Unit 7 The natural world建议信(单元同步写作讲义)英语译林版2024八年级上册

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Unit 7 The natural world 同步写作课讲义-译林版2024八年级上册 ( ⭐话题解读⭐ ) Unit 7 的主题围绕 “人与自然:自然环境” 展开。认识自然、了解生态系统、认识环境保护的重要性等,都是这个单元探讨的关键内容。在具体的英语写作中,学生应做到以下几点: 能够准确运用与自然环境相关的词汇和短语,清晰地描述自然现象、生态系统的组成部分以及环境问题。 学会使用恰当的句型和语法结构,有条理地表达自己对自然环境的看法、观点和建议。 注重文章的逻辑连贯性,合理运用连接词和过渡句,使文章层次分明,读起来通顺自然。 ( ⭐写作任务⭐ ) 本单元的写作任务是写有关生态系统中的某一要素保护的建议性文章。生态系统包含众多要素,如森林、河流、野生动物等,学生需要选择其中一个要素,针对其面临的问题,提出切实可行的保护建议。 ( ⭐审题指导⭐ ) 本单元主要话题是自然环境,与本单元相关的写作题目可以与生态系统中具体的组成部分相结合。命题内容以描述环境现状和问题为主,根据提示记叙或描述某一生态要素(如森林、河流等)的情况。写作时应注意建议性文章的内容、格式以及时态的运用。由于是提出建议,时态多采用一般现在时。内容一般从以下几方面着手: Where(该生态要素主要分布在哪里?例如:Where are the rainforests mainly located? 热带雨林主要分布在哪里?) How(它目前的状况如何?例如:How is the river's water quality now? 现在这条河的水质怎么样?) What(存在哪些问题?例如:What problems are the wild animals facing? 野生动物面临着哪些问题?) How(如何解决这些问题?例如:How can we solve the problem of deforestation? 我们如何解决森林砍伐的问题?) How(怎样更好地保护它?例如:How can we better protect the wetland ecosystem? 我们怎样才能更好地保护湿地生态系统?) ◆写作步骤 步骤一:确定写作对象 从生态系统众多要素中,挑选一个自己熟悉且有足够素材可写的要素,比如选择保护野生动物。 步骤二:收集相关信息 通过查阅资料、回忆课堂所学或自身的生活经验,收集关于该要素的分布、现状、面临问题等方面的信息。例如,了解到许多野生动物栖息地被破坏,数量急剧减少。 步骤三:构思文章结构 明确开头如何引入话题,主体部分怎样详细阐述问题及提出建议,结尾怎样总结升华。如开头可以通过描述一种濒危野生动物的现状来引入,主体分别说明栖息地破坏、非法捕猎等问题及对应的解决建议,结尾呼吁大家共同保护。 ( ⭐写作框架⭐ ) 1.开头引入 以一个令人担忧的自然现象或与写作对象相关的具体事例来吸引读者注意力。例如:Nowadays, we often hear the news that many wild animals are on the verge of extinction. 如今,我们经常听到许多野生动物濒临灭绝的消息。 引入话题:直接点明要写的生态系统要素。如:Today, I want to talk about the protection of wild animals. 今天,我想谈谈野生动物的保护问题。 2.主体部分 描述现状:Wild animals are losing their habitats due to deforestation and urban expansion. 由于森林砍伐和城市扩张,野生动物正在失去它们的栖息地。 指出问题:Illegal hunting is also a big threat to wild animals. 非法捕猎对野生动物也是一个巨大的威胁。 提出建议:We should establish more nature reserves to protect their habitats. 我们应该建立更多的自然保护区来保护它们的栖息地。We must also strengthen law enforcement to stop illegal hunting. 我们还必须加强执法以制止非法捕猎。 表达情感:表达对该生态要素的担忧或对未来保护成果的期待。如:I am really worried about the future of wild animals. 我真的很担心野生动物的未来。I sincerely hope that with our joint efforts, wild animals can thrive again. 我衷心希望通过我们的共同努力,野生动物能够再次繁荣起来。 3.结尾部分 总结全文,再次强调保护的重要性并呼吁行动。如:In conclusion, protecting wild animals is of great significance for maintaining the ecological balance. Let's take action now! 总之,保护野生动物对于维持生态平衡具有重要意义。让我们现在就行动起来! ( ⭐素材宝库⭐ ) ( 词汇积累 ) forest(森林) river(河流) ocean(海洋) wildlife(野生动物) plant(植物) environment(环境) pollution(污染) protect(保护) save(拯救) recycle(回收利用) waste(浪费) energy(能源) ecosystem(生态系统) extinct(灭绝的) habitat(栖息地) clean(清洁的) dirty(脏的) reduce(减少) reuse(重新使用) harmful(有害的) beneficial(有益的) species(物种) conservation(保护;保存) sustainable(可持续的) climate(气候) resource(资源) plastic(塑料) garbage(垃圾) emission(排放) ecosystem(生态系统) ( 句型积累 ) 1. 基础句型 The forest is very important for our environment. 森林对我们的环境非常重要。 There are many kinds of wild animals in the nature. 在大自然中有许多种野生动物。 The river is polluted by the factories nearby. 这条河被附近的工厂污染了。 We should save water because it is precious. 我们应该节约用水,因为水很珍贵。 The environment is getting worse and worse. 环境变得越来越糟。 Many plants are in danger of extinction. 许多植物面临灭绝的危险。 We can recycle waste paper to save trees. 我们可以回收废纸来拯救树木。 The ocean provides us with a lot of resources. 海洋为我们提供了许多资源。 Protecting the environment is our duty. 保护环境是我们的责任。 We need to plant more trees to make our earth greener. 我们需要种更多的树,让我们的地球更绿。 2. 升级句型 Not only is the forest home to countless animals, but it also plays a crucial role in regulating the climate. 森林不仅是无数动物的家园,而且在调节气候方面起着至关重要的作用。 There is no denying that the pollution of the river has caused great harm to the local ecosystem. 不可否认,河流的污染对当地生态系统造成了极大的危害。 It is high time that we took some effective measures to protect wild animals. 是我们采取一些有效措施保护野生动物的时候了。 We should make every effort to reduce waste in order to protect our environment. 我们应该竭尽全力减少浪费,以保护我们的环境。 The ocean, which covers a large part of the earth, is full of mysteries waiting to be explored. 海洋覆盖了地球的很大一部分,充满了等待被探索的奥秘。 Many species are on the verge of extinction due to the destruction of their habitats. 由于栖息地遭到破坏,许多物种濒临灭绝。 If we don't act now, the environment will be in an even more terrible state. 如果我们现在不行动,环境将处于更糟糕的状态。 We can contribute to environmental protection by reusing some items in our daily life. 我们可以通过在日常生活中重复使用一些物品来为环境保护做贡献。 The importance of protecting the ecosystem cannot be overemphasized. 保护生态系统的重要性怎么强调都不为过。 It is necessary for us to raise public awareness of environmental protection. 我们有必要提高公众的环保意识。 3. 高分句型 Just as the saying goes, "We do not inherit the earth from our ancestors; we borrow it from our children." Therefore, protecting the environment is an urgent task for us. 正如一句谚语所说:“我们不是从祖先那里继承地球,而是从子孙那里借用它。” 因此,保护环境对我们来说是一项紧迫的任务。 The forest, with its lush vegetation and diverse wildlife, is like a green gem that adorns our planet, and its significance cannot be underestimated. 森林,有着茂密的植被和多样的野生动物,就像一颗绿色的宝石点缀着我们的星球,其重要性不可低估。 Were it not for the continuous efforts of environmentalists, the situation of the endangered species would be much more desperate. 如果没有环保主义者的持续努力,濒危物种的情况会更加绝望。 The pollution of the river, which has been a long - standing problem, not only affects the aquatic life but also poses a threat to the health of people living nearby. 河流污染是一个长期存在的问题,它不仅影响水生生物,也对附近居民的健康构成威胁。 It is through collective actions and a sense of responsibility that we can hope to reverse the current trend of environmental degradation. 正是通过集体行动和责任感,我们才有希望扭转目前环境恶化的趋势。 Many wild animals, whose habitats have been severely damaged, are struggling to survive in this harsh environment. 许多野生动物的栖息地遭到严重破坏,它们在这种恶劣的环境中挣扎求生。 