附录 短文改错-【十年高考】备战2026年高考英语真题分类解析与应试策略（Word版）

附录　短文改错 　　Passage 1 Last week,I saw a program about Chongqing hotpot on TV.I was curious planned a special one-day trip there with a friend of .Our fast train was with passengers.attendant gave us some travel brochures about Chongqing.When we arrived,we went straighta famous restaurant and ordered dishes,which tasted .The atmosphere made the meal all the more .Hotpot is meant for families and friends to sit together,dip everything they like this in one pot,and sharedfriendship and love. 【语篇导读】本文是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了作者品尝重庆火锅的经历。 第一处:but→and　考查连词。根据语意可知,上下文是顺接关系,不是转折关系,故把but改为and。 第二处:me→mine　考查代词。表示“我的一个朋友”要用a friend of mine。 第三处:packing→packed　考查被动语态。be packed with意为“挤满着”。 第四处:A→An　考查冠词。attendant是以元音音素开头的单词,所以用不定冠词An。 第五处:a famous restaurant前面加into　考查介词。went是不及物动词,后面必须有一个介词才能接宾语,故在a famous restaurant前面加to,表示“去到某个地方”。 第六处:greatly→great　考查形容词。taste是连系动词,后面接形容词作表语。 第七处:here→there　考查副词。此处指的是在饭店里的气氛,所以把here改为there。 第八处:enjoyed→enjoyable　考查形容词。all the more表示“更加;愈加”,后接形容词,此处形容词作宾语补足语。 第九处:删除this　考查代词。此处是定语从句,省略了作宾语的关系代词that,所以this多余。 第十处:shared→share　考查动词。此处的share和前面的sit,dip并列,所以用动词原形。 Passage 2 I used to afraid of insects,but last Friday􀆳s biology class a big change in me.In that class,Miss Zhao,our biology teacher,showed insects on stamps.The bees, and many other insects looked lovely and on the stamps.Miss Zhao told us the names of the insects described their living habits.She even played some recordings of their singing, was fun.Now,I􀆳ve come to love those of small living things.In the evening,when I take walk in the school garden,the singing of insects more meaningful to me. 【语篇导读】本文是一篇记叙文。作者过去害怕昆虫,但是老师的一堂生物课使作者逐渐爱上了它们。 第一处:afraid前加be　考查系动词。afraid是形容词,前面应该加系动词be。 第二处:make→made　考查时态。根据上文提到的时间“last Friday􀆳s”可知,句子要用一般过去时。 第三处:we→us　考查代词。此处作动词showed的宾语,所以用代词的宾格。 第四处:butterfly→butterflies　考查名词复数。根据前面的bees可知,该词也要用复数形式。 第五处:beautifully→beautiful　考查形容词。此处和lovely并列作系动词looked的表语,所以也要用形容词形式。 第六处:or→and　考查连词。谓语动词told和described是并列关系,不是选择关系,所以把or改为and。 第七处:what→which　考查定语从句。此处引导非限制性定语从句并在从句中作主语,所以用which。 第八处:删除of　考查介词。those在此是限定词,修饰small living things,后面不加of。 第九处:walk前的the→a　考查冠词。take a walk意为“散步”,为固定搭配。 第十处:become→becomes　考查时态和主谓一致。根据上文的take可知,时态是一般现在时,主语是the singing,所以把become改为becomes。 Passage 3 Last Friday my mom decided to color hair.She studied with all the hair products at the drugstore.The color she came in a box which had a picture of a woman hair color looked just perfect.Mom was suresame color would look great on her.She put the new color on her hair sat still for 30 minutes,just as the directions . However,instead of the brownish red hair she had hoped for,she got purple hair.She went right into the shower to it,but it was no use.At least one thing proved :the color wouldn􀆳t wash out. 【语篇导读】本文是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了作者妈妈的一次染头发的经历。 第一处:his→her　考查代词。此处指代上文的my mom,所以用her。 第二处:删除with　考查动词。study表示“研究”时是及物动词,with多余。 第三处:choose→chose　考查时态。句子讲述的是过去发生的事情,所以用一般过去时。 第四处:that→whose　考查定语从句。分析句子成分可知,关系词在定语从句中作定语,所以用whose。 第五处:same前加the　考查冠词。same表示“相同的”,前面必须加定冠词the。 第六处:or→and　考查连词。“put the new color on her hair”和“sat still for 30 minutes”是并列关系,不是选择关系,所以把or改为and。 第七处:saying→said　考查谓语动词。“as the directions...”是方式状语从句,say是谓语动词,由于是讲述过去发生的事情,所以用一般过去时。 第八处:final→finally　考查副词。此处修饰动词got,所以用副词形式。 第九处:washing→wash　考查非谓语动词。此处作目的状语,to是动词不定式的符号,所以用动词原形。 第十处:truth→true　考查形容词。prove是连系动词,后接形容词作表语。 Passage 4 My father often took me to his hospital when I was off my school.He showed me how his medical instruments used.I felt so to him.However,after I went to high school, somehow I distant from him.I was unwilling talk with him and often disobeyed his rule of not out with my friends too late.The disagreement was sharp that neither he nor I knew to settle it.One day,he talked with me hoped to mend our relations.With the efforts made by sides,we began to understand each other better. 