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One. I could feel all the eyes were fixed on me. A strong sense of nervousness flooded over me. Two, the eyes of the whole audience fell upon him. Standing on the track, he felt his throw tight and his poem. three. He took a deep breath, gathered up his courage and walk to the track . for catching side . of her encouraging smile. I calmed down myself and then confidently walked onto the stage. Five steady . looked up and saw mr. Taylor wearing a smile and encouraging him with an inspiring gear, which made him less nervous. Six, just then, a reassuring pat landed on her shoulder. IT was mr. Butler. We selected you as we believe in your talent and voice fuel. By his words, Cathy dedicated herself to more intense preparation for the upcoming performance. Seven paul . judge up and rushed . under the court, and clearly, all the extra hours that he'd spent practicing alone paid off. The other team just couldn't keep up with his energy and speed. He made shot after shot, and the crowd couldn't stop claiming and sharing aid. Filled with confidence, I closed my eyes. throw my head back and ran with my last downs of strength to the finish line. Nine. when my name was called, I went up to . the stage confidently and started presenting my speech with full enthusiasm. Ten. as the final joy note signaled the . end of the symphony, the audience jumped to their feet, clapping sheering and waving their heads. eleven. It's gold for china. Look how the crowd has gone wild. You can see the joy and pride on the faces of the chinese fans, and there we see the chinese players embracing with tears of happiness in their eyes. It's a dream come true for china. Twelve, later at the award presentation, I stood on stage holding my trophy and certificate part, hammering with excitement. Thirteen. I was worried that they would . be angry with me because I had let them down, but no one blamed me. Instead, they all try to cheer me up. Fourteen, the medal shown brightly under the sunshine, reflecting the excited tears in my eyes and the sweat on my face. fifteen. Only then did I grasp that bravery and self belief could conquer fear and lead to success. Just as the same goes. If you believe in yourself, no difficulty can last long. Sixteen, I learned a valuable lesson a day. Pride comes before a fall, and being humble is essential for success. seventeen. Finally came the big moment. Taking a deep breath, I stepped onto the stage, enveloped in the glow of the lights. At first, my voice trembled with nervousness, but as the song progressed, my confidence, sod, I poured my emotions into the performance, letting my voice Carry my feelings into the air. The crowd watched in law. The applause and cheers echo ing in the hall. I knew that I had conquered my fears. Yes, the unexpected discouragement can be a blessing in disguise if we have a belief in ourselves and never give up our dreams.
One. the whole of his being had been taken over by fear. Two, the whole room felt cold and unwelcoming, which send a shiver through wind's bones. Three, with a sob SHE quickly undressed, put on her knightliness and jumped into bed, where SHE pressed her face down into the pillow and pulled the clothes over her head. For SHE . didn't care that people . thought I was a boy's instrument. Angela knew there was no such thing. Five, I knew that this was more than just physical training. IT was a lesson in perseverance for both of us. Gradually, his legs began to gain strength and his false became less frequent. Six, SHE was not going to let anyone make her feel bad, whether IT was for being good at something or for being a girl. Seven. the breeze was fresh now, and he sailed on. Well, some of his whole returned eight. With a signal he started walking towards mom, is every step being a testament to his incredible courage? Nine. our secret training had paid off, and ted journey was a reminder to all of us that hope, combined with action, can lead to miracles. Ten, with consistent effort in determination, javan gradually improved his math just as he had overcome other obstacles in his life. Eleven, from that day on, Steve opened his heart to the people around him. He made new friends at school. Twelve, gazing at the ones may like building evil, was aware of the magic of breaking down chAllenges, whether IT was one mile a sixth story building or any potential tough task. Thirteen, the . experience has taught us the . value of creatively transforming seemingly useless items into treasure, making us aware that fragility is a good quality. Fourteen, during that tough time, we had gone through complex days of helplessness, ness, breakdowns and despair. We celebrated every attempt in, every in forward, becoming full of hope for the future.
One, a wave of guilt and regret swept away her joy, feeling SHE didn't deserve the prize. SHE had AA sleepless night for the first time in her life two, what a dilema could I keep IT and get all kinds of stuff for me and my family? IT wouldn't be too bad for me to keep IT right. Thoughts ran through my mind. Three, I froze. IT would ruin our friendship to say no, wouldn't IT honesty came first, of course, but I had no intention to refuse him for. When thinking how said the Young lady would be at the loss of her phone, he was full of guilt. Shame five, as the sun dipped below the horizon, casting long shadows on the playground, joy made this choice. He now knew what he had to do when he was in a hurry to get IT done. Six, tina, blushing with embarrassment, started to stem out the truth. Seven, handing back the handphone to her. In seeing her smile happily, keh realized that honesty was indeed the best policy aides is food were quick, decisive, taking him straights back to the store like an arrow. Mister dough was just inside the door, smiling suddenly blindly. Joy held out the pipe. His words seemed lost on the way to his mouth, but he finally found his voice. I didn't mean to take IT nine. What happened today made me realized that that forgiveness is a kind of virtue. Ten, no new bicycle could have made me feel as good about myself as I felt that day, because I passed a very important test, a lost in fan test of my own character. Eleven, Tyler came out with his face lit up by the bike. I immediately explained in a weak voice in medicine apology. To my surprise, instead of getting mad me, he forgave me with a broad smile, hugging me softly and even offering to lend me his bike. Feeling relieved on the way home, I came to the realization that to live a life of honesty and integrity is the responsibility of every decent person.
One, why are you so hard on me? I shouted at mom, slammed the door. I threw myself under my bed and soup too. The fault had been mainly on Richard side, but he was too stumbling to admit IT. Three, that day, I walked home with my father, the setting sun shown on us, casting our shadows on the road. We taught a lot that day, and IT seemed that the journey from school to home had also been shorted for sam sub in spring out of his bed to hug me. five. Jim discovered there was no disappointment in his father's eyes, but only pride in love. Six, when their mother saw the delicious breakfast, a Spark of surprise flash across her face. seven. All of them laugh with happiness, chuckles lingering around the house. Eight, the warm golden sunlight flooding in through the window, together with love between my family, warned us nine. I got to know my dad Better and learn to love and more, making tough things more manageable in life. Sweeter ten. Mom, i'm deeply sorry for my rudeness. IT won't happen again, I promise. Would you forgive me? You're always my little girl, mom, my Jenny. Tenderly, as the setting sun cast a golden glow on both of their faces, they embraced each other tightly.