The ocean, a vast and complex ecosystem, is facing numerous challenges such as overfishing and plastic pollution, which require our immediate attention. 海洋,一个广阔而复杂的生态系统,面临着过度捕捞和塑料污染等众多挑战,需要我们立即关注。 Only by taking a comprehensive approach that combines education, legislation, and technological innovation can we effectively protect our precious environment. 只有采取一种将教育、立法和技术创新相结合的综合方法,我们才能有效地保护我们宝贵的环境。 The destruction of the ecosystem, which is mainly caused by human activities, has far - reaching consequences that may affect generations to come. 生态系统的破坏主要是由人类活动造成的,其影响深远,可能会影响到子孙后代。 Protecting the environment is not just a matter of individual choice; it is a moral obligation that we all share for the well - being of our planet and future generations. 保护环境不仅仅是个人选择的问题;这是我们为了地球和子孙后代的福祉共同承担的道德义务。 ( 谚语名句 ) Love nature, nature will love you back. 热爱自然,自然也会回馈你。 We never know the worth of water till the well is dry. 井干方知水可贵。 A stitch in time saves nine. 及时缝一针,省得日后缝九针。(及时处理,事半功倍,可用于环保行动要趁早) One man's trash is another man's treasure. 一个人的垃圾是另一个人的宝贝。(强调资源回收利用) There is no such thing as a free lunch. 天下没有免费的午餐。(在环保中,不付出努力就无法收获良好环境) The earth is what we all have in common. 地球是我们共有的。 Nature is painting for us, day after day, pictures of infinite beauty. 大自然日复一日地为我们描绘着无比美丽的画卷。 Save water. Shower with your partner. 节约用水,和你的伴侣一起洗澡。(一种幽默又倡导节水的表达) We are living on this planet as if we had another one to go to. 我们在这个星球上生活,就好像我们还有另一个星球可去。(批判对地球环境的不珍惜) The best time to plant a tree was 20 years ago. The second best time is now. 种树的最佳时间是二十年前,其次就是现在。(鼓励当下就采取环保行动) In every walk with nature one receives far more than he seeks. 在与自然的每一次漫步中,人们收获的远比追求的多。 Our earth is a big family, and we should take care of each other and the environment. 我们的地球是一个大家庭,我们应该互相关爱并爱护环境。 Keep the earth green, and the future will be seen. 保持地球绿色,未来才有希望。 Don't throw it away, find a new way! 别扔掉,找个新用途!(提倡资源再利用) The environment is where we all meet; where we all have a mutual interest; it is the one thing all of us share. 环境是我们相遇的地方,是我们共同利益所在,是我们所有人共有的东西。 If we don't change our direction, we are likely to end up where we are headed. 如果我们不改变方向,我们最终可能会到达我们正前往的地方。(在环保上,若不改变破坏环境的行为,后果堪忧) The greatest threat to our planet is the belief that someone else will save it. 对我们星球最大的威胁是认为别人会拯救它的想法。(强调每个人都要参与环保) Nature does not hurry, yet everything is accomplished. 大自然不着急,然而一切都如期完成。(我们应顺应自然规律进行环境保护) Earth provides enough to satisfy every man's need, but not every man's greed. 地球能满足每个人的需要,但满足不了每个人的贪婪。(批判人类过度索取破坏环境) Protecting the environment is protecting ourselves. 保护环境就是保护我们自己。 ( 写作模板 ) Dear [读者称呼], I am writing to talk about the protection of [具体生态要素,如 wild animals/forests/rivers 等]. At present, [生态要素名称] are facing many problems. For example, [问题 1,如 habitat destruction]. Also, [问题 2,如 illegal hunting for wild animals]. To solve these problems, we can take the following measures. First, [建议 1,如 establish nature reserves]. Second, [建议 2,如 strengthen law enforcement]. Moreover, [建议 3,如 raise public awareness through education]. I am really concerned about the future of [生态要素名称]. I hope that more and more people can join in the protection work. Let's work together to make a difference and protect our precious [生态要素名称]! Yours, [你的名字] ( ⭐参考范文⭐ ) (范文一:Protect the Forest) Dear friends, I am writing to talk about the protection of the forest. Nowadays, the forest is facing serious problems. A large number of trees are cut down every day for various reasons, such as making furniture and paper. This has led to the destruction of the forest ecosystem. Many animals are losing their habitats, and soil erosion is becoming more and more serious. To protect the forest, we can take some measures. First, we should stop illegal logging. The government should strengthen law enforcement to punish those who cut down trees without permission. Second, we can plant more trees. Everyone can participate in tree - planting activities. What's more, we need to raise public awareness of forest protection. Let more people know the importance of the forest. I am really worried about the future of the forest. Forests are the lungs of the earth. We can't live without them. Let's take action now to protect our precious forests. Yours, Li Hua (范文二:Protect Wild Animals) Dear classmates, Today, I want to talk about the protection of wild animals. Wild animals are in great danger. Their habitats are being destroyed by human activities like deforestation and urban construction. Besides, illegal hunting is still a big problem. Some wild animals are hunted for their fur, teeth or other body parts. To save wild animals, we can do a lot. First, we should establish more nature reserves to provide them with safe habitats. Second, we must stop illegal hunting. The government should set up strict laws against it. Also, we can educate people about the importance of protecting wild animals. We can organize some activities to let more people understand that wild animals are our friends. I sincerely hope that wild animals can live safely in nature. Let's work together to protect them. Yours, Zhang Ming (范文三:Protect the River) Dear all, I would like to draw your attention to the protection of the river. The river near our city is in a poor condition. The water is polluted by the waste from factories and households. There is less and less clean water, and many fish and other aquatic animals are dying. To solve the problem of river pollution, we have several ways. First, factories should be required to treat their waste water before discharging it into the river. Second, we should reduce the use of plastic products to avoid plastic waste flowing into the river. In addition, we can organize volunteers to clean up the river banks regularly. I am really concerned about the future of the river. The river is an important part of our ecosystem. Let's take action to make the river clean again. Yours truly, Wang Mei ( ⭐写作拓展⭐ ) ( 考情分析 ) 近三年考情示例 年份 卷区 话题 命题形式 2025年 黑龙江龙东地区 通知全体学生到公园参加清扫活动 通知类 2023年 四川德阳 介绍德阳环境变好的原因等 提纲类 ( 变式提升训练 ) 1.