【语篇导读】本文是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了作者和爸爸之间出现分歧并最终相互理解的过程。 第一处:删除my　be off school意为“不上学;休学”,中间不加冠词。 第二处:was→were　主语his medical instruments 是复数,所以把was改成were。 第三处:closely→close　feel是连系动词,所以用形容词作表语,故把closely改为close。 第四处:become→became　此处讲述的是过去发生的事情,所以用一般过去时。 第五处:unwilling后面加to　be unwilling to do sth意为“不愿意做某事”,缺少动词不定式符号to。 第六处:stay→staying　of是介词,后接动词时要用其-ing形式。 第七处:too→so　根据下文的“that neither he nor I knew...”可知,此处为so...that...引导的结果状语从句,所以把too改为so。 第八处:what→how　此处是“疑问词+to do”结构,动词settle有自己的宾语,所以把what改为how,表示“如何解决它”。 第九处:or→and　talked和hoped是并列关系,不是选择关系,所以把or改为and。 第十处:all→both　根据上文可知,此处指的是作者和他爸爸两个人,所以把all改为both。 Passage 5 We all know that cycling is a exercise.A doctor tells me people who the longest are dancers and cyclists.Maybe it is because the combination of fresh air,smooth movement and exercise. you ride a bicycle,you don􀆳t use petrol.So are not producing carbon dioxide and not air pollution.Just see how cars have been taken over our cities.They often run at high speeds, may put our lives in danger.And there traffic jams,too.Our cities will be better places if we replace cars with . 【语篇导读】本文是一篇说明文。介绍骑自行车带来的好处。 第一处:greatly→great　考查形容词。根据不定冠词a和后面的名词exercise可知,此处需要用形容词修饰。 第二处:lives→live　考查主谓一致。根据前面的先行词people和后面的dancers and cyclists都可以判定,此处定语从句的谓语动词需要用复数形式。 第三处:because后加of　考查介词。because后跟句子,而because of后跟名词或短语。根据后面的名词短语可知,应该用because of。 第四处:Whether→When　考查状语从句引导词。结合句意可知应该用When。whether意为“是否”。 第五处:they→you　考查代词。结合上一句内容可知,此处用第二人称形式进行描述,表示“你骑自行车的时候,你就不会产生二氧化碳和空气污染”。 第六处:cause→causing　考查并列结构。结合前面的not producing和and可知,此处应该采用相同的结构形式。 第七处:去掉been　考查动词语态。此处表示“汽车占据了我们的城市”,并非被动含义,故been删除。 第八处:what→which　考查定语从句。本句为非限制性定语从句,句中缺少主语,指物,故用which引导。 第九处:were→are　考查时态。根据上下文时态可知,本句应用一般现在时。故将were改为are。 第十处:bicycle→bicycles　考查名词复数。此处表示“用自行车代替汽车”,前面使用的是cars,故此处也应采用复数形式bicycles。 Passage 6 Last week our teacher asked us to fill in a questionnaire.One of the questions :Who will you go in times of trouble? Here are the results.Many students say they will talk to their or classmates because they􀆳re of the same age and can understand each other.Some will turn out to their parents or teachers for help.Only a choose to deal with the problems on own.Their answers also show that they dislike to others.They very much to themselves.In my opinion,where in trouble,we should seek help from those we trust . 【语篇导读】本文为记叙文。老师进行了一次问卷调查:当你遇到麻烦时,你通常向谁求助?学生们的答案主要有三个。 第一处:are→is　考查主谓一致。句子的主语是“One”,所以谓语动词用单数形式。 第二处:go后加to　考查介词。go是不及物动词,后面接to才能带宾语who。 第三处:friend→friends　考查名词复数。根据后面的“classmates”可知用复数形式。 第四处:删除turn后面的out　考查动词短语。turn to sb. for help“向某人求助”。 第五处:little→few　考查代词。此处指的是学生,学生是可数名词,所以用few。 第六处:our→their　考查代词。上下文出现的都是“their”,人称代词要保持一致。 第七处:talk→talking　考查非谓语动词。“dislike”后面用动词-ing形式作宾语。 只能接动词-ing形式作宾语的动词 请牢记下面口诀: 建议考虑盼原谅,承认推迟靠设想。 继续训练免错过,否认完成就欣赏。 坚持反对去冒险,禁止介意准逃亡。 即:consider,advise/suggest, look forward to,excuse/pardon; admit, put off/delay, fancy/imagine;keep on/keep, practice, avoid, miss;deny, finish, appreciate/enjoy; stick to, object to, risk; forbid, mind, permit/allow, escape。 第八处:kept→keep　考查动词时态。根据前面句子中的谓语动词可知,此处用一般现在时。 第九处:where→when/whenever　考查连接副词。根据句意可知,此处表示“每当;无论何时”。 第十处:mostly→most　考查副词。根据句意可知,此处表示“最信任的人”,most做副词,意为“最”,而mostly指的是“主要地;一般地;通常”。 Passage 7 I love doing housework.I always assist my parents in doing the after meals.I also water the flowers in the yard and up my own bedroom necessary.In my opinion,students can benefit a lot doing some housework.Firstly,doing housework helpful for us to be a responsible person.Also,it gives our parents more time to do what they are like and it improves the family relationship.What􀆳s ,doing housework can be a form of relaxation from study.That􀆳s view on housework.And this can inspire more thinking on the topic! 【语篇导读】本文是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了作者喜欢做家务以及对做家务的看法。 