One, tom noticed the flame was reaching up, frozen with fear. He stood rooted to the spot. Two, to my horse, a big wave came in through me from the boat. I was seized by a strong sense of hopelessness, struggling in the water, waving my hands with all my strength. Three, my leg was badly injured. My apt was calling to seek some help, and my sister was full of injury. for. After smashing the door open with a rock, he grabs jane arms and helped her out five. Hearing the screams for help. Henry ran to the riverside, throw off his clothes and jumped into the water without six. He died . under the drowning woman. pushing her upward and finally toward the shore. Eventually, a bystander managed to approach and grab the woman's hand, pulling her to shore seven quickly. but carefully SHE . climb the down the hill to the place where lilly was lying. Horror and pain registered on lilly space. No time to waste aides. I didn't hesitate to do C, P, R. Finally, I saw one of his eyes blink. What a relief. nine. With the doll sky clearing up, they breathe in the fresh air with abandoned feeling, the reverse of life. ten. Thankfully. SHE regained . conscious ness. Shortly after, many onlookers gave him a thumbs up. Truly, IT was a rescue job well done on such a warm afternoon. Eleven. as he regained consciousness. he saw hills tearful face and mrs. Smith comforting presence. SHE knew were quick thinking daughter and reliable neighbour had saved her life, bonding their little family in the community that supported them. Twelve. a letter was . quickly brought, and fred mounted IT. pushing his way into the room where the poor child lay nearly choked to death with smoke. He woke up with some difficulty, Carried her to the window and then brought her down. The latter.
One. the once clear trail now seem to be disappearing into amazing of winding path, leaving us uncertain of the direction we should take. Two, standing in the thick woods. I struggled with dozens of questions. My phone was dead. How am I going to get out of here? What if there are wolf's nearby? Three. I was thinking . I couldn't breathe. Help my mouth filled with water. I struggled against being drawn deeper, deeper, down. four. I had almost no strength left, my fingers could hardly move, my mouth opening and closing, filled with salt water, I became colder and colder. I raised my head for the last time. Then I think five. When buried under snow, Scott drifted between terror and panic, hoping that his friend paul was not buried so deep. Six, I screamed, i'm here down in the valley. Robin peered over the edge and his eyes widen in horror at the site of my overturned car. seven. The pain in my chest and leg was unbearable. I closed my eyes, trying to ignore the pain and conserve my energy. Time seemed to stand still as I waited, hoping for a macaca aid. He shook off the snow, moved snow away with bare hands, and managed to . pull himself out nine time. take away slowly. Just as he was feeling himself fading away, the rescue team . arrived ten. Without thinking too much, I kick the door hard, which broke open with a loud crash. We stumbled inside. Luckily, I found enough dry way to start a fire. eleven. After a roll call confirmed that all were safe and sound, they relaxed, laughing, crying and hugged each other. Twelve never had I had such . a thrilling yet dangerous vacation before. The special trip to the wild west was deeply impressed in my mind. Thirteen are being last added a special taste to my adventurous vacation, which I would remember all my life. Fourteen, from this experience, I learned that freedom is important, but safety counts more. Fifteen, finally, we went out of the forest that trapped us. What an unforgettable experience. IT turns out that there's always a way out of any difficult situation. As long as we stay home sixteen now, we have . another chance to look up . at the stars of new orleans. They're beauty, inspiring us and giving us confidence to move on.
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比赛类(2023新课标Ⅰ卷参加写作比赛、2022新高考Ⅰ卷David克服身体原因完成跑步比赛)、个人演讲或表演类常包括:①如何面对失败,自我反思,实现个人成长;②表现尊重对手,收获友谊的体育精神或团队精神;③在同伴或家人的鼓励下克服恐惧,取得比赛或演讲的成功。
主题 1
比赛、表演、演讲
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■比赛/表演/演讲前的情绪变化(紧张、害怕、不自信、自我怀疑、镇定、自信、勇敢)
1.I could feel all the eyes were fixed on me. ________________________
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我能感觉到所有的眼睛都盯着我。我紧张极了。
2.The eyes of the whole audience fell upon him. Standing on the track, he felt his throat tight and his palms sweating. 所有观众都看着他。他站在跑道上,喉咙发紧,手心冒汗。
A strong sense of nervousness flooded/swept over me
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3.He took a deep breath, gathered up his courage, and walked to the track. 他深吸一口气,鼓起勇气,向跑道走去。
4.Catching sight of her encouraging smile, I calmed down/composed myself, and then confidently walked onto the stage. 看到她鼓励的笑容,我镇定下来,自信地走向舞台。