你听过“Z时代”这个词吗?它指的是新时代人群,通常指的是1995年到2009年出生的一代人。今年是世界环境日举办的第50年,中国的“Z时代”选择“自卷式环保”来共同拯救地球,他们寻找志同道合的伙伴,一起参与各种环保活动,为环境保护贡献青年力量。作为“Z时代”的你,也一定想要参与其中吧!请从以下两方面入手,写一篇倡议书,号召全校同学和你一起参与环境保护吧! Word Bankreduce v.减少 garbage sorting垃圾分类 内容包括: 1. 环境保护的重要性; 2. 如何保护环境的建议。 要求: 1. 词数不少于80词,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数; 2. 文中不能出现真实的人名、校名。 My dear classmates, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ A student who loves environmental protection, January, 2024 2.假设你是李华,你很喜欢你所在的城市,但你发现它存在一些环境问题。请你根据下表中的提示信息给市长写一封信,分析造成这些问题的原因并提出改善建议。 Problem Reason Advice white pollution too many plastic things... make laws, encourage... river pollution waste water from factories... close down... smog (雾霾) give off (排放)... public transportation... 要求: (1)信件必须包含以上所有信息,可适当发挥。 (2)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。 (3)100词左右,开头和落款部分已给出,不计入总词数。 Dear Mr Mayor, My name is Li Hua. I’m a university student here. I like this city, but I have found some environmental problems in it. That’s why I write this letter to you. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 3.假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Mike得知了你校开展了“建设美丽家乡”的活动,他来信表示很感兴趣并想了解其具体细节,请你根据以下信息给Mike写一封回信,向他描述你曾经做过的与此相关的一件事,并对如何建设美丽家乡提出建议。 写作要点: 1. 得知他对本次活动感兴趣后很激动; 2. 描述事件: (1)时间:上个星期六 (2)地点:中心公园(the Central Park) (3)事件:打扫公园的卫生 3. 对如何建设美丽家乡提出具体建议。 写作要求: 1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。 2. 可适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯。 3. 字迹工整,语言精练,表达准确,条理清晰。 4. 至少80词。 Dear Mike, How are you doing? _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 4.假如你是来自美国的David,目前在成都做交换生。你很喜欢这座城市,但你发现它存在一些环境问题。请你根据下面图表里的信息给市长写一封60-80词的信,分析造成这些问题的原因并提出改善建议。开头和结尾已给出,不计入词数。 存在的问题 原因 建议 white pollution too many plastic things. . . make laws, encourage. . . river pollution waste water from factories. . . Shut, pour. . . into. . . smog(雾霾) give off(排放), too much. . . public transportation. . . Dear Mr. Mayor, My name is David. I m from America and now I’m an exchange student here. I like this city, but I have found some environmental problems in it. That’s why I write this letter to you. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, David 5.2023年3月23日是第六十三个世界气象日(World Meteorological Day),主题为“天气气候水,代代向未来”。学校本学期会举办“气象日活动推广人”评选活动, 假如你是李华,请你为自己写一封信给校长 (Mr.Brown) 推荐自己,并就“作为中学生,我们可以做些什么来保护我们的地球”谈谈自己的做法和建议。内容提示: 1.简要介绍你的情况,可包括年龄、喜好等。(请勿出现真实姓名) 2. 你觉得我们可以做些什么来保护我们的地球? 小事做起(start with small things),比如主动打扫,不乱丢垃圾,节约水电…… 绿色出行(choose the green travel),比如步行上下学,坐公共汽车、骑自行车…… 3……(适当补充) 写作要求: 1.要点齐全,并适当发挥; 2. 条理清晰,语句通顺,书写规范; 3. 字数80左右,开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 Dear Mr.Brown, I am writing to you to recommend myself as the activity prompter of World Meteorological Day. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I would appreciate it if you could give me this chance. Looking forward to your early reply. Yours truly, Li Hua 6.你有喝瓶装水的习惯吗?你有注意到身边的同学喝完水后,塑料瓶会如何被处理掉吗?你知道塑料是白色污染主要源头之一吗? 环境保护是每个人的义务和责任,作为学生,我们能为环保做什么呢?请你以Say “No” to Plastic Bottles at School为题,给同班同学写一封英文倡议信,内容包括: 1.在校饮用瓶装水的现象; 2.瓶装水有何优缺点; 3.塑料瓶通常如何被处置; 4.你对此的看法或建议。 参考词汇:瓶装水 bottled water;一次性的 disposable;垃圾填埋场 landfill;容器container;倡议 propose;呼吁某人做某事 call on sb. to do... 注意:1.词数80—100 词左右(短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数); 2.内容完整,语法正确,语句连贯; 3.考生不得透露个人信息,否则不予评分。 Say “No” to Plastic Bottles at School Dear classmates, Environmental protection is everyone’s responsibility. However, in recent days, I notice... _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7.假如你是李华,看到你校英语校刊正在为“世界环境日”活动向同学们征集建议,请根据以下内容,用英语给该校刊写一封信。 Ideas needed!Dear friends, We’re planning to hold an activity to celebrate the coming World Environment Day. Your ideas are needed! Feel free to write to share your creative ideas! Please let us know: ·What activity is it? A talk? A DIY job or something else? ·When and where will it be held? ·What advice on going green at school can be learned from the activity? Contact us at environmentday@school.com 注意事项:1.词数100 左右(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数); 2.文中不能出现真实校名、姓名等信息; 3.文章必须包含所提供的主要信息,并作适当发挥; 4.表达清楚、语句通顺、意思连贯、书写规范。 Dear Sir/Madam, Thanks for offering us such a chance to celebrate the World Environment Day. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope you’ll think my advice is worth taking. Yours, Li Hua 8.假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Mike得知了你校开展了“做生态小公民,建设美丽家乡”的活动,他来信表示很感兴趣并想了解其具体细节。请你根据以下信息给Mike写一封回信,向他描述你曾经做过的与此相关的一件事,并对如何成为一名“生态小公民”提出建议。 写作要点: 1. 很高兴收到他的来信;并且得知他对本次活动感兴趣后很激动。 2. 描述事件: (1)时间:上个星期日 (2)地点:中心公园(the Central Park) (3)事件:与同学们分组行动打扫公园的卫生 3. 对如何保护环境提出具体建议。 写作要求: 1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。 2. 可适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯。 3. 字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。 4. 至少80词。 Dear Mike, I’m glad to receive your letter.