Unit 5 Wild animals 告知信（单元同步写作讲义）英语译林版2024八年级上册

Unit 5 Wild animals 同步写作课讲义-译林版2024八年级上册 ( ⭐话题解读⭐ ) Unit 5 的主题围绕 “人与自然：野生动物” 展开，认识野生动物、保护野生动物等是本单元重点探讨的内容。这一主题引导学生关注自然界的生灵，培养对动物的关爱以及保护生态环境的意识。在具体的英语写作中，学生应做到以下几点： 能够准确运用与野生动物相关的词汇，描述不同动物的特征、习性等。 掌握正确的语法和句式，清晰地表达自己对野生动物现状的看法以及保护野生动物的建议。 学会运用恰当的连接词和过渡句，使文章逻辑连贯、层次分明。 ( ⭐写作任务⭐ ) 本单元的写作任务是以动物的名义给人类写信。通过这种独特的视角，让学生站在动物的立场上，向人类倾诉它们面临的困境，呼吁人类保护野生动物及其生存环境。在写作过程中，要注意语言表达要真挚、诚恳，能够引起读者的共鸣。 ( ⭐审题指导⭐ ) 本单元主要话题是野生动物及其保护，与本单元相关的写作题目可以与野生动物的生存现状、面临的威胁、保护措施等相结合。命题内容以描述野生动物的处境以及探讨保护方法为主，根据提示记叙或描述野生动物在现实生活中所遭遇的情况。写作时应注意书信写作的内容、格式以及时态的运用。 ◆内容要点 Where do we usually see these wild animals?（我们通常在哪里能看到这些野生动物？） How are they living in the wild?（它们在野外的生活状况如何？） What problems are they facing?（它们面临着哪些问题？） How do these problems come into being?（这些问题是如何产生的？） How can we help them?（我们怎样才能帮助它们？） ◆写作步骤 步骤一：仔细阅读题目要求，明确写作的主题和要点，确定写信的对象以及想要传达的核心信息。 步骤二：根据要点进行构思，组织语言。可以先在脑海中形成一个大致的框架，思考每一段要写什么内容，如何展开论述。 步骤三：开始写作，注意书信的格式，包括称呼、正文、结束语、署名等。在正文中，按照构思好的框架，逐步阐述要点，运用恰当的词汇和句式，使文章内容丰富、语言流畅。写作完成后，仔细检查语法错误、拼写错误以及标点符号的使用是否正确。 ( ⭐写作框架⭐ ) （一）开头引入 Dear humans,（亲爱的人类，） I am writing this letter as a representative of all the wild animals.（我作为所有野生动物的代表写这封信。） （二）引入话题 Wild animals, like us, are an important part of the earth. But now, we are in great trouble.（野生动物，和我们一样，是地球的重要组成部分。但现在，我们陷入了巨大的麻烦。） （三）主体部分 Habitat loss（栖息地丧失） Many of our homes in the forests, grasslands and wetlands are being destroyed by human activities such as deforestation, urban expansion and pollution.（我们在森林、草原和湿地的许多家园正被人类活动破坏，如森林砍伐、城市扩张和污染。） For example, the Amazon rainforest, which is home to countless wild animals, is being cut down at an alarming rate.（例如，亚马逊雨林，无数野生动物的家园，正以惊人的速度被砍伐。） Poaching and illegal trade（偷猎和非法贸易） Some people hunt us for our valuable fur, tusks, horns or other body parts. These illegal activities have led to a sharp decline in the number of many wild animal species.（一些人猎杀我们是为了获取我们珍贵的皮毛、象牙、犀牛角或其他身体部位。这些非法活动导致许多野生动物物种的数量急剧下降。） Tigers, for instance, are being poached for their skins and bones, which are used in traditional medicine in some places.（例如，老虎因其皮毛和骨头被偷猎，在一些地方它们被用于传统医学。） Climate change（气候变化） The changing climate is also affecting our lives. Rising temperatures, extreme weather events and sea - level rise are making it difficult for us to find food and suitable places to live.（气候变化也在影响着我们的生活。气温上升、极端天气事件和海平面上升使我们很难找到食物和适宜居住的地方。） Polar bears are suffering from the melting of sea ice, which is their main hunting ground.（北极熊正因海冰融化而受苦，海冰是它们主要的狩猎场。） （四）表达情感 We are so scared and sad. We just want to live in peace and harmony with you on this beautiful planet.（我们非常害怕和难过。我们只是想在这个美丽的星球上与你们和平和谐地生活。） （五）结尾部分 Please, humans, take action to protect us. Stop destroying our habitats, stop poaching and help us fight against climate change. Let's build a better world together.（求求你们，人类，采取行动保护我们吧。停止破坏我们的栖息地，停止偷猎，帮助我们应对气候变化。让我们一起建设一个更美好的世界。） ( ⭐素材宝库⭐ ) ( 词汇积累 ) wild animal 野生动物 protect 保护 habitat 栖息地 endangered 濒危的 extinct 灭绝的 poach 偷猎 illegal 非法的 trade 贸易 conservation 保护；保存 species 物种 forest 森林 grassland 草原 wetland 湿地 climate change 气候变化 temperature 温度 extreme weather 极端天气 sea - level rise 海平面上升 hunt 打猎 fur 皮毛 tusk 象牙 horn 角 environment 环境 pollution 污染 recycle 回收利用 ( 句型积累 ) 1.基础句型 There are many wild animals in the world.（世界上有许多野生动物。） Some wild animals are in danger.（一些野生动物处于危险之中。） We should do something to protect them.（我们应该做些事情来保护它们。） Many wild animals lose their homes because of human activities.（许多野生动物因为人类活动失去了它们的家园。） People hunt wild animals for money.（人们为了钱猎杀野生动物。） It is important to save wild animals.（拯救野生动物很重要。） Wild animals play an important role in the ecosystem.（野生动物在生态系统中起着重要作用。） We can plant more trees to help wild animals.（我们可以种更多的树来帮助野生动物。） Don't buy products made from wild animals.（不要购买由野生动物制成的产品。） Let's work together to protect wild animals.（让我们一起努力保护野生动物。） 2.升级句型 A large number of wild animals are facing the threat of extinction due to various reasons.（大量的野生动物由于各种原因面临灭绝的威胁。） The destruction of habitats has a serious impact on the survival of wild animals.（栖息地的破坏对野生动物的生存有严重影响。） We must take immediate measures to prevent wild animals from being hunted.（我们必须立即采取措施防止野生动物被猎杀。） Not only should we protect wild animals, but also we should protect their habitats.（我们不仅应该保护野生动物，还应该保护它们的栖息地。） If we don't take action, many wild animals will disappear from the earth.（如果我们不采取行动，许多野生动物将从地球上消失。） The government has made some laws to protect wild animals.（政府已经制定了一些法律来保护野生动物。） People's awareness of protecting wild animals needs to be raised.（人们保护野生动物的意识需要提高。） Protecting wild animals is protecting our own future.（保护野生动物就是保护我们自己的未来。） We can set up nature reserves to provide a safe living environment for wild animals.