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人物的自我挣扎、努力、决心、坚持或他人的鼓励和支持、准备工作
5.Stevie looked up and saw Mr. Taylor wearing a smile and encouraging him with an inspiring gesture, which made him less nervous. 史蒂夫抬起头,看到泰勒先生微笑着用激励的手势鼓励他,这让他不那么紧张了。
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6.Just then, a reassuring pat landed on her shoulder. It was Mr. Butler. “We selected you as we believe in your talent and voice.” Fueled by his words, Cathy dedicated herself to more intense preparation for the upcoming performance. 就在这时,有人安慰地轻拍了一下她的肩膀。是巴特勒先生。“因为我们相信你的才华和歌喉,我们选了你。” 被他的话语所鼓舞,Cathy 全身心地投入准备即将到来的演出。
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■比赛/表演/演讲中的表现
7.Paul jumped up and rushed onto the court. And clearly, all the extra hours that he’d spent practising alone paid off. The other team just couldn’t keep up with his energy and speed. He made shot after shot, and the crowd couldn’t stop clapping and cheering. 保罗跳起来冲上球场。显然,他所有独自练习的额外时间都得到了回报。对手队跟不上他的力量和速度。他的进球一个接一个,人群不停地鼓掌欢呼。(北师必1)
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8.Filled with confidence, I closed my eyes, threw my head back and ran with my last ounce of strength to the finish line. 满怀信心的我闭上眼 睛,仰起头,用尽最后一点力气朝终点线跑去。
9.When my name was called, I went up to the stage confidently and started presenting my speech with full enthusiasm. 当叫到我的名字时,我自信地走上舞台,以饱满的热情开始我的演讲。
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■比赛/表演后的场景(观众和人物的反应)
成功
10.As the final, joyous note signalled the end of the symphony, the audience jumped to their feet, clapping, cheering and waving their hats. 最后,交响乐在欢乐的音符中结束,观众都跳了起来,鼓掌、欢呼,挥舞着他们的帽子。 (北师必3)
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11.It’s gold for China! Look how the crowd has gone wild. You can see the joy and pride on the faces of the Chinese fans. And there we see the Chinese players embracing, _________________________________ ... It’s a dream come true for China! 中国队获得了金牌!看,观众沸腾 了,中国球迷的脸上洋溢着喜悦和骄傲。我们看到中国队的队员们眼含幸福的热泪,相拥在一起……中国实现了梦想! (外研选必1)
12.Later at the award presentation, I stood onstage holding my trophy and certificate, __________________________________. 后来在颁奖典礼上,我拿着奖杯和证书站在台上,心激动得怦怦直跳。
with tears of happiness in their eyes
heart hammering with excitement
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13.I was worried that they would be angry with me because I had let them down, but no one blamed me. Instead, they all tried to cheer me up. 我担心他们会因为我让他们失望而生我的气,但没人责怪我。相反,他们都努力让我振作起来。
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■这样结尾(主题升华,感悟、融情于景):成功(坚持不懈、自信勇敢、耐心冷静);失败(从失败中吸取教训、骄傲导致失败、尽力最重要)
14.The medal shone brightly under the sunshine/lights, reflecting the excited tears in my eyes and the sweat on my face. 奖牌在阳光/灯光下熠熠生辉,折射出我眼中激动的泪水和脸上的汗水。
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15.Only then did I grasp that bravery and self-belief could conquer fear and lead to success. Just as the saying goes, “If you believe in yourself, no difficulty can last long.” 直到那时,我才明白勇敢和自信可以战胜恐惧并取得成功。俗话说:“相信自己,什么困难都不会持续太久。”
16.I learned a valuable lesson that day—pride comes before a fall, and being humble is essential for success. 那天我学到了宝贵的一课——骄兵必败,谦虚是成功的关键。
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■必背微场景(上舞台→紧张→变得自信→投入表演→观众反应→主人公情感→感悟升华)
Finally came the big moment. Taking a deep breath, I stepped onto the stage, enveloped in the glow of the lights. At first, my voice trembled with nervousness, but as the song progressed, my confidence soared. I poured my emotions into the performance, letting my voice carry my feelings into the air. The crowd watched in awe, their applause and cheers echoing in the hall. I knew that I had conquered my fears. Yes, the unexpected discouragement can be a blessing in disguise if we have a belief in ourselves and never give up our dreams.
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终于,重要的时刻到了。我深吸一口气,走上舞台,置身于灯的光芒下。起初,我紧张得声音颤抖,但随着曲子的继续,我信心大 增。我的情感由歌声倾泻而出,我满含情感的声音荡漾在空中。人们惊叹地看着,他们的掌声和欢呼声在大厅里回荡。我知道我已克服了恐惧。是的,如果我们相信自己,永不放弃梦想,意想不到的挫折也会因祸得福。
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在某特定环境或场景中,人物遇到某个或某些困难、挑战、问题或偏见等,需要尝试一种或多种方法解决1个或多个问题。如2024浙江高考1月Eva在教学楼容易迷路,先用“只记自己教室位置”暂时解决问题,体育课上Eva担心自己跑倒数第一,快坚持不住的时候,Eva运用心理策略跑完一英里,然后利用该策略对付教学楼。设计续写情节时,应细致描写解决问题的过程中人物的内心感受、情感变 化,他人的支持、鼓励等。
主题 2
困难解决/挑战偏见
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■遇到困难/挑战/偏见时的害怕、焦虑、沮丧、无助等
1.The whole of his being had been taken over by fear. 他的身心充满恐 惧。(必2)
2.The whole room felt cold and unwelcoming, ______________________ _______________________. 整个房间让人感到寒冷而陌生,安妮浑身打了个冷战。(北师选必4)
which sent a shiver through Anne’s bones
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3.________________ she quickly undressed, put on her nightclothes and jumped into bed where she pressed her face down into the pillow and pulled the clothes over her head.她抽泣着,迅速脱下衣服,穿上睡 衣,跳上床,脸朝下钻进枕头里,拉过衣服蒙住脑袋。 (北师选必4)
4.She didn’t care that people thought it was a boy’s instrument. Anjali knew there was no such thing.