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Now the environment around us becomes better and better. Welcome to my hometown one day! Yours, Li Hua 参考答案 1. My dear classmates, Have you heard of the term “Generation Z”? It refers to the new generation of people, usually those born between 1995 and 2009. This year marks the 50th anniversary of World Environment Day, and the “Generation Z” in China has chosen “self-motivated environmental protection” to jointly save the planet. They look for like-minded partners to participate in various environmental protection activities and contribute the power of youth to environmental protection. As a member of the “Generation Z”, I am sure you also want to be involved! Environmental protection is of great importance. Our planet is facing many challenges, such as climate change, pollution, and resource depletion. If we do not take action now, these problems will only get worse and have a negative impact on our future. By protecting the environment, we can ensure a sustainable future for ourselves and future generations. Here are some suggestions on how to protect the environment. First, we should reduce the use of plastic products and choose environmentally friendly alternatives. We can also practice garbage sorting to reduce waste and recycle resources. Second, we can save energy by turning off lights and appliances when not in use. Third, we can choose to walk, bike, or use public transportation instead of driving cars to reduce carbon emissions. Finally, we can participate in volunteer activities to clean up parks, beaches, and other public areas. Let’s take action now and work together to protect our environment. Every small step we take can make a big difference. I believe that with our joint efforts, we can make our planet a better place to live. A student who loves environmental protection, January, 2024 【写作解析】 [总体分析] ①题材:本文是一篇应用文,话题为环保; ②时态:以一般现在时为主; ③内容:文章先说明环保的重要性,再给出具体的环保建议,最后号召大家行动起来,共同保护环境。 [写作步骤] 第一步,开篇点题,结合“Z时代”和世界环境日的背景,说明环保的重要性; 第二步,主体部分提出环保建议,包括减少塑料使用、垃圾分类、节约能源等; 第三步,结尾发出号召,呼吁同学们积极参与,为地球贡献力量。 [亮点词汇] ①look for 寻找 ②participate in 参与 ③take action 采取行动 ④have a negative impact 有一个消极的影响 ⑤make a big difference 起很大作用 [亮点句型] ①If we do not take action now, these problems will only get worse.(if引导的条件状语从句) ②First, we should reduce the use of plastic products and choose environmentally friendly alternatives. (并列句) ③Every small step we take can make a big difference.(定语从句) ④I believe that with our joint efforts, we can make our planet a better place to live.(宾语从句) 2. Dear Mr Mayor, My name is Li Hua. I’m a university student here. I like this city, but I have found some environmental problems in it. That’s why I write this letter to you. First, white pollution is a serious problem in our city. People use too many things made of plastic. I think the government should make laws to limit the use of them and encourage people not to use plastic products. Second, the river is heavily polluted. Some factories pour waste water into the river. I suggest that the government should close down these factories. Finally, smog is also becoming a big problem in our city. There are more and more cars that give off too much waste gas on the road. I think the government should encourage people to use public transportation. I hope the environment in our city can become better and better. Yours, Li Hua 【写作解析】 [总体分析] ① 题材:本文是一篇书信作文; ② 时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主; ③ 提示:根据写作要求,适当分析原因并提出建议,可适当添加细节,突出写作重点,注意不要遗漏给出信息。 [写作步骤] 第一步,介绍自己,表明写信的目的(已给出); 第二步,提出自己发现的环境问题,并分析原因然后给出建议; 第三步,书写结语,表达自己希望自己城市越来越好的心愿。 [亮点词汇] ①make laws 制定法律 ②limit the use限制使用 ③encourage sb to do sth.鼓励某人做某事 ④be heavily polluted被严重污染 [高分句型] ①People use too many things made of plastic.(过去分词做后置定语) ②There are more and more cars that give off too much waste gas on the road. (that引导的定语从句) 3. Dear Mike, How are you going? I’m glad to receive your letter. I’m so excited that you are interested in this activity. To be an ecological citizen, we did a good job. Last Sunday, we went to the Central Park, and worked in groups to clean up the park. After cleaning, we knew that we should put litter in different bins. We were tired but happy that day. To cut down waste pollution, we should take bags to go shopping. We should take a bus or ride a bike instead of driving to cut down air pollution. Now the environment around us becomes better and better. Welcome to my hometown one day! Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 【写作解析】 [总体分析] ①题材:本文属于书信作文写作; ②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”; ③提示:信件开头和结尾以及要点已经给出,按照提示的要点逐点阐述,可以适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步,承接信件开头,表达得知他对活动感兴趣后的心情; 第二步,按照提示描述曾经做过的相关事件; 第三步,对如何建设美丽家乡提出具体的建议并书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①clean up the park打扫公园卫生 ②cut down削减 ③instead of doing sth代替做某事,不做某事 ④better and better越来越好 [高分句型] ①I’m so excited that you are interested in this activity.(that引导的宾语从句) 4.Dear Mr. Mayor, My name is David. I m from America and now I’m an exchange student here. I like this city, but I have found some environmental problems in it. That’s why I write this letter to you.     First, white pollution is a serious problem in our city. People use too many things made of plastic, such as plastic cups, bottles and bags. These plastic things are thrown away after being used once. I think the government should develop laws to limit the use of them and encourage people not to use plastic products. Second, the river is heavily polluted. Some factories pour waste water into the river. The water in the river becomes dirty and lots of fish die because of it. I suggest that the government should close down these factories. Finally, smog is also becoming a big problem in our city. There are more and more cars that give off too much waste gas on the road. I think the government should encourage people to use public transportation.    I hope the environment in our city can become better and better.                                                               