minerals and vitamins guarantees us the essential nutrition and reduces
7.produced from chemical farming
8.can definitely secure the natural flavor of food
词句升级
1.is so delicate that
2.With the number of people diagnosed with cancer increasing
3.Intended to keep the soil rich which is free of chemical fertilizers
4.Rich in minerals and vitamins guarantees us the essential nutrition as well as reduces
5.It is known to us that while organic farming can definitely secure the natural flavor
连句成篇
In my opinion,organic farming is preferable to chemical farming because of its significant advantages over the latter. Details are as follows.
In the first place,the environment is so delicate that we should do everything in our power to protect it. Intended to keep the soil rich,organic farming,which is free of chemical fertilizers,is undoubtedly friendly to the environment.
With the number of people diagnosed with cancer increasing,we are supposed to attach more attention to our food. Rich in minerals and vitamins,organic food guarantees us the essential nutrition as well as reduces the likelihood of potential serious disease. It is known to us that food produced from chemical farming tastes flavorless, while organic farming can definitely secure the natural flavor of food,thus stimulating our appetite.
In conclusion,with all these factors taken into account,preference should be given to organic farming.
(二)第二步 核心词汇
1.organic farming 2.have the alternative of doing sth 3.be greatly convinced that 4.devote oneself to/be devoted to doing sth 5.assume sb/sth to be... 6.nutritious 7.be essential to/for... 8.It turns out that...
连词成句
1.I assume organic farming to be better than chemical farming.
2.Given that chemical pesticides are harmful to plants
3.There are no pesticide residues left on the plants.
4.Farmers use natural waste from animals.
5.but also make plants more nutritious
6.people have the alternative of buying organic fruit and vegetables;the prices of these products are high
7.I am greatly convinced that more and more farmers will be devoted to organic farming
第三步 句式升级
1.Not only will it be good for improving the condition of the soil but also it will make plants more nutritious.
2.With more and more people caring about their health,they have the alternative of buying organic fruit and vegetables when they are shopping in stores,despite the fact that the prices of these products are high.
第四步 [参考范文]
I assume organic farming to be better than chemical farming.Here are some reasons.
Firstly,given that chemical pesticides are harmful to plants,farmers are forbidden to spray them in organic farming.Thus,there are no pesticide residues left on them.Secondly,farmers use natural waste from animals.Not only will it be good for improving the condition of the soil but also it will make plants more nutritious.Thirdly,with more and more people caring about their health,they have the alternative of buying organic fruit and vegetables when they are shopping in stores,despite the fact that the prices of these products are high.It turns out that farmers can make more money.
All in all,I think organic farming is essential to our physical health.I am greatly convinced that more and more farmers will be devoted to organic farming in the future.
四、读后续写
He held the couch’s seat as tightly as he could, using his weak hands. He knew he had to try, no matter how hard it was. The thought that he would never see his mother was too much for him. He slowly lifted himself up and fell down but he didn’t give up. He was determined to reach the inhaler. After lying on the ground for a second, he gathered all his strength and surprisingly, he was on his feet!
After amazingly standing up, Thomas began struggling to walk to that inhaler. It was difficult but Thomas finally made it to the shelf. He grabbed the inhaler and made his way to his mother. With trembling hands, he put the inhaler in her mouth and dialed for the doctors who arrived just in time to take Beth to the hospital. As he sat in the empty living room, Thomas realized that he had truly become a hero. He had proven that even the weakest of us can be strong when it matters the most.
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