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满分练11　应用文写作(留言条·传统文化)+读后续写(礼物) 限时40分钟　 应用文写作　 　　假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Jack在体育课上扭伤脚踝。你帮他取回了熬制好的口服中药包,并附留言条,内容包括:1.简述药的功效;2.告知服药注意事项。 注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 Dear Jack, Best regards, Li Hua 美文诵读 Dear Jack, I’ve just fetched the Chinese herbal medicine for your ankle injury from the clinic.It helps promote blood circulation and relieve swelling (促进血液循环,缓解肿胀). Here are the instructions for you. The herbal medicine needs to be taken continuously for seven days,three times a day,one packet each time. Remember to heat the packet before taking the medicine so that the medicine can take better effect (更见效). During the treatment period, raw, cold, and spicy foods should be avoided. I wish you would recover fast and move freely as before. Best regards, Li Hua 读后续写　 　　阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 When I was 13, I had an awareness that moms shoulder a lot of responsibility without a lot of reward. My mom was no exception. She brought us to Union Station to help us buy Christmas presents for each other and for herself. Because of Mom, my siblings (兄弟姐妹) and I would get to experience the joy of giving. I wanted to find her something special. The pleasant smell of chocolate reached my nose and I wanted to stay. Normally, when we came here, the candy makers were what I wanted to see most, but today I had a mission. So, we walked on. We explored many stores selling jewelry, purses, toys, clothing and treats, but nothing caught my eye. I just wanted something unique for Mom. I didn’t know what, but I knew I would recognize it when I saw it. Meanwhile, I wondered even though she promised to not look while we went shopping, how would whatever I picked be a surprise? All of a sudden, there it was, the perfect gift for her! On one of the stands sat a figurine (小塑像) of a lion and lamb lying down together. It would go well with a drawing of a similar scene Mom had hung on the wall. I had heard her talk about how long she had owned the picture and who had drawn it for her. I knew it was very special. I turned the figurine over to check the price and couldn’t believe my eyes. I could afford it! Mom didn’t know it, but I had put some extra money in my pocket from babysitting the neighbor kids, so I had more money than what she had given me. But she was standing nearby. No way could I make the purchase without her knowing. A moment later, she noticed the very same figurine. I watched her eyes light up. She picked it up and turned it over. 注意:1.续写词数应为150个左右;2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 　　Then she put it down disappointedly after seeing the price. 　　I placed it under the tree and settled in to wait for Christmas morning. 原文基本要素 主要人物:I, Mom　次要人物:my siblings 原文情节线 妈妈带“我”和兄弟姐妹去商场买圣诞节礼物,“我”知道妈妈辛苦,打算给她买个特殊的礼物→琢磨如何给她买个惊喜的礼物→发现一个可以搭配妈妈挂在墙上的一幅画的小塑像,且自己赚来的零用钱够买这个礼物→妈妈也站在旁边,“我”没办法在她不注意的情况下买礼物。 续写情节 第一段:衔接1:首句衔接所给句“她看到价格后失望地放下了它”:妈妈走开时的情绪如何(失望、难过、恋恋不舍)。过渡句:“我”看到妈妈的恋恋不舍后的心理感受→“我”决定给妈妈买这个小塑像作为惊喜(协同原文的how would whatever I picked be a surprise),(协同原文的No way could I make the purchase without her knowing.) 等待母亲走开,悄悄买好小塑像→想象妈妈在圣诞节早上打开礼物时的惊喜,激动不已。衔接2:尾句衔接第二段所给句中的“我把它放在树下”:“我”买好礼物和家人一起回家。 第二段:衔接3:首句衔接所给句中的“等待圣诞节的早晨”:圣诞节早上,“我”和兄弟姐妹拆开父母给“我们”的礼物(场景描写)。过渡句:妈妈打开“我”送的礼物,看到小塑像时的惊喜(肢体动作+情感描写)→妈妈高兴地拥抱“我”。结尾(协同原文的I would get to experience the joy of giving):看到妈妈开心,意识到给予的快乐。 