Yours, David 【写作解析】 [总体分析] ① 题材:本文是一篇书信作文; ② 时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主; ③ 提示:根据写作要求,适当分析原因并提出建议,可适当添加细节,突出写作重点,注意不要遗漏给出信息。 [写作步骤] 第一步,介绍自己,表明写信的目的; 第二步,提出自己发现的环境问题,并分析原因然后给出建议; 第三步,书写结语,表达自己希望自己城市越来越好的心愿。 [亮点词汇] ①throw away 扔掉 ②develop laws 制定法律 ③encourage sb to do sth 鼓励某人做某事 ④be heavily polluted 被严重污染 ⑤close down 关闭 [高分句型] ①People use too many things made of plastic, such as plastic cups, bottles and bags.(过去分词做后置定语) 5.作文范文 Dear Mr.Brown, I’m writing to you to recommend myself as the activity prompter of World Meteorological Day. Allow me to introduce myself first. My name is Li Hua. I am an eleven-year-old middle school student who is interested in protecting our earth. In my opinion, here is something we can do to make our world better. First of all, the key to this is to start with small things in our daily life. For example, we can offer to do the cleaning actively, stop littering, and start to save water and electricity. What’s more, the way of traveling should also be taken into consideration. To be specific, choosing the green travel is an excellent idea, which means walking or riding a bike to school, as well as taking the bus instead of a car. In addition, if I become the prompter, I will hold events like speech contest to raise people’s awareness. I would appreciate it if you could give me the chance. Look forward to your early reply. Yours truly, Li Hua 【写作解析】 [总体分析] ①题材:本文是一封书信作文; ②时态:时态主要以“一般现在时”为主; ③提示:写作话题已给出,考生应注意准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务。 [写作步骤] 第一步,首先直接说明想要推荐自己为气象日活动推广人的人选; 第二步,从兴趣爱好和认为可以做哪些事来保护地球等方面介绍推荐自己的原因; 第三步,总结并希望自己能够有幸被选上。 [亮点词汇] ①In my opinion   在我看来; ②save water and electricity   节约用水和用电; ③as well as   也,以及; ④In addition 除此之外。 [高分句型] ①I am an eleven-year-old middle school student who is interested in protecting our earth.(be interested in 对……感兴趣;定语从句); ②To be specific, choosing the green travel is an excellent idea, which means walking or riding a bike to school, as well as taking the bus instead of a car.(To be specific 具体地说;动名词作主语;定语从句); ③In addition, if I become the prompter, I will hold events like speech contest to raise people's awareness. (条件状语从句) 6.                                                                           Say “No” to Plastic Bottles at School Dear classmates,      Environmental protection is everyone’s responsibility. However, in recent days, I notice that there are a lot of students at school drinking bottled water. Bottled water is very convenient for many students. But bottled water can waste a lot of money. In addition, plastic bottles of bottled water are one of the main sources of white pollution. On the other hand, students throw away bottled water randomly after drinking it, and few of them put it in the trash can. These plastic bottles are finally threw it into the landfill.      So in my opinion, I call on everyone to use less bottled water. We can use our own glasses or other containers that can be used again and again. In this way, we can protect the environment while drinking water. 【写作解析】 [总体分析] ① 题材:本文是一篇应用文,为书信作文; ② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”; ③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,不能遗漏信息,可适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步,整体说明在校饮用瓶装水的现象; 第二步,介绍瓶装水的优缺点以及塑料瓶通常如何被处置; 第三步,最后表达你对此的看法或建议。 [亮点词汇] ①in addition此外 ②on the other hand另一方面 ③in my opinion在我看来 [高分句型] ①I notice that there are a lot of students at school drinking bottled water.(that引导的宾语从句) ②We can use our own glasses or other containers that can be used again and again.(that引导的定语从句) 7.One possible version: Dear Sir/Madam, Thanks for offering us such a chance to celebrate the World Environment Day. On that day I’d like to hold a talk on “Going green at school” at the school hall.   There will be many suggestions on going green at school. I hope students will find them useful. Above all, reduce the waste. We should use only what we need. For example, it’s necessary to turn the lights off when leaving the classroom. Second, we can help recycle the waste. When throwing away rubbish, we can separate them into different groups. Moreover, we can reuse the “waste” if possible. Reusing textbooks is a good choice. Of course, everyone has his own way to go green.   I hope you’ll think my advice is worth taking. Yours, Li Hua 【写作解析】 1.题干解读:阅读题干可知要求根据学校英语校刊的内容进行回信。写作内容包括:你建议举行什么活动;何时何地举行活动;从这次活动中可以学到哪些在学校环保的建议。题干已给出第一句及结尾,所以要着重表达清楚邮件中提到的内容,可适当发挥,注意语句通顺,意思连贯。 2.写作指导:本文应该用第一人称来叙述,时态采用一般将来时为主,因为题干开头已给出,所以可以直接介绍想要举行的活动,重点介绍环保建议。要叙述完整,要点齐全,无单词拼写和语法错误。 8. Dear Mike, I’m glad to receive your letter. I’m so excited that you are interested in our environmental protection activities. To be an ecological citizen, we did a good job. Last Sunday, we went to the Central Park, and worked in groups to clean up the park. After cleaning, we knew that we should put litter in different bins. To cut down waste pollution, we should take bags to go shopping. We should take a bus or ride a bike instead of driving to cut down air pollution. We were tired but happy that day. Now the environment around us becomes better and better. Welcome to my hometown one day! Yours, Li Hua 【写作解析】 1.题干解读:本文是一篇书信作文。在信中先描述上周日去中心公园打扫卫生的事情,并通过这个事情来提出如何保护环境的建议。 2.点评:本文采用的是第一人称,时态采用的主要是一般过去时。准确运用时态,并保持主谓一致。句子通顺,逻辑性强。 3.高分亮点: 短语:be glad to do sth高兴做某事;be interested in sth对某事感兴趣;cut down减少;go shopping购物;take a bus坐公交车;ride a bike骑自行车。 句子:I’m so excited that you are interested in our environmental protection activities句中so…that引导的是结果状语从句,After cleaning, we knew that we should put litter in different bins句中由that引导的宾语从句。 