她不在乎人们觉得这是男孩的乐器。Anjali 知道没有这样的事。
With a sob
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5.I knew that this was more than just physical training, it was a lesson in perseverance for both of us. Gradually, his legs began to gain strength, and his falls became less frequent. 我知道这不仅仅是体能训练,对我们俩而言是毅力之课。渐渐地,他的双腿开始变得有力,跌倒的次数也少了。
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6.She was not going to let anyone make her feel bad, whether it was for being good at something or for being a girl. 她不会让任何人让她感到难过,无论是因为擅长某件事还是因为她是女孩。
7.The breeze was fresh now and he sailed on well. ___________________
_____________. 此时微风清新,船驶得很好。他又燃起点希望。(选必2)
Some of his hope returned
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8.With a signal, he started walking towards Mom, his every step being a testament to his incredible courage. 他打了个手势,开始向妈妈走去,他走的每一步都证明了他令人难以置信的勇气。
9.Our secret training had paid off, and Ted’s journey was a reminder to all of us that hope, combined with action, can lead to miracles. 我们的秘密训练得到了回报,Ted 的历程提醒我们大家,希望与行动结合会带来奇迹。
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10.With consistent effort and determination, Javon gradually improved his math, just as he had overcome other obstacles in his life. 凭借始终如一的努力和决心,Javon的数学得以逐渐提高,就像他克服了生活中的其他障碍一样。
11.From that day on, Stevie opened his heart to the people around him. He made new friends at school. 从那天起,史蒂夫向周围的人敞开心扉。他在学校结交了新朋友。
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12.Gazing at the once maze-like building, Eva was aware of the magic of breaking down challenges, whether it was one mile, a six-story building, or any potential tough task. 凝视着这座曾经像迷宫一样的大楼,伊娃意识到打破挑战的魔力,无论是一英里,一栋六层大楼,还是任何潜在的艰巨任务。(2024·浙江高考1月)
13.The experience has taught us the value of creatively transforming seemingly useless items into treasure, making us aware that frugality is a good quality. 这次经历教会了我们创造性地将看似无用的物品转化为宝藏的意义,让我们意识到节俭是优秀品质。
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■必背微场景
During that tough time, we had gone through countless days of helplessness, breakdowns and despair. We celebrated every attempt and every inch forward, becoming full of hope for the future. 在那段艰难的时期,我们经历了无数天的无助、崩溃和绝望。我们庆祝每一次尝试,每一寸进步,对未来充满希冀。
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互助友善型是读后续写的热考主题之一,如2024新课标Ⅰ卷的出租车车费,司机的善意相助。
■这样构思情节
主题 3
互助友善
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1.My mind was racing, trying to think of a solution to help her. 我转动脑筋,试图想出一个解决办法帮助她。
2.Without thinking twice, I asked my father to pull over beside her, which my father did immediately. As we approached the lady, ______________ ______________________. 我不假思索地让爸爸把车停在她旁边,爸爸立即照做了。当我们走近那位女士时,她脸上露出一丝希望。
her face lit up with a glimmer of hope
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3.Out of nowhere, Mat pulled up alongside us and asked if he could be of assistance. His friendly smile almost immediately eased our worry. Mat不知从哪里冒出来把车停在我们身边,问他是否能帮忙。他友好的微笑几乎马上减轻了我们的担忧。
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4._________________________________ as she looked at the strangers who had come to her aid. With a trembling hand, she extended the apples towards the three drivers. 当她看着那些前来帮助她的陌生人时,眼里涌出感激的泪水。她颤抖着手将苹果递给三个司机。
5.In a flash, with tears welling up in my eyes, I was touched beyond words. 刹那间,我泪流满面,感动得说不出话来。
Grateful tears welled up in her eyes
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6.We usually think that our lives are defined by great moments. But I now realise that great moments catch us by surprise, because they often seem quite small. 我们常以为我们的生活因为伟大的时刻而有意义。但我现在意识到,伟大的时刻往往因为看起来很渺小,而让我们感到惊讶不已。 (必修3)
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■传递善意
7.I made up my mind to pay it forward. Just as the saying goes, “Roses given, fragrance in hand.”我决定将善行传递下去。正如谚语所说:“赠人玫瑰,手有余香。”
8.The memory of Eric’s selflessness would stay with us forever, serving as a reminder for us to always be open to helping others in their time of need.Eric的无私奉献将与我们常在,提醒我们始终乐于在他人需要的时候提供帮助。
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9.On the way home, appreciating the flaming sunset, I felt the breeze whispering in my ears, “Only when you help those in need is life meaningful.”在回家的路上,我欣赏着绚烂的夕阳,微风在耳边低语:“只有帮助有需要的人,人生才有意义。”
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10.“I wish I could have done more for you.” Such simple words really carried me away. It was this total stranger who restored my faith in humanity. “我希望我能为你做更多的事情。”朴素的话语让我很激 动。正是这个陌生人使我恢复了对人性的信心。
11.It was then that we had a profound understanding of the saying: What you give away will invariably come back to you in another form. 就在那时,我们对这句话有了深刻的领悟:你的付出总是会以另一种形式回到你身边。
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Tommy came closer and carefully gave the woman his buys. Her eyes opened wide in surprise, then filled with tears. “Thank you,” she whispered. Tommy bowed his head, turned around and went back home. He was moving faster and faster and finally he started to run. Strange energy filling his body made him feel like he could fly. When he finally stopped, he was breathing heavily, but he didn’t feel tired. He smiled happily—it was a wonderful feeling. And nothing could stop it.
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汤米走近,小心翼翼地把他买的东西给了那位女士。她惊讶地睁大眼睛,然后盈满了泪水。“谢谢,”她低声说。汤米低下头,转身回 家。他加快脚步,最后跑起来。他身体里充盈的陌生的能量让他觉得自己能飞。他终于停下,喘着粗气却不觉得累。他开心地笑起来——这种感觉真好。什么也不能阻止这种感觉。
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亲情类是读后续写的热考主题之一,如新高考Ⅰ卷主题为给妈妈做母亲节早餐, 体现了家人之间的爱。或亲人之间发生冲突或遇到困难,家人帮助解决。
主题 4
亲情感悟
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■亲情类的有关冲突、寻找解决办法、解决冲突的场面描写
1.“Why are you so hard on me?” I shouted at Mom, _________________ (非谓语). I threw myself onto my bed and sobbed. “你为什么对我这么苛刻?”我冲着妈妈大喊,砰的一声关上了门。我扑倒在床上,抽泣起来。
2.The fault had been mainly on Richard’s side but he was too stubborn to admit it. 主要是理查德错了,但他太固执了而没有承认。
slamming the door
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3.That day, I walked home with my father. The setting sun shone on us, casting our shadows on the road. We talked a lot that day, and it seemed that the journey from school to home had also been shortened. 那天,我和父亲一起走回家。夕阳照在我们身上,把我们的影子投在路上。那天我们聊了很多,从学校到家的路似乎也变短了。
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■与亲情相关的动作、神态和情感描写
4.Sam sobbed and sprang out of his bed to hug me. 山姆抽泣着从床上跳起来拥抱我。
5.Jim discovered there was no disappointment in his father’s eyes but only pride and love. 吉姆发现父亲的眼里没有失望,只有骄傲和爱。
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6.When their mother saw the delicious breakfast, ____________________ _______________________ (无灵主语句). 当他们的母亲看到美味的早餐时,她的脸上闪过一丝惊喜。
7.All of them laughed with happiness, ____________________________ ________ (独立主格). 大家都开心地笑了起来,笑声回荡在房间里。
a spark of surprise flashed across her face
chuckles lingering around the house
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8.The warm golden sunlight, flooding in through the window, together with love between my family, warmed us. 窗外洒进来的温暖的金色阳光和我们家人之间的爱,温暖了我们。
9.I got to know my dad better and learned to love him more, making tough things more manageable and life sweeter. 我更加了解了我的父亲并且更爱他,这让艰难的事情变得更容易处理,生活更甜蜜。
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“Mom, I’m deeply sorry for my rudeness. It won’t happen again, I promise! Would you forgive me?” “You’re always my little girl!” Mom eyed Jenny tenderly. As the setting sun cast a golden glow on both of their faces, they embraced each other tightly.