第一处:dish→dishes　考查固定短语。do the dishes洗碗。 第二处:tidying→tidy　考查谓语动词。分析句子结构可知,该词和water一起构成并列谓语,故用动词原形。 第三处:whatever→whenever　考查连词。根据句意可知,此处意为“必要时”,是whenever it is necessary的省略形式。 第四处:doing前面加from　考查固定搭配。benefit from...从……中获益,缺少介词from。 第五处:was→is　考查动词的时态。整篇文章的时态都是一般现在时,故把was改成is。 第六处:删除are　考查谓语动词。此处的like是动词,意为“喜欢”,故are多余。 第七处:most→more　考查固定搭配。what􀆳s more此外,是固定搭配。 第八处:mentally→mental　考查形容词。此处修饰名词relaxation,故用形容词形式。 第九处:our→my　考查代词。整篇文章都是在讲述作者的个人感受,故用my。 第十处:hopes→hope　考查祈使句。分析句子结构可知,本句是祈使句,故用动词原形。 Passage 8 Today I tried cooking a dish myself.I like eating tomatoes with eggs,and I thought it must to be easy to cook.My mom told me how to it.First I cut the tomatoes into pieces put them aside.Next I broke the eggs into a bowl and beat them quickly with .After that I poured oil into a pan and turned the stove.I waited patiently the oil was hot.Then I put the tomatoes and the beaten eggs into pan together.“Not that way,”my mom tried to stop us but failed.She was right.It didn􀆳t turn out as I had wished. 【语篇导读】本文是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了作者第一次做西红柿炒鸡蛋的经历。 第一处:simply→simple　修饰名词应用形容词。 第二处:frying→fried　表示“油炸的;油煎的”应用fried。 第三处:去掉must后面的to　must为情态动词,后面接动词原形。 第四处:preparing→prepare　动词不定式符号to后接动词原形。 第五处:but→and　此处前后两个分句之间为并列关系,故用and。 第六处:chopstick→chopsticks　chopstick为可数名词,这里应使用复数形式。 第七处:off→on　根据语境可知,将油倒入锅中,应该打开炉子,故使用turn on。 第八处:unless→until或till　根据句意“我耐心等待,直到油热为止”可知,应使用until或till。 第九处:在pan前加the　表特指,应加the。 第十处:us→me　文章描述的是作者本人做西红柿炒鸡蛋的经历。 Passage 9 Thank you for your letter,really made me happy.I􀆳m glad to know that you􀆳ve comeChina to learn kung fu in a school in my hometown.I􀆳m you􀆳ll have a good time.Actually,I to learn kung fu when I was seven years old,I have long been out of practice.Luckily,I will go home in two weeks for summer .Then I can spare some time to learn it again,that we can practice together on every day.Best of luck with learning kung fu in China.See you . 【语篇导读】本文是一篇记叙文。作者给他的朋友回信,很高兴听说他的朋友在学功夫,也很期待能和他一起学习中国功夫。 第一处:what→which　考查定语从句。句意:谢谢你的来信,你的信真的让我很开心。分析句子,逗号后的从句为非限制性定语从句,修饰先行词your letter,关系词在从句中作主语,指物,故将what改为which。 第二处:come后加to　考查固定搭配。句意:我很高兴知道你来中国在我家乡的一所学校学习功夫。此处come为不及物动词,后接宾语是需加相应介词。come to意为“来到”,故在come 和China之间加to。 第三处:surely→sure　考查形容词。句意:我相信你会玩得很开心的。分析句子成分可知,此处am后面需用形容词作表语,故将surely改为sure。 第四处:start→started　考查时态。句意:事实上,我七岁时就开始学功夫了。此处讲述的是7岁的时候的事情,动词应该用过去时,故将start改为started。 第五处:for→but/yet　考查连词。句意:但我早就不练习了。上文提到“我7岁开始学功夫”,后句提到“很久没有练习了”。此处前后应是转折关系,故将for改为but/yet。 第六处:vacations→vacation　考查名词。句意:幸运的是,两周后我就要回家过暑假。summer vacation意为“暑期”,故将vacations改为vacation。 第七处:such→so　考查副词。句意:然后我就可以抽出时间重新学习它,这样我们就可以每天一起练习。分析句子,此处应表示“以便;所以”,故将such改为so. 第八处:去掉on　考查介词。句意:我们就可以每天一起练习。介词on后接的是具体时间。every day意为“每一天”,前不能用任何介词修饰,所以删除on。 第九处:yours→your/you　考查代词。句意:祝你在中国学习功夫好运。分析句子成分可知,此处为learning的逻辑主语,所以把yours改为your/you。 第十处:sooner→soon　考查固定短语。句意:希望尽快见到你。See you soon 意为“希望尽快见到你”,故将sooner改为soon。 Passage 10 My mom is really with the health of everyone in our .In order to make all of us are in good health, and she makes specific plans for us.For example,every morning,my dad has to have bowl of egg soup while I to eat an apple.My dad like the soup and I don􀆳t enjoy apples.I tell my mom that if we􀆳re forced eat things,we may become ill.But insists on us eating healthy food.Understanding her good intentions,I eat all the food what is provided by Mom with appreciation. 【语篇导读】本文是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲述了“我”的妈妈非常关心家里人每个人的身体健康,并制定了具体的计划。 第一处:concerning→concerned　考查形容词。be concerned about表示“对……关心/担心”,为固定用法。 第二处:families→family　考查名词。此处表示“在我们的家庭中”,这里指的是一个家庭,故需要用单数形式。 第三处:surely→sure　考查短语搭配。make sure意为“确保,务必”,是固定搭配。 第四处:去掉and　考查连词。分析句子结构可知,前面的In order to make sure...部分为不定式短语作目的状语,后面的she makes specific plans for us为主谓宾结构,and用以连接相同的成分,此处前后并非相同的结构成分,and多余。 第五处:the→a　考查冠词。have a bowl of egg soup表示“喝一碗鸡蛋汤”,这里的a bowl of意为“一碗……”,表示数量,故用不定冠词a,并非特指。 第六处:had→have　考查时态。