（我们可以建立自然保护区为野生动物提供一个安全的生活环境。） With the joint efforts of everyone, we can make a difference in protecting wild animals.（在每个人的共同努力下，我们可以在保护野生动物方面有所作为。） 3.高分句型 It is universally acknowledged that wild animals are an essential part of our ecosystem, and their existence is of great significance to the balance of nature.（众所周知，野生动物是我们生态系统的重要组成部分，它们的存在对自然平衡具有重要意义。） The reason why wild animals are in danger is that human activities have severely damaged their habitats and disrupted their living environment.（野生动物处于危险之中的原因是人类活动严重破坏了它们的栖息地，扰乱了它们的生活环境。） Only by taking effective measures, such as strengthening law enforcement against poaching and promoting environmental protection, can we hope to save these precious wild animals from extinction.（只有采取有效措施，如加强对偷猎的执法力度和促进环境保护，我们才有希望拯救这些珍贵的野生动物免于灭绝。） What we should do now is to raise public awareness of wildlife protection and encourage more people to participate in conservation efforts.（我们现在应该做的是提高公众对野生动物保护的意识，鼓励更多的人参与保护工作。） Wild animals, which have co - existed with humans for thousands of years, are now on the verge of disappearing due to our irresponsible behavior.（与人类共存了数千年的野生动物，由于我们不负责任的行为，现在正处于消失的边缘。） It is high time that we took urgent action to protect wild animals and their habitats before it is too late.（是时候我们采取紧急行动保护野生动物及其栖息地了，否则就太晚了。） Not only does protecting wild animals contribute to the biodiversity of the earth, but it also reflects our respect for life and our sense of social responsibility.（保护野生动物不仅有助于地球的生物多样性，还反映了我们对生命的尊重和社会责任感。） If everyone makes a small contribution to wildlife protection, the cumulative effect will be huge and can bring about a significant change in the situation of wild animals.（如果每个人都为野生动物保护做出一点小贡献，累积起来的效果将是巨大的，能够给野生动物的状况带来显著的改变。） The loss of wild animals would not only lead to the collapse of the food chain but also have far - reaching consequences for the entire ecosystem and human society.（野生动物的消失不仅会导致食物链的崩溃，还会对整个生态系统和人类社会产生深远的影响。） By educating people about the importance of wild animals and their role in the ecosystem, we can inspire them to take an active part in protecting these precious creatures.（通过向人们宣传野生动物的重要性及其在生态系统中的作用，我们可以激励他们积极参与保护这些珍贵的生物。） ( 谚语名句 ) Love me, love my dog. 爱屋及乌。 Barking dogs seldom bite. 吠犬不咬人。 Don't count your chickens before they are hatched. 不要过早乐观。 A bird in the hand is worth two in the bush. 一鸟在手胜过双鸟在林。 Kill two birds with one stone. 一箭双雕；一举两得。 The early bird catches the worm. 早起的鸟儿有虫吃。 Let sleeping dogs lie. 别惹麻烦。 Every dog has its day. 凡人皆有得意日。 When the cat's away, the mice will play. 山中无老虎，猴子称大王。 A cat has nine lives. 猫有九条命。 A lion at home, a mouse abroad. 在家如狮，在外如鼠。 Fine feathers make fine birds. 人要衣装，佛要金装。 The frog in the well knows nothing of the great ocean. 井底之蛙，不知大海。 An old horse knows the way. 老马识途。 You can't make a silk purse out of a sow's ear. 朽木不可雕也。 Dog does not eat dog. 同类不相残。 As the old cock crows, so doth the young. 有其父必有其子。 A fox may grow gray, but never good. 江山易改，本性难移。 The wolf has a winning game when the shepherds quarrel. 鹬蚌相争，渔翁得利。 Never offer to teach fish to swim. 不要班门弄斧。 ( 写作模板 ) Dear humans, I am [name of the wild animal], writing to you with great sadness. We wild animals are in a very difficult situation now. Our habitats are being destroyed. [Describe the destruction of habitats, such as forests being cut down, wetlands being filled]. Because of this, we are losing our homes and places to find food. Many of my friends are being hunted and killed. People want our [mention valuable body parts like fur, tusks]. This illegal poaching is making our numbers smaller and smaller. Climate change is also a big problem. [Explain how climate change affects wild animals, like rising temperatures making it hard to live]. We are so scared and hope you can help us. Please stop destroying our habitats. Make more laws to stop poaching. And work together to fight climate change. Let's live together in harmony on this beautiful earth. Yours, [Your name as the wild animal] ( ⭐参考范文⭐ ) （范文一） Dear humans, I am a panda, one of the most beloved wild animals in the world. But now, I am very worried about my future and that of my fellow pandas. Our bamboo forests, which are our only source of food and home, are being destroyed. People are cutting down the bamboo for various reasons, such as building houses and making furniture. Without enough bamboo, we are starving and losing our homes. Some bad people even try to catch us and sell us illegally. They think they can make a lot of money from our cute appearance. But they don't realize that they are hurting us and our species. Climate change is also making things worse. The