“妈妈,我为我的粗鲁深表歉意。这种情况不会再发生了,我保证!您能原谅我吗?”“你永远是我的小女孩!”妈妈温柔地注视着珍妮。她们紧紧地抱在一起,夕阳投下的金色微光照在她们两个人的脸上。
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友情类是读后续写的热考主题之一,常涉及两个人或其中一人遇到了某种困难或朋友之间存在某种误会。续写部分往往是如何帮助 对方或在对方的帮助下如何解决问题,促进了友谊或弥补破碎的关系。
主题 5
友情感悟
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1.I could only apologize for my ignoring him and I hoped that I could make it up by helping him with his studies. 我只能为我无视他而道歉,并希望我能通过帮助他学习来弥补。
2.I was standing right next to her, but she didn’t even acknowledge me at all. 我就站在她身边,可是她理都不理我。
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3.Seeing him lying helplessly in bed, I felt a sense of sympathy and mercy welling up in my heart. 看着他无助地躺在床上,我既同情又怜悯。
4.Suddenly Mary came up, _____________________________________ (非谓语). 突然玛丽走近,向我投来愤怒和失望的目光。
casting me an angry and disappointed look
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■友谊带来的改变
5.She felt lonely and hopeless until I approached her warmly. From then on we two often learned together and shared happiness and sorrow. 在我热情地接近她之前,她感到孤独和绝望。从此我们两个经常一起学习,分享快乐和悲伤。
6.It was her company and encouragement that not only made me happy, but also boosted my confidence.
正是她的陪伴和鼓励不仅让我开心,还增强了我的自信。
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7.________________, knowing kindness and friendship bloomed in both of our hearts. 我坚定地点了点头,知道善良和友谊之花在我们的心中盛开。
8.From that day on, we were always together. We were like peas and carrots. 从那天起,我们一直在一起。我们形影不离。
9.Be a rainbow in somebody else’s cloud. So, give your friends a hand when they need it. And this will make you feel good, too. 要成为别人云中的一道彩虹。所以,当朋友需要帮助时要施以援手。这也会让你感觉很开心。 (外研必1)
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10.There’s just one sure delight, friendship, like sunrise, warm and bright. 只有友谊这种快乐像日出一样温暖而明亮。
11.Helping a new friend made Joe feel good inside, for, although the baseball cap did matter much to him, he knew there were more important things in life. 帮助一个新朋友让乔感觉棒极了,因为尽管棒球帽对他来说很重要,但他知道生活中还有更重要的东西。
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Kendra felt a rush of happiness as Elise’s appreciation washed over her. “Can I join in next time?” Elise asked eagerly. “Of course!” Kendra felt featherlight. The gift not only brought a smile to Elise’s face but also sowed the seeds of a new friendship. 感受到 Elise 的感激之情时,Kendra 很高兴。“我下次可以参加吗?”Elise急切地问。“当然!”Kendra 心情轻松愉快。礼物不仅让 Elise 的脸上露出了笑容,还播下了新友谊的种子。
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改变成长型的续写包括知识的提高,更涉及情感、态度和价值观方面的改变成长,如浙江高考的打工挣钱。场景:学校生活、家庭生活及工作(劳动)。最终的升华为:健康的生活方式、积极的生活态 度、自我成长等。
主题 6
改变成长
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■面临抉择/遇到困难 挑战和消极情绪(发愁/无助/不公平/不情愿/失望)
1.___________________________ (非谓语), I couldn’t eat or sleep. I had been weeping and missing my family. 我孤单无助,吃不下饭,睡不着觉。我一直哭,想念我的家人。
2.Unwilling to hand in all my earnings,I was consumed by a mixture of sadness and disappointment. 我不愿交出我所有的收入,我既悲伤又失望。
Feeling lonely and helpless
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3.After a night’s tossing and turning, I brought up the topic to Mom and finally decided to study art. 经过一夜的辗转反侧,我向妈妈提出了这个话题,最终决定学习艺术。
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■改变成长+过程中变化的心情 消极→积极(矛盾冲突解决过程)
4.I realized I could even be whatever I wanted to be. This taught me that I could change myself. 我意识到我甚至可以成为我想成为的任何人。这让我明白,我可以改变自己。
5.Inspired by him to conquer my fear, ____________________________ ______________, determined to make a change. 我被他鼓励,克服了恐惧,信心满满地走向教室,决心做出改变。
I walked confidently towards the classroom
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6.I turned into a confident Denise, one who was not scared of being teased any more, and one who could enjoy a day with more friends. 我变成了一个自信的Denise,一个不再害怕被取笑的人,一个能和更多朋友一起快乐一天的人。
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7.I was more focused on my study. I listened attentively in class and got actively involved in school activities. It was not surprising that I made significant progress in my academic performance. 我更专心学习,在课堂上认真听讲,并积极参与学校活动。我的学习成绩取得显著进步不足为奇。
8.Thanks to the experience, he decided never to quit. He regained his confidence and decided to meet the challenge bravely. 由于这次经历,他决定永不放弃。他重拾信心,决定勇敢迎接挑战。