根据while前面分句的谓语动词has to可知,此处也应该用一般现在时描述当下的情形,故把had改为have。 第七处:don􀆳t→doesn􀆳t　考查主谓一致。本句主语为My dad,表示单数概念,由于需要采用一般现在时,故应该用doesn􀆳t。 第八处:forced后加to　考查非谓语动词。force意为“强迫”,短语be forced to do sth.表示“被迫去做某事”。 第九处:he→she　考查代词。此处表示“妈妈坚持让我们吃健康的食物”,故应该用表述女性的代词的单数形式she。 第十处:what→that　考查定语从句。分析句子结构可知,本句为定语从句,从句中缺少主语,指物,先行词是the food,且被all修饰,故用关系代词that引导。 Passage 11 I became in playing football thanks to a small accident.One afternoon I was in primary school,I was walking by the school playground.Suddenly football fell just in front of me almost hit me.I stopped the ball and kicked it back to the playground.To everyone􀆳s ,the ball went into the net.All the football on the playground cheered loudly, that I had a talent for football.From on,I started to play my football with classmates after school.I am a good player now. 【语篇导读】本文是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲述了小学时代的偶然事件让“我”喜欢上了踢足球。 第一处:interesting→interested　考查形容词。become interested in“对……感兴趣”。 -ed形容词与-ing形容词 encouraging 令人鼓舞的 encouraged 受到鼓舞的 astonishing令人惊呆的 astonished 惊呆的 surprising 令人惊奇的 surprised感到好奇的 moving 令人感动的 moved 感动的 frightening令人害怕的 frightened害怕的 terrifying令人恐惧的 terrified感到恐惧的 puzzling 令人困惑不解的 puzzled感到困惑的 satisfying令人满意的 satisfied感到满意的 tiring 令人厌倦的 tired感到厌烦的 amazing令人惊讶的 amazed感到惊讶的 exciting令人兴奋的 excited感到激动的 embarrassing令人尴尬的 embarrassed尴尬的 第二处:where→when　考查定语从句。先行词表示时间,关系词在定语从句中作时间状语,故用when。 第三处:football前面加a　考查冠词。单数可数名词需要用限定词,“一个”足球,用a。 第四处:but→and　考查并列连词。刚好落在“我”面前并且差点击中了“我”。此处表示并列关系,用and。 第五处:hardly→hard　考查副词。hardly“几乎不”;hard“用力地”。“我”用力踢回去,用hard。 第六处:surprising→surprise　考查固定短语。to one􀆳s surprise“让某人惊讶的是”。 第七处:player→players　考查名词。all“所有的”修饰名词复数,故用players。 第八处:say→saying　考查非谓语动词。句中已经有谓语动词cheered,故此处应该用非谓语动词,say与主语为主谓关系,用动词-ing 形式。 第九处:now→then　考查副词。此处表示从“那时起”,用from then on。 第十处:去掉football前的my　考查代词。play football为固定搭配,意为“踢足球”。 Passage 12 Since I was a kid,I􀆳ve considered different I would like to do.First,I wanted to be a fireman,whose uniform looked so .Then,when I was in the grade,I wanted to be a teacher because I liked my English teacher much.When I studied chemistry high school,I reconsidered my goal decided to be a doctor. were two reasons for the decision.One was that I was at the fact that a sick person could feel much more better after seeing a doctor.And the other that I wanted to help people in need. 【语篇导读】本文是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲述了“我”在不同时期想要做的职业。 第一处:job→jobs　考查名词单复数。job是可数名词,根据前面的different可知要用复数形式。 第二处:coolly→cool　考查形容词。look是连系动词,后面应用形容词作表语。 第三处:five→fifth　考查数词。根据语境以及grade可知,此处表示“第五”,应用序数词。 第四处:too→very/so　考查副词。此处表示“我非常喜欢我的英语老师”。too强调超出了必要的限度,所以应把too改为very或so。 第五处:chemistry后加in/at　考查介词。此处缺少表示“在……地方”的介词,由后面的high school可知,此处应加in或at。 第六处:or→and　考查连词。根据语境可知,reconsidered my goal和decided to be a doctor是并列关系,不是选择关系,所以应把or改为and。 第七处:They→There　考查固定句式。分析句子结构可知,本句是“There be...”结构,所以应把They改为There。注意首字母要大写。 第八处:amazing→amazed　考查形容词。amazed“惊奇的”,表示人的心理感受;amazing“令人惊奇的”,表示事物的特征。此处是修饰I,所以应用amazed。 第九处:删除more　考查比较级。better本身就是比较级,more多余。 第十处:is→was　考查时态。由全文时态可知,文章讲述的是过去发生的事情,所以应用一般过去时。 Passage 13 I􀆳ve had many dreams since I was a child.Now my dream is to a cafe.Though it may appear simple,it a lot of ideas and efforts.What I want is not just an cafe but a very special one.I want my cafe have a special theme such as like “Tang Dynasty”.In the cafe,customers will enjoy in the historical environment is created for them.If I succeed in one,I will open more.I wish to have a chain of cafes in many different .Each of my cafes will have a different theme and unique style. 【语篇导读】本文是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲述“我”梦想在多个城市开办主题咖啡厅。 第一处:opens→open　考查非谓语动词。分析句子结构可知,此处不定式短语作表语。 第二处:required→requires　考查动词的时态。文章整体是以一般现在时为主,因此用一般现在时。 第三处:ordinarily→ordinary　考查形容词。此处用形容词修饰名词cafe。句意:我想要的不仅是一家普通的咖啡馆。 第四处:have前加to　考查非谓语动词。want sb./sth.to do为固定结构,句意:我想让我的咖啡厅有特殊的主题。 第五处:去掉as后面的like　考查介词。such as为固定搭配,所以应去掉后面的介词like。 