【点睛】首先认真审题,看清题目中的要求和要点;然后根据提示内容,列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达,例如be glad to do sth;be interested in sth;cut down;go shopping;take a bus;ride a bike等;然后紧扣要点,动笔写作,在写作过程中,要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡,必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词,使文章过渡平稳,自然流畅;最后,要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等,还要检查语法结构是否合理,有无重复、啰嗦的语言,大小写是否正确,词数是否符合要求等。 ( 7 ) 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 $$ Unit 7 The natural world 同步写作课讲义-译林版2024八年级上册 ( ⭐话题解读⭐ ) Unit 7 的主题围绕 “人与自然:自然环境” 展开。认识自然、了解生态系统、认识环境保护的重要性等,都是这个单元探讨的关键内容。在具体的英语写作中,学生应做到以下几点: 能够准确运用与自然环境相关的词汇和短语,清晰地描述自然现象、生态系统的组成部分以及环境问题。 学会使用恰当的句型和语法结构,有条理地表达自己对自然环境的看法、观点和建议。 注重文章的逻辑连贯性,合理运用连接词和过渡句,使文章层次分明,读起来通顺自然。 ( ⭐写作任务⭐ ) 本单元的写作任务是写有关生态系统中的某一要素保护的建议性文章。生态系统包含众多要素,如森林、河流、野生动物等,学生需要选择其中一个要素,针对其面临的问题,提出切实可行的保护建议。 ( ⭐审题指导⭐ ) 本单元主要话题是自然环境,与本单元相关的写作题目可以与生态系统中具体的组成部分相结合。命题内容以描述环境现状和问题为主,根据提示记叙或描述某一生态要素(如森林、河流等)的情况。写作时应注意建议性文章的内容、格式以及时态的运用。由于是提出建议,时态多采用一般现在时。内容一般从以下几方面着手: Where(该生态要素主要分布在哪里?例如:Where are the rainforests mainly located? 热带雨林主要分布在哪里?) How(它目前的状况如何?例如:How is the river's water quality now? 现在这条河的水质怎么样?) What(存在哪些问题?例如:What problems are the wild animals facing? 野生动物面临着哪些问题?) How(如何解决这些问题?例如:How can we solve the problem of deforestation? 我们如何解决森林砍伐的问题?) How(怎样更好地保护它?例如:How can we better protect the wetland ecosystem? 我们怎样才能更好地保护湿地生态系统?) ◆写作步骤 步骤一:确定写作对象 从生态系统众多要素中,挑选一个自己熟悉且有足够素材可写的要素,比如选择保护野生动物。 步骤二:收集相关信息 通过查阅资料、回忆课堂所学或自身的生活经验,收集关于该要素的分布、现状、面临问题等方面的信息。例如,了解到许多野生动物栖息地被破坏,数量急剧减少。 步骤三:构思文章结构 明确开头如何引入话题,主体部分怎样详细阐述问题及提出建议,结尾怎样总结升华。如开头可以通过描述一种濒危野生动物的现状来引入,主体分别说明栖息地破坏、非法捕猎等问题及对应的解决建议,结尾呼吁大家共同保护。 ( ⭐写作框架⭐ ) 1.开头引入 以一个令人担忧的自然现象或与写作对象相关的具体事例来吸引读者注意力。例如:Nowadays, we often hear the news that many wild animals are on the verge of extinction. 如今,我们经常听到许多野生动物濒临灭绝的消息。 引入话题:直接点明要写的生态系统要素。如:Today, I want to talk about the protection of wild animals. 今天,我想谈谈野生动物的保护问题。 2.主体部分 描述现状:Wild animals are losing their habitats due to deforestation and urban expansion. 由于森林砍伐和城市扩张,野生动物正在失去它们的栖息地。 指出问题:Illegal hunting is also a big threat to wild animals. 非法捕猎对野生动物也是一个巨大的威胁。 提出建议:We should establish more nature reserves to protect their habitats. 我们应该建立更多的自然保护区来保护它们的栖息地。We must also strengthen law enforcement to stop illegal hunting. 我们还必须加强执法以制止非法捕猎。 表达情感:表达对该生态要素的担忧或对未来保护成果的期待。如:I am really worried about the future of wild animals. 我真的很担心野生动物的未来。I sincerely hope that with our joint efforts, wild animals can thrive again. 我衷心希望通过我们的共同努力,野生动物能够再次繁荣起来。 3.结尾部分 总结全文,再次强调保护的重要性并呼吁行动。如:In conclusion, protecting wild animals is of great significance for maintaining the ecological balance. Let's take action now! 总之,保护野生动物对于维持生态平衡具有重要意义。让我们现在就行动起来! ( ⭐素材宝库⭐ ) ( 词汇积累 ) forest(森林) river(河流) ocean(海洋) wildlife(野生动物) plant(植物) environment(环境) pollution(污染) protect(保护) save(拯救) recycle(回收利用) waste(浪费) energy(能源) ecosystem(生态系统) extinct(灭绝的) habitat(栖息地) clean(清洁的) dirty(脏的) reduce(减少) reuse(重新使用) harmful(有害的) beneficial(有益的) species(物种) conservation(保护;保存) sustainable(可持续的) climate(气候) resource(资源) plastic(塑料) garbage(垃圾) emission(排放) ecosystem(生态系统) ( 句型积累 ) 1. 基础句型 The forest is very important for our environment. 森林对我们的环境非常重要。 There are many kinds of wild animals in the nature. 在大自然中有许多种野生动物。 The river is polluted by the factories nearby. 这条河被附近的工厂污染了。 We should save water because it is precious. 我们应该节约用水,因为水很珍贵。 The environment is getting worse and worse. 环境变得越来越糟。 Many plants are in danger of extinction. 许多植物面临灭绝的危险。 We can recycle waste paper to save trees. 我们可以回收废纸来拯救树木。 The ocean provides us with a lot of resources. 海洋为我们提供了许多资源。 Protecting the environment is our duty. 保护环境是我们的责任。 We need to plant more trees to make our earth greener. 我们需要种更多的树,让我们的地球更绿。 2. 升级句型 Not only is the forest home to countless animals, but it also plays a crucial role in regulating the climate. 森林不仅是无数动物的家园,而且在调节气候方面起着至关重要的作用。 There is no denying that the pollution of the river has caused great harm to the local ecosystem. 不可否认,河流的污染对当地生态系统造成了极大的危害。 It is high time that we took some effective measures to protect wild animals. 是我们采取一些有效措施保护野生动物的时候了。 We should make every effort to reduce waste in order to protect our environment. 我们应该竭尽全力减少浪费,以保护我们的环境。 The ocean, which covers a large part of the earth, is full of mysteries waiting to be explored. 海洋覆盖了地球的很大一部分,充满了等待被探索的奥秘。 Many species are on the verge of extinction due to the destruction of their habitats. 由于栖息地遭到破坏,许多物种濒临灭绝。 If we don't act now, the environment will be in an even more terrible state. 如果我们现在不行动,环境将处于更糟糕的状态。 We can contribute to environmental protection by reusing some items in our daily life. 我们可以通过在日常生活中重复使用一些物品来为环境保护做贡献。 The importance of protecting the ecosystem cannot be overemphasized. 保护生态系统的重要性怎么强调都不为过。 It is necessary for us to raise public awareness of environmental protection. 我们有必要提高公众的环保意识。 3. 高分句型 Just as the saying goes, "We do not inherit the earth from our ancestors; we borrow it from our children." Therefore, protecting the environment is an urgent task for us. 正如一句谚语所说:“我们不是从祖先那里继承地球,而是从子孙那里借用它。” 因此,保护环境对我们来说是一项紧迫的任务。 The forest, with its lush vegetation and diverse wildlife, is like a green gem that adorns our planet, and its significance cannot be underestimated. 森林,有着茂密的植被和多样的野生动物,就像一颗绿色的宝石点缀着我们的星球,其重要性不可低估。 Were it not for the continuous efforts of environmentalists, the situation of the endangered species would be much more desperate. 如果没有环保主义者的持续努力,濒危物种的情况会更加绝望。 The pollution of the river, which has been a long - standing problem, not only affects the aquatic life but also poses a threat to the health of people living nearby. 河流污染是一个长期存在的问题,它不仅影响水生生物,也对附近居民的健康构成威胁。 It is through collective actions and a sense of responsibility that we can hope to reverse the current trend of environmental degradation. 