temperature is rising, and it's affecting the growth of bamboo. Please, humans, protect our bamboo forests. Stop illegal hunting. Let us pandas live a happy life. We want to play and live freely in the bamboo forests just like before. Yours, A panda (范文二) Dear humans, I am a wild elephant. We elephants are facing many problems because of you. Our habitats, the vast grasslands and forests, are being turned into farms and cities. We have no space to roam and find enough food and water. Poachers are after our tusks. They kill our family members just for the ivory. So many of us have lost our lives, and our herds are getting smaller. Climate change is causing droughts in some places where we live. There is less water and food for us. We elephants have feelings too. We are very sad about what is happening. Please help us. Protect our habitats, stop the poaching, and do something about climate change. We want to live in peace with you. Yours, A wild elephant (范文三) Dear humans, I am a tiger. Once, we tigers were the kings of the forests. But now, we are on the verge of extinction. Forests are being cut down at an alarming rate. This means we have no place to hide, hunt, and raise our cubs.Poaching is another big disaster for us. People kill us for our beautiful fur and bones, which are used in traditional medicine. They don't care that they are pushing us towards extinction.Climate change is also making our lives difficult. The changing weather affects the availability of our prey. We tigers need your help. Please protect the forests, enforce laws against poaching, and take action on climate change. Let us regain our dignity and live in our natural habitats. Yours, A tiger ( ⭐写作拓展⭐ ) ( 考情分析 ) 近三年考情示例 年份 卷区 话题 命题形式 2024年 江苏宿迁 如何成为更好的自己（包括关爱动物） 演讲稿 ( 变式提升训练 ) 1．学校阅读俱乐部举行主题为“Wild animals are our friends”的征文活动。请根据以下信息，用英语写一篇短文。 内容包括：野生动物目前的现状、造成这种现状的原因、人们应该采取的措施等。 要求： (1)语句通顺，意思连贯，条理清晰，书写规范； (2)词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Wild animals are our friends.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．学校针对动物濒危问题展开大讨论，校刊征集保护动物的文章，呼吁大家一起保护动物。请你就某种濒危动物，以“________ in danger”为题向校刊投稿。 提示： 1.Why are they in danger? 2.What will people do to help them? 要求： 1.中心突出，语义连贯，层次清晰，书写规范； 2.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名； 3.词数不少于 80 词。 ________ in danger ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．所有生物都是地球的主人，人与动物共享同一家园。假如你是阳光中学八（6）班学生 Lily，请你以Protect the Earth and Love Animals 为题写一篇演讲稿，在学校举办的“第六届年度英语节”活动中作专题演讲。 要求： 1. 演讲内容包含所有要点，省略号部分要作适当发挥。 2. 条理清晰、字迹工整。词数90词左右。 Your idea 地球是我们的家园，我们只有一个地球，我们应该和其他的生物共享同一个家园。 Problems 1.人们砍伐大量树木，森林面积越来越小，结果，许多野生物处于危险中有的甚至灭绝（die out）； 2. 每年发生更多自然灾害（disaster）； 3. 此外，越来越多的私家车（personal car）使空气污染（air pollution）越来越严重。 Ways 1. 政府：制定法律去保护环境（environment）和动物； 2. 我们学生：……。 Importance 如果我们不……，……。 Protect the Earth and Love Animals Good morning, everyone! Today I am very happy to be here to give a report about protecting the earth and loving animals. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thank you very much! 4．绿孔雀曾是云南当地常见的动物，如今却只有 550—600只，假如你是李萍，你希望世界自然基金会（WWF）能帮助这类濒危物种。请你根据提示内容用英语写一封电子邮件向 WWF 求助。 要求： 1.语句通顺、意思连贯、语法正确； 2.包含所有提示要点，可适当发挥； 3.80 词左右。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．旅外大熊猫的“回家之旅”屡上热搜，又一次提高了人们对大熊猫保护工作的关注。假如你是李华，正在参加学校举办的以“Giving Pandas a Good Life”为主题的演讲比赛。请根据如下提示，写一篇英语发言稿。词数80左右；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Good morning, everyone, I’m Li Hua. My topic (话题) is giving pandas a good life. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thank you for listening. 6．假如你是李明，你的外教 Mr.Tyler让你用英语向同学们介绍一种中国特有的动物。以下是你找到的关于金丝猴的资料，请根据下表，写一篇80词左右的演讲稿，向大家介绍一下金丝猴。 内容包括: 名称 金丝猴 (Golden Monkey) 颜色 黄色或黑色 分布 中国南部 特点 群居；食树叶 (leaves) 和水果 现状 人类的捕杀导致它们处于危险之中； 人类砍伐森林导致它们栖息地越来越小 建议 至少两条 作文要求： 1.要点齐全，句子通顺，不得照抄原文； 2.不要出现真实的人名和校名； 3.词数80词左右。 The Golden Monkey Hello! My name is Li Ming. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．假如你是某国际野生动物俱乐部的成员。最近，你对鲨鱼（shark）的生存现状进行了一次调查，发现鲨鱼有濒临绝种的危险，情况不容乐观。请你根据以下提示信息，写一篇英语短文刊登在你们俱乐部的网站上，呼吁人们保护鲨鱼。字数为70~80。 提示信息： 1. Habitat（栖息地） in seas 2. Food small animals 3. Situations be in danger; kill lots of sharks in the world every year 4. Reasons 1. pollute（污染）seas 2. kill sharks for their fins（鱼翅） 5. Protection（保护措施） 1. make seas clean 2. stop killing sharks 3. … _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．学校环保社团开展“爱护动物”的主题演讲活动。假如你是演讲者，请你用英文写一篇80词左右的演讲稿，介绍野生动物的情况并提出倡议。文章开头己给出，不计入总词数。 要点如下： 1. 以前有大量动物，平静生活； 2. 现在野生动物数量不断减少，村庄和农场逐渐变大，人类夺走动物的家园； 3. 动物是人类的朋友，我们要保护它们； 4. 政府应制定计划，拯救濒危动物； 5. 自己补充一点倡议。 In the past, there were ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ( 7 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ Unit 5 Wild animals 同步写作课讲义-译林版2024八年级上册 ( ⭐话题解读⭐ ) Unit 5 的主题围绕 “人与自然：野生动物” 展开，认识野生动物、保护野生动物等是本单元重点探讨的内容。