第六处:yourselves→themselves　考查代词。句子主语是customers,所以应为enjoy themselves,表示顾客们可以在跟历史相关的氛围中玩得愉快。 第七处:what→that/which　考查定语从句。分析句子结构可知,先行词为名词environment,后面从句中缺少主语,故用关系代词that/which。 第八处:manage→managing　考查非谓语动词。succeed in doing sth.为固定搭配。 第九处:city→cities　考查名词。city是可数名词,根据前面的different可知该词要用复数形式。 第十处:an→a　考查冠词。unique第一个音素不是元音,故用a。 Passage 14 During my last winter holiday,I went to countryside with my father to visit my grandparents.I a big change there.The first time I went there,they were living in a small house with dogs,ducks,and animals.Last winter when I went again,they had a big separate house to raise dozens of .They also had a small pond 或 they raised fish.My grandpa said last summer they earned quite a lot by the fish.I felt that their life had improved.At the end of our trip,I told my father that I planned to return for every two years, he agreed. Passage 15 When I was little, night was our family game night.After supper,we would play card games of all in the sitting room.As kid,I loved to watch cartoons,but no matter how many times I asked to them,my parents would not to let me.They would say to that playing card games would help my brain.Still I unwilling to play the games them sometimes.I didn􀆳t realize how right my parents until I entered high school.The games my parents taught me I was a child turned out to be very useful later in my life. Passage 16 It was Monday morning,and the writing class had just .Everyone was silent, to see who would be called upon to read his her paragraph aloud.Some of us were confident and eager take part in the class activity;others were nervous and anxious.I had done homework,but I was shy.I was afraid that to speak in front of a group of people.At that moment,I remembered that my father once said,“The classroom is a place for learning and that learning from textbooks,and as well.”,I raised my hand. Passage 17 In the summer holiday following my birthday,I took driving lessons.I still remember how hard first day was.Before getting into the car,I thought I had learned the instructor􀆳s orders, once I started the car,my mind blank.I forgot what he had said to me altogether.The instructor kept repeating the ,“Speed up!” “Slow down!” “ left!” I was so much nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left.A few minutes ,the instructor asked me to stop the car.It was a relief and I came to a stop just in the middle the road. Passage 18 Mr.and Mrs.Zhang work in our school.They live far from the school,and it takes them about hour and a half to go to work every day.In their spare time,they are in planting vegetables in their garden,is on the rooftop of their house.They often get up and water the vegetables together.They have also bought for some gardening tools.,they often get some useful from the Internet.When summer ,they will invite their students pick the fresh vegetables! Passage 19 When I look at this picture of myself,I realize of how fast time flies.I grown not only physically, also mentally in the past few years.About one month after this photo was ,I entered my second year of high school and a new member of the school music club.Around me in picture are the things were very important in my life at that time:car magazines and musical instruments.I enjoyed studying kinds of cars and planes,playing pop music,and collecting the music albums.This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of high school days. Passage 20 When I was a very young ,my father created a regular practice I remember well years .Every time he arrived home at end of the day,we􀆳d greet at the door.He would ask who we and pretend not to us.Then he and my mother would have had a drink while she prepared dinner and they would talk about his day and hers.While they ,my father would lift my sister and me up to sit the top of the fridge.It was both and frightening to be up there!My sister and I thought he was so cool for putting us there. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 附录　短文改错 答案P417　　　 　　Passage 1 (2024·全国甲,10分,难度★★★) Last week,I saw a program about Chongqing hotpot on TV.I was curious but planned a special one-day trip there with a friend of me.Our fast train was packing with passengers.A attendant gave us some travel brochures about Chongqing.When we arrived,we went straight a famous restaurant and ordered dishes,which tasted greatly.The atmosphere here made the meal all the more enjoyed.Hotpot is meant for families and friends to sit together,dip everything they like this in one pot,and shared friendship and love. 　　Passage 2 (2023·全国甲,10分,难度★★) I used to afraid of insects,but last Friday􀆳s biology class make a big change in me.In that class,Miss Zhao,our biology teacher,showed we insects on stamps.The bees,butterfly and many other insects looked lovely and beautifully on the stamps.Miss Zhao told us the names of the insects or described their living habits.She even played some recordings of their singing,what was fun.Now,I􀆳ve come to love those of small living things.In the evening,when I take the walk in the school garden,the singing of insects become more meaningful to me. 　　Passage 3 (2023·全国乙,10分,难度★★) Last Friday my mom decided to color his hair.She studied with all the hair products at the drugstore.The color she choose came in a box which had a picture of a woman that hair color looked just perfect.Mom was sure same color would look great on her.She put the new color on her hair or sat still for 30 minutes,just as the directions saying. However,instead of the brownish red hair she had hoped for,she final got purple hair.She went right into the shower to washing it,but it was no use.At least one thing proved truth:the color wouldn􀆳t wash out. 　　Passage 4 (2022·全国甲,10分,难度★★) My father often took me to his hospital when I was off my school.He showed me how his medical instruments was used.I felt so closely to him.However,after I went to high school,somehow I become distant from him.I was unwilling talk with him and often disobeyed his rule of not stay out with my friends too late.The disagreement was too sharp that neither he nor I knew what to settle it.One day,he talked with me or hoped to mend our relations.With the efforts made by all sides,we began to understand each other better. 　　Passage 5 (2022·全国乙,10分,难度★★★) We all know that cycling is a greatly exercise.A doctor tells me people who lives the longest are dancers and cyclists.Maybe it is because the combination of fresh air,smooth movement and exercise.Whether you ride a bicycle,you don􀆳t use petrol.So they are not producing carbon dioxide and not cause air pollution.Just see how cars have been taken over our cities.They often run at high speeds,what may put our lives in danger.And there were traffic jams,too.Our cities will be better places if we replace cars with bicycle. 　　Passage 6 (2021·全国甲,10分,难度★★) Last week our teacher asked us to fill in a questionnaire.One of the questions are:Who will you go in times of trouble? Here are the results.Many students say they will talk to their friend or classmates because they􀆳re of the same age and can understand each other.Some will turn out to their parents or teachers for help.Only a little choose to deal with the problems on our own.Their answers also show that they dislike talk to others.They kept very much to themselves.In my opinion,where in trouble,we should seek help from those we trust mostly. 　　