美文诵读 Then she put it down disappointedly after seeing the price. Letting out a sigh, she walked away, her eyes still lingering on it (她叹了口气,走开了,她还恋恋不舍地看着). I could tell how much she loved it but I knew she wouldn’t buy. Determined to give her a surprise, I waited until she was out of sight and quickly made the purchase. My heart pounded (我的心怦怦跳) as I thought about what a surprise this would be on Christmas morning. With the figurine in my bag, I went home with my family. I placed it under the tree and settled in to wait for Christmas morning. The day finally came. My siblings and I tore into the treats and treasures our parents had lovingly put inside stockings and brightly wrapped packages. Then we began presenting gifts to parents. When my mom unwrapped my gift, she recognized the figurine instantly, and her face lit up with surprise and joy. She turned to me and hugged me tightly with tears in her eyes (她转过身来,紧紧地拥抱我,眼里满是泪水). Seeing her happy made me realize the joy of giving. 原文表达借鉴 ①catch one’s eye吸引某人的注意　②go well with和……很相配 ③The pleasant smell of chocolate reached my nose and I wanted to stay. (无灵主语句)巧克力的诱人的香味钻到我鼻子里,我想留下来。 (续写精解深析) 原文分析 第1段 When I was 13, I had an awareness that moms shoulder a lot of responsibility without a lot of reward. My mom was no exception. She brought us to Union Station to help us buy Christmas presents for each other and for herself. Because of Mom, my siblings (兄弟姐妹) and I would get to experience the joy of giving. I wanted to find her something special.  “我”意识到母亲承担了很多责任,但很少得到回报。母亲带“我”去Union Station买圣诞礼物,“我”决定为母亲挑选一件特别的礼物。 协同点:续写部分协同描写兄弟姐妹和“我”一起拆圣诞礼物,并给父母送礼物的场景,如:The day finally came. My siblings and I tore into the treats and treasures our parents had lovingly put inside stockings and brightly wrapped packages. Then we began presenting gifts to parents.  协同点:“joy of giving” 是文章的核心主题,也是续写部分应升华的主题。 续写部分可借鉴的衔接句:Seeing her happy made me realize the joy of giving.  第2-3段 The pleasant smell of chocolate reached my nose and I wanted to stay. Normally, when we came here, the candy makers were what I wanted to see most, but today I had a mission. So, we walked on. We explored many stores selling jewelry, purses, toys, clothing and treats, but nothing caught my eye. I just wanted something unique for Mom. I didn’t know what, but I knew I would recognize it when I saw it. Meanwhile, I wondered even though she promised to not look while we went shopping, how would whatever I picked be a surprise?  All of a sudden, there it was, the perfect gift for her! On one of the stands sat a figurine (小塑像) of a lion and lamb lying down together. It would go well with a drawing of a similar scene Mom had hung on the wall. I had heard her talk about how long she had owned the picture and who had drawn it for her. I knew it was very special.  “我”在商店中寻找礼物,虽然看到了很多商品,但没有找到合适的。“我”希望能找到一件独特的礼物,并且担心母亲会提前发现。“我”终于发现了一个完美的礼物——一个狮子和羔羊躺在一起的塑像,这与母亲墙上挂的画相呼应。“我”知道这件礼物对母亲来说非常特别。 协同点:续写部分可协同描写孩子对礼物的期待与母亲的惊喜。 续写第一段可协同描写“我”想到这个礼物给母亲的惊喜, 如My heart pounded as I thought about what a surprise this would be on Christmas morning. 续写第二段可描写母亲看到“我”买的雕像后又惊又喜的反应,如 Her face lit up with surprise and joy.侧面表现母亲对雕像的喜爱。  第4段 I turned the figurine over to check the price and couldn’t believe my eyes. I could afford it! Mom didn’t know it, but I had put some extra money in my pocket from babysitting the neighbor kids, so I had more money than what she had given me. But she was standing nearby. No way could I make the purchase without her knowing. A moment later, she noticed the very same figurine. I watched her eyes light up. She picked it up and turned it over.　  “我”查看了价格,发现自己买得起。但母亲就在旁边,“我”无法在不被发现的情况下购买。母亲也注意到了这个塑像,拿起来看。 协同点: “我”决定偷偷买礼物,协同“No way could I make the purchase without her knowing.” 可借鉴的衔接句:I waited until she was out of sight and quickly made the purchase.  协同点:母亲对塑像的喜爱与放弃购买,协同“she noticed the very same figurine. I watched her eyes light up.”,续写第二段可协同描写“When my mom unwrapped my gift, she recognized the figurine instantly.”  续写第一段可描写“Letting out a sigh, she walked away, her eyes still lingering on it.” 表现母亲对塑像的喜爱; 描写“我”的想法“I could tell how much she loved it but I knew she wouldn’t buy.”  学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$