这一主题引导学生关注自然界的生灵，培养对动物的关爱以及保护生态环境的意识。在具体的英语写作中，学生应做到以下几点： 能够准确运用与野生动物相关的词汇，描述不同动物的特征、习性等。 掌握正确的语法和句式，清晰地表达自己对野生动物现状的看法以及保护野生动物的建议。 学会运用恰当的连接词和过渡句，使文章逻辑连贯、层次分明。 ( ⭐写作任务⭐ ) 本单元的写作任务是以动物的名义给人类写信。通过这种独特的视角，让学生站在动物的立场上，向人类倾诉它们面临的困境，呼吁人类保护野生动物及其生存环境。在写作过程中，要注意语言表达要真挚、诚恳，能够引起读者的共鸣。 ( ⭐审题指导⭐ ) 本单元主要话题是野生动物及其保护，与本单元相关的写作题目可以与野生动物的生存现状、面临的威胁、保护措施等相结合。命题内容以描述野生动物的处境以及探讨保护方法为主，根据提示记叙或描述野生动物在现实生活中所遭遇的情况。写作时应注意书信写作的内容、格式以及时态的运用。 ◆内容要点 Where do we usually see these wild animals?（我们通常在哪里能看到这些野生动物？） How are they living in the wild?（它们在野外的生活状况如何？） What problems are they facing?（它们面临着哪些问题？） How do these problems come into being?（这些问题是如何产生的？） How can we help them?（我们怎样才能帮助它们？） ◆写作步骤 步骤一：仔细阅读题目要求，明确写作的主题和要点，确定写信的对象以及想要传达的核心信息。 步骤二：根据要点进行构思，组织语言。可以先在脑海中形成一个大致的框架，思考每一段要写什么内容，如何展开论述。 步骤三：开始写作，注意书信的格式，包括称呼、正文、结束语、署名等。在正文中，按照构思好的框架，逐步阐述要点，运用恰当的词汇和句式，使文章内容丰富、语言流畅。写作完成后，仔细检查语法错误、拼写错误以及标点符号的使用是否正确。 ( ⭐写作框架⭐ ) （一）开头引入 Dear humans,（亲爱的人类，） I am writing this letter as a representative of all the wild animals.（我作为所有野生动物的代表写这封信。） （二）引入话题 Wild animals, like us, are an important part of the earth. But now, we are in great trouble.（野生动物，和我们一样，是地球的重要组成部分。但现在，我们陷入了巨大的麻烦。） （三）主体部分 Habitat loss（栖息地丧失） Many of our homes in the forests, grasslands and wetlands are being destroyed by human activities such as deforestation, urban expansion and pollution.（我们在森林、草原和湿地的许多家园正被人类活动破坏，如森林砍伐、城市扩张和污染。） For example, the Amazon rainforest, which is home to countless wild animals, is being cut down at an alarming rate.（例如，亚马逊雨林，无数野生动物的家园，正以惊人的速度被砍伐。） Poaching and illegal trade（偷猎和非法贸易） Some people hunt us for our valuable fur, tusks, horns or other body parts. These illegal activities have led to a sharp decline in the number of many wild animal species.（一些人猎杀我们是为了获取我们珍贵的皮毛、象牙、犀牛角或其他身体部位。这些非法活动导致许多野生动物物种的数量急剧下降。） Tigers, for instance, are being poached for their skins and bones, which are used in traditional medicine in some places.（例如，老虎因其皮毛和骨头被偷猎，在一些地方它们被用于传统医学。） Climate change（气候变化） The changing climate is also affecting our lives. Rising temperatures, extreme weather events and sea - level rise are making it difficult for us to find food and suitable places to live.（气候变化也在影响着我们的生活。气温上升、极端天气事件和海平面上升使我们很难找到食物和适宜居住的地方。） Polar bears are suffering from the melting of sea ice, which is their main hunting ground.（北极熊正因海冰融化而受苦，海冰是它们主要的狩猎场。） （四）表达情感 We are so scared and sad. We just want to live in peace and harmony with you on this beautiful planet.（我们非常害怕和难过。我们只是想在这个美丽的星球上与你们和平和谐地生活。） （五）结尾部分 Please, humans, take action to protect us. Stop destroying our habitats, stop poaching and help us fight against climate change. Let's build a better world together.（求求你们，人类，采取行动保护我们吧。停止破坏我们的栖息地，停止偷猎，帮助我们应对气候变化。让我们一起建设一个更美好的世界。） ( ⭐素材宝库⭐ ) ( 词汇积累 ) wild animal 野生动物 protect 保护 habitat 栖息地 endangered 濒危的 extinct 灭绝的 poach 偷猎 illegal 非法的 trade 贸易 conservation 保护；保存 species 物种 forest 森林 grassland 草原 wetland 湿地 climate change 气候变化 temperature 温度 extreme weather 极端天气 sea - level rise 海平面上升 hunt 打猎 fur 皮毛 tusk 象牙 horn 角 environment 环境 pollution 污染 recycle 回收利用 ( 句型积累 ) 1.基础句型 There are many wild animals in the world.（世界上有许多野生动物。） Some wild animals are in danger.（一些野生动物处于危险之中。） We should do something to protect them.（我们应该做些事情来保护它们。） Many wild animals lose their homes because of human activities.（许多野生动物因为人类活动失去了它们的家园。） People hunt wild animals for money.（人们为了钱猎杀野生动物。） It is important to save wild animals.（拯救野生动物很重要。） Wild animals play an important role in the ecosystem.（野生动物在生态系统中起着重要作用。） We can plant more trees to help wild animals.（我们可以种更多的树来帮助野生动物。） Don't buy products made from wild animals.（不要购买由野生动物制成的产品。） Let's work together to protect wild animals.（让我们一起努力保护野生动物。） 2.升级句型 A large number of wild animals are facing the threat of extinction due to various reasons.（大量的野生动物由于各种原因面临灭绝的威胁。） The destruction of habitats has a serious impact on the survival of wild animals.（栖息地的破坏对野生动物的生存有严重影响。） We must take immediate measures to prevent wild animals from being hunted.（我们必须立即采取措施防止野生动物被猎杀。） Not only should we protect wild animals, but also we should protect their habitats.（我们不仅应该保护野生动物，还应该保护它们的栖息地。） If we don't take action, many wild animals will disappear from the earth.（如果我们不采取行动，许多野生动物将从地球上消失。） The government has made some laws to protect wild animals.（政府已经制定了一些法律来保护野生动物。） People's awareness of protecting wild animals needs to be raised.（人们保护野生动物的意识需要提高。） Protecting wild animals is protecting our own future.（保护野生动物就是保护我们自己的未来。） We can set up nature reserves to provide a safe living environment for wild animals.