Passage 7 (讲解 2021·全国乙,10分,难度★★) I love doing housework.I always assist my parents in doing the dish after meals.I also water the flowers in the yard and tidying up my own bedroom whatever necessary.In my opinion,students can benefit a lot doing some housework.Firstly,doing housework was helpful for us to be a responsible person.Also,it gives our parents more time to do what they are like and it improves the family relationship.What􀆳s most,doing housework can be a form of mentally relaxation from study.That􀆳s our view on housework.And hopes this can inspire more thinking on the topic! Passage 8 (讲解 2020·全国1,10分,难度★★★) Today I tried cooking a simply dish myself.I like eating frying tomatoes with eggs,and I thought it must to be easy to cook.My mom told me how to preparing it.First I cut the tomatoes into pieces but put them aside.Next I broke the eggs into a bowl and beat them quickly with chopstick.After that I poured oil into a pan and turned off the stove.I waited patiently unless the oil was hot.Then I put the tomatoes and the beaten eggs into pan together.“Not that way,”my mom tried to stop us but failed.She was right.It didn􀆳t turn out as I had wished. Passage 9 (讲解 2020·全国2,10分,难度★★) Thank you for your letter,what really made me happy.I􀆳m glad to know that you􀆳ve come China to learn kung fu in a school in my hometown.I􀆳m surely you􀆳ll have a good time.Actually,I start to learn kung fu when I was seven years old,for I have long been out of practice.Luckily,I will go home in two weeks for summer vacations.Then I can spare some time to learn it again,such that we can practice together on every day.Best of luck with yours learning kung fu in China.See you sooner. Passage 10 (讲解 2020·全国3,10分,难度★★) My mom is really concerning with the health of everyone in our families.In order to make surely all of us are in good health,and she makes specific plans for us.For example,every morning,my dad has to have the bowl of egg soup while I had to eat an apple.My dad don􀆳t like the soup and I don􀆳t enjoy apples.I tell my mom that if we􀆳re forced eat things,we may become ill.But he insists on us eating healthy food.Understanding her good intentions,I eat all the food what is provided by Mom with appreciation. Passage 11 (讲解 2019·全国1,10分,难度★★★) I became interesting in playing football thanks to a small accident.One afternoon where I was in primary school,I was walking by the school playground.Suddenly football fell just in front of me but almost hit me.I stopped the ball and kicked it hardly back to the playground.To everyone􀆳s surprising,the ball went into the net.All the football player on the playground cheered loudly,say that I had a talent for football.From now on,I started to play my football with classmates after school.I am a good player now. Passage 12 (讲解 2019·全国2,10分,难度★★) Since I was a kid,I􀆳ve considered different job I would like to do.First,I wanted to be a fireman,whose uniform looked so coolly.Then,when I was in the five grade,I wanted to be a teacher because I liked my English teacher too much.When I studied chemistry high school,I reconsidered my goal or decided to be a doctor.They were two reasons for the decision.One was that I was amazing at the fact that a sick person could feel much more better after seeing a doctor.And the other is that I wanted to help people in need. Passage 13 (讲解 2019·全国3,10分,难度★★) I􀆳ve had many dreams since I was a child.Now my dream is to opens a cafe.Though it may appear simple,it required a lot of ideas and efforts.What I want is not just an ordinarily cafe but a very special one.I want my cafe have a special theme such as like “Tang Dynasty”.In the cafe,customers will enjoy yourselves in the historical environment what is created for them.If I succeed in manage one,I will open more.I wish to have a chain of cafes in many different city.Each of my cafes will have a different theme and an unique style. Passage 14 (讲解 2018·全国1,10分,难度★★★) During my last winter holiday,I went to countryside with my father to visit my grandparents.I find a big change there.The first time I went there,they were living in a small house with dogs,ducks and another animals.Last winter when I went here