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9.This experience serves as a reminder that change, however scary, holds the promise of growth in our shared journey. 这次经历提醒我们,改变无论多么可怕,都承载着我们共同历程中成长的希望。
10.Grateful to Mr. Taylor, he knew deep down in his heart that it was his teacher’s trust that allowed him to embrace his new self and others. 他对泰勒先生心存感激,在内心深处,他知道正是老师的信任让他能接纳新的自我和他人。
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The confidence registering on my face contributed to my friendship with some classmates who saw my real self. I knew that the only label that mattered to me was my own—how I “label” myself. 我脸上流露的自信促成了我和一些同学的友谊,他们看到了真实的我。我知道对我来说唯一重要的标签是我自己——我如何给自己“贴标签”。
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优秀品行类的续写常通过一个故事体现与诚实、诚信相关的主题。
■这样构思情节
主题 7
优秀品行
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■进退两难的困境和纠结情绪
1.________________________________________. Feeling she didn’t deserve the prize, she had a sleepless night for the first time in her life. 一阵愧疚和后悔将她的快乐一扫而光。由于觉得自己不配获奖,她有生以来第一次失眠了。
2.What a dilemma! Could I keep it and get all kinds of stuff for me and my family? It wouldn’t be too bad for me to keep it, right? Thoughts ran through my mind. 进退两难!我能留下(钱),给我和我的家人买各种东西吗?留着钱对我来说不是什么坏事,对吧?各种念头在我脑海中盘旋。
A wave of guilt and regret swept away her joy
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3.I froze. It would ruin our friendship to say “No”, wouldn’t it? Honesty came first, of course, but I had no intention to refuse him. 我愣住了。说 “不”会破坏我们的友谊,不是吗?当然,诚实第一,但我无意拒绝 他。
4.When thinking how sad the young lady would be at the loss of her phone, ____________________________. 想着年轻的女士丢了手机该有多伤心的时候,他满心愧疚和羞愧。
he was full of guilt and shame
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■做出正确选择的动作、结果和情感描写
5.As the sun dipped below the horizon, casting long shadows on the playground, Joey made his choice. He now knew what he had to do and he was in a hurry to get it done. 当夕阳西下,在操场上投下长长的影子时,乔伊做出了选择。 他此时知道他必须要做的事,也急着去完 成。
6.Tina, blushing with embarrassment, started to stammer out the truth. 蒂娜尴尬得满脸通红,开始结结巴巴地说出真相。
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7.Handing back the handphone to her and seeing her smile happily, Keith realized that honesty was indeed the best policy. 基思将手机还给她,看到她开心的笑容,他意识到诚实确实是上策。
8.His feet were quick, decisive, taking him straight back to the store like an arrow. Mr. Dow was just inside the door, smiling. Suddenly, blindly, Joey held out the pipe. His words seemed lost on the way to his mouth but he finally found his voice, “I didn’t mean to take it.” 他敏捷果断,像箭一样径直跑回了商店。Dow先生就站在门口微笑。突然,乔伊不加思考地拿出烟斗。他话到嘴边却不见了,但最终开口说:“我不是故意拿烟斗的。”
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9.What happened today made me realize that forgiveness is a kind of virtue. 今天发生的事情让我意识到宽恕是一种美德。
10.No new bicycle could have made me feel as good about myself as I felt that day because I passed a very important test—a lost and found test of my own character. 没有一辆新自行车能让我对自己的感觉像那天那样好,因为我通过了一项非常重要的测试——对我自己品格的失而复得的考验。
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Tyler came out with his face lit up by the bike. I immediately explained in a weak voice and made a sincere apology. To my surprise, instead of getting mad at me, he forgave me with a broad smile, hugging me softly and even offering to lend me his bike. Feeling relieved on the way home, I came to the realization that to live a life of honesty and integrity is a responsibility of every decent person. 泰勒走出来看到自行车,脸上露出高兴的神情。我立刻小声解释并真诚地道歉。令我惊讶的是,他没生气,反而满面笑容地原谅了我。他轻轻拥抱我,甚至主动说把自行车借给我。在回家的路上,我如释重负,我意识到每个正派人都应诚实正直。
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当主人公陷入某种险境, 脱险的办法可以是自救,也可能是他人的帮助。如浙江高考的拍摄北极熊时遇险;父子骑马时迷路;骑车游玩遇狼后脱险。
■这样构思情节
主题 8
险境逃生
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1.The once clear trail now seemed to be disappearing into a maze of winding paths, leaving us uncertain of the direction we should take. 曾经畅通无阻的小径此时似乎消失在迷宫般的蜿蜒小路中,让我们不确定该走哪里。
2.Standing in the thick woods, I struggled with dozens of questions. My phone was dead. ______________________________________________
_______________我站在密林中,纠结了几十个问题。我的手机没电了。我该怎么离开这里呢?要是附近有狼怎么办?
How am I going to get out of here? What if there are wolves nearby?