（我们可以建立自然保护区为野生动物提供一个安全的生活环境。） With the joint efforts of everyone, we can make a difference in protecting wild animals.（在每个人的共同努力下，我们可以在保护野生动物方面有所作为。） 3.高分句型 It is universally acknowledged that wild animals are an essential part of our ecosystem, and their existence is of great significance to the balance of nature.（众所周知，野生动物是我们生态系统的重要组成部分，它们的存在对自然平衡具有重要意义。） The reason why wild animals are in danger is that human activities have severely damaged their habitats and disrupted their living environment.（野生动物处于危险之中的原因是人类活动严重破坏了它们的栖息地，扰乱了它们的生活环境。） Only by taking effective measures, such as strengthening law enforcement against poaching and promoting environmental protection, can we hope to save these precious wild animals from extinction.（只有采取有效措施，如加强对偷猎的执法力度和促进环境保护，我们才有希望拯救这些珍贵的野生动物免于灭绝。） What we should do now is to raise public awareness of wildlife protection and encourage more people to participate in conservation efforts.（我们现在应该做的是提高公众对野生动物保护的意识，鼓励更多的人参与保护工作。） Wild animals, which have co - existed with humans for thousands of years, are now on the verge of disappearing due to our irresponsible behavior.（与人类共存了数千年的野生动物，由于我们不负责任的行为，现在正处于消失的边缘。） It is high time that we took urgent action to protect wild animals and their habitats before it is too late.（是时候我们采取紧急行动保护野生动物及其栖息地了，否则就太晚了。） Not only does protecting wild animals contribute to the biodiversity of the earth, but it also reflects our respect for life and our sense of social responsibility.（保护野生动物不仅有助于地球的生物多样性，还反映了我们对生命的尊重和社会责任感。） If everyone makes a small contribution to wildlife protection, the cumulative effect will be huge and can bring about a significant change in the situation of wild animals.（如果每个人都为野生动物保护做出一点小贡献，累积起来的效果将是巨大的，能够给野生动物的状况带来显著的改变。） The loss of wild animals would not only lead to the collapse of the food chain but also have far - reaching consequences for the entire ecosystem and human society.（野生动物的消失不仅会导致食物链的崩溃，还会对整个生态系统和人类社会产生深远的影响。） By educating people about the importance of wild animals and their role in the ecosystem, we can inspire them to take an active part in protecting these precious creatures.（通过向人们宣传野生动物的重要性及其在生态系统中的作用，我们可以激励他们积极参与保护这些珍贵的生物。） ( 谚语名句 ) Love me, love my dog. 爱屋及乌。 Barking dogs seldom bite. 吠犬不咬人。 Don't count your chickens before they are hatched. 不要过早乐观。 A bird in the hand is worth two in the bush. 一鸟在手胜过双鸟在林。 Kill two birds with one stone. 一箭双雕；一举两得。 The early bird catches the worm. 早起的鸟儿有虫吃。 Let sleeping dogs lie. 别惹麻烦。 Every dog has its day. 凡人皆有得意日。 When the cat's away, the mice will play. 山中无老虎，猴子称大王。 A cat has nine lives. 猫有九条命。 A lion at home, a mouse abroad. 在家如狮，在外如鼠。 Fine feathers make fine birds. 人要衣装，佛要金装。 The frog in the well knows nothing of the great ocean. 井底之蛙，不知大海。 An old horse knows the way. 老马识途。 You can't make a silk purse out of a sow's ear. 朽木不可雕也。 Dog does not eat dog. 同类不相残。 As the old cock crows, so doth the young. 有其父必有其子。 A fox may grow gray, but never good. 江山易改，本性难移。 The wolf has a winning game when the shepherds quarrel. 鹬蚌相争，渔翁得利。 Never offer to teach fish to swim. 不要班门弄斧。 ( 写作模板 ) Dear humans, I am [name of the wild animal], writing to you with great sadness. We wild animals are in a very difficult situation now. Our habitats are being destroyed. [Describe the destruction of habitats, such as forests being cut down, wetlands being filled]. Because of this, we are losing our homes and places to find food. Many of my friends are being hunted and killed. People want our [mention valuable body parts like fur, tusks]. This illegal poaching is making our numbers smaller and smaller. Climate change is also a big problem. [Explain how climate change affects wild animals, like rising temperatures making it hard to live]. We are so scared and hope you can help us. Please stop destroying our habitats. Make more laws to stop poaching. And work together to fight climate change. Let's live together in harmony on this beautiful earth. Yours, [Your name as the wild animal] ( ⭐参考范文⭐ ) （范文一） Dear humans, I am a panda, one of the most beloved wild animals in the world. But now, I am very worried about my future and that of my fellow pandas. Our bamboo forests, which are our only source of food and home, are being destroyed. People are cutting down the bamboo for various reasons, such as building houses and making furniture. Without enough bamboo, we are starving and losing our homes. Some bad people even try to catch us and sell us illegally. They think they can make a lot of money from our cute appearance. But they don't realize that they are hurting us and our species. Climate change is also making things worse. The temperature is rising, and it's affecting the growth