正是通过集体行动和责任感,我们才有希望扭转目前环境恶化的趋势。 Many wild animals, whose habitats have been severely damaged, are struggling to survive in this harsh environment. 许多野生动物的栖息地遭到严重破坏,它们在这种恶劣的环境中挣扎求生。 The ocean, a vast and complex ecosystem, is facing numerous challenges such as overfishing and plastic pollution, which require our immediate attention. 海洋,一个广阔而复杂的生态系统,面临着过度捕捞和塑料污染等众多挑战,需要我们立即关注。 Only by taking a comprehensive approach that combines education, legislation, and technological innovation can we effectively protect our precious environment. 只有采取一种将教育、立法和技术创新相结合的综合方法,我们才能有效地保护我们宝贵的环境。 The destruction of the ecosystem, which is mainly caused by human activities, has far - reaching consequences that may affect generations to come. 生态系统的破坏主要是由人类活动造成的,其影响深远,可能会影响到子孙后代。 Protecting the environment is not just a matter of individual choice; it is a moral obligation that we all share for the well - being of our planet and future generations. 保护环境不仅仅是个人选择的问题;这是我们为了地球和子孙后代的福祉共同承担的道德义务。 ( 谚语名句 ) Love nature, nature will love you back. 热爱自然,自然也会回馈你。 We never know the worth of water till the well is dry. 井干方知水可贵。 A stitch in time saves nine. 及时缝一针,省得日后缝九针。(及时处理,事半功倍,可用于环保行动要趁早) One man's trash is another man's treasure. 一个人的垃圾是另一个人的宝贝。(强调资源回收利用) There is no such thing as a free lunch. 天下没有免费的午餐。(在环保中,不付出努力就无法收获良好环境) The earth is what we all have in common. 地球是我们共有的。 Nature is painting for us, day after day, pictures of infinite beauty. 大自然日复一日地为我们描绘着无比美丽的画卷。 Save water. Shower with your partner. 节约用水,和你的伴侣一起洗澡。(一种幽默又倡导节水的表达) We are living on this planet as if we had another one to go to. 我们在这个星球上生活,就好像我们还有另一个星球可去。(批判对地球环境的不珍惜) The best time to plant a tree was 20 years ago. The second best time is now. 种树的最佳时间是二十年前,其次就是现在。(鼓励当下就采取环保行动) In every walk with nature one receives far more than he seeks. 在与自然的每一次漫步中,人们收获的远比追求的多。 Our earth is a big family, and we should take care of each other and the environment. 我们的地球是一个大家庭,我们应该互相关爱并爱护环境。 Keep the earth green, and the future will be seen. 保持地球绿色,未来才有希望。 Don't throw it away, find a new way! 别扔掉,找个新用途!(提倡资源再利用) The environment is where we all meet; where we all have a mutual interest; it is the one thing all of us share. 环境是我们相遇的地方,是我们共同利益所在,是我们所有人共有的东西。 If we don't change our direction, we are likely to end up where we are headed. 如果我们不改变方向,我们最终可能会到达我们正前往的地方。(在环保上,若不改变破坏环境的行为,后果堪忧) The greatest threat to our planet is the belief that someone else will save it. 对我们星球最大的威胁是认为别人会拯救它的想法。(强调每个人都要参与环保) Nature does not hurry, yet everything is accomplished. 大自然不着急,然而一切都如期完成。(我们应顺应自然规律进行环境保护) Earth provides enough to satisfy every man's need, but not every man's greed. 地球能满足每个人的需要,但满足不了每个人的贪婪。(批判人类过度索取破坏环境) Protecting the environment is protecting ourselves. 保护环境就是保护我们自己。 ( 写作模板 ) Dear [读者称呼], I am writing to talk about the protection of [具体生态要素,如 wild animals/forests/rivers 等]. At present, [生态要素名称] are facing many problems. For example, [问题 1,如 habitat destruction]. Also, [问题 2,如 illegal hunting for wild animals]. To solve these problems, we can take the following measures. First, [建议 1,如 establish nature reserves]. Second, [建议 2,如 strengthen law enforcement]. Moreover, [建议 3,如 raise public awareness through education]. I am really concerned about the future of [生态要素名称]. I hope that more and more people can join in the protection work. Let's work together to make a difference and protect our precious [生态要素名称]! Yours, [你的名字] ( ⭐参考范文⭐ ) (范文一:Protect the Forest) Dear friends, I am writing to talk about the protection of the forest. Nowadays, the forest is facing serious problems. A large number of trees are cut down every day for various reasons, such as making furniture and paper. This has led to the destruction of the forest ecosystem. Many animals are losing their habitats, and soil erosion is becoming more and more serious. To protect the forest, we can take some measures. First, we should stop illegal logging. The government should strengthen law enforcement to punish those who cut down trees without permission. Second, we can plant more trees. Everyone can participate in tree - planting activities. What's more, we need to raise public awareness of forest protection. Let more people know the importance of the forest. I am really worried about the future of the forest. Forests are the lungs of the earth. We can't live without them. Let's take action now to protect our precious forests. Yours, Li Hua (范文二:Protect Wild Animals) Dear classmates, Today, I want to talk about the protection of wild animals. Wild animals are in great danger. Their habitats are being destroyed by human activities like deforestation and urban construction. Besides, illegal hunting is still a big problem. Some wild animals are hunted for their fur, teeth or other body parts. To save wild animals, we can do a lot. First, we should establish more nature reserves to provide them with safe habitats. Second, we must stop illegal hunting. The government should set up strict laws against it. Also, we can educate people about the importance of protecting wild animals. We can organize some activities to let more people understand that wild animals are our friends. I sincerely hope that wild animals can live safely in nature. Let's work together to protect them. Yours, Zhang Ming (范文三:Protect the River) Dear all, I would like to draw your attention to the protection of the river. The river near our city is in a poor condition. The water is polluted by the waste from factories and households. There is less and less clean water, and many fish and other aquatic animals are dying. To solve the problem of river pollution, we have several ways. First, factories should be required to treat their waste water before discharging it into the river. Second, we should reduce the use of plastic products to avoid plastic waste flowing into the river. In addition, we can organize volunteers to clean up the river banks regularly. I am really concerned about the future of the river. The river is an important part of our ecosystem. Let's take action to make the river clean again. Yours truly, Wang Mei ( ⭐写作拓展⭐ ) ( 考情分析 ) 近三年考情示例 年份 卷区 话题 命题形式 2025年 黑龙江龙东地区 通知全体学生到公园参加清扫活动 通知类 2023年 四川德阳 介绍德阳环境变好的原因等 提纲类 ( 变式提升训练 ) 1.