again,they had a big separate house to raise dozens of chicken.They also had a small pond which they raised fish.My grandpa said last summer they earned quite a lot by sell the fish.I felt happily that their life had improved.At the end of our trip,I told my father that I planned to return for every two years,but he agreed. Passage 15 (讲解 2018·全国2,10分,难度★★) When I was little,Friday􀆳s night was our family game night.After supper,we would play card games of all sort in the sitting room.As the kid,I loved to watch cartoons,but no matter how many times I asked to watching them,my parents would not to let me.They would say to us that playing card games would help my brain.Still I unwilling to play the games for them sometimes.I didn􀆳t realize how right my parents are until I entered high school.The games my parents taught me where I was a child turned out to be very useful later in my life. Passage 16 (讲解 2018·全国3,10分,难度★★) It was Monday morning,and the writing class had just begin.Everyone was silent,wait to see who would be called upon to read his and her paragraph aloud.Some of us were confident and eager take part in the class activity;others were nervous and anxious.I had done myself homework,but I was shy.I was afraid that to speak in front of a larger group of people.At that moment,I remembered that my father once said,“The classroom is a place for learning and that include learning from textbooks,and mistake as well.”Immediate,I raised my hand. Passage 17 (讲解 2017·全国1,10分,难度★★★) In the summer holiday following my eighteen birthday,I took driving lessons.I still remember how hard first day was.Before getting into the car,I thought I had learned the instructor􀆳s orders,so once I started the car,my mind goes blank.I forgot what he had said to me altogether.The instructor kept repeating the word,“Speed up!” “Slow down!” “Turning left!” I was so much nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left.A few minutes late,the instructor asked me to stop the car.It was a relief and I came to a suddenly stop just in the middle on the road. Passage 18 (讲解 2017·全国2,10分,难度★★) Mr.and Mrs.Zhang all work in our school.They live far from the school,and it takes them about a hour and a half to go to work every day.In their spare time,they are interesting in planting vegetables in their garden,that is on the rooftop of their house.They often get up earlier and water the vegetables together.They have also bought for some gardening tools.Beside,they often get some useful informations from the Internet.When summer came,they will invite their students pick the fresh vegetables! Passage 19 (讲解 2017·全国3,10分,难度★★) When I look at this picture of myself,I realize of how fast time flies.I had grown not only physically,and also mentally in the past few years.About one month after this photo was took,I entered my second year of high school and become a new member of the school music club.Around me in picture are the things they were very important in my life at that time:car magazines and musical instruments.I enjoyed studying difference kinds of cars and planes,playing pop music,and collecting the late music albums.This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of your high school days. Passage 20 (2016·浙江,10分,难度★★) When I was a very young children,my father created a regular practice I remember well years late.Every time he arrived home at end of the day,we􀆳d greet her at the door.He would ask who we was and pretend not to knowing us.Then he and my mother would have had a drink while she prepared dinner and they would talk about his day and hers.While they chat,my father would lift my sister and me up to sit in the top of the fridge.It was both excited and frightening to be up there!My sister and I thought he was so cool for putting us there. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$