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3.I was sinking! I couldn’t breathe! “Help!” My mouth filled with water; I struggled against being drawn deeper, deeper down. 我要沉下去了!透不过气了!“救命啊!”海水灌进嘴里,我挣扎着不被淹没。(北师选必3)
4.I had almost no strength left; my fingers could hardly move; my mouth, opening and closing, filled with salt water. I became colder and colder. I raised my head for the last time, then I sank.我的力气已经消耗殆尽,手指变得僵硬;我的嘴一张一合,灌满了咸咸的海水,我越来越冷。我最后一次抬起头来,之后便沉了下去。(北师选必3)
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5.When buried under snow, Scott drifted between terror and panic, hoping that his friend Paul was not buried so deep.当斯科特被埋在雪下时,他惊恐万分,希望他的朋友保罗没有被埋得那么深。
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6.I screamed. “I’m here! Down in the valley!” Robin peered over the edge and his eyes widened in horror at the sight of my overturned car. 我尖叫起来:“我在这里!在山谷里!” 罗宾从崖边看到我翻倒的车,惊恐地睁大了眼睛。
7.The pain in my chest and leg was unbearable. I closed my eyes, trying to ignore the pain and conserve my energy. __________________________ as I waited, hoping for a miracle. 我的胸和腿疼得难以忍受。我闭上 眼,努力忽略痛苦并保存体力。时间似乎停滞了,我等待着,希望奇迹发生。
Time seemed to stand still
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8.He shook off the snow, moved snow away with bare hands, and managed to pull himself out. 他抖掉雪,徒手把雪移开,然后设法爬了出来。
9.Time ticked away slowly. Just as he was feeling himself fading away, the rescue team arrived. 时间慢慢流逝。就在他感觉要死了的时候,救援队赶到了。
10.Without thinking too much, _____________________, which broke open with a loud crash. We stumbled inside. Luckily, I found enough dry wood to start a fire. 我来不及多想,用力踢门,门砰的一声开了。我们跌跌撞撞地进了屋。幸运的是,我找到了足够的干柴来生火。
I kicked the door hard
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■脱险后的动作和情感描写(如释重负、高兴、感激等)
11.After a roll call confirmed that all were safe and sound, they relaxed, __________________________________________. 点名确认所有人都安然无恙后,大家才松了一口气,笑啊,哭啊,互相拥抱着。(译林必3)
12.Never had I had such a thrilling yet dangerous vacation before. The special trip to the Wild West was deeply impressed in my mind. 我以前从未度过如此惊险而又危险的假期。这次西部大荒特别之旅给我留下了深刻的印象。
laughing, crying and hugging each other
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13.Our being lost added a special taste to my adventurous vacation which I would remember all my life. 我们的迷路给我的冒险假期增添了一种特别的滋味,我将终生难忘。
14.From this experience, I learn that freedom is important but safety counts more. 从这次经历中, 我意识到自由诚可贵,安全价更高。
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15.Finally, we went out of the forest that trapped us. What an unforgettable experience! It turns out that there’s always a way out of any difficult situation as long as we stay calm. 最后,我们走出了困住我们的森林。多么难忘的经历啊! 事实证明,只要我们保持冷静,就总有办法摆脱困境。
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Now we have another chance to look up at the stars of New Orleans, their beauty inspiring us and giving us confidence to move on. 现在我们又能仰望新奥尔良的星空了。星空的美鼓舞着我们,让我们有信心继续前行。(外研必3)
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在这个主题中有时会写到危难之际,利用所学急救知识,成功救人脱离生命危险的故事;有时会写到某建筑楼内突发火灾,消防员/群众舍己救人的故事;有时会写到群众/路人遇到有人不幸溺水,鼓足勇气跳入水中施救的故事。
主题 9
救人脱险
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1.Tom noticed the flame was reaching up. ________________, he stood rooted to the spot. 汤姆注意到火势越来越大,他吓呆了。
2.To my horror, a big wave came and threw me from the boat. I was seized by a strong sense of hopelessness, struggling in the water, ___________________________________. 令我惊恐的是,一个大浪来了,把我抛下船。我绝望极了,在水里挣扎着,用尽全身的力气挥动双手。
Frozen with fear
waving my hands with all my strength
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3.My leg was badly injured. My aunt was calling to seek some help, and my sister was full of injury. 我的腿受了重伤。姨妈在打电话求救,姐姐浑身是伤。
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■与救人脱险相关的动作和情感描写
4.After smashing the door open with a rock, ________________________ ____________________.
他用石头砸开车门后,抓住简的胳膊,把她救了出来。
5.Hearing the screams for help, __________________________________
___________ and ______________________________________ (三连动作链). 亨利听到求救声,跑到河边,脱下衣服,毫不犹豫地跳进河里。
he grabbed Jane’s arms and helped her out
Henry ran to the riverside, threw off his clothes
jumped into the water without hesitation
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6.He dived under the drowning woman, pushing her upward and finally toward the shore. Eventually, a bystander managed to approach and grab the woman’s hand, pulling her to shore. 他潜入溺水女子的身下,将她向上推,最后推向岸边。最终,一名旁观者靠近抓住了女子的手,把她拉到了岸上。
7.____________________, she climbed down the hill to the place where Lily was lying. Horror and pain registered on Lily’s face. No time to waste! 她迅速且小心地爬下山坡,来到莉莉躺着的地方。莉莉脸上流露出恐惧和痛苦。没时间了!
Quickly but carefully
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8.I didn’t hesitate to do CPR. Finally, I saw one of his eyes blink. What a relief! 我毫不迟疑地做了心脏复苏。最后,我看他的一只眼睛眨了 眨。终于松了口气!
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9.With the dull sky clearing up, they breathed in the fresh air with abandon, feeling the rebirth of life. 沉闷的天空渐渐放晴,他们尽情地呼吸着新鲜空气,感受着生命的重生。
10.Thankfully, she regained consciousness shortly after. Many onlookers gave him a thumbs-up. Truly, it was a rescue job well done on such a warm afternoon. 谢天谢地,她很快就恢复了意识。许多围观者都向他竖起了大拇指。确实,在如此温暖的下午,救援工作做得棒极了。
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11.As she regained consciousness, she saw Hill’s tearful face and Mrs. Smith’s comforting presence. She knew her quick-thinking daughter and reliable neighbor had saved her life, bonding their little family and the community that supported them. 当她恢复意识时,她看到了希尔泪流满面的脸和在场的史密斯夫人。她知道她思维敏捷的女儿和可靠的邻居救了她的命,将他们的小家庭和支持他们的社区联系在一起。
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A ladder was quickly brought, and Fred mounted it, pushing his way into the room where the poor child lay nearly choked to death with smoke. He woke her with some difficulty, carried her to the window and then brought her down the ladder. 他们很快拿来梯子,弗雷德爬上梯子进入房间,那个可怜的孩子躺在那里,快被烟呛死了。他费了好大劲才把她叫醒,把她抱到窗前,然后带着她从梯子上下来。
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人和动物的主题备受命题者青睐,如2023浙江高考1月的救助蜂鸟。该主题一般从两个角度展开:一是人和动物和谐相处;二是人类与动物产生冲突,尤其人遇到凶猛的动物时,身处险境首先沉着、冷静地与动物周旋,再向别人求助或自救,最后成功脱险的故事。
主题 10
人与动物
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1.____________________________ (with结构), we waved our hands wildly screaming “Help”. We were running and were trapped to a narrow corner.熊在后面追,我们疯狂地挥舞着双手,尖叫着“救命”。我们跑着跑着被困在一个狭窄的角落里。
2.When a tiger was approaching me, I froze with terror, too scared to move an inch. 当一只老虎向我靠近时,我吓呆了,一动也不敢动。
3.When I saw the wolf, I felt so scared that my throat tightened and __________________. 当我看到狼时,我吓得喉咙发紧,膝盖发软。
With the bear chasing behind
my knees felt weak
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4.The puppy turned his head, looked into my eyes, and licked my face with his wet, warm tongue. 小狗转过头来,看着我的眼睛,用它湿 润、温暖的舌头舔我的脸。
5.Appearing to be feeling better, the deer slowly raised his head and gave a gentle kiss to Becky’s hand as if to express thanks. What a warm scene! 鹿似乎感觉好些了,它慢慢抬起头,轻轻地吻了吻贝基的手,好像在道谢。多么温暖的一幕啊!