of bamboo. Please, humans, protect our bamboo forests. Stop illegal hunting. Let us pandas live a happy life. We want to play and live freely in the bamboo forests just like before. Yours, A panda (范文二) Dear humans, I am a wild elephant. We elephants are facing many problems because of you. Our habitats, the vast grasslands and forests, are being turned into farms and cities. We have no space to roam and find enough food and water. Poachers are after our tusks. They kill our family members just for the ivory. So many of us have lost our lives, and our herds are getting smaller. Climate change is causing droughts in some places where we live. There is less water and food for us. We elephants have feelings too. We are very sad about what is happening. Please help us. Protect our habitats, stop the poaching, and do something about climate change. We want to live in peace with you. Yours, A wild elephant (范文三) Dear humans, I am a tiger. Once, we tigers were the kings of the forests. But now, we are on the verge of extinction. Forests are being cut down at an alarming rate. This means we have no place to hide, hunt, and raise our cubs.Poaching is another big disaster for us. People kill us for our beautiful fur and bones, which are used in traditional medicine. They don't care that they are pushing us towards extinction.Climate change is also making our lives difficult. The changing weather affects the availability of our prey. We tigers need your help. Please protect the forests, enforce laws against poaching, and take action on climate change. Let us regain our dignity and live in our natural habitats. Yours, A tiger ( ⭐写作拓展⭐ ) ( 考情分析 ) 近三年考情示例 年份 卷区 话题 命题形式 2024年 江苏宿迁 如何成为更好的自己（包括关爱动物） 演讲稿 ( 变式提升训练 ) 1．学校阅读俱乐部举行主题为“Wild animals are our friends”的征文活动。请根据以下信息，用英语写一篇短文。 内容包括：野生动物目前的现状、造成这种现状的原因、人们应该采取的措施等。 要求： (1)语句通顺，意思连贯，条理清晰，书写规范； (2)词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Wild animals are our friends.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．学校针对动物濒危问题展开大讨论，校刊征集保护动物的文章，呼吁大家一起保护动物。请你就某种濒危动物，以“________ in danger”为题向校刊投稿。 提示： 1.Why are they in danger? 2.What will people do to help them? 要求： 1.中心突出，语义连贯，层次清晰，书写规范； 2.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名； 3.词数不少于 80 词。 ________ in danger ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．所有生物都是地球的主人，人与动物共享同一家园。假如你是阳光中学八（6）班学生 Lily，请你以Protect the Earth and Love Animals 为题写一篇演讲稿，在学校举办的“第六届年度英语节”活动中作专题演讲。 要求： 1. 演讲内容包含所有要点，省略号部分要作适当发挥。 2. 条理清晰、字迹工整。词数90词左右。 Your idea 地球是我们的家园，我们只有一个地球，我们应该和其他的生物共享同一个家园。 Problems 1.人们砍伐大量树木，森林面积越来越小，结果，许多野生物处于危险中有的甚至灭绝（die out）； 2. 每年发生更多自然灾害（disaster）； 3. 此外，越来越多的私家车（personal car）使空气污染（air pollution）越来越严重。 Ways 1. 政府：制定法律去保护环境（environment）和动物； 2. 我们学生：……。 Importance 如果我们不……，……。 Protect the Earth and Love Animals Good morning, everyone! Today I am very happy to be here to give a report about protecting the earth and loving animals. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thank you very much! 4．绿孔雀曾是云南当地常见的动物，如今却只有 550—600只，假如你是李萍，你希望世界自然基金会（WWF）能帮助这类濒危物种。请你根据提示内容用英语写一封电子邮件向 WWF 求助。 要求： 1.语句通顺、意思连贯、语法正确； 2.包含所有提示要点，可适当发挥； 3.80 词左右。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．旅外大熊猫的“回家之旅”屡上热搜，又一次提高了人们对大熊猫保护工作的关注。假如你是李华，正在参加学校举办的以“Giving Pandas a Good Life”为主题的演讲比赛。请根据如下提示，写一篇英语发言稿。词数80左右；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Good morning, everyone, I’m Li Hua. My topic (话题) is giving pandas a good life. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thank you for listening. 6．假如你是李明，你的外教 Mr.Tyler让你用英语向同学们介绍一种中国特有的动物。以下是你找到的关于金丝猴的资料，请根据下表，写一篇80词左右的演讲稿，向大家介绍一下金丝猴。 内容包括: 名称 金丝猴 (Golden Monkey) 颜色 黄色或黑色 分布 中国南部 特点 群居；食树叶 (leaves) 和水果 现状 人类的捕杀导致它们处于危险之中； 人类砍伐森林导致它们栖息地越来越小 建议 至少两条 作文要求： 1.要点齐全，句子通顺，不得照抄原文； 2.不要出现真实的人名和校名； 3.词数80词左右。 The Golden Monkey Hello! My name is Li Ming. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．假如你是某国际野生动物俱乐部的成员。最近，你对鲨鱼（shark）的生存现状进行了一次调查，发现鲨鱼有濒临绝种的危险，情况不容乐观。请你根据以下提示信息，写一篇英语短文刊登在你们俱乐部的网站上，呼吁人们保护鲨鱼。字数为70~80。 提示信息： 1. Habitat（栖息地） in seas 2. Food small animals 3. Situations be in danger; kill lots of sharks in the world every year 4. Reasons 1. pollute（污染）seas 2. kill sharks for their fins（鱼翅） 5. Protection（保护措施） 1. make seas clean 2. stop killing sharks 3. … _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．学校环保社团开展“爱护动物”的主题演讲活动。假如你是演讲者，请你用英文写一篇80词左右的演讲稿，介绍野生动物的情况并提出倡议。文章开头己给出，不计入总词数。 要点如下： 1. 以前有大量动物，平静生活； 2. 现在野生动物数量不断减少，村庄和农场逐渐变大，人类夺走动物的家园； 3. 动物是人类的朋友，我们要保护它们； 4. 政府应制定计划，拯救濒危动物； 5. 自己补充一点倡议。 