你听过“Z时代”这个词吗?它指的是新时代人群,通常指的是1995年到2009年出生的一代人。今年是世界环境日举办的第50年,中国的“Z时代”选择“自卷式环保”来共同拯救地球,他们寻找志同道合的伙伴,一起参与各种环保活动,为环境保护贡献青年力量。作为“Z时代”的你,也一定想要参与其中吧!请从以下两方面入手,写一篇倡议书,号召全校同学和你一起参与环境保护吧! Word Bankreduce v.减少 garbage sorting垃圾分类 内容包括: 1. 环境保护的重要性; 2. 如何保护环境的建议。 要求: 1. 词数不少于80词,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数; 2. 文中不能出现真实的人名、校名。 My dear classmates, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ A student who loves environmental protection, January, 2024 2.假设你是李华,你很喜欢你所在的城市,但你发现它存在一些环境问题。请你根据下表中的提示信息给市长写一封信,分析造成这些问题的原因并提出改善建议。 Problem Reason Advice white pollution too many plastic things... make laws, encourage... river pollution waste water from factories... close down... smog (雾霾) give off (排放)... public transportation... 要求: (1)信件必须包含以上所有信息,可适当发挥。 (2)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。 (3)100词左右,开头和落款部分已给出,不计入总词数。 Dear Mr Mayor, My name is Li Hua. I’m a university student here. I like this city, but I have found some environmental problems in it. That’s why I write this letter to you. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 3.假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Mike得知了你校开展了“建设美丽家乡”的活动,他来信表示很感兴趣并想了解其具体细节,请你根据以下信息给Mike写一封回信,向他描述你曾经做过的与此相关的一件事,并对如何建设美丽家乡提出建议。 写作要点: 1. 得知他对本次活动感兴趣后很激动; 2. 描述事件: (1)时间:上个星期六 (2)地点:中心公园(the Central Park) (3)事件:打扫公园的卫生 3. 对如何建设美丽家乡提出具体建议。 写作要求: 1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。 2. 可适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯。 3. 字迹工整,语言精练,表达准确,条理清晰。 4. 至少80词。 Dear Mike, How are you doing? _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 4.假如你是来自美国的David,目前在成都做交换生。你很喜欢这座城市,但你发现它存在一些环境问题。请你根据下面图表里的信息给市长写一封60-80词的信,分析造成这些问题的原因并提出改善建议。开头和结尾已给出,不计入词数。 存在的问题 原因 建议 white pollution too many plastic things. . . make laws, encourage. . . river pollution waste water from factories. . . Shut, pour. . . into. . . smog(雾霾) give off(排放), too much. . . public transportation. . . Dear Mr. Mayor, My name is David. I m from America and now I’m an exchange student here. I like this city, but I have found some environmental problems in it. That’s why I write this letter to you. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, David 5.2023年3月23日是第六十三个世界气象日(World Meteorological Day),主题为“天气气候水,代代向未来”。学校本学期会举办“气象日活动推广人”评选活动, 假如你是李华,请你为自己写一封信给校长 (Mr.Brown) 推荐自己,并就“作为中学生,我们可以做些什么来保护我们的地球”谈谈自己的做法和建议。内容提示: 1.简要介绍你的情况,可包括年龄、喜好等。(请勿出现真实姓名) 2. 你觉得我们可以做些什么来保护我们的地球? 小事做起(start with small things),比如主动打扫,不乱丢垃圾,节约水电…… 绿色出行(choose the green travel),比如步行上下学,坐公共汽车、骑自行车…… 3……(适当补充) 写作要求: 1.要点齐全,并适当发挥; 2. 条理清晰,语句通顺,书写规范; 3. 字数80左右,开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 Dear Mr.Brown, I am writing to you to recommend myself as the activity prompter of World Meteorological Day. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I would appreciate it if you could give me this chance. Looking forward to your early reply. Yours truly, Li Hua 6.你有喝瓶装水的习惯吗?你有注意到身边的同学喝完水后,塑料瓶会如何被处理掉吗?你知道塑料是白色污染主要源头之一吗? 环境保护是每个人的义务和责任,作为学生,我们能为环保做什么呢?请你以Say “No” to Plastic Bottles at School为题,给同班同学写一封英文倡议信,内容包括: 1.在校饮用瓶装水的现象; 2.瓶装水有何优缺点; 3.塑料瓶通常如何被处置; 4.你对此的看法或建议。 参考词汇:瓶装水 bottled water;一次性的 disposable;垃圾填埋场 landfill;容器container;倡议 propose;呼吁某人做某事 call on sb. to do... 注意:1.词数80—100 词左右(短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数); 2.内容完整,语法正确,语句连贯; 3.考生不得透露个人信息,否则不予评分。 Say “No” to Plastic Bottles at School Dear classmates, Environmental protection is everyone’s responsibility. However, in recent days, I notice... _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7.假如你是李华,看到你校英语校刊正在为“世界环境日”活动向同学们征集建议,请根据以下内容,用英语给该校刊写一封信。 Ideas needed!Dear friends, We’re planning to hold an activity to celebrate the coming World Environment Day. Your ideas are needed! Feel free to write to share your creative ideas! Please let us know: ·What activity is it? A talk? A DIY job or something else? ·When and where will it be held? ·What advice on going green at school can be learned from the activity? Contact us at environmentday@school.com 注意事项:1.词数100 左右(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数); 2.文中不能出现真实校名、姓名等信息; 3.文章必须包含所提供的主要信息,并作适当发挥; 4.表达清楚、语句通顺、意思连贯、书写规范。 Dear Sir/Madam, Thanks for offering us such a chance to celebrate the World Environment Day. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope you’ll think my advice is worth taking. Yours, Li Hua 8.假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Mike得知了你校开展了“做生态小公民,建设美丽家乡”的活动,他来信表示很感兴趣并想了解其具体细节。请你根据以下信息给Mike写一封回信,向他描述你曾经做过的与此相关的一件事,并对如何成为一名“生态小公民”提出建议。 写作要点: 1. 很高兴收到他的来信;并且得知他对本次活动感兴趣后很激动。 2. 描述事件: (1)时间:上个星期日 (2)地点:中心公园(the Central Park) (3)事件:与同学们分组行动打扫公园的卫生 3. 对如何保护环境提出具体建议。 写作要求: 1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。 2. 可适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯。 3. 字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。 4. 至少80词。 Dear Mike, I’m glad to receive your letter.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Now the environment around us becomes better and better. 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