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6.From time to time I look at the photo as a reminder to show respect to all animals. After all, it is we who are the visitors to their world. 我不时地看这张照片,以此提醒自己要尊重所有的动物。毕竟我们才是它们世界的访客。(外研必1)
7.It’s not only we who take care of them, but most of the time, it’s they that heal us. 不仅仅是我们要照顾它们,大多数的时候,是它们治愈我们。
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8.Despite the chill winter wind, their home where the two lovely dogs played happily was filled with the warmth of love and reunion. 尽管冬风凛冽,他们家里的两只可爱的小狗快乐地玩耍,家里满是爱和团聚的温暖。
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Instantly the girl returned home after school, the puppy leaped to its feet, barking for joy and his eyes sparkling with excitement. He sniffed and licked her, his tail wagging. 女孩一放学回家,小狗就跳了起来,高兴地叫着,眼睛里闪烁着兴奋的光芒。它嗅了嗅女孩,舔了舔她,尾巴摇晃着。
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$$One, with the bear chasing behind, we wave our hands wildly, screaming, help. We were running and were trap to a narrow corner, too. When a tiger was approaching me, I froze with terror, too scared to move an inch. Three, when I saw the wolf, I felt so scared that my throat tightened in my niece, felt weak for the puppy, turned his head, looked into my eyes and licked my face with his wet, warm tongue. Five, appearing to be feeling Better, the dear slowly raised his head and gave a gentle kisses to Becky's hand, is if to express thanks, what a warm scene. Six, from time to time I look at the photo was a reminder to show respect to all animals. After all, IT is we who are the visitors to their world? Seven, it's not only we who take care of them, but most of the time it's stated health aid. Despite the chill, winter went their home where the two lovely dogs played happily, was filled with the warmth of love in reunion nine. Instantly, the girl returned home after school. The puppy lead to its feet, marking for joy in his eyes, Sparkling with excitement, he sniffin licked his tail wagging.
One. I could only apologize for my ignoring him, and I hope that I could make IT up by helping him with his studies. Two, I was standing right next to her, but he didn't even acknowledge me at all. Three, seeing him lying, helpless, sly in bed, I felt a sense of sympathy and mercy welling up in my heart, for suddenly mary came up casting me and angry and disappointed. look. Five SHE felt lonely and hopeless until I approach her warmly, from then only too often learn together and shared happiness and sorrow. Six IT was her accompany and encouragement that not only made me happy, but also boosted my confidence. Seven, I know IT firmly knowing kindness and friendship bloomed in both of our hearts. AIDS, from that day on, we were always together. We were like peas and carrots. Nine, be a rainbow in somebody else is cloud. So give your friends a hand when they needed, and this will make you feel good too. Ten. there's just one sure delight, friendship, like sunrise, warm, bright. eleven. Helping a new friend may joe feel good inside for although the baseball caped matter much to him, he knew there were more important things in life. Twelve, kendra felt to a rush of happiness as allies appreciation washed over her. Can I join the next time? At least ask eagerly, of course, can dra felt further light the gift not only brought a smile to release his face, but also sowed the seeds of a new friendship.
One. feeling lonely and helpless, I couldn't need her sleep. I had been weeping in missing my family. Two. unwilling to hand in all . my earnings, I was consumed by a mixture of sadness and disappointment. three. After a nightsy in turning, I brought up the topic to mom and finally decided to study art for I realized I could even be whatever I wanted to be. This taught me that I could change myself. Five, inspired by him to conquer my fear, I walked confidently towards the classroom, determined to make a change. Six, I turned into a comfort in tennis, one who was not scared of being teased anymore, and one who could enjoy a day with more friends. Seven, I was more focused on my study. I listened attentively in class and got actively involved in school activities. IT was not surprising that I made significant progress in my academic performance. Aides, thanks to the experience, he decided never to quit. He regained his confidence and decided to meet the chAllenge bravely. Nine. this experience serves as a reminder that change, however scary, holds the promise of growth in our share journey. Ten. grateful to mr. Taylor. he knew deep down in his heart that IT was his teachers trust that allowed to embraces his new self and others. Eleven, the confidence register ing on my face contributed to my friendship with some classmates who saw my real self. I knew that the only label that matter to me was my own, how I labelled myself.
One. my mind was raising, trying to think of a solution to help her. Two. without thinking. Twice. I asked my father to pull over beside her, which my father did immediately, as we approached the lady, her face LED up with a glimmer of hope. Three out of nowhere, matt pulled up along side us and asked if he could be of assistance. His friendly smile almost immediately eased our worry . for grateful tears well up in . her eyes as he looked at the strangers who had come to array with a trembling hand, SHE extended the apples towards the three drivers, five in a flash. With tears welling up in my eyes, I was touched beyond words. Six, we usually think that our lives are defined by great moments, but I now realized that great moments catches by surprise because they often seem quite small. Seven. I made up my mind to pay . IT forward just as the same goes, roses given fragrance in hand. eight. The memory of very self lessons would stay with us forever, serving as a reminder for us to always be open to helping others in their time of need. Nine. on the way home, appreciating the flaming sunset. I felt the breeze whispering in my ears. Only when you help those in need is life meaningful. Ten, I wish I could have done more for you. Such simple words really Carried me me away. IT was this total stranger who restored my faith in humanity. Eleven, IT was then that we had a profound understanding of the saying what you give away will invariably come back to you in another form. twelve. Tommy came closer and carefully gave the woman his biz. Her eyes opened wide and surprise, then filled with tears. Thank you. SHE whispered Tommy about his head, turned around and went back home. He was moving faster and faster. And finally he started to run. Strange energy filling his body made him feel like he could fly. When he finally start, he was breathing heavily, but he didn't feel tired. He smiled happily. IT was a wonderful feeling and nothing could stop IT.