In the past, there were ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 1． Wild animals are our friends. We share the common nature, so the way we treat wild animals is very important. Many wild animals have nowhere to live because people cut down many trees and build houses in animals’ living areas. Besides, in order to make clothes, people have killed a large number of animals for their fur. As a result, animal species around the world are decreasing day by day. It’s time for people to take action! The government should make laws at first. If people kill or hunt animals, they will be punished. And people should know the importance of protecting animals and try their best to protect wild animals. 【写作解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，围绕保护野生动物展开，分析了野生动物面临的生存问题及解决措施； ②时态：以一般现在时为主，描述野生动物的现状、人类活动对它们的影响及相关建议，体现问题的普遍性和解决措施的时效性；使用现在进行时强调物种减少的持续状态，时态运用贴合论述逻辑； ③提示：文章紧扣主题，包含野生动物是人类朋友的观点、它们面临的困境、导致的后果及解决措施，内容完整，逻辑清晰。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点明野生动物是人类朋友，人与动物共享自然，强调对待它们的方式很重要，引出保护野生动物的话题； 第二步，分析野生动物面临的问题及原因。说明人类砍伐树木、侵占栖息地导致动物无家可归，为制衣捕杀大量动物获取皮毛，进而导致全球动物物种日益减少； 第三步，提出解决措施。呼吁人们采取行动，建议政府先立法，对捕杀动物者进行惩罚，同时倡导人们认识到保护动物的重要性并尽力保护它们，收束全文。 [亮点词汇] ①wild animals野生动物 ②common nature共同的自然 ③living areas栖息地 ④animal species动物物种 ⑤take action采取行动 [高分句型] ①We share the common nature, so the way we treat wild animals is very important.（定语从句） ②Many wild animals have nowhere to live because people cut down many trees and build houses in animals’ living areas.（“because”引导原因状语从句） ③If people kill or hunt animals, they will be punished.（“if”引导条件状语从句） 2．范文 Pandas in danger    Pandas are our country’s treasure. We should protect them. Nowadays, pandas are less than before. Their number is getting smaller and smaller. It is not only because of the damage of the environment, but also the weakness of the pandas. In order to see the lovely animal, we need to protect them. We must protect the environment, like not to throw the rubbish away, not to cut down the trees. We mustn’t kill pandas. Protecting the cute animal is everybody’s job. 【写作解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇议论文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时” ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意写清楚大熊猫的生存现状，它们濒危的原因，以及如何保护大熊猫， 不要遗漏。适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开门见山。表明大熊猫很珍贵，讲述它们所处的现状; 第二步，具体介绍大熊猫为何濒危。可能是环境、人为、熊猫自身等原因，必要时可适当展开描述； 第三步，书写结语。提出保护大熊猫，并列出 2-3条保护措施， [亮点词汇] ①less than少于 ②because of因为 ③not only…but also… 不仅……而且…… ④cut down 砍伐 [高分句型] ①Protecting the cute animal is everybody’s job.(动名词短语作主语) 3．参考范文： Protect the Earth and Love Animals Good morning, everyone! Today I am very happy to be here to give a report about protecting the earth and loving animals. The earth is our home, we have only one earth and we should share the same home with other living things. But sadly, animals are facing serious problems because of humans. First, people cut down a lot of trees and the forest area is getting smaller and smaller. As a result, many wild animals are in danger and some even become extinct. Second, many natural disasters happen every year. What’s more, the increasing number of personal cars is making air pollution more and more serious. So I advise that we should take action to protect our earth and animals. At first, our government should make laws to protect the environment and animals. And then, we students should take action to let more people realize the importance of protecting the earth and animals. If we try our best to protect the environment around us, our earth will become comfortable for us to live in and the animals can live peacefully. So let’s act together to make a more beautiful home for both humans and animals. That’s all. Thank you very much! 【写作解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为讲稿； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接开头，介绍地球的重要性及面临的问题； 第二步，介绍保护地球和动物的措施； 第三步，呼吁大家行动起来，为保护地球和动物而努力。 [亮点词汇] ①because of 因为 ②cut down 砍倒 ③as a result 结果 ④take action 采取行动 ⑤try one’s best to do sth. 尽力做某事 [高分句型] ①So I advise that we should take action to protect our earth and animals.（that引导的宾语从句） ②If we try our best to protect the environment around us, our earth will become comfortable for us to live in and the animals can live peacefully.（if引导的条件状语从句） 4． Dear WWF, My home town is in Yunnan, Southwest China. The green peafowl were once common here, but now they are in danger. The number of these beautiful birds is between 550 and 600. I hope you can help them. Firstly, I suggest setting up a foundation for the green peafowl. It can raise money to help protect them. Secondly, it’s a good idea to make programmes about them. More people can know about them by watching these programmes. Thirdly, you can also work with our government and develop some plans together. With your help, I hope we can see more of these beautiful birds in the future. Yours, Li Ping 【写作解析】 [总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍孔雀现状以及写邮件的目的； 第二步，具体阐述救助的方式； 第三步，最后表达希望。 [亮点词汇] ① in danger处于危险中 ② suggest doing sth建议做某事 ③ set up建立 [高分句型] I hope we can see more of these beautiful birds in the future.（宾语从句） 5． Good morning, everyone, I’m Li Hua. My topic is giving pandas a good life. What animal wears a black and white coat? Yes, it’s the panda! Pandas are cute and shy. They are also friendly to people. They like eating bamboo and sleeping. Pandas are in danger. Many people cut down lots of trees, so they may lose their living places. They are sad to lose their homes. I hope we can build more natural panda homes. Also, it is important that everyone should treat them as our friends and protect their homes. That’s all. Thank you for listening. 【写作解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为一篇发言稿； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：文章应该包括导图所列要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第三人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点明话题，引出要讨论的动物——熊猫； 第二步，描述熊猫的性格、生活习惯以及当前的处境； 第三步，表达作者的希望； 第四步，书写结语，表达感谢。 [亮点词汇] ①be in danger 处于危险之中 ②cut down 砍倒 [高分句型] I hope we can build more natural panda homes. (宾语从句) 6． The Golden Monkey Hello! My name is Li Ming. The Golden Monkey is a kind of special animal in China. Let me tell you something about it. The Golden Monkeys are usually black or yellow, and they live in the south of China. Besides, they live in groups and live on leaves and fruit. However, they are in danger as a result of the hunting of human beings. What’s worse, people cut down so many trees that their habitat becomes smaller and smaller. In my opinion, it’s our duty to protect the Golden Monkey. First of all, people shouldn’t cut down too many trees any more. Meanwhile, establishing nature reserves is the most effective way to save the endangered animals. Let’s take actions from now on! 【写作解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是材料作文； ②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的几个要点均要一一阐述，适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步：表明写作意图。借用“金丝猴是中国的一种特别的动物”来引出重点介绍的内容。 第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——名称、颜色、分布、特点、现状及建议均要一一阐述。 第三步：书写结语。表达“让我们现在行动吧！”的决定。 [亮点词汇] ①a kind of special animal一种特别的动物 ②First of all首先 ③take actions采取行动 [高分句型] ①Meanwhile, establishing nature reserves is the most effective way to save the endangered animals.（动名词作主语） ②What’s worse, people cut down so many trees that their habitat becomes smaller and smaller. (so...that...的用法) 7． Sharks live in seas. They eat small animals. There were many sharks in the sea. But now they are in danger. Do you know why? First, people pollute seas, so it’s very hard for sharks to find clean food. Second, people kill sharks for their fins. Every year people kill lots of sharks in the world. The situation is getting very difficult. A large number of sharks are killed every year. We must do something to protect them. To protect animals is to protect ourselves. We can make seas clean and stop killing sharks. It’s also a good idea to raise public awareness of protecting sharks. Please take action now. 【写作解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息，可适当发挥，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍鲨鱼的基本信息以及现状； 第二步，介绍鲨鱼濒危的原因； 第三步，介绍保护鲨鱼的措施。 [亮点词汇] ①a large number of很多，大量的 ②raise public awareness of提高公众对……的意识 ③take action采取行动 [高分句型] ①There were many sharks in the sea.（there be句型） ②First, people pollute seas, so it’s very hard for sharks to find clean food.（含so的并列句） ③It’s also a good idea to raise public awareness of protecting sharks.（it作形式主语） 8． In the past, there were lots of animals in the world and they live peacefully. But now there are less and less of them, because villages and farms are growing bigger and human beings are taking away their homes. Luckily, more and more people realize that animals are human’s friends and we should protect them. And the government should make plans to save animals in danger. Besides, more wildlife parks should be built to give homes for wild animals. I hope the earth can be a home for human beings and animals. 【写作解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要求已给出，学生不要遗漏题目中的要点，适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致，注意字数要求。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍以前野生动物的情况； 第二步，介绍现在野生动物的情况； 第三步，提出保护野生动物的倡议。 [亮点词汇] ①lots of许多 ②take away带走 ③make plans to do sth制定做某事的计划 [高分句型] I hope the earth can be a home for human beings and animals.（宾语从句） ( 7 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$